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Bluestar (Alt. Ki2)- For Approval


In the allegiances for Bluestar's Prophecy, she was described as a gray she-cat with blue eyes, and, in case you couldn't tell by my username, she's my favorite character, so I snatched her up as soon as I found out she would get one for that. Comments? Bluestar11796 23:03, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad. Brighten the ear-pink and darken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the left ear's earpink. 00:14 Fri Dec 2

Cute! Define the shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:53, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 02:18, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the --> (right) side of her. 23:54, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Lighten the shading on the paws. 19:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks as if it's not in the right place on ---> this side. 21:21 Sat Dec 3

And center this ---> ear pink. And blur <--- this sides earpink a bit. 22:50 Sat Dec 3

This looks the color of her pale alt, which is still kinda blue-gray, maybe color pick from her gray leader alt? It'd look more gray probably. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 21:22, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen and center the ear pink. Darken and blur the shading, it looks like you have none. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the lineart is gray and define the shading. 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the gray lineart, defined the shading, and got rid of some waste i found; changes not showing. Bluestar11796 17:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found some more waste, and changes are still not showing. Bluestar11796 17:53, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading on the <-- 21:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the right ear pink. 21:54, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement is off, I belive. If not, lighten the shading on <--- that side and blur it so it looks a little bit better. 23:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

As said above and blur the shading too 23:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose color different from the pelt color, as it looks the same. 05:34, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

As said already BLUR THE SHADING TOOOOONS! Also the shading placement is off it should be on the neck and on the legs too. 14:36, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looks blotchy, but I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 16:11, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are white streaks on her face and chest. Make those gray. 16:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a bit, and blur the highlights (if any) and shading to make them blend more together. 22:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC). The whole pelt color looks blotchy and uneven, smooth it out 23:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 00:07, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can. Smooth it out. 01:02, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's possible to blur it. If you're using pixlr, change to something else. I know pixlr only allows you to blur so much. 03:23, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

I do use pixlr at school, but I can't use gimp right now 'cause I'm at school right now, and I can't download anything on the school computers. Bluestar11796 17:52, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Use the Gaussian blur on pixlr. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:51, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpinks. 21:49 Thu Dec 8

Are you still working on this? 20:25, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. :3 01:08, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

It hasn't been seven days yet. 01:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. And sorry for the delay; my computers at home are crashing, so I haven't been able to get on, but I remembered that my school has photoshop, so, yeah. Bluestar11796 17:43, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the shading placement, then blur a LOT. Do you use layers? Brightstripes 16:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I just started using layers, but it's kinda hard with photoshop, because you can't change the background, and that's all I can use right now. I'll try, though. Bluestar11796 18:56, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading darker and you're good to go. 00:18, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think the changes are showing. Bluestar11796 14:32, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's a ton of blurred lineart on both sides. 00:19, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading a ton, define the earpink, and make the eyes less neon.

Reuploaded I basicly redid the whole image, cause I don't know how to fix blurred lineart, and who did the comment above mine? You forgot to sign. And I'll leave the eye color the way it is because she has peircing, ice-blue eyes unless more people agree with you. Changes not showing. Bluestar11796 16:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. 21:27, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the color match her leader image, right now it looks to dark/gray. 22:21, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Perhaps make the ear pink pointed a bit more. -- 07:06, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger. 18:29 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded Believe it or not, the colors were taken from her leader alternate. Bluestar11796 19:32, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and darken the shading. 20:01 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:29, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth in the shading, it looked a bit flat. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:57, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 22:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour and darken the shading. 01:08 Tue Dec 20

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Bluestar11796 01:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please note that if this is not complete in ten days, it will be declined. You need to smooth out the shading a lot and blur the ear pink. 19:05, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur out the highlights blur the shading and blur the earpink... 23:43, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs to be more defined to me, and the earpink needs to be redone because it is not the right shape. I mean, one is circular but the other is not. Also the left ear's earpink appears to be too close to lineart. And is it just me, or is the ear pink too light? a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Because if not I will do it. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 20:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Your shading placement is a bit off. Check the apprentice tutorials for shading placement, or just try to figure out a way of doing shading that has a definitive light source. Blur the shading a bunch, define the earpink, and darken the eyes so they match the other images. 21:37 Wed Dec 21

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 22:19, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define th earpink. F i r e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  23:47, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink (esp. on the ---> ear) to make it more visible. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:32, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 17:53, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Defone the earpink, again. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  00:50, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:24, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and darken the shading. <span style="">23:41, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Also, this > earpink looks like it fell over. Fix that and I'll CBA it  18:54, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur <-- ear pink. <span style="">00:33 Tue Dec 27

You working on this still? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A) ~ Declined
I GOT VOLECLAW :D I copied all of the shading and colors from his warrior so dont be slapping me 4 that :P 13:45, December 8, 2011 (UTC) (im going to eventually set up my sig on here :P )

Blur the shading a lot and try to make it look like it's coming from one light source. Nice job, though. ^^ 14:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge where the earpink meets the gray, and the two paws farthest from us should be darker to match with the shading. 14:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLAODED, changes aren't showing :| 14:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement more like the one in the tutorial. The shading doesn't make sense right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye and smudge the pelt color into the earpink so he looks floofeh =3 18:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

And add a white pixel to the eye if it's not already there. *can't see it* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  19:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

He seems darker than his other images, or is it just my bad eyes? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 00:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading on the tail or darken the shading on the belly and legs. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. I can see the layers in which they get stronger. 20:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Bluefeathers friend here, she said she'd reupload it tomorrow. 14:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think I will re-do this tomorrow as I cannot stand how this is. And I can't really fix the shading placement because for some reason, on Pixlr, every time I use gaussian blur on it, it changes the placement :\ 00:39, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you need any help, if the shading isn't going right, I could help you. <span style="">01:47 Tue Dec 13

REUPLOADED Mrrrrrrrrrooooooowwwwwwwww :P 12:23, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

THIS IS BOOTIFUL BLUEFEATHER! No comments from me :) Grayflower10 16:22, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Don't leave a comment just for complimenting the image unless there haven't been any comments for a couple days, please, Grayflower. Blur the shading and smudge the earpink into the ears a bunch. The shading still doesn't make a lot of sense. You also need to fix your signature, Bluefeather. <span style="">19:53 Tue Dec 13

Ok, first of all, i've been having SO MUCH TROUBLE WITH SMUDGING. This entire time it's been for approval i've been trying to smudge it in but it just won't. I did the shading exactly like the apprentice tutorial....and I honestly don't think that the shading needs blurred. Not trying to say that I won't blur it but I just don't see why it needs blurred. And Sweetflower is making me a sig so it'll be fixed soon :) 20:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay well I can't see any lack of shading on the shoulder ("highlights", if you will) and it doesn't make much sense. It'll look a lot better if you add some "highlight" (just erase the shading) on the shoulder and then blur it manually if you use Gaussian blur. <span style="">01:29 Wed Dec 14

Are you still working on this, Bluefeather? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, yes I am. I just used dodge on it if that's alright.. 18:42, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it a ton, if you look at this charart and the warrior image close to each other, the warrior is much lighter. Hmmm..lighten the shading? 20:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink into the pelt to make it look natural. 21:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear-pink into the pelt. <span style="">16:06 Sun Dec 18

How do you smudge ear-pink into a pelt because i've tried numerous times and it always ends up going out. :\ 15:45, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, did I break him? 16:40, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and smudge it into the ear some more. Blur the shading and darken it slightly. <span style="">01:14 Tue Dec 20

She asked me to reupload this 4 her FerretclawLover 21:38, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the elbow so it looks like it's sticking out like the pose suggests. Breeze whisker  00:24, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. YOu use the smudge tool. <span style="">01:43 Wed Dec 21

Add the smudge tool. <span style="">21:38 Wed Dec 21

REUPLOADED 14:46, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? 22:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but this is a lot darker than the warrior image. Fix that? And blur and lighten the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:18, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the chest shading. <span style="">02:30 Mon Dec 26

It has been 5 days since this was uploaded. Declined due to lack of work. 16:15, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar(A) ~ For Approval
Here he is. Not my best. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think he should be short haired. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and make him match the leader image. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur his markings more and define the shading. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 02:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I made him short-haired and I'll do everything else in the morning. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. RE-UPLOADED. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match the leader better. <span style="">00:55 Sat Dec 10

And blur where the belly meets the ginger. 02:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna withdraw this. I'm not quite ready for Firestar yet. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I'll reuploaded this ASAP. 17:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Sandstorm. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  17:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay I re-did the stripes the best I could and I also tweaked a few other things. 17:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the stripes, belly, and earpink, and make the stripes match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded okay I color picked off of his leader image and I did my very best with the stripes. 18:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the belly to the pelt. 18:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded I smudged it a touch too. Changes not showing. 18:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

You probably took the colors from the shaded part of the image, cause the stripes are still too dark. Lighten them. And they don't really match the leader image still.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took it from the non-shaded part of the image. Okay, I looked at the Firestar leader image and I mached it to the best of my ability okay? It matches it the way I see it. 18:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the stripes sharper at the ends. 19:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pale belly come to a point instead of being round at the top  19:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry, but it doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">23:06 Sat Dec 10

Add shading and highlights. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  04:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, she just has to add shading. She can add highlights if she wants to, but it's not necessary. 18:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sorry.

Reuploaded Okay Ivystripe gave me a redline. Better? 18:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, Firestar ;3 And yes, Better Sandstorm. Define the shading even more and blur together the markings. 18:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Give all of the credit to Ivystripe. 19:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading more and the stripes still need to be lightened a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stripes fail :P 01:29, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to make it look like the other images and blur the shading so that it blends more into the unshaded parts. 01:34, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Those are the right amount of stripes. I should know since I did all but his leader image (if I had done the leader I would have done the stripes differently) 01:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you for referencing Ivystripe 02:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Alright. Blur the lighter part of his fur a bit more. 02:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. 23:37, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Umm nobody's commented in three days... bad? 21:45, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Defione the stripes, blur and darken the shading, and smudge the ear pink into the pelt. 00:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

All right, this definitely isn't enough stripes... Also, the stripe closest to his back leg shouldn't be curved. 00:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay ivystripe gave me that redline so.. Take it up with her >_>;; I'll reupload this tomorrow anyway. 03:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Eww >_> 00:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink to make it look more realistic. <span style="">18:32 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded Is that better? 20:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading into the pelt. 22:40, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading please. <span style="">16:14 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded >_>;;; 17:16, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I have an issue with that stripe closest to his back leg. I looked at this "redline" Ivy gave to you and it's not nearly as curved on there. Fix it. In addition, the eyes should be a brighter green. 00:19, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used layers and re-did it :D 01:56, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink by making it paler and make the stripes pointier. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:59, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink fail >_< 03:13, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a pale underbelly and everything should be lightened. 16:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  21:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh underbelly color fail >_< 01:41, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the underbelly and brighten the whole thing, his leader is positively flamey :3 Also, define the "highlights". 03:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the belly more pale orange, less yellow. 20:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Either I have bad eyes or the shading needs to be darkened. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:40, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I just darkened the shading just a bit because somebody else told me to lighten the hole thing. 02:47, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The image just needs to be more flame colored but do that without changing the shading, the shading is fine. 16:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Featherwillow, defining the highlights is pretty much brightening them, and some user don't even use highlights like me, because highlights are artist's choice. 17:02, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Stoneclaw, I took all of the colors from his leader image so, I'm not gonna change it. 02:04, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights on the face (and if you don't use highlights, then where the shading isn't). I'd put a patch of light on the back, it'll help lighten the color without having to change it. Blur the pale belly and make sure it goes all the way along his belly; it looks like it stops about 3/4ths of the way there. <span style="">00:47 Fri Dec 23 00:47, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the tip it, looks better now. 02:22, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, brighten the whole image, and make the belly color match the leader. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:57, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the legs. They appear brown and not like the rest of him. Breeze whisker  03:12, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wait doesn't Firestar have more stripes than this? Or is this just because of the way the apprentice is set up? 19:27, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded I didn't lighten teh legs much because the shading is centored on the back. And Cinder don't comment just to ask a question, okay? 19:30, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpen the tips of the stripes. And Cinder was actually fine, she was asking a question about the image. Basically asking "Shouldn't this have more stripes?" and no Cinder, despite how it looks, the amount of stripes is fine. I know it looks like less though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:15, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oops sorry, Cinder  16:38, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. <span style="">02:24 Mon Dec 26

Reuploaded I like this. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  18:21, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate him, he's not the right colour. 17:09, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

...Umm I don't have that tool on pixlr... and I took the colors from the Leader. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:43, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the belly. Breeze whisker  15:54, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ For Approval
My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time ,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png, sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, but the head shading looks alright. <span style="">07:08, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Smooth the shading specifically along the back. 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make his whiskers longer to fit his description. 03:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet - Starforce StarClan 18:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 00:22, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And smooth the shading too. It is blotchy in some places. <span style="">05:47, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Make the color match the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and tone down the highlights if you use them. Breeze whisker  21:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Starforce? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If Starforce isn't, may I work on this? 01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, not yet. It hasn't been a week. They get a full seven days. 02:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading. -- 00:11, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Starforce gave me permission to do this. I'll reupload ASAP 14:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink fail :P 01:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" tons, it needs to be lighter, and seriously smudge the earpink down. :3 03:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

There's no highlights' to define. Add highlights to the face and front haunch. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:30, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image so it matches the MC better, darken the shading, add shading to the herbs, and take the earpink color from the MC. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:40, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the eyes match the MC image... they look red. 01:32, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

A big chunk of the earpink is missing so fix that, and define/darken the shading. May just be me, but can you make the herbs different colors or is that unneeded? a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:43, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did I hated it so I just re-did it. 03:03, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and lighten the color of the eyes. 16:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

In his description it says he has long, feathery whiskers. I think his whiskers should be longer and he should get an extra whisker but I'm not sure. 18:34, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and add some depth to the eyes. I agree with Mountainheart on the whiskers thing :3 <span style="">21:41 Wed Dec 21

Reuploaded I didn't add an extra whisker, I just made it longer like the MC image. 02:09, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged/blurred part of the ear closest to us. It also looks really dark, but if it's the same color picked off his MC image, then don't change it  04:19, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add the shading to the back leg farthest from us. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:34, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I just earsed all around the ear just to be sure and I took the ear pink from the other image. 00:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 01:08, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes aren't showing. 02:27, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, lighten the earpink to match the MC, and make the eyes more yellow-orange (amber) and less plain orange. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:55, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the eye color from the MC 17:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="">23:44, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Reuploaded 20:56, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Make the eyes less red. Moonstorm88 22:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I took the eye color from the MC. 22:47, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

You took it from the wrong part. That's the shaded part of the eye. Take it from the middle color, not the darkest or lightest one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:13, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste on the outside of the front paw to the cat's right. <span style="">00:11, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Reuploaded Okay I killed teh waste! >:D 16:46, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Once again, lighten the eyes and take the earpink from the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:14, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the ear pink and the eye color from the MC. I hope it looks better. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  18:28, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Blur the shading more and make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) ~ For Approval
Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? <span style="">21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.<span style="">21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D <span style="">22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? <span style="">22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! <span style="">23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3  20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. <span style="">23:47 Sat Dec 10

Does she have the same color nose like her other images? 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose is pink on the other images, but I was told to make it gray, do I make it pink than? <span style="">23:20 Sun Dec 11

The nose is a lighter gray on her other images. Color pick off of that, if you'd like. 23:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Got the nose colour off her kit image. <span style="">00:52 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded Smudges ear-pink more. <span style="">00:55 Mon Dec 12

Her ear should be torn. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when she got the torn ear, do we? Meaning she probably shouldn't have it on her apprentice. Darken the shading and make the shading color match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, Sky's right, she got it as an apprentice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I love this images, so proud :) <span style="">23:00 Mon Dec 12

Add a silver tip to the tail. 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the colour off her leader image, so I'm probably not changing it. <span style="">21:27 Tue Dec 13

Actually, she shouldn't have a silver tail tip. That's from age. Could you get rid of it and darken the shading? Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThat's fine, I don't mind xD <span style="">00:04 Wed Dec 14

Blur the earpink and add depth to the eye. I love the shading, Sweet! 06:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Doesn't everyone? ;) <span style="">23:22 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading and the highlights. 01:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and no offence, but the shading is blurred enough and to the max. <span style="">11:08 Thu Dec 15

Darken the shading, on the rump especially. And have you tried Gaussian blurring it? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I always use gaussian blur for shading. <span style="">00:56 Sat Dec 17

Darken the shading and blur it 22:07, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want to darken it, because it will turn out black. <span style="">22:13 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:07 Sun Dec 18

Darken the shading and blur it. Make sure you're using the pencil tool when you're drawing on the lineart for the torn ear, as right now some of the pixels are semi-transparent. <span style="">01:22 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded I did use the pencil, but I erased some of the ear off first. That's probably why. <span style="">18:56 Tue Dec 20

Darn it. I was hoping to get this once Bluestar's kit alt. I'm working on was approved, but, oh well. Anyways, this looks a little too gray, with not enough blue, to me. Bluestar11796 19:02, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe I wanted it too, so as soon as Frostfur's loner was approved I quick reserved it. I colour picked off one of her other image, so I'm not comfortable about changing it. <span style="">19:12 Tue Dec 20

Define/Add shading to the farthest back leg. It is in the apprentice tutorial shading placement. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:37, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is the artist's choice, as long as it makes sense and there is a definite light source. Plus, I'm pretty sure there are other tutorials that show the shading a different way. I don't see anything wrong with the shading, except fo the fact that the the neck shading looks too black. <span style="">4:29 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Oh, add depth to the eyes. <span style="">4:31 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Add shading to the back leg farthest away from us. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:18, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is depth in the eyes, plus it's my choice anyways, and the shading placement is my choice, and it's fine. <span style="">17:19 Wed Dec 21

Can you try to match the nose color with the other images? It just looks a little bit off to me. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:54, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It is off her leader image. So I don't intend to change it.<span style="">21:49 Fri Dec 23

Blur the smudged earpink. <span style="">23:47, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

I don't blur apprentice earpink, only smudge. :3 <span style="">01:29 Sat Dec 24

Sweetflower, I know you don't blur the earpink but it needs to be blurred, at least just a little. You can't blur by smudging of smudge by blurring. ;) Also, darken the shading on the hindleg farthest to us, and maybe lighten the shading on the flank just a tad. This is lovely. :3 22:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I caved. :D Just for you Stoneh! :P <span style="">03:11 Mon Dec 26

Make the highlight/lighter bit bigger on the face, and make all the highlights/lighter bits brighter. Also, make the belly completely shaded, chest and back foot farthest from us. And blur the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. I re-did her, she looked awful. <span style="">17:41 Wed Dec 28

I don't think changed are showing. <span style="">17:45 Wed Dec 28

Sneezepaw (A) ~ For Approval
Got all colors from original image. CommentS? 23:15, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">23:20 Mon Dec 12

Re-Uploaded. 23:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and darken it. <span style="">01:09 Wed Dec 14

Re-Uploaded. 01:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the tail highlights. <span style="">23:58 Wed Dec 14

I can't; then it won't show. It looks fine as it is. 22:51, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the tail shading and blur the haunch shading? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind leg. 20:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Its blurred as much as possible. 01:28, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and erase the waste. <span style="">12:21 Sun Dec 18

Re-Uploaded. 22:53, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading more and brush up on your placement, as right now I can't really see a definitive light source. <span style="">01:33 Tue Dec 20

There is a definitive light source. Its coming from the top/front right side. I copied the shading from Frogleap's apprentice image, and no one found anything wrong with the shading there. I'll darken the shading more, but thats as much as I'll do. 22:54, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I've defined the shading. Everything's blurred to the limit, and the shading seriously matches Frogleap's perfectly, and that one was approved, so I'm going to CBA this. 23:09, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink does not seem to match up with his kit image (kit not alt. kit) a cat  ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Be sure to change the title next time. ;) 02:52, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the tummy shading? I feel dumb saying tummy... a cat  ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:39, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the white legs as well. 03:59, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:07, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the hind leg is blotchy. Blur it. 17:44, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. CBA? 01:06, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

You cant just CBA your own image like that. The haunch highlight needs to be bigger and brighter and the shading under the chin needs to be blurred badly. 02:16, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:36, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's all around a bit blotchy, could you blur it out? this is still lovely, regardless. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  10:07, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 12:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! He should have more stripes. 12:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Icestorm has dibs on this image, did you get permission to do this image? 16:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even if you were allowed to, hmm. The eye needs more contrast in shades, and needs to be a tiny tad less neon Define the shading just a bit. 17:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm isn't active right now, so I don't know if she would be able to lay claim to any of her images. Try and thin out the middle of the stripes on the tail by a pixel or two. Also, the eyes look like they're blue with a tint of green. Did you color pick right from the warrior/deputy? 19:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't even know Icestorm had dibs on the image... I actually just chose the color, since his eyes are an ice blue shade. 20:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon and add depth to them. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:00, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Move the stripes on his haunch closes to his head up further and make the top one longer. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon. 23:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes. 00:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Correct me if I am wrong,but could you defie the shading a tad bit. Otherwise, excellent job! a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks really dark. Also could you define the shading on the whitish part of the tummy? a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:44, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink a bit and lighten the shading a bit. <span style="">00:54 Fri Dec 23 00:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

His image's stripes are being redone to look like Tigerstar's. Might as well do that here instead of the tweak page. ;) 03:43, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Be right back going to puke because of this >_>  19:20, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Awsome! Fix the stripes to look more like his warrior image. Moonstorm88 22:23, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

His warrior image needs to be redone Moon. Can you fix the angle of the stripes? I don't think it's natural for them to be diagonal like that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:37, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I made them look like Tigerstar's stripes, so that's why they look that way. 00:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are great, but they do need to be vertical. If you used layers, you can meddle around with it some and not have to redo them  04:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I posted his new warrior, so make the stripes match that, and don't forget the line along his back. 14:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took the colors from his new warrior image. 15:00, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, CBA? 20:57, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, yes, I'm interrupting. Smudge the chest more to match his warrior. 17:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, no, not like that. Use a smaller brush with the blur smudge tool and match his warrior. 18:05, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cha  18:19, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Did you look at the changed version? The changes aren't showing here. (Sorry that if looks like I removed your recent post on here, the wiki is being stupid.)  19:28, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Changes still aren't showing, and it's been a few hours. Try re-uploading again. 03:36, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Should be working now I hope. 11:03, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (A) - For Approval
Posting this for Brightstripes bause she can't edit the page yet. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 13:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading a tad. 18:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink to give it a bit more of a realistic look. 18:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlight" on the haunch and shoulder a bit bigger. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it;s making her look black almost. <span style="">17:26 Sat Dec 17

Are you still working on this? And Sweet, Loudbelly is a boy =p  16:44, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit. 18:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It has been 8 days since this has been worked on. Declined. Somebody may take this over if they don't have two apprentice projects  18:57, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could I take over? Birdpaw got declined, so i dont know :l. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:26, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

No need to ask, just reserve it before someone else  19:28, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm taking over. It'll be reuploaded today or tomorrow. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the earpink and shading. Highlights were hard, though, because I don't use them. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:58, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading please, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">02:53 Sun Dec 25

He has waste between the whiskers and smudged lineart on both of the ears. 21:31, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) ~ For Approval
Ugh...sloppy. I dun like this one. Please please please tell me it needs improvements! I'm fine if you decline this one; it's horrible. 14:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a lot. 15:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

We don't decline chararts based on how they look or our personal opinions on them. You're just being hard on yourself. Make the nose a tad bit darker and blur the haunch shading some 18:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well, as they say, our worst critic is ourselves. Blur the stripes just a tad. 18:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes and blur the edges of the stripes a lot, actually. Notice how they're not as visible on the Warrior image as they are on here? If you need help, don't be afraid to ask. 19:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. And redden it a bit too. 19:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hmm...still sloppy, but I like it better! =D 23:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes, especially on main part of the body. I used the "Circle 03" brush on GIMP to make the stripes, if that helps you. 03:04, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Had to redo the entire thing to get the stripes thinner, and I appreciate the help, only I use Pixlr. 07:31, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I use pixlr too, so I understand your pain. However, I feel like the stripes on the tail are a bit unnatural, and that they could be blurred a bit more. I find it easier just to continue blurring until it looks good. Really good though! 08:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Um. I had dibs on this image. I'm not going to take it from you (I'm being nice) but be more careful next time you reserve an image. <span style="">20:59 Sat Dec 17

Wildheart, wasn't that rule removed? 21:43, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure, as there was a lot of discussion and debate on it (discussion and debate that seems to have disappeared), but I think it was put into place in the end. <span style="">21:45 Sat Dec 17

Ah ha! Found it. <span style="">21:49 Sat Dec 17

I thought it was decided we could claim like 2-3 images if we want to? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:07, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Stop debating under this poor persons image and gp read the discussion page. 23:25, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. Hehe, missed that...anyways, Quailflight, reuploaded. 23:40, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Needs a gray nose  01:52, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ugh, my cat walked on my computer just before I uploaded, so I had to redo the upload. *Mutter mutter* 04:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be larger and more smudged together, as well as more curved on the shoulder and haunch. Darken the shading a lot, and add some depth to the eyes. <span style="">05:05 Sun Dec 18

Derp I don't mean add depth to the eyes, I mean reverse the depth in the eyes, as the bone above their eyes juts out and casts shadow on the top of the eye, not the bottom. <span style="">05:07 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded. Like that? 07:09, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I'm a Derp, reuploaded again. :P 08:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Better. The contrast in the eyes could be a bit more intense, and the stripes still need to be smudged more. The pelt should be smudged into the earpink as well, and the shading still needs to be darker. <span style="">09:52 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded. That's as much as I can smudge the stripes without messing up the lineart or messing up the whole pelt. -.- 10:56, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry to be such a stickler, but if you look at this image compared to the warrior image, you can see that the warrior image is much more smudged. My advice: make sure your lineart is on a different layer so you don't smudge it, and then lock the background. Then take your brush (circle fuzzy 03 or maybe 05) and smudge the stripes all in the same direction. Go crazy with smudging until the smudgies look more like the warrior image. <span style="">10:59 Sun Dec 18

Ugh...this is gonna take a while before I can reupload. I use Pixlr, I can't get the lineart on another layer. It'll just hide all the color. :( 12:18, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

A while being...? A couple days? A week? Do you want to withdraw it for now, but keep the reservation so you can work on it and post it when you think it's perfect? It would free up room for other images so we can get all these apprentices done quickly. <span style="">12:33 Sun Dec 18

I like the sound of that. I'll re-post this later on, but I'm withdrawing for now. Honestly, this might take up to...a week maximum, I'm guessing. Okay, the image is withdrawn. I'm keeping my reservation, I'm just withdrawing for right now. Please no one take up the image (wow I sound like a hypocrite, don't I?). 12:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Scratch the above, actually. Wild, you can take up the image. I've decided not to do it, as I've already got a better one in mind. This time I chose very carefully. 12:26, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

When you withdraw, please make sure to change the heading to reflect this  19:53, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. :3 -- 00:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one! :D -- 00:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is great, but I'm about to spoil your fun :( The stripes need to curve with the body much more and they're going the wrong way  00:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define face shading a tad, and the back leg shading needs to be blurred because the lack of shading/highlights are a tad bit too large in that area. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:39, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 19:39, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (MCA) - For Approval
Please, someone remind me never to copy a complicated tabby again DX. I do not like this at all. The stripes all fail. 19:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white. 20:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure this needs to be uploaded over the old file. 20:33, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It does. Don't put caps on mca. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white blends into the brown. Also, there is a lack of shading on the neck and chest. 21:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing, but still, Reuploaded. I really hate this image. 10:53, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The changes weren't showing 'cause you forgot to change the image name XD I fixed it for you. Try to make the stripes lighter and match the warrior image more closely <span style="">12:37 Sun Dec 18

Blur the stripes. 23:11, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define face shading. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:41, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 04:22, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I've been stressed out and busy over the last few days. Reuploaded now though. 16:51, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  01:05, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (A) ~ Withdrawn
Sorry it's so ugly. Just noticed that i need to darken the base color, apologies. Feedback? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 16:52, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Color in the nose, blur the shading and darken it, and the earpink looks a little too neon. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 16:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

add transparency to it - 17:04, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also smudge/blur the stripes more. 19:34, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Get all the colours off his kit or warrior image. <span style="">19:47 Sat Dec 17

And blur the highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:53, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't do highlights. And I did take off the colors, or else it'll upload odd. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 23:29, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

You obviously didn't take the colours off his images. This needs to be a whole lot darker, and are you going to do anything else said? 23:38, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

You need to take the colors off of a neutral spot on the picture, not on the highlighted parts. Breeze whisker  00:35, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Color the nose and add some depth in the shading; it's really flat. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:38, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 16:42, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

If you added highlights to the haunch, I can see that they are very circular and not blurred, so they need to be blurred. Also please define the shading... a cat  ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:46, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

If they aren't working on this, may I take over? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:49, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wait til it's been a week, Maple, and you don't need to ask when that happens  04:25, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah, i fixed the colors. I keep messing up relpoading though. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:45, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Fill his nose in, blur the highlights/lighter parts and the shading, and make the background transparent and mathc the stripe styleabit moare(Add more stripes) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 20:43, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

You'll have to change this up to look like the deputy, which has been redone. Sorry. >.> 03:41, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks kinda sloppy, mayeb blur or smudge them a bit.--<font color="Red">When darkness turns to light...<font color="black" style="background;none">I come a callin' 17:01, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Color the nose and lighten the ear-pink. 01:44, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

His images are being redone to look more like Tigerstars. So you might have to redo the stripes. 16:55, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Misty, dont repeat what was already said. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:57, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I guessed I missed that when I was scanning the comments, my bad. >.<  00:50, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 17:06, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I found the secrets of the smudge tool. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 12:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

For some dumb reason, the changes aren't showing >.<  ~Regifloat222  Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 12:58, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Regi, it's been 11 days and you haven't even added transparency yet... Are you sure you can handle this? If not, hand it off to someone that can, please. Otherwise it slows down the project. 16:37, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing. Can't handle his new design. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Someone else may take over, or this gets archived in 24 hours. 19:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Patchpelt (A) ~ For Approval
Oh, he's so purty <3 16:13, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful~ <3 Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 16:14, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, changes should probably show once I publish this edit... 16:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Those black patches should be smaller; he has a lot more white on his warrior. 19:44, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

And define them a bit, too. Breeze whisker  22:09, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white and smudge the earpink into the ear. Also darken the shading. <span style="">01:20 Tue Dec 20

Sorry to interrupt but I think the white looks fine. FerretclawLover 17:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blue, are you still doing this? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  23:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I am. And I followed the elder exactly, so they should be fine. 14:51, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry, but they're not. They don't match the elder, they're smaller on the elder. And the white still needs to be lighter. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:30, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Smudhe the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">02:43 Sun Dec 25

It's been a week since she last uploaded. May I take over? Breeze whisker  15:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead :3 17:41, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. A) ~ CBA
Finally. A space. Comments, concerns? 20:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Theres a patch missing on his toe on the far right leg (our right). 20:24, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make his eyes less brown and more yellow. 01:08, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more and reverse the shading in the eyes so the darkest part is at the top. <span style="">01:18 Tue Dec 20

Reuploaded. 02:25, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

The white spots don't show up in GIMP.. that's odd. I think the changes are in the file history :P 02:26, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. There is definitely a white spot, it's just an ill-filled pixel. Breeze whisker  03:30, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Scratch that, shading looks fine opacity-wise. Sorry. Breeze whisker  03:31, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 03:38, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It may just be me, but smudge the pelt into the earpink a tiny bit more and define the tail shading a little bit too. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:48, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, there's a white pixel on his hind paw on --> It's a little white pixel on the end of the toe, but that's all. X3 14:16, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:38, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Over 24 hours, CBA? 19:14, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for inturupting CBA, but can you smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more? <span style="">18:12 Mon Dec 26

I think the smudging's fine on it. However, could you redden and darken the earpink a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 06:04, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Continuing CBA. 17:30, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (A) ~ For Approval


UGH this is such a fail DX Took all colors from his Warrior image, and highlights are coming from the back. *hangs head in shame* Fail fail fail fail fail! I tried to smudge...and got a major fail....Dont look at my shame DX! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black into the white a lot and add shading, because I can't see any. 16:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay. *bags head* I hate this image DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:35, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The black on his head needs to be touching the corner of his eyes like on his leader image. And lengthen the tail. 18:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

One thing, I can't make his tail longer, for stuff like that, I use Pixirl, and his tail touches the end of the box. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can do it for you if you email me the file with layers. Neneshell@gmail.com. 18:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't use files on this one, for fear i'd lose them like i did with Rubblepaw.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So how are you editing it? If you don't have the file, how can you make changes, besides redoing it each time you exit? 19:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, like no, i have the one file that's his image, but i didn't do layers like a layer for his color and earpink and shaidng and stuff, and just did that on the one thing. Like I opened up the blank, and took the black, drew on his patches, filled in the patches, and then darkened the white a bit, added shading and highlights, the blurred everything, and added his eyes color. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

And i did this one on Pixirl....not Gimp, 'cause Gimp is being spazzy for me atm. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

You have to save the image as an .xcf, I believe - if it's the same on Pixlr - for the layers to save. Doing everything on one layer is not a good idea. For example, what if someone asked you to lighten the patch, which I was going to? You can't just use the dodge tool, or it'd lighten the lineart as well. I can't tell you how to make your chararts, but I can advise you to use layers. 22:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, no matter what the tail does need to be lengthened to match his leader blank. 23:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/add shading. I really can not see it. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing...for reasons.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:00, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over, if thats okay. <span style="">06:03, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011

Go ahead, DJ. Maple: next time you withdraw an image, remember to change the title. <span style="">10:01 Wed Dec 21

I did, I put 'withdrawn.' I'm sure i did.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:28, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

She did, DJ changed it I'm assuming. DJ, don't change the heading; only leads should do that. 21:23, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. <span style="">03:17, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

Lighten up the black a bit. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:20, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. -- 04:06, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I redid the whole image, and fixed all of the above. <span style="">23:18, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011
 * Also fail on the tail stretch. <span style="">23:23, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

There's waste around the charart. 00:24, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  <span style="">03:21, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Extend the image border up so his tail isn't cut off. 03:36, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but how do I do that? I'm kind of new around GIMP... I tried rotating the image but the lineart just got blurred. <span style="">23:20, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Go to 'Image' then to 'Canvas Size' at the top, then make it taller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:27, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did that, the canvas went bigger, but the border stayed where it was. I could just make the tail tip rounder so it looks like it's not cut off from the border. <span style="">00:46, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Would you like help? If you have an .xcf file then send me that in an email, otherwise I'll just work off the .png to help you out :3  02:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention. After you change the canvas size, you have to go to 'Layer' then hit 'Layer to Image Size' or something along those lines. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I tried that too Pale, but unfortunatly, it didn't work. :( Ivy, if you want to fix it, you can. I suggest you work off the png image, since the Gimp one (xcf) is really odd and doesn't look like the image I have here. I also made the tail tip rounder a bit, so Reuploaded I guess. <span style="">09:33, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

Actually, don't worry. I've got it. <span style="">09:39, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

Reuploaded -  <span style="">09:47, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

It looks like his tail is kinked near the middle, try to smooth it out like the regular chararts. 15:30, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I tried that "kink" to try to make it look like the normal blanks. <span style="">00:28, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Smooth out the tail. It's too thin in the middle and too thick at the top. 00:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white, and make the markings match the leader image more. The white on the forehead should go up higher, the white should cover the whole haunch, there shouldn't be any white on his shoulder, only on his forearm, and the white on his chest should go up quite as high. also redden the earpink a bit and make the eyes more amber than yellow. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I can help you with the lineart on the tail if you need it. It's really no that hard. Just select part of the tail, move it up higher, and add in the missing lineart in the middle of the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A) ~ For Approval
My least favorite charart :\ FerretclawLover 16:24, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Why, shes cute! Smudge her ear-pink into her ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty! Define the tail shading a tad. 18:16, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REUPLOADED, the reason is that she just isn't up to what I call the Icewish Standard. She's average :\ FerretclawLover 18:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more on either side of where you've already smudged it 20:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, is this what you mean? I got a little confused so I just did what I think you're saying...FerretclawLover 20:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The face shading needs to be more defined. The shading chart in the tutorials shows shading on the face, and it is hard to see if it was added. Otherwise great job! a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not actually sure whether I put face shading or not...FerretclawLover 17:57, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cheshire, the shading placement is artists choice, as long as it makes sense, than it's fine. ;) <span style="">23:44 Wed Dec 21

Blur the earpink. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  23:46, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like disagreeing but I think the earpink looks fine. :)  14:21, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think the earpink should be fixed, so it looks like it going into the ear, not into the pelt. (if that makes any sense at all) And blur the shading on her belly tons, looks darken than the rest of it. 17:02, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED  17:40, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 21:03, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for inturupting, but can you please lighten the back paw shading on the heel, and the belly shading? It's darker than the rest of the shading. <span style="">18:15 Tue Dec 27

Leopardstar (A) ~ For Approval
She is beautiful, comments? 02:42, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nice

Tigerheart273 02:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur what? You need to be more specific, and whatever it is, I think it is fine, and if I did blur the whole thing it would be messy. 02:56, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is GORGOEUS! I'm mega jelly. Define the shading. 03:02, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, I defined the shading slightly, too much would make it look odd, and thanks. 03:07, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is great, and this is such a beautiful cat, but I can't help but notice that some of the back leg farthest from us is not fully shaded, and if the light source is coming in which part of the back leg is in shadow, then all of it should be shaded, and unless she has paws in a darker color (I looked at her description and it was not mentioned) then the whole farthest back leg should be shaded. I do admire this though... Good job! a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:14, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart, I can't blur the whole tail. It'l mess up the tail, what the shading? The spots? I am going to ask you to read the guidelines of this project before commenting on an image. 03:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the nosepink a tad. ;) 04:35, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the paws a bit. The stripes on her head look like she's angry, haha. 18:40, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the paws a little because they are supposed to be golden-brown, I defined the nose-pink, but the I took the nose color from the leader image, and I am not going to change it again. I also added shading to the furthest back paw, and thanks!

Don't forget to sign! ^^ Of course, it's georgous. Define the head shading a tad. <span style="">00:51, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Brighten or add highlights to match the leader image. It's really shiny on that one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:45, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (A) - CBA
I took over for Maplepool: we're doing an art swap 'cause I fell in love with this charart XD I'll archive her previous section for space in a minute. Comments? <span style="">21:19 Wed Dec 21

I love her face. XD Can you give the neck shading some more depth, because it looks a little flat. Otherwise, amazing~ 22:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :3 and I know! Her face looks ridiculous. I tried to copy images of Persian cats for the flattened face aspect, but this just looks... hilarious. Which is why I love it XD <span style="">22:20 Wed Dec 21

Epic face. XD I honestly see nothing wrong with this, but should she have scars? Or do you think she got those as a warrior/MC? (edit conflicts -.-) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think she got them as a warrior/MC. I'm working on her mca image right now (and hoping feverishly nobody will steal it from me before I can reserve it) and I put scars on that one, though. (I know what you mean. I hate edit conflicts ._.) <span style="">22:24 Wed Dec 21

Move her nose <-- that way and down a smidge to conform to the angle the head is at. Also change her expression to match the other apprentices if you can. Looks... cool. XD 00:51, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

I love her face. XD Blur the shading on her back. Breeze whisker  03:27, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

So glad you took over, I'd be laughing so hard, i wouldn't be able to work on this! Define her highlights if you used them. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:28, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

You could, for the muzzle, add that crease, ya know? Like a sideways parentheses ). If it looks weird you don't have to upload it. Breeze  whisker  17:30, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still workin' on this, Wild? 22:02, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yup. Sorry, guys. I've been really busy with family stuff. I'll upload it in a day or two. <span style="">05:53 Mon Dec 26

Reuploaded Thanks for your patience, everybody :3 <span style="">23:35 Tue Dec 27

Looks good to me. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:31, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Seedkit (K) ~ For Approval
Comments? 21:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Could you maybe redden the earpink? So cute~! *steals* 21:36, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I adore this ^^ brighten the ginger patches a bit, lighten the white, and then darken the shading. <span style="">22:22 Wed Dec 21

This is just my opinion, but define the patches a bit more, they look a bit smudged. 00:00, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

I wanted to do her! I forgive you, but only 'cause she looks so cute! *steals from Twi* Blur her ear-pink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:26, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

OMG! I wuffs! *steals from Maple* Just brighten it up a tad. After that, I'll lock it away in a cage for me to admire for eternity. ;) 04:41, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, guys! I tried everything you all said. 15:05, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but the white is still too dark. Also define shading a tad and brighten the right ear. I may be wrong but the nose pink looks too... bright. Otherwise, she is so cute! a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 18:09, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

No,your right, and makethe earpink bigger on > this side or make the ear pink smaller on < that side. *Steals back fro Dazzlewing* Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 20:39, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink on the right looks darker than the other, can ya fix it? ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:17, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm. I think that's because of the shading. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  22:19, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Have you tried using the sponge tool (I don't know if there's one on gimp...). It helps redden earpink and almost anything that contains a hot color: red, orange, purple and yellow. 23:32, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Dazzle, there is no sponge tool on GIMP. To get the sponge tool, you'll have to use Pixlr. <span style="">00:04, Sat, Dec, 24, 2011

Ackk...*facepalm*. Well, the picture is a tad dim and could use brightening, but I don't know what Ivy uses...I don't know how else to brighten it other than higlight and saturation. X( 14:01, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is the dodge tool ;). Without the sponge tool, I like the use of a combination of Midtones Dodge, Midtones Burn, Highlights Dodge and Highlights Burn. It may not work, but sometimes if you use it in the right way, you can get the color or shade you want. If you use Pixlr, if something gets too red, you can use the Color replace tool. <span style="">01:02, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Reuploaded. Did all that and redid the earpink. 03:39, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the white less grey? 03:57, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose a bit. 21:05, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:52, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shrewfoot (A) - For Approval
Eh. Comments? 15:20, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks. o3o 15:43, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * thinks to self* Hm, this is really nice! Darken the shading. Also, darn you lol. I was hoping to do this but oh well :) 15:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The black on her paws need to be a tad lighter. Other than that, very nice! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:37, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Maple~ 17:11, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Dustpelt(A)~ For Approval
Okay, I finally have him ready. I practiced for a long time, but I still think this isn't the best work i've ever done. :(. I attempted to match the stripes to the warrior image the best I could, but I know I have the colors right because I took them from the warrior image.<font color="Red">When darkness turns to light...<font color="black" style="background;none">I come a callin' 16:44, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smudge the pelt into the earpink 16:46, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the warrior. Blur the highlights. 17:01, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuplaoded. '''I think i completely messed this up :O. I stared at the warrior image the whole time I made this, and I tried my best to make the stripes exactly like thewarrior.:|<font color="Red">When darkness turns to light...<font color="black" style="background;none">I come a callin' 17:35, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Its too dark and a bit russet colored. Did you color pick off of his warrior image? 16:40, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

-squinty squint- I can barely see anything. Lighten the shading a ton. 03:01, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Not just the shading, the whole thing, base coat included. And rename thise Dustpelt.apprentice.png ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:41, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (A) ~ For Approval
I'm extremely proud of this image. I love it so much <3 16:59, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 17:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED 17:58, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe lighten up the belly shading a wee bit. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 21:21, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the furthest back paw and smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink. <span style="">22:01 Fri Dec 23

Boulderpaw (A) ~ For Approval
My first apprentice ^^. Tell me what you think. 17:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Smudge pelt into earpink. ,17:52,December 23,2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he be short-haired, since he's a WindClan cat? 18:14, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh really? He has to be a short-haired? 19:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well, yes, since all WindClan cats get short-haired images, unless they were described as long-haired. 20:39, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I'll fix it. 00:29, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail highlight/lighter part go along with the light source better. There's no possible light source that could make it go in the middle of the tail like that, straight through. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:25, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 21:42, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the whole thing kinda blurry? Like you resized it or something. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

It is a bit smaller than the blank. Fix it. 03:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink could be lighter and more blurred. 06:45, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same as the others it's 139x134. Or is that wrong? I agree it looks smaller but when I resized it to 139x134 just like all the others it was the same. Even in the file it shows that size. 18:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

You resized it? That's probably the problem. First off, that would be why this looks blurry, and second, the canvas size may not be the same as the other blanks from the start, so when you resized it, the canvas size matched, btu the blank didn't. You may have to redo. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:34, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I just make it bigger so it is easier to work with but then on others when I save it, it goes back to the normal size. I'll redo it if you want me to. 17:03, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Is it better? 17:54, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink. <span style="">18:28 Mon Dec 26

The lineart is still blurred. I can fix it for you if you want me to. <span style="">00:47, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Nah I got this DJ..@Sweet do you mean make the color duller or dull the earpink I have on there? 18:55, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 19:41, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around the image, darken and redden the earpink, darken the base coat, and make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:40, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

He still looks blurry, and that image is definitely smaller than the blank. 03:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Runningwind (A) - For Approval
Weel, I tried match the stripes, what do you think?,17:48,December 23,2011 (UTC)

Very brave, seeing as I'd never be brave enough to try to take on this charart. Very nice stripes. Just add a little depth to the eyes. ^^ 18:27, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, Shelly! Reuploaded ,19:25,December 23,2011 (UTC)

There needs to be way less stripes. This patterens pretty, but it barely matches the warrior. 21:21, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading 21:31, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,21:53,December 23,2011 (UTC)

Theres still too many stripes. 02:24, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

And on his warrior image the stripes fade and pick back up again. And there're more spots. Breeze whisker  03:21, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Merry Christmas :-) ,09:28,December 24,2011 (UTC)

Make less stripes on the tail. 21:44, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:26, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,14:51,December 25,2011 (UTC)

Thicken and redden the stripes a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,11:30,December 28,2011 (UTC)

Ferncloud (A) - CBA
Whoo, fourth charart. I had to do both siblings. XD Took all colors from her queen image, but this seems so much darker. Help with that? Breeze whisker  17:53, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The only reason it seems darker is because the queen image has some bright highlights on it, I think. I don't believe you need to match that perfectly, lighting changes with environment. 18:29, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm, okay. That makes sense. If anybody thinks I need to edit the hightlights, tell me. Breeze whisker  03:10, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 05:44, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  18:30, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the flecks a tad more and redden the ear-pink a bit more. Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:25, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink was color-picked from her queen image. Breeze whisker  04:38, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 21:07, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Not quite, I hadn't uploaded the blurred flecks. Sorry for the delay. Breeze whisker  21:42, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know her queen image has a pink nose, but shouldn't it be grey? It's not like Mistystar. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 01:41, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think the pink is grey enough that it's fine. And if I have to match the earpink, I will also the nose. Breeze whisker  03:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well the thing is, it should be changed on the queen too. I'll actually go do that now. So it's easier to change it on the apprentice now, rather then having someone change it for you later, after it's approved. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:12, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, make her eyes lighter, since they're supposed to be pale green. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:20, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? Breeze whisker  23:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, looks good to me. CBA? :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:22, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Shadepelt (A) ~ For approval
Please don't say about the color, I had a hard time :( Grayflower10 16:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are you a member of the PCA? I don't see your name on the apprentice list.... And if I understand right, you can't post chararts unless you're a member. You can go join though. Anyways, lighten the whole image and get rid of the white specks on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

The front page of PCA says that non-members can donate art. And Gray actually reserved it, so it's fine I think. ^^ She's the first non-member I've seen do the thing right. 16:40, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I did ask to join :) Grayflower10 17:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fill those two white pixels on her forehead? 18:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the pelt into the earpink. 18:05, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement like the one on the tutorial. Som eof the placements are wrong. <span style="">02:09 Wed Dec 14

Shading placement is the artist's choice, Sweetflower. As long as it makes sense, we can't tell anyone to make it match the tutorial. 02:59, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please make the earpink look pink. 19:49, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't need to be pink, as the color is picked off the other images and dark gray/black cats often have gray inner ears. 01:35, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are a couple of pixels by the ear. -- 07:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? <span style="">20:48 Sat Dec 17

Quailflight, do not repeat what's already been said, please. If this has already been said, ignore me: lighten the entire image. Also, lighten up the shading just a tad. 14:11, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Please note that you have two days left to re-upload this before it is declined for lack of work. 17:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The Wiki clock is officially midnight, I don't think the user is going to work on this, so it's declined. Anyone with a free project may take over  00:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll take over! Just got an opening, I'll upload it ASAP. :) 00:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm editing the reservation chart to put Shadepelt on mine, so should I delete Grayflower's reservation for her? 00:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, as this is no longer hers  01:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

...You deleted my comment. :3 Anyway, what I said was I redid it and uploaded it, and I tried to get the colors close to the other character pixels. And I did change it on the chart. :) Um...comments? 02:52, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, fixed highlights. 00:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely job, Featherwillow. Take the earpink color from the loner image. <span style="">05:53, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011

Thanks! :) Re-uploaded. <span style="">15:53 PM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more, and I'll CBA this :) <span style="">21:52 Wed Dec 21

Featherwillow has been banned from the wiki. Any user without other projects may take over if they wish. 01:22, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I would take over, but I already have 2. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  01:36, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over if thats okay? Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan!  16:19, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead, Acorn! 01:40, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded =) -- Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan!  05:34, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think there is some blurred lineart around the earpink closest to us. <span style="">01:07, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

I zoomed in on Pixlr and couldn't find any blurred lineart. =/ -- Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan!  04:03, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. A)~ For Approval
Comments? 08:47, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Is this his brown tabby alt? Well....I don't know if its my grandmother's computer or what, but his stripes look creamy. Make them brown. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:09, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think that his base color showing through from under the stripes. Blur the ear-pink a tad more and define the shading on the tail. 15:16, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

REuoloaded- 05:32, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours, CBA? 21:09, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Could you thicken the stripes a bit? They're so thin it looks like the lighter parts are the stripes. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:39, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Heathertail (A) ~ For Approval
Never done a windclan cat yet. I actually quite like this one. But the shading is bleh. I can never seem to get it right. Comments? 18:58, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, very nice. :3 Lighten the shading on the belly a tad. 19:29, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you :) 19:43, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Just realized that the white part of the eyes were gray XD 23:40, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose less hot pink-ish. <span style="">17:37 Mon Dec 26

Re-uploaded 17:43, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

She should be less grey; saturate her a bit. 01:54, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How is this? 02:48, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Whitefang (A) ~ For Approval
I like his tail. Comments? Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D  19:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes 19:39, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I got his colors from his warrior charart. Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D  19:44, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  19:46, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

And his highlights/lighter parts. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:47, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D  19:51, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eyes, they look too dark to be natural. 21:10, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I got the eye color from his warrior charart.... Purplemoon  <font color="FF6699">Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D  22:53, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

If you took the eye color from the warrior charart, make sure for future reference that you take it from a neutral part, not the shaded or highlighted pixel. I suggest to go over it with the dodge tool. Tone down the highlights if you use them. <span style="">01:12, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

There is waste by his tail/hind leg closest to us. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:26, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. 14:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Merry Christmas! Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D  20:23, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

There is still waste. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:01, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes not showing... There wasn't any waste on the .xcf version, but there was on the .png... Purplemoon  <font color="FF6699">Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D  17:26, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes are still way too dark to be natural, and the stripes are too light... still. At least make them darker to the point where they're visible. 04:07, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   Stay up until Midnight  16:49, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rippletail (Alt.A) - For Approval
Ok, comments? ,20:24,December 24,2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous. Lighten the top of the head and isn't Rippletail a tom? Breeze whisker  20:48, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okay it looks like *squints* that there is some white on the haunch by > over there. Blur the ear pink too.

Yes, Rippletail's a tom, but was mistakenly called a she-cat once, so the alt should be on the female blank, as it is now. Darken the while image a bit, I thought this was white at first. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:39, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

When was he described silver?? Sorry, just wondering, and brighten the earpink just a tad and blur the shading near its belly. 00:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Check his trivia Misty. xD <span style="">02:38 Sun Dec 25

Reuploaded ,14:47,December 25,2011 (UTC)

I totally saw that :P *fail* Can you blur the shading just a tad on the paws and on the belly? 15:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,16:27,December 25,2011 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (A)~ For Approval
I dont much like it, but all the colours are from the leader, and theres not much i can do about it. 20:28, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice stripes Icy! Define shadings please *blind* ,20:36,December 24,2011 (UTC)

And darken it. Breeze whisker  20:38, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I fixed it a bit. 05:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like some of the stripes seem unnattached though. Or it could be my horrible computer...... 06:41, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I dont know what you expect me to do about it. 21:11, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Attach them. XD Quail means they're not attached to the lineart in some places, whereas on the leader image the are. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:14, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfur (A) - For Approval
Comments? 16:13, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the nose just a tad? Also, there is some waste where his spine begins to curve up. Wonderful! 16:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Nuu~ Me wanted him :P Can you lighten him up a tad? This is awesome! 18:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Took the base color from his cg. 19:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a lot and blur the shading a bit. Lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  10:01, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:41, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hailstar (A) - For Approval


Here he is! What do you think? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:43, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely May-pay. :P If there's depth in the eyes, make it show please. As far as I can tell it's solid. <span style="">16:59 Sun Dec 25

Reuploaded-Lol, my chat nickname xD Thanks, Sweet. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:05, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome, can you smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink more? <span style="">17:47 Sun Dec 25

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur where the pelt smudges into the earpink? Also...the shading looks messy, although that could be because of my lamp. 23:36, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Its your lamp, shading's fine, copied the shading placement thingy. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:42, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:19, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's not her lamp, I see it too. It looks like a line of gray, than lighter gray for the rest of the shading, make the shading one colour/shade. And there's blurred ear lineart in the earpink. Fi xit please. <span style="">02:08 Mon Dec 26

There is also blurred lineart along the tail. Also, change the nose color to gray. 04:59, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit, and make the belly completely shaded. There wouldn't be any light going there. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:01, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Pale, i took the clors from his leader image. The colors are fine Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 15:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:48, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I believe there's some blurred lineart on the front shoulder closest to us. 18:15, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I enpected every pixil, there is no blurred lineart? Maybe its a stuck pixil on your computer's screen? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:27, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Pfffttt, there was unblurred highlights on his shoulder, and non of you say it? Pffft. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:27, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It seems like there's a white pixel in his ear. 23:06, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Which ear? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:09, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Nevemind, I just zoomed on Pixlr, there was none. 11:01, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt.L) - For Approval
This is for when she was described as gray in the allegiances of TFW. I got ears and eyes off of her alternate deputy. She was described as just gray. Not light or dark, so I didn't colour pick off one of her alts for her pelt color. Comments? <span style="">16:56 Sun Dec 25

Lovely! Ligthen her up a bit, she looks almost black. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:03, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar is shorthaired. Very nice, Sweet. 17:04, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't all RiverClan cats long-haired? <span style="">17:17 Sun Dec 25

All her other images are shorthaired, and, she may have gotten the shorthaired gene from her ThunderClan parent. o3o 17:23, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm a derp face. Never mind me. :P <span style="">17:36 Sun Dec 25

Make the nose darker and either smudge/blur the earpink more. 19:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad, also she's shorthaired because she was described as sleek. 20:27, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">01:56 Mon Dec 26

Lighten her, she looks dark gray. Make her nose pink, since she was described with one, and blur the earpink and make it less purple. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:22, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">15:36 Mon Dec 26

Re-uploaded. Dulled the ear-pink and nose. <span style="">18:33 Mon Dec 26

Can you make the eye color match the regular leader version? 23:51, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">17:03 Wed Dec 28

Lionblaze (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
Okay, before anyone bickers, he was described as Orange as an apprentice. Any way, comments for improvement? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  17:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make it match the warrior charart and dull the ear pink and smudge it into the ear. Blur the stripes and make them piontier. 17:35, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sand, it doesn't need to match the warrior charart. If anything, make it look more orange, and less golden. Beautiful. 17:37, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  17:48, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The paws look yellow.. 20:00, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  20:21, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image seems to bright/yellow. Desaturate the image a tad and make it have a slightly more orange hue. Also, sumdge the pelt into the earpink a tad more. 20:25, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  00:51, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make it more orange, blur/smudge the stripes, and lower the highlights or darken the shading. 00:55, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love the smudge tool. Any way, comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  01:36, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, Rainy! Blur the ear-pink abit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks Maple. So happy for the smudge tool to be there. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  01:55, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

---> This eye (at the top) looks pink-ish tinted. It might be my conputer, but could you make them more orange. <span style="">03:25 Mon Dec 26

It's the same as the warrior image. I'll change it if someone agrees to it. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  04:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree with Sweet on this. 07:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably your screens. It's not pink. It's amber. 19:04, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Agreeing with Twi here, its fine. Can you make the tear in his ear go a bit deeper? I know its supposed to look the warrior image, but right now it looks odd. 21:24, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Like the pixil closest to the white pupil thing it pink tinted, it really looks like it's pinky/orange. <span style="">21:31 Mon Dec 26

I opened it up on Pixlr and zoomed in, its fine in my opinion. 22:19, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 03:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think I did this one when I just joined PCA, and it got declined. Shouldn't this be declined as well? 17:20, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't have an image with the old blanks. Do you have a quote from when he was described? 19:12, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Fernpelt (A) - CBA
I actually like this one! :) Comments? 18:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Rainy! :) 18:12, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * jaw drops* This is amazing! Can you define the light source on the shoulder a bit? PRESENT TIME!  Give me them!  18:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the tail stripes a tad? 21:19, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

There looks like there are some black pixels in the left eye. 21:38, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:59, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

There is some pink pixels near the top of the head from the earpink, can you fix that? 22:51, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gonna be gone til' the first, so this, and my other chararts won't be worked on til' then. 05:13, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Fine by me, because I'm CBAing it. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  02:34, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Briarlight (A) ~ For Approval
Here she is, comments for improvement? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  18:55, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think, as an apprentice, I can critique, but if not, disregard. She looks good, though I think you should smudge the earpink on the left ear a little more. 20:57, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Her left or ours? If it's ours, I cannot blur that, if it's hers, I will more then gladly blur taht more. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  21:02, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Why of course, the ear closest to us. You can't even see the other one. And yes, Toadstar. Apprentices can critique. 22:02, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know, i was just messing around Splashy. Any way, '''re-uploaded. '''Comments? 23:22, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think you made the ear-pink go down too far. Make the pelt go up further near the ear-pink. <span style="">23:57 Mon Dec 26

Re-uploaded. Comments? 00:28, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="">19:30 Tue Dec 27

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. 19:33, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 19:53, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the belly and tail shading and the ear pink too. A lot. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  22:43, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 01:21, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading above the back haunch a bit. 19:10, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lionblaze (A) - For Approval
Y u no have realistic tabby pattern? XD Comments? 01:03, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u take last spot? x3 Lighten the shading a tad. :3 01:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u make so pretty? XD Blur the forehead stripes a little. 03:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u....... I got nothing. XD Anyways, could you lighten the stripes, lovely Ivy? o3o ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u use chatspeak liek nubs? Thicken the stripes on his tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 07:06, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u use chatspeak in first place? XP The shoulder stripes are slightly inaccurate, that...erm, wavy/pointed stripe thing on his chest should sort of rise up onto it, and the one more in the middle...erm, try comparing it to his warrior, I'm having a tough time explaining this...^.^' 12:03, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. 17:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u not use chatspeak? xD Anyway lighten the haunch and blur the stripes; maybe make them pointer. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:45, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Tinycloud (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 19:48, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay did you take the ear pink from the warrior? anyway lighten and blur the shading. Nicely done  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  22:41, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine, just blur it towards the base of the tail. 22:46, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. Ki) - For Approval
Just as her brother was mentioned as pale grey, she was mentioned as dark. Comments? 23:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make her a female. 00:34, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

And darker. And make the nose a little less bright. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:47, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Wow, I fail ._. 01:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose, it's hot pink right now. xD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:11, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:14, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a little bit. 18:43, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (Alt.A) ~ For Approval
Here she is! Comments for Improvement? 23:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 23:20, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 18:22, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Egg (A) ~ For Approval
At long last, space! I know it looks weird, but any comments? 23:20, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:21, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little less neon. 23:47, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There is miscolored lineart on the paws and on his head/whiskers. 01:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:17, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

He's way too yellow right now. Make him more cream. 04:22, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

This still looks yellow. Darken the shading after you have fixed the color, although it might just be my bad eyes.. <span style="">05:12, Wed, Dec, 28, 2011

Reuploaded. Pixlr keeps crashing on me... 05:45, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more to blend in more to the higlights/unshaded parts. And add depth to the eyes. 16:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the ear pink meets the pelt. It looks to rough. 18:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (A) ~ For Approval
Since Fallowpounce left, I decided to do Mossyfoot's apprentice. Comments? 23:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Nice job! 23:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Changes are showing now 23:48, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think there should be more white on the foreleg, and perhaps make the pointy brown bit on the haunch rounder. So much better than mine. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 23:50, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white some more, too. :3 23:55, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:04, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the brown meets the white even more and get rid of the point on the brown on the haunch. Also define the shading a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:46, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

May I ask what point of brown you're talking about? Everything else is coming up. 11:06, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:21, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white go a bit higher on the forehead and blur the white just a biiiiit more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) ~ For Approval
Ugh, this is horrible. Comments? 23:43, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink fill the entire ear and make it more visible 23:45, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, but, the white in the eye goes where there is one less black...If that made any sense. 23:49, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the shading, on the tail especially. This is nice! 23:53, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the dapples a lot. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smokepaw (A) ~ For Approval
A space?! Do my eyes decieve me?? :O 00:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading 00:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. 20:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Managed to snag other one :P 00:41, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading.. I can barely see it. 01:14, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:17, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading and blurred the earpink. 19:56, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (MCA) - For Approval
Rainey never posted, so Scarlet (I think it was scarlet... XD One of the leads) said I could have it. Comments? All colors from her old .xcf file. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:10, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Lighten the shading. 01:13, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

If I lighten the shading, she'll look really flat. What if I brighten the highlights? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:43, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, do that. =3 03:31, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:45, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (A) - For Approval
Yay, still space for another one! 8D The colors are off on this for some reason even though I took from the .xcf file. Not sure why, but I'll try tinkering around with it. Any suggestions would be good. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:15, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 03:34, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Also blurred the stripes a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:46, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall (A) ~ For Approval
First charart, yay. Sorry if someone already did him or wanted to do him- if so, I didn't see, I apologize, and disregard this. Crits or comments? 02:11, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

You have to reserve this. Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Very nice. 02:14, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

How does one reserve something? 02:19, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Here. That should help. And rename this Birchfall.apprentice.png and make it match his warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:33, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know. I rather like this pattern, and the warrior image does not look very realistic to start with and has a bunch of random, miscolored pixels in it. Prehaps the warrior image should be redone to resemble this? 04:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. When his warrior image was up for tweaking, I kept trying to say something about the highlights, but it got approved before I could. I'll add him to the list now. 04:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, sounds good to me, I never liked his warrior image personally... XD Anyways, define the stripes on the body. Make them look more like stripes than flecks. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:10, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and smudge his pelt into the earpink. Breeze whisker  16:06, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oakstep (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:46, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely, as always! Blur the shading just a touch. <span style="">06:52, Wed, Dec, 28, 2011

Lighten the face shading. Lovely Shellheart <3  13:13, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the stripes a tad? To match his elder. Breeze whisker  16:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thornclaw (A) ~ For Approval
An opening! Did this in like... 10mins. Yes, very sloppy. I know I did say I'd never do a wavy tabby again (is this one?) but, this was the first thing I saw. Tell me if the uploading doesn't work. It comes up with Tallstar Apprentice, for soem reason. I know there is waste. <span style="">05:55, Wed, Dec, 28, 2011

Very nice! Thin out the stripes on the haunch a tiny bit. 07:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. This is wonderful! 16:01, December 28, 2011 (UTC)