Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 76

Wind (Q) ~ Approved
Finally snagged a queen :P Comments? 19:27, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink a little bit Leaf-storm,19:28,October 15,2011 (UTC)

I'll wait for a second opinion on that, since I used the ear pink color from her images. 19:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least lighting the shading on the belly. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  19:34, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the earpink, and blur the shading some more. 19:38, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a little. 23:11, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten all the shading. Add depth to the eye. 23:12, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is a lighter color pixel on the left front paw, blur the shading.  Owl   X    G    l    itt    er   4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:35, October 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded  12:10, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wind's eyes in her leader charart have a ring of orange in them, which I think makes her stand out in an interesting way. I think you should try to match that. 17:04, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''You'll have to zoom in to see it. 20:31, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The orange was on the outer part, and it was a bold orange... sorry, poking at it. 01:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the ear-pink a tad. 19:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes aren't showing yet 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why should I blur it more? I think it seems fine. 20:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, you will blur the shading more if a more experienced member tells you to. I agree. It needs to have a nice, smooth transition between the lighting planes and blurring it makes this transition looks natural. I know that you're liscensed to have your artistic creativity, but as another fellow artist, I can see that it needs blurred. 21:07, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Even though it seems I didn't blur it, I did. 23:03, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 20:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Should I make it more to the color of her ears or just darken it in general? 20:16, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's supposed to be the same as the ear pink.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:17, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes are showing. 21:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Making a small bump. 20:05, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to be the same as the ear-pink, as long as it's not a black cat or anything, which this clearly isn't. Any way, blur and lighten the shading right next to the front arm closes to use. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! [ 20:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading along her back. 20:45, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose color are the same Dark. I took the color from the middle of her ear. And I'll get to it Speckle. 20:55, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok the changes aren't showing. Shading the back is tough D: 21:19, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the tail and blur the shading. 22:31, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights aren't needed. Make the pupil skinner. 00:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be some white in the eye as well? 16:29, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll work on this soon. And there is Shadewing. 20:04, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there is a black square in her eye........Otherwise nice job! <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:27, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the shading looks too dark so that parts of the pelt looks brown. Also blur and smudge the ear pink. 00:17, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear oink and define the shading on the tail. 01:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading on this is making me angry ._. I'll live x3. 12:46, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and this will be ready. 22:16, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Safe to say I'm satisfied with the shading for once ^^. 23:01, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The eye away from us needs a white dot or summin. Otherwise I think it looks good. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 10:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)'''

Blur the ear-pink. 13:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:51, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. <span style="">00:26 Wed Oct 26

Reuploaded -- 11:26, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot what defien means x_x Sorry for the blonde moment. 20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading easier to see. =) 20:45, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:00, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the stomach near the front foot needs to be lightened please. :3 . 22:05, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and face. 10:56, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Blurred it, but it doens't look like it D: -- 12:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

It may be me, but I am kind of confused with your light source. You have the lighter shading on this side of the head <--- but on the body, you seem to have the light source coming from directly in front. O.o 22:20, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it a bit larger. 01:53, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did as you said Squirrel. I'm used to shading that way, and I used one of the shading styles to shade it. 19:11, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the belly some more? 00:16, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse ._. 11:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur it some more..

However, it looks odd to me because the light source seems to be coming at two angles. I'd say that you should move the light source on the head to our right a little. Someone can correct me if they think it looks fine. 22:20, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, i'm with you atelda, it does look odd. Rain face &lt;3 01:05, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Correct Atelda. Also lighten the shading on the belly and make it somewhat smaller. Great job! 02:05, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

You don't need to say she's correct again. Rainface already did, it's unnessesary. Blur the belly shading some more. -- 20:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Back now, and did everything else asked :3  12:21, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and brighten it. <span style="">19:54 Sat Nov 5

Also darken the shading and smudge the ear pink alot. !!!!

Reuploaded  13:05, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the face needs to be lightened. 20:21, November 7, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Actually I belive that all of the shading needs to be lightened. Very nice! 01:56, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the shading a little better. Argh, this must be an awkward color to work with... 02:11, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Will work on this soon. It is Cloud @_@  22:16, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also on the haunch, the lighter spot looks too triangular. Can you make it more round? 02:53, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Mind blurring the shading on the face and on the back, the shading needs to be blurred, and there is a part along the back near the lineart where the shading cuts off a bit. Can you make it go all way way to the lineart please? Looks amazing. :) . 04:27, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I've taken over this image. Comments? 00:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

If you use highlights, tone them down a bit. If not, tone down the shading, blend it out more. 01:27, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Try and match the color of the leader image more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:50, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:15, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the ear pink and the hightlights. Much too bright. 03:25, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think she is using highlights...Sandstorm...although I may be wrong-- Anyway, the shading on the belly near the foot is too dark...lighten it please? :) . 04:41, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/dull the highlights and lighteb the belly shading.

Define the tail shading. And who was that above?? You gotta sign. :P  20:22, November 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. I do use highlights, actually. 20:30, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading near her leg and the earpink looks off.

Re-uploaded. On which side? I did the left. And you can't just say the earpink looks "off", you need to tell me what I have to do. 21:20, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. Oh wow your physic because I was talking about the left side haha. And I think you should make it a tad smaller because now it looks like it is touching the lineart.

I like it when it covers the whole ear :3 If more people tell me to change it, I will. 21:40, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

I like the earpink filling the whole ear. Extend the tail shading, right now it looks like a darker tail tip. -- 22:49, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:45, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks very nice. :) I don't believe I can see anything wrong with it. . 19:20, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, CBA then? -- 17:16, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 17:31, November 13, 2011 (UTC)