Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Yellowfang (E) - Tweaked
I just tweaked the muzzle....OA was Thistle (who had help from 'teldy.) Comments? 01:39, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

The line should end at the edge of her mouth and should not extend below it. 01:49, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Like this? 20:58, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Shorten the mouth to end at the crease like it does on the apprentice charart. 20:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Since Twi has left PCA, any user who so wishes may take over this project. 18:55, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'll try at it... 23:18, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:33, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look any different. 14:19, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... what should I do to fix it? 14:58, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked


This is my first tweak, so just tell me if I'm doing something wrong.

So okayyy. I tweaked the shading and tried to make it more like her apprentice.

Comments? :3

15:35, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks almost like it is tinted brown... (sorry if its just my computer) Can you fix that? 15:46, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle you dork this is over the limit X3 16:01 Sat Mar 17

Yup, it is. xD Silly Thistle. Declined for now, you can repost when there's space. 18:52, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I archived something so you're good. 19:30 Sat Mar 17

The shading looks kind of green. When I did her apprentice, I tinted her shading slightly red, so that might help :) 23:16, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Upload it over the old file. 15:48, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uploaded it over the old file, but it red tinged, and not a dork anymore. Phew. 18:25, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

In Cherrypaw's talk page, although it hasn't been put in due to lack of page numbers, I velieve ger eyes were revealed to be amber? Should the eyes be changed, or wait until a cite is in? Sky Exterminate! 01:53, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

I say wait until a cite is added. If you don't mind...could you define the ear pink? 04:38, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

The light parts look tinted yellow-green. 08:33, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to define the stripes? They look very faded. Sky Exterminate! 10:02, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this thistle? 22:14, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but no. >:C I'm in Phoenix and can't work on it 'cause I don't have my tablet. Sorry. >> 16:03, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked the whiskers to be longer. I can't tweak the left whiskers because there is no more room on the image to. Comments? 22:51, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Just make the canvas bigger 23:24, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean? Aren't the whiskers at the last pixel on the image? 23:27, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

She means to increase the extra space you have. If you use GIMP or Pixlr, I believe you go to Image -> Canvas Size. 01:09, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks Leafstrike ^^ 17:50, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make them droop more. They look like sticks or something right now. 19:37, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (KP) - Redone
Original artist was Iceheart and the shading was blotchy. Comments? 17:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it? I can't tell the difference between the lineart and the base color. 19:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'd personally prefer it stay this dark. Not being able to see all of the lineart isn't the end of the world. Shrewtooth is a black cat, not dark gray. 19:55, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps blur the shading's edges? Mainly the body shading. 06:27, 22, 03, 2012

Reuploaded 04:58, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights a little on the face. Breeze whisker  17:57, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (Ki) ~ Redone
So cute ^^. Skye was suggesting for me to re-do the warrior and apprentice, so the stripes are fine. Also, don't ask about the color, it's the same hex code. :3 20:31, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. XD OA's were Rainlegs, Cloudskye, with tweaks (?) by Night shine. Redone to match warrior, but...xD 20:37, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. 01:01, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:03, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define your light source? There's a highlight on <--that side of the face, yet there is a highlight/lighter spot on that--> since side of the chest/body. Sorry if that didn't make sense o3o 01:32, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink more grayish and less bright pink? 09:06, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the earpink a bit? 19:40, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Moss (Lo) (KP) ~ Redone
Here's Moss :D. OA was Ashshadow. er shading was blurry and the highligths were too bright. Like her Warriors merchandise collar? 23:34, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lol, nice product placement. Define the earpink? 23:37, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the light source? Define and fix the light source, as there's a "highlight" on the shoulder, but a shaded area on the flank. Also, Blur the shading, and make the nose black. -- 23:39, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's in there Shelly. Changes aren't showing. 23:44, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

She looks derp eyed. Fix that? XD Sky Exterminate! 01:26, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Going along with Skt, can you move the eye-highlight to match the body highlights? C: 01:40, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:35, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch and shoulder highlight? 13:31, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Ripplestar (Le) - Redone
Meh... I was trying not to have him look so much like a tortie and try to copy Mounty's idea for Tallstar, but it didn't quite go that way.... :-/ OA was Echomist with a tweak by Iceheart. Comments? 22:48, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading c: Lovely! 23:40, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

And give him a dark grey nose. 23:46, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:47, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the black look a little brown? If it's just me, ignore this xp 18:12, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

When I was getting colors, I used this as a reference. I think it looks alright. 02:01, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

I think the pelt colors look too blurred together. Could you define them? Breeze whisker  17:54, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (W) ~ Redone
He had triangle stripes. OA's are Bracken- and Rainlegs. Skt Dalek Caan 00:07, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Epic Sky 8D lighten the stripes. 00:14 Fri Mar 23

Re-uploaded. Thanks, I wasn't quite sure how this would turn out. xP Skt Dalek Caan 00:26, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 01:24, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, Wild. Although, it could be blurred... 01:29, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm trying darker shading out, but I blurred it. Skt Dalek Caan 02:32, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Round the ear pink out a little, and blur shading ^^ 03:27, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shade of brown used for both the stripes and main pelt color could be lightened some. My own cat is a light brown tabby and is lighter than this. 17:29, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I despised the classic tabbiness, so I went with a ticked tabby instead. XD Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 07:01, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! Can you define the shading? 13:32, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbittail (W) ~ Redone
Um....fail on the tail, ew. OA ish Nightfall101. Skt Dalek Caan 00:40, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadeed. Didn't liek the shading, so I blurred it more. Skt Dalek Caan 00:47, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Looks much better, Trolly. 00:52, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined earpink is defined. Skt Dalek Caan 00:59, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpinjk more pinky. Lovelty 8D  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 12:47, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwhisker (E) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow. I took over for Bloo since she left the Wiki. I played around with this a bit to make it more realistic, and upon searching for a real brown and white gray cat, I came upon a [http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_HC_iJORcmts/TGQ_yjc8BSI/AAAAAAAABNk/vYgmndHUBcc/s1600/dandeliontail.png ticked, modified tortie almost. ] The only thing I don't like about this is the patchy fur. Comments for improvement? 18:05, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and I almost forgot, there was overwhelming support for Bloo to redo this. If you really want to get technical, I can bring this to a vote on the tweak page, but do we honestly need to do that? Three people already said yes, I believe. 18:10, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the patches a little less purple and, in lieu of having an outline, just smudge them lin the same pattern? 18:35, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 19:08, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Could you also put more shades of grey or brown in it? That would make it look more realistic. Breeze whisker  17:52, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add 2-3 more patches? :3 08:17, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Stick (Cat) (W) - Redone
Original artist was Goldenpaw, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 18:09, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you defin the tail and haunch shading a tad? Nicely done as always :) 18:11, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the ear and erase the two single pixels that point out. (If you know what I mean). 00:12, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, too~ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  04:42, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:55, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 07:04, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred as much as I could. 17:13, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (A) - Redone
OAs were *Ivypool*, Icethroat, and Mountain. She needed to match her redone look, and I'm tired of it sitting around and not matching :P I guess I'm the only one brave enough to try to match Mountain's awesomeness? Anyway, comments for improvement? 18:38, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading/light source on the face. :3 00:14, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink some. 01:20, 24, 03, 2012

I didn't make the warrior, Stoney did XD Define her dapples a little more. Lovely Ivy <33 06:47 Sat Mar 24

Define the tail shading~ (If it's there xP) Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  14:07, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (Ki) - Redone
OA is Mossleap, and it needed to match the other images. 23:26, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 13:25, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:43, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Frostclaw (KP) ~ Redone
OA was Moonflight, and it had some issues with the shading. 00:04, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 83 Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 09:59, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:01, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose lighter, it looks too dark for a white cat. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:18, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Where does it say that the nose color has to be a lighter pink? I thought it was artist's choice. Whatever. _-_ 19:44, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a tad moar? :3 23:03, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:39, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Flametail (A) - Redone
Hooray, space! Bleh, I'm not quite happy with this one, but..... Meh. OA was Snowfeather1 with a tweak by Cloudy then a redo by Scarlet. He was a triangle tabby. Comments? 00:05, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Umm I think you forgot the earpink...if you didn't then make it more visible. 00:49, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't forget it. It's nearly impossible to get the earpink right on these darn gingers without it looking neon. I personally think it's fine, but if others agree, I'll attempt to change it. 05:43, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 11:56, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Um he's just a ginger tom... but for the earpink maybe fill in the one closest to us a little more. 14:54, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the pale belly a bit. 15:49, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Ok I'll do all those things, but Wildfire, what do you mean by "He's just a ginger tom" how is this not a ginger tom? And also, we've decided that he's bright dark ginger too. 19:30, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think Wild might be referring to the fact he's got a pale belly... But, I do believe that's artist's choice, if memory serves. 13:57, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Ki) ~ Redone
She needed to match her amazing apprentice image...the OA was Nightshine, with a redo by Skye. (What's scary is I could recite that without checking the file history. xD) 03:32, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that neck shading. (Stalker. XD) Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 14:09, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is epic, Rainy. 8DDD 15:48, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:36, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Palefoot (W) - Redone
OA was Rainbreath with a redo by me. Redone mostly because I didn't like to stripes. Classic tabby fail. 15:29, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink and (maybe) blur the stripes? 08:20, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Mitzi (KP) - Redone
Original artist was Hawktalon. Redone because unrealistic stripes and in my opnion didn't look like a tortoiseshell. Comments? Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 13:55, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the ear pink? If it's there, define it please. 13:59, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (D) - Redone
Its isn't something extra...needed to match elder...OA is Bracken-. ,19:54,March 26,2012 (UTC)