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Warrior blanks ~ For Approval
19:15, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Love these! The head looks a bit off though. Sorry if you don't understand this but it's hard to explain: Try connecting the <-- line from the head to the body. Then make the <-- side of the muzzle curve upward a bit and the chin protrude from that line. Basically shapen the muzzle/face a little more. Here's a red line

19:33, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Obligatory redline from me. —​​​

The short-haired’s tail is very uneven and almost looks crooked. Please make the entire tail even and smooth. 20:00, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Longhair's back foot is a little chubby, and the noses should be expanded in size a tad *looks at cat for reference*Potato=) (talk) 20:27, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. will update longhair shortly, can't now because my latop is about to die and i don't feel like walking to get the charger.

20:31, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

There are some random lines on the shorthair's head that don't make sense, and there's waste outside --> this ear on said blankPotato=) (talk) 21:41, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you specify which lines? Not sure if you are heading about the whiskers over the eyes. It's a preference of mine but i can remove them if necessary.

22:13, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

The lines coming off the ears. I can send a perfect screenie if needed. Now on to homework lolPotato=) (talk) 22:33, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Those are whiskers. —

(Apologies for double comment; just got on my pc LOL) Here's a redline for the face. I don't necessarily think the perspective would change the level of the eyes, and I think they should be leveled out to be on the same line. Also, the muzzle needs to be a bit more rounded ish? Something like this maybe. When sketching cat heads, this is always what I do so maybe that'll help level out the head. —

Minor, but could you add a line on the shorthair going down the chest to represent the little floof of hair on the center of their chest.

22:51, January 27, 2019 (UTC) Re-uploaded. happier with the long hairs fur now.

00:23, January 28, 2019 (UTC) Make them a bit bigger.

00:28, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Can you align the line for the right cheek down closer to the nose? —

Re-uploaded. noticed the back didn't match.

00:31, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. tweaking the longhair shortly.

00:53, January 28, 2019 (UTC) Is it just me or is the short haired's linear art too thick?

Yeah the lineart should only be about 2 pixels thick i believe ​​​​ 01:34, 01/28/2019

I don't think there's a specific ruling for lineart thickness, but compared to the longhairs fluff it may look thicker. I personally think it's fine tho. —

Just me, but it looks like the shorthair is larger?? Malina457 (talk) 03:33, January 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

The shorthair is larger, I haven't updated the longhair's size yet.

04:25, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

The thickness should be consistent across the long haired and the short haired, at least. I still think the short haired linear art is too thick.

Re-uploaded. that was a nightmare... all the lineart or are there any particular spots that are too thick?

05:22, January 28, 2019 (UTC) Re-uploaded. found a few spots i thought i had fixed on the shorthair.

05:31, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

dunno how to exacty word it but the muzzle looks too centered for the angle of the face. something's just a bit off about it. 09:16, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps shorten/erase the muzzle lines to make the style more consistent with the other blanks? Also, I think the linear art is too thick on the short haired, especially on the back.

I feel like adding a shoulder on each blank would be beneficial. The backs seem kind of flat without them. 14:13, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Here's a reference for the muzzle. I think it's fine to have them stylized like what Patch is going for. Our blanks have a wide variety of styles and the StarClan blanks had the same issue of "match the blank styles" and in the end that got overruled. I think they just need some anatomy fixes but the style is fine. —

Re-uploaded.

02:05, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again.

03:32, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Can you align the right cheek line down to the nose? Looking good.

these are look amazing! the only thing i see is that the 'catbrows' make them look a bit angry, could you fix that?

12:36, January 29, 2019 (UTC) Re-uploaded. I can't tell if they still look angry, but hopefully this is better.

15:55, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

The shorthairs tail could be thinned a bit. looks too chub to me for a tail 17:44, 01/29/2019

Re-uploaded.

18:01, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

I'm now asking this for a 5th time since my comment on this seems to keep getting ignored: can you please move the line that indicates the --> cheek down to align with the nose? —

Re-uploaded. looking back at your comments; didn't see it the first time, second time i misunderstood what you meant, i'm sorry if it seemed like i was ignoring you. Is this what you meant?

21:34, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

All good o/ This is what I mean, cheeks on a cat generally start protruding after the nose, kinda like this guy. (Though he is a bit chubby) —

They still look angry, change the position of the head whiskersPotato=) (talk) 22:56, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

The head whiskers are honestly fine... I'm not sure why the expression seems to be an issue. ​​​​​

Re-uploaded. ah ok i see i was being stupid, don't mind me lmao.

01:06, January 30, 2019 (UTC)

This is super nitpicky, but maybe fill in the space between the hind foot and the shoulder to front arm in with white? Only since there should be acknowledgement to the other haunch and foot that we can't see, but I don't know if that's 100% necessary. —

The line for the shoulder should be able to connect to the elbow, if that makes any sense - or the elbow should curve outwards. Also, the fluff on the haunch starting there protruding looks somewhat off on the longhair. Could you maybe add some tufts of fur above? 08:50, January 30, 2019 (UTC)

The muzzles still seem a bit off... I'm unsure if it's a neglect of a perspective but it keeps not looking right to me. It may be easier if you center the face rather than having them facing away, since the way it looks right now, it's as if you drew the muzzle in the center of the face, moved it over, then added lines to connect it to the side of the face, is the only way I can describe it bluntly. —

could yo make it so that the fur on the long haired blank's back doesn't appear so... suddenly? like maybe have a more visible transition 10:38, January 30, 2019 (UTC)

I fixed these problems but i don't know if I'll be able to reupload today because my laptop is being annoying. I didn't touch the muzzles though, I'd rather not mess with them anymore then i have. Call me bias for working on the blank, but i really dont see it necessary and think they look fine.

16:15, January 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think the muzzles are fine as they are. These blanks are beautiful I can’t wait to use them! 16:20, 01/30/2019

Sorry, but I agree with Echo about the muzzle. The perspective seems incorrect and they still look a tad off. 16:18, January 30, 2019 (UTC)

Not to be nitpicky, but these are the warrior blanks. We're going to be making over 600 images with them. The muzzle may look fine to you and its "unnecessary" to change them, but these images are literally going to become wwiki's staple and that's why I've been so particular with your anatomy. I've studied cat anatomy for years and I'm trying to use my knowledge to help you since this blank is literally going to become wwiki's namesake, just as the last blanks were. Everh critique is necessary. —

I'm quite aware of that, but I don't agree with you on the muzzle and I would appreciate a few more opinions on it.

18:15, January 30, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to quickly slip in to state that I agree with Echo on the muzzles, and that i also think the ear lineart could use a tad smoothing while i'm at it. SquidwardPlays 18:35, January 30, 2019 (UTC)

To add onto my critique, you blanks have their face at a 3/4ths position, meaning the right cheek and eyes will be more defined than the left eye and cheeks. Here's a redline of a real life example of a cat at that angle. The face should flow together, not in a perfect circle, and I think the face shape, eyes and muzzle are whats throwing off the perspective and proportions. —

hmm. it was always meant to be somewhat offcenter, from the first sketches I'd had. not negating anything just pointing out the concept for this, and it's changed a lot since those early stages, but y'know

I think the position of the head shouldn't be changed (it should still face away from the center because that's part of the pose), but the muzzle could use some tweaking.

Re-uploaded.

19:15, January 31, 2019 (UTC)

The muzzles are still off. Echo provided a redline earlier, can you follow that one? The muzzle lines seem really flat when they should be more rounded for a lack of better words. 05:06, February 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Messed around with the muzzle, it looks odd whenever i alter it too much, hope this is good. Also changed a few things on the longhair's tail.

14:35, February 1, 2019 (UTC)

extremely minor, but could you make it so that the whiskers protrude from the middle of the muzzle and not from the edge? 05:10, February 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

15:20, February 2, 2019 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the lineart thicker in the ears? 17:18, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

And with the right ear on the longhair, it looks like some of the ear lineart extends past the head. Can you get rid of that? 17:19, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe give me a screenshot of the spot on the ear? I don't see any lineart going past the head.

17:29, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go. Is that on purpose? 17:32, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

00:45, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the inner ear lineart? 01:27, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

05:54, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

could you make the short haired tail lie flat instead? 04:02, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

i agree w burnt ^^ to keep consistent with the longhair 04:49, 02/5/2019

Not sure if this is just me but does the long-haired's leg seem a bit too thick?

Pretty much all the critiques I have are to do with the anatomy and perspective. I found two refs, one for the body and one for the head, which seem to match very closely to this pose. I made a redline (rainbowline) here. Here's the explanations for each color:

Red: This kind of goes against some of the critique you've already gotten, but the shoulders are way too defined. Especially in poses like this, you can just barely make out where they are. Shoulder that are too defined tend to look attached on like a toy rather than being part of the body. If you remove the lines marked in red, that should help a ton.

Dark blue: The back should arc a lot more in this kind of sitting position. The original warrior had the same issue, so it'd be really nice to fix it in this version. And if you look at the area above the shoulders, the flatness there before it starts curving also helps give the shoulders form without making them look attached on.

Light blue: Similar to the shoulders, the haunch is a bit too defined. It also seems like it's behind the front leg nearest to us, which seems rather odd for this kind of pose. Might seem more natural to move it in front of the front leg instead.

Yellow: Usually you can't easily make out a clear chest area dividing the two front legs, but if you choose to keep that line, it definitely needs to be moved up higher. I tried to mark where that chest area is on the ref, but it kind of blended in, you might have to zoom in close to see it.

Orange: The muzzle is a bit small right now and doesn't seem to follow the form of the face. If you make the --> lip a good bit wider that should help, and maybe also make the <-- lip just a tiny bit wider too? I marked it on the ref so you can see how the form kind of wraps around the face.

Dark green: It seems like the head's tilted ever so slightly downwards, not up, so the jaw seems to big right now and like it's jutting out. This differs a bit from the ref since the ref is looking up a bit.

Pink: This is very minor but maybe increase the size of the nose by 1-2 pixels? It's a bit small right now, and will seem even more so if you change the muzzle.

Light green: The perspective is off on the <-- eye, if you look at the ref it's almost all the way to the cheek, with hardly any space between.

Purple: The <-- ear needs to be moved up so that the top lines up with the other ear. The perspective of the head being slightly turned wouldn't make the ear move down much. However the perspective does make that ear thinner than --> one, so maybe thin it out a bit.

Sorry for the wall of text. Message me in discord if anything's unclear.

Re-uploaded. longhair will be tweaked shortly.

21:00, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I love these so much ahhh. the shorthairs tail needs to be thinned again though, but these are getting so close feel it 21:39, 02/5/2019

Round out the muzzle a bit more. —

Re-uploaded. I'd rather not touch the muzzles, I did use a reference for them.

04:30, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

That looks great! The muzzle looks fine, definitely doesn't need to be rounded more. Cat lips are ovals. Maybe lengthen the shorthair tail just a pinch, and remove the little top shoulder line on the back and replace it with a more flattened area in the spot of the back (like the body ref I linked before). Having the line makes them look like they're protruding out of the body a bit, which tends to only happen if the cat is crouching or leaning their head down, not usually when sitting.

Could you make the long haired's leg a bit more.. narrow? on the short haired one it seems like it curves in but it looks a little off on the long-haired (idk how to word myself)

Re-uploaded. I see what you mean. The longhairs didn't curve in because the fur on the tail was blocking it off. I altered it a tiny bit so hopefully that looks better.

17:29, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

the head looks... like it is farther away from us than the body, and it looks uncomfortable. Is that how it is ment to be? ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:57, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Cats do have fairly small heads, i think they're fine. And I want to avoid resizing anything because that's terrible.

20:40, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm is it just me or is the arc on the back different between the longhair and the shorthair? I'm not able rn to check them in an art program to look closer and see, so if I'm just seeing differences that are caused by the fluff you can ignore me.

This is probably controversial, but how does it look if you remove the cheek circles? Just have the lines for the mouth and maaaybe the lines down to the eyes. The face seems kinda crowded with all that lineart as is. 11:53 Thu Feb 7 2019

Re-uploaded. does this look better? i removed the dots by the eyes too because they looked off to me. Also matched the line art on the backs.

16:17, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Wall of text round 2. Ok I'm gonna go into hyper nitpick mode right now, but I think that's probably a good idea since these will be the most used blanks on the wiki. The majority of these suggestions are entirely optional.

The front paws a just a little flat, maybe round them and make them like 1-2px taller? And I know the <-- cheek is wider on the longhair purely because of fluff, but since it's such a big difference in size it kind of makes the lh and sh seem like they're looking in different directions. Either widening the sh's <-- cheek slightly or shrinking the lh's should fix it. The fluff lineart on the --> cheek of the lh also seems to be a bit messy, with a bunch of seemingly random pixels (both black and white) that don't seem to follow the form of the fur clumps. Also, this spot on the sh tail looks a bit thicker than the rest of the tail.

The next few things are pretty much all related to the longhairs, here's a redline circling the areas I'm talking about so it's easier to understand. So the fluff on the far shoulder, haunch, and lower half of the tail (the half closer to the tail tip), have a bit of a different style, with more lines and thinner thickness. The lines I circled in dark blue have a really great style/line quality, so maybe you could try making the other areas more similar by removing some lines and thickening them? The fluff I circled in orange looks as if it's cutting into the leg right now rather than fluffing out of it. You could probably just remove those lines entirely since the leg closer to use doesn't have it, but if you keep it maybe make it puff out like the fluff above it. Circled in light blue, the line for the toe on the hind foot is just a tiny bit long, could be chopped off by a few pixels. There's also this transparent/waste area circled in green between the hind foot and the tail. On the haunch circled in red there's this little cut out area that makes it look a bit jagged. The other red circles are the most nitpicky of all, there's a single white pixel between the two legs that looks a little off and could probably be filled in. There's also two spots near the face where there's closed off areas that won't be reached by the magic wand tool, and those have a tendency to end up with waste in them very frequently (like between the original leaders' front paws). The one caused by the whisker can probably be fixed by just chopping that whisker shorter, since it is actually longer than the others. You might end up with one of those types of areas by fixing the sh tail depending on how you do it, but that's fine, I just wanted to point out those spots where it wasn't actually necessary for them to be closed off.

And finally, this is absolutely a stylistic thing and just a matter of preference so feel free to ignore it, but I feel like the nose lines would look better if they didn't fully connect to the eyes, and instead stopped a couple pixels away like this. It just makes the face look a bit... softer I guess?

Sorry for being so fussy, but man with nearly 700 images needing to use these it's probably best to make sure all the little things get dealt with.

Re-uploaded.

21:33, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

gonna do some nipicking on the eyes. and I still think the end of the sh tail could be thinned a tiny bit, so it tapers slightly. and the toelines on the front feet should curve a little 21:56, 02/8/2019

Some lines intersect each other on the face. Also, completely optional, but is there any way you could make the neck more visible? 22:13, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

You might make the long fur, especially on the tail a bit more "flowy." You could achieve this by reducing some of the lines on the tail and rework them so they're more horizontal and wavy. That way, the tail looks less like a scared kitty bottle brush. If you want me to try to redline what I mean I can. 23:20 Fri Feb 8 2019

Re-uploaded.

00:29, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

The shape of the fur looks much better now, but could you thicken the lines to the thickness they were in the previous upload? That thickness looked really good imo.

Can you even out the toes? And also, as Icy mentioned, they don't seem to have a neck. They look like they're sort of hunkered down, could you maybe make them stand a bit taller? These are the warriors after all, and I feel like the previous blanks had a more dignified feeling to them whereas these cats are just. Sitting. —

Re-uploaded. 06:08, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

These are looking so good! They’ll be ready right away. The lines at the top of the head look a bit wild and harsh, could you somehow rework those? Here is a redline. http://tinypic.com/r/2j269ec/9 06:20, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Once again, can you try and make the neck look more visible? 06:25, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

On just the long hair or both? 06:36, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

I disagree with lengthening the necks any further. They're going to look unnatural if they get any longer.

Also, some pixel-sized nitpicks on the shorthair to smooth out some uneven and jagged areas, all optional. Red = remove pixel, blue = add (probably gonna have to zoom in to see them, sorry I should have made the color more visible). Here's a little spot on the longhair too.

Re-uploaded. I tried making the necks more obvious, but now I'm not sure about them. Also, thanks Winter <3 i couldn't see the redline you gave me, but I altered the fur on the head. Does that look better? 16:36, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, it does!! Sorry about the redline :( 17:16, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Oh there was one other small thing I was wondering if you could change. The lineart on the ears looks a bit.....idk how to describe it. Not bad! I just think it would look better less connected. It’s hard to explain what I mean so I made some quick changes myself that I can show you on Discord. Just a few alterations of the lines of the ears and face. :) 22:28, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I reconnected the one nose line to the eye because it looks better to me that way. If anyone disagrees i can remove it. 00:43, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. made the ears a little smaller. 01:44, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

im definitely not an anatomy expert, but should a cat's tail be able to bend so sharply, especially on the short hair image? i feel like a more natural and comfortable pose would be for the tail to bend ever so slightly like in this image. of course like i said i suck at anatomy so if you own a cat and see it doing that all the time ignore me lol 03:34, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

On the longhair, it's kind of hard to see where the chest floof ends and the ---> front leg begins. Could you pull the chest lineart between the two front legs to the right a bit, like it is in the shorthair image? Eggheart (talk) 03:46, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not 100% sure, but it looks like the tail only appears sharply curved because of the perspective, doesn't seem like it's actually bending at that angle (though maybe that was the intention? in which case maybe yeah it could be tweaked). I think it's fine personally.

i see what you mean by the perspective after looking at it. im just pointing out that at first glance, it looks more as if the tail is sharply curving rather than it looking like that because of the perspective– notably on the short haired version 09:23, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

It appears that way because of the perspective. I would prefer not to change it, but If I could get a few more opinions on it, I'd appreciate it. 18:12, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Burnt. 22:58, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to agree with Patch and Paleh on this one; I'm looking at images and seeing almost the exact same thing that Patch has here. I think perhaps we should leave it up to her? ​

I agree that the tail is fine 23:15, 02/10/2019

Re-uploaded. updated the longhair's chest fluff. I'm going to leave the tail as is. 01:34, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think these are awesome!! I'm no art expert but I think the chin looks a little off, maybe disconnect it from the mouth line?

Chin looks fine imo 14:41 Tue Feb 12 2019

I still think they need a defined neck. —

Honestly, the neck looks fine (when compared to reference photos in the same pose) 23:00 Tue Feb 12 2019

Would it be possible to make the ears less pointy? If not that's totally cool. It might just be my personal preference. 23:07, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Necks here. And here, here, here, here. Please add a defined neck because right now it just seems like it is attached to the chest. 23:26, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

And also perhaps rounden the eyes a bit and smooth the mouth lineart. 23:30, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

None of the photos you provided are helpful. Those cats aren't in the same positions as what I have here. I believe the necks are fine and I am not changing them. There is also nothing wrong with the eyes, they are similar to some of our other blanks already and I also see no problem in the mouth. I'm not changing them. 23:42, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

the necks are perfectly fine. the eyes and mouth are fine too. I know these are the warrior blanks but this is getting way too nitpicky 00:04, 02/13/2019

But their heads are in the same position. As I said, it really looks like the chest is connecting them and nothing else which is... incorrect. You are completely welcome to call me nitpicky, but even as said, these are the warrior blanks with over 600 images. Did you use a reference photo for this by any chance? Also, a lot of cats have descriptions about their neck (Lionblaze having chest fluff around his neck and not his chest and Mapleshade as well.) Not their chest. So where would that go? 00:15, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

I gotta agree with Ferk, the neck looks fine, that whole part there is mostly shoulder. 00:18, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Again, the head is connected to the body with a neck. Right now, it looks like it is connected with the shoulder/back. Here's something that can help what I am trying to say. 00:22, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, hold up guys. Both suggestions (leaving the neck alone and also making it more visible) have references, but I'm definitely not a huge fan of how this change seems to be forced on Patch. She's expressed a very clear view in that she does not want to change them, and she's had references to back this up, with what Ferk is linking. We appear to be disregarding artist's choice, especially when there are references to support Patch leaving the necks how they are. Patch has also asked Max (Diablo) what they think, so I think all comments about the neck and whether or not it should be there should cease until Max is able to provide their input. I would much rather this not escalate into any form of arguments, especially because this is an important blank on the wiki.

No disrespect, but why is Max's input now being prioritized over me and Icy's critiques? —

I am not changing the necks. I don't care if you like it or not, I'm leaving them and I would appreciate it if you stopped pushing me to change it. 00:33, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

I never once said that, Echo. Please do not put words into my mouth. One of the complaints this project has is that people don't get time to comment. Me asking people to stop forcing things upon Patch so someone else can actually comment isn't prioritizing anyone's opinion. It's me making sure everyone is being heard. There is nothing wrong with asking for other opinions.

I am not pushing you, and I apologize if it is coming off that way. However, I do not think you should brush off all critique by saying that you do not care about people liking it or not, because that is the entire point of the blanks, and to me, it sounds rude and disrespectful that other's opinions do not seem to matter. However, if this is completely wrong and I am misunderstanding it, please feel free to tell me. I am not intending on starting any arguments. I am simply critiquing and if you do not want to do so, then fine. 00:41, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks Jayce + Patch for letting me jump in with some stuff!

First up, I referred to my own references, tried to track down the original reference for these blanks, and also referred to the ones that Paleh linked. this is what I managed to put together using what I could; but again, patch this is what I think but you're free to knock back any of it. 01:32 Wed Feb 13 2019

Neck looks fine imo. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6. Cats sitting, especially in a fluffy, drawn-in, "I'm cold" pose can practically make their necks disappear. Also, its heavily dependent on their body types: these cats look more cobby so they're not going to have super-skinny features. Personally, I think these blanks are looking wonderful. The only thing I really see on them is maybe moving the toes on the closest front paw to the left a little bit. 2:27 Wed Feb 13 2019

Rose (TS) (KP) - For Approval
who else but me. i was gonna do a rose charm but just did a velvet ribbon for a collar instead SquidwardPlays 00:17, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Where's the pupil in --> this eyePotato=) (talk) 00:52, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Also found some waste ouside the outstretched front legPotato=) (talk) 00:53, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

And define eye depth while you're at it Squidward, sorry for bombarding you with critiquePotato=) (talk) 01:20, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking away from the lineart just above where the tail meets the body (topside) and on the back. I also think the shading in < ear could be defined

Reups Also potato the pupil is in that eye there's not that much space with the color aswell. don't know if i actually got the waste <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:41, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue, define light on collar, define eye depth again and sry for being the nitpickiest nitpicker but make a small line for the pupil in said eye, it looks, idk, odd without the pupilPotato=) (talk) 22:45, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not messing with the pupil in that eye. It is there and it is fine that way, i'm sorry Potato, and that pawpad is filled. i'll reups later. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:48, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:52, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

The face shading needs to be defined and there seems to be waste by the face.

Also waste around the ears, back, and legsPotato=) (talk) 01:09, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:53, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

With current source, wouldn’t be any shading on the top of the haunch, and also would have light on the > side of the most visible shoulder. There’s a little shading leaking away from the lineart just beside the ribbon, and could you also brighten the eyes a touch, or at least the eye shine parts?

I'll reup probably tomorrow, im redoing her because it's getting to hard to work. she is all on one layer as she is rn because of a layer mess up, itll be easier if i just redid it <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 23:58, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Just gonna jump in here to see if you're still working on this as well?

Snowdrop (KP) - For Approval
Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:20, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Snooth the shading on the haunch and belly <span style="">00:28, 02/5/2019

Define the eye depth and the shading on the ears. 02:57, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:02, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the body and define the light on the legsPotato=) (talk) 00:09, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

re-ups 'n stuff Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 02:14, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

with the light source you have, the light on the legs should be on top, not coming from below 08:33 Wed Feb 6 2019

re-uploaded Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 03:18, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the two back legs and paws, and the front leg? Also, please define the shading on the collar and face + tongue. :) 01:31, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light on the two back paw pads Eggheart (talk) 19:39, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, Dark?

Mitzi(KP)~ For Approval
Ive had this for a bit, I was just waiting for Dawncloud to be done! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:26, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is great! But could you define light on the collar as it's dark and sort of hard to see, whiten the white except for the face as it looks rather gray and add a bit of the base above the nose and between the eyes? Since she has a manga image and it has that bit of the base in the place it'd probably be good to have it here. You're getting good! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:35, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Also, waste at base of the tail, both hindpaws, the outstretched forepaw, muzzle and both ears. I can't send screens in but if nobody else does I can later <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:37, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I dont see waste, and on my first upload, there wil ost likely be no waste. I do a waste check evry time, and I make absolute shure evry 3 times. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:46, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

[https://imgur.com/a/PJ38A8Q%7CHere's reference for the waste. It is there.] <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 19:03, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add another layer of shading to add some depth to the image? Very nice job Owl <span style="">19:10, 02/5/2019

Oh and as beautiful as this collar is, it has to match File:Mitzi.RP.png her manga collar. pls use this collar for another kittypet I love it so much <span style="">19:24, 02/5/2019

Re-up, Rip collar. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:45, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I liked the collar too, oh well. But the white hasn't been whitened at all. It's still very gray. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:46, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

The waste at the base of the tail is still there, btw, just checked. https://imgur.com/a/u4SZlQC <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:48, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, it is the shading making the white look gray. now I get the pain of white cats. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:01, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Looking good ^^. but don't forget to extend the stripe of the base on the face to reach the muzzle, there is on the queen you're matching. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:04, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

oh, you before said to have the base color between the eyes, but I set my base color to the white... oops! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:11, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

That's my bad then, I worded it wrongly. I was refrring to the red color as the base not thinking about what you might've used for the base. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:13, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, its okay. We all do that sometimes! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:15, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Patches are a bit overblurred, compared to the alt queen in the set

I agree, the patches should be more rough and three toned. The colors don't seem to match the image that was pointed out. 20:58, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is great Owlbite, but the pupils are brown, make them black or white (your choice dear friend), and define the light on the collar, and yes there's some waste outside the top of the collar, and unfilled pixels near the latter, still this is good dear friendPotato=) (talk) 22:56, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

what unfilled pixels? and the puipls are artists choice, I vave had them on all my art. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:48, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Between the collar and ear, do you want a screenie?Potato=) (talk) 00:10, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

I see them, they are not unfilled pixels. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:23, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Would you like an unshaded screenshot of Mitzi's old image? I made it and would happily provide you with the correct colors should you need them. ​​​​​

yes please. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 01:48, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go. I realize the ear pink is hard to see, so the hex color for that is #EC7676. ​​​​

Re-up, this is cute! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 03:49, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

maybe sharpen the shading on the face just a smidge? this is adorable owl! 08:36 Wed Feb 6 2019

Re-up, the face is gray!!! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 17:12, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the face is no longer so gray. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:22, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Face should be whitened a bit, pupils are still brown, and the nosepink should match the color of the earpink, paw pads, and tonguePotato=) (talk) 22:55, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Tongue doesn’t have to match. I have a black cat and his tongue is super pink, and his paw pads, nose, and ears are black. So nosepink is fine <span style="">23:03, 02/6/2019

I never match my nosepink to my earpink or anything like that, I don't think it's necessary. — ♡ <span style title="If you can believe,">you're such  <span style="style" title="you&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' re such a dream to me." data-rte-attribs=" style title=you're such a dream to me."&gt;a dream to me. 23:43, 2/06/2019 ​

like I said before, the eye is artists choice, and it is in all my work. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:03, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on both of the back feet and the shading in the ear. Define the lightsource on the center of the body too maybe? I'm having trouble judging where it is coming from, might just be me though so a second opinion here would be good. Smooth out the shading on the belly/flank.

01:20, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I just re-did the shading, I didnt realy like it before, and i think it is sort of cute now! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 03:27, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Whiten the paws again, the tinted shading looks much nicer! <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:49, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Derfine light on the ear furthest from us? this is cute! --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    12:58, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Colors are off from the alt. queen - the darker brown is noticeably lighter on this in comparison. If it's due to highlights or whatnot, shrink those some to allow for the base to show

sorry if I cant re-up for a bit, I lost the pen tip for my drawing tablet pen, and i cant find the replacements. (dont ask how I manage to do that.) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 05:40, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, when I could draw aigain, a cryed of joy! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:40, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paw closest to us, along with both back paws, it looks like there's a layer of shading over them. Define the shading depth on the arm closest to us and smooth the edges of the overall shading so it appears more gradient. 18:04, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I hope this is good. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:54, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Light should be defined more on the legs, they needn't be covered in shadow.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:24, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, adding more light is hard, so sorry if it dosnt show up. If i add much more, it will end up looking white. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:01, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Mitzi (KP).kittypet.png, not what you currently have, Owl. The template won't work if the file names aren't what we have. ​​​

Did it, and Ill re-up for waste soon, even tho I just made sure there was no waste... somehow it got through. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:54, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, IDK what happened, but in the art thee wasnt waste, butn this it said there was. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 06:07, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Add light on the paws; they look almost solidly purple, and the difference between shaded/unshaded areas should be more visible

Re-up, this is the best you will get. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:11, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

There's no differences between the last two uploads. Did you perhaps grab the wrong save to upload or whatnot?

Re-up, yes I did. wow. Noe it is better tho! <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 21:05, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite, though the tongue needs some shading, and out of my interest is the paw pad closest to the tongue filled in?--Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:13, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

It is filled in. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:55, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, good now. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 02:58, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Jake (Alt Ro) - For Approval
just gonna finish off jake's family tree alt set now, everything fro my loner alt <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:55, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the (for lack of a better word) extremities? Like, tail, legs, whatnot? I'm not really seeing any light there. ​​​​​

Reups Is it better or should i define more <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:42, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tail and front legs look good, but I'm not quite seeing much light still on the back legs. Particularly on the cream. 03:36, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch seems really stark compared to the rest, can you lighten it a bit? This is gorgeous <3 —

Waste everwhere around the imagePotato=) (talk) 02:38, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be more light on the face Eggheart (talk) 00:23, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

will reup very soon, im just gonna redo the shading i dont really like it <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:41, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:06, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Waste near the bootyPotato=) (talk) 00:06, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm for lack of better words to describe it, the shading on the > of the flank and top of the haunch is lighter than the rest, which looks a little inconsistent imo. Can you also define the shading/light difference on the tail?

Still working, Squid?

Yeah I'm still working I'll try to re-up as soon as possible on both Jake and Rose I've just been low on motivation lately so it's been hard to charart but I'll try to at least re-up jake today idk when I'll be reupping rose bc I'm redoing her though <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 13:09, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt A) - For Approval
The alternate depiction of Squirrelpaw in Graystripe's Adventure. - Lesbian Disaster

Define/add the shading. 22:36, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

You have this named as File:GA.Squirrelflight.apprentice.alt.png. It's supposed to be File:Squirrelflight.apprentice.alt2.png, so you'll have to rename it, and also, please add pupil to both eyes and fill the nose. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:39, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Not bad for an image! First of all, as Bluestar said, this needs some shading. Define the eye depth.Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:53, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Potato please don’t repeat comments, I guess it takes up space and just restates what’s already been said. It’s not a huge deal, though. Thanks! :) 23:20, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink a little bit more. :) Nice job! 23:21, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Renamed the file for you, upload it as File:Squirrelflight.apprentice.alt2.png onward. 00:48, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry Winter! Make the paler parts cream.Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:37, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

the pale parts should be fine, they look like they got colorpicked off the manga <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:40, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the nose? --

Same thing Silverfur, please don’t repeat comments. :P But I understand it was probably a mistake and that you just didn’t see Squidward's comment. No big deal. Just remember for next time! :) 06:14, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Oops, I was looking out and didnt see their comment. I apologise! --

Please upload this under the name File:Squirrelflight.apprentice.alt2.png. And remember to post "Re-uploaded" after you upload a new version of it so people are aware you've made differences (and that way you won't get lost looking at a bunch of comments in case you don't remember where you last uploaded) also remember to not align your images^^ Smooth the shading out on this. 16:52, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Oof sorry! Re-Uploaded! 16:56, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

It's no problem, everyone makes mistakes. Add some shading to the ears as well and define it on the face. 17:01, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, and the shading looks unnatural and flat. Try running the dodge tool over the edges to make it smooth. Earpink in the right ear should not leak past the ear line. There should not be stripes on her forehead. This is really good Les!Potato&#61;) (talk) 17:37, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

The forehead stripes are in the manga iirc, Potato. Also yes, we don't really do hard cellshading, try smuding or blurring it and try not to thumb or align your image. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 17:41, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! 18:19, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the overall shading depth, and smooth the edges some more. Very nice! 18:28, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the eyelashes, male and female blanks aren't in use anymore. Define the tail shading. Shading still looks flat, try making it darker by using the burn tool, or adding a extra layer of shading.Potato&#61;) (talk) 19:35, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! 21:04, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good Les! Can you make the pupils black though? Her eyes look cloudy with the green <span style="">22:05, 02/9/2019

Ah much better! Fill in the nose color. Make it the same color as the earpink. Make the paw cream a bit more cream.Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:15, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 22:55, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb the image. Remove the "|left|" from the file name to remove the allignment.Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:57, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! Sorry! 23:03, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is coming along very nicely^^ Recede the paler coloring on the tail a little, to match the official art, it wouldn't go so far down the tail. Also, round out the paler muzzle to be less of a triangle shape, if you would.

Re-Uploaded :D  00:57, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

could you make it so that the light source is consistent? the tail and the back leg have conflicting light sources. 03:27, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 12:23, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light to both of the back legs. This is turning out very nice! 15:40, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks! Re-Uploaded! 16:02, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

does this have texture? it looks like it does and I don't think it would get it since she was depicted without in the manga. Correct me if wrong though. 23:16, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Mink's right. If this does have texture, then it would have to be removed. However, this is really good so I'm gonna bump ya up to an apprentice! 23:23, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! And Thank you!! 01:46, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

could you add some shading depth to the legs? 12:16, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 13:28, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more light to the lower back legs? 19:42, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 21:31, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading at the very base of the tail, the face, Chet and shoulder a smidge? This is very good! <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 13:17, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Sandynose (KP) - CBA
send h e l p 00:51, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed some things uwu 01:09, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the nose Ari =)Potato&#61;) (talk) 02:46, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:55, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading on the legs a little bit? this is really cute <span style="">20:12 Sun Feb 10

Reuploaded 20:28, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Rocky (KP) - For Approval
I'll fix this up a little bit later, I wanted to get this up before I lost my reservation. 03:08, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Minor thing Ivy but fill in the lowest paw pad on > that back legPotato&#61;) (talk) 03:15, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on the tuft of fur on the back of his neck near the collar? It looks very gray. 15:34, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Cherrytail (KP) ~ For Approval
*insert cherry joke here*

Seri X Chips= Cheri. Define the bow shadingPotato&#61;) (talk) 04:40, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the overall shading? 06:28, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the orange splotches are slightly softer on the other images. 15:36, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps try to match the orange patch placement slightly closer to the queen? Same side as this blank

re-up will fix more stuff later

Leopardstar (L) ~ CBA
I'll probably change up the shading later.

Can you even out the pupils? —

I'm not sure what you mean. They are the same size; do you want me to center them?

I think tge leg stripes couls be paled/dimmed down a bit. They don't seem as dark on her other images. 10:02, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better?

Center them, yeah. —

Re-uploaded

This looks a lot brighter than her other images, could be my phone though <span style="">14:25, 02/10/2019

Re-uploaded I tried color-picking the base color again from her other images. The deputy does have a darker base color, but I color-picked from the apprentice since that came first (and the base color looks lighter). To me, it honestly looks like the lightness is mainly because of the shading. On her other images, it appears that the shading either covers her pale parts or covers a lot of area.

This looks a bit better, I’ll have to look at them on my computer when I get home from work tonight tho. <span style="">14:50, 02/10/2019

Re-uploaded covered the back in shading. perhaps this helps?

Could you add just a touch of light on the fur tuft of the > haunch? Covering it with shading overall though helped

Re-uploaded

CBA?

Brightwhisker (L) ~ CBA
meh couldve done better --

13:25, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

add some shading depth on the haunch? 14:28, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Pretty! The edges of the patches are slightly smoother on the deputy. 15:25, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading on the mid-section some? <span style="">20:13 Sun Feb 10

reups thanks vec! -- 09:57, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading going a bit further upwards on the < front arm?

reups -- 09:52, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the leg shading a little and I think this should be ready?

reups -- 09:58, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

yeah that looks better, CBA?

Mistystar (L) - CBA


Isn't she short-haired?

Reuploaded lmao my mind had went riverclan = longhaired almost automatically, my bad.

Smooth the shading a lil on the chest? <span style="">14:51, 02/10/2019

Also please smooth it on --> haunch. 15:35, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? Hail to the queen.

Do you think you can define the light in the right ear? Not sure if it is supposed to be entirely shrouded in shading, but if it is, then disregard this. 23:41, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, it's supposed to be fully in shadow.

Okay. Can you define the tail shading? 23:47, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Smooth out the haunch shading (and the area above). 09:05, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? 15:24, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Tigerstar (TPB) (Alt. Le 3) - CBA
All colors from DF alt. Also, the scar going down the stomach of the DF image was meant to be from the wound Scourge gave him in The Darkest Hour. You know, the one that killed him, so he wouldn't have it as a leader. Comments? 17:01, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink is orange..?Potato&#61;) (talk) 17:32, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

It's colorpicked directly from the DF alt's file. 17:41, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Good job, Blue, as always. ​​​

Please define the face shading. 23:34, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:47, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

A tad more? And define the light on the left ear, please. 09:03, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:04, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a touch on the belly/chest white?

Reuploaded. Not going to appear much more smoothed out than this. 20:19, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Willie (L) - For Approval
Eggheart (talk) 17:25, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shadingPotato&#61;) (talk) 17:44, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the tail shading and --> side of the cat is fine, but I definitely agree about the facial shading at least. Could you also define the eye depth, if possible? ​​​​​​

reup I love green-eyed cats Eggheart (talk) 18:34, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth of the shading everywhere. 23:35, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Doesn't he have to match his manga appearance?

maybe? I'm still pretty new to this, so I just matched to his rogue. But his manga design is really cute, so I wouldn't mind changing it if that's the case Eggheart (talk) 15:27, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

For now, please continue matching the rogue. We can always discuss whether or not to tweak his rogue to match the graphic novels, since there's always a chance that nomination wouldn't pass. There's no point making you do extra work at current when the image currently matches what you're supposed to. The graphic novels have always been a source of confusion for us, and we can't always decide whether or not to match them, Egg. Sorry about that. ​​

reup no worries Eggheart (talk) 22:47, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Thunderstar (Le) ~ CBA
17:31, February 10, 2019 (UTC)\

Re-uploaded. torn ear and i forgot to save the file haha. 17:38, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a touch of shading to the bottoms of the paws?

Re-uploaded. 01:19, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten <-- ear pink. 14:45, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 16:21, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

I like this. CBA?

Hazelstar (L) - CBA
Cat! <span style="">17:39 Sun Feb 10 2019

Define the shading everywhere except the back/flank area.Potato&#61;) (talk) 17:44, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

I'd rather not. I think it looks a bit dark if anything. <span style="">17:49 Sun Feb 10 2019

Is it possible for you to add some light to the right back leg and back? Even with the light source, I think there should be a bit there Eggheart (talk) 18:36, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

No, there really wouldn't be any light there with this light source. With light coming from the left and a pose like this, that whole --> half of the body is entirely in shadow. And there's already some bounce lighting and depth added to it, so it's perfectly fine as is. It'd be incorrect to add any more light there.

Could you make the pupils black? :) 23:26, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

I think we just had this issue with, was it Parsleyseed? The pupils themselves don't need to be black as far as I'm aware... at least I don't think we have a rule against it?

could you define the shading depth at the haunch area? 04:16, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="">2:11 Wed Feb 13 2019

Honestly I wish I could do art like you, CBA?

Turtle Tail (KP) - CBA
Not 100% sure I like this. All colors from her other images. I am aware that the pattern doesn't quite match along the spine, don't comment on that. ​

Could you define the shading on the forelegs? 18:48, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hm, -> foreleg is going to be difficult because of the pattern placement, but does this look okay? ​

Yeah, looks so much better. This is gorgeous btw 19:57, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Spooky found some waste and I am slightly less annoyed with the spine patches. ​

Could you define the pupil in the <-- eye, it looks as though she doesn't have one. 22:50, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

She has one, it's just my eye style.

Blur the earpink shading just a tad? Lovely work. 01:11, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I read that as "ear pink" at first, didn't see the word "shading"..and got extremely confused. I realized afterwards that yeah, the shading did need a bit of smoothing out.

CBA?

Troutstar (L) - CBA


Handsome boy. Add some light to --> ear? 23:26, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm. Given the source, I'm not sure there would be any, since it's directly from the > side; same as Mistystar mostly, so might stall on that one unless others agree.

some depth could be added to that ear i think and it would fix the problem vec mentioned without adding any light 04:15, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded fiddled with the highlights some too

CBA?

Bluestar (L) - For Approval
Bluestar is one of the best written characters of Warriors change my mind. Don't actually I just love her —

yeah but Lostface man. Anyways could you define the shading on the tail, please? You need to share your Shading Secrets because this looks neat. ​​

Can you define the shading everywhere? 22:54, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded boosted the opacity and smoothed out some areas. Some day I will finish editing the audio for a shading tutorial I have :'D —

So sorry but her images don't have texture, and she needs the shoulder scar.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:23, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

That's not texture, I think that's actually meant to be a shading/highlight thing. A lot of Echo's images have that. ​

Really? That's cool, smooth out the shading on < this front leg.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:31, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oops, missed your smoothing comment, will get to that. And yeah it's all shading. —

Reuploaded —

Kinda nitpicky, but do you think you could make the scar "curve", for lack of better words? But if it matches the other images, then ignore me. 23:39, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded —

She looks really... shiny. Could you tone down the contrast on the shading? Maybe primarily the highlights if you're using them. Love for fluffiness of the fur shading btw.

Reuploaded Thank you!! Hopefully this helps, I desaturated the shading. —

Reuploaded Icy suggested I even out the shading since the chest/tail floof was so much more prominent than the rest of her shading. If it's too dark, I'll lessen it. —

I'm crying I love this and Bluestar. Can you add some shading on the chin? 14:43, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the slightly lighter/paler muzzle the previous version had? It was meant to represent her graying muzzle from what I recall

Reuploaded Also redid her eyes. —

CBA?

Sorry to break it but the light source on the tail isn't very consistent. Define it/add one, please. <span style="">2:12 Wed Feb 13 2019

I'm gonna ask for another opinion on that;;; I've done all my tails like this pretty much and it's never really been an issue in the past. —

I think you could add more shadow at the bottom of the tail

Thunderstar (Alt L) - For Approval
sof <span style="">01:22, 02/11/2019

Could you smooth out the shading on the stomach just a bit? The transition is a bit abrupt, unless that's intentional? There are so many different shading styles nowadays that it's hard to keep track.

reuploaded ok so I smoothed it out a bit, but the rest of that hardish edge you see is the pale chest <span style="">01:45, 02/11/2019

Is that patch of shading supposed to be on the left haunch? If so, can you smooth it out a bit? 01:52, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

More of an optional suggestion but the shading could stand tone lightened the tiniest bit, it seems very dark compared to the lighter pelt

Could you smooth that facial shading? It seems blotchy, could just be my phone screen. 19:41, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reup hope that fixed it, idk it looks mostly the same to me but I smudged and then reblurred to smooth it some <span style="">15:53, 02/12/2019

Gray Wing (L) - For Approval
01:40, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

My child. He's missing his little ear notch. 04:52, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Gray Wing deserved better. 08:22, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

A babe - he should have a darker nose (his star image shows him with one) 09:55 Mon Feb 11 2019

Re-uploaded: 11:41, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Gorgeous! What is your light source here? 14:33, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Top. 18:44, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

If it's coming from the top, wouldn't the tail shading be on the bottomside of (on the section going out from the haunch) and then probably less on the tail tip? Also, could you connect the > front arm's elbow and the haunch on that side with shading?

Re-uploaded: 03:10, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the light on the muzzle? 03:34 Wed Feb 13 2019

Firestar (L) - CBA
01:40, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

rip our hero </3 could you define the belly shading some? <span style="">02:27 Mon Feb 11

could you add some shading depth to the neck? 04:14, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Don't forget the torn ear! 04:51, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 08:22, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define that haunch shading. 10:00, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 11:41, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Shaded Moss (L) ~ CBA
Everything is from the old leader image. ^^ —

What a beautiful cat. Can you make the earpink more visible? 01:51, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded —

Define the shading on -> that foreleg. I love the shading style you're using for these blanks. 02:37, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! —

CBA?

Harestar (L) - CBA
yeah the depth should be defined probably. 02:24, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on his brown patches? —

Patch you’re so good at art smhbajhabahjahj. But could you define the shading everywhere just a bit pleaaaaase, it’s hard for me to see :P. 04:29, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you Winter! 16:50, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Beechstar (Le) ~ For Approval
a beechboi has been made 02:31, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. —

Could you remove one white pixel from the pupil? Idk if it’s just me but it kinda throws off the eyes. This is stunning! 02:40, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Thank you! Could I get a second on that as I really like the shine it gives the eyes. 02:41, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe moving the shine further down or away from the main highlight will help ^^ I think it looks really cool but they're super close together. —

Re-Ups 07:16, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the chest and neck a bit? 15:29, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Darkstar (CotC) (Le) - CBA
These eyes are my purpose in life 02:47, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading and ear pink? 10:02, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Might be me but the earpink blends in too easily to the pelt color? --

10:44, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:41, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little in > this ear and smooth out the haunch shading.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:16, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:34, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sedgestar (Le) ~ CBA
04:45, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading depth (its sort of abrupt on the chest + tail at the moment) 08:03 Mon Feb 11 2019

Reups 21:34, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Oliver (KP) ~ For Approval
Any time I can put my white angel baby I will. 04:45, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the forelegs, face, and tail some? Great job, Vec! 10:01, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reups I darkened the shading overall slightly. How's this? 21:34, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

It looks better! 21:37, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Would you mind smoothing the shading a touch at the top of the most visible shoulder?

Reups 20:41, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

You mind smoothing the haunch shading?

Tallstar (L) ~ For Approval
meh

Instead of making his tail stick up could you maybe extend the part of the tail that's on the ground and keep the regular curl? —

Re-uploaded not sure if I like how the new tail looks.. may I get some opinions about whether I should revert it to the old version? -> https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/c/c4/Tallstar.leader.png/revision/20190211143900

The old version looks better, but perhaps make the tail tip come up at an angle rather than straight up? 15:26, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded h,mm.. how does this look?

ye thats better lol 16:13, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Still think the tail needs to be longer, extend the flat part where it meets with the body and make the actual image a few pixels wider to accommodate it im at work so i cant redline <span style="">16:53, 02/11/2019

theres a redline. basically what the tails on breezey's original upload of the blank looked like <span style="">00:31, 02/12/2019

Re-uploaded thanks for the redline. I used the linear art of Breezy's original upload, if that's ok. Does this look better?

There’s a black dot of waste right off the <- flank. Love this, Fox!! 04:40, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thank you! killed the waste

Lionstar (L) ~ For Approval
gosh i love him --

10:42, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Gorgeous. Can you lighten the shading a few ticks on > haunch, and smooth the shading on the tail and muzzle? 14:39, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think the overall shading could be lightened a small bit, instead of just the haunch. ​

Desaturate the earpink.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:17, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Personal preference, but do you think you could smudge his markings a bit? The straight, smooth lines contrast oddly with the textured shading. <span style="">23:40 Mon Feb 11 2019

reups thanks hawkey! -- 09:51, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading on the tails tip the smallest bit? Base of the tails fine and this looks pretty great. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 13:14, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Badgerfang (Alt A) - For Approval
Honestly this is absolutely horrible just like... don't even comment on it yet. I'm gonna basically redo it but I won't have any free time till Tuesday so I'm just gonna post this now. However I plan to pretty much keep the placement of the markings, so if there's any suggestions for making the placement closer to the cotc image, I'm all ears on that.

It's not bad at all! I know you said not to comment, but since it's actually up for approval, it technically should be able to receive comments. Brighten the white on the entirety of the image, since it all looks light gray right now. 14:37, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

I don't mean to be rude but yes I'm well aware that it's gray and that's exactly why I said not bother commenting on that stuff since I'm redoing it all... I mean you're free to leave whatever comments you want but chances are unless it's about the placement of the markings, I'm most likely already planning on fixing it in the next upload. Shading's gonna be redone, markings will be tidied up, earpink will be redone, and all the colors will probably be tweaked to have a better contrast and look more like the source image.

Well, to avoid confusion and frustration like this in the future, please finish your charart before uploading and posting it on the approval page. There's really no rush. 14:54, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

The rush was the fact that I was gonna lose my reservation. I did bring the image to a completed stage, I just decided I wasn't happy with how it turned out and didn't have the extra time to redo before my reservation would expire. And anyways I still do need feedback on the placement of the markings since it's very hard to interpret where the markings are on the cotc image due to the glow, and I clearly stated I was redoing everything except that so I'm not quite sure why there would be confusion there.

Hm, I think it's no different than when people notice things about their image and then ask others not to comment on them. What Paleh did was perfectly acceptable and has been allowed within the project for many years now. Many leads, as well as regular members, have done it, due to noticing something different about the image themselves that they already know they need to fix. Regardless, are you going to be changing the base as well? Because that's definitely really hard to tell where that ends and your gray (is it gray??) patches begin. Are they also stripes on the gray or is this texture? I'm finding it extremely hard, and I can't really tell what you're going for here.

You’re allowed to post an image 80% done on the Approval page, it doesn’t have to be 100% done. Although I’m not sure how I feel about asking people not to comment at all... 23:38, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

When you re-up it you might use a different color for the lighting because it makes the gray look green-brown. Also, I think the shoulders are totally white in the COTC image, while the rest of his body is tabby. <span style="">0:08 Tue Feb 12 2019

I am not quite sure it is fair to put an image on the approval page, the place meant for commenting on images, and telling people not to comment yet. 03:12, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Blackstar(L)- for approval
it sucks lolllllllll 15:04, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

No it doesn't!! Hm, I don't think the patchy fur tuft on his forehead should be there. It looks like there's only a scar on his other images. 15:24, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

reup aw thanks man. i put the tuft cuz it was on his old leader image but thats the old one and i didnt rly pay attention to his other images. also lightened his shading while i was at it 15:32, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading a touch higher up the < front arm?

Is the ear pink cutting off in -> ear a bit shorter than it should be intentional? ​

His paws seems to be leaking white at the bottom, also could you add the three scars he has on his --> leg. They should still show partly at this angle. 18:47, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink for both ears and smooth out the shading in the <— ear. Could you smooth out the edges of the shading everywhere? 23:40, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

reup hope i addressed everything. also @jayce ima ctually retarded i thought the ear ended there lol facepalm 04:12, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

oh forgot the stars, sorry ellie 04:18, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

reup *scars. and i accidentally hid a layer oops 04:20, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a head's up, might wanna watch your language on a public page, Burnt. There are a lot of different people who check this place on a daily basis, some of whom might consider that a slur. ​

ah, my bad jayce 22:50, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you taper the scars a little more?Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:42, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

reup 08:33, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Tigerstar (TPB) (L) - For Approval
The greatest villain the Clans have ever seen. 15:21, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

hes so pretty omg! tbh hate being this person but... can you define the shading on the tail? 15:34, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't the tear be on the other ear, to match his other images? 18:01, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think his pale parts are slightly less cream than what you have here. I also think he should have two scars on -> foreleg, and I'm only seeing one...unless it's just not very defined? I'm looking at the rogue for reference here. The ear pink also seems like a slightly different color. Hm, does Icy still have the file for the apprentice? ​

It is on my super broken laptop but if Hawkey does want it I can try to provide it. 18:39, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

There's also a scar on his --> side that should be partly seen. I'm not seeing that. Could you add it/define it if its there? 18:50, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Mink, do you mean that scar near his shoulder on --> side? Do I need to define that more? 22:29, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I got everything. 23:08, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

I can see it now, I guess my phone was being difficult when I previously said. 23:44, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand the pale colors so it goes to the neck too? 03:14, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this, Icy? Also I fixed some discolored pixels on his chest. 01:22, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Benny (KP) - For Approval
Eggheart (talk) 18:03, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

This is very nice. Smooth the shading a bit, it looks pretty rough (as in texture-rough). 23:11, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

reup added a bell too  00:20, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch? 00:35, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the bell? ​​​​

could you also define the shading on the front two paws? <span style="">20:46 Tue Feb 12

reup  01:32, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Skystar (Le) ~ For Approval
i colorpicked from his star since that one didn't have much shading covering the main body. It's the same color as them just appears darker because of the texture and shading tone, pretty sure the shading is a dark blue but I forgot lmao. Comments? 19:14, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the face, tail, and <- paw. :) 22:42, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart on the fur tufts of the > elbow

The eyes look like they are strabismus. The pupils should be fairly consistently vertical and should not be mirrored in each eye as the cats head is slightly to the side. Usually you want something like (| ) (| ) or ( |) ( |) or bring the pupils closer together. <span style="">23:33 Mon Feb 11 2019

Re-Ups, I moved the --> eyeshine over so maybe it looks better now. 03:36, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

It still looks like strabismus. — ♡ <span style title="If you can believe,">you're such  <span style="style" title="you&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' re such a dream to me." data-rte-attribs=" style title=you're such a dream to me."&gt;a dream to me. (04:20, 2/12/2019) ​

I think it’s the two black pixels lower than the rest of the pupil block. Maybe removing those would work? :) 04:25, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups 07:32, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Riverstar (L) ~ For Approval


20:22, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good, Ari! Could you smooth the shading just a tad? 20:36, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

20:43, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Can you blend the markings a bit more? — ♡ <span style title="If you can believe,">you're such  <span style="style" title="you&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' re such a dream to me." data-rte-attribs=" style title=you're such a dream to me."&gt;a dream to me. (21:12, 2/11/2019) ​

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22:32, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the tail stripes curve into the tail more? They look a little unnatural being so straight. 22:42, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

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22:49, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge out the tail stripes a bit more, and recede some of the forehead patch? It doesn't go as far down on the other images, and the forehead stripes appear narrower. 00:32, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

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01:09, February 12, 2019 (UTC) could you smooth out and add depth to the shading?

Define it, too, especially on the face. 03:13, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink a bit. :) 04:25, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

13:14, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the middle forehead stripe down a bit. 19:41, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:01, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading can be smoothed more

Reuploaded 01:08, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

I don't know how to word this exactly.. but I feel like there should be a smoother gradient in the shading. As of now the shading is dark all the way through and abruptly ends. Perhaps lightening it overall, or drawing shading lines on lower opacity for transition may help.

Doestar (Le) ~ For Approval
Hmm, not bad for my first charart in a few years. 00:17, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out > that ear's shading? It's making her ear turn a very unnatural color.Potato&#61;) (talk) 00:35, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:35, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

This is great! Could you add shading depth everywhere?

Reuploaded Thank you! 21:38, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Sunstar (L) - For Approval
sunstar deserves more book time. sunstar novella pls I need to nore more about my floofy boy <span style="">00:46, 02/12/2019

Could you smooth the shading on the cheek, there's a block of darkness on the <-- side of the neck not sure if that's suppose to be there. 02:10, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly it could be smoothed everywhere

Could the shading maybe be lightened a tiny bit? :) 04:37, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Heatherstar (Leader) - For Approval
i hope i did ok  Whiskii  ✿ 01:55, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

this is good for your first image! anyways a few things: that should be all, sorry if this is too much to take in lol. again, this looks good, keep up the good work!
 * the header should be "for evaluation" since this is your first image
 * add shading on muzzle, <-- haunch and <-- back paw
 * define shading on the front paws
 * add light on --> haunch and --> back paw
 * expand the shading on the chest and below the chin/neck area
 * expand the shading on the head/face, and add some to the ears
 * smooth out the shading a bit. btw I love the style of shading
 * she's looking a lil cross eyed, maybe shift over one of the pupils a tiny bit?

To add on, could you also define the shading depth. 02:08, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

sorry for double posting but could you also make the <-- ear a bit less neon and a tad darker so it doesn't seem so bright against that shaded ear? 02:12, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

is this better? Whiskii ✿ 02:26, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

This is great for your first image! (and I'll be promoting you into an apprentice since you clearly know what you're doing) Could you add shading to the -> haunch area?

Could you smooth out the earpink on both ears? Also this looks really good for a first charart, you obviously have a natural talent for this. Good work. :) 04:23, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

The 2 front leg's shading could be defined more? Pretty!

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11:02, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i wasn't sure what the fox girl meant by adding more shading to the -> haunch area because there's already shading there. also tysm for the promotion!! Whiskii ✿ 19:26, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think what Fox means is for you to add more shading over there because your light source calls for it, but I'm not sure.. so disregard me if I'm wrong.Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:42, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

yep. That -> light area should be covered in shadow, given your light source.

i felt like i was right the first time, fox girl, i had that area in shading but starlightgirl said to add light so i did :P ill reupload in a few  Whiskii  ✿ 02:24, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded  Whiskii  ✿ 02:30, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnstar (Leader) - For Approval
wanted to try the other side lol  Whiskii  ✿ 02:08, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

I thought Breezey had this reserved...? Eh, the shading is a liitle flat and the base is lighter than her StarClan Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:03, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Oh Breezey dropped her rsservstion, never mind!Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:13, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add some depth and smooth the shading, it looks like the base is #ccad88 03:20, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i felt like i shouldve changed the pupil on her too so i did lol  Whiskii  ✿ 19:27, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to --> side of the body. It's very flat there. 19:36, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded ^-^  Whiskii  ✿ 02:30, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Raggedstar (L) - For Approval
03:15 Tue Feb 12 2019

Could you brighten up the skin/rashes or make them more visible? 19:30, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

reups i colourpicked from a brighter spot this time lol 19:38 Tue Feb 12 2019

Brokenstar (L) - For Approval
03:15 Tue Feb 12 2019

If those are eyebrows, can you remove them? None of the other images have those. 03:17, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

As quirky and fun as they are, I agree they shouldn't really be on official art... —

reups totes uploaded the wrong one whoopsie 03:24 Tue Feb 12 2019

i actually have his file somehow... do you want it? (xcf btw, not psd) 04:02, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

I wouldn’t be able to open it unless you convert it to a .psd - but I did grab an older file from Paleh so the colours should match 04:05 Tue Feb 12 2019

right, cool. id imagine you dont need it then :D 04:16, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Might be an unpopular opinion, but I think he should be more...poofier? Particularly on the flanks (I think the tail and face are good). His fur is more exaggerated, for lack of a better term, on the other images. 19:35, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Personally, I think this is plenty good enough in regards of poofiness. xD 20:12, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think he's fine as is; but if more people think I should add on I can tweak him for more poof 22:53 Tue Feb 12 2019

Maybe just a little bit more on the tail? His poof is intentionally obnoxious, I feel.

reuploaded extra floof 04:28 Wed Feb 13 2019

Bess (KP) - For Approval
uwu whats this? <span style="">04:38 Tue Feb 12

Lighten the white, as it looks rather gray. 04:49, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe define the light on the white parts as it just looks like the shading is covering all of it right now. 06:33, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">20:19 Tue Feb 12

Brighten the white more. It's still looking a bit gray.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:43, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Blizzardstar (Le) - For Approval
ah yes, the cat named after Blizz. ​​​​

Could you lighten the head shading? The darkness of it throws off the rest of the body with how light the other parts are. 04:01, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Wow, that was a lot darker than I thought it was o.O

This comment may be more so about my personal preferences.. but could you lighten the shading overall? If not, that's fine

Re-uploaded. I most certainly can, but I'm thinking I went a bit too light...

Birchstar (RC) (Le) - For Approval
recreating a stripe pattern that I made in 2011 is hard... imagine that <span style="">20:39 Tue Feb 12

Define the shading.Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:40, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think I removed all the "Y-stripes" in the redone version. Can you reduce them?

Bluestar (Alt. Le 4) ~ For Approval
My favorite Warriors character (in case you couldn't tell by my name). Comments? 02:06, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

The scar is a little higher on her other leader (I think). How do you get tiny text?Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:16, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a bit? This seems to clash too much with the pelt color. ​

Reuploaded. I think the scar's fine, as we don't have to match scar placement on alts. 03:43, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Curlypaw (Kp) - For Approval
fixed the comments from last time 03:54, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

was she mentioned to have a collar? i'm not entirely sure 'cos I haven't read that book 03:57 Wed Feb 13 2019

I believe she'd get one since she left to be a kittypet. 04:04, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

It looks great. Define the shading on the collar. 04:56, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you Icy! 05:02, February 13, 2019 (UTC)