Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 210

Smallstar (L) - Approved
Hi, it's been awhile! The shading's a bit messy, the light's meant to be coming from below them. 16:21, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on ---> front leg? It's great to see you back! 16:31, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading please. WB Finches! Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:43, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Could you light the shading, its really blue (or maybe just darken the tint). Also could you define the light on the --> side of the body, mainly the leg and haunch. 05:31, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thanks guys! 11:24, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded (Again) - Made the shading lighter all over! 11:31, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Changed the shading completely. 11:57, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

I know there wouldn't be much with this lightsource, but could you define the light on the face? 17:20, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

the light on our right front leg can still use some expansion with the source you have 17:34, 02/23/2019

Re-uploaded - Tweaked the shading as requested. 18:21, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading on his eyes? I can't really tell what color they are with the shading covering them. 22:38, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened the shading over his eyes and messed around with the chest shading.

Can you define the shading depth a bit? 01:03, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

You didn't sign your last comment Finches =). Define the shading on the back paw farthest from us. 04:42, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Whoops sorry, I went back and signed it. I've added paw shading and darkened my shading depth. 10:59, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

could you sharpen the shading in general and give it a more defined shape? 11:53, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  - Sharpened the shading some, but on the legs especially I think the pattern makes the shading hard to see? 12:07, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Shading looks good imo Malina457 (talk) 17:53, February 24, 2019 (UTC)malina

Hm well. The sharpening helped a lot but can you smooth it just on the white of the > leg? It’s a bit too sharp just there

this is looking good. could you lighten the shading then define the depth? 09:49, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  - Thanks! I smoothed his leg and lightened the shading. I tried to make the depth more obvious not sure how successful that was. 17:34, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved! 20:31, February 26, 2019 (UTC)