Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Creekfeather (W) ~ Redone
OA's were Cloudskye, Elorisa. Needed to be redone to match the kit ~. Comments? :3 22:26, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that ear pink. 22:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match the stripes on the apprentice more closely. They need to be darker, more textured, and they need to conform to the shape of his body. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

His main coloring needs to be a bit darker to match as well. Also, try to match the ear pink on the other images and don't have it so low that it leaks into his forehead. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Uh Shelly, the apprentice is being redone to match the kit. 01:31 Thu Mar 29

The stripes don't match the kit, either, and the kit is essentially the apprentice with thinner stripes. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. (Sorry if what Shelly already said covers this). 06:41, 29, 03, 2012

Re-uploaded. I don't think the changes are showing. I fixed the stripes and they match a whole lot better. Blurred the earpink as well. 19:16, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the ear pink more triangular and less neon-y. 02:26, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not changing the colour since it matches the kit, same hex code. :3 10:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly add more stripes but not all the way across? 14:00 Tue Apr 3

Make the earpink less neon and a bit more triangular. 21:29, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Done. Mounty, regarding the stripes, they match the kit and the apprentice I've half-finished. :3 Also, changes might not be showing, so it's here: http://www.iaza.com/work/120404C/iaza18777759259200.png 00:04, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink still doesn't look right, in my opinion. Define the shading a tiny bit. 10:59, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I could add them in for you instead if you want. After all, you only took this on to do the shading. If not, could you make them a bit more like the stripes on her brother? 01:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, can you Shelly? I don't want to waste time trying to get them right. 15:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

My pleasure. I re-uploaded it, here's the changes since they won't show regularly: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/9/96/20120402190120!Ferncloud.kit.png 19:02, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste down by her paw on ---> side. 20:45, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart also seems a little thick on her left hind paw... 01:54, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Alt.Q) ~ Tweaked
Eh...I just realized I forgot her facial stripes...and the stripes on the lower part of her hind leg...I'll add those in in a bit. I'm the OA, and she needed stripes on her legs, tail, and face. Comments? 16:22, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added those in. Changes are here. 03:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little more? 01:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you centre the earpink a bit more please? 02:08, 04, 04, 2012

Pearnose (MC) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar12. Shading and highlights were blotchy, odd earpink, herb's shading was messed up, ect. Changes not showing yet :c 17:18, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pale belly, enlarge the earpink a tad, and lighten up the shading a bit. ^^ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 23:49, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, too, please. 22:18, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes aren't showing I think Dx 00:39, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mitzi (KP) (Q) - Redone
changes aren't showing. redone to match queen. Original artist was leafstrike. changes are herre~  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 02:42, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and enlarge the earpink. ^^ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 14:02, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit? 23:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 03:41, April 5, 2012 (UTC)'''

Blur the shading, and some of the shading along the bottom of the belly is edging away from the lineart. 03:58, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Icewing (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA was...Mistyheart, I think. Too lazy to check the file history. Anyways, it needed a shading tweak. Changes can be seen here. 10:21, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little? 13:57 Tue Apr 3

Re-uploaded. 14:17, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 21:06, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the ear pink a tad, and make it less neon. 21:29, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ear pink is fine. It matches the warrior. 02:16, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back and belly shading some more. 10:44, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:18, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Snaketail (P3) (E) ~ Redone
And here's Snaketail :3 OAs were Ashshadow, Elorisa, Ivystripe, Thistleberry, and Paleclaw. Comments? 10:57, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Add a few more stripes to teh tail and blur tje stripesm earpinmk, and shading. Cute :D  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 13:10, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

His description mentions that he has a gray flecked chin, so, could you add it? Nice~ :3 13:53, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading. Pretty C: 13:55 Tue Apr 3

Rename this Snaketail (P3).elder.png. 17:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:25, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the gray flecks gray, and put them moreso on his chin. Also define the shading a bit. 00:43, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and maybe thicken it? :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 00:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)