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Silt (Ro) - For Approval
Sooo, here's the charart and stuff... 21:33, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and legs Shypaw11 (talk) 23:02, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^-^ 23:22, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

it should be rogue for the file name not rouge. 23:45, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps even out the texture a tad -- it kinda looks stripey

Define the light on the legs. 23:50, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body some more? 14:06, 10/30/2016

Reuploaded Smoothed out shading, added actual lighting, changed file name. 15:46, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading, and check for shading leakage on the legs

Reuploaded 18:29, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

add shading depth (on the head, tail, body especially).

I think the light on the legs still needs to be defined more. Add the light on the very fronts of the legs. Also on the tail some. 01:35, 10/31/2016

The texture looks kind of like stripes more than texture, if that makes sense. Thin out the lines and/or smooth them more. It should also follow the form of the body more and if at all possible, the light source. Some people feel that adding deeper texture to shaded areas will make it too dark, though. Just a suggestion on how to make it more obvious that it is indeed texture. If you need any clarification, let me know. Sometimes what I type out can seem vague and scrambled, seeing as it is during breaks between my daily life and I kind of just fire it out as I come up with it. 23:02 Mon Oct 31

Reuploaded Best I can do, I'm not very good >.< 01:41, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

smooth out the texture somemore, it still looks like stripes. make it more softer looking as —  Minkclaw   01:54, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on body and tail especially

Reuploaded 23:11, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

The shading around the belly and ==> hind leg is a little blotchy so smoothen/blur it out. --  20:25, November 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:27, November 4, 2016 (UTC)

Make sure the image is full size when you upload it. In addition, the image looks really grey overall. Can you define the light on the face, legs, and tail? 00:05, November 5, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Baaassically redid the whole shading. 19:21, November 5, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the body and legs, also maybe define the light on the tail.

Re-uploaded 14:58, November 6, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 03:20, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Define the leg shading. 03:38, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Shading is leaking everywhere away from the lineart, especially on legs/face/body. Also perhaps define the light on the tail, since it looks like it's completely in shadow

Eyes and nose spots are empty.

No, the eyes and muzzle are not empty.^^ 21:51, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, so prepare for the wall of text :P Sorry in advance. The shading on the legs, especially the ones on the right side of the cat, need to be thinned out and placed only on one side, depending on your light source. Which in turn, also means to define the light source. The shading on the tail should be on the other side, since the source is coming from <== direction; the light needs to be on the top. Also, define the shading depth a tiny bit. 22:05, 11/10/2016

Reuploaded ouo  16:35, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 21:41, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry should have commented earlier, I was just busy working. There is waste by the muzzle, and the shading is still leaking slightly on the legs and underbelly. 21:47, 11/11/2016

Perhaps define the light on the <-- front paw just a tad

Reuploaded welp 00:15, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got help from Winter/Snowdapple 16:32, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

I still see those white pixels by the base of the tail. 15:37, 11/13/2016

The shading looks a tad bit blotchy on the <-- front paw, and also on the --> front paw, I think the light could be defined some. Also maybe smooth the bit of shading just on top of the shoulder

Reuploaded ouo 23:59, November 14, 2016 (UTC)

I think there's a pixel of waste off to the very <-- under the tail

Smudge the pelt into the earpink and darken the edges of the shading where they meet the main lineart; the darkness seems to taper and get lighter as it approaches the lineart if that makes any sense at all 07:13, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry i forgot to upload it 19:29, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Quailkit (Ki) - For Evaluation
This was my first time trying a charart, I hope its alright. ill try to fix the things but anyone can tweak if they like! Winterpaw I'm unleashed...Run.

So, I changed the title to headings. It should also say "Quailkit (Ki) ~ For Evaulation~. And smudge the white on the belly a little more.-- 00:04, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Definte the shading on the belly, and the fur a bit. And the ear pink doesn't show that much. 00:05, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

And also, take the alignments off too. Like, the "thumb" and "left" in the image. -- 00:06, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

I switched the heading to '~ For Evaluation' since it's supposed to be that way for a first image until a lead changes it. I also think the white shouldn't be as big, since it's only supposed to be on the belly, and not the chest area

'''​Reupload - i made the white smaller, did a little shading, and made the ears pinker. '  Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run''. 00:27, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

I don't want to be a jerk but, this needs to be named Quailkit.kit.png, not just Kit.png Shypaw11 (talk) 02:01, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

There is waste around all the body. 02:04, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

'''Reupload - I removed surrounding waste and renamed the file and added more things and made the patch more circle. how does it become approved again'   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run''. 03:26, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

The nose hole is empty, you might want to fill that in with a light pink color. --Xaviapaw 

The white should only be on the underbelly. Only put it between the legs. 14:05, 10/30/2016

Define the shading, and also the earpink color doesn't match the other image.

What other image? Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 17:12, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Her StarClan image has to match this one.

Was that image even approved? - Jose1106 (talk) 19:31, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think so...its not on the page, and Quailkit is a he...   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 19:48, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload - shading, made the white smaller, made ears more like picture (if that picture is even approved) and made the nose better.   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 19:57, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading. Are you using Gaussian blur? --  21:31, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

add shading on the legs, head, and add more depth to the eyes. you can refer to the tutorials for more help.

Reuploaded. Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 02:09, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

The senior warriors are inactive right now, please be patient. With the skills you have, I'm sure you'll be promoted in no time, and onto the critique: 1. Firstly, define your light source. Have a specific direction of light hitting the image in mind while shading the image: thats how we perceive shading in the first place. 2. Try to make the shading more visible to the audience. right now you can hardly see it in the way that it would define the shape and build of a cat. 3. The white chest looks unnaturally slapped onto the image, give it a blur/smudge depending on your preference.

Since you're being pushy about becoming an apprentice, I'm making this stay at "for evaluation". You do not decide when you are ready to become an apprentice, the leads do. I don't know who told you that anyone can do it, but they are very misinformed.

Ok, I'll try to fox up the shading, and I think the light is coming from the right, hitting the back. And hmm, the white, I'll try smudging it, but when I tried it it loved very pixelated and wrong, but maybe I can fix that.

Sorry for being pushy, I was impatient. I didn't mean to offend anyone and I know that was annoying. For the information, I just read on the guidelines that once you complete an image 50% you can become an apprentice, but idk. Sorry again! Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 19:01, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

The leads decide when an image is halfway complete, not you. You may think it is, but there are leads, just as there are in the warriors world. That's why we have senior warriors, a deputy, and a leader. 20:12, 10/31/2016

Define the eye depth (add more darker and lighter colors) and the earpink a bit. And apologies if this counts as repeating a comment, but there appears to be absolutely no shading on the white. At all. If there is, it needs to be defined a lot. 22:57 Mon Oct 31

'''Reupload - thanks for all the suggestions guys, I hope its getting better. once again, sorry Snowed for how I acted. I hope this pic looks better now!'   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run''. 00:04, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define light source^^ Right now, it just seems that there's a ring of extra color touching the lineart, but the shading should only be where light doesn't hit.

What do you mean? Could you explain more? :D   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 22:13, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

It looks better than the last time :). I see your light source much more clearly than before. However, a couple of more things to consider:

1. The shading doesn't seem to cover the parts where it's supposed to cover, aka its "leaking" away from the linear art as people here call it. By this i mean that there are random lighter patches I see visible in the shading. To fix this, just simply go to the layer and give the edge of the linear art a trace where the shading is drawn.

2. Try to darken the shading to make it more visible. It's kind of eye straining to see it. Also, when you do that, it might look a little hard edged, so give it a little blur.

3. Try and get the shading to look more defined. By this I mean that the shading should form visible shapes rather than be blurred all over the image. For reference, take a look at the shadows casted around you right now to see what I mean when shading is a defined shape.

4. Try using a low opacity eraser tool to erase the edge of the white underbelly slightly, as right now it seems to be leaking.

13:38, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

'''Reupload - thanks guys, especially fox girl, that was great advice. hope its better now!'   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run''. 23:17, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

I still really can't see the shading, and can only tell that there's a slight difference between it and the base. Would you perhaps darken/define it some?

Reupload Winterpaw: I  am  a  true Monster

Define and darken the shading a bit more. 00:06, November 5, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Winterpaw:  I  am  a  true Monster  01:52, November 6, 2016 (UTC)

Could you please define/darken the shading? I really can't see it at all on my screen.

Reupload Winterpaw:  I  am  a  true Monster  00:41, November 7, 2016 (UTC)

Blur/smudge in the shading a tad.

Reupload Winterpaw:  I  am  a  true Monster  00:39, November 8, 2016 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart on the --> back paw, and also, maybe smooth the belly white some.

The shading needs to be defined everywhere but on the side of the cat, which means define it on the legs, tail, and head respectively. I see virtually none at all where there should be some. Also, it looks like there's darker dapples all over the image, and since he's only described as a solid color, he doesn't get any, so remove those. 22:10, 11/10/2016

Reuploaded Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster  22:44, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Get rid of the pale tail-tip. <span style="">23:31, 11/10/2016

Reupload Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster  03:45, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:41, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster  22:58, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth?

Reupload Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster  02:14, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading on top of the head, if you please. 18:32, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

reup Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster  22:29, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Add some on the neck

reup Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster  18:59, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Fallowfern (E) - Declined
i like only the eyes —  Minkclaw   19:12, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit on the haunches? Looks good man 19:14, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Give the shading more shape; it doesn't really have that right now and looks like it's also leaking away from the lineart almost everywhere.

Re-Upps, thanks Man —  Minkclaw   01:21, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

Do you use Gaussian blur? I highly recommend never using that. It's better to blur it with the blur tool itself that the Gaussian blur, because it can make the shading leak away from the lineart a lot, in which case it is doing so here. The blob in the middle of the image, specifically. Could you perhaps fix that up a little? The shading is leaking onto the back leg's knee, which shouldn't have shading on it. Also the tail-tip shouldn't have any shading on it, and that is leaking onto the front leg. And maybe get rid of the shading on the back leg right under the tail too, as that wouldn't be in shading either. <span style="">03:34, 11/03/2016

Re-Upps, well I had to cope with the stuff I could use on Pixlr as my current program was somehow messing up. The shading on the leg by the tail, the back one, was supposed to be there.—  Minkclaw   11:34, November 3, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I don't see any difference? <span style="">13:55, 11/03/2016

I removed the shading from the tail tip and paw as well as the hind leg. I see it. —  Minkclaw   14:03, November 3, 2016 (UTC)

There's still shading on the tail-tip that needs to be removed, and I can still see shading on the hing leg. <span style="">14:47, 11/03/2016

The hind leg is supposed to be there as it would be hidden in shadow by her tail and body. I 'll remove the tail shading later. —  Minkclaw   15:29, November 3, 2016 (UTC)

No, not the hind leg leg, I meant the bend in the knee by the blob on the middle. <span style="">15:31, 11/03/2016

Hm..the elbow looking thing, I'll remove that —  Minkclaw   15:34, November 3, 2016 (UTC)

lighten, expand, and blur the shading 17:36, November 4, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   22:37, November 6, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading - it looks more like a stripe atm, imo. <span style="">09:48, 11/07/2016

can I get second on that as it does not, there are several other elders with this light and shading source. —  Minkclaw   15:09, November 7, 2016 (UTC)

Shading is leaking a tiny bit on the belly.

I'd think expanding the shading slightly wouldn't hurt, just so it could be a bit more of a gradient. That might help add some shading depth to the image, which I think it needs

Xavia, there is no stomach shading, thats behind the elbow..—  Minkclaw   15:02, November 9, 2016 (UTC)

I apologize, I was mistaken.

Mink that is the stomach. <span style="">05:16, 11/10/2016

well could I get a second on the the stomach thing, as I don't particularly see the leaking but I could be wrong. —  Minkclaw   15:31, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

It is leaking. Could you also smooth out the shading along the back and rump? <span style="">15:47, 11/10/2016

I'd say expand the shading too; it looks like there's barely any at all.

and add shading on her front leg. 23:13, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

the front legs wouldn't get shading as my light source comes from that area..?—  Minkclaw   05:09, November 14, 2016 (UTC)

its coming from the front so the back would have some ? it looks flat as it is. 20:22, November 14, 2016 (UTC)

I think I might just redo the whole shading so its better —  Minkclaw   15:32, November 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * Does the declining involve having the image uploaded within or a week or the comments if I make sense? This'll be uploaded tonight. —  Minkclaw   18:42, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

You haven't uploaded in well over the aloted amount of time. I'm declining this, so please give someone else a shot on this. Constantly going "it's fine" is literally all you've done for this image and it's not fair to anyone else.

Livy (KP) - For Approval
06:44, November 8, 2016 (UTC)

She looks more cream than white.. was that intentional?

Re-uploaded It was partially intentional but I also forgot to drop the opacity on the texture... 18:04, November 8, 2016 (UTC)

You mind defining the shading on the collar? I like the tint tbh.

Re-uploaded 06:51, November 9, 2016 (UTC)

maybe define the tail shading? this is nice as 19:22, November 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:23, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Thin out the shading a tad and it seems to be leaking near the neck. 03:28, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth a tad? <span style="">22:17, 11/10/2016

Re-uploaded 01:54, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think she should have stripes, as she's not a tabby. 23:06, November 15, 2016 (UTC)


 * Me and Cloudy discussed this and have been unable to come to a satisfying conclusion. Could we get a second opinion? Personally, I'd prefer to keep the stripes. Looking at the image without the layer on looks a bit awkward to me, but I'm probably biased lol   06:46, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

If it doesn't say she has brown tabby points in the description, then you need to get rid of them. It is an assumption. <span style="">14:24, 11/16/2016

Re-uploaded 00:37, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

Shading seems to be leaking just beneath the collar.


 * It's not. The little bit of light on her shoulder is purposeful 04:51, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

Nami (KP) - For Approval
I love this. <span style="">16:08 Fri Nov 11

Blur the stripes; they seem very hard-edged. 18:19, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

can u define the shading a lil 20:06, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading. I didn't like it much. <span style="">20:16 Wed Nov 16

The stripes still seem hard-edged. 23:24, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, good work! —  Minkclaw   23:06, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Luna (KP) - For Evaluation
Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:59, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Get rid of every other white thing except for the tail-tip. Unless specifically stated to have other white points, we follow our tortoiseshell rule here. Also don't align your images. <span style="">14:01, 11/12/2016

And this image needs to be renamed to File:Luna.kittypet.png <span style="">14:04, 11/12/2016

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 14:42, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you brighten the tail-tip? It looks a little too gray to me. <span style="">14:42, 11/12/2016

define the shading on the legs and tmake the brown a little less green looking. 15:59, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:09, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Do you mind smudging the brown and ginger a bit?

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:50, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the tail and legs? 02:57, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 05:41, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and give it some shape; it looks rather flat and I'm having some trouble making it out.

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:54, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

could you whiten the tail tip please?

Fidgetpaw (MC) - CBA
I finally decided on something I like. For those who don't think I can do this, I've already done this before without any objections.

I love it, Cloudy! It suits his name :) Even out the ear-pink size and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a touch more. Maybe also add more light to the lifted paw; the white looks a litle too gray 22:54, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

can you define the shading a bit my guy 00:23, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 15:18, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Spikefur (Ro) ~ CBA
All colors from his other images. Comments? 17:21, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Where is your light source coming from? The shading around the torso is sort of confusing me of where the light shines on the cat.

I think it's fine, as I've used this lightsource on other images (namely Slate's rogue image). 01:26, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the depth to the shading and define the light on the front legs 14:05, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:21, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? 15:16, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) ~ For Approval
Eh --Cheetahfur (talk) 02:10, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Is there a way you could possibly make the pixels look less grainy? 02:11, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

I know this is probably a difficult pattern to shade, but can you maybe define the shading a bit? 02:52, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd? You are close, but the markings and colors are a tad bit difficult to tell because of layers/layer modes. I am the OA of the apprentice (first in the set) and the dapples on this are actually a little too soft. <span style="">03:02 Sun Nov 13

Add the pupil. <span style="">04:33, 11/13/2016


 * Does he have an eye color? 09:11, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Scarlet Pebble is a she, and could you make the speckles a bit more defined. —  Minkclaw   15:03, November 14, 2016 (UTC)

Mink, that's exactly what Sunjaw said already, tbh. <span style="">16:07, 11/14/2016


 * My apologies, I didn't see that. —  Minkclaw   16:49, November 14, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe try to even out the earpink -- it looks blotchy because I can see the spots under it.


 * That's normal, Holly c: Maybe define/sharpen the shape a bit more? 07:10, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

I cant see any pupils

I already said that, Fox. <span style="">13:37, 11/17/2016

sorry, didn't notice your comment.

Mind matching this image to Pebbleshine's queen image?

It should match the apprentice image, not the queen, because the apprentice is the first in the set. But anyway, are you still working, Cheetah? 15:25, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (Ki) ~ CBA
Holy pattern. Sunjaw, how do you do these things? <span style="">04:31, 11/13/2016

Define the darker flecks a little bit. And that was actually done with a custom brush ^^ this pattern would've been a nightmare to do without it lol <span style="">14:34 Sun Nov 13

Re-uploaded Lmao, I just used the spray can. I think it worked out pretty well xD <span style="">16:30, 11/13/2016

Idk if it's just me, but there seems to be a white/really light pixel on the --> back paw, where there wouldn't be light.

There's supposed to be light there in my lightsource, but just a tiny bit. I also have two darker lines for the toe separation. I'll get to that in a sec. <span style="">00:10, 11/14/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">00:11, 11/14/2016

CBA? 15:15, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Fernpaw (TAQ) (Alt A) ~ For Approval
11:58, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit blotchy, if that makes sense, on the top of the hip, could you smooth it out? This looks nice. :) Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 15:13, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reups thank you! c: 18:56, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

Blossomheart (Ki) - For Approval
Now I recall why I said I'd never do a tabby kit image again. It's not easy getting all the stripes to fit... 21:23, November 14, 2016 (UTC)

the tail shading should be swapped to match the light source. (sorry for commenting after so many days >.<)

Re-uploaded. 15:02, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Tangleburr  (DF) ~ For Approval
~Patch   feather~   04:27, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothen out texture some, there are some parts that look like scribbles going in an odd angle?? If I make sense, I see it most on her side and back..great job though! —  Minkclaw   13:59, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''thanks. ~Patch   feather~   23:02, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

Really nice image^^ Perhaps round out the brown on the tail a bit to match the other images a bit more, and also, the earpink is leaking out of the ear line that it's supposed to be in.

'''Re-uploaded. '''thanks! ~Patch   feather~   04:23, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

the ear pink is still leaking out of the ear line.

Is it the top or the bottom of the ear? I looked and I can't find it. ~Patch   feather~   14:08, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

never mind, my bad. I mixed up the ear pink color and the brown ><

Snipkit (Kit) ~ For Approval
Now I can understand why everyone says the kit blank is hard to work with :/ Comments? <span style="">23:07 Tue Nov 15

Can you smooth out or smudge the white splotch some more? It looks a bit too defined. <span style="">23:55, 11/15/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">23:15 Thu Nov 17

Blur the earpink a little. Maybe lighten it a bit too. ~Patch   feather~   23:38, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

The shading looks a tad bit blotchy towards the top of the white patch

Re-ups <span style="">22:59 Fri Nov 18

Mintfur (SC)(Q) ~ For Approval
bleh

And I'll get the two specks of waste that I just now see when I get home

Reuploaded

I think the stripes are actually blurred on her other images. what you have here doesn't seem to match the stripe style of the other images

Reuploaded

Perhaps darken the stripes a bit? The stripes on her other chararts look darker. It could just be me though. ~Patch   feather~   23:21, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

The stripes on the warrior especially, but other images too, look less blurred and thinner. <span style="">23:31 Thu Nov 17

Reuploaded

Sharpen the stripes a tad more. 17:55, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

could you think them a little they look thicker than her others on the other images —  Minkclaw   23:09, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

​Thistleheart


TawnyBracken (talk) 06:30, November 18, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

You have to upload the image under that file name, and the title needs to say "Thistleheart (Star) - For Evaluation" like I told you. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:35, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

And you have to reserve it on the reservation table. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:36, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

Bellaleaf (W) ~ For Approval
rushed job; ill fix it up when pokemon is done w me 22:27, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

Rushed??? This is rushed??? XD define the ear pink. (I know what you mean a friend of mine is raving about the new game)<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  23:08, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded once i figured out the stripe placement, it wwas a pretty quick job :^) (and its such a good game so far mmmm) 13:09, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Chestnutkit (star) ~ For Approval
Poor little thing. Cute name though. Comments?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  23:08, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

You mind filling up that nose hole and make the lighter areas a bit more obvious?

Reupload <font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  22:43, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Mousewing (Star) ~ For Approval
Any comments? 23:12, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps brighten the black a tiny bit? I know it's not full black, I can still see shading, but it looks really similar to the lineart.

Reupload 15:46, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Curlypaw (A) - For Approval
I was originally going to use a texture/shading combo, but I had no idea of the basics and it didn't go so well, so I'm doing the image without texture.

Smooth out the shading and define it on the haunch and tail. 05:33, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

could you darken the base some. This looks like a pale gray to me. —  Minkclaw   23:14, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Shade is artist's choice unless one is specified. They are not required to change the shade if they don't want to.

Needletail (Ro) ~ For Approval
My first rogue. - Jose1106 (talk) 14:45, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Looks very nice. Mind smoothing out the shading a little? 22:24, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - Jose1106 (talk) 23:14, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tiny bit. I can't really see it. 15:10, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - Jose1106 (talk) 19:53, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Snaketail (P3) (Star) ~ For Approval
19:39, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Wow, that's nice!CloudHeart100 (talk) 21:52, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe add a fleck or two to the chin itself? I only see them on the bottom of the head.

Re-ups 12:03, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Curlypaw (KP) - Declined
my first kp image and it looks pretty good —  Minkclaw   22:44, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Really good, but the base and earpink of this image need to match the apprentice image that's up for approval right now (up above), since as of now that's the first in the set.

i was pretty sure that if it wasn't on the page it didn't have to match, the first one approved did?? —  Minkclaw   22:57, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

This does have to match; I've been told the same. If the other image gets approved, then it would go on the page first, and therefore would have to be matched. And since this is the second, this has to the other.

This image does in fact have to match; it was on the approval page before yours, therefore you are required to match it, unless the other image is withdrawn or declined.

Your other image is still on the approval page. This is declined, as per the rules.

I would add a little depth to the eyes to. 23:29, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Foggy (KP) (Lo) ~ For Approval
ok, posting this for approval again