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Mudfur (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. -- 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad? ​​​​​​

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). -- 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry 01:34, 8/30/2019

Still working? 14:39, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They lost their drawing pen. I believe it is Vec who gave them an extension Moo (talk) 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, sorry for the long wait, like Moo said I lost my pen and Vec (may have been Jayce I can't remember) gave me an extension. I didn't want to put it off any longer so I did it with a keyboard. Anyway, I did all the suggestions (or most) that you guys said, what do you think?

Looking good Firespring! Hmm, curve the shading on the haunch more (let me know if you need a redline) and there's waste outside the tail. The coloring on the nosepink and mottles are still a little off (nose should be #1b1411, the mottles should be #493522). -- 23:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now?

You're getting there! I think the shading could be smoothed a bit, and the mottles look sharper on the alt star (try running a low opacity sharpen tool or a low sharpen filter on the mottles, beware of color pixels). You could also use a low opacity pencil and draw over the mottles, which will make them sharper as well. -- 00:12, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the <-- ear. 00:23, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now? Also, there already is shading on the ear. 00:28, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Is it me, or am I seeing texture on the image? If it's texture, it needs to be removed as the alt star doesn't have any. -- 00:31, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Removed texture. 00:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading on --> that ear but not on <-- this ear. 01:04, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Added shading to left ear. 05:34, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a some more on the body

Reuploaded. 21:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to the back leg and smooth it out on the shoulder and haunch more. -- 21:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:30, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading on the < ear; helps with flatness

Still working?

My comment on there not being any lighter mottles in the tail tip still stands. 17:53, 9/14/2019

Reuploaded. Yes, still working. Sorry for the wait. How's this? 05:51, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

you need to remove all lighter mottles in the tail tip. There shouldn't be any light in the dark at all 13:30, 9/15/2019

Sasha (W) - For Approval
i hate this. it's horrible as heck. 05:42, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you remove the shading over the eyes, Smudge the tail a bit more smoothly, and lighten the shading? Thanks! Moo (talk) 08:35, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading while you're at it, too. -- 15:08, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:40, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the shading depth on the front legs, and smooth the shading more. -- 17:46, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:57, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading, and erase it on the eye. -- 18:59, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

And can you smudge the earpink and brown a bit more? Moo (talk) 21:20, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. gimme a sec, and the eye shading will be gone. 06:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

'''look at them eyes. reuploaded. 06:27, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading more --Moo (talk) 04:23, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:31, September 3, 2019 (UTC)'''

The base colour looks too "cool" compared to her other images; maybe try #C59A70 for the base? Or even giving the shading a red tint, though that is completely artist's choice

'''reuploaded. tell me if should change the shading tint. 00:14, September 4, 2019 (UTC)'''

The brown and earpink appear too dark compared with her other images. 14:41, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the haunch shading a touch; just so it curves a little more to the shape of the haunch since rn it just covers most of it

'''reuploaded. 00:53, September 6, 2019 (UTC)'''

Try #5F4331 for the brown ears and tail

'''reuploaded. 01:54, September 7, 2019 (UTC)'''

It might be wikia just being a butt; but i'm not really seeing any changes? The brown still looks too dark

'''reuploaded. better? 16:02, September 7, 2019 (UTC)'''

still not really seeing a difference between the uploads

Still working?

I lost my tablet I do art with and I can’t make charart on my phone. :/ 15:24, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Likewise, we can give you an extension until the 18th, but if you don't find it soon, we will have to decline this. 18:41, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. i colorpicked from her kit image, but i, myself, don't see a difference? 01:26, September 14, 2019 (UTC) '''

define the shading depth a lil more 20:58, 9/14/2019

'''reuploaded. 21:42, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

Maybe light the shading a touch and smooth it out on the chest and front legs? --Moo (talk) 22:07, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:59, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

I think that there is some leaking shading where the haunch meets leg Moo (talk) 07:14, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

'''ye, i think there was. reuploaded. 16:07, September 15, 2019 (UTC)'''

Sorreltail (W) ~ For Approval
My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. I love my child​ 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. -- 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^

reuploaded I love my child​​ 16:48, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking a tiny bit on the tail, plus I think it could be smoothed some. -- 23:07, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the chest? It looks rather flat there 17:40, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 15:17, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

I feel as if this doesn't quite match the pattern placement of the queen's tail, which is what it should most reflect since both are on the same definite side; vs, the star is angled and thus not the best to match this blank to

reuploaded -- I love my child​ 17:54, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading any more on the tail? 20:59, 9/14/2019

Squirrel (cat) (Ki) - For Evaluation
Okay since sombody is working on Moon I rebranded by Charart as Squirrel since they're also gray.Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit, since it looks too magenta and not a natural gray color. The shading needs to be defined a bit as well. And remember, don't thumb your images! Just go into source and remove the |thumb from the file name. There is a lot of waste around the character so make sure to remove that, and make sure "For Evaluation" is in the title. Sorry if this is lot to you -- 22:20, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh crud! Ur right I 4got 2 put "For Evaluation"Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh and  I removed the thumbnailBluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

This should also be uploaded as File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png. -- 22:30, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Bte I tired remeoving the wast with the eraser but It won't go away! It's not ven visable when I edit the Charart on Paint.netBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I'll keep tryingBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! My bad The wast is visable on Paint.net it's just hard 4 me 2 c!Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:36, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I wouldn't use Paint, I would use GIMP or FireAlpaca to make images instead since they're way better in quality and can make the image look better (both are free). -- 22:37, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedBluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I c there's still waste! Dang It! I'll fix that imediately!

Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:32, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a lot more and expand it. The shading is far too overblurred, probably as a result of Gaussian Blur (which is not recommended as it causes shading to leak), so it could be sharpened some, retrace it with a 4px paintbrush or pencil and smudge it with a 6-10px brush at 40% strength. The lineart is also overblurred, to fix just erase on your shading layers, and the blurriness will be gone. -- 23:34, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 11:43, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Please continue to reupload over File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png 23:56, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to redo the Charart since I merged the layers on Paint.net before I began to edit the Charart on Gimp Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:32, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

What kind of shading should I use to shade my Charart? Bluedragon64 (talk) 13:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Most people use blurred, smudged, or drawn-on shading. A small other note - please change the earpink to something a little less purple/neony.

Reupoladed! Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:44, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Remember, don't thumb your images. Just go into source editor and remove the |left. Another way to avoid this is to upload from Squirrel (cat).kit.png instead of going back and doing the posting process again. Also, you have a extra .png in the file name so remove that.

As for the image, the earpink is still neon, darken it or desaturate it some. It also needs expanding quite a bit. Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The shading needs to be expanded everywhere except the chest, and smoothed out a lot. Also, add a thinner, darker layer of shading so the image has some depth. -- 12:53, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

How do define your light source? Bluedragon64 (talk) 14:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

If you need help with a light source I'd recommend checking the apprentice tutorials, since they were recently updated with new sources =) -- 14:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

I'm consulting a Gimp apprentence totorial for shading. But I don't know what it means when the tortorial tells me to draw the bits with penicl  "where the image is in shadow". Can u plz explain what that means? Bluedragon64 (talk) 20:58, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

A light source is where the light and shading are supposed to be on an image. Say if the light source was ^, the shading would be on the back, and if down it would be on the flank more. Does this help? -- 21:00, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yes but I'm preoccupied with school and homeworj which is more important. So I'm currently on a bit of a haitus sorry! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smokehaze (Ki) - For Approval
05:33, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading out

There's waste near the ear furthest from us. Also, could you remove the shading above the nose, and add some to the chest? 16:36, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened. But I'm confused where us the light source? Moo (talk) 22:56, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is something similar to this. With this source there would be a tiny bit of light on < this back leg, near the toe line. -- 02:06, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Ah right. Lighten the shading? Moo (talk) 05:11, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, Vec, could you give me an extension with this and Sasha? My tablet’s lost. -- 04:35, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

We can give you an extension until the 18th, but if you do not find it before then, we would have to decline this. 18:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:28, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you lighten the shading a little perhaps? Maybe expand it onto the shoulder, then smooth it by the base of the tail, face, and haunch. 14:12, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

shading could be smoothed all out in general 21:00, 9/14/2019

'''reuploaded. 21:33, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

define the shading more on the tail, remove a bit of the shading on the haunch, and expand the shading behind the front leg closest to us (including the shoulder) 13:32, 9/15/2019

Squirrelfur (W) ~ For Approval
When you stay out in the sun for too long -- I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:03, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Add just a little shading to the >> ear so it doesn't appear flat

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:03, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading a tad bit more on the legs 21:01, 9/14/2019 Your shading on the <--- ear stops at the line where a whisker comes across --Moo (talk) 22:04, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Spiderfoot (W) ~ For Approval
-- I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:26, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail^^

reuploaded I love my child​ 17:07, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading more? 21:00, 9/14/2019

Sandgorse (W) ~ For Approval


Soften the stripes a bit, please. I actually blurred them a bit when I made his pattern. ​​​​​

Re-uploaded blurred them

I feel like the stripe style does not match. It seems like for the other images, and this is what I did for his tunneler, that a rounded brush was used with minimal tapering to the ends (I used an airbrush if I recall correctly). Here they seem too sketch-like and uneven. 18:44, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

I've gotta say, that I'm thinking Vec's comment still stands a bit. She's right, I used a rounded brush, and these stripes still look too squared off. I'm sorry, this was one of my favorite sets of mine and I'm so nitpicky about it ;;;; ​​

Re-uploaded I can't get this to look right to save my life

Furze (R) - For Approval
She's back ya'll -- 01:14, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes on the back legs look like triangle tabby stripes. I know you matched the queen, but the haunch is less visible on that blank.

Could you also expand the shading on the face? And smooth the curved shading for the shoulder and haunch. 18:45, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded To also help the face, I added some muzzle shading. And now I'm happy with the haunch stripes. -- 22:41, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, I think adding a bit of shading at the base of the chest, and at the top of the haunch, wouldn't be remiss. Would help those areas from not looking flat

Reuploaded -- 22:18, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

I meant, the top of the haunch.

Reuploaded lol I dumb -- 03:20, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading a tad more on the flank? 13:33, 9/15/2019

Reuploaded -- 15:30, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Snowkit (Ki) ~ CBA
Comments? 18:54, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add a touch more light on the ears. Also, a suggestion (but not a standing comment), I'd dull the tint just slightly so it won't clash so much with the star. Not req, since tints are always artist choice, but I think just a touch would do.

Reuploaded. 00:37, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in to say that if you want to keep the tint you had prior, feel free to nominate the StarClan kit; it's an old one of mine and I'd be more than willing to match what you have here. ^^ ​​​

Reuploaded. 18:16, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Honeyfur (W) - For Approval
02:24, September 13, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Tighten up the distance between stripes on that haunch patch a little^^

smooth the shading on the front legs a bit more 21:02, 9/14/2019

reuploaded 21:51, September 14, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Owlclaw (W) - For Approval
Not sure if I like or not, will entertain the topic of maybe tweaking it later... Also, does this look green to anyone? My laptop's being funky today. ​​

Doesn't look green to me. Mind defining/darkening the shading just a bit on the creamier parts? 14:09, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. plus other minor tweaks to the coloring. I like this a bit more. ​​

Could you add some shading to the hind paw furthest from us? 18:02, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. One day, I'll remember that back paw exists.... today is not that day, apparently. ​

Hawk (Sister) (Ro) ~ CBA
20:23, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading on the back leg closest to us? 21:03, 9/14/2019

Reups 22:54, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:12, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Fallowsong (K) - CBA
-- 22:55, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:35, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Shrewclaw (Warrior) - For Approval
One of my favorite characters from Tallstars revenge surprisingly Moo (talk) 06:15, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

The shading seems flat. Expand it more and add depth. 07:55, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Add some eye depth.

21:44, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Shrewfoot (Warrior) - For Approval
I need to add some depth to the shading ik Moo (talk) 07:04, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some eye depth? Looks absent.

16:14, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the haunch. -- 16:14, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Shading seems to be leaking on the haunch

shading should be smoothed out quite a bit 21:03, 9/14/2019

Can do! Also how is eye depth fixed? --Moo (talk) 22:01, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Use the burn and dodge tool to make the eyes a gradient -- 22:04, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Oh I did do that but I'll darken them a bit --Moo (talk) 22:08, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Slightfoot (W) ~ For Approval
his dash looks a bit odd compared to his other images? dunno just an observation i found while making it

15:57, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think the dash should be more sharp? -- 16:07, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

the apprentice has texture, and has some very faint highlights too. (the txture is just the base colour but on multiply at like a slightly lower opacity than 100, and smudged slightly. the highlights are above the shading with just white blotches where the light would be the most prominent, blurred at a rate of 5 a few times, then the opacity is very very low. something like 5 or whatever looks the best.) 17:55, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure but the line seems to separate the chest and other leg or something? Don't know if the white should extend past that line

Smokefoot (W) ~ For Approval


16:06, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

theres some odd gray pixels in the tail tip 21:04, 9/14/2019

21:48, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Brindlewing (Ki) - For Approval
23:52, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Shadepelt (AVoS) (W) - For Approval
-- 04:04, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

is there an eye shine or am i just blind? <span style="">13:35, 9/15/2019

Yeah there is. It's next to the pupils on the right. -- 13:39, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (W) (Alt 2) - For Approval
buff wife 14:47, September 15, 2019 (UTC)