Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Patchpelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Patchpelt as a kit. <3 Needed to be redone to match his other images. This is the uploaded version. Comments? 00:21, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cute<3 Define the earpink. 00:43, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink's the same as the warrior's earpink... 00:53, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

The patch on our left isn't quite so far into the chest on the elder image, and the front paw on our right is white. This is really good, Stoney. <3 Breeze  whisker  02:06, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

I can barely see the earpink. Perhaps enlarge it or something? Skt Like a baws  12:37, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Just a preference but blur the edges of the upper chest/neck shading. 83 06:51, 21, 05, 2012

Still working, Stoney? 20:25, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.. 23:16, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 23:26, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

It's the same as the warrior... >.< 23:33, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Broken Shadow (Q) - Redone
Took colors from her sharpclaw, but the pattern is screaming triangle tabby to me. I'd love to redo them both for pattern. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 02:18, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the belly "highlight" round-er... :3 02:30, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah...both of them are total triangle tabbies....anyway, define the shoulder highlight a smidge. 03:14, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Define the "highlights" on the legs. 23:47, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (KP) - Redone
-is going to get eaten- Okay, it was in the tweak nominations page (though can't find it through the archives), but this could more than easily be an un-necessary tweak/a tweak instead of redo. OA was some Old Man, redone to match other images. Comments? o.e 07:30, 21, 05, 2012

I believe this was only supposed to be done by Trolly since she had the file, and was kinda doing it on preference. 08:19, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

She had her chance to do it, but she withdrew it, telling someone else they could work on it. Imho, I thought the image was fine, though.

Eh I don't really care that much, it's just pixels. XD If DJ wants to do it, why not? She speant time making it. ^^ Skt Like a baws  08:42, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. 21:17, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think you over blurred the patches just a tad. Try to make them seem more hard edge (I think that's the word o3o) like the other images. 21:26, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Ues a speckly brush on the edge of her patches. That's the only reason Trolly wanted to tweak it in the first place. That's what I did with her apprentice, a small galaxy brush ^^  22:00, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the patches a bit redder in color to match the other images and define the shading. Breeze whisker  04:33, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, not really red, but a brighter, oranger color. Breeze whisker  04:51, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Fail. But I tried. Comments? 10:14, 22, 05, 2012

Smudge the face patches more like her other images 11:41, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  :3 08:51, 23, 05, 2012

Smudge the patches some more and make them a tad more reddish-orange. 09:11, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (W) - Tweaked
OA was Leafstrike and his tail needed to be fluffier. That's all I'm doing :)  05:41, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart a tad? It looks too spiky. 21:19, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken it where? Please be specific  02:54, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Looks like it could be thickened at the lowest part by his rump. :3 12:20, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (Q) - Tweaked
Tweaked to be darker and I only ran the burn tool through it, so I'm not fixing anything else. Changes can be found here if they aren't. 20:57, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make it darker, and I think (not sure though) that while using the burn tool (as I know for me it happens at times) the shading went a bit blotchy, so blur it a bit. :/ 09:15, 23, 05, 2012

Ferncloud (A) ~ Tweaked
Meh xD Need stripes. Comments? 21:21, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think you forgot her facial stripes~ Skt Like a baws  22:28, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I believe you're right o3o  20:15, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the closest paw a little. Breeze whisker  05:29, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes a bit. 09:10, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (W) ~ Redone
I think i'm actually proud of this considering its my first time trying these kinds of stripes :3 I wen't into this just going to change the shading but it was decided she would be redone, Hope she looks good! 20:25, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

I love it! Blur the shading. Also, this should be uploaded over File:Dawnstripe.warrior.png 20:30, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading and lowered the opacity just a bit -- 20:44, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes should be pale yellow, not white, and the base colour should be darker. 21:02, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Should match now :3 -- 21:28, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and does her eye have a pupil? o3o 21:51, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Add more of the iris (color) over the black part of her eye. ouo 22:59, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eye color/style is artist's choice. 23:05, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, Last time I colored over the lineart (Eye) I was told to put it back to normal.. I love to do the eyes and add lots of depth and color but I don't have much to work with with the warrior blank unless I go over the lineart. So I Can go over the lineart? -- 23:45, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

No, don't go over the lineart. It's fine the way you have it. 23:46 Wed May 23

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading, and changed her color to more of a yellow to match her queen, and I changed her shading color to more of a yellow. -- 00:07, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 00:27, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, you can go over eye lineart if you want, Raven. 09:08, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Songbird (Q) - Tweaked
I think this is light enough. Tweaked to be light brown. OA was Leaf-storm Mistystar. Comments? Breeze whisker  03:55, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Changes are here, just in case. Breeze whisker  03:58, May 24, 2012 (UTC)