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Teller of the Pointed Stones (OTS) (H) ~ Tweaked
OA is Oblivion. 03:45, 5/19/2018

There's waste around chest, -> ear, and tail. Also, could you darken the shading overall a bit, smooth the belly shading, and add some shading to the top of the tail, back paw, and the space between -> front leg and the back leg

Fixed. I won't put shading on the tail tip, around that area, because I'm using the original source. 04:56, 5/19/2018

Ah ok. I'm still seeing a few pixels of waste by the chest, and the space between the front legs, at the top, could you smooth that shading?

I know it's probably the mud, but I'm still having trouble seeing the shading overall. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 15:58, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

I can see the shading fine.

Fixed. Not much I can do for the shading between the front legs, it's on the original file, which I don't have. 18:41, 5/19/2018

I'm sorry to argue but it showed up when you tweaked it and it's very sharp and dark. Are you sure you didn't add any shading there?

Turns out I did, but even without my shading addition it was there. 07:09, 5/20/2018

I can't tell if this is shading on the hindleg or not.. it looks like there are some dark patches near the foot. Is that shading or mud? If it's shading, mind smoothing it a little? If it's nothing, just ignore me :P 02:06, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think it's mud. 04:50, 5/21/2018

Clovertail (E) ~ Tweaked
21:55, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Did you tweak the color? I don't see a difference. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 22:22, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

forgot layers, its right now 22:29, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

The tint looks right, Birchstar's base color looks a tad darker though

reuploaded its pretty much indistinguishable in colour now from where I picked. 23:35, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Add the white belly. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:05, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink is not covered the way and that white line pixel on the leg is like out of place. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:07, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded it doesn't need to cover the whole ear. 06:18, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Here is the base color and stripes color from Birchstar's leader. https://imgur.com/a/7JfQ5BQ Needletail 🐾 #Litten 13:54, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

i've got http://vvcap.com/239oRhMAqY3 which are almost impossible to tell apart, and without files it'll never be 100% perfect so im...not changing anything here. 18:44, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

I have the file. Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 18:46, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

cannot tell a difference betweet eh colours as they are so like I said, I'm not changing anything as I don't have the file for clovertail and it's a miracle Ive gotten it as almost perfect as it is. 18:49, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Oh no that's fine! I just wanted to show. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 21:59, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

apologies if I sounded grumpy. probably shouldn't respond when I've only just come home from work. 22:01, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Heavystep (W) ~ Tweaked
Recent OA is Raelic. <span style="">22:05, 5/19/2018

There are a few spots of the old color: back of the neck, chest, and a few pixels above the bellyish area between the front and back leg. There's also waste by <- front paw

This base should be lighter to match Birchstar. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading? Color tweaks sometimes get rid of shading or make it appear non-existent.

Fixed. Idk what to do about the color. <span style="">18:27, 5/20/2018

Here is the base color and stripes color from Birchstar's leader. https://imgur.com/a/7JfQ5BQ <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:53, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Heavystep (E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color

This should be the base of Birchstar's leader. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what else I can do. The shading on this is much darker than the apprentice, so it seems too dark, but the lightest color on this (like the face) does match Birchstar's leader (If anything it's too light)

The color I have compared to this is very different. <span style="">09:30, 5/20/2018

Define the shading.

Reuploaded Idk what to do Broken, the color matches Birchstar

Here is the base color and stripes color from Birchstar's leader. https://imgur.com/a/7JfQ5BQ <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:53, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Heavystep (A) ~ Tweaked
OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color

This one seems lighter than the other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:04, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes it seems that way. The elder was darker than the other ones before I think because of the shading. I colorpicked the base color of both and the apprentice is actually a little darker than the elder. So should I leave it since the base color is basically the same, or darken it because overall the image looks lighter? I'm not sure Actually, I'm not going to darken it because the color of this is the same as Birchstar

I believe he should match- so maybe make it darker. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:18, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Is it the same color base as birch's leader? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes

Define the shading. The color tweak now makes it look flat.

Reuploaded

Here is the base color and stripes color from Birchstar's leader. https://imgur.com/a/7JfQ5BQ <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:53, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Flowerstar (K) ~ Tweaked
OA was Hawkmask. Tweaked by me to remove the patches on the <-- leg and the belly...I think? 00:13, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes I think that's right. Maybe just smooth out the bottom of the chest patch where you edited it

I don't see what you're talking about, Snowfall? Needletail 🐾#Litten 05:19, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Well it used to be one big patch that covered the belly, and went down <- leg, but those parts were removed, and now the bottom of the patch seems a little hard-edged imo

I don't see it either. It doesn't seem any more hard-edged than the rest of the pattern. Doesn't mean it's not there, though. Vec, humor me and zoom in and see if you can find it.

Reups Or I'll just add a little more white and blur it some more ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Is that better? 18:27, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

I see it now! The shading was hard-edged. Can you just smooth t out a little more? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 19:29, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 20:15, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Sparkpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to darken to match Firestar. OA was Scarletwind. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 15:32, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does this look more brownish than dark ginger-y? <span style="">05:05, 5/21/2018

it's too brown compared to firestar himself. 06:27, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:47, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

same as tge kit; there are paler parts scattered throughout the original design. please define them 18:26, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Redone to match stripe pattern. I had the file so I only tweaked the stripes. Tbh I don't know how I did the design. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 16:05, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fiddled with the shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 04:05, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Jake (KP) - Tweaked
OA is me, and I just stole Firestar's base coloring. Please do not ask me to change the stripes. I was quite proud of them when I made this image, and I'd rather keep them that way.

Which image did you take the color from? This looks brighter than Firestar's images

It's my highlights, since I can't work with the shading properly with these blanks. It's definitely taken from Firestar's images. I got the same colors from the leader, the StarClan, and the warrior. If I reduce the highlights on this, it'll ruin my shading.

Echosong (Star) - Redone
OA is me. Redone for stripes. 19:00, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Do you need the file for this? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 19:27, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

I already have the previous loner version from you, and I color picked from the mc either way, so I think I'm good. But thank you! 20:21, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Her stripes are more brushled out and she has a paler muzzle and stuff and her legs and tail. The stripes around her pale parts are lighter. I'll share a screenshot with the colors. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 20:29, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Ah, I did not notice the paler muzzle and the others you described. My bad XD. Having the file then would be much easier then! My apologies 02:32, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Don't apologize. What's your email? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 02:39, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Lower the opacity of the shading, it's a little dark.

Reups 16:19, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Hoot (L) ~ Tweaked
OA is me, to smudge patches a lil' more to match the other images better

Lightkit (K) ~ Tweaked
tweaked to remove pale parts

Sparkpelt (Ki) - Tweaked
OA is Burntclaw; tweaked for a darker pelt like her grandfather. I had to define the earpink after I darkened it, plus smoothed a few rough pixels out that looked super orange. 02:03, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think we should wait until the discussion that David brought up is over before tweaking this...considering she's called pale orange far more than she's called anything like Firestar. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#438134; font-size:85%">02:08, 5/21/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">) ​

Wait this isn't Bellaleaf. IGNORE ME. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#438134; font-size:85%">02:09, 5/21/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">) ​

I thought you were supposed to keep the earpink color the same

Seems fine to me. It's pretty hard to keep the ear pink color the same without the original file in cases like this. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#438134; font-size:85%">05:11, 5/21/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">) ​

Re-uploaded. to match her warrior. Yeah, i needed to define it, it turned the same color as her pelt when i changed the color. 13:52, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

this covers up the paler parts i had scattered throughout the pelt in the original design, can you ppease define them? 18:26, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) - Redone
OA is Stoneclaw, redone several times by Sziri, Loony, Splook, and Burnt. Redone to match Hawkfrost and Bramblestar. 17:22, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be a little variation in Bramblestar and Tigerstar's stripes? This is like, the same image just with different shading

the entire point of these being redone yet again is to make them virtually identical. 21:30, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Leafpool (MC) - Redone
OA is me. Redone. 17:25, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading.

Re-uploaded: 20:34, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think all stripes should be more smudged out, and the stripes on the legs should be more horizontal, thin, and dense

Sparkpelt (A) ~ Tweaked
18:47, May 21, 2018 (UTC)