Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Squirrelflight (Q) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to make sense. OA was Shelly. The earpink went all funky on me so I had to re-do it. Comments? 02:05, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Changes may or may not be showing >.> 02:48, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:18, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little more too (make it pinker) 15:00, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink is off of her right ear. I personally think it's fine. For the shading, are you looking at the tweaked image? Because on the tweak page it dhows the un-tweaked image. *Might be my computer* 15:29, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm looking at the tweaked version. 17:18, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dark and defined as it can go. 19:42, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think you need to define the stripes. 20:34, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Here's an idea, Sweet. Why not ask Shelly for the .xcf file? That way the shading can be redone without having to define the stripes? 8D

I'll give it a try. Stupid dial-up internet e.e 20:42, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

I sent it to her. Really, people, if you need to tweak something on one of my chararts, just ask and I'll happily send over the .xcf file to make it easier on you. I know it sucks to tweak shading without the original file. (feels shame over her lacking ability to shade queens) 01:14, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Sweet? 06:43, 23, 08, 2012

I could always take this over since I have the original file. Unless someone in the project wants to. 19:41, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh Ooh! Can I do it? owo 19:45, 23, 08, 2012

Send me your email address and I'll give you the file. 19:48, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

This is declined due to lack of work, as well as the one week limit for tweaks.

Re-uploaded Takin' over. Shelly sent me the file so I could redo the shading. Comments? 20:11, 24, 08, 2012

Define the shading a tad. Pad foot Mischief Managed 07:27, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:17, 25, 08, 2012

Boulder (R) - Redone
- Redone to match other images. I made it match the elder image. Comments? (Changes might not be showing. I'll add the pale belly in later. Also, if this is not approved by the 20th, someone may take over.) 23:38, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Changes probably aren't showing so you might want to ignore this but lighten him up a bit. 03:52, 19, 08, 2012

Well, I probably should have uploaded the internal link, but here it is. 22:05, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back paws. 22:52, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Here. 23:51, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add the pale parts in? 15:17, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make his stripes match his other images more? And possibly make him a bit lighter :) Looks great otherwise! -- 16:38, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Try smudging the stripes a tad. That might work c: 08:37, 23, 08, 2012

Well since Icy said if this wasn't approved by the 20th that someone could take over. So if it's alright, I'll take over this. 22:45, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

Brindleface (Alt Q) ~ Tweaked
I swear on my life this is tweak. If anyone has any doubts, I'll email them the .xcf so they can see. All I did was go over the image with a small galaxy brush on GIMP for the mottled and defined the sjading. Comments? 08:41 Sun Aug 19

Changes aren't showing. e.e 08:41 Sun Aug 19

Waste. Waste everywhere. 12:36, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'd removed it before...on the .xcf e.e -is a total derp- 12:40 Sun Aug 19

Can you somehow make the circles around the eyes a little lighter or darker maybe? It kinda looks like blurred lineart. 13:16, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on her tail. -- 16:17, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 16:21, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more, if you can. 23:50, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. 11:38, August 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working, Berry? 14:37, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine. However, can you make it larger (if you want to)

Did you add stripes? I thought we agreed that her image didn't need them.... plus, it doesn't say that on the nomination page as to why it needed tweaked. o.o

Loudbelly (E) - Tweaked
I know this looks redone, but it's not. The shading couldn't be salvaged, but the eyes and earpink haven't been changed (except for the earpink being darkened a smidge). Colors should be the same since they were colorpicked off the warrior. 16:42, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading 00:55, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look purple. (unless it's my comp.) 15:17, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (A) - Tweaked
Pale underbelly was added and the shading was given an orange tint to match the warrior. OA of this and Loudbelly are me (I'm too lazy to go add this to Loudbelly lol) 16:50, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink on ---> side. 17:35, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some. 01:03, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Q) ~ Redone
I mighta forgotten to save the xcf....DX Oa was Scarlet, I think? Idk. 06:19, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Add some raggediness to the tail and while you at it, blur the tail shading a teeny bit. :3 06:20 Fri Aug 24

Re-uploaded. Feh. I knew I forgot something. 07:05, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 03:47, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

The rogue appears a bit blurrier and more smudge with the markings, could you match it a little more? 03:57, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Dawn River (Q) - Tweaked
Just added another layer of shading. Last OA was, I think, Specklestream. Not sure if shading is showing or now. 23:28, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Do you mind fixing her eyes? The pupil in her right is too big and in her left it's too small. Plus her left is looking down white her right is looking towards her nose O_o 03:40, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes may not be showing 23:29, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ro) - Tweaked
I think she gets this, since it was archived...? Anyway, I also changed the fur to match the rogue. I asked on chat and no one had any objections. 03:37, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, OA was Ivy. 03:39, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

I don't believe the fur has to match exactly, but meh -shrugs-  12:22, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lark (Ki) - Tweaked
Tail-tip needed to be more natural. OA's were Leafstrike and Padfoot. Coments? 04:23, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. 21:43, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Oh, goodness. This is like...my least favorite image. For some reason, my version of GIMP is continually crashing, and I don't have access to the xcf....so this //looks// redone. It's not, though. I just massively blurred the hell out of the image and played around with the color. x.x

Can you define the earpink a tad? 04:36, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, since the ear pink on this image is what gives me such a problem to begin with. I think it's good enough for now...since there really isn't a specific color that can really be used... I hate tawny cats so much

Define the tail shading. 21:40, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine.

Dawnflower (Q) ~ Tweaked
Defined shading, OA was Rainwillow. Comments? 13:05 Sat Aug 25

Blur the shading. :3 13:10, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded asdfghjkl I hate you, GIMP >.< 13:33 Sat Aug 25

Fill in the white pixel on the front paw closest to us. And blur the transition from the gray on her paws to her main pelt color. 15:11, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. 17:56, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Fill in the nose. 21:02, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading. 21:40, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken her a bit to be more grey like the elder? 22:25, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur (E) ~ Tweaked
Leggy let me do this. (ilu Leggy and you're sexxu and I am not worthy of you ;u;) And Cloudy let me change the pattern *insert Leggy's comment here* ilu them both <333 I had the file so this is still tweaked. So yeah, comments? 21:57, 25, 08, 2012

Define the ear pink just a tad. And yes, what she says is true. I did let her change the style. The current one as it is doesn't really let you see the rest of the image very well, and it's not the best...so it would end up getting redone anyways.

Re-uploaded ;w; 22:14, 25, 08, 2012

Dawnflower (W) - Tweaked
Just added another layer of shading. OA was Dapplecloud. I don't think changes are showing. 23:20, August 25, 2012 (UTC)