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Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval
OK, I shouldnt be doing black cats on this laptop because the colors are all screwed up and I have to squint to see the shading. But here. 20:01, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her maybe and dull down the Ear Pink. She looks grey on my screen. (correct me if I am wrong about the earpink)  20:14, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a blacked out nose? 03:09 Tue Feb 10

Actually, I think I asked Breezey about this once, and black cats don't need to have black noses. I think they can have a darker reddish nose, or something along those lines.

Mind darkening him a tad? He seems pretty light. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:45, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Brambleshade already said that, Burntclaw^^ Also, may you define the tail shading? 15:55, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Dew Nose 19:46, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over :P 22:13, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Updated 23:12, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Nice job! 23:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna bring attention to the fact that it's got the wrong file name; could an admin fix that for Bramble? 00:07, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe I could fix it. 00:09, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated There we go. I really like her :3 00:11, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mind lightening up the ear pink a little? Gorgeous, Bramble :$ ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated I think she is one fine kitty <3 Any better? 00:21, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the legs, and define the light on the legs. 12:57 Wed Feb 11

Updated I wonder if this has any difference... 19:44, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten ear pink a bit-- 19:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. 21:22, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Stone Song (P3) Ancient ~ For Approval
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 06:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes look unsmudged/blurred compared to his other images. Mind blurring them/smudging them some? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 08:15, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded also added foot stripes i forgot 09:54, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Mind define the shading on the back? He's gorgeous!^^  00:16, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't shading on the back. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:50, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

But, shouldn't there be? 01:19, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

nope no back shading, the source doesn't call for it. 01:22, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 06:28, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it just fine. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 13:04, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Is it my eyes, or is his base slightly lighter on his sharpclaw image?

Looks about the same to me^^ 20:31, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I colour picked off the sharpclaw theres probably just more lighter blue than darker blue i there 00:39, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you just define the shading on all the visible paws just a tad? If you don't want to though, that's fine. He's very handsome^^ 23:45, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded thanks 03:08, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Would you mind defining the shading on the back leg? Feel free to ignore me, if you think it's alright. 01:02, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded 10:48, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Storm Pelt (ki) ~ For Approval
I hate his dad but his mom is nice I guess 19:26, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Would he need a bushy tail or..? 22:28, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think so. He wasn't named for the tail, so as far as I know that just means longhair blank. If we gave lineart tweaks to every cat described with a bushy or plumy tail, like half the cats would have lineart tweaks. 00:03, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

can you define the mottles? I can't see them 05:57, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the tail shading more. ~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:29, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 00:05, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:28, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 01:39, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have a pink nose? and I think its leaking at the bottom of the tail. 20:08, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, this is a grey cat, they normally have dark noses. Also, what's leaking? You should be a bit more specific so the artist knows exactly what to fix. <span style="">20:44, 02/13/2015

I believe he means the shading; but I just think that's a patch of lighter fur. 22:41, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yep, just checked - it's a lighter fur patch 23:08, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink a little bit, it seems really bright compared to the pelt color. 11:23, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 04:34, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Jagged Lightning (Ancient) ~ For Approval
I like his name. Comments? 21:56, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

The sharpclaw isn't smudged as much on the white as this one- mind dulling it down a bit?

Re-uploaded. 03:06, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail? This is gorgeous =) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:30, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. =) 03:41, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

It's leaking where the rump or where the foot is starting at. Ok. Easier words: Hind leg. 19:59, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the white just a tad on his belly? Its not that big of a deal, though. So if you'd prefer not to, thats fine with me. 22:44, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't even know how that leaked. :/ Fixed it. And I smudged the shading on the white chest a tad more, but other than that I think it's fine, you can still tell it's white. 02:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a tad bit on the paws? I like him. 03:52, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, I like him too. c: 23:39, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt L 5) ~ For Approval
I tried to add some texture, but it failed miserably so I just got rid of that. I've never done a leader before; comments? There's some waste under her hind-quarter, which I will remove on my next upload. 21:43, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking. (i think bluestar is cursed) <span style="">21:48 Wed Feb 11

Define the earpink a bit. Splendid job, Sorrel. =) 23:05, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on her legs. Also, smooth it out in a lot of places, like the legs and the tail. 09:11, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

I see a couple of errors besides the waste on the lower rump: There is a grey pixel on her right eye, there is waste on the nicked ear, and waste on her whiskers and the neck. 19:52, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 22:33, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the earpink a bit? 03:53, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it. 09:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I think it's alright. 15:07, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail. 03:35, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the scar just a tad? I can barely see it. It may just be my monitor, so feel free to disregard this if you think its alright.-- 21:13, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reups sure 00:59, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Coal (NP) (Ro) ~ For Approval
okay. 07:01, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

The other Coal isn't archived... ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:32, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

I just archived it because it's early in the morning, I just got off work, and this time it's my fault since I neglected to archive a withdrawn image like I usually do. I'm not feeling well and starting an argument over something as minor as this is just...really dumb. Same with all the other ones that have happened. I'm not gonna start crap over that anymore- it's not worth it and it's counterproductive. My apologies, Breeze.

Define the shading on the back legs please. 19:49, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Its fine, Jayce. Its partly my fault for not paying attention, so theres no need to apologize. =) 22:26, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink and scar a bit? 03:55, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:05, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (Ki) - For Approval
Yes, the shading is black. I don't feel like tinting it since it's not mandatory and it doesn't look green.

Define the shading, and maybe smooth it out a little. <span style="">15:51 Fri Feb 13

Re-uploaded.

If you zoom into the bottom of the picture, you can see waste at the front foot. 19:47, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope I got it... that's odd, though...there's never waste on my images with how I have my layers...

Yeah, that is strange, but you got it off. 20:01, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Mind defining the shading on the ---> front leg? I can barely see any. This looks great =).-- 22:31, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

I doesn't need defining, but it could use a little blur. 00:57, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

I think it needs defining, as it looks like there is only a smidge of shading on the leg. The paw shading could use a blur, but the leg shading needs to be defined. 13:56, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Great Spirits, make up my mind already you nerds. I cannot feel my hands because of how cold it is.

Furled Bracken (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Tiger does it again. =P 03:15, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Very pretty~ =) nice job. 03:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks 03:48, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Eye depth could still be defined, try switching the place here the dark part of the eye starts. 11:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Mew 15:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws a tad. <span style="">15:46 Sat Feb 14

Re-upped 16:06, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you give the shading a bit more depth? 00:55, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 01:01, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define your lightsource? Some paws are telling me it's coming from <== and the tail is telling me it's coming from ==> really pretty ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:00, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 04:17, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Frogtail (Kit) ~ Withdrawn
lol here is this li'l kit :) 02:00, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

I've fixed the placement for you. Get rid of all the waste, define the shading, and make sure that everything is under the lineart. Also, there should be kind of a soft texture to match his other images. Good fr your first, though! ^^ <span style="">02:09 Sun Feb 15

Also, this image should be named Frogtail.kit.png can an admin fix this for them <span style="">02:10 Sun Feb 15

Also, this image should say "For Evaluation" instead of "For Approval" since you are just a kit in the project. Also, define the earpink. 02:16, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re- Upped ugh how do u put the pic in the other corner? -- 03:54, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Just remove the thumbnail. ^^ Can you define the shading a bit more? 03:58, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

The linear art looks cut off. Also, mind darkening him a tad? He looks lovely, this looks wonderful :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:03, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re- Upped, anything else? -- 16:12, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Are you /sure/ that everything is below the lineart? A few places still look off-color, namely the ears and face. The lineart should be pure black. <span style="">16:51 Sun Feb 15

Okay, I'll take a look at it. Going to my sister's piano recital in an hour... -- 16:59, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re- Upped! Cleaned him up and re-did eyes, hope that it is better 😃.-- 18:03, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but that looks exactly like my version I had up before you took over, in fact, side by side they are identical. Please don't steal others' art, it could get you into a lot of trouble. I'm going to guess you didn't know, so I'm just going to kindly ask you take my art down and create your own version. Thank you. 20:45, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

meh. i wanna do another cat :/ ~ withdawing. -- 23:39, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

WAIT! ILL DO IT! plz? --ES BumbleBee (talk) 23:52, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

You have to reserve it on the table first, and please don't use caps. 23:53, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Broken Shadow (Ancient) - For Approval
I'm really starting to like this new shading style. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:13, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink and the shading on the tail? Lovely ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:48, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Defined the shading on the tail - the earpink was colorpicked from her sharpclaw. I also upped the saturation on the shading. It's annoying, the shading looks way too dark and brightly saturated on my iPad, but on my laptop it doesn't look saturated enough. :/ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 08:18, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back paw?-- 06:13, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:33, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Simple amzing :) I love your shading style and everything else 0.0 You're so good at charart!✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 09:02, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Aw, thank you. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 09:03, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Petal (Ro) (Star) ~ For Approval
She's a beauty :p comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Simply lovely! Add a  bit of shading to her side maybe? 15:01, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Um, that is a bit vague, I don't get what you mean. I added shading to her side as the light is coming from ==> there. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 15:06, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? It looks dark on my phone, but if you think it's fine then leave it. she's pretty <span style="">15:52 Sun Feb 15

On my phone it looks fine. 16:53, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Looks perfect on my iPad and Mac,don't change anything yet! 🐈 -- 17:26, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit. <span style="">22:52 Sun Feb 15

Re-ups thanks guys :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:45, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the Earpink, please? 17:06, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink looks fine, but you could lighten the shading on the ears. Also The Fox Girl you might want to move your signature into a template - it takes up a lot of space on the editor. <span style="">21:01 Mon Feb 16 2015

I'm not sure how to fix the ear pink... I put the layer above my shading so I can't Lighten it there. And I color picked from her other images. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:31, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Simply beautiful! Maybe do a highlight of the ears, that works for me. she is my baby great job!

Re-uploaded Thanks ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:34, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Talon (Loner) ~ For Approval
Two new cats for approval on the approval page within a minute XD Comments? I'm proud of this. 08:34, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws? He's handsome. 13:27, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you~ 13:33, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define ear pink, other than that he's gorgeous! 😃 -- 17:30, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

I color picked from his other images, and I can see it fine. But thank you =) 03:32, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Ancient) ~ For Evalution
Meow... 16:57, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

This file should be named "Owl Feather.ancient.png. Can you smudge the speckles, define the earpink, and add shading please? ^^ 17:00, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Also, remember to reserve each new charart. I did it for you. 17:03, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the Earpink? I cant see any. Also, what program do you use? 17:05, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest above all other programs GIMP. I also see a white pixel over < on the paw. 23:12, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Also, the body color seems to be overlapping the lineart. I suggest using layers. 23:43, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re - Upped 23:45, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

used layers 23:46, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and where is your light coming from? It seems to be in random splotches on the body. Try to figure out which direction your light is coming from (straight above, up and to the left, up and to the right, the right, the left, etc.) and where the shadows would fall on the body due to where the light is. For example, if the light is to the left of the body, the right side of the head, the right edge of the tail, the right edge of those front legs, the hip, and the chest would be in shadow, and there would be almost no shading on the top of the back. Would you like me to do a redline? Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:49, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

I made a little redline of what I kind of do on my ancients. Yeah it is weird, but it gets the point across. xD 01:03, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

This also should be named Owl Feather.ancient. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:46, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

First time huh? Be patient with yourself, it takes time to learn these things. Remove that lighter brown around his legs if you can.-- 06:13, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Mistlekit (TPB) - For Approval
What up nerds <span style="">4:07 Tue Feb 17 2015

Was she cited to be in StarClan? But anyways, could you define the ear pink a tad? I can barely see it. This is gorgeous O.O 05:15, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Mistlekit is not confirmed to be in StarClan actually, so I think it this needs to be removed. I know what I’m going to do, fix that page. -- 06:13, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Shy Fawn Ancient
First time trying! Comments?✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 09:45, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Your title needs to say "Shy Fawn Ancient - For Evaluation" since you're kit. Very nice for a first charart. :) Define the shading on the chest and face, and erase a bit of the shading on the right side of the left front leg. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 09:50, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty :) Define the shading on the tail a bit. 09:55, February 17, 2015 (UTC)