Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 50

Mousefur (E) ~ Declined
My, it's been a while! I think I got all the waste this time :P. OA was Sandy, tweaked by Mint (thanks Scarletwind). 01:48, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the ear-pink bigger and the shading looks almost non-existent. She also needs a graying head. OA was Sandy and tweaked by Mint. 01:50, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wasn't she said to be longfurred in Sunrise? Yes, she was, i just checked....Make her longfurred. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:02, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I'll get that done soon. And sorry, forgot the OA. 14:19, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Comments? 14:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

She needs a graying head....take a bit of gray and maybe make flecks on her head? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:37, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, forgot the graying head. Sorry! I'll get it done pronto! 14:40, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can you define the shading a bit more? 14:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Defined shading. The graying head is a fail, I know. Comments? 14:51, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the gray just a tad. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:11, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to have to point this out, but when an animal starts to grey, it typically starts at the muzzle, which is still part of the head. I think you should have the grey radiate from there instead of the top of her head. 21:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, and it says she has a skinny tail, so try making it thinner 22:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you could try to splice the shortfur tail onto the long fur blank? 22:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Why exactly is she long furred in the first place? It doesn't say long furred or fluffy or anything in the description. Just thick furred, and we decided that doesn't mean they have long fur. Why not change it back to short haired> Then her tail will be automatically skinny. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:36, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know when she's mentioned as long furred. I just went by what Maplepool said. 03:24, December 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

If Maplepool can cite it, then it needs to be added to her description and all her images tweaked. 03:26, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sunrise, Page 141. Its on her page, thats where I got it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:28, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It says that she has thick fur on that page. That doesn't nessessarily mean she should be long haired. It's the same with Firestar, he is described with thick fur but he still is short haired. Although, on that page, it says that she is ungroomed, so you could give her maybe some pelt markings like the ones on Lichenfur. 06:24, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Also (and this would warrant all of her images being tweaked) dusky means dark, and she doesn't look dusky in any of her images. Can you darken her base pelt color? 06:50, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, let me get all this straight. You want her to be shorthaired, darkened base color, markings like Lichenfur, and gray on the muzzle? Sorry, just getting really confused. xP 18:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Yup. Though could you actually make the head just kinda a lot paler and less saturates instead of pure gray? And make it cover most of the head, instead of in little specks. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:28, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Shade, you still working on this? If not, I need to revert the image and decline this in about two hours since that'll be the week mark. 22:49, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

We're at a week now. Declining, archiving, and reverting. 01:13, December 31, 2011 (UTC)