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Queen Blanks ~ For Approval
Righty-o. Here we go with the queen blanks. Comment away my friends. ^w^ 09:42 Tue May 28

I'm no expert on this but maybe square up the shape of this --> forepaw and define where the du-claw'd be. I can't really explain how, the but maybe slope the haunch a bit more, it looks kinda flat compared to the shoulders. Gorgeous work, Berry! 22:15, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps ---> this leg could be curved a tad? 22:50 Tue May 28

Maybe you could make both sides of the longhair's tail fluffy? The straight line looks a bit odd. 01:18, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think you could define the top of the nearest shoulder a bit? Also you might disconnect the line on the same shoulder from the head. As is it looks a bit awkward. You also might define the joints a bit more on the other leg and even out the sizes of the ears. Though I doubt you'd need it, if you need a redline feel free to ask. 2:06 Thu May 30 2013

Maybe the tail can be curved a tad more --- no cat's tail is that straight when they walk. 23:22, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, Breezy I wouldn't say no to a redline. xD 06:18 Fri May 31

Re-uploaded meh I did some stuff on the shorthair - decided I'll work on the longhairs later. 12:45 Fri May 31

Maybe slant the toe line on her left front paw the other way, or make it straight up and down? And maybe make a small line over the base of her tail where it joins with her haunch on our left; just to show a little more depth. These are really stunning... 00:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Enlarge the hind paw a bit more and maybe define the "ankle" of the leg that's just behind the lifted forepaw 01:24, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

How about these? Ignore the face, though. Yours is fine. Except for maybe the sizes of your ears, which should be more even. 15:48 Mon Jun 3 2013

Re-uploaded officially naming these blanks Hannibal because they look like they want to eat you. 08:17 Fri Jun 7

Umm... what happened to these? They look odd. different. 10:26, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps thin and even out the tail lineart a little. 10:33 Sat Jun 8

Re-uploaded. Sorrrel, I was given a redline by Breezy to fix up some anatomy issues. .-. Please do not call my blanks odd, and don't comment unless you're offering critique. 10:45 Sat Jun 8

I'm sorry, Berry. I was just surprised by how different they looked. 12:02, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Don't know if this'll make any sense, but can you make the curve around our front right paw more noticeable? 13:20, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

The hind thigh looks lumpy. Maybe smooth it out a bit more? The tail seems bigger than the body. Also, define the front right paw (the one that is not on the ground). 15:03, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

I'm very confused; when you go to the file for this is shows that it looks more like the original version; here it looks like the redline Breezey gave you. Is the wiki playing up? Just asking. 01:39, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe shorten the whiskers by a few pixels, make the tail a bit thinner and maybe shrink her front paws and her right (her right) back paw a just a little. 16:28, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

The bottom of the tail on <--- this side looks like it has an extra line on it, the front part of the belly (or chest?) doesn't look like it connects to the belly smoothly, and the shape of the paws look...off? to me. I don't really know how to explain it, but something about the digits on the paws seem to be throwing me off. 00:49, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

Still working, Berry? 18:28, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yes- sorry for the lack of re-uploads, I've not had access to a computer. The line on the tail, Ivy, is a bit of fur and I'll keep it unless someone else says otherwise. and the Hannibal eyes stay eheheheh 07:35 Fri Jun 14

Possibly smoothen the lineart on the back? (there's like a little place where it rises :P) 12:21, June 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:08 Sat Jun 15

Smooth out the hind food and make the actual part that touches the ground smaller and less bulbous. 4:14 Sat Jun 15 2013

Re-uploaded 04:17 Sat Jun 15

Thin the tail more. 10:22, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I'd like to keep the tail as it is unless someone else agrees. 14:33 Sat Jun 15

Can you make the legs and paws a bit thinner too? 15:40, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. 16:18, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Can you taper the end of the tail a bit more at the tip and the lifted paw looks a little too splayed 00:28, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel. If you think about a real cat, the tail gets thinner at the tip. It does not look that way now - and these are the short-hair blanks after all. I do not want to sound rude. Please don't shoot me! 02:26, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Shorten whiskers by a few pixels? 18:44, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the hind paw just a tad and thin out the tail like Hawk and Sorrel said? Other than that, these are honestly fine. Thistleflight (talk) 22:51, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

Could you please remove the dots above the head? It's a style thing and doesn't go with the style of any of the blanks we have. And yes, I agree the tail need to be thinned out a ton. It's almost thicker than the legs right now. Make the dew claw stick out less on the front paw, and make the back paw a more defined shape rather than a really smooth kinda soft line that makes it look too round and blobby. Shrink the paws quite a bit too, they're much too big for a cat in comparison to the leg size. Clean up the whisker lineart so it's a bit smoother, and maybe vary the lengths of the whiskers. Lastly, the chest is in front of the legs, so at this angle, the line for the chest should go over the far front leg, rather than the line that shows the leg connecting with the body being in front. Honestly, I thought it was mostly fine before and only needed a few minor tweaks, but... :/

Re-uploaded I tried a thing with the front paw but I can change it back if needed. I had issues with the hind paw...a lot of issues. e.e 10:39 Wed Jun 19

Her front paw that's on the ground is bigger then the others. 14:29, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Her back right paw looks as if it is pointing outward, could you possibly make it so it looks like we're looking at it straight on? Those paws look great already, but if you need a little reference, I found this. Also, on the base of her tail, there's just a little stray line there. And last, could you make that line on the back of her foreleg on her shoulder (one that is lifting up the paw off the ground) straight instead of curving in? <span style="">19:30 Thu Jun 20

The front left leg could be curved a tad more. Also, the lifted front paw should be curved more as well. Also, I find that the queen looks a little scrawny. I hate to sound rude, but honestly, I liked it better the way you had it before, but... x-x 00:35, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

There's some pixels on the part where the (our left) part of her tail meets her body, and they look a bit odd. Like Hawk and Paleh, I preferred the version before, but this is good all the same. 01:45, June 23, 2013 (UTC)

Er, yeah, like Sorrel and Hawk, I liked the ones you made before (your first ones better, I don't want to sound rude). Maybe upload it back and just curve the front paw justa scinch.Thistleflight (talk) 21:57, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Okay guys I can see you're all hinting at it, but do you want me to just go ahead and bring back the ones I had before and change what's been told? sighs because I much prefer these but I guess majority rules <span style="">06:44 Tue Jun 25 06:44, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Uh, yes, you really should put the original blanks back. Maybe with a few minor adjustments, though. Thistleflight (talk) 22:34, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Well I think it'd be easier on your side with what changes will need to be made to fit style and anatomy with the old blanks. Of course they'd still need a couple tweaks, but I think it'd be easier overall for you. These are still good though, and it's ultimately up to you I believe.

Reverting back to the "original" blanks may be a bit more drastic than need be, especially since you'd basically loose all that progress of getting some aspects of the anatomy, as it is currently, looking well done. Maybe overlay the original and the current version and figure out any extremities that might need fixing with reference from Raelic's redline like the forepaws and the tilt to the back paws. Good job, Berry. 22:55, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

I think you should change back. I'm sure other users would be *Dives behind brick wall* okay  with the decision. It matches the other linearts much better and, like Paleh said, would only need a few more tweaks. Great job on everything Berry! 23:18, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

I do believe Berry gets the point of multiple users preferring her original blanks. I ask that if you're going to comment on the blanks, please comment on what she has uploaded, as the message of a majority of users wanting the other blanks back has very easily been proven. Seriously guys, enough already; she gets the point.

Agreeing with what Cloudy said above; these are the blanks that she has uploaded. Berry prefers these blanks and these are hers to work with and manage. We've already put a lot of effort on these blanks to make them the way they are now, and it seems almost like a waste of that effort to go right back. Both blank styles are beautiful, but like Cloudy said, these are the ones uploaded, and the ones we should be sticking with. I like these ones we have now, but right now isn't the place for opinions, I believe. <span style="">03:06 Mon Jul 1

I'm actually having a lot of trouble with the anatomy on these blanks, combining the older with the newer ones and stuff. If anyone could offer up a redline, it would be hugely appreciated. <span style="">11:06 Wed Jul 3

Here. I tried, seriously. It may not be that amazing but I tried. 16:58, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Okay so I found the image I used as a ref for the original blanks and messed around I know it sucks plz don't rub it in. <span style="">05:17 Mon Jul 8

She looks... rather stocky and muscly. Flatten the shoulder and back so they don't rise so much. Add toes to the paw that's off the ground. 20:37, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

Lengthen the shoulder a bit where it meets their back. These are fantastic, Berry! Thistleflight (talk) 21:31, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

In the picture I referenced this from, that is how the back and shoulder look. The way th lifted paw is raised, as well, would make no toes visible, and if they were the paw would look crooked. I'd rather not touch these thing unless someone else agrees. <span style="">04:40 Tue Jul 9

I was going to do this pose as well when I entered, but I saw you used it already. Referencing back to the original image, I'd say the shoulder should end just above the tip of the right ear (the cat's right, /not/ our's), and the lifted hind paw should have two toes visible, so one toeline should be on it. Berry, these are wonderful ^-^ <span style="">23:55, 07/9/2013

Re-uploaded <span style="">04:54 Wed Jul 10

No I really agree the toes should be defined on the front paw that's off the ground. For them not to be visible at all, the toes would have to be really curled, which isn't very natural. They wouldn't be super defined in this position, but they'd be very clearly visible.

The lineart looks choppy in places, could you smoothen it out a bit? One way to do this is add a few pixils to the edges where it curves and it gives the illusion of smoothness  21:08, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Also, now that I have a bit more time to comment, the shoulder of the paw on the ground is much too defined and large right now, and the place where it connects to the head is lined up in a way that it doesn't look connected to the actual leg. Try and follow the curve of where the lines would be if they were visible. The front paw that's on the ground also looks a bit twisted with that extra line on our left side. I'm not sure if that's the dew claw or a line to try and define the paw some more. If it's the dew claw, make it stick out a bit from the leg, so it appears more like an actual toe that has mass to it. The chest needs to follow the curve of the belly more, and as I said before, the chest would be in front of our right front leg at this angle. The place the elbow connects to the body shouldn't be visible. Try and thin out the haunch a bit, as she's starting to look a bit just overall chubby rather than pregnant. Our right back leg seems to both be oddly positioned (too high and too far to our left) and doesn't quite look clearly like a paw. It looks more like the bend in the leg right now, but nothing goes past the bent front foot that would show. Try and make the tail a bit more of a consistent thickness, only getting slightly thinner at the tip, and overall just slim it down a bit. Also, the eyes look a bit odd right now, like they don't quite match the way the other was drawn (trust me, I know what a pain they can be x.x), try and pick either one of them and make the other eye match a bit better. I do believe with cats, the back leg doesn't have a dew claw, but feel free to correct me if I'm wrong. If I'm not, please remove that. And try and make the shape of the back paw curve with where the toes would be, rather than just a random kind of "guessed" curve with toes added in. That's a bit hard for me to explain, and if it doesn't make sense I can redline that part. And finally, the whiskers still look kind of choppy and just not very smooth at all, try and smooth them out.

The bridge of the nose seems a little thick and straight and is throwing off the nose. The nose doesn't really look like a cat's nose, it looks more like a triangle. The muzzle needs to be smoothed out more, and the eyes' lineart seems to be choppy in places. Also, the front left (our right) leg looks like it bending in a bunch of directions and the lineart is choppy. The face sort of reminds me of one of my grade-school bus-drivers. *shudders*  21:22, July 12, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah gonna be away til Thursday so I'll upload then. <span style="">22:35 Mon Jul 15

I'm not trying to sound mean or anything but it has been 19 days since you reuploaded and 14 days since you said that you would update this, so I have to inquire if you're still working on this? 16:34, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Pigeonpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? c: 23:22, July 9, 2013 (UTC)

The shade of gray doesn't match the kit image, and the smudging is both too extreme and needs to follow the flow of the fur and the body.

Reuploaded Changes are not showing, I believe. Is this okay? 22:58, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

His paws and legs look rather grey. Maybe just erase a little shading there? He looks very nice! <span style="">23:35 Wed Jul 10

Nice job, Misty! However, I do believe that there's a (faint but present) layer of texture on the gray on the kit c: Bb  un   legs  02:05, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Where's your light source coming from?

Personal preference undefined, but the shading is really dark to me. Lighten or keep, if no one agrees. Maybe it's just my screen <span style="">03:06 Sun Jul 14

Hmm, would you like the file for the kit to help ya' out, Misty? o3o 01:13, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whoops, sorry for being late >.< I wanted to upload the redone shading before I did anything else p: Oh, and sure, I guess so, Beebs c: (do you need my email again?)  01:19, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

The white is looking gray. 23:44, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 14:56, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^  23:22, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit, and make the texture a bit more visible ouo 00:59, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge the shoulder just a teensy bit. Though this is just me. -- 22:26, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you for the xcf. Beebs! c:  23:17, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

There's some texture on his other patches as well, I believe. 23:20, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Mmm, I think it's fine. 23:27, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Hm, I agree with Beebs, after all, she'd know, she's the kit's OA. 18:16, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I thought you couldn't have texture on one part of the cat and not the rest? If it's on the gray, it should be on the white too. Regardless, you really can't tell if there's texture or not on the kit. o.O

I agree; the texture is hard to see on the kit, and it seems to match fine without it. Her chest and her back near the spine is looking rather gray, can you add highlights to them? I think it should help out with any gray-white shading. I really like this. :) 17:40, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this okay, Knight? ^^ I didn't want to mess up the light source with any highlights, so I tried something else. 03:51, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Doespring (Ki) ~For Approval
I think she looks O.K xD But eh I'm not sure. <font color="#90D547" face="Mistral" size="3" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">R <font color="#BBD547" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">u <font color="#D5CB47" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="#E59B3B" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="lightgreen" face="comic stans ms" style="background:transparent;">Patchey <font color="lightgreen" face="comic stans ms" style="background:transparent;"> 00:18, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define her shading? She looks a bit flat. 03:00, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

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Perhaps sharpen it just a little more? 03:46, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

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Liittle more, still looks overblurred and a bit flat as a result.

Re-ups. GIMPs being a pain. <font color="#90D547" face="Mistral" size="3" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">R <font color="#BBD547" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">u <font color="#D5CB47" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="#E59B3B" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="lightgreen" face="comic stans ms" style="background:transparent;">Patchey <font color="lightgreen" face="comic stans ms" style="background:transparent;"> 14:35, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Thin out the shading; I can hardly see that she's pale brown... 15:52, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

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This needs to be a .png file, not a .jpg. Please fix that.

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Could you lighten up her a little bit more, and then add/define "highlights" (not necessarily a new layer, just places where there is no shading) to the paws, legs, face, and maybe a little on the tail there. Nice job~ <span style="">18:28 Wed Jul 10

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This should be named File:Doespring.kit.png <span style="">22:52 Wed Jul 10

^ Bloo is right. What you need to do, is you need to "Export" the file from GIMP[if that's what you use], save it again, check all the boxes except the very top one, then it becomes a png file. 13:46, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups 05:28, July 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups. 17:45, July 12, 2013 (UTC) 16:06, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on the face. It's also suggest you look at the Signature Policy and try to make your signature a template so that it doesn't create a wall of coding. <span style="">4:59 Sat Jul 13 2013

Okie. And I did. 05:28, July 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups, I can change it if its still too dark. <font color="#90D547" face="Mistral" size="3" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">R <font color="#BBD547" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">u <font color="#D5CB47" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="#E59B3B" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="lightgreen" face="comic stans ms" style="background:transparent;">Patchey <font color="lightgreen" face="comic stans ms" style="background:transparent;">undefined 20:12, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on the face more. <span style="">19:30, 07/18/2013

Define the tail shading a bit. 03:36, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Still working on this? 05:53, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups. It looked weird when I uploaded it... <font color="#90D547" face="Mistral" size="3" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">R <font color="#BBD547" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">u <font color="#D5CB47" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="#E59B3B" face="Mistral" size="3"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="lightgreen" face="comic stans ms" style="background:transparent;">Patchey <font color="lightgreen" face="comic stans ms" style="background:transparent;">undefined 17:43, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Just smudge the pelt into her earpink a lil bit. 02:51, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink lots as it's looking rather solid. Thistleflight (talk) 16:24, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 21:16, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ User:Takeachance32

Define the shading on the tail and chest some, and define the light source on the tail as well. 01:07, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

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The shading is looking a bit flat; could you sharpen up the shading, along with expanding the "highlight" on the a face and defining the "highlight" on her left front leg? 17:05, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

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Bess (KP) - CBA
lamborghini mercy, splook is so thirsty <span style="">19:55 Wed Jul 10

I don't know if it's my computer, but the shading is so dark on her already dark pelt that I can't see it or the lineart. Could you lighten it a little and maybe add highlights? 21:04, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy. Also, lighten the left ear pink a tad to match the other? 03:50, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="">15:52 Thu Jul 11

I don't know if the shading on the leg should be that way, it makes it look liek it's coming from a didfferent way to the rest. She's preeeetty 06:07, July 12, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading some? If you want I can shoot through the rogue's file ouo <span style="">15:16 Fri Jul 12

Reuploaded. Thanks Berry, I'll ask you if the colors are off ouo Just a heads up, I'm leaving for a week tomorrow for vacation and won't have computer access. Hope you all understand. <span style="">00:30 Sun Jul 14

I can barely see the lineart and texture. 19:47, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 15:41, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

The shading on the hind paw is really gray. She's pretty~ 20:17, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Splook is gone for a week - she's at camp. If you would do me a favor and just hold this for her, that would be great. She just forgot to warn you guys in advance. 02:02, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I actually did warn everyone in my last reupload, but thank you Icy. <span style="">02:29 Mon Jul 22

The nosepink is pink on the rogue, and it should be on this as well. Nice work! 21:19, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Black cats should have black noses unless otherwise specified, last I checked.

So do I keep it black? <span style="">21:00 Tue Jul 23

Yes it needs to be black. <span style="">4:36 Wed Jul 24 2013

Still working, Splook?

She doesn't exactly have any critiques she needs to fulfill... 17:28, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

This is true. CBA? <span style="">17:29 Mon Jul 29 2013

Hickorynose (Alt W) - For Approval
And here's the alt to go with it! Everything is from the warrior except pelt color, tinting has been changed to suit a gray cat, and earpink is slightly different (I don't feel like the color is right though, can someone help direct me to which color gradient is most appropriate?) 06:11, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Define eye depth, and I can't see the light source. <span style="">19:46 Sun Jul 14

I think both are fine, perhaps just expand the unshaded area around his shoulder and the shading depth on his front paws. x3 19:56, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah the eyes are the same as on the Warrior so I'd really rather not touch it. I'll see what I can do about that in a little Duck ^^  21:48, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe blur the highlight around the chest area? 12:13, July 17, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded I tried, does this look any better? <:  06:18, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the highlight on his chest area? 00:59, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the highlight more, and define the shading. 02:06, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define the highlight, if any, on the front leg closest to us, and the hind leg closest to us. Nice work! 03:35, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't really like how the unshaded part of the chest looks but I'm not used to unshading that part  23:25, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Expand it just a little more. 23:26, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

I have darker shading underneath of his chin and directly under his head though, and to me it just doesn't look right. Do you mean more out ---> this way and not up, because if so I can do that  23:35, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, more to our right. 23:37, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

reuploaded  07:29, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit? <span style="">0:07 Thu Jul 25 2013

Reuploaded I'm going to be getting some dental work done and I'm going to be at my Mom's for a few days (without Internet access), but I will be back within a week so yes I am still working on this :>  16:26, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Bristlekit (Ki) ~ Under Evaluation
Bristlekit is back up! Forgot to put in the table last time. I also fixed the shading and the mottled-look. Comment away! ^_^  23:44, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Where's your light source? I can't find one. Also, blur the shading a lot once you have one. <span style="">01:08, 07/15/2013

Didn't notice this at first, but remove the background. <span style="">01:12, 07/15/2013

There is no background.. :/ But I'll do the shading..and if I have time I'll find a tool that /removes/ backgrounds..possibly the eraser. 08:30, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the shading, adding a light source. If you know how to get rid of the background when it's on gimp, please tell me so I can forward it to Darkfrost as well. o.o 08:52, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I changed the shading, using a darker color and having a lighter source. Changed the eyes, since I thought these looked cool for a WC cat. And I got rid of the background. 16:00, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Base pelt needs to be less gray and more black, and shading needs to be blurred, defined and thinned out. 16:01, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

It is black..you may be talking about the gray shading. Or you didn't see the changes. But I'll thin out the shading and blur it. 16:06, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrel's correct. This appears to be a bit light for a black cat.

Re-uploaded. Sorry Sorrel and Cloudy, I realized you guys were right. I made him darker. 16:23, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Ear pink's rather too neon. And that gray bit/highlight in the middle either needs to be made darker and blurred. 16:34, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Is the grey chest the base pelt or the shading? If it's the shading; perhaps change it to another color? So it's not confusing. <span style="">22:11 Mon Jul 15

The patch of bright highlight in the center of its chest isn't enough to really tell us where the light source is. Add some highlights to the face and legs, and make it darker and less sharp. If you need any help, feel free to leeve a message on my talk and I'll help :3 <span style="">22:49 Mon Jul 15

Re-uploaded. I narrowed the shading in the middle down, making it the light source. And I made the ear pink more pink. And thanks Kelpsey, I will:)  23:36, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the chest, and define the shading. Also, expand the earpink to the whole ear. ^^  01:32, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Expanded the ear pink, defined the shading, and blurred the highlight. 01:56, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Remove the random gray dot in the middle of the chest. This has improved quite a lot since you first put him up x3 15:06, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. And thank you, Sorrel. xD 20:49, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Not rushing, but it's been about a full day since someone commented on this. So, I'm kind of waiting for someone to say "CBA" or something..is it and will it? 19:23, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Where's your light source? Also, define the shading, and then blur it. The earpink is also looking a bit purplish and too florescent. 19:40, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

I was told to remove the light source. Defined the shading already. And blurred it. I matched everyone else's shading skills that got CBA'd. And if you lean in, you can see my shading better. But I'll make the ear pink more pinker. 19:52, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

No, you were told to remove the random gray dot in the middle of the chest. Either way, here's a guide to shading placement. And it doesn't matter if you already defined and blurred the shading, I'm asking you to do it again because there really shouldn't be an excessive need for me to lean in to try and make out the shading. Also, if you want to talk about matching shading skills, take your image, set the base pelt to something like a florescent pink, and then ask for another user's image with layers (.xcf, .psd, etc.) set the base pelt to the same color as you set yours, and then compare the two. I'm not saying to post them but just look and compare the two. 19:58, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Don't be angry...I'm new to this. I'm not sure how to do some of that. I'll try again. What should a light source look like? 20:03, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

The light source is basically the light and what direction it's coming from. You have to think about where the light would hit and where it wouldn't. If you look at the shading guide Teldy linked and shade where it says to you should be fine. If you need help with some things feel free to leave a message on my talkpage or pop into chat for a bit and I'll try to help out some. ouo <span style="">20:22, 07/17/2013

Thank you, Shimmer. I'll have it re-uploaded tomorrow morning. 23:05, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added shading with a positive light source from the left side. I also made the ear pink more pink, destroying the neon. Anything else? 12:11, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Make the shading less blotchy, and make the ear pink a little more on the gray-ish level. This appears too purple-ish pink to really fit well with the pelt color you've picked.

Re-uploaded. Fixed the shading and ear pink. Anything else? 20:56, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Shading looks rather blotchy. 21:32, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

It looks as though you're working over the lineart, also the earpink is looking a tad to neon. Black cats generally have a pale skin color. <span style="">23:36 Sat Jul 20

Re-uploaded. Fixed the shading and the ear pink>thanks for the info, Bloo. I needed it;) 11:24, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Been no comments for almost a full day.. 23:27, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Shading still doesn't appear to have a light source?

I see the light source from the top left. Maybe a lighter shading would help define it? 03:42, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Eh, I still don't think so. It seems like it's just really thrown onto the image, instead of actually done like a vast majority of the other images on this wiki. A lighter shading would actually make it /harder/ to see, btw.

Re-uploaded. And Minty was saying that I needed a lighter color, btw. So I fixed the shading, making the light source coming from the right this time. Since the head didn't satisfy. And may I ask that you guys be more specific when asking what me to do? It's my first charart, so I'm not as experienced with knowing what you guys are looking for. So when you say "define shading" for example, please tell me what you mean: Like if you want it to be brighter, lighter, darker, etc. Thank you! 01:35, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Cloudy did mention the lighter color. Defining shading means to make the shading stand out more, such as darkening it or sharpening it. <Here is a guide as to where your shading and highlights should go. Also on that page are tutorials on how to /do/ improve your shading. The highlight on the side lightens the color quite a bit; I would suggest using black as your shading instead of a lighter color to "push back" shallower areas of the charart. The shading on this image also needs to be on the legs, tail, and face as well as the side, and the shading needs to be blurred. 04:05, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Still working?

Re-uploaded. And yes, Cloudy, I am. Sorry! I've been busy with sports awards and stuff like that, and I've been trying to squeeze in working on my charart. I have a lot more time now, so don't worry. How is this? I had the shading get darker as it went across the body, since I imagined it hitting the back right of the image. I have also been "observing" how shading works in real life, and am putting that into practice. xD 11:15, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the highlight to make them blend more with the pelt, and could you perhaps lighten the shading, too? I can't really see the lineart. 15:16, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Not to deny your request, but if I lighten it again, someone will tell me to darken it again. And I made sure the lineart was still visible. But I'll blur the shading. 00:38, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:45, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Misty's right, lighten the shading a bit, please.

Re-uploaded. Lightened it. Blurred it. I tried to get rid of all the waste, but if there still is some, please point out where o3o It's hard to see the waste with a dark image. 13:08, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had seen some waste after I posted. 13:25, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Meadowslip (W) ~ Under Evaluation
Meadowslip is back, and I made sure I was in the table this time! -Fixed the shading majorly- Comments? 23:43, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Where's your light source? I can't see that a consistent one has been kept throughout the shading. Make the earpink more of a pink color, it's tending towards purple now. Also, blur the shading a lot, it's looking blotchy as of now. <span style="">01:00, 07/15/2013

Oh, also, remove the background. <span style="">01:11, 07/15/2013

Also, add more shading, and some on the head, and make it darker. <span style="">02:33 Mon Jul 15

Define the light on her front legs. 16:42, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Blur shading a ton, add light to front legs, expand earpink, and make the earpink less neon and more pink/paleish grayish. I feel like the color description I just gave you is extremely vague, so around this hex code=>8A7266 nice job so far. :] <span style="">22:58 Mon Jul 15

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Kelpsey. And, sorry this took awhile. I'm not sure if this is what you guys were looking for, but while I was working on it, I did a darker shading and a lighter ear pink. If you guys hate the shading texture, I'll change it. 01:46, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Still no light source. You need to find where the light is coming from (ie; top right) and then figure out where the shaded areas would be based on that. There's a shading chart here on the tutorials that you can look at if you need to. And define the earpink and make it a bit more grayish? It can barely be seen and still looks a bit neon-ish, imho. Try around #be9b9b? <span style="">02:16, 07/16/2013

Shimmer is right on the shading..but I think the ear pink is fine[sorry!] 09:50, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Shimmer, I respect your opinion greatly on the ear pink, but if I go any grayer, it will be transparent. So I'd prefer to keep it the way it is. And it doesn't look neon, it looks pink. Also, I will redo the shading according to your wish. I was just imagining Meadowslip in the long grass, stalking a mouse when I did her shading. I'll upload around 9-10am my time. 09:53, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

I'm going to agree with Shimmer on the earpink. It does still look a bit neon, and it needs to be defined, and made more gray-ish. 11:18, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the shading[I think it looks amazing now]. I added a light source to the shading as well. I made the pink more gray and less neon. Any more problems? 13:30, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Shading needs to be blurred and defined a lot.And I don't think the light source makes sense. Take a look at the warrior's shading placement here for a little guide. 14:57, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the shading to match with the exmp..since that's what it seemed you guys were looking for..anything else? 21:05, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the head, and the ear pink still looks too neon.

Define the shading quite a bit. 23:49, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Although it may be just me, she looks a bit too pale, sorta nearing gray...maybe darken the base color a bit? Only if you want, though o3o 01:50, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Darkfrost, this wasn't declined before because you weren't on the table, it was declined because Icy had it reserved long before you. And she still does. Declining yet again. Please check the archives when you have an image declined to see the reasoning before posting.

Oh goodness, it's been much too long. I'm sorry, I confused the one week limit on original image reservations with the two week limit on tweak calling. So Icy's reservation expired before you reserved, I'm sorry. I'll undecline this. However it is going as Under Evaluation, as you're a kit.

I think the lineart's a bit blurred in places. 13:33, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

The lineart is not blurred, that is a darker shading. Trust me, I double checked. And, I'm not sure what "Under Evaluation" is supposed to mean. And, if Icy still wants to do Meadowslip, I can let her have it. I'm just a mild beginner at this, and I'm not that good at lighter cats as you can tell. :/ I'll practice lighter cats, though. But if Icy wants it, she can do it and I'll do a darker cat. :) I don't mind at all. ;) 19:18, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Lemme upload again and see if you guys like it.. 19:25, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Under evaluation is explained in the guidelines and Icy's reservation is invalid also explained in the guidelines. The lineart should look exactly the same as it does without a base pelt, shading, earpink, and the works with the exception of maybe the eye when concerning this particular cat. The shading needs to be emphasized and blurred as well, and their ought to be some shading on the tail. 19:44, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:48, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred and needs to be fixed. Also, define and blure the shading, it looks really flat. The earpink needs to be defined, I sort of have to squint to see it. Are you using layers? And what program do you use? 20:27, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

It looks like you're working over the lineart. o.O Try working under it, as that's what's making it look off.

Could you make the gray a bit darker? Right now, it's a bit more like pale grey. 23:04, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Well, after a quick review of Meadowslip's profile, I noticed it only said gray. Not pale gray. So oh yeah, I made her gray. Fixed the line art. The line art on the head looks weird to me, but I didn't know if that's how it's supposed to be. I also fixed the shading, making sure there is a light source. Anything more? 12:47, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

We're not out of the woods yet. Blur the shading. 14:30, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried out a new tool for the shading, and it worked wonders... I think it's almost perfect now. And I fixed the line art on the head because it was driving me nuts. Are we almost out of that woods now, Sorrel? xD 17:19, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Not quite. Try Gaussian blurring the shading layer. Gaussian blurring will make the shading look more like shading. Right now the shading looks rather like a blurred paintbrush size 9, and nothing else. 18:33, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

The lineart on the head looks odd. I would like you to fix that. Also, you can raise the opacity and rate of your blur tool to make it blur much more than that. And the ear pink is a little neon, and you can see here to grab a color that would suit gray more. Blur the ear pink some more. Also, the shading looks very flat, and define the highlight on the back paws if you'd like. The lineart is blurred in some places. Do you use layers, by any chance? 20:09, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yes I use layers. And I use GIMP, Hawky. Also, blurred the ear pink more. Put some highlight on the back paws. Increased my blur rate[didn't know you could do that xD]. And I have it set as a much darker gray...I don't know why the wikia isn't uploading it right. :/ 20:35, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

The lineart still looks odd... it's like it was "painted over"... and the shading needs to be darkened, blurred, and spread out a little more (last part is imho and totally optional).

Re-uploaded. Spread it a little and blurred it, but I didn't do it too much because I feared it would look pixelated. I also fixed the lineart, sorry that I painted over it a little..anything else? 21:19, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

It still needs expanding and defining. Use the shading placement link I gave you, and did you try using Gaussian blur? 21:33, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart and the earpink looks a bit neon. 19:12, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the shading. Fixed the lineart. Fixed the earpink.

It still appears as if the lineart is either blurred or 'painted over'. The shading needs to be darkened some, expanded, and probably blurred a bit. <span style="">12:10, 07/22/2013

Define the earpink/make it more pinker ^^  23:14, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

The lineart is still messed up. If you're using layers, the lineart should be the top layer, or second to top, depending on how you make your eyes and ear pink. o3o

Re-uploaded. There had been darker shading around the lineart, causing it to look painted over. I fixed all of it.

Ehhh, lineart still looks choppy in some places.

As for the lineart, may I suggest to go get another lineart image, open it on a layer above the image, selecting and then ctrl+x away the white, and then making your old lineart layer invisible? It'll fix any lineart issues, if you want to do so. Also, can you please add some more shading to the back of the cat (use a black airbrush airbrush at about 20), and the back of the legs, and darken it. Then blur it some more. This image is making great progress, keep up the good work! 16:22, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Smear the pelt into the earpink. 00:11, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Define (or rather, darken) the shading by the chest area. Want2know (talk) 15:26, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

I would actually suggest to get rid of the shading on the chest, as it doesn't match the light source on the paws. Are you still working on this? 17:16, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

._. Someone earlier told me to put shading there, though. And yeah I'm still working, been busy though. My image will be up later on today, as I am redoing the whole thing because I couldn't take the line art thing anymore. Which I don't mind doing it, since I wanted to try out some shading Rave recommended to me. 11:31, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

You need to upload today, or else this image will be declined, Darkfrost. You have one week from the last upload to upload again, or else it's considered lack of work.

Re-uploaded. Got a darker gray to work. And, it looks so unfinished because it is. Due to Cloudy's threat, I had to upload it when it wasn't done. So I will accept your comments. I need them greatly. ._. 12:54, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and where's the earpink? 12:59, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. And like I had said before, Sorrel. It wasn't finished due to Cloudy. And I also blurred the shading for you. 13:32, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Please stop saying it's Skye's fault you didn't get your image finished. .-. It's not her fault. The earpink is still too neon, try the colour hex code #d7aeae. <span style="">13:41 Mon Jul 29

Re-uploaded. How's that? And sorry for slamming Cloudy.. 14:23, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Blur your shading a bit. 16:43, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Darkfrost, one week without uploads is standard procedure for PCA. .-. If I see one more negative comment towards myself or any user, I'll decline your image. we've done that before for users who decide to blame others and be rude, and I won't hesitate to do it again if you're being rude. I didn't threaten you, as it's part of the guidelines. That being said, thicken your shading too.

Now senior warriors could also be a bit less rude in when we're saying images are going to be declined in the first place, now can't we? Either way, move that highlight on the head up to the top of the face, if that makes sense, and add some shading to the back of the shoulder. <span style="">18:30 Mon Jul 29 2013

Mole (Cat) (Star) ~ Under Evaluation
So after careful analysis, here's my first Charart! Hawktalon (talk) 00:04, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading, and doesn't he need texture? 00:05, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Are you referring to the fur strands you see in the rogue picture? Hawktalon (talk) 00:09, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Yup, that's what Beebs means. It's gotta be there, considering it's on the rogue. They've gotta match. Also, based off the rogue, there should be a lighter underbelly, muzzle, and paws. And there's some waste by the head on the <-- side. <span style="">00:13, 07/16/2013

You might also want to define the shading too. <span style="">02:09 Tue Jul 16

Shading looks a tad flat. 13:31, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Since this is your first image, I believe this needs to be 'Under Evaluation' so I changed the heading ^^  03:53, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 18:34, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

There's some waste by the right ear. Thistleflight (talk) 21:24, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foreleg furthest from us. 14:54, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Also noticed some waste beside > this ear too. Very faint, but indeed waste. 11:39, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm working on it. I just need to find the texture used and then I'll reupload. Want2know (talk) 13:39, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yes, I know there's no texture, but I still need to find the texture used. I've removed the waste and defined the shading. Hawktalon (talk) 15:54, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

What do you mean by "find the texture used"? You create the texture on your own, with layers and layers of work. If you don't know, you can ask Raven, the OA of the rogue image, to find out how she made it. ^^;;


 * I asked Raven, and am awaiting an answer. And as for the texture, I'd prefer to have it as close to the original texture as possible (.)^D Hawktalon (talk) 16:06, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading more. 00:57, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. With the help of Raven, I've added the texture, as well as darknened the shading. Want2know (talk) 18:36, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

The texture needs to be all over his body. His muzzle and underside need to be pale to match the rogue, too. 18:41, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I've put the texture all over the body, as well as paled the underside and muzzle. Want2know (talk) 19:33, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Define shading; and make sure they layer opacities all match the rogue. Looking Good! c: <span style="">19:53 Thu Jul 25

Re-uploaded. I did what was asked. Want2know (talk) 21:09, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

There's some waste beside both forepaws and tail. --Ambershine223 (talk) 21:41, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Took out the waste. Want2know (talk) 23:29, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the darker parts of your shading? Also, his chest should be a lighter grey color, like on his paws. 17:19, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. So I've defined the shading by darkening it, and lightened the chest. Want2know (talk) 17:46, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Define the texture heaps. <span style="">01:37 Sun Jul 28

Re-uploaded. Added more texture so it's more visible and defined. Want2know (talk) 02:05, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Define shading and light source; also the texture looks as though it could still be defined. <span style="">04:19 Sun Jul 28

Shading needs to be defined and your texture patches need to be blurred. 11:35, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

^ Lol! I realized when I read over my comment that I wasn't making much sense. What I mean by "blurring the texture patches" was that you should blur the highlight as it comes in contact with the fur. It looks kinda blotchy now. 11:38, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Flamepelt (E) ~ Declined
Re-posted! Um, I tried to fix all of the things Knight suggested before this got declined. Changes aren't showing. Comments? 01:46, July 17, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the paw shading just a tad? Nice work, Shade 01:48, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks! Changes not showing. 01:57, July 17, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

The stripes still look a tad paintbrushy imho, smudge them a bit more? 05:33, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. '''I don't think the changes are showing. 22:55, July 18, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Could just be me, but the stripes almost look redder up front. 00:07, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Can you expand the earpink to fill the whole ear? 22:50, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 15:18, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry Shadewing, but I have to decline this due to lack of work >.<  23:27, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over. 23:27, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Finchkit (Star) ~ For Approval
Ugh I dun like how this turned out <span style="">06:19, 07/17/2013

O I just noticed I forgot to change the date from my previous reservation. I'm not entirely sure if that affects this considering it's like a minute after that I noticed and I'm changing it? Someone tell me whether or not this gets declined? /shot <span style="">06:24, 07/17/2013

Could you blur the stripes just a tad to match her other image? 03:48, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Just lighten the shading juuussst a smidge? If not, that's okay. 20:38, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Shading needs lightened, and blurred a touch. <span style="">2:01 Fri Jul 19 2013

Thicken the stripes just by a pixel or two, and define the pale belly. 00:06, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">16:09, 07/20/2013

The black shading is throwing the color off, could you tint it a different color perhaps? 00:07, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Waste < this side of the chest. --Ambershine223 (talk) 21:43, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">11:45, 07/27/2013

Flamepelt (W) - For Approval
scarly loves her days off with wifi....and Flamepelt too, I suppose. Comments? 03:06, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit? They look lighter compared to the elder. Nice work, Scar! 03:31, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:59, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think that there are as many stripes on her his elder, and the stripes are a tad thicker on his elder, wonderful work! 17:45, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of waste this side > of the tail. Nice work!--Ambershine223 (talk) 21:46, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? <span style="">22:04 Thu Jul 25 2013

Re-uploaded Yup 01:22, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

The bit of waste is still there.-- 12:30, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:07, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Personal preference, but do you think you can give him more defined stripes? As is, the stripes almost look like texture. <span style="">17:22 Mon Jul 29 2013

Deadfoot (A) - For Approval
Comments? First black cat c: <span style="">07:29 Sun Jul 21

Raise the injured paw up a few pixels so it doesn't look like it's even with the other paw. Wonderful work! 19:07, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Could you lighten either the base pelt or the shading a tad? I can't see the lineart at all, and you don't have to lighten it too much, just a little. 20:02, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How's this? c: <span style="">07:31 Thu Jul 25

He should have a black nose, m'thinks.

From memory; they can have dark grey noses aswell. I'm also sure his nose is dark enough; without it being too dark. <span style="">05:09 Sat Jul 27

Well, Bess' images were told to have black noses, and I think that's what we go by. Perhaps someone else could back me up, or prove me wrong? Either/or, I don't care. Plus, aren't his other images shown with black noses? o.O

Looks black to me. <span style="">17:17 Mon Jul 29 2013

Nettlespot (A) ~ For Approval
Look I know there is the black background around it but I don't know how to remove it, I was wondering if one of you could help me with that? I made sure I had reserved first (I think) and I also think I named it correctly. I know the spots are bad, it was a five minute job. Comments? Ambershine223 (talk) 16:46, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly think that you should just redo it- removing a black background would be hard because the cat becomes blurry as you zoom in and the cat needs fixing anyways; the shading needs to be blurred, the ear-pink needs to be blurred, and the spots need to be touched up a tad. Splashmist3271 (talk) 17:17, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

That's fine, as I said before it was a five minute job so I'll withdraw this and maybe spend some more time on it later on. Ambershine223 (talk) 17:48, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over if there's no objections. owo <span style="">03:45, 07/24/2013

You don't need to ask! 07:30, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried ;w; <span style="">12:57, 07/24/2013

The flecks on the warrior are larger and more orange. <span style="">0:02 Thu Jul 25 2013

The shading tint should be red, I think, since the white looks a bit different than the warrior o3o. 00:04, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 20:36, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Amber, please do not ask that, as it's a lead's job to ask if someone is working on an image; since if not, it's part of the declining process. You have two days, Ferk, or else this'll be declined for lack of work.

Sorry Cloudy. 12:09, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Hareflight (TR) (W) - For Approval
i tried texture, but idk Comments? 20:39, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

OMSC Duck, he is sexy~ Define the shading on the tail a tad. 20:49, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thank you kindly c: 20:56, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

The texture on the face should be moving from all directions outward the muzzle, I believe, instead of being with the body. Love it, Duck - he reminds me of coffee ice cream! 21:23, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried owo Thanks! 21:29, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the texture and/or shading on the tail? I hate tails on short-haired cats. x.x

Re-uploaded yes, yes i do, too   21:59, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading and define the lighter part on the tail. 03:43, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:32, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe make the haunch shading curve gently, to make it go with the fur more ouo 00:56, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:23, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading, please.

Re-uploaded Redid everything except the base pelt and left out the texture, I like this a lot better. -sigh- 17:03, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? <span style="">18:50 Thu Jul 25

Eeps, sorry, once again, minor item, but the shading is receding from the back of the charart, or the spine region. It should be just a minor fix. 15:16, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Went ahead and changed the heading, too. 18:42, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Could you kind of thin out or erase the shading near the front of the haunch? The light source looks to be shining towards his face, and the shading near the front of the haunch doesn't quite match. This looks very nice! 17:27, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! 20:41, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light source on his face. 18:49, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:50, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Brackenwing (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
I tried. 01:22, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Her eyes need to be green. 01:24, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

I see some waste near the paw on >>> side, and where's the light source on the tail? 01:24, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Very pretty! Define the shading on the foreleg closest to us? 01:27, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:22, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little? <span style="">0:01 Thu Jul 25 2013

I think the shading's fine, but if others agree, I will. 14:36, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I think a little lighting would be alright. Also, on her tail, there is some shading on the middle of her tail that doesn't quite match the light source; could you kind of erase that? 17:33, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I need this approved soon; I'm going to Indiana for vacation tomorrow, and I won't have Internet access. 22:32, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

There seems to be 2 strips of lighter coloring on her belly/side & her shoulder. Could you smooth that out? c:  23:31, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That was from my failed attempt to create texture. I got rid of that. 00:20, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Fuzzypelt (A) ~ CBA
All colours are from his elder. Same as Shrewkit, I need comments ASAP, since I'll be away for two weeks on August 8th. 10:59, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the furthest front paw. Cute! 20:21, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks! c: 20:26, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded since it looks like the tweak nomination has won, I've darkened his base to be more black. 17:40, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure his nose should be black, sine she's a black cat. 18:18, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded oopsie x3 changes aren't showing; see here. 18:30, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added some more tufts to the tail to match W and E. but its not yet showing 18:47, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? c: 15:10, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but define the haunch highlight please. Also, could you make this color match his warrior? 19:43, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

The color matches well enough, imho.

Reuploaded I defined the haunch highlight, and as Cloudy said, it does match enough. Changes aren't yet showing. 20:19, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Whiteberry (W) ~ For Evaluation
I grabbed this cat as soon as the former one was declined, and I'm quite proud of it. My first white cat, but not my first charart. But my best. Ambershine223 (talk) 11:22, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Not bad! There's a bit of waste where his muzzle meets his forehead, and theres some filling the gap between his hindquarter and forelegs. Define the light on his face. 11:30, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't believe I missed that! What does define the light on his face mean? Ambershine223 (talk) 11:44, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Make it more noticeable. And make the background transparent. 12:42, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

How? Sorry for being a pain but I don't know how to do either--Ambershine223 (talk) 14:31, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

There's some waste by the tail and back. 14:34, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Remove some of the shading from the face, or put a dodge tool on it until it matches the other highlights. 14:44, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I'll do it tomorrow as I'm banned from the computer ( I'm writing this on my iPod). Thanks. --Ambershine223 (talk) 16:01, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

There's some waste by his tail, and the white is starting to look gray. Could you perhaps the lighten the shading just a tad? 23:23, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing, I believe. Ambershine223 (talk) 10:53, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I have done it, but it isn't showing here. :-( Ambershine223 (talk) 10:53, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- 20:44, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Make earpink less neon? 02:27, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit, and also, the ear farthest from us isn't completly shaded, it's kinda cut off at the tip. Stoem star 02:30, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Could you sharpen up her shading a bit, and also add/define the shading on the legs? Nice work on this! 17:29, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Changes not showing. 09:34, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

There is some gray/white pixels on the lineart (I think because of the shading) on his ears+head, chest, lower back, & tail. 15:08, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Yes, it was from the shading. Went ahead and added some more shading to the tail as well. 16:27, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Between the lineart and the shading, there is a white gap. Please fill that in with shading. Other than that, you're almost as good as Minty. :D  12:06, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I did it, and thanks, that means a lot. 17:00, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, I just realised from my last edit I left some waste. I'll get rid of it tomorrow. 21:11, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Wrenflight (Ki) - Withdrawn
Oh my gosh, its been so long since i've done this. Its my first time doing a more detailed one, so i might need some help :P. I should have finished this earlier, but a hard drive crash cost me all of my hard work. 22:01, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Se looks a bit cross-eyed. This is cute! 22:07, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I agree, her eyes need fixing. --Ambershine223 (talk) 22:13, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Changes aren't showing! D:  22:17, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Eyes still look a bit... Weird. But apart from the eyes, this is great!--Ambershine223 (talk) 22:50, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, i noticed that this image was more of a russet color than brown, so i fixed that. I also tried to fix the eyes too. 23:02, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Taking a break from this for today, Will continue tommorow. 23:06, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

The texture doesn't really match, nor does the color. Try to make her match more. 23:22, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this since i'm so caught up with other things. Anyone else is free to take over. 14:39, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I changed the heading for you. -- 14:51, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I can take over. 15:16, July 26, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Plumclaw (W) ~ For Approval
First charart on this wiki. Matched it as best I could to the apprentice charart that is up there, though I may change the eye color to match it to the one up there later on if people agree to that. Comments? Stoem star 04:26, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Nice job for a first! Thistleflight (talk) 15:01, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Derfine the shdaing, and define the earpink. Match the eye color please. 17:08, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Matched exact eye color from apprentice, and made her a bit lighter to match the apprentice too. Stoem star 18:58, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. 16:59, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stoem star 17:18, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

I see some waste in the area between her legs. 17:21, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded parts on her legs some? ^^  15:06, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Woollytail (W) ~ For Approval
this doesn't deserve to be in the presence of the SC image <span style="">08:22 Fri Jul 26

The texture looks a bit different on the SC, like there's not as much texture or something. Also, blur the white on his ches just a smidge. 18:21, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I think his paws (apart from the foreleg furthest from us) are a tad gray. 12:37, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Guys, I'm seriously not gonna be able to match the texture completely, I'm not blurring the white chest because that's how it is on the SC - smudged, not blurred, and of course the paws are gonna be a bit grey - I'm not gonna be able to fix that without removing the leg/paw shading. I'd like to keep these things as they are unless someone says so. <span style="">15:48 Sat Jul 27

The texture is up to you, I'm not saying that you need to match completely but I think that it could match more. The white chest does look more blurred on the SC, no matter if it isn't blurred, it looks like it is a tad and I think this one could be. And you can make the white whiter without removing the shading. You make a new layer, add white where you want it whitened, blur/smudge the white then lower the opacity to make it white. It is very possible. 16:55, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Duck, how do you know it could match more? Perhaps Berry's tried her best to match it, and she cannot match it anymore? I'm not entirely sure you can be the judge of whether or not it's capable of being matched "more", since you're not the artist of the image. Honestly, we're getting far too picky with what "matches" and what doesn't. I believe the texture is fine as it is.

I am very confident in Berry's abilities in charart making, and I do think she could just match it a bit more. And if we were going by that, then a lot of chararts would be being CBA'd just because the user 'tried' to make it match and did their best. All Berry needs to do is extend the texture to make it a bit longer, and it should be fine. 04:04, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

I never said I didn't have confidence in Berry's abilities. And the artist has said before that she'd rather not change the texture. Which, if you compare the the images, the texture really isn't that far off from one another. Also, I never said that...but if a user tries their best, then that's that, and we shouldn't push them if they don't want to change it. It was also said the texture was /up to Berry/, and she's said at least twice that I know of that she doesn't want to change it.

Nobody ever said that you did not have confidence in Berry's abilities. And the texture on this does look different, like Misty said, all she has to do is lengthen and thicken it out a tad. Cloudy, all Berry has to do is come out and say, I tried my best, I'd like some help. Then I'm sure users would do a join.me wit her or something to help, but if we're going to go by we shouldn't push users if they don't want to change it, then we might as well CBA everything without any comments because I'm sure every user tries their best, but we don't. Yes, I said the texture was up to Berry the second time, but Misty, also thought it should be changed. Also, I can only find once where Berry didn't want to change it. owo 15:49, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Cloudy; the texture is absolutely fine. It does not need to match the style of the StarClan image pixel for pixel, as every single artist has different styles and different ways to do chararts. Berry has matched the StarClan image to the best of her ability, and honestly, she does not need to match it better. Both images have texture that are close in style to the other, and both textures are very well done. I went to the liberty to ask a friend and a family member if the images matched each other, which both people said yes. Our readers aren't going to ctritisize images whose textures do not quite match, but still look just fine. We are not going to CBA every image because the artist did their best, we CBA the image because it looks done to us, and ask for any other critique from other members. Some images need more improvement than others, and if you have objections to the CBA rules, then take it to the project talk page. The only thing that I see that needs improvement in the current upload is that his left front paw and back paws need to be whitened a bit, because they look grey unless you examine the image image further. 17:33, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but I don't think the texture matches very well. It makes him look more mottled than furry. <span style="">18:04 Mon Jul 29 2013

Oh and can you also expand the "highlight" on the face? His head looks almost entirely shading. <span style="">18:14 Mon Jul 29 2013

Palebird (W) ~ For Approval
i literally cannot do warriors anymore 08:30, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit, wonderful job! 18:23, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Tallstar (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
Before any of you ask, he was described with a pelt "as dark as the sky" in The Sight, so he would have been dead at the time, and it implies that all of his fur is black, I believe. Anyways, comments? o3o 00:21, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading. Looks great! 00:51, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, but if anyone disagrees, I'll define it o3o 01:11, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Define it a bit more. 01:12, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. 01:17, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

(just popped in for a look) Wouldn't this be a partial-description anyway, and not warrant any alt at all? He has black fur, after all, and the quote doesn't mention a lack of white fur. 06:13, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Gotta agree with Shelly. Just because the neglected to mention the white doesn't mean it isn't there. <span style="">17:21 Mon Jul 29 2013

Cloudstar (A) ~ For Approval
*Adds to list of patterns I hate matching* I tried to make the white non-gray, and that's as white as they'll get. I was thinking about tinted shading, but then saw his others had black, so I went with the flow. Comments? 00:58, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Bunch of things I forgot to do. XD 01:03, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

The big white patch on his face should be reversed to the << side, like on his StarClan image 01:06, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

No because the StarClan image was made after the pattern redo and it doesn't match and it needs to be tweaked 01:34, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

You can probably get away with darkening the gray slightly, since on the three out of the four images of Cloudstar, the gray is darker than this. It might also help if you defined the shading more. Wonderful, Hawkmask. 04:07, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 14:12, July 29, 2013 (UTC)