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Snaketail (FQ) (D) - CBA
Ye ever wanty just wrap yersel up in tin foil nice and crozy and then jus get right inty the microwave and blow yersel up tae heck up 13:16 Sat Jun 25

Wow, this looks amazing! :D I feel like the shading needs to be a little darker/just shade a little more on the bottom of the belly and the edge of the tail? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:43, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thank you so much!! I feel like...it looked a bit better without...the extra shading but fjdhf idk im out of practice  11:46 Sun Jul 3

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Firestar (D) - For Approval
Um ... I would really like some advice on this ... please. I'm so sorry, I tried but I just don't even. 23:14, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Add more stripes  07:46 Sun Jun 26 

The pale chest seems a bit hard-edged; could you smudge/blur it a little? 17:54 Sun Jun 26

Re-uploaded: I think I messed up the stripes. Should I redo them? 18:44, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the other images are a little thicker, and on the belly make them follow the curve of the belly more rather than being straight? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:06, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

the stripes on his other images are also more orange and not as dark. 07:05, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:41, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

I think they could be thickened just a little more and sofetened a little bit, colour's much better. 21:12, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thanks trolly :) 15:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Where is the torn ear? He has it in his warrior image, he should have it in this one too.

Re-uploaded: I'm so sorry for forgetting that! 16:05, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

This is pretty :) can you add some shading to his right ear?

re-uploaded: 22:00, July 5, 2016 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (D) - For Approval
I'd also like advice for this. 23:51, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Make her tail bigger and fluffier. Can't tell the difference between it and the regular tails rn. This looks really nice though, tbh. 23:54 Sat Jun 25

Re-uploaded: Thanks berry! 04:28, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a tad bit more and make the tail fur a tad longer close to the tip, maybe? I can redline the lines if you need.  07:45 Sun Jun 26 

Re-uploaded: 18:45, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the color a little too dull compared to the other images? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:08, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Even out the lineart on the tail, and give it a bit more 'fluff', to put it that way? 05:37 Mon Jun 27

Re-uploaded: 19:41, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

You should make the tail have more stripes. 01:50, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Erm, there are several of them and I made them match the older deputy. I'd like another opinion on that. 14:34, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

the tip of her tail should be coloured in at least. (I think) 21:12, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think you need more tail stripes, just thicken a couple of them toward the middle so they don't look quite as uniform 04:14, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Sorry I can't really get tail stripes right. 15:30, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

You definitely don't need anymore tail stripes. I think you should just thicken the ones you have.

Re-uploaded: 22:01, July 5, 2016 (UTC)

If you're still looking for advice on the tail, I'd say to just replicate Redtail's tail. I could help with a redline if you need one, if you should decide to do something more with the tail. 18:49, 07/6/2016

Can I ask what's wrong with it now? I think it looks okay. 23:11, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

The overall shape is fine, but it looks too cylindrical, like she had it trimmed (like. think pomeranian with a haircut). It just needs more fur tufts, like redtail's does, is all. 23:31, 07/6/2016

Bluestar (D) - For Approval
Had trouble with the eyes, I'll redo them in the next upload, be nice if I did something wrong. --Gardenglaze 02:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

ear should be ripped. 02:30, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you please reupload under File:Bluestar.deputy.png? Your original file has two .png's, so I renamed it, but please upload under this file name. 03:00, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure velvetmoon has already got this reserved. 03:20, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

So, I should quit this and let velvetmoon take over? --Gardenglaze 04:18, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I apologise if this offends anyone. But I do have both Bluestar and Oakheart reserved. I will be posting the images soon. 15:05, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Upload thought I would just upload on this. 20:09, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading. 21:19, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe give it a little more depth towards the base of the tail? Some volume, so to speak? 22:49 Mon Jun 27

crop this to the lineart. 21:11, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make sure it consistently fills the area 04:13, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Got it to look better with smudged shading though I'm not 100% sure I like it. 12:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 12:43, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the butt please?  18:42 Wed Jun 29 

Reupload butt shading has been expanded! :) 10:21, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

could you smooth out the head and tail shading a bit? 02:47 Fri Jul 1

Reupload 08:59, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more. 21:19, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload smooth as I'm gonna get it! 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks really hard edged compared to all her other images. Are you sure you can't smooth it more, or maybe even lighten it? 01:43, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I thought shading was an artists choice. But I blurred it insted of smudged it so it matches. 05:54, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. Also, shading is artist's choice.

Oakheart (D) - For Approval
This time I used MS paint to do the eyes so they don't look like crap. --Gardenglaze 05:13, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I'm fairly sure Velvet holds the reservation on this one as well

I hope nobody has Stonefur reserved. --Gardenglaze 19:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

Where should I post mine? Should I just take over or wait for this to be archived. 16:20, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Upload I know I need to smooth out the shading will fix next upload. 20:10, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload fixed the shading a bit. 10:30, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

The shading on this image could be smoothed out a little as well. 21:20, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload it's not right... 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more.

Leopardstar (D) - For Approval
I will fix the shoulder/neck shading in a few minutes. 18:25 Wed Jun 29

Is the tail tip supposed to have almost non-existent shading? If it is, ignore me; I'm known for asking dumb questions and having bad eyesight. =P

Define the shading on the legs, and define the earpink. I don't know if that's how it should be so ignore the last one if it is supposed to be like that --  14:50, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Not changing the ear pink. But I am redoing the shading because this looks horrible. 02:19 Sun Jul 3

Reuploaded 01:10 Mon Jul 4

I can't really tell where the light's coming from... The tail haunch and head says from the back, but the shoulders and back doesn't quite seem to match :-/ 03:58, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Runningnose (D) - CBA
lol whats art <span style="">00:35, 06/30/2016

Define the light on the tail.

reup <span style="">23:35, 07/5/2016

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Redtail (D) - CBA
Nope, that's not texture. That's just the way I shaded it.  <span style="">14:28 Thu Jun 30 

I love the tail. Can you define the belly shading a tad bit? <span style="">22:43 Fri Jul 1

thanks :)  <span style="">08:13 Sun Jul 3 

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Sunstar (D) - For Approval
my sweet son <span style="">16:22, 06/30/2016

Smooth out the tail shading a bit. Seems kinda hard-edged compared to the rest of the body's shading.

Sorry I think the tail shading looks just fine. 01:40, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

And I disagree; I've been told to smooth out shading softer than this. a little bit wouldn't hurt.

Seedpelt (D) - CBA
ill fix upt he shading later....im so tired 21:59, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the tail shading?

reuploaded 14:31, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

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Rainsplash (D) -CBA
mmm <span style="">02:45 Fri Jul 1

This is pretty, Spooky! Define the light on the tail 23:03, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded, ty ty :-) <span style="">21:22 Tue Jul 5

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Tawnyspots (D) - CBA
Same color pallet as the rest of his set 03:11, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">21:23 Tue Jul 5

Oakheart (Alt. D) - For Approval
I'm confused on which deputies I can do, but I'm pretty sure I can do this one? Comments? <span style="">13:36 Fri Jul 1

Define the shading. To clarify you can do any deputy image that is on the characters page and is not reserved. 11:13, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">12:10 Sat Jul 2

Swap the tail shading so that it makes sense with your light source.

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:15 Tue Jul 5

Smooth the tail shadig some and define the light on the lifted paw <span style="">20:33, 07/6/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">09:02 Thu Jul 7

Timberfur (D) ~ For Approval
Comment? 16:23, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail and define the light on the head 23:02, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes don't seem to be showing. 23:13, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. I accidentally reuploaded the wrong image; that's why the changes refused to show. 17:14, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere, and add a little more depth to the neck shading <span style="">20:34, 07/6/2016

Reuploaded. 21:02, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Mallowtail (W) ~ CBA
attempted to emulate my own cat for this one, not sure I did her justice 19:21, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded adjusted a few things 06:43, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Is that supposed to be pale or white? I think it's white, but my phone's bejng weird with color... anyways could you define the facial shading a tiny bit? is this Squawky???

reuploaded its white, and yes its squawky. 14:04, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

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Cloudpelt (D) - CBA
20:32, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the hard-edged band of shading behind the shoulder and on the haunch and smude the pelt into the ear-pink a touch more. This is super pretty! 04:01, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks ^^ 11:58, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

I'm gonna be a butt, and I'm sorry for that, but is there any way to tweak the shading so he doesn't look gray-and-white? I honestly thought he was at first.

Re-upsLightened the shading a bit,i don't want to change it :/ 16:29, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Actually, since you lightened it, it does look a lot better now. CBA?

Brightwhisker (D) - For Approval
I had fun making this one :3 Comments? <span style="">20:35 Fri Jul 1

Nice! Blur the shading a bit more. 21:24, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It's also leaking some on the underside of the belly. <span style="">22:41 Fri Jul 1

Sharpen the markings; it looks a little over blurred compared to the leader 23:01, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How do I sharpen the markings? <span style="">02:29 Sat Jul 2

Fix your light direction. Faced says > and tail says <. 22:49, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm not sure if the light is correct now, but I switched the shading on the tail to the other side, if that was what you meant. <span style="">01:25 Sun Jul 3

The light should be fine now. The shading on her chest is leaking.

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:21 Tue Jul 5

CBA?

Sorry to break CBA, but the haunch shading could be expanded more, and the light on the raised paw could be defined so it doesn't look grey, and the ears need shading wit this light source. <span style="">20:37, 07/6/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">22:51 Wed Jul 6

Does Brightwhisker have any ear pink in this? If she does, you should lighten it, because it looks too unnoticeable. If she doesn't, add it, she has it in her leader image.

She does have earpink, but she has shading on the ears so its a bit hard to see. I don't want to get rid of the shading though, because I was just asked to add it. <span style="">08:40 Thu Jul 7

Leafstorm (D) - CBA
21:45, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Super pretty! If the light's coming from the front, i think y ou could stretch the haunch highlight a bit further up 04:02, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks ^^ 11:57, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

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Russetfur (Alt. D) - For Approval
I lightened her pallet a bit to better match her image in the manga. I'm gonna put her alt. warrior up for tweak nom. so it'll match better. 23:31, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Could you blur the belly shading a bit? nice nice nice :-) <span style="">21:20 Tue Jul 5

Re-uploaded 06:18, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

smooth the shading on the legs closest to us? <span style="">18:27, 07/6/2016

Re-uploaded 02:44, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (D) - CBA
I actually like this 13:15, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Mind if I prod this? It's been four days. 08:56, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

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Cloudstar (D) - CBA
smile 16:20, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Mind if I prod this? It's been four days. 08:56, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

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Leopardstar (D Alt) - For Approval
Killed it. Killed it. Killed it.

define shading everywhere but the tail? <span style="">18:28, 07/6/2016

Hawkfrost (D) - For Approval
23:55, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Brighten up the white just a tiny bit? Looks kinda brown...

Re-uploaded. 18:48, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Stonestar (D) - CBA
23:55, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading on the ear and on the back of the hind legs a tad? <span style="">21:19 Tue Jul 5

Re-uploaded. 22:43, July 5, 2016 (UTC)

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Petalfall (D) - For Approval
....can I get the file name fixed? Looks like the "L" key on my laptop was sticking. <span style="">01:59 Mon Jul 4

You can just reupload over File:Petalfall.deputy.png, honestly.

define the shading a lil more, and maybee smooth it out a little. this is gorgeous <span style="">20:38, 07/6/2016

Beetail (D) ~ For Approval
this pattern

Define the facial shading?

re-uploaded

Reedwhisker (D) ~ For Approval
17:45, July 5, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a bit.

Extend the shading on the neck down more so it connects to the shoulder shading, bc this light source calls for the neck to be shaded, and a shadow of the head to be cast on the back (example because words are tough) <span style="">20:41, 07/6/2016

Lionheart (D) ~ For Approval
Squigglestripe.  <span style="">11:03 Wed Jul 6 

Define the body shading.

Can you make the ruff a floofier at the back of the neck?

Actually, define shading everywhere? <span style="">21:00, 07/6/2016

Silvermask (D) ~ For Evaluation


Here's hoping this one gets approved ;) -- 21:01, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading? <span style="">1:06 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded --  01:27, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Could you tone down the earpink? It seems very neon atm. <span style="">01:41 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded -- 02:51 July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his face a little more noticeable? I know it's there, but I can barely see it. 07:57, July 7, 2016 (UTC)