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Mist (KP) Kittypet ~ For Approval
Welp. I tried... 02:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged the collor. 02:49, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foreleg, and blur/smudge the transitions between the colors on the collar if you can. It still looks a bit hard-edged. 02:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged it more and did some stuff :P 03:10, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

The color needs to match his other images, so it has to be lighter. 14:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Add some more light on the tail and add some shading to the collar. 21:45 Sat Mar 7

Tiger, Mist has no other Kittypet images. So I don't know the original collar colour. 21:34, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, I mean the body color, not the collar. It needs to match the loner and kit images, so it needs to be a lighter shade of gray. I suggest to colorpick it. 21:44, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I'll brighten up the collar later. Couldn't change collar colour because I don't know what it originally was :/. (I'll clear the waste in the next upload) 22:05, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 2nd try... 22:17, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Since apparently I needed to move the files, this has now been renamed to Mist (KP).kittypet.png.

Lighten him up more, hes still quite dark as he is now. 01:02, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. 05:00, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up the shading as well 18:01 Mon Mar 9

re-up Any better? I lightened up his fur colour from the kit image. 22:47, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading makes it look like he has a dark stripe down his back, kinda like Graystripe.

How do I change it? Do I lighten it up, Smudge, blur... 23:19, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I hit publish without reading over my comment. x.x Yes, lightening it should probably do the trick.

re-up Lightened the shading. 23:31, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and light on the tail and define the light on the foreleg? 19:18, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up Boop 18:13, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Give the shading a little bit more blur, and also delete some waste around his right back knee, it’s just sudden shading that I don’t think belongs there. 07:31, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Give his eyes a little more depth? 13:54, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Depth as in..? 14:34, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Depth is the gradient of the shading from light to dark. I think the depth looks fine but could you maybe define the shading a little on the legs? 14:38, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Would you be a pal and shading to his back leg? 08:36, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

I don't understand where the light is coming from due to the shading on the haunch, face, and tail. 17:04, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading? I'm sorry if I sound like I'm nagging your image ;.; I actually really like how you did it 11:02, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit... too dark. Try lightening it up? Sorry, I may not have the right to comment because I'm not active, but the shading could be lightened up a few percents in transparency. -- 15:48, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine to me but if ya want to, go ahead. Either is fine by me. Could you define the lightsource for me? I'm having trouble seeing what direction it's coming from clearing. 18:40, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up 1st: Changed the eye colour and position because the loner and kit images had brighter eyes; 2nd: I wanted to try to figure out how Beebs did her shading on the Mist she did(didn't work out). 3rd: I dont know if I answered everyone's replies... 20:12, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, and also define the shading on his visible front leg. 02:23, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

I think the eye deapth is fine on my Mac computer, PC, and Mobile. I'll get to the shading tomorrow. 02:27, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with breeze- please define the eye depth. Maybe put a darker blue where the eye color is the darkest? 07:53, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Done :P 19:24, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the edges more. I suggest you use a hard edged blur tool at a rate of 100. 00:11, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

I'll try using the Blur tool tomarrow, since I've actually never used it. I really need to learn Shading Technique with Hawky Dx 02:51, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

on the right haunch, The chading looks like it is looping around the line of the start of the tail. try smudging or blurring it there. otherwise beautiful! Spottehwobble!

define the leg shading a tad 20:50 Thu Mar 19

his nose should be dark grey, not pink. 13:38, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt MCA) - CBA
Feels weird to be posting this so soon. Anyway, credits to Foxy for finding the cite, she was called pale so... Comments? I'm super proud of this. 04:59, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Was she called pale or pale gray? if it was pale grey then you'd have to remove the stripes 10:08, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

She was called pale, not pale gray. 10:42, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

While we're at it, can you make her eyes dark blue? Just fits with the trivia. 21:45, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

*steals* This is way too pretty! Define the shading on the...neck/chin? Not sure if you have to just a suggestion. 03:56, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I liked her with green eyes ;_______________________________________; Added some depth. 08:14, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

she has a kit alt for being called pale grey and that doesnt have stripes? 21:03 Thu Mar 12

I already said above, she was called pale, not pale grey. 00:02, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Looks fluffy! Should she have nose pink? -- ☾ Sunstream  ❄ Watching the Snow Fall 02:48, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

No, it's not essential. 04:56, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

what are you talking about? these blanks specifically have space for nosepink and it should be filled in. 13:22, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Okay I always seen cats with noses that aren't pink and I didn't add it for a bunch of my images but okay. 14:42, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

its not that it has to be pink it just has to be filled in. 14:44, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Makes the eyes a darker shade of blue please. I love what you've done! 07:31, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I think it's fine. They are dark enough to me. But thank you~ 07:48, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Does the cite say she has blue eyes on the same page (or near it) that she's called pale? Because if not, I really think you should stick with her cited eye color- which is green.

Re-upped Why was even I told to change it in the first place 08:07, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a couple of ticks on the opacity bar? Not too much- I just think it's a bit dark in some places, namely --> side of the face, stomach, and maybe the tail.

Re-upped 02:42, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

ok i know she was called pale and not pale grey but she has a kit alt for being called pale and that doesnt have stripes. im just saying you should probably match the other alt she has for being called pale grey. i really like the striped though 03:14 Tue Mar 17

Pale isn't pale grey, if she was called pale then she gets what's in her description. Alts don't even have to match each other in the first place, why are you so determined to make me remove the stripes??? ._. 03:49, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

If she's only called pale, the fact that she's still a tabby exists- she's just called a pale tabby. The stripes are staying unless something from whichever book that was contradicts it.

I'm sorry if it seems like I'm determined to remove them, I was just trying to explain my argument. Sorry. 21:14 Tue Mar 17

Can I have a comment or something? Been three days since the last comment on the image 05:08, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can we not do this on every image? People do have lives, you know. I actually lost my internet for a few days, hence why I haven't done anything. Sometimes mine go at least four or five days without comments- you can wait a couple days until someone comments or CBAs; usually the lack of comments is a good thing, and it means a CBA is more often than not the next thing on the list. Tbh, it's barely been three days and seeing this is quite annoying.

Sorry, my bad ;_; I can wait longer, I'm fine with it. 05:14, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine- just please keep that in mind for next time. I'll CBA this, since I really can't see anything wrong with it.

Willowshine (Alt. MC) - CBA
I'm back! With my first medicine cat up for approval. First time I've drawn a tabby without copying off another image. 23:11, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the white on the muzzle more and define the shading on the legs behind the the body. Define the shading on the tail aswell. Make the stripes more hard edged. 23:40, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:53, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the stripes more to give them a more realistic feel. Also, try to vary the stripes in shape and size maybe? I'm sorry if that sounded offensive ;.; 08:35, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

^^ It didn't sound offensive to me, just very vague, The Fox Girl. =) You might also want to think about adding more stripes, some smaller, some larger, etc. Experiment with it. =) 16:58, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I redid the tabby stripes, much happier with it now. I've also added a bit of highlights on a few bright spots, to add some depth. 21:51, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and darken the shading a bit. 00:33 Mon Mar 16

Reupload Added some highlights to the face for more depth, and made the paws lighter because it was a bit hard to tell they are supposed to be paler. 01:38, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Isn't it supposed to match the one Burnt did? Anyways, I thought her eyes were said to be remained green ?o? Good work, though. Maybe add some eye depth :) 06:20, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload No, this is for the ultimate guide where she is shown as light gray tabby with dark blue eyes. 06:27, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Give the white muzzle and the stripes a little smudge/blur? I'm sorry if I seem like I'm commenting too much! ;.; I really love this, well done. 11:03, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Of course not! I'm glad you're commenting and making this picture better. :) 21:56, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more to make them look more realistic. 00:23, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:32, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Hmmm... I can't see any change. Try using a hard edged smudge tool at size 1px in gimp and smudge it towards the direction of the fur. 02:52, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

I prefer not to. I've done a few tabbies with only blurring. (PAINT.NET really needs a working smudge tool) anyway, you want me to blur it more? 03:27, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add or define more shading to the far legs? The still seem.. bright. 14:32, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look fine to me. 21:21 Tue Mar 17

What do you mean far legs? The back legs or her right legs? 21:58, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

The back legs, Stealth. Its so hard to explain Dx 23:45, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

k if this one isn't matching ny other image, then the stripes don't have to be smudged. its doesn't matter about 'realism', it matters tht it looks like a tabby, which it does. stop insisting people smudge everything. 00:06, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload With all the images I've made/tweaked, I only needed to smudge once, and that was to match another image. 05:23, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry Stealth, my bad ;_; 00:09, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yea. smudge the chest just a tad because it looks TOO pixelated and almost perfectly straight. and smudge the muzzle white. ~Spotteh

Chest is fine, imho. Also watch the use of all caps. 13:51, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yes I think they are all fine but if someone else thinks otherwise than I'll change it. why are people obsessed with smudging suddenly? 21:44, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry about that Stealth ;.; Could you define the back ear light? This is gorgeous. 05:02, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

that's okay. Reupload there isn't really light on there but I've toned down the shading a few ticks. Do I need to add light? 05:15, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, I think it's fine. Let's go CBA.

Owl Feather (Ancient) - For Approval
Um. I don't have the brush I used before, so I tried to improvise. All colors, including the shading, are from the other image...it's just how I shaded on the two different images.

Define the shading on the stomach and back ear. Should she have a pink or black nose. And her tounge should be coloured pink aswell, shouldn't it? On the other hand, beautiful! 23:00, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hide the nose pink layer while I was shading oops.

Define and blur/smudge the shading everywhere, 00:32 Mon Mar 16

Where is your light source coming from? Damn it, this is way better than mine ;.;  10:50, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Same source that I've been using since these blanks were made- I was told it was fine. Don't ask me the direction, I couldn't tell you. I'll reupload with the shading in a bit- I just got home.

I think you could define the stomach shading a tad more.. 15:18, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

I feel like there are a few strips of pixels that aren't shading in when they are meant to be. They are on the tail and on the cheek, and do you think you could define the shading on the back foot 00:17, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Next time, please be more specific- that was a bit too vague and I'm not even sure I got the pixels you said.

Could you smudge the patches a bit more? They look a little softer on her other images if ya get me, if not I'm sorry I'm bad at explaining stuff. This is gorgeous, lovely job Cloudy. =) 15:12, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading just a tad 21:18 Tue Mar 17

Re-uploaded. They're actually more blurred on her queen image, so that's what I went with.

I think the spots could be denser according to the queen image. 00:13, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, without the shading layer, the spots are about the same- this just doesn't have as thick shading as the queen does, and it's a slightly different style and tone.

Blurred the stripes a bit. ~Spottedgorse Sorry. I mean spots. ~Spotteh

I don't think I can- it won't really match.

the speckles look a bit like mud, but I think it the charm of her looks maybe smudge the speckles? The queen image has her speckles look a bit splattered I hope I’m not vague. 05:46, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I got it now. The entire point was her looking like mud splatters tbh

Rising Moon (Ancient) - For Approval
- bleh... 01:49, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Gimme secrets on Charart making ;.; yours is so pretty define the light on the back paw? With this source I'm sure there'll be some light. 02:45, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:46, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading please, it just makes the gray seem too dark compared to her queen is all. 05:58, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

The texture is softer on her other images. 09:57, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:47, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make her texture a bit less visible? This is beautiful! 05:46, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

the texture looks just fine to me 20:49 Fri Mar 20

Redstar (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
Hi ya'll. Ill rename this on the next upload. 04:01, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading please, also, shouldn't alts match? They were in the same book, after all. 04:56, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, if they're from the same book, they really should match. I also rennamed it for you since otherwise, you'd need to make a duplicate file.

blur the shading everywhere lots 11:48 Fri Mar 20

Its smudged, so im not going to blur it.-- 18:03, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.-- 18:10, March 20, 2015 (UTC)