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Mudfur (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. -- 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad? ​

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). -- 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry 01:34, 8/30/2019

Still working? 14:39, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They lost their drawing pen. I believe it is Vec who gave them an extension Moo (talk) 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, sorry for the long wait, like Moo said I lost my pen and Vec (may have been Jayce I can't remember) gave me an extension. I didn't want to put it off any longer so I did it with a keyboard. Anyway, I did all the suggestions (or most) that you guys said, what do you think?

Looking good Firespring! Hmm, curve the shading on the haunch more (let me know if you need a redline) and there's waste outside the tail. The coloring on the nosepink and mottles are still a little off (nose should be #1b1411, the mottles should be #493522). -- 23:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now?

You're getting there! I think the shading could be smoothed a bit, and the mottles look sharper on the alt star (try running a low opacity sharpen tool or a low sharpen filter on the mottles, beware of color pixels). You could also use a low opacity pencil and draw over the mottles, which will make them sharper as well. -- 00:12, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the <-- ear. 00:23, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now? Also, there already is shading on the ear. 00:28, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Is it me, or am I seeing texture on the image? If it's texture, it needs to be removed as the alt star doesn't have any. -- 00:31, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Removed texture. 00:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading on --> that ear but not on <-- this ear. 01:04, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Added shading to left ear. 05:34, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a some more on the body

Reuploaded. 21:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to the back leg and smooth it out on the shoulder and haunch more. -- 21:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:30, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading on the < ear; helps with flatness

Still working?

My comment on there not being any lighter mottles in the tail tip still stands. 17:53, 9/14/2019

Reuploaded. Yes, still working. Sorry for the wait. How's this? 05:51, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

you need to remove all lighter mottles in the tail tip. There shouldn't be any light in the dark at all 13:30, 9/15/2019

Add shading to <--- that ear and to where the haunch meets tail. 19:24, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:14, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading overall, add/expand it on the tail and add some to the back half of the tail. Add some more shading along the ---> part of the shoulder; at least some part of it would be in shadow. 01:43, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

^^^ especially the haunch, chest, and shoulder Moo (talk) 05:29, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sorreltail (W) ~ For Approval
My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. -- 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​​ 16:48, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking a tiny bit on the tail, plus I think it could be smoothed some. -- 23:07, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the chest? It looks rather flat there 17:40, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 15:17, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

I feel as if this doesn't quite match the pattern placement of the queen's tail, which is what it should most reflect since both are on the same definite side; vs, the star is angled and thus not the best to match this blank to

reuploaded -- I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:54, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading any more on the tail? 20:59, 9/14/2019

Still working? 19:41, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Smokehaze (Ki) - For Approval
05:33, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading out

There's waste near the ear furthest from us. Also, could you remove the shading above the nose, and add some to the chest? 16:36, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened. But I'm confused where us the light source? Moo (talk) 22:56, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is something similar to this. With this source there would be a tiny bit of light on < this back leg, near the toe line. -- 02:06, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Ah right. Lighten the shading? Moo (talk) 05:11, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, Vec, could you give me an extension with this and Sasha? My tablet’s lost. -- 04:35, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

We can give you an extension until the 18th, but if you do not find it before then, we would have to decline this. 18:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:28, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you lighten the shading a little perhaps? Maybe expand it onto the shoulder, then smooth it by the base of the tail, face, and haunch. 14:12, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

shading could be smoothed all out in general 21:00, 9/14/2019

'''reuploaded. 21:33, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

define the shading more on the tail, remove a bit of the shading on the haunch, and expand the shading behind the front leg closest to us (including the shoulder) 13:32, 9/15/2019

'''reuploaded. 15:16, September 16, 2019 (UTC)'''

Remove some of the shading on the tail. The shading should not cover the whole thing but rather half of it length wise. 16:38, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 05:43, September 17, 2019 (UTC)'''

Also remove some of the shading on the back leg closest to us- with the source there would be a tiny bit of light shining on it, at least remove it to the little line near the haunch. -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) ~ For Approval
When you stay out in the sun for too long -- I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:03, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Add just a little shading to the >> ear so it doesn't appear flat

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:03, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading a tad bit more on the legs 21:01, 9/14/2019

Your shading on the <--- ear stops at the line where a whisker comes across --Moo (talk) 22:04, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:46, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Spiderfoot (W) ~ For Approval
-- I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:26, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail^^

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:07, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading more? 21:00, 9/14/2019

Could you also add some more depth to the front legs? 01:44, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:42, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sandgorse (W) ~ For Approval


Soften the stripes a bit, please. I actually blurred them a bit when I made his pattern. ​​​​

Re-uploaded blurred them

I feel like the stripe style does not match. It seems like for the other images, and this is what I did for his tunneler, that a rounded brush was used with minimal tapering to the ends (I used an airbrush if I recall correctly). Here they seem too sketch-like and uneven. 18:44, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

I've gotta say, that I'm thinking Vec's comment still stands a bit. She's right, I used a rounded brush, and these stripes still look too squared off. I'm sorry, this was one of my favorite sets of mine and I'm so nitpicky about it ;;;; ​

Re-uploaded I can't get this to look right to save my life

Add some shading to <--- this ear. 19:21, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

This is looking better, but it still looks sketch like and thin on the haunch ^^ 16:39, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Shrewclaw (Warrior) - For Approval
One of my favorite characters from Tallstars revenge surprisingly Moo (talk) 06:15, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

The shading seems flat. Expand it more and add depth. 07:55, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Add some eye depth.

21:44, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 22:01, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

It still needs some eye depth. I don't see any.

23:56, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 04:07, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading still seems flat... 14:35, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Same with Shrewfoot, and try adding some depth to fix the shading flat ness. 16:42, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 07:22, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it still seems flat... 15:32, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:06, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Expand and smooth out the shading. 15:32, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

And add some to the lower belly/chest, too. 19:44, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:34, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Slightfoot (W) ~ For Approval
his dash looks a bit odd compared to his other images? dunno just an observation i found while making it

15:57, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think the dash should be more sharp? -- 16:07, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

the apprentice has texture, and has some very faint highlights too. (the txture is just the base colour but on multiply at like a slightly lower opacity than 100, and smudged slightly. the highlights are above the shading with just white blotches where the light would be the most prominent, blurred at a rate of 5 a few times, then the opacity is very very low. something like 5 or whatever looks the best.) 17:55, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure but the line seems to separate the chest and other leg or something? Don't know if the white should extend past that line

reuploaded

02:03, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Finely smudge the patch a bit? 19:43, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

better?

20:51, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Idk if I should comment on this since i've never made a charart before, but I feel like the smudge is a little bit too circular and maybe a little high up compared to his other images. Really good art though! Stormflash Diamond 00:35, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Anybody have a second opinion? 14:02, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Brindlewing (Ki) - For Approval
23:52, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading? I have trouble seeing it? 19:17, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:44, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (W) (Alt 2) - CBA
buff wife 14:47, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading depth. 16:52, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 20:29, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the front legs? 00:59, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

On the OG warrior, the base seems darker. 15:20, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 19:47, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you brighten/add more saturation to the eyes? 01:26, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 19:05, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:34, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 19:03, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the eyes blue-er to match the reg warrior? 20:23, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes match the previous version, and I believe eye color doesn't need to match on alts like this. 16:25, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Ah, I was told on prior alts to match the eye color, or at least relatively close, regardless if the character wasn't listed with an official eye color ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 19:42, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

I was under the impression that they should match if the eye color is cited.. but I think in this case, the previous version's alt was given the blue eyes because it seems to have gotten mixed up with the Shimmerpelt from Crookedstar's Promise, who has that description. ​​

Squirrel (cat) (K) - For Approval
Yep, I made him/her look like Moonlight, so enjoy a baby blue Himalayan. -- 22:44, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Aww snap I wanted her- Oh well, Btw smooth shading on her flank and there seems to be some weird grey pixels on the front bottom of the flank Moo (talk) 01:51, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:25, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

curve the shading on the back leg more? to flow better with the body, it would sorta make a backwards "c" shape if that makes sense?

Reuploaded -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Sunfish (K) ~ For Approval
i just think shes neat 20:28, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Remove some shading on the tail, face, and foreleg. -- 22:25, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Smallear (W) - For Approval
-- 23:45, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Leaking shading on <--- foot where the tail meets foot? Moo (talk) 02:12, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

I don't see any leaking? -- 02:16, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

I still see it o.o lets wait for another opinion ♥️ Moo (talk) 08:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Um, I don't think there's leaking shading, Moo, I think it's part of the light source. 15:26, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

I don't see any leaking shading there, but I do see a tiny bit on the <--- front paw, at the very edge where it meets the other paw. Could you also round the --> ear a bit more, especially on our right side. It seems very blocky at the moment. 18:33, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

There's waste above the ear on our left. Can you make both ears more pointy at the tops? And add some light to the chest 03:09, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, the entire chest woild be in shadow as seen here. -- 03:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Leaf (SqH) (Ki) - For Approval
00:44, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

another Himalayan, I see Lighten the shading, smooth it out as well, and blur/smudge the pale parts. -- 00:46, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

^ adding to potato's comment; smudging them would probably work better to work with the flow of fur on the blank

sorry potato. '''reuploaded. 15:22, September 19, 2019 (UTC)'''

I haven't seen Himalayans with lighter parts before... if you're going to make the image match their parent's, wouldn't it make sense for the darker parts to be the points, and the lighter parts the base? ​​​​​

Oh. Alright. I made the parts lighter because I didn't want it to seem as if I copied Potato's design. 15:35, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Just like to let you know you can do something similar to my design for Squirrel, just maybe do a darker gray and make the hue different than what I have. =D -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smudge the pale parts and lighten them some, since I can't see the shading at all in those places. -- 00:29, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Damn. Has this been approved? I wanted to put up a Leaf image. I spent ages... -Wavetail (talk) 07:55, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

it hasn't been approved yet, but this is only for critiques of the image. that said, can you lighten up the points some, they look black right now. 07:57, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Am I allowed to do that? How...? Also, I put up my own. Should I remove it? Wavetail (talk) 08:10, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Tigerstar (TPB) (W) - CBA
og bad guy (was given permission for this one)

CBA? 15:34, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Jayclaw (K) - For Approval
Comments? Moo (talk) 07:03, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit. -- 12:53, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

I also think the earpink should be duller to match. 18:32, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (Ki) - For Approval
jeez o petes this was hard to match, took pattern from apprentice 16:41, 9/19/2019

Would you care for the file or hex codes? I think the stripes should be a tad darker, and there should be more variance with the tail stripes (ex. the third tail stripe from the tip down should have a "bulge" on one side, along with a few of the lower ones). ^^ 18:31, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

On her other images I think the stripes look slightly softer than what you have. -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Yes please! Also will smooth them later im currently at hospital 02:48, 9/20/2019

lSorryfor off track comment but are you ok? Moo (talk) 08:17, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Toadskip (W) - For Approval
I'm gonna go fiddle with the shading on the head... but I tried to match Icy's old pattern, and even the shading style is how she'd have made it. All colors from her version. Please do not ask me to smudge the stripes, as I'm intentionally copying what she did. ​​

Re-uploaded. There we go. ​​

Little bit of waste snagged in between the back paws and foreleg, could you also add a tiny bit of shading to the back paw farthest from us? -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Dappletail (K) - For Approval
00:14, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define Shading? Moo (talk) 01:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:57, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Brindleclaw (W) - For Approval
00:14, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:29, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

To me, the shading looks fine, but I think a little more shading depth wouldn't hurt to be added. -- 00:30, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:58, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Daisytoe (K) - For Approval
the mickeys were pain much but I think I did well -- 00:53, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Jagged Peak (W) ~ For Approval
OA claim from Patch. 04:14, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smoketalon (W) ~ For Approval
Not entirely happy with this but oh well. 04:14, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like this doesnt really look mottled in comparison to the old image. would you mind making the lighter texture lines less thin? 17:09, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Seedpelt (MV) (W) ~ For Approval
16:00, September 20, 2019 (UTC)