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Raggedpelt (W) - For Approval
This is my first try at doing a charart, so I'm sorry if it's really bad/if I did it wrong. How is it?Hollytail 00:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, first; the lineart is really strange, it's white, it should be black. Second, you need to save it in png format, not jpg. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

How do I fix the lineart? And could that have anything to do with the fact that I had issues with getting the blank onto pixlr?Hollytail 01:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did you delete the white inside the blank before you put the brown in? And what kind of trouble did you have? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Right-click->open in new tab for the image, and then you can edit it. The images in the gallery are shrunken a bit. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 01:25, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Over the area with the blanks it says to click to get the image at full size, but whenever I tried that, it wouldn't let me place it in pixlr, or save it to pictures. It came up in a box in the center of the screen and all that it would let me do was highlight it...Eventually I just used the thumbnail picture...Hollytail 01:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, you can't do that. Copy the file name of the blank and place it into the search bar. Then, go to the page and get the location, and you're good to go! Other than that, the image looks nothing like  Møųş  ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  01:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I tried fixing it in the right blank this time... How does it look now?Hollytail 02:30, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Use the color dropper to get the right coat color- he is still far too dark. And his stripes don't match the leader image. Don't worry, that problem is easy to fix. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  04:07, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Or use the sponge tool set to saturate on size 200 will do. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better?Hollytail 12:59, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is still weird...Layer a regular warrior blank on the image. The shading needs more blurring and so does the stripes. And, the ear pink needs to be lighter. Ice Spring is here! 15:45, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Tried fixing it, but what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 16:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Why did you blur the ragged fur lines? Those should be solid! ☮Quail☮ Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 15:36, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, sorry... is this better? And what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:51, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

The eye doesn't look right...look at this or this to see how it should look.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:33, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is really blurred and there is some missing on the head and paws. Also darken and blur the shading. Add another stripe to the haunch and try making it more brown like his leader image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:39, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if I can say this but; it's been 5 days since you've worked on this. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:50, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

You can say it but this user still has time as we wait a week. Sakura Kiss Haikage 17:54, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Eek, Sorry! I worked on it, but I didn't realize that I didn't re-upload it. Oops... Sorry! Anyway, better?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

The line art still needs to be fixed and his pelt should be a darker. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:55, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

What's wrong with the line art and how do I fix it?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:39, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the picture! LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:04, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart near his back ear is missing where it connects with his head. The lineart near his hind leg and tail are smudged too. you can see brown pixels. Just past a new lineart on top of it and clean it up some if there's extra sitting outside of it.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:45, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I would highly reccomend redoing this. LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:22, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I could try to fix the lineart for you if you'd like. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 19:58, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to redo it, how does it look now?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:32, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

The lineatr is good but im not sure what the dark brown smudges in his pelt are. Is it supposed to be shading? Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:42, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think they are. Blur the shading, lengthen the stripes and make them less dark like the leader image, and make the ear pink more triangular. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:14, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

The large blob of shading in the middle of his haunch needs to go away. Perhaps you might want to check one of the tutorials? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   17:27, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes and blur the shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:32, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to fix it, how does it look now?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to lengthen the stripes. 雨 晶須  15:27, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 17:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The colour is a little dark and there are more stripes needed in places. The ear pink is a little bright and/or needs blurring and the raggedy-fur lines look too... similar; as in they are all the same shape and size as each other. ✐Sa NdY  17:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also, he needs a torn ear (unless he got that after he became deputy?) 雨  晶須  21:20, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 01:24, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

He looks more dark ginger than brown now. Blur the stripes some. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:35, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ash is right. What you need to do is save his leader or deputy pic and use the eyedropper tool to get the right color because it looks like your having trouble with the color. Also, the tip of the ear facing us is gray. Erase that.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:42, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:54, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah,just blur the ear pink a little more. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:00, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:59, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink should be blurred more, I don't see any shading or highlights, and the haunch seems empty. Add stripes on the haunch. Quailflight 06:53, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:28, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is really bright. Make it softer, like his leader image. <font color="#99badd">Cool Blue Reason: <font color="#191970">Wrapped Around Your Throat  22:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see much shading at all, but maybe thats just me... And I agree, soften the ear pink a bit. -- Quiet !...  03:08, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:20, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 03:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more of a reddish color and blur it. Also, the nick in the ear doesn't seen realistic. I can fix it for you if you like or just ....... er it's hard to explain I would say maybe thicken the lineart around the nick? What do others say?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:57, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if the nick looks any better, but I tried to fix it. Anyways, better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:58, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few small stripes to the top of his head. BLur the earpink as well. Quailflight 08:20, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:58, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what program you're using, but you need to take the burn tool (looks like a hand) and run it over the back, chest, tail, and head. That will add some good shading. You also need to blur the ear pink quite a bit and the also the stripes. -- Bram ble  03:38, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail מרגלית Lion x Heather 4ever! 17:30, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be triangular.  Snickers  19:41, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail מרגלית Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:09, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:23, May 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * I feel really bad that my rubbishy Raggedstar image is so hard to copy... I thought I'd give you a few tips about how I made the leader image which may help you get the colours and shading right. I paint-bucketed the main colour and then used the burn tool to add shading - with a size 15 brush - and then used the burn tool again (both times on midtones) to paint the stripes on with a size 5 brush and blurred. I think the problem you have is not that the stripes are too light, but rather that they are the wrong colour.
 * Also, the raggedy-fur look needs to be more raggedy. You need to rough it up a bit and make it a little less regular; at the moment yours are all very straight v-shapes, try and vary it a little and make it more sruffy! =) Hope this helps. ✐Sa  NdY  19:15, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail מרגלית Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Rename the image Raggedstar.warrior.png -<font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:54, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

O.K, I'm not sure I did that right, because now it's saying that this is a duplicate of the Raggedpelt (W), but it's been named Raggedpelt.warrior.png.<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:22, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (E)- For Approval
My first ever elder! I know it's bad. Comments? ♥ Willow  03:08, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So how do I make it not over the limit? ♥ Willow  03:22, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

You have to wait until some more images are approved. The limit is 35 chararts up for approval. I bet plenty will be approved by tomorrow and you can put this up :) -- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

K thanks you're really helpful :3 BTW, I like your new siggy! ♥ Willow  03:33, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! A senior warrior, Bramble or Sandy will decline this soon-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

This can stay up Willowpool as it's now under 35 ✐Sa  NdY  16:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone? I haven't got any comments yet. It's not declined, is it? ♥ Willow  20:53, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

No, it isn't. My main comment is that the shading needs blending. ✐Sa NdY  21:03, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How is it now?

A lot better! Just darken and blur the shading and try to make the ear pink less purpley. You forgot to sign :3-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:27, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Purpley? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 01:18, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Purple. Make it more pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:30, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. XP I think it's the same! (Pulls hair) <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 01:37, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone?Doesn't it look like its smudged too much? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 03:48, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

It does look a little too smudged. Blur it together more and that will fix it.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:14, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

How about I make the pelt color darker like his deputy image? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 22:25, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Which is better, do you think? I know I post a ton but this is my 1st charart for approval so...<font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 23:47, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I would definately say to keep the second one. Blur the shading on it, and make the ear pink more of a reddish color like his deputy image Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:16, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded. Ok. I fixed the earpink and blurred it. How's it now? By the way, what's CBA? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 19:40, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

CBA means Comments Before Approval. But only the leader, deputy, and senior warriors can use it. Which excudes me! And about Cinderfur, the lineart on the tail looks thin. You should make it look normal, and blur the shading a bit more. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  21:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How's it now? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 16:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is it declined or approved?<font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 04:10, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more and darken the tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:16, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. blurred highlights and darkened the tail. Anything else?<font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 22:20, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a second here. I don't think Cinderfur was ever an elder. He died a deputy. *checks* Never mind. Sorry. But how could a deputy used to be an elder? LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 07:21, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

He was never really an elder. he was elder age but had to fend for himself under Brokenstar's rule. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 18:56, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

So what should I do? <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 04:00, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights just a little, because it's too bright now. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:12, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. darkened highlights. :<font color="aquamarine" style="background:White">Sky <font color="thistle" style="background:White">wish 23:25, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks a lot better! Just blur the highlights some more and it should be perfect-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:41, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''blurred highlights although for some reason it looks darker :<font color="aquamarine" style="background:White">Sky <font color="thistle" style="background:White">wish 00:04, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Are u sure? I'd say blur it a little bit more anyway. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:02, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Are you sure you didn't bur n instead of blur because the whole image is too dark now. Lighten it so it looks more like the color of his deputy version. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 10:43, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''pelt lightened. <font color="cyan" style="background:White">Sky <font color="silver" style="background:White">wish <font color="thistle" style="background:white">♥ 22:03, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:23, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred highlights for the millionth time! lol Skywish   Let's go May 18th!  00:31, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks good. Quailflight 10:50, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Millie (Lo) - For Approval


With four images going to be approved today, one withdrawn, and 7 not images, this will be the 35th. Not much to say other than that, I'm pretty happy on how she turned out. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 14:40, April 5, 2010 (UTC)I

It looks okay,but maybe you could blur it a little more? Other than that,much better than mine! Clar ris  sa! :)  14:57, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It doesn't look any different, but I blurred it as much as it will go without looking odd.-- Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 15:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yes,its much better,I think it could be aproved now. Clar ris  sa! :)  15:28, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could lighten the ear pink a bit? Snickers 20  Click here! 15:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I love this, Minnow. :) All I see is just the shading could be blurred a tad more. Ice Spring is here! 15:43, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading so it's less visible. :) Fawnstorm  Never miss a beat..  16:50, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for all of your nice comments! It's good to know that after months of being away I haven't forgot anything. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 18:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Try making the stripes a bit darker and darken the ear pink a tad. Also make her tail tip gray.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:12, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

In the manga, her collar was on. Should we leave it as it is, or add a collar? Plus, the fur doesn't really match the color of all of her kittypet, warrior, and apprentice images. See Millie.-- ☮Quail☮ <font color="Maroon">Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 12:52, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I will do as Night shine said, and make two, one with and one without a collar and then put them both up. To Quail, the color can't really be helped because I used the eye dropper and these are the colors it gave me. Last I will get to this as soon as I can. It's almost ten and I still have to do my Latin homework. If I finish latin in time I will try to get it on, but I will get it up by tomorrow at the latest.-- Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:31, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened stripes, ear pink, noticed that I only needed one with a collar, added a collar (a bad one) anything I missed? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 22:03, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Her kittypet image has a red collar. Can you make the line on the collar more stright. Sakura Kiss Haikage 22:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the collar color and I tried to make it as straight as I could. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 14:37, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Could you shade the collar? Compared to the rest of the image it looks flat and cartoony. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:46, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I personaly think every thing is good but the collar...its a little bit crooked and fat try making it more straight and more skinney....other wise i love itLionClaw132 19:24, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks great but the collar really isnt that nice,try getting it more skinny. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:41, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Why does she need a collar? The only time we ever see her as a loner is in the Lost Warrior Series, and she doesn't have a collar then (this is Nightfall, siggie is messed up at the moment)

Yeah, the designers sort of flunked that part of the manga. I agree with Nightfall; loners shouldn't have collars, in any case. When she showed up in the Clans, she didn't have one, and we tend to work more with the actual books then the manga. If you could take it out, that'd be great. -- Bram ble  00:36, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Minnowclaw here! I am having problems with my computer so I can't get to the picture and I can't get on the computer very long so please wait until I can fix my computer.

Minnow, I unerstand that you're having problems with your computer, but this hasn't been worked on in over a week. Please work on this and upload the image again soon or this will have to be declined. _  Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 00:31, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Would it be okay to leave this on Minnow's current project list and take it off of the talkpage? It's really just taking up space now. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  03:08, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

That'd be fine. I'll move it to the declined section momentarily. Minnow; once your computer is fixed, you can put this back up with the changes. It'll be left on your current projects for another week, but that's it. -- Bram ble  18:15, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (Ki) - For approval
ok its my first charat ever. I know it's bad but still..... Comments? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  16:12, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but even with two discussions this is over the limit of 35. Just when I thought we had that problem sorted... Declining as I'm fed up with having to clean up the page already today. Please resubmit this when the page goes below 35 images. Thanks Snickers, and it's not just you so don't feel bad. ✐Sa NdY  16:19, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Its quite good but as Sandy said,below 35. Clar ris  sa! :)  17:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It might have changed since Sandy's comment but this is the 35th image. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So, is it ok? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  19:49, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's fine now. The background needs to be transparent, not black though. ✐Sa NdY  19:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded Better? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  20:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

wait. I have this reserved. Can't i do her? Echo Kit  21:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Echo your reservation is over two weeks old. Snickers has the right to do this image . Haikage Ash's Talk 21:23, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

oh... I was about to but her up but oh well. Echo Kit  21:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lining on the right ear is not there, and I can't see the highlights really well. What program did you use? ~Ec hos  tar  22:04, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is gaps in the line art in various places.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 22:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded crosses fingers Better?

It looks as if you're using paint to do this image. You need to use pixlr of some other image program. The shading needs to be blurred. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to blur the shading more. Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  11:23, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

You are familiar with blurring, right? And some of the lineart was drawn over. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 22:53, April 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * It looks as if you tried to draw some of the lineart back...The ear pink needs to be blurred around the edges and this white is too bright so the shading won't show up as much and it'll make it harder. Look at her other images for reference:



To make it easier for you use the color droppler so you can take the base color from one of these images. Don't take the shading at all though and you are using pixlr right? Because it still looks as if you're using paint. If not there's always GIMP you can download :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  22:27, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I'm using pixlr. I'll work on it : ) Silverstar  Leader of Shineclan!  22:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm on vacation and pixlr does not work. : ( I'll fix it when I go home. (which is in 2 days :) Silverstar  Leader of Shineclan!  00:03, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded What! every time I try to change it on Pixlr it stays the same! = ( Snickers!  Meeow!  I am such a furball.  I ♥ the Warriors wiki!  22:17, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I sugust you redo it. The shading looks like you sprayed it on using Paint. You need to burn it on using the burn on pixlr. Sakura Kiss Haikage 22:20, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I'll redo it. I'll have it done soon. Silverstar

If you want, I can help you re-thicken the lineart. Otherwise, just do what everyone else said above. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:10, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Computer problems.... Getting it fixed tomorow. Right now I'm at the Library.*sigh* Sni  ck  ers  20:04, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid it so is it any better? Sni ck  ers  04:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still looks as if its painted on. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 04:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I promise by StarClan I was using pixlr Sni  ck  ers  04:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Im not saying that your not using pixlr. I'm saying that it looks like you're using the paintbrush instead of the burn tool. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 04:36, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry :S The burn was weelll kinda weird with me Sni  ck  ers  13:35, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

You seemed to have smudged part of the lineart, like near the forelegs. I can help you fix that if you want. 雨 晶須  15:26, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think looks good, but I see a bit of stuff like smuged fur and I also see you accidentally blured the tail and the chest together, making it look mixed up. But other than that, it is SO cute!

p.s. I have a cat

Graystripefan 14:48, April 22, 2010 (UTC)☞Graystripefan☜

Reuploaded Can someone remove the gray background for me because when I did that it wouldn't let me save it cause who knows why...So apart from that any better? <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  22:33, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Parts of the lineart seem to be missing. Just copying the original kit lineart, making the white parts transparent, and lining it up on a new layer over it should do the trick. (: -- Quiet !...  03:15, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Umm.. Layer? <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  19:12, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm... Whats a layer? Spri ngs  tar  20:22, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Copy and paste the lineart over this image. Make sure you delete the white pixels around it. There are lots on the kit blanks-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   20:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid her. Didn't like it before. So Commentos? Spri ngs  tar  11:54, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is...blotchy and I don't see any eye color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  13:27, April 25, 2010 (UTC)I'll Work on her  Snickers

Reuploaded Layers.. Hmmm I tried :/ Spri  ngs  tar  19:55, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

The background is gray, it needs to be transparent  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:25, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yay! Fixed! Spri ngs  tar  20:36, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

That is better :) Okay, darken and blur the shading, make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and color the nose in  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:56, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It won't blur any more. Spri ngs  tar  22:05, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  ★Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 19:04, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on her left (our left) foreleg. Looks good, otherwise:) -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ          ö        19:37, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

I see. I'll get to work on this tomorow. S n icker s     Life's a rollercoaster 20:37, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sil ver paw  Chase that mouse!  18:54, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC)-For Approval
Here she is! Second sharpclaw! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:48, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Again, why am I so slow!? I really want to put my charart up! Image wise, this is good. Just blur the shading and highlights. Also, darken the earpink and make it smaller. But this is good.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:06, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Note: I am dping this while Briarlight is being worked on :) Blurred shading and made the Ear Pink darker and smaller. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:29, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading... Could you make it more noticeable??? I think you blurred it a little to much... Mo onp  elt   ۞  18:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry about that Moonplet. :) I think I got over-excited. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:24, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Sakura Kiss Haikage 14:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Largened Ear Pink. Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:30, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Center it some more. Sakura Kiss Haikage 19:29, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Centered it. Sorry it took me so long, my laptop wouldn't let me upload it. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  09:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading more visiable;thefore, darken it. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:06, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, darken the shading and/or add some highlights. ✐Sa NdY  17:34, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:07, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was talking to Sandy and Shruugy on the IRC and they said to show what my shading normaly looks like. Here it is. Dapple star  10:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, that doesn't look too dark to me. It just needs blending. ✐Sa NdY  12:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's horrible though. :( Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  12:45, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are hard to see, and the bottom of the earpink could be blurred. Quailflight 08:18, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have attempted to blur the shdng, but have failed, also I've brightened highlights. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:32, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:25, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''I've redone her but it won't let me upload her! I've done everything that has been said but I can't do it!!! Sorry, I'll try A.S.A.P Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:47, May 8, 2010 (UTC)'''

Clovertail (W) - For Approval
Here is Clovertail as a warrior, since her kits were made apprentices just before Firestar and Sandstorm left in Firestar's Quest. Comments/Criticism? -- Rain whisker  武士貓  21:56, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh! I likes! But the white-meets-brown place near the chest looks...awkward. <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 23:11, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's the same as her queen image:  Rain  whisker  武士貓  00:05, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, this looks good to me. The only thing I see is maybe blur the ear pink

Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 01:45, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, blur and brighten the highlights, and lighten his haunch shading. It looks a little too dark. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 02:20, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and brighten the shoulder highlight so it matches the haunch hightlight. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Any better? 雨 晶須  17:39, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look awkwardly bright compared to her queen image, try darkening them some. ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  02:13, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

That would probably be due to her queen image not having highlights. Yeah, so you should either darken them like Icey said or you could get rid of them. Their not required and I don't usually use them as you can see below in Frostfur's apprentice pic. But if you want to use them, darken them.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:32, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. What else? 雨 晶須  02:33, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:14, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

There's a gap inbetween the haunch and front leg. Make it white. :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  13:05, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Done. 雨 晶須  23:37, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition on her back some more. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 22:45, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Back? There's no white on her back. 雨 晶須  18:29, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. I meant back leg. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 18:45, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I've blurred the back leg transition, what else? 雨 晶須  19:28, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:26, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Done. 雨 晶須  13:54, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) - For Approval


Hi everybody, I'm new, so if this fails, that's my excuse. :-D <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 22:24, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I un-thu

mbed it so I could see it better. I suggest looking at the tutorials for the charart--you can find a link to them on the main page. They'll tell you how to shade, highlight, and detail correctly. I myself normally use Icythroat's tutorial.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">S

<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">haf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  00:38, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I've kinda skimmed a little, but I'll look through them thouroghly. Thanks! <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 00:59, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

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Needs pupil,blur shading and spots and blur ear pink. Good job though.=) Silverstar

Can I join the project? Though I can't post much images. I'll try to post tons though.

-Sagestorm70

This is good! Just....

1.Go to take the burn tool and put it around the body,

2. Dodge tool at hardness 20 and put highlights, and;

3. Fix the eye. LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 05:15, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely re-did it. <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 21:07, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

If light is coming from the top (which would result in shadows on

the bottom of the image) you dont need shading there. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 19:54, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Removed upper shading, added more flecks because the back looked to plain. Also, I accidentally moved it and couldn't get it back to normal without messing up the chat area. Go me. -_- <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 01:42, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 02:19, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading more. <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 19:39, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think its fine. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:10, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur spots even more <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  19:14, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Does anybody have any advice for blurring in GIMP with a laptop mouse? I don't have my mouse with me. *destroys laptop mouse* <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 02:48, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't use GIMP =|  Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 12:54, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Also make the earpink larger,then blur it  Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 12:55, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) Up for approval
Well, here he is! Open for comments now. Butterfly } { Song!  13:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The image is a redlink at present. ✐Sa NdY  13:48, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I KNOW. I can't open the file! I'll try again. Please wait Butterfly }  { Song!  14:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done! Butterfly } { Song!  14:29, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any eye-color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  14:49, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

In the future, don't use caps, because it's like shouting. I do see the eye color, just that the highlight in the eye seems a bit big. Also, blur the stripes and shading on the tail. -- 雨 晶須  15:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Needs eye colour! :3 Dawnleaf 14:45, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

The eye color is there, but whoever made these blanks made the highlights just as big as the eye color space. And I'm sorry, I won't use caps in the future. Butterfly } { Song!  19:05, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think he had the nick in his ear when he was an apprentice. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:22, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, he might've. Thistleclaw was a pretty tough mentor.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:29, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

As for the image, you should use a tutorial or an apprentice pic like Frostfur's for the eyes.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:26, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I still think this is good for my third attempt (I think of it as my first because it's the only one that was up for more than one day). I origionally made him with the scars on his muzzle, but painted over them because he got them later. Butterfly } { Song!  01:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

You still haven't put coloring in the eyes. He should have amber. Quailflight 16:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Try to copy the eyes from another apprentice image like Shrewpaw. If not, I can do it for you.-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:35, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry for the wait. How's this? I changed the eye highlight to the eye color... Butterfly }  { Song!  14:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some eye-white. Bring up an apprentice image on your art program, and zoom ito his/her face. That should help with the eye color, pupil, and eye-white positions  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:50, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see a pupil. Just *a glint of amber eyes* xD Spri  ngs  tar  20:40, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

There is a pupil, and the eye white was preventing everyone from seeing his eye color. Make up your mind please! Butterfly } { Song!  16:09, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

No one said get rid of the eye highlight just change it's placement. Do what Night said look at some of the approved apprentice chatarts and copy the eye from there. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 16:33, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Or look here for how to do the eye. 雨 晶須  21:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedThank you for the Tutorial! I needed that, and I'll use it ffr. Butterfly } { Song!  16:40, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth(D)- For Approval
Decided to do something different. Comments? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  22:14, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Just blur his back shading more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:22, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading as much as I could. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  20:46, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks good. Clar ris  sa! :)  16:27, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch and back leg.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:37, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:22, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's only been two days, be sure to wait at least five to six says before asking for comments. As for the image, this is very good :) Just darken the stripes more on the face  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Sorry, and thanks! Is it too dark? εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:40, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, right now it's the same color as his stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:28, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Snow storm  00:34, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be here from tomorrow till May 16, so please don't decline when I'm gone. :) εСћб  ђэάѓτ  10:21, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) for approval
he looks terribble he has some errors but i will fix them Iceyfang 21:31, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

You used the thumbnail instead of the full sized blank. Remake it using that. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 21:38, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded Iceyfang 21:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Add more shading around the body, blur it, make the ear pink more....pinkish. Blur the highlights and add more stripes. -- Ice The stars will light your path...

reuploded Iceyfang 22:14, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Blur the stripes and darken the earpink and shading and blur them.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:49, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

It needs to look more like his elder image.. -- Quiet !...  23:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Needs an eye.(As in color,pupil.) <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  00:00, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

It's not terrible, Iceyfang! But the ear looks too fake, and smudge the stripes.-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  11:48, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded iceyfang  15:18, April 23, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Blur the ear more and blur his back. Also,why is the colour overlapping the lineart,did you blur it a little too much? Apart from this,its not terrible,its great! Clar ris  sa! :)  16:36, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 01:27, April 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The tabby stripes are too dark and the ear pink is too bright. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   01:57, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 10:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 13:38, April 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Woah...What happened to the stripes?They are too light,and I can see dark stripes under. Well apart from that really good! <span style="color:Goldenrod;Font-family:Comic Sans MS;Background:Black;Border:2px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; Color:Goldenrod">Smoke on the water Fire in the sky☼  19:41, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 00:25, April 25, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The stripes are too dark, copy them from his elder image. His earpink appears to be purple-pink, and I don't see any eye-color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  00:50, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

the stripes are wayyyyy to dark try making them like his elder image for instance...make his stripes 2 more shadings than his pelt colorLionClaw132 03:49, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this soon.  Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 21:12, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Snickers, users have a period of one week before we give them the decline warning. Iceyfang has two more days.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:47, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Oops sorry =| Anyway I sugest that you make the pelt lighter and the stripes darker. Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 23:04, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

sorry i havn't been on ive been school work but then i have to do a show so i wont be working on this much <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 13:06, May 1, 2010 (UTC)iceygang


 * The lineart is blurred on his back side near his tail.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 03:22, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * i cant get to work on this for 2 weeks but do not decline this can some else do it for now <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 03:46, May 2, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang


 * I'd be happy too, unless if I need to wait on Darkstripe being approved..--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 01:04, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you're using the paintbrush tool to do the stripes. I believe that you're supposed to use the pencil tool. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 15:38, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Owlstar (W) - For Approval
How is he? He's my third one. I'm finally starting to get used to making chararts! Comments?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:25, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  23:36, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 01:09, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the front of his haunch. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:45, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Where, exactly should I add the shading?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:51, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

The front of the haunch, where the little dab of shading is touching. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:38, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Added haunch shading.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:43, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:49, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred shading. -- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:53, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thought the haunch shading needed more blurring.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:01, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds - For Approval
I will say that Moonpelt's version was very good, and I'll remember to put the rank after my charart next time. I guess I didn't think I needed it since Chasing Clouds has only one known rank. Anyways, comments?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Huh...blur the shading on his gray parts and darken the shading on the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:46, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good....blur the gray. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred some line art on the ear. <span style="color:lime;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 13:51, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add some grey to the face. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:39, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart's blurred in several places. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:21, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more gray patches all over-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:27, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading on the gray parts, darken the white shading, fixed the blurred lineart on the ear and some other places, and added gray to the face and other parts.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:14, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks weird. Quailflight 09:49, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's blurred a lot. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:00, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where exactly do you see it blurred? Maybe it's obvious to you, but I can't tell. My computer crashed a few days ago and I have limited time on my brother's computer, so I can't really look over to see exactly where it's blurred.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:52, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Around the head and tail, I think. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:29, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get to working on it soon.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:27, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (Q)-For Approval
This is one thing............. an epic fail. XP Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:32, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 00:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, and add a few to her legs  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:14, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

When I did darken the stripes, it didn't match her warrior image and messed the whole picture up. The stripes on the leg are there, you just can't see them very well because of the shading. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:09, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I still think that you should darken the stripes in the shaded area. The shading would darken the stripes. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 19:27, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened leg stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 22:15, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Keep blurring the stripes, because it looks like they've only been blurred over once. Here's a trick:

If it looks like it won't blur anymore, press the mouse again and keep repeating until the blurring is perfect. Quailflight 10:49, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes more. Comments? Snow storm  23:01, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes have no highlights- they seem to go over the shading and highlights you put- they look drawn on. Could you fix that? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   20:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I understand what you are saying. Do I have to redo the image? Or is there a way to fix it? Snow storm  20:53, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Well, acually Mouse, that's the way I do my tabbies. I do the shading and highlights first, then I do the stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:56, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

A lot of people do that but it only works if you use the burn tool for stripes. You should do the stripes first if you paint them on. As for the image if you're careful you can just highlight that area. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 13:30, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I used the pencil tool to put the stripes on :3 What should I do? I also did it the way Night did it. Is it ok? Snow storm  18:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading again. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 20:15, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I never darkened the shading before, and if I do the stripes wont be visible. Snow storm  03:05, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:31, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA)- For Approval
Here she is! I added a scratch under the eye. It looks better. :D Under the limit- there's a brokenstar and a mist discussion. Sorry Lionclaw, I had it reserved first. Anyway, constructments? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  14:07, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Blur the shading and center the ear pink a little.-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  14:14, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Centered the earpink and blurred. Stupid blurrer- weird word. Is it real? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  14:39, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The back lineart is grey, colour it in black. Darken the shading more, and add some/darken the shading on the herbs. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:37, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

? The back lineart... It isn't, is it, because I never made it grey... Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  16:06, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think that you blurred the lineart accidently while blurring the shading, but the lineart is a gray color along the back (spine to be more specific). _  Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 01:52, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'll edit this on Sunday since I'm sleeping at a friends tonight, tomorrow and Saturday night. ^^ Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  15:52, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  13:35, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) - For Approval
Since there is 4 discussions and 1 being declined this should be under the limit. Also my Chasing Clouds is going to be declined so I'll put this up. And last the sun is hitting her back so the shading is on her front. Constructments? Moon The one and only! 15:39, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image a bit and darken the ear pink. This looks awesome! Also add a few more tail stripes and darken them-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:35, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Constructments? <span style="color:lime;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 00:53, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is perfect!-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:28, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on the bottom need blurring. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:35, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

On the bottom of what??? LOL <span style="color:lime;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 02:18, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant the chest. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   12:11, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 12:36, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little too light. Darken it. 雨 晶須  21:55, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tad. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 23:29, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine since she has barely visible stripes. The earpink needs to be darkeded and blurred.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:01, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I already darkened them so if you want me to lighten them just right below! Constructments? <span style="color:silver;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;"> ϟSinking Moonϟ 01:47, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Halftail (W) For Approval
There are a few discussions, so I think this is okay. I tried to copy Bramble's stripe style, and failed XD Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:26, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Make the ear pink more triangular. Also, do you think you could approve Jay's Wing? It's been over 24 hours.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:29, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks! Centered ear pink. And are you sure? It's still the 27th where I'am. Oh wait, I was up past midnight last night, so I approved him and Spiderpaw (and I think one other) in the a.m. Does that count as a full 24 hours though?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The time is different on the wiki. Right now it would be 3:51 pm April 28th for the wiki-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:51, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, so we go by the time on the wiki?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:53, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I do. Or you can remember what time it was CBA'd. Darken the shading a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:57, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:09, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Try adding a few more stripes in between the others-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:12, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, that would make the stripes look very crowded as they are already pretty close together. Plus, the stripes on his elder image don't have smaller stripes in between  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:22, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, then it is perfect! To me at least. What do you say about Jay's Wing?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:40, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch could be lightened a bit, but other than that it is amazing! Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:51, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks, Mouse! I lightened the shading a little bit on the haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 08:01, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the haunch highlight a teensy bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:32, May 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * The highlights on the haunch and chest need blending a little more. ✐Sa  NdY  19:18, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I brightened the highlight on the haunch, and blurred the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:30, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? _  Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 18:05, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) - For Approval
This is my first art is it ok? Pantherstorm 21:53, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

It's great for your first charart! Blur the shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:01, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

is it better? Pantherstorm 22:17, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! She looks a bit lighter than her other images though, run the burn tool over the whole image once or twice  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:29, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, how is it now? Pantherstorm 22:54, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:50, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Does the ear pink look better now? Pantherstorm 01:36, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yes :) Make the eyes more yellowish like her other images  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:56, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I tryed to make the eyes yellower, is it better now? :D Pantherstorm 16:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Take the same eye colour from her elder image.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:32, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I did that, is she better now? Pantherstorm 20:34, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darkstripe (W) - For Approval


I believe this is along my lines of fail...it took forever to get those stripes to match his other image, but it was worth it. Comments?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:37, April 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * I know I shouldn't be here.... but not fail Shimmer, stunning. ✐Sa  NdY  21:40, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy, *waggles finger* get off the computah XD Shimmer, this looks awsome! The stripes look as if they were smudged instead of blurred though, so maybe blur them some more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:52, April 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated...and *gasps* Now Sandy, even I know you shouldn't be here lol. Finish those exams because mine are coming up in two weeks. I'll be in your situation soon :P How is this? I'm beginning to fly though images again o.o better find someone else now...--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:18, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripe on the haunch seems a bit smudged. Maybe darken it a tiny bit. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 22:35, April 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * Darken him just a tad. How's this?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 02:54, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Highlights need blurring.  Mo    us    et    al    on    !!   20:47, May 1, 2010 (UTC)


 * This is the best I can do. Anymore and I'll start messing up the stripes.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:03, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Could you perhaps lighten the patch on his nose? It's hard to see the lineart there. And I know I colored his nose pink in the rogue image, but to be consistent, I think we decided to just leave the warrior nose black. Also, his eyes are blue in the rogue version. Darkstripe seems to have his eye color change many times; they've been mentioned as yellow, blue, and brown.. I think. Sorry about the trouble you had with the stripes; it was my style you had to try and copy. -- Bram ble  22:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * His eyes are golden on rogue image Bramble, see: Darkstripe_(R).png And its fine :) I like to challenge myself. I kind of had to highlight the top of his head again so it could blur in well.Updated--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:59, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the highlights. Mist cloud  20:58, May 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 03:20, May 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * I think he's a little too dark. Lighten him up a bit. His stripes are amazing, though! 雨  晶須  13:56, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Molekit (OTS) (Ki) - For Approval
I tried two different styles, and I'm not sure which one to put up for approval. Comments, suggestions, and opinions? _  Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 21:43, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one better. It seems odd to have an underbelly darker than the main color, rather than lighter. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 21:47, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

I do like the second one better; but you could also try brown with a cream underbelly (and a few cream markings)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:50, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

They are both really good (only what to expect from Icy XD) But I like the second better  Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 22:05, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one best. The brown patches need to be blurred a bit more. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 22:31, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

I, personally like the 1st one. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 22:40, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:37, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

The second looks better, I think it will look better with a underbelly patch, and darken the shading some. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 01:37, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightfall that I would like the first one, but with the colors reversed. :) But it's your decision ultimately.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:08, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Personally, I like the second one, because you almost never see a cat with an underbelly darker than the main pelt color. Also, if you do choose the second image, try making the patches more uneven, as they seem pretty circular to me. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:38, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried what Nightfall and Insane said to, and I like the style and all, but I think i failed with my artistic skills. :P _   Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 00:46, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could put a patch on our right?  Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 12:52, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. _   Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 16:20, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the chest highlight a tad. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 20:35, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. _   Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 00:24, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the brown dip in a the chest a little. The white looks like a strait line. -- Dark hallows 21:21, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

My internet is extremely slow right now, and it's taking a couple of minutes just to load the page. Our internet speed is supposed to be running at 3 Mg, but it's running at .5 Mg, and my parents don't know how long it will be before it is fixed, so please keep this up at least a week before it's declined, I hope that it will be fixed by then. _  Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 22:59, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

My internet is better now. But now I have a question, do I make the brown dip into the chest a little on our right, our left, or on both sides? _  Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 18:01, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

New Naming Conventions
Due to the new policy: Image Use, we're going to be using a system of naming our images in an organized and systematic way. You may recall that Sandy and I tried to do this earlier back in 2009, but it only some what worked. The file should be named as such: Name.rank.extension. An example is: Angelwing.warrior.png. Also, Insaneular is busy moving older files to be uniform with the new naming conventions, so don't be panicked when you see a lot of redlinks. Thanks, -- Bram ble  17:21, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - I usually name my images something similar to that, but I'll make sure I name it correctly the next time I make an image. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:35, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I normally do this anyway, and Bramble did you ever get in touch with Eu about our problem we were going to do with the blanks?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 20:42, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. I'll try to remember that. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   20:45, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

So something like: Firestar(W).png wouldn't be alright?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:12, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

No. It would be something like Name.rank.png. → •Maple  fern•  ←  22:30, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, so like this - Firestar.warrior.png - or, I think Firestar.W.png - would be alright too (correct me if I'm wrong, Bramble)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:57, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

We were hoping to avoid images like that - such as 'Firestar (W).png' or 'Firestar.w.png' or 'Firestar.wr.png' etc. It makes it easier to plug it into a gallery knowing the file name, because it will be exactly what it is. We won't have to guess if it's (W) or w or W; we'll know it's 'warrior'. Shimmerpool; I've e-mailed him and am waiting on a response. I'll get back to you as soon as he answers. -- Bram ble  02:53, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

So Bramble, you mean, name files like Ivypool.medicine_cat.gif something like this?-- ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  03:09, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I acually think this is what she means - Ivypool.medcat.gif, or Ivypool.medicinecat.gif  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:09, May 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * Basically, no brackets (excepting those to distinguish between two characters with the same name - eg.Ashfur(TC) and Ashfur(WC) ) and no underscores. It's pretty simple really as I understand it. Some examples:

Rockpaw.kit.png Rockpaw.apprentice.png Mousefur.warrior.png Jayfeather.apprentice.png Jayfeather.medcatapprentice.png Leafpool.medcat.png Firestar.leader.png JaysWing.Sharpclaw.png FallenLeaves.softpaw.png Brick.rogue.png


 * The only one I'm not sure about is medicine cats, whether we want it written as Mothwing.medicinecatapprentice.png or Mothwing.medcatapprentice.png etc.

✐Sa NdY  19:24, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I normally name files like that anyway, but what about Robinwing.RC.warrior.png? I double Sandy's question, too. :) _   Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 20:56, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, I figured I should have told people about these. I will clarify the conventions that I have been using thus far, which I suppose will become the norm: For medicine cats: Name.mc.png For medicine cat apprentices: Name.mca.png For Sharpclaws: Name.sc.png For Caveguards: Name.cg.png For Prey-hunters: Name.ph.png For Kit-mothers, just name.queen.png, since it's with the queen blank For all other ranks it's just the full name of the rank. And for cats with a clan marker after their name, something like: Ashfur(TC).warrior.png. Also, even for past ranks of a cat use their most current name in it. i.e, Firestar's apprentice image is Firestar.apprentice.png, not Firepaw. Does this clear it up?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:08, May 7, 2010 (UTC)


 * For the most part yeah, but do we title images such as medicine cats Name.mc.png or Name.MC.png? and etc. for all of the other ranks, too. I usually use caps for MCA or MC, since they're abbreviations, but if if they need to be lowercase then I'll do that from now on. _   Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 00:01, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

I've been using lowercase so far, although that's quite a minute difference so it's not a huge deal :)  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 00:24, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, capitalization is not something you'll need to trouble yourself over. I'll archive this in a moment, as all the questions seem to be answered. -- Bram ble  18:19, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Capitalization DOES matter! It is a unix-based system, and there is a difference between lowercase and uppercase. E.g. Cinderpelt.medcat.png is not the same file as Cinderpelt.Medcat.png or Cinderpelt.MedCat.png. So you should decide on it, f.i. use always all lowercase. Helixtalk 18:24, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Robinwing(SC)-For Approval
Here I know he doesn't have a description, but I really worked hard on him! ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  13:49, May 2, 2010 (UTC)



You can't really put a Charart up for approval if it dosen't have a description. What book is he in? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  13:54, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Even if he does have a description, this is over the limit with only one discussion going on, isn't it?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 14:04, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

No. The Briarlight blank is considered a discussion. Sorry Ivy but Fawn's right. We can't make chararts for cats without a discription for all we know he could be black with gray spots. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 14:08, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

It you got rid of the herbs and put the warrior lineart back over it (you'd probably have to do the eye again, though), this could be Robinwing (SC). _  Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 15:59, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Icethroat's right; this could make a pretty good Robinwing. You would have to change the eye color to amber though, and he is short-haired.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:08, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well then... REUPLOADED ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  12:31, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more, darken the shading and colour in the eye. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 22:26, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes a lot and add ear pink in addition to what Icestorm said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:30, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded My chararts are getting worse.. ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  08:05, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be thined, and blur the highlights. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 20:31, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks weird.-- Dark hallows 21:18, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

He's acually more of a reddisn-brown color; run the saturate tool over him once or twice.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:11, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a .png file, and rename it according to the new image policy (sounded like Bramble there, didn't I? XD) <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:56, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (W)- for approval
Hey guys! Haven't been on for a long time and I think my skills have faded... but, here ya' go! EARTH DAY!  Make sure you recycle! You get $!  16:47, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, just blur the ear pink. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 17:59, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Is this supposed to be Cinderfur? I looked and can't find a Cedarfur. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 18:36, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I think she does mean Cinderfur. He's on her current projects list  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:31, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be more triangular. 雨 晶須  21:56, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ye, I do mean Cinderfur. I just couldn't remember his name, when I made him on Pixlr! Opps... EARTH DAY!  Make sure you recycle! You get $!  15:14, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading-- Dark hallows 21:17, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (D) -- For Approval
I'm hiding under my bed, if you need me. But since there are a lot of images in the CBA stage, I think I'm safe. → •Maple  fern•  ←  23:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Great job! The only thing I see is the ear pink and the white/brown transition could be blurred some more. 雨 晶須  01:06, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome job, Maple :) Blur the shading and highlights, make the white on his chest stretch up higher, and add a few stripes to his face; in addition to what Blackclaw said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:24, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Again, when I state 35, I mean 35. That doesn't mean put up another when images are in CBA or if they're being declined. It means put it up when there's room. Anyway, the images is good. I don't see anything other than what has already been stated. -- Bram ble  22:42, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Bramble, I shall not do it again. Anyway, it's fixed. → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:54, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, lighten the ear pink, I can barely see it and darken/add shading to the head. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 12:13, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add more shading to the legs, also. And maybe blur the highlights more? Dark hallows 21:16, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Redwillow (A) - For Approval
Well, images are in the CBA stage, and mine should get approved today, so I think I'm safe. But I think this cat is messed up. He has a girly name, and can willows be red? And...ginger brown cat? *dies* -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 22:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Again, when I state 35, I mean 35. That doesn't mean put up another when images are in CBA or if they're being declined, or if your image is very close to being approved. It means put it up when there's room. Now, the image is well done. The only thing I see is that the spots look too regular and poka-dotted. Make them a few different sizes and more irregular, and blur. -- Bram ble  22:44, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm really sorry, Bramble! I promise it won't happen again. And thanks. :) -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 23:24, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add brown patches, and maybe make the mottled more like his warrior image. → •Maple  fern•  ←  10:56, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 12:12, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, Icy this is good! An I mean good! As Bramble said the spots look more like polka dots. Make them like spots. Mist cloud  21:00, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

I would just say Darken shading, and this will be VERY ready. -- Nighty You know what... I like pie. XD 21:05, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading made the dark spots a reddish colour...should I keep it that way, or lighten it? Btw, the shading was in the front so the highlight was on her back. Than,ks for the nice comments! :D -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:16, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink blends just a tad too much, make it brighter.-- Dark hallows 21:13, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Brightened ear pink, better? -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:26, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:30, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It wouldn't blur more. -- Icestorm Peace 23:39, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

The patches don't really look like his warrior image -. → •Maple  fern•  ←  23:46, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Maple's right, it doesn't. it's too bright, and there's to dramatic a change between colours. Butterfly } { Song!  16:17, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Um....I copied the colours from his warrior image....-- Icestorm Peace 16:24, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

It's the way you did the shading and highlights. I suggest redoing it because the mottles look more like spots and are too big. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:45, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Icestorm Peace 23:17, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (W) - For Approval
I'm withdrawing Rosetail, so this should be ok. Comments? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 20:07, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have torn ears?  Snickers  20:10, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

His other images don't have torn ears, and I don't want to contradict. It'll probably be fixed next tweak week. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 20:13, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and stripes, and darken the ear pink a tad. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 20:16, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! '''20:28, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

There are some stray pixels around his tail.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 00:11, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ''' <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 00:24, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

His tail looks odd... the break point doesn't seem right... perhaps thicken it?-- Dark hallows 21:11, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 23:42, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks unnatural. Maybe make the tip bend down a little, you know, sag? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   00:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 01:06, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better, but the part circled here-looks more sagged than broken. Can you fix that? I'm sorry I didn't give enough detail before. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:30, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 14:36, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

just lighten the pink a tinsy bit it looks brown &lt;fontcolor="Black"&gt;LionClaw&lt;/font&gt;<font color="Yellow" style="background:red;"> Lionclan's coming!

Reuploaded. Better? <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 15:10, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Mistystar (L)- For Approval
Well, since Artimas couldn't do her, Bramble offered to let me do her! So, here she is! Comments? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:12, May 4, 2010 (UTC)\

All hail Mistystar =D Blur the highlight on her chest a little.  Snickers  23:16, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Rename the file Mistystar.leader.png →  •Maple  fern•  ←  23:31, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

The chest highlight looks fine to me. This is great! Darken the haunch shading a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:47, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shadeing more, just a bit so it looks natural... :P EARTH DAY!  Make sure you recycle! You get $!  00:23, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

She's so pretty! But yes, do blur the neck shading. Dark hallows 21:09, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading, rename the file, and darken the shading a tad all around. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:27, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I uploaded this before the new naming rule. Anything else? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   00:33, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful!! I'll I see is that the shading on her back should be darker. -- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 01:58, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Mo    us    et    al    on    !!   00:26, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Mousey I love it! Quailflight 10:53, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! But I think the highlight on her tail could be lightened more. 雨 晶須  14:01, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Moss (Q) - For Approval


you like? i do i think its my best yet....constructmentsLionClaw132 03:50, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. Lighten that and make the ear pink smaller. Also darken the shading on the face-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:01, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Where did the image go?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I put it back up. I think this is the right image? Dark hallows 16:03, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

yes thank you! my computer is bieng very very STUIPID it wont let me downlaod it! any ways comments?LionClaw132 00:00, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred the lineart on the back. S n icker s     Life's a rollercoaster 20:28, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Also rename the file to Moss.queen.png S n icker s      Life's a rollercoaster 20:29, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

btw i didnt blur the line art the queen image came like that so it cant be helped but i can fix the file LionClaw132 23:37, May 7, 2010 (UTC)&nbs o i nClaw L     Times running out

One character reservation per person?
Dunno about this but I'm finding it imposible to find characters to do... I had a hard time finding 'one'... and IDK... maybe it's time we change it to one character per person. At least until a new book is released? Dark hallows 21:40, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

I can see where you're coming from but I don't think it's such a good idea. Some people already take down the image they have up for approval to reserve another and I think having only one character per person would encourage. I think we should just enforce( or enstate, I dont know if it's a rule or not) that you have to keep the character that you have up for approval on your current projects list until it's approved. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:46, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Shady, Im going to have to go with Ashy on this one. But, would you be able to change your current project when your image is in the CBA stage; or when it's put on the article  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:12, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

I was thinking put on the article since last minute comments happen every once in a while. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  23:14, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that makes sense :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:16, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

No big deal I don't know if I support this myself-- Dark hallows 23:48, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think it should stay the same because there are always more characters needing art once new books come out. Even if all the chararts are done for some time that means more people will focus on Project Characters. There are still plenty of images do to right now-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:37, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I don't believe we have to do this yet, but we can do is open opportunites to make non-cat blanks. There are still images needed for dogs, badgers, foxes, horses, etc., and all the invididual characters, such as Midnight and the Rat Leader. That will open a few new characters to do. -- Bram ble  02:56, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

That would be cool :) We could also do lions, leopards, ect. So we could do Fleetfoot, Sunpelt, Thorntooth ect.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:04, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

That would be a good idea, now that all the cat blanks have been approved. I'd like to do a rat blank. 雨 晶須  22:51, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

That is a good idea! I personally would like to a tiger blank. S n icker s     Life's a rollercoaster 13:25, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'd like to try a dog blank (perhaps we should have two- small and large? I don't think the rotties in A Dangerous Path look like the JRT in... one of the books). May I reserve that now? Dark hallows 19:17, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh, good idea:) I'd like to try out a wolf blank (are we allowed to do blanks for animals that don't have a character part in the story?). -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ          ö        22:14, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

How would we name them? Like: File:TigerWarriorFemale.blank.png? Or(example): File:TigerLeader.png? We might not have to do Female/Male for a tiger though.... S n icker s     Life's a rollercoaster 00:36, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I think we would have to do male/female for a tiger. Shadestar is a tigress; and Thorntooth is a male tiger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:02, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

I am so with you guys! But if we want to do Pip, we need a dog blank that looks like a terrier.-- Quailflight 09:10, May 9, 2010 (UTC)


 * Just want to repeat something: "I don't believe we have to do this yet..." - I agree that it's not necessary quite yet whilst there are still characters to do and more books due out soon. I do however think that one current project per person may be the way to go... as in one character per person; the one you have up for approval or are due to put up. I'd also like to remind people that the current projects table is to include the image you have on the page and should only be changed once the image has left the page (either been approved or declined) - some people seem to try and get past this and have 3 by changing their current projects as soon as they put a cat up for approval. ✐Sa  NdY  11:21, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Sandy but I still don't think thats a good idea. An idea I had was to do ranks that a character was never seen as but had to be. An example is Snowbird, she was never seen as a kit or apprentice but she odviously had to have been one at some point in time. What does everyone else think? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  13:54, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't mean to be rude, Sandy, but personally, I think that one current project per person isn't such a great idea, because there are still plenty of chararcters to do, so changing it isn't neccasary yet. Also, if we decide that we should start creating non-cat blanks, there will be more characters to do. That's just my opinion, though. 雨 晶須  14:09, May 9, 2010 (UTC)


 * rofl. I'm not going to eat you because you disagree with me ^_^ And I'm not a bomb about to explode either. I just feel that there is no point in having two 'reservations' when only one image can be put up for approval. They just end up sat there for weeks on end as people get their other image approved which narrows down the options for people who get their images approved more quickly. I just brought it up as I think we need to consider all the options, and this was the original point brought up anyway whch was overshadowed by other animal blanks... Okay, Sandy over and out. ✐Sa  NdY  14:17, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

To be honest I agree with Sandy on this point. And whether we change the reservations or not, like she said, you shouldn't remove a character from your list before it gets approved, because then, if someone searches for that character in the table, and thinks nobody has it, they can reserve it not know you have it up for approval, and it only causes trouble. I don't think we need to do animal blanks quite yet, maybe soon, but not necessarily right now. And keep in mind that adding animal blanks would only add a small number of chararts to do, since there are very few other animals, and could incite more arguments over who gets to do those few.  i nsaneular The original Hazelnut spread 16:09, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Flametail (A) -- For Approval
This is Flametail as a warrior apprentice! Comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  00:02, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit and blur the shading. -- Icestorm Peace 00:10, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred and darkened. More comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  00:26, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still needs more blurring.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 01:56, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading! What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  16:50, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (W) - For Approval
I know his name is wrong, I'll fix that next upload. Dark hallows 16:19, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the ear tuft line art.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I copied the lineart from his deputy image. Dark hallows 01:01, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. I think it looks a little odd though because the line art is suddenly thinner. For the image, make the shoulder highlight brighter and define the stripes some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:06, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Define and darken the stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:17, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

maybe try putting some highlights on the headLionClaw132 00:17, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with making the ear lineart thinner, and maybe brighten the shoulder highlights a smidge. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:17, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Dark hallows 22:24, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) - For Approval
I'm really happy with this! Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:46, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Good job! blur the stripes on her tail a little more. S n icker s     Life's a rollercoaster 20:26, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred tail stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:27, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC) Declined
I would like to join Project Charart and would like to put up this image for approval of Shy Fawn:



There's already one up for approval. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 21:41, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe I could do Acorntail as a deputy? Is that one ok to do? ! Swift leap★  Swiftleap's Den  21:55, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Moonpelt has him reserved. -- Icestorm Peace 22:14, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above. Please be sure that no one has already put up or reserved the character you want to do before you do him/her. This is very good though; and of course you can join; I'll add you in :) ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:51, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W) for approval
Okay,I guess it was up before but i was really busy with cats of the clans so i didnt get to approve her. I did her again. Um..so what do you think?(i know shes rubbish and i'm happy to do her again) Clar  ris  sa! :)  10:03, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

No, she isn't rubbish. But add some highlights on the areas that would kind of stick out, blur the ones you already have, make the earpink a bit more visible and add shading on the edges. Butterfly } { Song!  16:10, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Her pelt is too dark. According to her article, she is dark gray, not black. You could try to lighten her pelt a lot, or redo her with a dark gray color. 雨 晶須  17:43, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add highlights to the haunch. There is nothing there. Quailflight 09:08, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Pouncetail's tail
they said in the Ultimate leader's election: Firestar that his tail was snapped like a twig so can i redo his image and make his tail snapped?LionClaw132 00:22, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think his tail may have healed. That was a battle injury so I dont think the break would still be that sharp after healing. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  00:35, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

ohhh ok ash thanks yoour a senior warrior right?LionClaw132 04:43, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

That I am. You're welcome Lion. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  13:31, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (W) - For Approval
Comments? Did I make him too red? I copied the deputy image.-- Quailflight 04:02, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! The eye line art is a little blurred. Make him more orangey. Darken the tail and arm stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:12, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I redid the image. Comments?-- Quailflight 09:06, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too dark, and blur the shading. 雨 晶須  14:11, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thrushpelt -For Approval
Not much to say about her. Comments? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:45, May 9, 2010 (UTC)