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Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading

Reups.

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink into the pelt, it looks like it cuts off very abruptly. 23:07, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

I think you could smooth out the shading on the main body and tail more. also, the shading is leaking on the legs. (Remember to blur the edges of the shading only so that it doesn't end up leaking)

The shading is leaking on the chest and where the tail-tip is over the body as well. Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 14:01, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Please reupload under File:Rockfall.star.png from now on, thank you. I've renamed it for you, but for future reference, please remember the naming guidelines that we have. They can be found above the reservation table on the main page.

Yep, I'm still working, I was out of town for a long time, so i had no accsess to my computer.

Reups.

The shading looks a little flat imo, and the fur needs to be smudged into the fur a bit. —   Fla      me    I can and I will  22:35, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Oops wrong file.Reuploaded.

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 23:53, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Willow Tail (Star) - For Approval
Bleh, I'll probably redo the shading later. Stoatskip (talk) 19:23, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, that's better. Stoatskip (talk) 20:14, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps try blurring the stipes? Nice. Misty~ (talk) 22:32, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

could you also add some depth to the shading on the main body? it looks a little flat. the eyes are beautiful, by the way! 22:36 Fri Nov 27

Thicken the stripes - they look way too thin.

Re-ups Thank you! Stoatskip (talk) 14:33, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think you still need to blur the stripes more. Misty~ (talk) 01:37, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes more tapered.

Re-ups I can't really blur them more than they are now. 15:52, November 29, 2015

You seem to know what you're doing and this looks more than 50% done so I am going to go ahead and promote you to an apprentice. 16:29, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail just a smidge? 23:05 Sun Nov 29

The stripes seem to be much darker on her other images. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 05:38, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Have you shaded the ear-pink and nose yet? If not, can you please do that? Thanks. If it's not compulsory, then my apologies Misty~ (talk) 05:54, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's not required, I don't think; I didn't do it on my earlier images. Anyway, maybe define the eye depth a little? 01:39, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

can you darken the stripes a little? I think they're darker on the others. 10:01, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to, but could you connect some of the stripes on their shoulder? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  10:10, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Oops, almost forgot I was working on this. 22:50, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes still look too thin, imo.

I think they're fine, some of them would start to blend if I made them thicker. 22:02, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Ok but I still don't think the stripe style on this matches her other images. They seem to be smudged, not blurred.

I'm sorry for contradicting what I said before, but I think the stripes on her other images are more defined and sharper. 01:51, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Also (sorry for commenting twice >-<) she has bright blue eyes. 01:56, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading a bit. 02:50 Fri Dec 11

Drizzle (ES) - For Approval
Love the name. Hate the texture though. Not sure it matches that well :/ 12:57, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think you did pretty well matching it :) But the texture could stand to be lightened quite a bit, as it isn't that dark. Also the chest patch only goes down a little bit, and it's like a bib. 13:23, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the ear shading a tad? Looks very lovely :-) 02:58 Thu Dec 3 The white is to thick in my opinion, it looks like she has white streaked fur. --Belllastar (talk) 17:26, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just my screen, but I think the gray on the kit image might be a bit darker. 22:08, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 11:12, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I can get you the file from Storm if you need it Shinx? 13:43, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'd appreciate that :) 14:24, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

tbh it looks great without it. CBA? 10:02, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Even if it does it still has an outstanding comment. I sent shinx the file and they havent teuploaded yet. And besides if the light source is coming from where i think it is the whole top of the tail would be in light. This includes the base of the tail where theres a lot of shading 13:09, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I was waiting for another comment before I reuploaded, so that's why I didnt upload immediately after getting the file. 15:07, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Fair enough, Shinx. CBA?

Sorry for breaking your CBA, but I don't really think the texture matches. It seems thicker than on the kit. 22:43 Wed Dec 9

I think it matches just fine. The kit blanks are so small and this is a bigger blank for an adult cat, and tbh the texture won't match 100% 22:46, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

By "thicker" do you mean thicker lines or just more texture...? I'm confused 23:52, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine, and Winter is correct. The blank is much bigger than the kit... so I'm going to re-CBA this.

Actually, the texture seems to be over smudged and overly thick compared to the kit. It doesn't match. 11:28, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Beetle (DF) - CBA
???? 21:09, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

his brown front paw should be black, the black on the tail should extend a bit further, and the far hind paw's black should be extended a little bit too. 21:12, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 01:07, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the dark patches some? 02:19 Sun Dec 6

They're not blurred they're smudged. 02:36, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge them more. Also, the texture is more.... Scribbly, to say. The texture here looks too straight. 02:44, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

I only said blur because the rogue's patches are softer. 18:53 Sun Dec 6

re-uploaded: Ok so I think I damaged this even more than it already is <_< 23:28, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Idk but the black splotches look like shading on the bottom

I still don't think the texture matches. Try repeatedly drawing on little "triangles" for the texture. I'm horrid at explaining... 11:45, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded: am cri 01:48, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the black more.

Re-uploaded: How do I charart 06:03, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

I still don;t think the texture matches. You should attempt to repeatedly draw on triangles (like strands of fur) instead of drawing it in straight lines. 09:46, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: This texture will be the death of me 12:27, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

The pupil seems to just kinda... blend in with the black. Could you reposition it?

reuploaded for Icy due to GIMP not working for her. 00:42 Sat Dec 12

Lighten and define the shading. 11:22, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? 14:47 Sat Dec 12

GIMP won't work. Whenever I start it it'll freeze and crash and no matter how many times I uninstall and reinstall it, it does the same thing. So I'm gonna withdraw, but if anyone has any suggestions to help me fix GIMP I would actually love you forever. 21:19, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Can i take over? 21:48, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 10:59, December 13, 2015 (UTC)

Cannot find anything wrong with this. CBA?

Shivering Rose (Ki) ~ For Evaluation
First charart!! I made this in FireAlpaca. Comments? 21:11, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define highlights ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:31, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  21:37, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define nosepink because I can barely see it. Nice! 05:56, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

On a black cat, the nose "pink" is supposed to be black.

Lighten her up a bit; she looks almost pure black on my screen, which makes things seem lighter. Great job, especiall for a first. 06:17, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and smoothen the leg shading.

re-ups  23:40, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

She still needs to be lightened up, I can't make out the outline. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:59, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

As I've said before, seeing all of the lineart is not mandatory. As I can make out the lineart in places, I think it's fine. Could you define the light on the tail, though?

re-ups 00:19, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

The nosepink is still red. Change it to dark gray, please :-) 00:23 Wed Dec 9

Smooth the highlights a bit, they look hard-edged. I know, doing most anything with these blanks is a pain >.< 00:51, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 00:10, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

smoothen out the highlights 16:00, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you tell me how to do that? I'm not sure what that means ^^; 23:20, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps try running the blue tool over the highlight layer a couple of times? 06:20, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Rainfur (TC) (Star) - For Approval
Tried some tinted shading, however if someone could give me advice on textures - the other chararts have them. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  22:04, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not very good at texture, so I can't really help you with that, but could you blur or smudge the shading more? 23:21 Tue Dec 8

Nice. Define the light in our right eye. 00:17, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading.

There's waste by her paws, and correct me if I'm mistaken, but shouldn't the shading on <-- leg be on the other side based on your light source? Very nice. 00:48, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading and I think there are some blurred lineart parts. Also can you add some depth to the eye? 06:06, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of shading leaking on her chin (sorry about being picky), and she needs more speckles. Nice! 08:46, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest turning your shading laer to multiply. You don't have to, but just thought Id suggest it. Would you like the file? 11:03, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Thanks for all the feedback! It's a nice welcome back! I've tried to complete all of the improvements tell me if I've missed anything. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  17:58, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Shading issues. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  18:02, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more 19:14, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and define the shading depth. 19:50 Wed Dec 9

REUPLOADED - Shading. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:51, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the shading could bee smoothed out or smudged more, depending on what you did.

Try lightening the opacity. 00:23, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be a really dark tail-tip like that? 01:10, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I still think she needs more speckles, perhaps check the warrior/queen image for some reference? 11:55, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Shading should be smoothed out and lightened. Then brightened and applied more speckles. Also, I've made the texture more apparent. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:13, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on <== that front paw? 22:17, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out and lighten it on the head. 11:30, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Shading should be better. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:58, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading on --> this ear? The earpink color kinda disappears in the shading. <span style="">02:34 Sun Dec 13

Maybe expand the shading a little on the tail? Lovely. :)  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  06:37, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Woop, woop! — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  20:27, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source on the tail and I think this is ready for a CBA. Nice work!

Littlekit (Ki) - CBA
tiny baby

Re-uploaded. Was asked to do some things.

I asked you to define the shading and it llooks good. Can you maybe just smooth out the shading in general? What I mean is like blur it some more, but I know you don't blur so like just making it more smoother.

Re-uploaded. I have too many shading layers. =/

* Facepalm* Sorry for messing it up over here, i always manage to do that XD 04:28, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out on the main body. 11:29, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Perhaps add some shading to <== this ear?  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  06:38, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA?

Honey Pelt (K) - For Approval
05:05, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I fixed the duplicate images for you! Can you blur the shading on the legs and chest a little bit? Super cute! 05:37, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are slightly thicker on his ES^^

The ES has texture, I think, so this should as well. 01:15, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading depth? Cutee! <span style="">02:46 Fri Dec 11

Reups Thanks <3! Also, ty Ivystripe, i didn't even know this went through cause my computer wasn't registering it, i tried to post it twice so that explains the duplication. x3 04:27, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on her neck and body and define it on the tail. 11:20, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on ==> this leg.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  06:39, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does he look green?

Littlestep (Star) - CBA
i'm wayyy up i feel blessed <span style="">02:43 Fri Dec 11

idk if you know, but the colors for this are pure black and pure white. I doubt you need the file, but feel free to ask me for it if you need it.

Yep, Winter told me they were pure black and pure white, so that's what was used :-) <span style="">18:31 Sat Dec 12

CBA? 06:20, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom (ES) ~ For Approval
I seriously love this pattern.

Her eyes look like they're looking different directions. It might just be me, though. If you think they're fine, feel free to disregard. <span style="">01:07 Tue Dec 15

Re-uploaded Better?

Mud Paws (ES) ~ For Approval
ill tweak the shading more when i feel up to it or something 19:19, December 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the shading, and I'm not sure if this counts as what you're going to do with the shading, but can you please expand and define it? 02:37, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 11:19, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Firestar (L. Alt) - For Approval
This is fugly ._.


 * There isn't texture, its shading


 * Done with no layers


 * Colors from file. 06:48, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

the depth needs defining and it needs to be smoothed out a lot. 11:06, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Shading needs to be defined (I don't know if that's what Trolly meant but I'm saying it just in case). I can't see it at all. 11:11, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:34, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

It could stand to be defined a little more, it kinda passes for a texture. <span style="">20:13 Mon Dec 14

Re-uploaded 00:14, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Storm Pelt (ES) ~ For Approval
oh god I hate this. Anyways. Comments? 09:27, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back legs. This is nice!

Re-uploaded Thanks. 01:25, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blend the scars a tiny bit more with the pelt? It kinda stands out awkwardly 01:34, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:35, December 15, 2015 (UTC) 

What about his tail? Shouldn't it be more... bushy? <font color="#9facf4">S <font color="#90b0f0">i <font color="#80b4ec">l <font color="#71b9e9">v <font color="#61bde5">e <font color="#52c1e1">r <font color="#54c7df">t <font color="#55cddd">w <font color="#57d2da">i <font color="#58d8d8">g  08:47, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

thats for notable instances only, which his isnt. 08:50, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Only if it's mentioned numerous times like Poppydawn. 09:16, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Pine Needle (ES) ~ For Approval
mew 22:41, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Fircone (ES) - For Approval
<font color="#9facf4">S <font color="#90b0f0">i <font color="#80b4ec">l <font color="#71b9e9">v <font color="#61bde5">e <font color="#52c1e1">r <font color="#54c7df">t <font color="#55cddd">w <font color="#57d2da">i <font color="#58d8d8">g  07:28, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

You have to reserve this on the main page before you post. However, since this is your first time, I'll reserve it for you. But please remember to reserve before you post images. This is nice!

Also, I'll promote you into an apprentice. You seem to have excellent knowledge of chararts.