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Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone
Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger. 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^ 20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more ginger 8D  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 02:15, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Not to be very picky, and this might just be me, but the shading is a little bit to dark overall. Could you just lighten it up? Also blur the tail shading too. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  20:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think this might be as ginger as it will get.. x3 But eh. 03:51, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlight/lighter part/thing a bit bigger? 8D Sky Gatlocke 11:14, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Don't hate me, but she still looks like a light-brown cat 00:18, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmkay, I'll try my best, I'll upload soon x3 *doesn't hate you* 02:06, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe have the colors a bit closer to Brightheart or Flowerstar? don't hurt me! *hides*  00:12, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Scarlet, it's fine. XD I'm really sorry, I don't know what the problem is but whenever I try to make it more ginger, it looks so unnatural... Did my best, though. :3 Oh, and Sky, where? 05:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Meh, it was just a preference, I just thought the lighter part looked a little small on the shoulder. Sky Molto bene 23:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Ivy. It was just a preference, feel free to ignore it. Define the ear-pink a bit 23:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, uh, sorry. x3 Can choo define the neck shading if it's there, or is that whole bit shaded? x.x Sky Molto bene 23:52, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlight/lighter part on the shoulder. 06:13, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to do what all of you guys said 04:43, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.) 21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste in between the legs. That, or it's me munted eyes. :P Sky Molto bene 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out and blur the chest, paws, and tail tip feathering; it looked a bit choppy 23:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste, Trolly. ^^; Also, blur the ear pink. 03:05, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add the slightest tad more opacity to the shading. *thought Cloudy was Sky e3e* 08:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yea, blur the shading, too. Forgot to mention that up ^^^there. Dazzle did what now? =P  09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge that hard edged bit off to the right on the white on the tail? How did you mistake her for my awesomeness? xD Sky Molto bene   12:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry guys, I have to withdraw this, I have to find out some personal things, and I will probably have smaller time to be online. 02:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over C:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 21:26, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I attempted to match it to the warrior image's pattern. Don't look at it, it's ugly D:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 22:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <3 Lovely Elo 22:03 Sun Mar 4

Blur it, too. 22:32, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match all that well. It seems like the alt apprentice's stripes were based off the normal warrior image, so using that as a ref on what it'd look like from this angle might help. 15:27, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I tried to match the warrior; I didn't suceed. Withdrawing because I don't want to get frustrated Dx  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 20:59, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 00:54, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:06, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes, and make him more golden, less pale yellow. 00:09, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean, 'smudge the stripes'? I can't 'cause I'm taking the stripes of the apprentice image, and not all tabby stripes need smudging. Also, I took the color from the apprentice, but I'll try to change it. 00:13, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think the colour is fine, but blur the tail shading and make the earpink a bit paler. <3 Sky Molto bene 00:25, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Oh sorry didn't know this was off of another image, but I think the pelt should be a little darker. 00:36, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The pelt color's fine, Wild. Blur the rest of the shading, along with what Trolly said. 00:39, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the stripes more golden? 07:57, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading. Look, I'm not changing the color of anything because I got it from the apprentice. 18:58, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty ;3 Can you fix the light source on the tail so that it matches the body? Just ignore if wrong xD 99.63.189.210 22:56, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
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Clovertail (W) ~ Redone
OA was Blackclaw09 and it needed to be redone because the shading was blotchy and highlights needed to be brightened. Also, I see the brown on her leg, I'll fix it in the next Upload. 23:01, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

he earpink is much to big, so make is smaller. Darken the shading, and blur where the white meet the brown just on the neck above the chin. Looks great! 23:43, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail, and the white on the back paw. There is also some brown mixed in with the white on the front paw (the one closest to us), and can you lighten the shading on the legs just a tad? 01:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

What's up with that ear pink, Rowan? Did you try it like the leader images? Define the shading, darken it, and define the highlight (or whatever it is) on the haunch, 'cause it looks like it's all shading. 04:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks neat to me. :P Can you blur that top part of the white? And (if possible, otherwise disregard this) make the white curve with the body a bit? Sky Molto bene 11:35, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and make the earpink less gray and more pink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:02, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried to make the earpink like the queen on my past one. 22:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white area more white it looks gray, also make it match the queen more, and lighten the image. 23:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 16:14, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you fix the earpink? It looks gray. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lightness on the face. Sky Molto bene 02:27, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, it looks kinda flat. 03:25, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm looking at the tweak nominations right now, and she just needed to be tweaked. You can leave yours, it's fine, but in the future pay attention to whether it's in the tweak or redo section. 17:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh I'm sorry Dx Re-Uploaded. 18:18, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 07:56, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink. 21:22, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 18:20, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwhisker (E)- Tweaked
Tweak patched cause they were too neon. OA=Ashshadow 01:20, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink match the patches' colour? Or do the other way around... 03:06, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded - sorry it look a while, Im using my parent's laptop and I'm getting confused with all the files 04:01, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat earpink. 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

The patchy fur is awfully bright. Hurts mah eyes Dx Tone it down a bit? 08:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

No offence to you or the OA, but this image is just.... Eugh. Any chance of you redoing? 05:18, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

I second that. Again, no offense, but you'd be better off redoing it :S  05:07, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (D) - Tweaked
There are so many changes to this file, it's hard to keep track.. But the first OA was Sandy, with the most recent redo by Iceheart. He needed a floofy tail. 17:51, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the tail pweeze. Maybe make it a bit pineconey, kinda like Squirrelflight's? 23:55, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Or, if you want him to have a bottlebrush tail, go nuts with it. Yeah, that's a ferret's tail, but it's the first pic I found of a nutso bottlebrush tail. 00:14, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add more 'floof' to the bottom where it's straight, kinda like the warrior? 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dat floof >:C 20:28, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the tail lineart some more. 21:08, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

See my comment on the warrior. I can't; there simply aren't enough pixels to fit all that 21:43, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's two black pixels inside the tail. 18:55, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (W) - Tweaked
Fluffff <3 OA was Insane with a redo by Iceheart. 18:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the bushy-ness more even at the top of the tail, it kind of dips. 21:59, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

And make the lines on the tail thicker. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't make the lines on the tail thicker or it won't look the same. Trust me. The same applies for the deputy. 20:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it a bit.... crazier to match the deputy? XD And there's like two random black pixels inside the tail near the base. 07:24, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudberry (Q) - Redone
Redone to match warrior image. OA was Echomist with (minor) tweaks by Bramble and Ivy. 00:56, 11, 03, 2012

Blur the flank shading and enlarge the earpink a tad. 00:58 Sun Mar 11

Blur the tail shadin~ Sky Molto bene  02:25, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad more desturated? 06:11, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  01:19, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the belly shading just a tad. 19:39, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Rubblepaw (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Moonleaf, and needed to be darkened, for he's actually black. =3 I'm not changing anything except the darkness of the pelt. Comments? 17:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter parts to make them more distinct :3 This is adorable~ 07:53, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean...? I just tweaked the image by brushing the burn tool over it, and I'm only changing that, as I've said above.^^ 19:03, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, I fail; I meant the hind leg shading, not lighter part >.< *goes to hide in a corner* 08:47, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (W) - Redone
The patches were over-blurred in some places and shading was some-what blotchy. OA's were Sandstar, Bloo, and Leaf-storm. 19:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, you're fine. 8D Just lighten and blur the earpink. 21:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  22:23, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:24, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I dont think the changes are showing... 22:33, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest a tad. :3 23:00, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Move the highlight of the eye to match the light source and maybe make the tail tip a bit wavier? It looks kinda funny since it's just straight, but that's just my opinion. 23:59, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable/define it. 01:14, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the shading/highlight/lighter spot on his shoulder --  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the gray into the white? He's long-furred, so I think it oughta look furry. :3 03:11, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Since smudging is optional and other images would have to be tweaked it if was smudged, I think it should stay as is. Could you whiten the white a little though? 06:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink, and make it more triangular. it's awfully hard to see.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    23:12, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (Ki) - Tweaked
I didn't want him to be tweaked by someone else.... XD Alright so his tail needed to be bushier, and I personally have always hated the shading on him so since I had the xcf file I changed it. As well as a minor change to the eyes and colors to match. I love keeping xcf files.... XD OA was Nightfall with a redo by me. Comments? 20:49, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the tail lineart a bit. 21:07, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) 05:07, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (E) ~ Tweaked
xP Ew... If you squint your eyes shut, it kind of looks pretty... ._. Oh gosh I think I ruined Poppydawn... xD Had to redo the stripes. OA is Dawnfeather with redos/tweaks by Rainwhisper. 23:03, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the stripe that goes through her forehead. I never put anything like that on her. The stripes look too dark and the shading looks too light. The stripes are supposed to be a little sharper and less blurred. 02:24, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Removed the stripe, lighten the stripes just a tad, darkened the shading and made the stripes just a tad sharper. 19:32, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink~ 19:30, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine. 19:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Shredtail (W) - Redone
OA was Night Shine with a tweak by me. The fur on the tail look all choppy, the scars looked paint brushed on, and he was a modified triangle tabby. I hate to have to redo one of Night Shine's fantastic chararts, but for the sake of realism... Comments? 23:37, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

P.S. I forgot to add ragged fur, I'll do that when I reupload. 23:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't the tail tip be rounded a bit? To quote myself on chat: "Holy sh**." 23:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Haha luff ya, Cloudy! :) 23:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the lineart on the naked part of his tail. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 02:40, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The scars on his tail look off. They go onto parts of his tail that would be fur, not skin. To fix this, either add bare patches where you know the tail would be, or remove the scars in their entirety. Also, can you take the smudge tool and make the scars taper in a more natural fashion? 02:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:14, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

You don't have to, but I think that you could add a furry tone to the stripes :3 *steals* 08:44, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP) ~ Redone
Redone to match his warrior image. Why yes, that is a paw on the collar. Why? Because I take it to the next level. Comments? 02:05, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? The paw is a neat little touch. <3 Sky Molto bene 02:10, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The white on the tail looks pure white. Even if it is not, could you add a little shading to the furry part on the bottom? 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

As much as I love the adorable little white paw on it, his collar needs to be removed. He was shown without one, and as far as I know, was never mentioned with one. I don't see anything else wrong though, lovely job. <3 05:42, March 12, 2012 (UTC)


 * I'd really rather keep the collar. It's possible he did what Cody did: slipped out of his collar whenever he went out. 05:44, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

And put it on again everytime he went back? I seriously doubt that. I'm sorry, but since we have proof he wasn't wearing a collar, I really do think it should be removed. Did it ever mention him with a collar anywhere? If not, it should be removed. Not all kittypets have to wear collars.... 06:19, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

He was never specifically mentioned without one at his house, either. And yes, cats can put collars back on. I've seen it myself. I'm keeping it. 06:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

We have no proof of that though. However, we have proof of him not wearing a collar every single time we've seen him. Remove it please. 06:25, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, he was shown without it in both the graphic novel in the back of SD, as well as the SkyClan set...and in SD, he was shown coming right from his twoleg nest. Wouldn't that count for something? 06:27, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Personally I think all kittypets should have collars even if they weren't shown with one on. It shows rank, not all bloodclan cats had teeth and claws yet they are shown with them. So I think the collar should be left on. 16:12, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also lighten the shading. 17:15, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Since when did all BloodClan cats get collars and claws added to them? They never did, only if they're shown. There's very few BloodClan cats who have images with collars. And why should kittypets (not saying specifically Billystorm, just responding to wildfire) have collars if they are shown without them? That makes no sense. The blank shows the rank just fine without a collar. 17:32, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

(sigh) Fine. Removed it. Re-uploaded. 18:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

In the guidelines it says, "All BloodClan cats are depicted with modified rogue blanks, with toothed collars and dog's teeth sheathed on their claws." So they all should have collars. Also he should have one on warrior image to show he's a daylight warrior. 18:44, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Wildfire, this isn't the place to be having this conversation. Take it elsewhere. 18:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome Billystorm is awesome~<3 Blur the highlight/nonshaded part on his shoulder, and make that---> side of his neck curve inward a bit like a this> ( 19:10, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be my moniter, but he looks too brown, make him more ginger-y.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    23:14, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

It's the shading, Sunny. He's ginger. 23:15, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:49, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

HE's actually more ginger than his warrior. XD It's fine. But can you blur the earpink and define it (in color)? 03:32, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

If I blue it more it mostly becomes a weird looking blob, and the color matches the warrior. However, if anyone else wants me to, I'll change the color. 06:04, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (Ki) ~ Redone
OA is Splook, and it needed to match the loner. 03:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Cute <33 05:46 Mon Mar 12

Re-uploaded. 06:16, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading~ Elders can be so adorable xD 08:47, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I sure hope you meant "kit" and not "elder". XD 16:13, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Either lighten up the shading a bit or blur it. 05:23, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:43, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (W) - Tweak
Easy-peasy simple cleanup of blurred lineart. I was /really/ feeling too lazy and too tired to get my flash drive, but I think I killed all the blurryness. Oh, and if you don't know who the OA is for this...you need help XD Just kidding. The OA is in my signature =) 05:57, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yup, I think you got all the blurryness. Could you define the earpink though, while this is it's being tweaked anyways? o3o 06:13, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also, it is said that she has a white belly, white paws, and a white face. I don't see any of that here. 18:05, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I do, Bluestar. Just because it's not white, white and more white, doesn't mean it doesn't match the description. 18:09, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar, she has white on all of those parts of her body. Please try to look more closely next time. 19:46, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think my computer's spazzing, but the far front paw looks blurred (that's either my laptop, or the tone of gray, most likely) 08:46, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

It's your computer, Dazzle. Personally, it looks fine to me. 16:14, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:34, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Le) ~ Redone
I got permission to redo since he's mostly solid and redoing saved me more time than tweaking would have. Kept most of it the same anyway. Comments? 18:46, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. He doesn't look much different from his old leader image, actually. 18:46, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the line-art on his tail a bit~ 19:25, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the paws a tad, I can barely see the lineart. And yeah, it matches well, good job. XD 03:02, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink on <-- that side and blur the smudges on --> that side. Good job matching his old leader :D 08:30, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:45, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (W) - Tweaked
Added pale paws. Original artist was Bramble, with redos by Mistystar, Icestorm, and finally, Mountainheart. Comments? 23:01, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think you would have been better off just taking the old one and running the dodge tool over the paws rather than recoloring them. If you won't, then I suggest lightening them further and adding stripes back on them (same color as the stripes on the rest of his body). 00:55, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

However, paws don't have stripes. She can add them at the top but not on the paws themselves as they have always been stripeless on every catI've ever seen. 02:04, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

So, do I add stripes or not? 02:08, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Look at the paw stripes and tremble in awe. Or this guy who has stripes darkening the bottoms of his feet. And this image has the lack of stripes extending up his ankles, when at most stripes might be absent from his toes. 02:15, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Shelly that's the same picture for both links xD  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 03:06, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Odd. I fixed it. 03:29, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:50, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (A) - Tweaked
Added pale paws. Original artist, I don't know, though there were redos by Moonpelt, Rainwhisper, and finally, Ivystripe. Comments? 23:01, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:50, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (KP) ~ Redone
Tonka!! <33 My kitty I love her so much 8DD OA was Nightfall with a twaek by Twi. Comments? 23:19 Mon Mar 12

Gaaah I forgot the stripes are supposed to be thin D8 *fixing that* 23:25 Mon Mar 12

Make her paws more white and less creamish. 23:27, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:55 Mon Mar 12

I don't have any of the Ravenpaw's Path manga so I can't check, but was she shown with a collar? 05:19, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know. Maybe she got a collar from her owners. 05:31 Tue Mar 13

I think the collar can stay. Make the paws a bit more white. Awesome as always, Mounty <3 08:26, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8DD 20:52 Tue Mar 13

Kittypet gets a collar. I just checked. You're all good, Mountain. 00:14, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (KP) ~ Redone
She needed to match her warrior....OA is Maplefern with a nose tweak by Ivystripe. :P I tried, but I think I failed...comments? c: Sky Molto bene 06:32, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Everything's great, but she's cross eyed... XD 07:47, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

xD Not cross-eyed, but maybe derp-eyed. Blur the earpink a bit c: 08:14, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink as well: according to the chart it should be darker on black fur.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    23:21, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

No, the earpink matches the warrior. It should be that color. 23:56 Tue Mar 13

Can you make the ear pink just a little bit smaller? Nice job, dear Trolly~ 00:13, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded Sky Exterminate! 05:33, March 14, 2012 (UTC)'''

Snowkit (OS) (Ki) ~ Redone
Shading needed to be redone on the nomination page it said I could redo it. OA was Bramble. 16:00, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading~ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Exterminate! 17:31, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:50, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mintfur (RC) (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar and was tweaked by Leafstrike. Comments? 23:47 Tue Mar 13

Blur dat earpink a tad. Finally realised he's s tom? *innocent face* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Exterminate! 00:11, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shut it >.< 00:17 Wed Mar 14

He's originaly a gray tabby, and he looks like a silver tabby right now...so...I suggest lightening the stripes a tad or darkening the main pelt color, and also, try having the opacity of the white chest a tad lower. <333 05:21, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:28 Wed Mar 14

Blur those stripes a tiny bit? xD That gray part on his eye makes him look female. <3 08:38, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (E) - Tweaked
I just tweaked the muzzle....OA was Thistle (who had help from 'teldy.) Comments? 01:39, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

The line should end at the edge of her mouth and should not extend below it. 01:49, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ice (Alt Lo) - Tweaked
OA was Leafstrike, he needed an underbite. I'm not sure if I should make his teeth longer or not or to define his jaw line some. That's what you critiquers are for :P Because something just doesn't look right. 02:43, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the chin lineart. 05:18, March 14, 2012 (UTC)