Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 119

Sunfish (Q) - Approved
fish fish fish fish fish >(,·) 17:24, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

dull the earpink a bit? fish fish fishy fish fish 6:10 PM, Wed Jul 30, 2014

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The leg shading is a bit flat... Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:38, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

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Smooth out her leg and chest shading, and define the light on her legs 13:25, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

<º)))>< 21:08, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the depth in the belly shading. Teldy x fish

Still working? 14:04, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

<')))>< #bandcamp   16:23, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Wrenflight (Q) ~ Approved
Hawky thinks she did a good job. 23:26 Thu Aug 7

Blur the tail shading a tad. Brick thinks Hawky did a good job. Brick  13:44, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

I smudged the shading so I'd rather not. Thank you, though. 18:24 Sat Aug 9

possibly use a soft-edged brush and just smudge the tail shading slightly, it does look quite hard-edged. 13:57, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:33 Sun Aug 10

Hawky did do a good job. Hawky gets a CBA.

Approved.

Hazelwing (Q) ~ Approved
I tried. This doesn't match at all, does it? 19:36 Sat Aug 9

Changes. 19:37 Sat Aug 9

Nice work! Maybe try and shorten the strokes of the texture and blur it a touch. Also, maybe add one more layer of defined shading on the face? 19:50, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. c: 23:05 Sat Aug 9

Uh, her StarClan image doesn't have texture at all. Those are meant to be stripes. They're not really blurred at all on her StarClan image....This one actually matched a little better than the subsequent upload.

Would you like me to revert? However, I can't do much with the .xcf because I upload over the files and discard the old ones. If I'm missing something about images and GIMP please tell me 18:29 Sun Aug 10

Re-uploaded. I decided to redo the stripes. 0:48 Mon Aug 11

Define the light on the hindleg farthest from us. I know this pattern must have been a pain to do, Hawk xD. Great charart, like always :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:25, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank youuu c: 17:49 Tue Aug 12

CBA?

Approved.

Tallpoppy (Q) - Approved
I'm not entirely sure I got the pattern to match right. Suggestions? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:23, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Oh yeah, and here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140810C/ezimba13931859337500.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:24, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

That pattern was probably a pain to do. Define the belly shading a tiiiiiny bit? Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  21:58, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Defined. (Sorry this took so long.) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 02:25, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

This is neat. .o. CBA?

Approved.

Shadepelt (Star) ~ Approved
My first character SziriXxX (talk) 17:25, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. Wonderful job on her! 5:39 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

Define the eye depth a tad and expand the earpink a bit. Brick  18:21, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://www.ezimba.com/work/140811C/ezimba12232528268500.png Thank you Rocket c: SziriXxX (talk) 19:22, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Is this your first charart? It's amazing for a first O_o Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  21:55, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://www.ezimba.com/work/140811C/ezimba12232512954900.png Thanks :3 SziriXxX (talk) 22:37, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Let's go CBA, since this is a very lovely image. I'm also going to promote you to the apprentice rank due to your knowledge of chararts and the having the skills to make one.

Approved.

Sharpclaw (SC) (Lo) - Approved
Okay, so I took the colors from the deputy, and I tried to match the stripes, but he has no images at this angle so I matched the pattern a bit on the face, legs, neck/chest area, and tail and the rest I improvised. 5:35 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

Lighten the stripes to match the other images Brick   18:22, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

reups 6:31 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

if changes aren't showing <span style="">6:34 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

Blur the stomach shading some. 21:24, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

reups <span style="">11:00 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

CBA?

Approved.