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Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them.  17:51 Wed Jan 27 

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here.

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail?

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail?

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean.

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match?

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional.  16:01 Sat Feb 6 

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I already said that Sage :P Anyway, hope this helps.  10:53 Sun Feb 7 

I think the tail could be raised a few pixels up on the back of the cat, and the neck needs to be thickened a bit ( http://prntscr.com/a1872f ), and the raised paw should be backed up a few pixels and made smaller. The tum could be dropped a pixel or two, and the ears made a bit neater. The longhair should probably have long fur all the way up to the chin too, as well as the shoulder being fuzzy. 23:45, 02/9/2016

reuploaded. thanks so much, i think they look a lot better now. 02:41 Tue Feb 16

Comments before approval? 03:59, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Add white to the chararts so they look like the other blanks. Great job! ^_^

Sorry for bothering you again but could you add a little bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest while you're at it? Just one or two lines will do.  16:58 Tue Feb 16 

Can I ask why the blanks have to be white? 17:29 16/2/16

It's just below the lineart, Velvet. All of the other blanks have that, so I don't see why these shouldn't. That can be added afterwards, though. And I said the same thing on Skype that I'm gonna say now, the feet are a bit too... flat, for lack of a better word. Using what Berry also said to me, a cat usually walks on their toes, so the only way they'd be completely flat is if they're sitting.

As I said on Skype, the picture Splook based this off has the cat in the exact same pose with her legs on the ground. In fact, my cats' legs are on the ground when she's asking for food in the same position. :/ 04:29, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

The back legs would be up in the air a little bit, as per Skye. Cats do in fact walk on their toesies. 12:47, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Also sorry foe edit spam but the whiskers that are going <== this way off the blank sre bothering me, since the other whiskers are flat against the side of the face. Basically get rid of those whiskers 12:49, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

I think the back legs are fine. I have seen my cat and if you google images of a cat you will find some in this position or with their feet in that position. Just because it's not common doesn't make it inaccurate. 21:03, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Exactly, Velvet. You bring up an amazing point. Anyways, here's a picture of the legs Splook used: They're not on their toes. Splook's legs are fine. 01:37, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

If someone would like to argue the opposite, may you please draw a redline and show me what it would look like if the legs were altered? 02:05 Thu Feb 18

No, you don't need to change it becuase it's fine. I provided proof that cats legs cna look like it and in general, they can. 02:06, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hey now, chill. She asked for a redline to see what they'd look like, and there's nothing wrong with that. If she chooses to not do so after the redline is given, then that's fine. But since she did ask for one to support the argument against her, then I think she should be given one. (I can't redline, sorry)

I'm not particularly bothered what happens with the back legs, but is this what you guys had in mind?  15:18 Thu Feb 18 

I can do a redline later, but for now, I'd agree with what others are saying and say that something with the back legs needs to be changed. Yes, cats can lower themselves entirely on the "heel" of their leg (for lack of a better term). But the upper part of the leg would be more stretched out if that were the case, because if the rear is that high in the air, the leg needs to stretch out to compensate for the lower part of the leg being on the ground. You can see it in the picture Icy provided; yes, the lower leg is all on the ground, and you can see how the rear end doesn't appear to be low to the ground, but closer to even with the shoulders. But you can see how the "thigh" (I really don't know the proper words for cat anatomy) is stretch out, not rounded and curled up like drawn here, because it has to stretch out to account for the height lost from the lower leg being on the ground. I probably rambled too much and didn't explain myself very clearly, but I'll do a redline later that will hopefully make what I'm trying to say here clearer. ^^ That, or you could go the direction that Shinx is suggesting and take the lower leg off the ground entirely, so you can keep the bend to the upper leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:51, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Bellapaw (App) - CBA
Not sure I matched the shading/texture totally, I might redo that later. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:36, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Wait whoa, the colors don't match at all... what colors did you use, Shinx? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:38, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

In all honesty, I think this is what it should look like; the loner's colours clash too much, and this still matches the desc of pale orange... But that's up to you and Shinx to decide I think? I'd go with these though, to match Firestar more, and still have it match her desc. Also, could you smooth the shading on the chin? 19:12, 02/12/2016

no....this looks very bright orange. 19:16, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

I used the colors in the file you sent me... But no offense, I agree that this looks very bright orange rather than pale.  <span style="">22:23 Fri Feb 12 

I used those colors too. So how did yours end up looking so much paler? What did you do with the highlights/light texture? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:49, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Absolutely nothing. I only changed the tint on the texture. Perhaps make this color a little paler and see if that looks better? I can colorpick, I don't care. But this isn't pale orange.  <span style="">22:56 Fri Feb 12 

Weird... well, anyway, I can agree that it's not bright enough. Can you send me the colors you used, or something? I want to make sure it matches. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:08, February 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * 1) efa370 is what I have.

And I'm going to be honest here.... Firestar's images are a very bright orange. Pale orange would be a lot less bright. ( "2. of a low degree of chroma, saturation, or purity; approaching white or gray: 3. not bright or brilliant; dim:" 'pale' according to the dictionary.) I don't mind changing the colors on my image. I really don't. But you guys are asking for both bright orange and pale orange at the same time. I have been playing with the colors all week and can't get anything even close to Firestar's colors while still being pale orange. Ive colorpicked from Firestar (or more specifically, Jake's file. Which is the same color.) and tried to make it paler. Doesn't work out. I've messed with the colors I have now. Doesn't work out. I just spent about half an hour playing with the colors on this image to see if I can make them pale. I've tried to make entirely new colors, I've used dodge and burn, I've tried color sliders, everything I could possibly think of. Unless I have a really screwed up definition of pale, I don't think it's possible. So uh, sorry guys?

If by some miracle you guys find a color that works out then sure (Jayie's color here is nice, but it's not pale. It's bright. And tbh we should be trying to match the "pale orange" description more than the "Looks like firestar" description.), I'll use it. But I'm done with the colors. Especially considering "looking like Firestar" doesn't necessarily mean they have the same pelt color. Sorry for the big long paragraph. I didn't mean for it to get that long :/  <span style="">10:24 Sat Feb 13 

the priority should be her actual description. a lot of things could make her look like firestar - exact colour isny neccessarily one of them. 12:20, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, what's going on with this? o.o

Sorry, I got busy with school. I'll work on it tonight to lighten it to match Shinx's image. Sorry for the confusion and the wait. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:59, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I used the color you mentioned, Shinx. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:47, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Runningnose (MC) - For Approval
protect runningnose <span style="">20:06 Fri Feb 12

Define the light on the left foreleg a little. Precious kitty. 22:30, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

The patchy fur should have black lines not grey? <span style="">16:33, 02/13/2016

The leader, deputy, and old MC blanks all had gray lines, so I think it's okay. And it is black, I just lightened the opacity. <span style="">19:38 Sat Feb 13

I'm the OA of the deputy, and it has black lines. Besides, it's line art, so it should be black. <span style="">14:40, 02/14/2016

Also, his eyes should be rheumy, look closely at the old version, there's a little dark spot under each eye. Also, there should probably be actual mucus coming from his nose, not just little speckles. <span style="">19:02, 02/14/2016

Define the shading just a tad on the legs and tail. 14:38, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. okay well then nominate the other images for a tweak because that lineart is surely not black. <span style="">02:58 Tue Feb 16

It may just be my screen, but define the snot just a tad? I can't see it too well. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 14:00, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

I can see it just fine. Comments before approval? 17:32, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the light on the tail needs to be defined- it looks almost like it's all in shading. I also think the head shading might need a tiny bit of definition too, and the light on <-- front leg could be defined as well.

shading is leaking on the booty i think 12:28, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that's just a white spot, not shading that's leaking. <span style="">00:40, 02/21/2016

Could you define the light on the lifted leg a little please?  <span style="">15:17 Mon Feb 22 

Lulu (K) ~ withdrawing
Im proud of this. 03:20, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

whoop, i need to match the other, i didnt see that there. Ill get it later. 04:05, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

I love how you made the eyes different colored,so i change my kittypet's eyes too :D 19:06, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading on the hindpaw?

The shading in general needs to be defined, expanded, and lightened. 17:16, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

re-up i redid the whole fricken thing, i see some errors, ill fix em. 00:23, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

The other image seems... a bit softer, for lack of a better word? Also, define the shading. '

withdrawing 12:34, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Fawnstep (MC) - CBA
I like this one 17:30, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

changes 17:33, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes. 17:16, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Brighten up the front paws a bit.

Reups 21:13, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Violet (KP) (Q) - For Approval
I will be working on the stripes. Even though it's a different view, I am not sure what I think of it. And it doesn't really match the original style well...so please do not comment on that; I already know. <span style="">01:11 Thu Feb 18

Which image did you get the base color from? It seems a tiny bit darker on this than it does her kittypet. Might be my eyes, though.

Can you fix the collar so it looks like its facing down? It looks a tad awkward when it's facing straight up.

I color picked from the rogue in the lightest spot I could find. I will compare and/or it if needed when I am done with the work for my classes. <span style="">20:55 Thu Feb 18

You actually should have colorpicked from the kittypet; that image is the first in the set, and all images are required to match that one.

Reuploaded Colorpicked from kittypet and it was the same. Also fixed the style of the stripes. <span style="">00:25 Sat Feb 20

The kittypet still looks a lot lighter than this? I'm not sure how to suggest to fix that though... Try colorpicking from a few different areas? <span style="">01:59, 02/20/2016

Reuploaded I added a light highlight layer to attempt fixing it. I'm honestly not sure why it looks so different. I colorpicked from the absolute lightest spot I could find on two of the images. The base I used was the color I got each time. <span style="">02:41 Sat Feb 20

For reference about the base and also to ask for advice on what to do about it looking too dark even though the base on the this is now lighter than the KP >.<' <span style="">16:26 Sat Feb 20

I think the stripes might be a little less sharp on the other images. This is very pretty! 21:47, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

Can you move her collar a few inches up so it looks like it's fitting around her neck?

I think the collar is fine but it is a bit square edged or the side farthest from us. 22:45, February 21, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Duplicated the stripes and blurred them a bit (just so I don't lose the original in case I get told to sharpen them) and messed with the highlights a bit, so let me know if that helps with that darkness problem at all. I will fix the collar on next upload. <span style="">20:08 Mon Feb 22

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval
the shading makes me want to cry 01:33, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

smooth out the shading? why is shading black cats another hell? 12:37, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried 22:45, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

There's leaking above the head.

Smooth the shading out some more and expand it on the tum a little, near the shoulder <span style="">00:38, 02/21/2016

Cinderpelt (MC) - CBA
yup definitely crazy... 08:52, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Crop the image and define shading on the head? 11:15, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:57, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Scar, I hate to tell you this but it looks like someone had this reserved two days before you did. <span style="">00:05, 02/20/2016

wait dammit that's cinderheart not pelt, sorry x.x I'm too tired for this <span style="">00:06, 02/20/2016

CBA?

Goosefeather (MC) ~ CBA
All colors from his StarClan image, which I do have the file for. Comments? 19:17, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. The darkness itself is fine, but it looks a bit too flat in some places, such as the legs and face.

Reuploaded. 00:16, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out? <span style="">00:37, 02/21/2016

Reuploaded. I can't smooth out the shading anymore, or it will start leaking away from the lineart. 00:56, February 21, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest a bit?  <span style="">12:36 Mon Feb 22 

Reuploaded. 19:18, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 23:27, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Mossheart (MC) - CBA
19:51, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Upload under this file, please. =P

Re-ups How could i forget mc from the filename o-o 10:31, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Featherwhisker (MC) - CBA
19:51, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Lengthen the whiskers a little bit.  <span style="">22:14 Fri Feb 19 

Re-ups 10:36, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

COmments before aprooval? 23:28, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Flametail (MC) - For Approval
i love ginger cats <span style="">21:43, 02/19/2016

Define the depth for the shading on the rear legs and the belly shading as well.

Cinderpelt (Alt MC 3) ~ For Approval
21:52, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

This should be lighter I think? The description for this alt is pale grey, and this looks just grey. Think something like Featherwhisker. Also, define earpink and smooth the shading on the chest. <span style="">21:55, 02/19/2016

Reups my bad 14:39, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading? 22:12, February 21, 2016 (UTC)

Even it out too; it looks a lot darker on her face then the rest of her 22:14, February 21, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light source as well. please 22:43, February 21, 2016 (UTC)

the source is fine; it's coming from the left. 15:33, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Then why is there light on the right side of the cheek. 17:32, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

because cheeks stick out? it's been done before on other images and its perfectly acceptable. 18:13, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the lifted foot a little bit?  <span style="">18:28 Mon Feb 22 

Ravenpaw (W) - For Approval
My sweet little Raven. 23:13, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Shrink the white on his chest to better match the other images. 23:39, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch and shoulder and face. Also, you can make the eyes have more colour in it (http://prntscr.com/a5ip7u just add color where the red is in this image on your image) so they eyes aren't quite as small and hard to see the colour of. Brighten the white as well, and make sure it covers the whole tail tip; it looks like it's peeling away from the edges. <span style="">23:50, 02/19/2016

Reupload fixed the eye problem and fixed shading also fixed white patches. 00:07, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

The white on the chest still needs to be a lot smaller like the red spot, and don't forget to smooth/blur the shading in the places I said. he is tiny and i love him <span style="">00:11, 02/20/2016

Reupload I made it smaller but I'm still not happy with the neck shading. 16:00, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch and shoulder a little more, and define it on the two legs farthest from us. 21:45, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Did what you said. 00:18, February 21, 2016 (UTC)

Kestrelwing (MC) - For Approval
I was gonna match the other one but it wasn't even dark brown so I just changed it completely, since it was the only one in the set (minus the alt). <span style="">00:59, 02/20/2016

The only thing that would have needed to be changed is the color, so what's wrong with matching the old one?

Do I have to? <span style="">21:33, 02/20/2016

Only if you want to; I was just asking what was wrong with it (besides the color), since you did say you were gonna match it at first. =P

The stripes were unrealisitic imo, so I decided I'd change it <span style="">21:42, 02/20/2016

Tom (ES) (Alt Ro) - For Approval
Copper is reddish-brown, and ginger is ginger. Copper doesn't have stripes unless specified, whereas ginger does. Lineart is David's, with a few minor tweaks so I could use it in PS.

Define the shading a tiny bit, maybe?  <span style="">12:39 Mon Feb 22 

Re-uploaded. I tried.

Define the facial shading. 23:29, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Frecklewish (SC) (MC) ~ For Approval
its 4am and i dont know what im doing anymore 14:59, February 21, 2016 (UTC)

Make the shading more visible. 02:58, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded any darker and the stripes will be impossible to see not that I can really see them now 13:36, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Mudfur (MC) ~ For Approval
Prolly gonna redo that shading later :/  <span style="">15:17 Sun Feb 21 

Micah (MC) ~ For Approval
15:15, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

smooth the shading out a little but on the stomach 21:24, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe darken the stripes on the tail and define the shading in general? You don't have ot define the shading, I just think the stripes look a tad lighter than they do on the other images. 23:30, February 22, 2016 (UTC)