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Frostclaw (W) - For Approval
Fluffy girl  22:10, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Might you smooth out the overall shading, and define it on the ears and upper head?

Reuploaded  22:30, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 17:57, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:55, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading a little above the rectangle shading piece on the forleg so it connects to the shoulder/upper forearm shading some more? Seems very abrupt atm 21:18, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:48, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Very nice! I feel that the shading by the bend of the tail could be removed, so then you'd just have the patch of shading on the bottom, then one by the base. Not sure, it just looks off to me? Smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us, on the bottom of the tail, chest, and a bit on the haunch. 02:12, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:26, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading/smooth it out please 05:44, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:46, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

looking good, its nice to see how much you've improved in a short amount of time :) could you smooth the shading out a bit more on the chest, it looks prety hard edged there 02:39, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt! 23:27, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Same comment as dawnflower about the block of shading on the <--- foreleg. 16:29, June 27, 2019 (UTC) Read Dawnflower. It's intentional. 16:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded per Spooky on Dawnflower  17:16, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again depth to front legs  17:23, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

The overall shading could be smoothed, quite a lot. 17:31, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:26, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

shading still needs to be smoothed out. 13:51, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:09, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not really seeing much difference with the shading. Smooth it out a lot more. 18:07, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded You should definitely be seeing a difference now. 22:43, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looks better! Can you smooth it some more on the top of the haunch, on the chest, and front leg closest. 16:02, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! 23:30, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Same as Dawnflower. Darken and define the shading on that visible back foot, because it looks extremely out-of-place, given your source.

Reuploaded  13:12, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Shading appears blotchy on the shoulder. 13:52, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:55, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

It actually looks a little more blotchy after you reuploaded. 14:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded *internally screams at shoulder shading*  14:06, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the chest and shoulder a bit. 18:44, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:53, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

The edges could definitely use a bit more smoothing. Also, the leg shading kinda makes it seem like she's white with gray legs, not just white. I think the shading could be tweaked a bit there to show that she's solid, not bicolor.

Plumwillow (Alt. W4) ~ For Approval
Haven't been here for a while! :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  13:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:04, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink. (The correct file is Plumwillow.warrior.alt4.png) 14:38, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Got it for you. Was just missing the File part in the code. 15:17, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more, and the lineart is graying in some places. 15:31, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3  Crystie  Can't help loving me  01:08, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, few things. What tool are you using to make the shading? Is it the burn tool or are you using a pencil/brush to draw/paint it on? The shading still could be defined a few ticks more. The lineart is still graying, it's being covered by something. Try erasing on your layers to return it back to its original color. Kill the waste outside the back. Smudge the earpink a bit as well. 01:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe have a look at the updated shading chart, for where to place some shading. Right now, add some onto the face and under her chin and down her legs on our left.

Reuploaded~ :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  03:13, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste under the paws. Can you define the light source on < this front leg, fix the eyeshine so she doesn't look cross-eyed, and add shading to the ears? 03:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Crystie  Can't help loving me  03:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the random white lines above the back. Define the eye depth and the shading depth (remember, adding a layer of thinner, darker shading) and add shading to >>> this side of the tail as well, there would be some shading there with your source. 03:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMSC the white lines thing is so frightening :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:57, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looking better! Add shading to the back paw farthest from us and the front leg farthest from us. Define the shading on the ears and chest. 04:34, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh thank you so much Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  05:22, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more on the ears (the insides of the ears would have some shading), expand the shading more on the front leg farthest from us, and add shading to the back paw closest to us. Nice job with the textured shading so far! 15:41, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:29, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Blend the texture in the shading more. Flip the shading on < this ear to the other side, to comply with your light source. Can you also smooth out the shading as well? To soften it up and make it more of a gradient. 02:38, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  04:15, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 15:37, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

This might be a repeat of the comment above, but maybe define the shading placement? Especially on the flank, upper shoulder and chest area. Right now it looks like it's all over the place atm. 00:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  12:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, tail, and front legs. The shading on the back also appears to be leaking, and the shading, over all, could be smoothed. 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Much better! Swap the shading on the bend of the tail to the top to comply with your source. 00:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded like this? :P <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:17, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Not quite, Crystal. Not only would the shading be on top of that bend, that whole bend of the tail area would be in shadow. Can you also define the eye depth more? 23:00, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now? :3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste along the back, underneath the tail, and underneath the paws. Could you define the light (remove some of the shading) on the tail? Seems to be covered in just shading. 15:31, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:40, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Here is a redline of what you shading should look like on the tail. Red is where it all has to be in shadow, and orange is where the light needs to be definned. 00:51, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:52, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

The light on the tail could still be defined a bit more in the area potato mentioned. It should be the same color as the lighted parts on the main body. 16:32, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:30, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth out the tail shading some? this is cute! <span style="">16:53 Fri Jun 28

try and remove the waste floating around the image^^

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  03:23, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light again on >>> this side of the tail, and it's leaking a bit there too. 16:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  10:45, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think there's shading leakage along the back? 00:50, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

I see waste under the tail, and the light should be define on the tail again. 01:10, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  01:37, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste around the image and define the light on the tail some more, try erasing the shading there on all your layers or add a highlight to help define it. 02:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  06:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

there is waste all around the back of the body and lots of waste around the feet. The shading on the back is slightly leaking too 13:24, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  04:11, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shade in by the tail fold please--<span style="color: #00BFFF;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: #000000; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #A827FE;">willowstep 14:14, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more facial shading to <--- side of the face? 19:15, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:59, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, there would be light on the stomach. 01:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  01:53, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome work, you've improved a ton, Crystal! I've moved you up to an apprentice on the table^^ it might just be me, but there appears to be some shading leaking on the back. 14:00, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I also see leaking shading on the back (could also be bounce light). 14:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

(Also gonna bump this up to "for approval" since you're getting the hang of things. You can use this heading for all future submissions from now on ^^ Also, you're almost there!) 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh TYSM guys!! I'll reupload it soon <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  01:27, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  01:58, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the bottom of the chest, near the legs? 02:34, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

smotth out the shading on the shoulder and back area connecting to the shoulder. Also i think theres is shading leaking where the back and the tail meet 10:51, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  ''<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  09:36, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like there's some shading leaking on the front leg from the chest and a little on the haunch. 18:59, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  ''<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  00:59, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Morningflower (W) - Declined
<span style="">18:21 Tue Jun 25

do you want the file? can you smooth out the black patches a little/cover them more with the lighter texture? 03:09, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Just to be safe, probably should. Just use one of the emails on my userpage ^^ <span style="">23:21 Thu Jun 27

Reuploaded I'm prob going to mess with it more, just uploading so I don't forget <span style="">14:03 Sun Jun 30

can you make the lighter texture less uniform? (will probably need to fix that on the elder eek .-.) 14:29, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 14:21, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. 18:52, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Dew (K) - Declined
09:05, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

The old one had the torn ears - so I think this would need them too? Unless that cite for sure comes after being adulted

Still working?

Sorry, I am still working I'll upload soon. 08:39, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry but it's been over a week since the last upload, declined due to lack of work 05:32, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Hi, just wanted to say I just got my PC back together so I can re-upload today. Unless I'm too late? 09:31, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Duskfur (W) ~ For Approval
03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

You need to wait until your withdrawn ones are archived, since technically they're still yours. This time I'll archive it for you.

The ear pink looks brighter on the old warrior. 04:15, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:08, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looking at the queen, her stripes appear less uniform and a bit thinner than what you have here. 15:59, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Er, I tried 16:23, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Brighten the pale to match the queen^^

Reuploaded easy fix at least 02:27, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the face a bit more 05:34, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Eaglekit (WC) (K) ~ CBA
03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and maybe reduce some of the shading on the shoulder? 04:14, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like the shading could be lightened slightly as well <span style="">21:00 Mon Jul 1

With this source, there would be shading on the jaw that connects to the neck shading. 21:24, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I get the sense I'll be battling shading a lot with this image... 03:08, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the haunch and should be smoothed out more. 03:46, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail and arm. 16:48, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:23, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking in the shoulder area, and define the shading on the ears. 03:02, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I may or may not have gotten the leaking shading 16:23, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit? 18:45, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA 05:35, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Frostfur (K) ~ For Approval
03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think she has blue eyes<span style="color: #00BFFF;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: #000000; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #A827FE;">willowstep 00:09, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I color-picked off the original kit... silly me 03:08, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

the light source seems to be confusing me. you have light coming from the bottom of the tail and paws but light hitting the back aswell? could you define the light source more sorry 13:32, July 2, 2019 (UTC

The light source appears to be Sleek Fur's.  13:39, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed with Bramble

wanted to say that just because an image has been approved in the past doesnt mean that every trait of it is the holy thing that doesnt have any flaws and cant stand to be fixed. 14:50, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Eh. I mean it is a usable source, but this doesn’t quite match Sleek Fur’s anyways in a few spots, so I can see as well why it doesn’t work. But, it’s close. Just take some off the bottom (our view) of the face, reduce it a smidge on the haunch; add some at the top of the shoulder etc.

Reuploaded 02:23, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch a little bit. 02:25, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:23, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the front paw furthest from us and the hind paw that's hidden by the tail (the easiest thing to do would be covering both of those completely with shading since they're so small). 18:47, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded...? 02:27, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch/hip and define the depth on the tail, forelegs, and face 05:36, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (RC) (K) - CBA
05:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes seems smoother and lighter on the warrior, and could you define/add more mottles? 15:47, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

The nose should be dark brown, I think. That's what the warrior has. 18:14, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

reup redone bc file was lost oops. the nose should actually be pink bc the old kit was first, but i changed it to brown anyway. 03:47, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:55, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (Warrior Alt 2) - For Evaluation
WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 01:29, July 3, 2019 (UTC)WarriorsCats2009

The image doesn't entirely appear to be filled in. 01:31, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

I changed the file name to Boulder.warrior.alt2.png because this is the proper name for the image. Also, Have you color-picked the colors of Boulder's previous set images? It would help a lot. I really enjoy the effort you've put into making this! You seem to have waste around the paws and a blank white spot in the middle of your charart where another foot is supposed to be. May I ask what program you are using? 01:42, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

It also appears that you have a smaller version of blank. Perhaps it was saved incorrectly. Try saving it from here. And I have the files for the rogue and elder if you need them. I'll provide the color codes for them in a few minutes. 02:05, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Alrighty, so the base color is rgb(106, 118, 113)/#6a7671, the stripes are rgb(43, 50, 52)/#2b3234, the paler parts are rgb(202, 205, 218)/#cacdda, the earpink is rgb(172, 150, 136)/#ac9688, and the nose is rgb(161, 139, 126)/#a18b7e. Hope this helps! 02:24, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

It's my first charart. It's not supposed to look THAT good. Besides, I'll learn. WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 02:38, July 3, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

That was a bit uncalled for, I'm afraid. The whole point of the approval process is to gain helpful critiques for one's artwork to be put on the articles, and for the artist to practice their skills and improve. No one above criticized your artwork unfairly. Like you said, it's your first; everyone in this project experienced their first artwork and improved. And it will happen to you, too. ^^ 02:52, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

There needs a few more stripes, to match the elder's side view. And remember, patience! You'll get the hang of art eventually. 02:58, July 3, 2019 (UT

Okay I will add that as soon as I can.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 03:33, July 3, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Reuploaded 

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 21:05, July 3, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Image is still the wrong size and not everything is filled in. 21:09, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Please reupload over File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png 21:15, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match File:Boulder.elder.alt.png... It's missing the white, the stripes should be thicker and cover more of the body, and they also appear a bit smudged, and should be less uniform than what you've got here. There's white around the line art that shouldn't be there, I'd suggest using layers, if you aren't already. That makes it a million times easier. Add shading and depth to the eyes as well. 21:28, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'm trying. I colored it whole on Pixlr, but when I uploaded it, it was white in some places.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 01:55, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Reuploaded

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 02:15, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

This needs to be uploaded under Boulder.warrior.alt2.png. 02:18, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I did upload it under that.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 05:38, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

I'm not exactly sure how to use Pixlr and I've never used it, but I've heard it isn't the best program to work with, so I may suggest trying a different one. GIMP and FireAlpaca are both free, I'm pretty sure. Could try one of those? It might make it easier. There appears to be no change since you reuploaded. 05:51, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I uploaded it but soon it went back to that image that I last used.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 05:57, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

It is supposed to be this:

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 05:59, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Upload that image under "File:Boulderfur.warrior.alt2.png" then, as others have previously said. There's still no change in that image, either. 06:03, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I picked my colors from the elder version. I tried my best.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 06:14, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

It doesn't match the image though, is the problem. I know it's hard, this is your first image, but you should listen to the comments you are given. This is an approval page for a reason and you cannot make excuses to not change the image. 06:16, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Hi there! Please use the bigger version of the lineart Vec linked, and upload it under the "File:Boulderful.warrior.alt2.png]] (Rename it I believe). There's a lot other things to do, but... maybe you can change a program and start to draw with layers? :3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  06:33, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'm NOT making an excuse to not change my image. And I am using layers.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 15:44, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Fill in the back paw farthest from us. 15:46, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Okay got it.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 22:31, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

'''Reuploaded. '''This if it doesn't show:

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 22:36, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

The image is still the wrong size, and should not be thumbed or aligned. It should be uploaded over File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png, and you don't need to post the image every time you reupload. This needs to match the alt elder in terms of stripes, and needs a white belly and muzzle as is depicted on the alt elder. You also need shading, and to get rid of the white inside the lineart. This may seem like a lot, and I apologize if it does, but this will help the image get approved. Please feel free to ask me questions should you have any. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:20, 7/04/2019> ​

You can barely see the facial lineart. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 17:29, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

The whisker lineart, when not missing, appears to be blurred. 18:41, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Elderkit (K) - For Approval
01:16, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the little chest area? 02:13, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:16, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and head/neck shading. 20:34, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:12, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

The neck shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart. Do you mind filling that back in while still retaining the smoothness? 18:42, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded welp I tried  18:54, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

This could just be me, but I think the shading overall should be smoothed out just a little 02:30, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:59, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading transition everywhere; it might help to desaturate the shading some 05:37, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (Alt W) ~ For Approval
original shading was a nightmare but i quite like this new look. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:29, 7/04/2019> ​

There's a block of waste at <-- end of the tail. And maybe add some shading on the rest of the back near the shoulder? 23:47, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading tint a bit? And add just a little more where the haunch meets the tail? 23:49, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

re-up  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <00:35, 7/06/2019> ​

CBA 19:22, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading could be smoothed out.

Frostfur (W) ~ For Approval
Wow, look at me, being so productive... r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:40, 7/04/2019> ​

Same thing with Bubbling Stream about the shading. This looks very nice! 23:48, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

re-up aww thanks <3  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:48, 7/07/2019> ​

Super minor, but there's waste underneath the tail ^^ 23:52, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the chest and define the light in the eyes, she looks cross-eyed 05:39, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Featherpelt (K) ~ For Approval
Tinystream (talk) 04:25, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

She should have more stripes on her haunch and shoulder (here on her apprentice File:Featherpelt.apprentice.png, see what I mean?) The stripes also appear softer on her other images. 14:28, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (K) ~ CBA


I think this needs texture since the other images have it? 13:30, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I did not see that

CBA? 15:52, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you define the shading some, and I think the texture should be a tad softer. 18:50, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Re-CBA? 23:40, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Lulu (K) ~ For Approval
gorgeous 13:12, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth?

can you add the fur highlights? scribble in between the stripes with a 30% opacity white brush in places where there would be light. also, the stripes have shading as well– just outline the left edge of the stripe with a darker ginger 03:25, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Jessy (K) ~ For Approval
round 15:28, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the light a bit on the tail? 15:53, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 17:17, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think the light on the tail could be defined a bit more. 18:51, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 20:22, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Featherstorm (W) ~ CBA


The bottoms of the paws should be cream, unless it's covered by the shading. 03:51, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

CBA? 23:41, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hollyflower (W) - For Approval
04:32, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth/smudge where the white ends on the tail (the white tip part); it seems a little hard-edge and abrupt on the top portion here. There's waste underneath the tail, and looking at the other images, I think the white on the front legs could be extended some downward. 03:55, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reup 04:00, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of waste along the...chest / --> shoulder fur? 23:42, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reup 03:02, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Harestar (W) - For Approval
23:46, July 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The brown patches could be smudged a bit more. 03:56, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:05, July 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The white hind paw closest to us shouldn't be brown and the brown on the ---> front paw should be extended a bit higher. And I still think, mostly on the back brown patch, it should be smudged a bit more obtusely. 23:45, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded sorry, i was going off the leader sprite, both back paws on that one are brown 03:48, July 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

For this pattern, the old warrior is the master pattern. It's one I designed, and the leader/deputy came quite a bit after the set was done.

Heavystep (W) - For Approval
23:46, July 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the haunch stripes could be smudged a bit more to match the elder. 23:46, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:49, July 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Lighten the shading just a touch inside the ears 05:41, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Jayclaw (W) - CBA
23:46, July 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 23:47, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Fish Leap (Ki) - CBA
This was not complicated at all. 00:27, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:48, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Jake (Ki) - CBA
00:27, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:49, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Creekfeather (K) - For Approval
03:37, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be a tad darker, and the texture a bit sharper. 03:58, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reup 04:04, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Slatefur (W) - For Approval


04:18, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the < front leg and the back don't seem to merge into one another. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 15:18, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

It's like that on my other images, I don't really see a problem. 23:49, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

i do remember max commenting on the same thing tho once? i also kinda agree with windsong 03:03, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:15, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Hawkfur (W) - CBA


04:18, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA 05:41, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Jumpfoot (W) - CBA


CBA?

Alderheart (Ki) - For Approval
15:20, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (Ro) - For Approval
Won't be able to reupload Mon-Fri because I'm going camping. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 15:23, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thicker and softer, looking at her deputy and loner. 15:25, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Expand the shading on the tail and the foreleg furthest from us. 21:04, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body and haunch area, bit sharp there. The shading everywhere else though looks fine. You're doing a great job so far! 21:58, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste beside the hind leg closest to us. <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  ''<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  01:43, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (K) - For Approval
19:19, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Fallowsong (W) - For Approval
19:29, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Might just be my eyes, but I think the base is slightly duller on the other images. Mind color picking again? And the shading could be smoothed on the haunch. 20:54, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:57, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (W) - For Approval
<span style="">19:56 Sun Jul 7

Smooth the shading some, if you would^^

reuploaded <span style="">06:36 Mon Jul 8

Hazeltail (Ki) - For Approval
That tail... painful. 00:48, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Brownpaw (Ki) - For Approval
A baby. 00:48, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Grasspelt (Ki) - For Approval
I've run out of captions. 00:48, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Honeyfern (K) - For Approval
dear lord that was difficult 05:58, July 8, 2019 (UTC)