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=Tweaking=

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Redone
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey a little bit. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

And define the shading a bit more. Unless changes aren't showing. 01:21, 12, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 20:35, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case the changes aren't showing here he is. 20:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

These stripes don't match the other images in the slightest. I know it's a kit blank and it's harder, but not even the stripe style matches. Would you consider redoing them? 20:59, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the base coat should be much lighter. Breeze whisker  04:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the fur, but I didn't redo the stripes because I think they are pretty similar if another person disagrees then I will try to redo them, but I don't have GIMP and I can't find the xcf file so I would have to redo the entire thing. Sorry, I really don't want to sound rude or anything. 21:23, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wildfire, look at this image. It's nowhere close to matching the others. If you don't redo this, someone else will. 02:25, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gotta agree Wild. They really don't look like the others. Breeze whisker  00:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving you my permission to redo this if need be. It needs to match. 04:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I probably need to thicken the stripes. And fix the earpink. 23:01, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes, smudge them a lot more, darken and define the shading. 00:33, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Change the pattern to match the warrior... 00:48, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the shading have a slight reddish/pinkish tint so it looks like the other images? 11:57, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Declining due to the one week limit for tweaks. If anyone has an extra spot, they may take over.

Reuploaded. There was no point in tweaking it since it would have been pretty much redone by the time I finished anyway. Breeze whisker  00:05, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a leetle more and define the shading. :3 08:14, 23, 07, 2012

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  00:22, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little bit more. 17:49, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match his warrior... They should be more squiggly and harder edged. And define the earpink. 17:26, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I defined the shading and earpink, but honestly, I think the stripes are fine. The blanks are really too small to get that effect. In order to get them to fit, most of these stripes are only a pixel or two wide. That's not enough space for that. Breeze whisker  18:07, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's going to match about as best as Breezy can get it with these small blanks. I think they're fine as is.

just smudge the stripes a tad more, and I'd agree that's as good as it'll match on such a small blank. 20:18, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  20:22, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

I won't be able to work on this. If there's anything that needs done feel free to take over. :P Breeze  whisker  04:38, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Graymist (Q) ~ Redone
Fuuuuuuuu-- why'd you make the one pattern that Photoshop hates, Leggo? :c Anyways, redone for unnatural stripes. Most recent OA was Specklestream. Comments? 00:57, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Pretty! :3 03:45, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. c: Thanks Misty. 13:09, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more shading on her tummy and on her neck. Looks good. ^^ Breeze  whisker  17:49, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just redid the shading overall, it bugged me so much. 13:28, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and tail. 17:03, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:02, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by her tail and belly, if I'm seeing the correct version. 00:47, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gah evil waste. x.x 11:17, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (Ki) - Tweaked
same as warrior and mc. Comments? 17:06, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste in between the tail and chest fur. 23:18, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on our left a bit. 23:20, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? 03:45, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A) - Tweaked
Tweaked to have shading Defined. Most recent OA was Mounty. Comments? 23:04, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define it on the haunch and the back a bit more? 17:00, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Certainly. Re-Ups^ 16:30, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

This is probably just me... feel free to disagree but the shading makes the image look too dark, but I don't think you should lighten it (or maybe...?) maybe tint it? Owo  Ohgawd I fail >.<    08:46, 25, 07, 2012

I have to agree... But I think you should just lighten the shading a tad. 17:23, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste in between the last tuft on his back and the first tuft on his tail (going up) 13:40, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 15:16, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Wing ~ Redone
OA was me, and it had issues. xD

Blur the shading on the hind leg closest to us. 22:45, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur the shading. Plus, that's not shading, if you're referring to what I think you are. XD

Can you lighten the shading a tad? 17:22, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did, but not too much.

Looks great, but I think there are a few stray pixels on her front paw. (the one cloeset to us)  20:09, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It was waste from the layer with the gray on it. Whoops.

Lilykit (Alt K) - Tweaked
OA was Atelda and she needed her shading darkened. I just borrowed the shading off of Jayfeather's kit and blurred it some more :3  18:14, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

It just looks like she got darker... Maybe add a highlight? Or define the edges of the shading. I still can't really tell there is any. 18:39, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Wing ~ Redone
OA was me, and it had issues. Needed to match the new PH. All colors are the same, including the mud. For changes, if they don't show, view here.

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
I believe her image still had to be tweaked for her shading+earpink to be defined ( I can't remember what else) but it was removed from the tweak nominations, but here. If I'm wrong, then you can just decline this xP (And yes I realize that I forgot to get rid of the waste :P) 03:32, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

It was never finished. Blur the shading.

Reuploaded Got rid of the waste and blurred the shading. 03:41, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Stonefur (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to be defined and OA was Sandstar with a redo by Splashpelt and some tweaks by Paleh and Cinder c:  03:38, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and maybe add "highlights" to his legs so it's not just one big blob of light on his face. 03:46, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Splashheart (W) - Tweaked
Yay I killed it 8D OA was Bramble with a redo by me, and then a tweak by me. 03:53, July 26, 2012 (UTC)