Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Snooky(A) - Redone
OA is Iceheart, looked gray and black. Comments? I think I failed with th shading. x3 21:05, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still looks a bit grey. Define the shading and the eyes - I can't see them. 22:46 Mon Dec 24

Re-uploaded I redid the shading. owo 23:02, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, the light/depth in the eye, and blur the patches and if the wrong version is showing, just ignore   02:44, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading again, and I think the eyes are fine. owo 23:19, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes need to be lightened too. At a certain angle they look black. 00:01, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the edges more blurred than smudged, to match the other images? 01:23, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the patches look kind of pixily/sharp altogether, use a smoother brush to soften their look  06:02, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I'm actually not using the blur tool at all, I'm using the smudge tool to blur it all, I did the same on the kittypet. x3 05:55, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

The splotches still seem a bit pixel-y. Also, mind defining the shading some more? 19:43, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:09, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. 08:49, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the shading yet again. x3 01:53, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Brambleberry (MCA) - Redone
Changes aren't showing. Spots were too uniform, looked gray, and I believe neither of the images matched, either. OA was Scarlet 06:01, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Still gray... 02:30, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:20, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the spots and the shading a touch 05:55, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

Don't darken the shading any, but do you think you could define it on the neck and tail? 00:49, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  07:07, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (A) - Redone
Redone to match other images. Last OA be moi. All the layers are exactly the same as the alternate apprentice, with the exception of her scars (or in this case, lack of). Fair warning, I am going to be away until the 1st, so this won't be worked on until then 04:54, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

I know I already said this once but I'm going to mention it again, since I got no feedback on it. The squiggly stripes don't look right. Yes, the edges of stripes can have a furry look on the end, but it's usually on thicker stripes. The way you did the stripes, the whole stripe is a squiggle and it's not natural in my opinion. 19:58, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think it's fine, Ivy. It looks realistic enough since it doesn't cover the entire body like it would on a full ginger cat. 00:50, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Ki) - Redone
Redone to match other images. Last OA be me. I will be away until the 1st, so this won't be worked on until then 04:54, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a tad gray on her right side. x3 15:49, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

Dustpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Darkened the shading a bit. OA was Leafstrike. Comments? 19:08, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

Could you darken it a bit more on the lighter parts of the belly? 19:41, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

Also, could you define it on the haunches. 00:48, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lark That Sings at Dawn (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone for multiple issues. =3 Is she sexy enough? 07:13, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a touch on -->this side. Aasdfghgdhga I love it 07:15 Sat Dec 29

I know that the whole her looking like her father could mean a lot of things, but maybe to save a possible tweak later, make her longhaired? Dun have to, but... Also, I'm not sure if you tweaked her tail or not, but if you did, you should change it back to normal. It's been decided (pretty much...) that short/small tails for kits shouldn't go in description. 09:49, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail, but I think the earpink and pelt are fine. As you said, it could mean alot of things, and there's too many cats using the longhair blanks, imho. 22:52, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Hazeltail (W) ~ Redone
OA of the most recent version is Icy, with a tweak by me. I went back to the original style. 8D

Snooky (W) ~ Redone
OA be Nightshine. ouo I couldn't match the patch style, like how it was blurred and all, but I tried.

Tinycloud (Ki) - Tweaked
Last OA was Rainfacestar. Just slapped on a new layer of shading. First charart up in awhile by me :P Psh, I think I made it too dark. 03:21, December 30, 2012 (UTC)