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Unknown Resident Blanks - For Approval
I'll fix the paws and some anatomy soon. Just wanted to get these up. 18:42 Tue Jul 3

There’s waste outside the back paw on the short hair 23:25, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed some things that were bothering me. I may need to tweak the pose a little bit but for now I like these. 20:37 Fri Jul 6

I think the front legs should be slimmer? Not entirely sure, though. 21:45, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

I feel like we'd be able to see the cats thigh bent somewhat more? and the front half of the body seems a bit thicker in comparison to the back, which seems a bit thin if you get what I mean? the front leg closest to us also seems a bit too thick in comparison to the rest of the legs. 01:31, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the lineart of the back leg closest to us double-pixels? Just in that one spot it isn’t, on both images. 21:09, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

Still working, Sun? I know there’s not much of a limit for blanks, but.. . 05:40, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

I am. I've just had some problems with my tablet. I'll upload later today ^^; 11:20 Thu Jul 12

Reuploaded I'm working on that rump area, bear with me there 15:10 Fri Jul 13

Reuploaded If anyone can give me a red line to reference in fixing the proportion issue in the rump, it would be very appreciated ^^' 17:03 Fri Jul 13

Reuploaded 17:09 Fri Jul 13

I think there's some white waste along the ---> hind leg? Lovely images! :D 05:32, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Could you curve the back some more? Also I'm not too sure about this, but I think the belly should be lower than the chest at this angle? 15:57, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

By any chance, could you make the head higher so it aligns with the back or is maybe even a bit taller? 10:32, July 17, 2018 (UTC)

I'll try to. I'm going to be driving back North today, so I'll upload the version I have and then try messing with the head. 13:31 Tue Jul 17

Reuploaded Redid the tail on the longhair to define the stomach line as well. 18:18 Thu Jul 19

I (think) with how cats walk, the hind leg furtherest away from us would also be moving forward with the front leg thats in the air? like with that if you get what I mean. that's if it's walking and doesn't like, just have a paw in the air. otherwise maybe.....pmove the head over a wee bit, it seems like the neck is too short, and maybe thin out the front leg some more?. 23:48, July 20, 2018 (UTC)

There's no real limit for these, Sun, but I'm just gonna bump this to let you know you have a comment in case you haven't seen it. =)

I believe the anatomy on the face connected to the neck is incorrect... should it be "bent" that way, for lack of better terminology? 13:45, July 26, 2018 (UTC)

I'm reworking these from the ground up. It will be a few days, but I'm going to be tweaking the pose and stuff. So that's the plan for these... 20:15 Thu Jul 26

https://goo.gl/images/YGpqob This is what I'm changing it to. I'll working on it once I'm back at the house and get it posted hopefully today. 14:47 Fri Jul 27

Reuploaded I am going to fix the lack of the white layer asap 17:29 Fri Jul 27

These'll need to be just a little bit smaller, so it doesn't get distorted when it's displayed in the infobox. it'll shrink the blank by default, but I'd rather prevent this from happening in general to allow for no distortion of anyone's images.

Can you make the blanks skinnier? The cats seem too big, even on the long haired. 17:12, July 28, 2018 (UTC)

i think the back shouldn't rise that high and should be more straight, unless they're doing the wiggly butt thing that is. 19:58, July 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lowered the back a tad, while still trying to keep the pose. 00:17 Mon Jul 30

the belly (more on the <-- side) is really big, like sticks out a lot. thin him out some more? --

The legs are reaallyy thick. Maybe thin them out too? :) 03:13, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the blanks solid white and not light pink while you're at it? I don't know if you forgot about that, so I might as well remind you. 22:20, August 4, 2018 (UTC)

Not trying to be rude, but I am not going to do the fill in white until the very end. Sai will remove it due to how it processes transparency, and I would rather be able to mold these easier and then do the white as the last thing. The pink is literally so it has something there. 22:25 Sat Aug 4

It's quite alright, Sun. You do what you have to do to make these as easy to work with as possible. You're not being rude in the least.

Reuploaded These are the literal bane of my existance lmao 00:42 Sun Aug 5

I'm not sure how to word it so I tried for a redline of what I mean instead; http://vvcap.com/6yq3MZiH0VT the main thing is that there should be more of a bend in the hind leg to account for the knee, I think. 01:05, August 5, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also shrank it down a little bit cause I am pretty sure it was still too big 01:32 Sun Aug 5

I apologize for my earlier comment, I wasn't aware you were using Sai. My bad ^^. Could you make the front legs longer? I'm pretty sure they would be the same length as the hind ones at this angle. 19:15, August 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure I understand the vertical line going through the cats' foreheads.  HA WK FI RE98  13:56, August 7, 2018 (UTC)

Make the chest on the short hair thinner? it looks really bulky. 15:22, August 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also changed some things on the face <span style="">21:06 Wed Aug 8

These look a TON better. I'm a fan! I would also get rid of the lil extra toe on the front foot furthest from us, it's just extra lineart to avoid.  HA WK FI RE98  18:28, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

The leader blank has them... not sure why these would be any different?

Lol @ my "observant" self. Never mind.  HA WK FI RE98  21:53, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

There is lineart waste-looking stuff on the short haired's back foot farthest from us, is that what you're referring to? Malina457 (talk) 03:59, August 10, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you possibly thicken the lineart on the short-haired's back foot closest to us, sorta at the part where it touches the other back foot and gets a bit thin. Do you know what I mean? Not the left lineart of the back foot closest to us—-the right. 06:38, August 11, 2018 (UTC)

Dovewing (GC) - For Approval
#itried, I'll redo the shading later as I'm not very happy with it. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 12:52, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

While you do, define the shading everywhere, I can hardly even see it. 13:30, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the earpink as well.

Define the belly's pale parts^^ 21:27, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, did a different shading for the body and did my best to match the pale parts to her other images. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 15:42, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Looks good so far. Your light source is confusing, but a simple way to fix that is to swap the front leg shading. Also, try and avoid leaking shading on the back legs (basically it's leaking into the stomach if you get me) Speaking of which, I think there should be shading on the stomach of some sort.

Smooth out the shading.

Define the pale on the belly. <span style="">20:51 Sun Jul 15

Re-Ups, I defined the chest some but as far as I saw on the other images, the pale parts didn't reach the stomach. I also added more shading on the stomach. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 13:31, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

I'm quite sure the other images have pale covering the belly - per the kit image (which was first), and it's quite visible on the loner. The other images have shading over it, hence it being not as visible, but it's there. 13:42, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I added the stomach paler parts. Its not very bright as that's where shading is. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 14:12, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more toward the top of the hindleg and shoulder. Define the light on the front legs.

14:26, July 16, 2018 (UTC) Try a stronger blur tool (check hard edged if you're using GIMP). The shading should be smoothed out everywhere except for the legs, imo

Re-Ups, I defined the light on the legs and smoothed the haunch and belly shading since those do meet. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 10:28, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just my screen, but the shading seems to be leaking in a couple spots, specifically near the base of the tail and in the corners of the underbelly. I know there are pale parts there, but the shading still shouldn't be coming away from the lineart. 11:54, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I tried to fix it, hopefully I got it. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 20:23, July 19, 2018 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be smoothed out, and the way it is shaded on the paws makes it seem like she has two darker legs, so define the light source there. 13:13, July 21, 2018 (UTC)

To add to Icy's comment, try removing (on the front legs) the < shading to define your light source. Also, remove some of the shading on the shoulder and move it ---> towards the shoulder lineart. And add some on the chest fluffh. Here's a red and blue line to help ya. Red is where your shading should generally be and blue is where it should not. It'll help ya with your light source. :D These blanks can be difficult to shade so don't fret about it. 04:53, July 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 19:26, July 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the front legs.

20:07, July 25, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 21:57, July 25, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 05:16, July 31, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry, but I believe the overall shading can be smoothed out a fair bit more.

This would benefit from adding shading depth to the stomach as well

Re-ups, #itriedagain <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 11:50, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

what I suggest about the stomach shading is to add a new layer and add more shading there. Right now it looks flat. Also, the shading on the front legs (upper portion if you get what i mean) can be smoothed out

Re-Ups <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 06:23, August 4, 2018 (UTC)

That looks better. The shading on the back leg and the stomach could be smoothed out. Blur the edges only so that the shading doesn't leak.

Re-Ups <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 08:13, August 4, 2018 (UTC)

Some of the lighter grey on the tail is leaking onto the rump, and I don't think it should be there? 22:17, August 4, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, that was really small. I don't see how that would have mattered but its removed. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 05:52, August 5, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. The shading behind the front leg seems darker compared to the rest, mind lightening it? --

19:45, August 5, 2018 (UTC)

There is waste behind the front legs. <span style="">20:24 Sun Aug 5 2018

Re-Ups I didn't see any waste but I erased it just to be sure. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 07:04, August 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I redid the shading as it looked off so maybe this is better. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 18:34, August 8, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on --> half of the image. The other half is fine, but it's probably just the shading layer being weird.... it does it to almost every apprentice image I make, lmao.

Re-Ups, I smoothed it, hopefully this is better. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 19:16, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shoulder shading?

19:31, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 20:16, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is really blotchy around the stomach and shoulder area...could you maybe smooth that out, and define it a bit? 06:40, August 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, The stomach looked blotchy because that's where some silver was. I fixed it though. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 19:05, August 11, 2018 (UTC)

There’s waste outside the ear. The shading is leaking on the back foot. 03:59, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I don't see where its leaking. The shading on the paw is suppose to be there. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw   after all this time? Always.  04:11, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Ohh, it’s probably just the pale part. Sorry, my bad! 04:15, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (Hunter) - For Approval
My first charart in a very, very long time! I love these new hunter blanks. :-)  HA WK FI RE98  21:49, August 5, 2018 (UTC)

Same. They're probably my new favorite blanks tbh. Anyways, smooth out the highlights because they look a little blotchy as of now.

Are you using the same color for the base and earpink? They look a little neon compared to his other images. Unless it's the shading tint that making look super neon. 04:52, August 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smoothed highlights and dulled coloring a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  13:11, August 6, 2018 (UTC)

Friendly reminder to not align your image ^^ 16:07, August 6, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed this for you. Please continue to reupload over File:Eagle Feather.hunter.png, to comply with naming policies.

I do my editing on pixlr and it wouldn't let me put a period in the name when I was trying to name it originally. Maybe I can open it somewhere else in the future and rename it there?  HA WK FI RE98  18:39, August 6, 2018 (UTC)

It doesn't really matter what you name it on your own personal computer (half of mine are keysmashes), so as long as you just reupload as normal under the file I linked you, you should be fine.

Smooth out the ear pink just a tad, and I think there's some shading leaking onto the front leg closest to us. You're doing great! 01:19, August 8, 2018 (UTC)

I think the highlights/shading could still be smoothed out.

'''Reuploaded. '''Smoothed highlights and shading more, smoothed ear pink. I searched for any leaking shading (I even wore my glasses! xD) but I really couldn't find any.  HA WK FI RE98  13:33, August 8, 2018 (UTC)

I think the shading/highlights could still be smoothed out a lot more. I think it might be your highlights in this case, but the base color doesn't quite look the same as the kit image.

Sorry, I meant here on the forarm; I should've clarified better ^^' 20:04, August 8, 2018 (UTC)

I see what you're talking about now, Vec! I'll get on it. Also, Cloud, could you specify maybe where on the charart I can smooth out more? It looks pretty smooth to me.  HA WK FI RE98  22:20, August 8, 2018 (UTC)

Pretty much everywhere. I've checked on both my phone and laptop (I'm not used to the calibrations on my laptop yet, hence why I also check my phone screen) and the shading appears fairly blotchy and rough.

Reuploaded. Fixed shading on forearm and attempted to smooth shading overall. Not sure if this guy can handle any more blurring xD  HA WK FI RE98  14:23, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

I’m a bit confused on the light source here...is the light coming from a side angle or a direct front angle? The shading is on the top and bottom of the cat so I’m not entirely sure, it kind of conflicts a little bit. But this is nice nonetheless! 06:42, August 11, 2018 (UTC)

Thank you! I shaded this charart as if us, the viewers, were the light source. ^^  HA WK FI RE98  22:55, August 12, 2018 (UTC)

Milkweed (Hunter) - For Approval
May need to get a .psd for this lol <span style="">14:12 Tue Aug 7

This is gorgeous Sun. <3 I may be mistaken, and feel free to ask for a second opinion, but I don't think the lighter orange (what appears to be the top layer of the pattern on this) is needed on the main body for this image? I'm not seeing it on the other images, besides for the paws, tail, and such. 01:05, August 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I ended up just redoing it. It's closer to the rogue now I think. <span style="">20:50 Wed Aug 8

Define the shading, especially on the tail. I love this sun Malina457 (talk) 04:30, August 9, 2018 (UTC)malina

Still working, Sun? 01:40, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Yup, I'll re-up today. I was having problems with power outages yesterday <span style="">11:11 Tue Aug 14

Leaf (DTC) (Hunter) ~ For Approval
i can make bases MilkCoffee (talk) 20:27, August 8, 2018 (UTC)

Brighten up the white, please? If you're using a source that covers the white, perhaps try shading the white itself using a different shading layer. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">20:37, 8/08/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

is this better now ?? MilkCoffee (talk) 23:15, August 8, 2018 (UTC)

You have to upload over the first image. When you click on the image, it should take you to its page File:Leaf_(DTC).hunter.png. Scroll down until you see "upload a newer version of this file". Click on that and upload the newest version. It should automatically show the latest version. Then you just come back here and let everyone know you reuploaded it. ^^ So upload your newest version over the original file. 00:43, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded i changed shading a little bit MilkCoffee (talk) 16:14, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading on the shoulder, haunches, legs, and face. It's difficult to see. 17:08, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

is there any shading on the hind leg closest to us? it looks flat. 09:13, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

Still working? 01:21, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Gooseberry (Hunter) ~ CBA
I still can't stripe 05:28, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I really shouldn't charart late at night 13:33, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

think you could smooth out the shoulder shading just a wee bit? 20:20, August 11, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 01:02, August 12, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 01:20, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Dust Muzzle (Hunter) - For Approval
Hoo boy, it’s been a while since I’ve done one of these. This method of drawing tabbies and shading with no highlights and such feels so old to me now, but I think it’s a pretty decent match for my other Dust Muzzle chararts, at least. Thoughts? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 14:06, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

Define the head and tail shading a bit Malina457 (talk) 15:57, August 9, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Just gonna bump in here and say that we had this issue with the tail shading for his warrior image a while ago, so do what you can for the tail shading, Jayie, but we will totally understand if it's not possible because of the lighter tones. ^^ 05:23, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :) Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 13:16, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading a bit? This looks amazing. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 21:33, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 23:41, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Blossom (Hunter) - For Approval
Blossom's pattern is the bane of my existence. (I'll mess with the shading depth later) 17:31, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth and smooth it some as well. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 18:12, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

smooth out the pattern on her main body

Reuploaded Had to lighten the shading so it didn't look too dark. I won't have access to my drawing tablet until next week so I apologize if the smoothing of the pattern looks a little lazy. 01:17, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  18:29, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I think the shading's dark enough, considering she's mostly white, but I do think the depth could be defined a little. 01:19, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Blue Whisker (Hunter) ~ CBA
wtf this is so bad

No, it's very good, Fox! :) I think there's some shading leaking on the booty. 03:34, August 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanku. did I get it?

define the shoulder shading and maybe the butt shading a bit? 20:21, August 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Hopefully this is better

CBA? 01:16, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Silver Stripe (hunter) ~ For Approval
and i just realized i forgot to remove that waste. I'll fix that in a bit. 18:44, August 12, 2018 (UTC)

There's waste and could you smoothen the texture a bit. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 20:16, August 12, 2018 (UTC)

re-uploaded. 20:29, August 12, 2018 (UTC)

is it possible to define the stripes on the tail? they blend into the shading a bit. 09:21, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Spotted Fur (Hunter) - For Approval
It's been 5,000,000 years. <span style="">23:47 Sun Aug 12 2018

And you are just as good as ever. Smooth out the shading on the paws. 23:52, August 12, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth it out a little on the underbelly a little as well, particularly right near the front shoulder? 00:10, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Birch (Hunter) - For Approval
I can't get this to look quite right... 23:54, August 12, 2018 (UTC) What do you mean? It looks great! The only thing I see really is maybe you could smooth out the shoulder shading a bit (on the side towards the chest)  HA WK FI RE98  18:28, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Healer Blanks- For Approval
Oh boy, I hoped these are uploaded right Malina457 (talk) 03:50, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Sorry for the stupid question, but do these need to be pixelated? It doesn't look like it, but also, maybe lengthen the short haired tail? Good job! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 03:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make a littttle bid wider in the stomach/flank area? They look a bit skinny atm. Great job though! 04:04, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I can't make them pixalated Malina457 (talk) 04:23, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Eventually, this will need to be pixelated. So before these are CBA'd, we will have to ask one of our users to pixalate them for you. 04:32, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I've removed the |300px from the end of your image code. It's modifying the true size of the image, and on the approval page it needs to appear as it really is, so others can see what they'll be working with (in this case, the modifier was showing an altered size from the original). Please crop both of these as well and shrink them to be the size they'd appeared to be before, but weren't 04:46, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I'll do my best, will upload tomorrow Malina457 (talk) 04:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups I can try and make them not so blurry when I'm not aboutt to pass out. I'll have to kinda re-draw them, maybe. Malina457 (talk) 05:44, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Would you like me to redline them for you? <span style="">9:42 Mon Aug 13 2018

If you wouldn't mind, I would really appreciate it Malina457 (talk) 13:15, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you make the longhair's tail more bushy? :D  HA WK FI RE98  18:25, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I edited the longhair, shorthair will be done later Malina457 (talk) 21:36, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reupsedited both Malina457 (talk) 21:45, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you make the front legs a little longer? I think they would be the same length as the hind legs in that pose. 14:32, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reups How's that? Malina457 (talk) 15:12, August 14, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reed Tail (Hunter) ~ For Approval
oof 11:45, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink just a bit. Wow this is amazing! <3  HA WK FI RE98  12:59, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Hawk! :) 13:05, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Define the stripes a lot. 17:19, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Can you maybe lighten him? He doesn't look silver, but you did a good job! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 17:49, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Ravenpaw!! ^^ 19:05, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Darken the dorsal stripe on the tail so it's black and maybe thicken the stripes on his body with the exception of the circle pattern on his back? 01:23, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:51, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

he's still a bit too dull, and soften the arm shading a bit around the area that it meets the stomach. 09:20, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:27, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Dew (Hunter) ~ For Approval
I'll mess with the shading later, just wanted to get this up.

You forgot the notched ears! Good job! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 15:31, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

This looks very nice! There's some uneven and blotchy shading on her face. If you could smooth that out, that would be great!  HA WK FI RE98  18:22, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

there should be pale on the muzzle area too, I think. 09:19, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

re-up whoops I did two dumbs

re-up messed with the shading depth

There's waste underneath the chin, and maybe define the head shading? This looks good! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 17:44, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

re-up this shading hates me

Maybe smooth out the shading a bit? Malina457 (talk) 18:36, August 14, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Apple Blossom (Hunter) - For Approval
all colors from the kit.

Define the shading, especially on the front half. This looks lovely :) Malina457 (talk) 21:26, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Lovely charart! On her other images, there are stripes on her neck. Could you maybe add a couple?  HA WK FI RE98  21:48, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I attempted to define the shading, but the results weren't any better than what's already here.

Violet Dawn (Hunter) ~ For Approval
I had a lot of trouble with the texture. I hope it's okay. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 02:09, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit, and her darker markings, this isn't bad, I want to do Raven Pelt but can't because texture  Malina457 (talk) 02:40, August 14, 2018 (UTC)Malina

For the texture, it appears too overblurred. Try adding an additional layer of texture and softening it a bit, or redoing it. Which ever works for you. ^^ Also, you can put this and the rest of your images as "for approval" now that you're an apprentice! 02:47, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-ups. Hope I got it right. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 03:05, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Looking good! Define the light on the front legs (meaning remove some of the shading so the light source is visible). 16:32, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Crowfrost (Kit) ~ For Approval
this was realy hard to do, well it is only like my third one, so of corce it was hard

Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

This is pretty! I'll only say that you have to remove the background (the white outside the outline / lineart) and remove the "|thumb" part from the image link. Good luck! ◇ Bounce frost spam eats us and we eat spam  03:47, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Done Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

Nice! Define the shading on the white parts.  HA WK FI RE98  13:16, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

You need to upload this as File:Crowfrost.kit.png, and you need to reserve this on the reservation table. ^^ 16:30, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Correct the blurred lineart on the paws, and I've removed the |left alignment off your image, do try not to readd it because it messed up the page. 16:46, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

the white on the front paws don't go that high, they only stay on the paws. also define the shading, I can't see it.

Sorry about the shading, Im still new to this, is this good? Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

The lineart is still blurred pretty much all around the image, this needs to be fixed. It has to stay solid black all the way around, with no waste outside such as here where it's leaking over the blurred lines. The eyes for this also need to be green to match the first two images in the set. I'm not sure why the StarClan is mismatched, but the warrior came first so this needs to match that and the star needs that altered. 19:21, August 14, 2018 (UTC)