Warriors Wiki talk:World

Apprentice ~ Silver Nomination
I believe it's ready. Some references have to be added, other than that, comments?  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    4EVER The Peace is Perfect☯  05:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

A lot of references need to be added, but other then that, it looks great! 05:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It needs a short spoiler-free introduction. Keep a few sentences but add everything else into a Description section. The Tasks section has to after that with a type 2 heading instead of type 3. Assesment should be a type 3 heading under that. Then you have to have a special cases section which is applicable here because Crookedkit had to stay a kit for a while before becomeing apprenticed, and Swiftpaw, Brightpaw and others had to stay warriors for a while. All in all, there's a lot of special cases to add in. 22:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add references to all the sections except for the beginning introduction. 18:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Made a description section and starting to add more references. I also made a rules section under Tasks. I don't think that heading is all that good, any other ideas for headings? Also what exactly do you mean by special cases?  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    4EVER The Peace is Perfect☯  05:56, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Tasks must go before Education. Special cases are cases when apprentices don't follow the normal rules, such as becoming an apprentice after six moons, staying an apprentice too long, or becoming a warrior without a final assessment. 18:48, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I've tried to add in some special cases but I don't have all the books and can't remember all of them. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  06:41, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Find more references for Education, Description, and Tasks. 23:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Added references. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  08:58, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Find references for the last special case, one more for the intro, and more for the tasks. 23:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Also, add in stuff about medicine cat apprentices. 00:33, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Should I make a new heading on Medicine Cat Apprentices? <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  06:06, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, go ahead. 23:04, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

All done. I think there are enough references now, compared to what I started off with. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  06:32, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

AWesome. CBV? 23:26, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

LionClan (Mythological) ~ Silver Nomination
(Someone please add a link?) Comments? Swee tflo  wer   03:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Add more History, because other cats mention LionClan as strength. Look through the books for them. Petalkit's theft should be in the history. 15:47, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

And the table should be more like TigerClan (Mythological) 15:48, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

How am I going to get every single time LionClan is mentioned? Other than that done :)  Swee  tflo  wer   16:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Look through the books. 16:48, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

All of the books? Because if I do, I'll be bout a week, to read every book. If I have to. Swee tflo  wer   00:28, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to literally read each book. Just use harpercollins and go to search book and type in LionClan. 23:03, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, thank God xD Thanks Mistystar! Swee tflo  wer   16:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Grr, it won't load, stupid dial-up internet. Help anyone? Swee tflo  wer   20:57, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Is it working yet? Sorry, but with school starting, I don't have time to check for you. 00:30, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

No. Unfortunatly not. Swee tflo  wer 18:10, September 11, 2011 (UTC) Well, I doubt there are any more books where LionClan is mentioned, so I guess you can skip that part. You'll need some more references for the description, though. 00:03, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

LeopardClan ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? Swee tflo  wer   15:40, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Cite the description at the top, and expand Into the Wild. I remember Lionheart saying more things about LeopardClan than the sentence there is right now. 22:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done :)  Swee  tflo  wer   00:53, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very good. :D Can you go into more detail about the last part of Into the Wild though? You only said description, and it'd be great if it could tell more about the description. 23:01, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! :) And done. I just fleshed it out a tad, because there isn't alot about them in those two/or more sentences.  Swee  tflo  wer   16:47, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks ready to me! CBV? 04:37, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

World articles are not supposed to have main quotes, so you should move the quote to the quotes section. Technically, world articles aren't suposed to have Quote sections at all, but I think we'll permit it for a few. 22:59, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, and sorry I didn't know that. Done  Swee  tflo  wer   20:46, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I seriously don't think that a world article should have three quotes. Get rid of two of them and add in the info in the quotes to the history. 22:42, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Swee tflo  wer   23:27, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, CBV? 00:28, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 23:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

TigerClan (Modern) ~ Silver Nomination
I've expanded the history a lot, added references, and fixed the page layout. Comments? 23:37, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

It needs a list of ranks and you should move the quotes below. 23:04, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think the quotes look fine at the top, so I'm not moving that. I added a section for the leader ranks, but they didn't have deputies or medicine cats, as mentioned in The Darkest Hour. 23:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed once more votes end. 23:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Deputy - Silver Nomination
I added a description section and cited everything that didn't have it. This time I used the Guidelines. I hope I didn't mess up this time... 23:05, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

It looks wonderful! Great job! Cite the Deputy Ceremony's words. 04:35, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

All cited :) 04:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful. Thanks so much for reading the Guidelines this time. :) All the deputies should be cited. 23:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry it took me so long, I had to get the field guide series books. I cited every deputy except for Tallstar and Cloudstar, because I could not find out where it mentioned them as deputy. Thanks, 16:31, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar was never mentioned as deputy; and neither was Cloudstar, so I don't think it matters. This will be CBVed once more votes end. 23:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Misty! My fastest nomination ever! xD 23:50, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Just letting you know guys, I went through and fixed up all of the references. 08:44, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Skye :) 17:45, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

cBV? 23:27, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

October '11 Feature Article
We started early last month, so we can start early this time again. :) General Clan Information was suggested last month, but it needs some more work. I would work on it if a lot of people want to do it. Clans were also suggested, so we could do any of the four main ones or others. I personally prefer the four main Clans, but we don't have to. ;) We could also do a creature article since we've never nominated one before. 23:24, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...I like the idea of a creature article. Perhaps Wolf? Or something else? 23:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I suggested Wolf last time, and it's a good choice. Any other opinions? 22:36, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

We didn't start that early last month; this is a bit...too early. xD Whatever. Wolf is a great suggestion. If no one objects, this vote will be put up sometime before the 23rd. :P 23:35, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Great idea! I have no objections. 23:07, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reminder
For Prey, we are only doing three of the most memorable mentions, and no more. If there's already three, but you think you have a good mention, it is up to you to use your judgement and delete one. 23:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Big Reminder!
Just wanted to let y'all know, all the votes that are up currently, are closed. No one has taken them down, so I was wondering if I could help with that, I go on here (almost) every day, and wouldn't mind. Thanks! Swee tflo  wer 22:57, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

No, its fine. Thanks for the reminder. I was just busy, for the recent days, in PCA, since I was nominated for SW. Don't worry, we'll take care of the votes now, and thats for your concern. 23:09, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Join? :)
Hey, I seem to have been removed as I was unactive for awhile, so I was wondering if I could be added back in? Thanks. :) I'm glad to see this Project is running well again. 23:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! I'm pretty sure you know most of the Guidelines, but feel free to refresh yourself if needed. I'll add you in. 03:14, September 15, 2011 (UTC)