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Sunfish (Q) ~ For Approval
So like, apparently you can have a redone queen AND something else for approval now? I did not know this. Buuut here. All colors from the Warrior.

If I messed this up in any way feel free to shoot me Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:46, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on all four legs. 16:57, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:16, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define tail and belly shading. Brick 19:10, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

lighten her up a bit 23:21, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Shinxy Blitz and Melody 07:46, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on that hind leg furthest to us - there'd be ligh tni that position. 14:12, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:46, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit, and perhaps make the light on the belly a little more visible? Ah, I wish Sunfish had gotten more screen time, I like her. ;-;

'''Re-uploaded. '''I agree, she should have had more time V_V. In case changes don't show, have a link. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:26, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more on the belly.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:31, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Changes. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:36, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

lighten the shading a tad? it's throwing off the color 15:22, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I darkened it on the face, though, because I could hardly see it. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 21:42, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  17:48, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Thin out the shading. 19:01, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I don't understand what that means..? Make it so that there's a bit less shading...? Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  23:08, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

^^ It basically means make the highlights larger. Even out the shading darkness and define your light source 04:08, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  13:05, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the back and facial shading. It appears rather dark.

I'm not sure where your light source is- the face and tail say above, but the legs say from just off the the right of the face. Could you possibly settle on one source? 13:28, 07/21/2014

Re-uploaded I have a feeling this is going to be declined because of that one month rule o_o Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  16:06, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Wouldn't there be light on the top of the tail?

Re-upped This image is getting annoying at this point. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  20:24, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Making light-colored cats without stripes can be frustrating. Trust me, I made Sunfish's warrior image. You have your light-source coming from two different directions, with everything on her left lit but the belly on her right lit up as well, which is confusing. I'd advise picking a light coming from in front of her or to her right (your left). Go for minimal shading with a really light opacity and blend it until you can barely see where the shadows start and the light ends. Be patient and don't give up and upload it until you think it's perfect. 04:36, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (A) - For Approval
i like this comments? 18:19, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make his markings look more fish-like? 18:30, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

well, i tried already, this is a pike. that's what i tried to base this off of, and in other images the spots are bigger, basically there's not to great of a consistent pattern in the mottles in northern pikes, which is what i want to base this off of because of his name. 18:35, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make them vary in size, though? I love pike and it's kinda cool we got his gender confirmed

Blur the shadong some? 22:05, 07/1/2014

Re-uploaded I didn't erase any of the mottles I had but i added a new layer and added smaller mottles in a new layer 22:57, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 18:07 Thu Jul 3

Define the facial shading.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:34, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 14:13, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

anything else?? 21:33, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur your shading- it's way too hard-edged. Try to avoid using gaussian blur, which will give you the over-blurred, undefined look, and go for using a large, super fuzzy smudge tool to feather out certain areas. Shading will be softer on cuirved, plump areas, like on the haunch, tail, and belly, but it'll be a little sharper on bonier regions. 02:41, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded i redid and tried something new witht the shading 05:27, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading; I can't see it at all.

re-uploaded 05:55, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Thin out the shading a bit. 23:43, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

yeah sorry re-uploaded 01:34, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste or...something by the tail. o.O Also is he intentionally supposed to be blue-looking?

re-uploaded yeah he's supposed to be a bit blu-ish (i always pictured him blue-gray like mistystar and bluestar) the shading is tinted blue and there is an pale blue overlay layer at 10% opacity on top. 21:47, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, well, unless he's called blue-gray, I don't think it should be obvious... idk, it seems kinda like an assumption that he's blue-gray, despite only being called dark gray? Could you maybe lessen it up a bit? Tinting and all is fine, but maybe lighten up the overlay juuuust a bit?

re-uploaded i tweaked the overlay but it honestly makes very little, if any, difference. but then I set one of my shading layers on multiply and that seemed to help. but tbh I can clearly see that he's not blue gray. 16:53, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ For Approval
Here's the new version Whew, first charart in ages. It's probably for the best that I chose something simple since it's been awhile xD. Anyways, comments? 17:03, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading leaks away from the lineart on her belly 17:27, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I cleared all of the outside shading twice to make sure it was gone, so there shouldn't be any. 17:35, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

No... I didn't mean outside of the lineart. Along her belly in just one little spot I can see white where there should be shading. Sorry to confuse you! 17:38, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's ok! I didn't notice that at first. Pixlr always makes the stomach shading leak away from the lineart sometimes 18:01, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Good work :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:39, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded and thank you C: 21:58, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

define the light on the tail. 22:22, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

The belly shading seems a bit gray. 14:29, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded It needed to be lightened, so that's why I did. 22:43, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

ok honestly this looks way too white, you can actualy tell shes even a grey cat tbh. maybe change that? 12:20, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

I color picked the colors from her warrior image, so unless someone else thinks her color is too white I'm not going to change it. 01:09, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Darken it; she's gonna end up being tweaked anyways.

Reuploaded 18:30, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the head shading, and perhaps the foreleg shading too? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  22:29, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:02, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink and define the light source 04:06, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading to look like another queen's charart I saw. Hopefully the light source is clear on this one. I'm going to kill the tail shading though. 13:20, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading and define the light on the tail.

Reuploaded  23:47, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit- it appears slightly blotchy, especially on the body.

Can I get some serious help with the shading please? I'm having a lot of trouble with it no matter what program I use. (At first I used pixlr but now I'm using photoshop) 23:08, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

shading with light colored cats is tough. I think blurring it tons would help, and also remember, the shading doesn't have to be overly dark, it just needs to be visible so really light shading with a more defined edge can, in some instances, be better than darker, defined shading. c: (idk if i helped any lol) 15:38, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Floss (Q) - For Approval
New lineart, new charart. Colorpicked from her loner image. this was fun c: <span style="">22:04 Sat Jul 5

Define the shading and possibly add more white spots on her belly, tail, and legs. 22:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. I decided to use pure white because the shading was making it gray. hope this is better <span style="">22:11 Sat Jul 5

Re-up. Added highlights, since it might help lighten the belly. They're too bright, though, imo. <span style="">22:21 Sat Jul 5

Define the overall shading. Try tinting it, so it doesn't make the white look gray?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:40, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't think you have to tint shading, so I decided not to. <span style="">10:11 Sun Jul 6

the white is looking very gray, it almost blends in with the other gray as it is now. I'd suggest lessening the shading a bit,a nd I think a tint might help. 22:23, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">23:24 Mon Jul 7

I'm not sure, but is there waste around the image? 14:27, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

It looks a little fuzzy around the edges, so either waste or blurred lineart. 21:15, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. i hate waste tbh <span style="">23:35 Tue Jul 8

smudge the earpink upwards? 17:02, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

I decided not to smudge the earpink, since I sort of like the earpink as is, and I can't smudge it without not being able to blur it again. <span style="">00:19 Fri Jul 11

I agree with rocket, I can't even see that it's smudged. also, the white looks very gray. 00:41, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Smudging ear pink is not mandatory and it is solely a preference. The ear pink is fine as it currently is.

Re-up. Something's being blurred around the lineart. <span style="">10:57 Sun Jul 13

Define the shading 19:52, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading, and define the light on the tail.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:35, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">23:57 Sun Jul 13

Add a bit of light on the tail, the shading's a bit flat there, and add some shadow to the face 04:05, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the front leg closest to us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:49, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on the back leg farthest from us looks a bit flat... <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  15:25, July 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">14:30 Sat Jul 19

Define the shading/light on the tail? <span style="">13:38, 07/21/2014

Cinderfur (Star) - For Approval
Colorpicked from apprentice image. 'Nuff said. <span style="">23:05 Sat Jul 5

Define the light on the tail and I'm having issues seeing the light source. The body says it's coming from the top left, while the forelegs says it's coming from the bottom left. <span style="">23:21 Sat Jul 5

Re-up. <span style="">00:11 Sun Jul 6

Make the nose color pink. His kit image has a pink nose, and i think his others do aswell.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:42, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i've got to blur that belly shading soon ._. <span style="">10:11 Sun Jul 6

Put some light on the front of those legs, they look a bit flat since they're totally in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:34, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten all the shading a tad, too? Except on the tail? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. i love dem eyes   Brick   15:24, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Add/define the tail light 22:40, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Sorry, I had day camp and I had to go home at 5:00, then I had other things. <span style="">23:24 Mon Jul 7

I see some waste near the tail. 14:29, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">23:35 Tue Jul 8

Add some light around the paws? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:53, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">00:19 Fri Jul 11

The shading on the paws are way to dark, and also there is alot of waste near the paws aswell. Maybe changing your light source would help, so that both paws have light on them. The way you have it now makes it look flat.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:37, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. oopsies <span style="">01:02 Sat Jul 12

Re-up. Redid all the shading, since it was really tough to do. <span style="">10:45 Sat Jul 12

Define the paw shading.

Re-up. <span style="">22:33 Sat Jul 12

Define the light on the legs and tail. 19:51, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the ear pink a little more.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:34, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. ^^you two keep spamming my chararts lmao <span style="">23:57 Sun Jul 13

Define the light on the tail and maybe add a small highlight to the chest 04:04, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, tbh <span style="">14:30 Sat Jul 19

I'm gonna slide in and agree with Scarlet. The shading does appear rather flat, so I think adding the highlight to the chest-area could possibly help a bit.

I think defining the light on the tail would help too 21:07, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Could you also define the shading/light on the legs? <span style="">03:15, 07/24/2014

Tallpoppy (Alt Q) - CBA
Hello

Define the shading. 01:23, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I stole and tweaked Velvet's texture.

Okay, Leggy's beating me with a stick, so I'm gonna redo this texture and reupload in a bit.

Re-uploaded. Got rid of the texture since it didn't like me and basically redid it.

Re-uploaded. After some encouragement, I tried to at least do something and brought back what I worked on last night.

Define the shading a bit more around her belly and shoulder 04:03, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closest to us. Wow, this is really good, Snow.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:48, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the hind leg that we can see all of? <span style="">13:51, 07/21/2014

lol, finally a comment. Reuploaded. Can we maybe please not go like five days without saying anything???? Couple days is fine, but there's also other work to be done.

Curve the texture between he belly and the back? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:22, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

It is curved, and I think it's pretty okay how it is, but I'll see what I can do if more people agree.

define the light a smidge on the top of the tail. lovin the texture! 21:06, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you~

CBA? 00:48, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Deerleap (Star) - For Approval
Colorpicked from the elder image. I don't really like the way this turned out but oh well. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 22:56, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white, and define it on the tail a bit. Woah, this is nice. .o.

I'm changing this heading to for approval, and making you an apprentice as well, since it's obvious you know what you're doing and you have more than a basic grasp of chararts. =P

Re-uploaded.  Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 00:10, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

I love the stripes :P Define the facial shading, and define the light on the tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 07:28, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source and I wish my first charart had been this good :o 18:50, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. (Thank you!! <3)  Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 22:47, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Her dorsal stripe seems a bit hard-edged. Maybe smudge it a touch? 04:02, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 17:19, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little bit (they appear to be softer and not as hard-edged on the warrior and elder) and define the light on the tail.

Reuploaded. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 18:16, July 19, 2014 (UTC)

can you blur the stripes a bit more? 21:05, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reuped. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 21:45, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure if the tip of the tail is grey or if it's shading.... If it's shading, can you blur it a bit? <span style="">03:12, 07/24/2014

Cherrytail (Q) - CBA
i've always loved this pattern. comments? 05:56, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

This is really good :)  The giner patch on her face is supposed to extend to the top of her nose. (Her apprentice and Kittypet images have it) so it'll match her other images. Also, define the facial shading a tad bit.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 07:24, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks Breezeheart! c: 13:29, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Could you try smudging the patches (like on her rump and legs) a little bit more on a lower setting brush? This is really nice, Duck. Probably one of your better chararts.

Define the shading a bit? This is purrtty 19:49, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Her patches seem a bit more yellow then the ones on her other images, maybe make them a tad more orangish? She's gorgous! 04:01, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

thanks guys. re-uploaded 01:33, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial and belly shading. Also, are the paws supposed to be white? I can't tell.

re-uploaded yeah they're white and I can tell fine but Ii added a highlight so they'll show better. 21:49, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Nightwhisper (Lo) ~ For Approval
my first loner; changes are here. Comments? 19:48, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck, face, and tail a little more, and blur the haunch shading a tiny bit more. 23:34, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 21:05, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the body shading and maybe lighten it a touch.

Reups 14:41, July 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading and ear pink, please.

Reups 20:02, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading/light on the tail? <span style="">04:08, 07/24/2014

Runningbrook (Star) - For Approval
Since Palebird got declined, I did Runningbrook instead, since it got confirmed that she's in StarClan. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:58, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading a tough? <span style="">00:43 Mon Jul 14

Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:13, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading right of the muzzle a tad? holy crap this is amazing 19:38, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

The pale parts kinda look white..mind darkening them a bit?

Wait, why darken the pale parts. Aren't they supposed to be white? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:41, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a tad, to match the other images. I didn't know she got a cite, but now I'm happy. And being happy is good. And good things lead to less death. Brick  19:45, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

No, they're not supposed to be white. Pale parts are allowed on a tabby, yes, but they can't be white. Pale isn't white, and I don't think Breezey used white when she made Runningbrook's images. Jayie, we had this long before you came along, and someone tried to say that pale and white were the same thing, when they're not.

Oh, okay. :) I must've pulled the wrong color off the other chararts. I pulled it off the lightest part of her belly, 'cause I thought the rest was just dark because of the shading, but maybe I pulled it off of too light a pixel. I'll play around with the colors again. Sorry for the misunderstanding. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 19:56, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Does that work better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:26, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Much better. ^^ Possibly blur the paw shading just a bit?

Thanks. :) Reuploaded, paw shading is blurred, and I removed some waste that I noticed. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:15, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

There hasn't been many comments for a few days; how about a CBA? 12:05, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry but can you blur the shading of chest that's paler and if that is the pale chest it should be larger. 21:50, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:02, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

it should be bigger, judging by the position of this blank it should fill up almost all of where it is now down. 21:04, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Theres a stripe running across the lower part of her chest - that's not all shading. She has that stripe on her other images. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:12, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

well if that is the stripe, this it out a tad and define the pale chest below the stripe, because her warrior has it all of the way down. 03:20, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Mosspelt (Q) - For Approval
Here are the changes if they aren't showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140714C/ezimba13931894448400.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:59, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define and darken the overall shading everywhere but the belly.

Reuploaded. Also realized that I'd forgotten to fill in the ear pink. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:26, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink some more. Also, define the shading and light on all four legs.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:45, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:42, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Now, correct me if I'm wrong (which I could be), wouldn't the shading on that leg basically under/behind the belly (where we can really only see part of it) be a bit darker? If I'm wrong, disregard me. Nice job in matching her pattern. o.o

Reuploaded, I darkened the shading on that leg. And thanks. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:11, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

sorry but all of her white looks extremely gray. 21:51, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:01, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

it still looks really gray 21:01, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, i think it looks fine. I can plainly see that its white. Theres shading in those places, so of course its going to look a little gray.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:48, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

The only part that really looks darker is the belly/stomach, but considering it's basically on the lower half of the cat, I can see why it's so dark. Everywhere else is fine, and I think it should be Jayie's choice whether or not she thinks it's too dark.

Poppydawn (Alt. Q) - CBA
not sure whether or not she'd get a graying muzzle 22:51, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Im not completely sure; But i think Poppydawn wasnt an elder yet when she was a queen, so shes not supposed to have the gray muzzle... someone correct me if im wrong.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:42, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

I dunno, I kinda disagree with the above comment. Being a warrior/queen doesn't mean you have to be young. Being an elder is only a named rank, so I think a queen could still have a graying muzzle. But I may just be incredibly tired and spitting up nonsense. Also, her warrior alt has it, sooo....? Brick 16:40, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Her alt images show it, but her normal queen doesnt. I say add it, if anyonne else aggrees. <span style="">00:14 Fri Jul 18

This is why we check references. Judging by what's shown in the references, she was called brown as a queen in the allegiances of Yellowfang's Secret, which is long before she retires. Therefore, she would not get the gray muzzle, as she was said to have had it when she retired, and we don't add things from before citations. So, we wouldn't add it if she got an apprentice image or something along those lines. The alt warrior gets it since it went along with that description, and the same can be said for her elder image, StarClan image, ect.

Re-uploaded 03:11, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? I can barely see it. Perhaps blur it a bit, the edges also look a bit too sharp... But it could be me. <span style="">14:31, 07/19/2014

Re-uploaded 22:56, July 19, 2014 (UTC)

I'm kinda having an issue seeing the ear pink. Mind defining it?

Re-uploaded 21:07, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Another lovely image, dear~

River (Ki) - For Approval
I tried my best ;;-;; Brick  06:35, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the front legs and tail shading. Nice charart :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:41, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, thanks! http://i57.tinypic.com/9pp01y.png Brick  16:47, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closer to the tail. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  10:51, July 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i60.tinypic.com/1z30xow.png Brick  06:32, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and blur the stripes a bit.

The shading on the right side is fine- it's the chest, trail, and leg shading that needs defining imo. Great job on this, Trunk. <span style="">15:21, 07/22/2014

Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2i0qhxf.png. Brick  09:31, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Oakfur (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
I hate apprentices so much, so why do I keep taking them? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  10:49, July 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a tad and possibly smudge it a bit. 23:08, July 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading and possibly lighten it a little bit? It seems just a little too dark, but maybe blurring it would solve that.

'''Re-uploaded. '''<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  15:35, July 19, 2014 (UTC)

it looks kinda cream as it is now. 21:51, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Colorpicked off a real cat. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:16, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little and define the light on the tail? <span style="">15:15, 07/22/2014

Re-uploaded <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  20:45, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
02:35, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

The unshaded part looks flat. Maybe add a highlight or something? <span style="">2:44 Fri Jul 18

IDK if it's just me, but the shading doesn't look blurred /at all/. If you do your shading like that, then it's fine by me, but if not... <span style="">18:10 Fri Jul 18  My computer screen is probably really out of whack too, but the other images look fine, so....

David doesn't blur his shading and hasn't for quite a while. Blurring it isn't mandatory, and there are other styles of shading. Maybe extend the shading, if possible? idk.

I'm not sure if extending the shading will add any depth, though. Perhaps add a little more of a gradient? It should get gradually darker to show that the image isn't entirely flat. 19:42, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Also, perhaps you should add some shading on the shoulder behind (well, next to) the head? <span style="">14:28, 07/21/2014

Stormfur (Alt Ki) - For Approval
My adorable little bundle of fur was called silver, which warrants an alt since silver is sorta a pale gray and they're more than two shades apart.

Blur/smudge the facial shading, the chest shading (the lower half, the part above the leg) and the shading on the left leg. He's gorgeous omg <span style="">14:22, 07/19/2014

Re-uploaded.

blur the texture a tad 01:50, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Maybe define the eye depth? If not, that's fine he's so freaking cute I just want to cuddle him 12:04, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

I don't have much to work with, and it's actually pretty defined. o.O

The eye depth is fine. There's only what, two pixels, to work with? It looks good to me tbh. Nicely done, Jayce. <span style="">14:30, 07/21/2014

hm the shading looks slightly flat to me, could you expand i tjust a smidge. 21:52, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, it's not flat, but okay. o.O Re-uploaded.

Tansy (Cat) (Q) - For Approval
Ohai. Snowy got approved (yay!), so here I am with another long hair queen. Changes be here if needed. <span style="">14:37 Sat Jul 19

Define and add some depth to the shading. 18:45, July 19, 2014 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">23:39 Sat Jul 19

Define the shading on the legs and the tail. <span style="">14:34, 07/21/2014

Tail and legs are fine, imho. I can't see the shoulder shading, though.

Oh, and could you define the earpink a bit? I'm having issues seeing it. ouo <span style="">15:11, 07/22/2014

Re-up. <span style="">19:50 Tue Jul 22

Define the chest shading.

re-up http://www.ezimba.com/work/140724C/ezimba17991021946600.png <span style="">19:53 Wed Jul 23

define the tail shading a bit? <span style="">03:21, 07/24/2014

Waste around the chest/left leg bit. Brick  19:12, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Morningflower (Q) - For Approval
eh.i didn't have much to work with in terms of matching the stomach. <span style="">18:02, 07/21/2014

Blur the patches a bit. They're not as hard-edges on her other images and they're smoother, for lack of a better work.

reuploaded also i added shading on the shoulder because i forgot it <span style="">19:13, 07/21/2014

Define the shading on the chest and darken it a bit.

'reuploaded ok i'm really proud of this <span style="">02:38, 07/22/2014

Define the shoulder shading a little bit. I know it's there, but I can't really see it.

Reedfeather (W) - For Approval
- all colors and opacities are the same as the deputy. Stripe and texture layers are exactly the same as deputy (just laid over warrior blank) Comments? 20:29, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Define that pesky tail shading. I hate shading tails on short-haired cats omg.

Re-uploaded 21:12, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Mapleshade (A) - For Approval
ew. im not totally happy with this. but. here it is. <span style="">21:48, 07/21/2014

the spiky fur on her back looks a bit out of place, perhaps remove a few of the spikes. 21:53, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine to be honest. It takes away from the look that she is actually ragged... I'd rather not remove it unless more people agree. <span style="">22:21, 07/21/2014

I gotta agree with Duck. Maybe if they went up the back a little more? They kinda..just stop when they probably should continue up the spine..

Maybe look at the other Mapleshade apprentice image to get an idea about how to do the spikes? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:27, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">23:06, 07/21/2014

Frost (Star) ~ For Approval
He needed a StarClan image. Since shading tint doesnt have to match, i made the shading have a slightly blueish tint. Also, this is my first time doing texture, so its not the best. =P Colorpicked from his Rogue image. ~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:07, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

His eyes look almost black. Can you please lighten up the color a bit so I can see it? Color-picked or not, on the rogue, the eyes are smaller, so you can get away with darker colors much easier. Also, blur the lower back shading, and darken the texture a bit.

Re-up.  Lightened the eye color to a lighter blue, darkened the texture a bit, and blurred the shading. is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:01, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the texture more. Comparing it to the rogue, this is still too light. Nice job on the texture too, btw.

Define the shading. Brick 05:15, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Darkened texture again, and defined the shading. I tried my best at darkening it; if you think its still too light, ill redo the texture. Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 08:12, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

His eyes still look really dark, maybe try making a gradient fron light to dark going up? I'd say don't lighten the bottom too much, but if you have it lightened, expand? One thing I've noticed always helps is the dodge and burn tools. <span style="">21:12 Tue Jul 22

It is going from light on the bottom to dark. I think its fine, unless someone else agrees.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:25, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

The eyes look fine to me/look fine on my computer. Blur the stomach shading. 12:30, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, I still think they're still a liiiiittle too dark and there's not much depth to them. With this image, you have a little more freedom with the eyes, and you don't have to use the same like two-four pixels of color that are used on the rogue (as long as they're looking the same, but with the eyes on the rogue being small as hell, you can't tell tbh), but you can add a little more light to his eyes without it being too light/too dark/ect.

1db9e8 was the lighter colour used and 0a576f was the darker that I used for the rogue btw 00:15, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Lightened eyes, and defined them. Also blurred the belly shading. Is that better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:30, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Silverstream (Q) ~ For Approval
ew what have I done? Changes are here and I'll remove the white pixel in her toe on the next upload 20:43, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the backlegs, and define the shading on the front legs. Also, define the earpink some. This is really good ^-^~Breezeheart~ (talk) 09:56, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the belly shading a tiny bit... It might be my screen and the fact that it's 11 at night and I'm tired that I can't see it well, however, so you might not need to... But for now, unless someone can speak up and tell me I'm blind, I can't see the belly shading as well as the shading on the bum idk but wow good job bruh <span style="">03:04, 07/24/2014

I think both are pretty defined, but the facial shading could be defined and darkend a smidge.