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Egg (Lo) ~ For Approval
Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the hightlights and blur them ,11:16,February 3,2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is tinted green. Can you fix that? (you can try to get the xcf. file from the original artist) 20:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 17:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait o3o ☺~L e a f y ~  ☺ 20:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading less flat; It looks like there are only highlights. 02:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Start to do all thing please "Expand the highlights and blur them", right? ,16:58,February 6,2012 (UTC)

His hind leg doesn't look completely shaded, the one on <-- that side. :3 22:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafstorm, I did expand the highlights and blur them. I always do everything the people tell me to =3 And I just realized the shading needs to be blurred... ☺~L e a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 02:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think that shading is too heavy.

Cheshire, you should be specific. Where is the shading too heavy? Honestly, I think the highlights could be blurred a little more, and blended with the shading more. Right now, you can clearly tell where the shading/highlights meet. When I use them (rare, but I still use 'em now =P), I try and make them flow together. 17:43, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *headdesk* I made this such a fail >.< 14:43, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

He's kinda starting to look an off-white ish color. Why don't you ask Mistypebble, the artist of Egg's apprentice image, for the pelt color? She probably still has the original file. 04:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, are you still working on this? 23:00, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the hauche shading. <span style="">01:23, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

D= Yes, I'm still working. I couldn't get on yesterday, sorry =( 11:57, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It's about time <3 12:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his ears and head, and lighten and blur the shading. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I can't believe no one noticed he needed a torn ear... 16:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more thick and blur the shadings more. 18:47, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, do you mean thicken the line-art on the torn ear or make the torn ear go down deeper? 20:03, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should go back up with the ear, but just cut dont like a "v". This cut sorta looks like a "u". Sorry if that made now sense whatsoever Also could you blur the shading a bit? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on it Leafy? 19:51, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm... I didn't know, so I just thickened the line-art with what Leafstorm said (does that make sense?) Oh, Re-uploaded 20:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You thickened it a bit too much hun. Just remove the top layer of pixels and that should be good. ( I think) And smoothen out the shading more, so it doesn't look like it has a green tint. 00:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart from the top of the torn ear. 03:01, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading C: -- Fenris  They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 01:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait =( 15:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of all of that waste. 18:32, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded o3o I always forget about the stupid waste Dx 19:13, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tad bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look a tad insane... What color did you shade with? It looks kinda greenish... 03:22, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the shading and blur it, and make the nick in the ear smaller like the apprentice image. 05:03, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs, and I'm pretty sure his nicked ear should look more V shaped. 11:24, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nick in the ear more the same size as the one on the apprentice charart. He was an apprentice after being a loner, I doubt the split would have shrunk over time. 17:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

It's been four weeks since this was first posted. Should this be declined? 02:47, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

It should. I'll take over. 02:48, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:45, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a tad neon. 20:05, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  11:20, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :3 18:27, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more, well, pink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  23:22, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Saturating it more will probably just make someone comment that it looks to neon... 03:10, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink a little moar? c: 03:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:13, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him a little less yellow? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  07:03, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 00:00, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:16, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I might have been seeing ghe wrong version with that yellow comment, and maybe I still am, but his eyes should be blue. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  02:04, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:38, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink like one click more? 05:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:47, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Alt.A) ~ For Approval
He was described as a fluffy gray cat. Comments? 17:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and define the shoulder shading. 17:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 17:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose a darker shade of gray unless he was said to have a pink nose. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 17:58, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it to the max. 18:45, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to all the belly and chest. <span style="">07:38, 22, 02, 2012

Reuploaded  I redid the shading, and I kinda like it better than the first. 13:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽  19:55, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:08, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 17:01, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading on the haunch a little less sharp-edged. If you know what I mean. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  23:10, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Where's your light coming from? The body says from the left but the face says the right. I'd say move the shading on the face to the other side and blur it a lot, and it should be ready for CBA then. 17:33, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. Sunny frost  21:54, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

There isn't any shading on the right except Shelly. 22:16, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and blur the haunch shading. 22:07 Sun Mar 4

Please work on this or it will be declined. 08:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:09, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and I think there is waste, it might just be my eyes. 21:35, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's no waste. 8D 22:34, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yup I agree with Skye. Now I think the shading on the back could be blured a little bit more. Maybe darken the shading on the face while lightening it by the tail. Too confusing? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   22:42, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur ze haunch shading plz (Chatspeak bad x.x) <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  07:01, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the earpink. 16:28, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

What's your light source? It seems to be coming from all over the place. 00:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to have to withdraw (Sounds familiar coming from me doesn't it?) the shading is making everything difficult for this image 8c. 12:11, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, Silver, may I take it then? 20:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Lo) ~ For Approval
Ooh, my third loner. And the last one. >:D Comments? 20:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the shoulder shading. Lovely Mooneh ^^ 22:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly thicken the lineart on the color to match with the lineart of the loner. Wonderful! :3 22:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thankies :3 22:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a little more or smudge the fur into the ear a tad? :3 22:59, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and eye depth. Looks good, Mooneh! 06:05, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the long wait. I lost the .pdn (the original file with layers) so I couldn't mess anything up for a while. I have the .pdn on another computer, but it's an hour's drive away. I'm trying to get the file sent to me, so, don't say anything about fixing the tail shading, because I didn't. I just defined the eye depth. :3 11:32, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink, maybe the color a bit thinner, the teeth a bit rounder (they kinda look like shark teeth) and define the shading on the neck, collar, teeth, and head. 03:06, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Well, Scarlet, the teeth do match pixel for pixel the same as the last loner image, but, I can round them if you want me to. :3 11:39, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's a pixel of waste under his tail~ ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 14:48, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined tail shading, smudged pelt into earpink, and (hopefully) got rid of the waste under the tail. I lightened it, too. 22:41, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the collar thinner and straighter. 23:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the shoulder. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 00:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

The waste is still there o3o it's trapped between the hind leg farthest from us and the tail~ *stinks at explaining things* :|3 ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 03:56, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the stomach/belly. 03:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The changes aren't showing; I blurred the shading on flank/shoulder, went through every layer and got rid of waste, but I hate to say it, I can't make the collar thinner. I can re-do it if you want me to, but -cough-itwaskindofhard-cough-. 09:59, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading some and smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more....and define rhe shading on the front leg if there is any. *is shot* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 11:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken up the back and back leg shading because it looks like it's like, reaaaaly bright. Then blur it and the ear pink. I l0ve the collar! Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  03:38, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

I won't have the .pdn until Friday at the latest, so I won't work on it since then. Is that okay? *derp* 10:39, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, why not? Unless another senior warrior disagrees, we can wait for Friday. 17:34, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I found the .pdn 8D...I know it looks a bit darker, but...yeah. Skye helped me with the shading (fail) on join.me, so it should be good...I'll fix the collar later once I can catch Shelly or Ivy on chat. 22:41, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading..and you could just leave a message on their talk page :P 02:51, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? (Aside from the collar). 20:33, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing to match the rogue. 21:16, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I see waste. >.> Bah, I'll fix it later. 13:20, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink~ :3 00:17, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

...It is. o3o. If I blur it more, it'll be too 'spaced', and some of the gray will show on the ear. 15:29, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind then.. :s Lower the opacity on the earpink, and there's a speck of waste at the part when his tail meet the back leg farthest from us. 15:47, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 16:05, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya lighten up or blur those blotches of darker shading on the belly and haunch? c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke 11:18, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the collar (I hope). I can't blur that without blurring the rest of the shading along with it. Sorry, I can try to make it lighter if it helps. 21:20, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy(Did I spell that right?) blur/smudge it. 00:15, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add shading to the paw/legs farthest from us? ^^ 01:44, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the shading. There's waste everywhere, but I can't get it off. I went through every layer and deleted it...but it's still there. So if someone could do it for me, or help or something....? 11:35, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I usually open the .png file in Pixlr, and delete the waste there. You coukd try that if'n you want. :P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene  11:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Lo) ~ For approval
☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 16:15, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, like a lot XD 16:17, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

And blur it too >8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 16:18, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

The light sorce is from above, so the light wouldnt reach under neith so it would be very dark x: Me and Stoneh had this conversation on a different loner~ ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 16:22, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it a smidge, then? :3 16:50, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Kay~ Reuploaded-- changes not showing o3o ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 16:55, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the brown paws? 23:25, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  ♡  P  o  u  n  c  e  y  !         ♡ 00:14, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Please lighten the shading on the legs. I realize where the light's hitting, but, it seems too dark..and it bothers me. 11:53, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think that she should have more stripes on her legs... 11:58, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I added highlights to the legs. :3 I won't add any more stripes because I copied the kittypet image. ♡ P  o  u  n  c  e  y  !         ♡ 16:19, February 26, 2012 (UTC) It may just be my stupid  computer, but the shading looks like it's tinted green. 17:16, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's your computer o3o 18:07, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, when I see all of Sasha's pixels side-by-side, the colour on yours seems a little too yellow, make her slightly red? 18:40, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Make those higher stripes lighter to blend in with the pelt. 23:18, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes are fine, they looks the same on the other chararts. Can you lighten the shading just a t'eensy winsy bit more? '^^ 20:56, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the two back paws and the tail. 13:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Sorry for the wait :x 00:45, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 06:16 Sun Mar 4

Sorry, but the color still seems off and the shading placement looks flat. If it isn't showing, then I apologize. 01:02, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 21:37, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is fine in darkness, it's dark/light enough. 16:27, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, I thought this charart was already done by Scarlet. The loner image is already on Sasha's page, and it's in the approved archives from February. If I'm right, the image should be reverted back to the original artist's version.

Oops, didn't look closely. 05:37, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ruby (Lo) - For Approval
So I have Ruby, Redstar, and Rowanclaw for approval xD Comments? 03:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

It... it... she looks really... really nice. Could you maybe lighten the shading a little more, near the tail? Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 03:39, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the two legs that are...er...supposed to be shaded. *doesn't know how to say it otherwise* It's the legs that are on the left of the cat. :3 11:03, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly and shoulder shading a bit. 11:13, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the highlights (if there are any)~ 12:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the shading and the 'highlights' with the pelt more. 21:40, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define a light source. Breeze whisker  05:06, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Breeze, could you explain better? What should I change? 20:10, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think she means that there's lught coming from the front, but also on the back of the tail, ehich doesn't make sense. o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke 00:24, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

The light's not coming from the front, it's coming from where we are... Probably my shiny loonies. 01:33, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the highlights 05:26, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:18, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Oakstep (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yay! I was browsing last night and found this! Then I resvered it today and made it in twenty minuets. Tried my best to copy it. Comments? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  01:07, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes you have now thinner and add more. Blur the earpink too. 01:08 Tue Mar 6

His elder is also lighter. No just highlights, but all over. Breeze whisker  05:03, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't lighten it too much because I got the colors from the elder. Also I added a stripe or two and thinned almost all of the stripes. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  00:21, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  02:08, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes more "zig-zaggy" like the elder's image, and darken the overall shading. 03:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

The tail needs seven stripes, and you have five. Try thinning out the ones you already have, and add a few more in so it matches. 04:51, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Two hours....Two /hours!/ please...be nice to Sandy...  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave!  22:58, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the pelt into the earpink more, mainly the sides of it. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 11:41, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The ear pink might not look much different, but it is. And the changes might not be showing too. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  22:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes really don't match. Take a closer look at the elder and try to copy that. 22:01, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (Lo) ~ For Approval
If Frostfur and the other elders get one, so does she. Anyways, this is the style I want to remake her images into, so no whining that it does not match her other ones. 04:28, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Ish so purdy *u* Define the neck shading <333 04:32 Tue Mar 6

Re-uploaded. I also gave her a little color. 04:56, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and blur the haunch shading :3 01:37, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:41, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Er... Shade on the back ear, just a little? 06:06, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. There's a highlight on most of the head, and the back ear happens to be part of where the highlight is. 06:07, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ahhhh... I see. 06:09, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading just a tad? 02:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:05, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt Lo) - For Approval
Kay, got this bad boy done and I must say, I'm pretty happy with how he came out. In Long Shadows, I'm pretty sure he was considered a loner in it, and we agreed the Long Shadows cover counts. Comments for improvement? 16:14, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. :3 19:49, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on his belly a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  23:16, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the poor kitty~ =3 02:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the waste? I don't see any. Hm... smudge the [e;t up into the earpink just a tad. Looks great :) 02:25, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste. It's around the top of his back, under his chin, around his paws, towards the bottom under his tail, above his shoulders...~ :3 11:20, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I honestly think since I've darkened the shading that he is too dark now. 19:22, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The waste is still there. o3o 21:27, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see it. At all. 21:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I see some~ Anyway, I know you were told to blur the belly, but, it looks more smudged on his other alts... Maybe smudge it a little more...? 22:52, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Lo) ~ For Approval


Browsing and I found a kitty I could do: Minty! I actually like this one, sort of. Comments? 02:45, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I thought she was a rogue? 02:48, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Says she's currently a loner, and listed under the loner category: Minty Loner (see list of loners, under M) 02:54, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm. She stays. Define the shading. Not bad, Woo. 03:12, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. 03:14, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred line-art on the base of the tail and haunch. Also, could you define the highlights? :3 03:52, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:12, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and highlights. 04:20, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 04:36, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:43, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

...The blurred line-art on the top of the tail is still there, and it looks like some of the line-art there was deleted also. 05:04, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed. I couldn't see it that clearly though. Erk; this one matches her queen image better (toned down highlights) like? 05:25, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights if there is any, otherwise blur the shadin. C; <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 05:24, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

It just may be my computer, but I can barely see the earpink 00:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
 * twitch* okay. Reuploaded 22:10, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A) - For Approval
Will be blurring in a moment. 05:28, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shoulder shading <33 05:29 Thu Mar 8

There's waste above the front back paw. Could you also smudge the ear pink a tad? 05:30, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:32, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste by the top of his tail, and around his hind leg. 11:18, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  12:10, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge dat earpink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:10, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Continue badmouthing it. 23:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the tail and shoulder. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene  00:35, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
W00t Ivypool. Comments? 06:27 Thu Mar 8

Lighten the shading on the back ear. 8D 06:28, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D 06:35 Thu Mar 8

Blur the back shading/highlight/thing. Bleh, I liked Ivypool when she wasn't spying. >.> <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 06:57, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda mottled. Can you lessen the furry effect just a tad so shhhe looks solid? Define the earpink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:07, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems a tad dark. Otherwise, this is wonderful :) 19:16, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the eye colour a tad. This is stunning, like all your chararts Monuty. :-) ,20:47,March 8,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D Thanks so much <33 21:48 Thu Mar 8

Specklepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
First time doing this, hope I didn't mess up :3 00:25, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Raven, next time, sign with four "~"'s. This isn't bad, honestly. Darken and define the shading. 8D 18:59, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

And make him a male. 20:41, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Looks nice, make the ear pink less neon, maybe take it from apprentice? ,20:45,March 8,2012 (UTC)

His colour is off. Make him browner. 21:22, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his shoulder to our left and above his tail. 21:26, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I've noticed you've reuploaded quite a few times, comment that you reuploaded next time. 22:51, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a lot, blur the ear pink, and darken the shading. 23:07, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more and lower their opacity, get rid of the waste outside of the charart, and make the ear pink smaller and a bit more red. Also, when you edit the image, it's best to type Reuploaded after the last comment. And please sign with four '~ or hit the signature button. 23:27, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Thanks everyone for helping meh! :3 And I signed but I was also told I should stop signing.. Should I or shouldn't I?

Whitethroat (Ki) ~ For Approval
So yeah, though I'd post it. Urgh. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 23:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest a bit more. 00:34, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded~ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 00:37, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Adorable! :3 Maybe add some more shading? Then again my computers colors and lightings strange. 00:41, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading is okay...but we'll see what the others be thinking too. : 3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene  00:43, March 9, 2012 (UTC)