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Voleclaw (star) - Declined
On a scale from bad to bad, how bad is it? 22:32, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define tail shading--  23:14, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking around the image, and throughout it in general. Try looking at the category for approved StarClan images for an idea as to how the shading should look next to the lineart.

Could you expand the earpink? Songfire (talk) 04:16, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink and make the shading colour look more similar. Are you using a darker gray as a shading tint? I'm not trying to clamp onto your creativity, but black or dark blue works better as a shading colour. Also, I don't know if I should be commenting like I am on the highlights because I don't know much about the highlights but it looks odd. And also everything above. --

Theres nothing wrong with the shading color tbh. But could you blend the highlights and shading a lil more, please?  18:46 Wed Oct 5 

I just noticed a bit of waste by the eye. --

Expand the earpink so it touches the lineart, and the shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart in a lot of places, try and get it back against the lineart? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:25, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't have access my computer with the charart for a while >.< 21:10, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading, and maybe get rid of the patch of gray on her rear end. 20:17, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

There's some gray on its right eye (our left) - Jose1106 (talk) 23:15, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the lateness >.< 00:03, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart. 23:44, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be expanded so it touches the lineart inside the ear. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:34, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Actually, no, the earpink doesn't need to touch the lineart. That's just a style preference that many of us like to use, sorta like smudged shading, texture, ect. The same could be said for the earpink on the leader and apprentice blanks.

Reuploaded Redid the shading, is that what you mean by leaking (sorry, I'm clueless >.<)  00:23, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Shading that is leaking away from the lineart means that the darkest shading (aka where there is no light) is not touching the edge of the lineart. It's still leaking as before on the body and paws

Reuploaded Done, and oh my gosh I am an idiot. The color was much darker than it was on the page, so I changed it >.< 00:52, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body and tail. Also there is some leaking shading by the front paw closest to us, and some gray pixels on the right eye. 09:05, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

perhaps define the shading on the <-- side of the tail

Still working?

Declined due to lack of work.

Meadowslip (Star) ~ For Approval
22:57, October 10, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the shading isn't spread out over the main body enough, could you spread that out some more. define tail shading —  Minkclaw   14:22, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload  19:13, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Shading is leaking behind the elbow^^

Reupload 22:32, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth on the head/neck/chest area? 15:11, 10/14/2016

Reupload 23:50, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading on the legs and chest? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:18, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading more up on the chest, and define the face shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:40, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 19:38, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the left leg? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:34, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 02:07, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define/add the shading on the chest.

Reupload 03:02, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 03:09, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the left foreleg/shoulder just a tad. Looks very nice. 20:29, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 23:32, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Pricklekit (star) - Declined
Why such a cruel name?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:34, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws and tail.

Reupload Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  22:26, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

What's wrong with the name Pricklekit? :P Anyway, darken the shading a little, and I think it should reach up higher on the right edge of the front leg/shoulder? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:42, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I don't see it as a cute name. I think it stems from the medicine cat called Prickleface, who was said to have a fitting name.O.o Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  07:58, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

I think there would be at least a little bit of shading in <-- ear, even if the light's on it, since a cat's ear isn't a flat object.

doesn't he have a tabby pattern on the brown? I can't see any on the brown.

Still working?

Declined due to lack of work.

Frogleap (Star) ~ For Approval
why do I try. I colorpicked from the warrior. 14:26 Sun Oct 16

Can you darken the shading overall? - Jose1106 (talk) 16:22, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

re-ups 19:30 Sun Oct 16

can you add more eye depth?

re-ups 22:21 Thu Oct 20

Comments, anyone? 23:30 Mon Oct 24

Lighten the shading a few ticks.

re-ups <span style="">23:17 Tue Oct 25

define the eye depth

Featherstorm (Star) ~ For Approval
<span style="">16:39 Sun Oct 16

Perhaps smooth the pale part just a tiny bit on the face, and define the earpink in the --> ear

I think she looks a little bit crosseyed. 15:14, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry it took so long. <span style="">23:24 Wed Oct 19

Comments? <span style="">00:01 Sun Oct 23

For lack of better words, on the other images the stripes seem to be softer on the edges, but are defined in where they end? There seems to be some smudge marks between the stripes on this but idek. Also from the way the others look, the pale should be fully up the legs, meeting with the belly. The base on this also seems very slightly darker than the others, but that might just be me.

I'm confused on what you mean for the stripes... are you saying I should smudge it more? Also, the pale is only on the back of the legs (see the queen, for example), and because of the way the paw is tilted and how it looks on the queen image, I thought that the pale would probably be seen on the edges. <span style="">23:01 Sun Oct 23

I meant perhaps get rid of some of the larger smudge marks between the stripes. And for the pale, I was told the same for the white on Birdsong's Star image, because of the pale that is on the underside of the legs on the elder image (on which you can see it go up to elbow).

Re-uploaded Idk if this is what you mean but hopefully it's better. <span style="">03:12 Mon Oct 24

Oatkit (Star) ~ For Approval
This is my first time using a different color besides black for the shading and using a different shading technique. Comments? - Jose1106 (talk) 19:50, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and the eye depth? Cute! 20:16, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! - Jose1106 (talk) 21:21, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a little bit more. 20:53, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 21:47, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and sharpen the shading 07:25, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

the shading should be darkened too. try using a very dark red

What does define ear-pink mean? - Jose1106 (talk) 12:57, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

It means that you need to pick a different color from what you already have to make the earpink more visible. 09:10, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded completely changed the shading. - Jose1106 (talk) 19:32, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Um, as for me earpink is a bit too neon, so could you try just a darker, grayish version of the color you used? Also, add some shading depth to her shoulder. 12:29, October 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 14:16, October 22, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the dapples a bit? I can't really see them at all. 19:50, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Her description says she has vert faint dapples. - Jose1106 (talk) 20:38, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

I know it does. I can't see them at all. 21:01, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Could you perhaps smooth the shading on the flank?

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 21:10, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

The page says light golden so could you lighten this a few shades? Its pertyiful —  Minkclaw   20:05, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

This [] is gold, so I think that's light enough? - Jose1106 (talk) 21:33, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

I think it should be lightened, as she's supposed to be light golden, and she looks more gold atm. Perhaps define the dapples too, since I can't see them on my computer well

Reuploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 22:55, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

Flykit(Star) ~ For Approval
Comments? Trying a new tint

Nice! Maybe smooth out the shading on his flank? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:38, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Where's your light coming from? Because if youre using the source I think youre using, the chest and the top of the paws shouldn't be in shadow.  <span style="">06:37 Tue Oct 18 

The shading should be blurred a lot more, imo. <span style="">22:03 Tue Oct 18

Reuploaded Think I fixed what you were talking about. I took my source from a different image, but that one might be wrong so I swapped the facial shading to make it match a different placement.

Comments?

Smooth out the shading.

Reuploaded

Wetfoot (Star) ~ Withdrawn
Kudos to Beebs for this pattern, though. I tried. <span style="">14:20, 10/20/2016

maybe smudge the spots just a little bit more. 19:54, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the body a lil'

Withdrawing. Can't do this right now. I have to figure out my car problems first. <span style="">17:22, 10/25/2016

Hickorynose (Star) - For Approval
Not entirely sure how I feel about the shading, what are your guys's critiques? 02:50, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the legs, especially <= one? <span style="">15:38, 10/21/2016

the shading by his tail on the body seems a bit hard edged right by the lineart. 19:52, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Petaldust (Star) - For Approval
I am still so not adjusted to my schedule, but I couldn't resist making an image just to break up my time...I will only be on still to reupload and not checking more than once a day so email is still the best way to reach me. <span style="">00:40 Mon Oct 24

The shading looks a little hard-edged on the left shoulder and the tail. Can you smooth it out just a little bit? 20:31, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Ivy (KP) ~ For Approval
cat I modelled this after turns 13 this year 16:34, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading this is amazing trolly —  Minkclaw   20:04, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:34, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

Could you make the patches a little more ginger? They seem a little too brown to me. <span style="">22:11, 10/25/2016

Why? It's based of an actual real-life tortie, and since the shade of ginger isn't specified, I think it's fine as it is.

I can hardly even see the shading.

reuploaded I made the patches slightly more ginger, but they do look pretty brownish on my cat irl so I don't really want to ginger it up any more than this. 01:35, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

Carpkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 16:57, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

he looks ginger rather than brown to me. 17:00, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:16, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

The colors don't seem to match with the other image. - Jose1106 (talk) 18:58, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

That version was never approved, so I'm not required to match it. 19:05, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah I realized that shortly before I saw this, so my mistake. :P - Jose1106 (talk) 21:35, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

Define the pattern; it blends in with the shading and base and this doesn't look much different than a solid to me.

Reuploaded. 02:26, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

Mistlekit (Star) ~ For Approval
Poor little child 19:49, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

Thsi looks really good but, I thought her ears were supposed to be small, forgive me if I am wrong. 22:42, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

Dragonflykit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I actually really like how this turned out :)

Can you lighten the patches some? I thought it was black until I saw his page. 02:24, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is probably as light as I'll go

Sunny (KP) - For Approval
Do not comment on the eyes; I'm extremely tired and it's been a long day and I just threw those on there. I also know the collar color is missing, so don't tell me to do something about it, as I am already aware.

could you define shading a tad, this is amazing; I actually really like her eyes —  Minkclaw   14:49, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Couple tweaks here and there.

Could you define the head shading a lil more, please?  <span style="">19:14 Wed Oct 26 

Re-uploaded.

Ivy (Lo) ~ For Approval
 <span style="">09:10 Wed Oct 26 

there should be less ginger on the black on the body, and some of the patches smaller. 19:46, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

lighten the shading some? —  Minkclaw   19:48, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

Swankit (Star) - For Evaluation
I apologize if I did this wrong. Don't worry, I read the guidelines. If you need me to re-read them, please tell me. --Xaviapaw (talk) 22:38, October 26, 2016 (UTC)