Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 31

Harespring (W) ~ Tweaked
Technically, it was "redone" so to say, but I didn't actually change anything. I used the original image, actually, and just added another few layers and played around with it. Anyways, OA is Echomist with a transparency fix by Bramble, and tweaks by Nightshine and Bloo. 02:50, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. Lovely Cloudy ^^ 02:52, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <3 02:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 04:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Q) ~ Tweaked
Angry pregnant Yellowfang judges you. Anyway, made the muzzle match the fabulous apprentice image. Comments? 04:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is a bit of extra lineart sticking out on the left side (our left) of her chin. This is pretty epic Shellyward XP 04:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:29, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail? I don't want to get judged 3: Especially by an angry pregnant Yellowfang... 23:59, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang! Darken the shading on the farthest(?) leg and the bottom of the chest. 16:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is a tweak, not a redo. I only did this for the muzzle, guys. 16:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

They're not telling you to redo this... 18:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

And this will only be tweaked later for the shading if you don't tweak i now. why not tweak it while it's up? Yes, you may have just done it for the muzzle, but that doesn't mean other things couldn't be changed. And thin out the line for the muzzle a bit. It's a lot thinner on her other images and look kinda out of place here being so thick. 20:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the line coming from the nose on the right a bit smaller? 00:50 Tue Feb 7

Which one? 00:51, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Since she said Right, I'm assuming she meant our right, not Yellowfangs. 09:01, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but did she mean the mouth, or the crease in her face? 14:08, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

She meant the mouth. 02:24, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

The crease in the face, sorry :P 02:30 Fri Feb 10

The crease is only one pixel thick... I really can't thin it further. 02:32, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

** Shorter, not smaller. 02:33 Fri Feb 10

Re-uploaded. 02:36, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 04:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudtail (KP) - Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow, and he needed his collar removed. No reference ftw. 21:35, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and foreleg C:  Elork   23:05, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the eyes 8D 23:07, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and define the tail shading too. 23:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I made it worse ._. 02:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

It looks fine, Oblivion. Just blur the shading on the haunch and shoulder a wittle more. :3 15:40, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:42, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Towards the bottom of the ear it is lighter than the rest. Blur that part or fix it. 08:41, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

Blur the tail shading and lighten it more. 18:57 Sun Feb 5

Re-uploaded. Also, DJ, what are you talking about? Both ears are the same colour all the way through. 23:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I ment earpink. >.< 06:40, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

I thought that too, but then I realized the earpink is also the same colour. I don't know what image you're looking at, but it's fine to me. 20:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please blur all the shading some more? 21:14, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Towards the bottom of the earpink on the cat's right ear, in the bottom left corner (our left) and around it, the earpink is more lighter than the rest of it. Here is the example of where it is. The blue circle is the lighter earpink. I sure I'm looking at the right image, and I can definatly see it's a different color. You might not tell because of the blue line. :/ Meh 10:13, Tue, Feb, 7, 2012

That's just the blurring DJ. Could you dull the earpink a bit and brighten the nose? 09:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 12:25, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, I'm a fail. DX Anyways slightly blur the shading? 06:35, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Re-uploaded. 03:31, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 04:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lilyfur (Q) - Tweaked
This is bad! Original artist (am I the only one who still says "Original artist"?) was Echomist, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 20:09, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded without anyone telling me to I redid the shading again. 20:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Bkur the shading a bit more. 20:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple. 20:33, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded 18:21, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. :3  21:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also darkened it. 00:11, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's a thin line of waste on the bottom of the image. 02:29, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nvm, the changes weren't showing. Sorry 'bout that. 02:29, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 04:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tinycloud (Ki) ~ Redone
Well, permission to redo the shading, after Cloudy found out about it, from Cloudy on chat. The lineart also looked blurred. OA = Sandstar with a tweak/redo by Bloo. Comments for imrpovement? 20:09, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad. This is wonderful, Rain. 20:11, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ew on ear-pink, i'll fix it if it is commented on. And thanks Cloudy ^.^ 20:31, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and nose colour. 21:13, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:16, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that chest highlink/shading a bit please. 06:41, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Re-uploaded. 19:33, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 04:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (W) ~ Redone
Okay. There were so many issues with the other image, that it begged to be redone (again). I think the OA is Bluestar, but, I ended up re-doing it. xD 03:39, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and define the eye depth. Lovely as always, Cloudy! 8D 03:40, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'll fix the ear pink, but not the eye. It came directly from his other images, and I don't want to change that. 03:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/midriff highlight some. <3 05:25, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Re-uploaded. No highlights on this one. 05:30, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It seems like the light source for the head and the rest of the body are different from each other. The head one's coming from the right and the other is coming from the left. could you fix that? 09:07, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did teh shading. Still looks bad. xD 00:28, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nah. Increase the shading on the shoulders/neck and blur the shading on the chest and maybe lessen the shading on the top of the muzzle. 00:12, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:22, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

You have that small ridge of light shading close to the lineart on the back. Could you darken that? Breeze whisker  00:49, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:53, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 04:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Stonetooth (E) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar and was redone by me. And now I'm redoing it again XP I got permission to redo and I absolutly hated his old one. It was a triangle tabby too. Comments? 23:42, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

lololol. Darken the shading just a little bit, and especially under his chin and on his front leg 23:44, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  23:51, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

You have waste under the chin! And under the paws, Hahahah! 8D 23:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded hgfdheoir *mountainranges* D8< 23:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

That space of just grey under the ear is bothering me. Could you put a small stripe or something there? Breeze whisker  00:44, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  01:26, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 04:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)