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Honeypaw (VS) (A) - CBA
I screwed up on the splotches and eyes, I'll fix them when I can. Also, morale: don't close down your computer without closing your tabs, as you could lose important work...like this post. --

Neon, you're supposed to wait until the image you had first is archived before putting another one up. 11:53, 9/08/2016

It's fine, everyone is allowed one time. That being said, this should be "for approval", since you already posted at least one image before.

Smudge the earpink, smudge the shading and lighten it?  ~ Silver Cloud ~   14:51, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, in that case, could you smooth out the yellow splotches some? 15:07, 9/08/2016 15:07, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the stripes just a little bit? They are very hard to see. They aren't incredibly dark on the kit, but they are more visible than they are here if that makes any sense. 15:14 Thu Sep 8

needs a white pixel in each eye. 18:37, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups I tried putting the lines on another layer so I could attack the splotches with my blurring tool viciously make more blurs without ruining the stripes. --

Can you blur the shading more? 06:42 Fri Sep 2016

Just curious as to know why there's tabby fur in her ear? 22:28, 9/09/2016

Because... | does? Reupload --

Smooth out the shading you have, and add some to the front leg closest to us and the tail. 18:11, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add/define tail shading. --  22:58, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

The ear pink seems really neon so maybe darken it a little? — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 01:58, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload Me: "I'll try to watch some of ZSlyzer's Spirit of Justice Playthrough!" >27 20-30 minute episodes in 4 days Me: "crap I have loads of time-wasting to do" And that, my friends, was the story of why I wasn't working. --

The shading still needs to be smoothed out quite a bit more, imo, as well as the yellow splotches. They all seem too defined still. 16:33, 9/11/2016

Re-upload When I accidentally turned up the shading to 100.0 I panicked and turned it down and I found 50.0 looks really good compared to 35.0. So yeah that's the shading right now BACK TO BINGE WATCHING SOJ -- and if someone knows how to code the timestamps that'd be great because I have no idea of how to code size and font

For lack of better words, the shading seems really dense/thick, so could you maybe make it blend more in a gradient with the image?

Re-uploaded Finished watching Spirit of Justice's case 2, decided to take a grace period so I work on other things also I feel very sorry for my lovable spineless cinnamon roll, apollo at the end of the case --

(apollo needs a break lmao) anyway can you define the tail shading? 14:00, September 14, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload Yes poor Apollo. I love the music that plays during that scene though I need to find it --

Could you blend the shading some more?  08:29 Fri Sep 16 

Re-ups Nothing much to say except I'm really sleepy. Neon's discipline period of no watching SoJ ends tomorrow, so at least I can watch Rite to Turnabout (or whatever they called it my memory is very bad today cause sleep deprived I had to finish an essay about london 2012 only slept at 11:30 PM ((11:30 is a very big strain on Neon's poor body clock BTW))) when I wake up. report report the song was called troupe gramarye 2016 guys now I can listen to it to my heart's content --

Could you smooth out the shading a little on her main body and haunch? Nice image, by the way. 20:51, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe make the stripes a bit sharper to match the kit.

Re-upload Thanks, Ivy. Really proud on the tail. *kisses tail* fear the perfection of the bee kitten's tail. This time on "it really sucks to be a japanfornian lawyer/work for a japanfornian lawyer", I'm rethinking if Benjamin Franklin REALLY meant there were only two certain things in life. This third thing...is Maya getting accused of murder. --

Could you make the line of shading on the rump follow the lineart a bit more, if that makes sense? It seems to be leaking away from the lineart and more onto the rump. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:06, September 18, 2016 (UTC)

The line of shading on the rump could also be blurred or smudged a little. Can you define the shading on the two forelegs as well? 23:45, September 18, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload got a bit lazy and also went on a school trip to this place called the Australiana Pioneer Village. It's a really authentic place, also it's really old. (My mother says she went there as a ten-year-old. That was 1976.) I have to go somewhere at 5:00 so I went on this super super fast. Zoom zoom. --

Define the light on the back legs? 13:45, 9/20/2016

The line of shading is still leaking away from the lineart of the rump a lot. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:36, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

Pretty minor, but the kit image doesn't have any tabby markings over it's nose, while this one does. 23:52 Thu Sep 22

Re-upload --

Perhaps smooth the shading line above the haunch a tad. Nice job!

Re-ups Thanks, Spook! GIMP tells me I spent a minute on smoothing out the haunch. Woah, I'm fast. --

The shading is still leaking away from the lineart. With your light source, there should not like light on top of the rump. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:45, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

I...honestly don't know whatever the hell you mean in the second sentence. *sweat sweat sweat* --

She means remove the light that's on top of the hind end by the base of the tail. There shouldn't be any there. 14:14, 9/27/2016

Blur the shading a bit, especially on the haunch. 15:08, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload --

Could you make the shading more of a gradient? It seems saturated and I think some depth would help :)

Re-upload I tried resuming my shiny hunt for a Buneary that I gave up in June via Masuda method. After 2 days of bad luck, I've hatched two boxes, adding to my 430 count where I left it and...a broken circle pad. Wonderful, all I wanted was a pink bunny wabbit. --

...can someone please comment on this? --

Make sure to wait three days before asking for comments - you still had about a full day to go. Anyway, add some depth to the shading. It looks a bit saturated and flat tbh

Oh. Knew that really long wedding party would mess up my understanding of time... But how am I supposed to "add depth" to the shading? All I can think of is smudging and blurring it, but it seems like that's the wrong way to go. And also it doesn't look too saturated to me. despite the fact leads will probably get angry if I do say "it's fine" from what I've read ATM I can hardly see it. Either I've really overestimated my sight or PCA has amazing eyes. --

There's a few different ways. In define depth, I mean make it more of a gradient, so the shading doesn't look like it's all the same. It should fade out a bit more, and be darker in areas that don't have as much light hitting. For how to do it, you could just add another layer with shading in the same areas you have it now, just don't have it reach out as far. and b/c right now it looks the same/kinda flat so yeah, sometimes just smudging and blurring doesn't work. Hope this helps, and if it doesn't, I'd recommend looking at some other images and see how their shading was done

Re-upload I did some maths since DST just came in effect in my timezone. I got 7 hours of sleep, opposed to my usual 8-9...and I went to bed at 11 the day before it kicked in. I stayed up almost till midnight damn my dad being so unpredictable and saying he's taking us to a friend's place to watch NRL's grand final tsk tsk I just tried to finish Robobot in the whole amount of time and get more process in my replay of Dual Destinies yet I still didn't feel tired... yeah, I don't understand time anymore. --

I like this. I'd also hate to see you lose this due to picky people, so I'd love to push this through.... so, comments before approval?

Roach (Ro) - Declined
Must get this one approved ;) --  21:13, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

lighten him up some, he looks more grey right now. 21:16, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth and define shading? 21:17, 9/11/2016

Add more shading on head and have it some forward a bit more, and also define your light source.

Re-uploaded --  22:58, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Waste in a ring around the image. 18:21, 9/12/2016

I can't see it...--  22:08, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

It's definitely there -- around most areas of the image.

If possible, could anyone give me a redline on where the waste is so I can pinpoint it? --  02:01, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, here you go. I made the backdrop white too, so the waste is easier to see. This should be pretty accurate -- used color-select to pick it up. Anyway, can you define the light source again? It seems a tad bit randomly placed in some spots. I can draw that up too for you if need be

Re-uploaded. Is this better? --  21:05, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

Better, but here's the updated red-line with the stuff that's still there. Also, the image looks really gray -- could lighten the base to make him more silver? And I still can't make out the light source.

Re-uploaded.--  01:47, September 14, 2016 (UTC)

Almost,, but not quite. You also might've erased a little too much on the back of the head, since it appears to be leaking away from the lineart.

Re-uploaded --  23:22, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

You're literally so close to getting all of it -- just this left.

Re-uploaded --  00:47, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading just a tad? 05:59 Fri Sep 2016

^Except for the two lines of shading between the shoulder/haunch and the belly, those are about the darkness you should probably aim for on the rest of the shading. Those two lines seem fairly blocky and look somewhat like blurry markings - I think that could be fixed by thinning them out and making them curve a little to the shape of the body, and perhaps making them reach a little less far up. Since I'm bad at explaining, I think this is a little closer to what you should be going for with that.  08:27 Fri Sep 16 

Re-uploaded --  12:35, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? Also, the tail seems to be leaking shading. <span style="">12:47, 9/17/2016

Re-uploaded --  16:11, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

Could you try to contour the shading to be more realistic with the cat's body? Kinda just follow that redline Shinx gave you a bit more...

Erm. I don't understand how to do that....--  15:50, September 18, 2016 (UTC)

Basically, follow the redline Shinx gave you earlier. The shading goes up in two very straight lines thick lines and it doesn't quite look natural as a light source. Cats are not blocky really, so the shading should bend with the curves of a cat's body. For lack of better words, see how this looks like a pin straight line? Probably should curve more. Also, shading's leaking away from the lineart on the back of the head and tail.

Re-uploaded (Re-did shading hooopppee this is better) --  22:57, September 18, 2016 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the belly haunch just a tiny bit? Also, define the light on the legs a little? 23:47, September 18, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the tail shading and there also seems to be a few white pixels at the top of the ear that should be gray. Much better though :)

Could you erase a bit of the shading at the top of the lower back/hip? I don't think it would be all shadow that high up, with your light source. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:57, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded--  22:14, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

There's waste up by the ears, forming a ring around the tail, and by the paws. Ear lineart appears to be blurred, too.

Define your lightsource. I can't seem to see where it may be coming from, as it appears to be coming from both directions? <span style="">13:44, 9/20/2016

Re-uploaded --  00:52, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading. There is also waste above the lower back and behind the back legs. 00:58, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Ear lineart appears to be blurred.

There's waste under the underbelly and in the space below that as well. <span style="">01:30, 9/25/2016

Re-uploaded--  16:04, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws, tail, and head? Also the ear lineart still appears to be blurred.

Re-uploaded --  03:22, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the light on the face, chest, front legs, and hind leg farthest from us. 15:12, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere. 17:00, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

There's white all over the front of the charart? <span style="">18:05, 9/28/2016

The shading on the back leg closest to us contradicts the light source, I think. The other legs, the face, and the chest make the light appear to come from the front, but that leg makes it look like the light comes from the back. 20:27, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

Still working?

Declined as per one week without uploads. Anyone without a project may take over, and you don't need to ask to do so. Just reserve it.

Bluebellkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I hate the shading. I couldn't get it to look right.

Hm..have you looked at the shading placement on the tutorial page? I have it pulled up and the shading for that is actually on the right side of the kitten image having the light source come from the left. Maybe try using that as an example. For an admin, this needs renamed to File:Bluebellkit.kit.png — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 03:17, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

that's only a general guide. there's multiple usable sources, and this source is fine. 06:19, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the neck shading and define the light on the tail

It's a little hard to tell since the image is so small, but I think I spy a bit of waste next to that right front paw. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:23, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded *Face palm* Shading still looks weird.

No, it doesn't. Just smooth it out a little bit near the edges of it and you'll be just fine. Also, be sure to sign with four ~'s, as you haven't been leaving a timestamp with your messages. You have a signature, but I can't tell what time you left said message, and that wouldn't be good for comments, CBAing, reuploading, ect.

reuploaded I think it looks better. 02:36, September 20, 2016

Shading looks nice, but some is leaking outside of the lineart(above the tail and some on the head). Songfire (talk) 15:14, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded I think this looks good.

Define the light on the legs? <span style="">15:25, 9/21/2016

The file is named incorrectly -- should be named File:Bluebellkit.kit.png with two 'l' 's in Bluebell.

blur(?) the body shading some more. 22:03, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 49:32, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more. 03:33, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:27, September 22, 2016

There's some waste around the image mostly on <== that side. <span style="">21:40, 9/24/2016

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 00:34, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded Thats about as much as I can smudge it. 33:36, September 27 2016 (UTC)

Lighten it and define the light on the paws. 17:02, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded21:01:13 30 September 2016 UTC

Smooth out the shading a bit more and define the light on the tail. 14:44, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste surrounding the <- paw. Songfire (talk) 21:49, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) - For Approval
god bless — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:37, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, and have the light be more rounded on the belly, the shape looks a bit off, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:25, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, I probably don't know about critizing my own work, but is the little "mask" alright? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 01:44, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

The mask seems a little sharp up at the top, so maybe smooth it just up there in the left side :)

Re-Upps, had to do two uploads forgot to remove the waste the first time — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:08, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the stomach shading; it cuts off abruptly.

Re-Upps, I redid the stomach shading so hopefully it looks better. — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:08, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light source; half the shading suggests the light's coming from the front and the other half suggests that it's coming from the back/somewhere behind the haunch 07:11, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

I'm not seeing how it suggests that, the way I did it, it's coming from the front. Could I get some more comments on that possibly? I followed the shading placement, some suggestions from there trying new shading and all. — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:46, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

I personally don't think it looks out of place at all. I also don't see how you think the light source is coming from behind the haunch, Scarlet? <span style="">18:45, 9/23/2016

I used this light source on all of my deputies, which were approved. That's what I based the shading placement example for this blank on. The only reason this looks different is that I smudge my shading to look textured. Although, the shading could be defined on the legs and face some so that it is more obvious that the light is coming from the front. Very nice (: <span style="">23:04 Fri Sep 23

The tail shading looks slightly blotchy, and also the shading seems to cut off a bit oddly here in a line

Re-Upps, thanks! — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:28, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading on the underbelly right by the front leg's elbow, or whatever you call it xD <span style="">14:38, 9/27/2016

Re-Upps — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:02, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 17:03, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

The stomach shading is leaking away from the lineart, and the shading on all four legs could be defined. I'd also suggest defining the facial shading as well.

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw 16:14, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the underbelly shading and add a bit more behind the leg where the underbelly meets the chest. <span style="">16:18, 9/28/2016

There's also waste around the under carriage of the image. <span style="">16:20, 9/28/2016

Could you smooth the shading on the outstretched paw?

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   19:26, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

There's still waste. Smooth out the underbelly shading more, and add more behind the elbow. <span style="">19:32, 9/28/2016

Re-Upps, I've smoothed the stomach as much as I can —  Minkclaw   19:46, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the farthest from us back leg by the joint, and I still think it could use a little more shading behind that elbow by the underbelly area. And possibly define the shading on the legs a little more? <span style="">23:03, 9/28/2016

Can you define the shading on the tail? 14:44, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, the front leg closest to us can't be darkened anymore as I have it at 100% now. —  Minkclaw   16:06, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, you can. Use another layer with more shading and do it that way. Also smooth out the stomach shading a lot; that area is still really blocky.

Blizzardwing (DF) - For Approval
I am super proud of this. If Lynxkit, Elderkit, Swampkit, and Tulipkit get pages and chararts, then what Su revealed about the cats from Tallstar's Revenge and Crookedstar's Promise are just as valid.

You forgot his toesies :p <span style="">20:28, 9/20/2016

Yep, I already reuploaded with that after you pointed it out.

I get that the shading can't go very dark with this pattern, but could you define the belly shading just a little?  <span style="">01:06 Sat Sep 24 

Re-uploaded. You got it, boss.

don't know if it's my screen but his mottles seems to have a slight yellowish tint to them on the warrior, and the mottles themselves seem a bit bigger ad more...clumped together for lack of a better term. 15:27, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried a thing.

Could you smooth out the shading a little bit more on the flank area? Like where the shoulders are for both legs? <span style="">13:11, 9/27/2016

I think it's good, so I'd like to wait for a second opinion? I can barely see the shading in some spots, that area included, so I'm not too keen on smoothing it out.

Sorry I gotta agree with Winter here, can you define it? However this is really good. 14:43, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tweaked a few things here and there.

Sorrelpaw (WC) (Star) - CBA
I like you. Also I'll get rid of that waste by your eye later. 12:28, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

Beautiful ^^ Could you smooth out the shading some more? <span style="">14:02, 9/23/2016

There's some waste to the left of <- eye. <span style="">14:30 Fri Sep 23

She already pointed out the waste, Maple. Also possibly smudge the grey a tad? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:51, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 12:58, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more. 17:50, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

do you think you could lighten the shading on the body by the tail and on her closest leg (to us) just a little? 15:42, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 09:30, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the close (<) paw?  <span style="">16:33 Wed Sep 28 

Reups 18:45, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Bluebellkit (Star) - CBA
This is my first charart in a long long time, I've never gotten to do a StarClan kit so I came back to try out my shading skills on a smol bean <3  06:23, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a tiny bit?  <span style="">08:58 Sat Sep 24 

Define the eye depth just a tad more as well? <span style="">14:26, 9/24/2016

expand the shading. 17:49, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

Could you match this image to the kit version? I don't know if it's me but this seems a bit whiter. --Waterclaw135 (talk) 21:37, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

It does match. =/ It's just the shading, which darkness and tint is not required to match from image to image, unless it drastically throws off the coloring.

As per Skye. Technically, you're supposed to use pure white. <span style="">21:42, 9/24/2016

some people use an off white, so you don't actually have to. anyway the earpink looks just a litle too bright, maybe dull it down just a tad? 03:43, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading I can't see it. :/ — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 04:08, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used a verrrrrry slight off white and then used pure white for her highlights to create more of the illusion of depth. How's this? 05:06, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

I think there would be shading on the back behind her head if your light source is where I think it is. <span style="">12:40, 9/25/2016

Can you define the shading?

Define it as in how? In sharpness or in shade/color? And which side of the neck, <--- this side or ---> this side? 18:16, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

On the back, so ==> side. And I think Spooky means just in general, because I can't make it out very well. <span style="">18:01, 9/28/2016

Smol been. QT. Anyways smooth out the shading on the belly. --

reuploaded  04:32, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

So so sorry, but could you define it a bit more? I really can't see it on my laptop or on mobile

I feel as though if I darken it any more, she'll start to look gray, however I could be wrong so if anyone else agrees let me know and I'll do it  03:55, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

It's fine, and not all shading needs to be super defined or dark. CBA?

Swiftpaw (TPB) (Alt Kit) - CBA
first inage on this site ) 10:23, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

There's a bit of darker...for lack of a better word: mass...like on the bottom half of his head by his jawline? Idk if that's shading, but it looks a bit out of place. Mind smoothing it out more, or getting rid of it if it's not supposed to be there? <span style="">23:30, 9/26/2016

The white looks gray on the ---> part of the body. 16:29, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded The white looks gray because of shading 18:57, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

The weird shading line thing on the chin is still there. <span style="">02:45, 9/28/2016

Snow, could you do a redline or something like this for me? Because I don't see it 12:28, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

Sure. Here's the link. The aqua color is where I also found some waste. The red is where the strange darker lines are that I think can be smoothed out more. <span style="">13:40, 9/30/2016

Reuploaded Thanks! 18:57, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

Smol kit. CBA?

Lilystem (Star) - For Evaluation
--Falcon 49 (talk) 15:31, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

You need to add a lot more stripes to your image in order to match the previous images seen here and here. <span style="">16:08, 9/25/2016

Don't forget to say "re-uploaded" in bold text every time you reupload your image! Also, there's some waste around the image, and a few pixels around the image look out of place, as if they weren't colored in? And there's quite a bit of missing/blurred lineart on the legs and tail. <span style="">16:12, 9/25/2016  Re-uploaded.

Reuploaded again

Please sign your name after leaving a message/saying re-uploaded. Also, the earpink is covered a lot in the --> ear.

Don't forget to sign your name either xD The earpink is covered because that's ear fur. Also, define the shading in <== ear. <span style="">16:39, 9/25/2016

Whoops, and there's also waste next to that ear as well. <span style="">16:39, 9/25/2016

Re-uploaded better now? ;) --Falcon 49 (talk) 16:58, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

There are two uncoloured spots on the right ear (Our right, the cat's left). If you want, I can point them out. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 17:20, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed --Falcon 49 (talk) 18:07, September 25, 2016 (UTC) Re-uploaded. I realized the tail was a bit too dark. --Falcon 49 (talk) 18:15, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste below and above the tail, and also by the right ear

Re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 19:29, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading?  <span style="">21:44 Sun Sep 25 

Re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 13:13, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

There's some odd colored pixels in <== ear? Idk if it's just me. <span style="">23:34, 9/26/2016

Maybe you could smudge a little the stripes on the tail --Waterclaw135 (talk) 23:51, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the eye depth? <span style="">00:07 Tue Sep 27 re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 17:32, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Thin out the shading on the tail and expand the shading on his chest. 17:33, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 12:49, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

any comments?

I think there is some waste around the right side of the tail. And also around the left paw. --Waterclaw135 (talk) 23:25, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Lakeshine (Star) - For Approval
Meh. Not sure I like the shading but this is the only way I could get it to look decent without the white being too dark. I also forgot to hit submit on my reservation earlier and it was still open, so that is why it is posted so quickly. <span style="">01:58 Wed Sep 28

Hnnng, this is beautiful ;-; Could you define the depth a tad more on the white? Just at the very edges. <span style="">02:44, 9/28/2016

Could you define the shading? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 03:35, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do with it. I am restricted to mobile for now because of midterms and I have extended periods where my browser is disabled for anything other than online exam periods for one of my courses once I open my page for the prompts so I cannot run into issues regarding internet plagiarism and the other ones all require a massive amount of studying as they are my majors courses. <span style="">02:21 Fri Sep 30

Reuploaded Have I ever mentioned that I hate midterms? Not really able to change the shading much more than this. Otherwise I will be told to brighten the white. <span style="">01:48 Tue Oct 4

Brightheart (Alt. K) - For Approval
07:11, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

define the shading on the body and possibly the light on the tail — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:04, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:52, September 29, 2016 (UTC)

This is really cute :D But could you define the shading on the legs and tail?  <span style="">20:13 Thu Sep 29 

Re-uploaded 02:52, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

Possibky darken the lighter patches some more? They look a little too white. <span style="">20:55, 10/01/2016

Re-uploaded 21:13, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Tree (Ki) - CBA
I believe that I can retake this, since it was withdrawn rather than declined due to one month limit, but if I'm wrong feel free to decline this. 23:24, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more on the chest? <span style="">20:53, 10/01/2016

Reuploaded. 21:52, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

You would only not be allowed to take this image had it gotten declined due to the one-month rule. Otherwise, you are very much allowed to take this, and in fact, I'd like to CBA this.

Scorchwind (Star) ~ CBA
I like the eyes. That's the only thing I like about it, but I like the eyes.  <span style="">10:30 Thu Sep 29 

Smooth the shading. Especially on the chest thing, it looks a little hard to me. --

Reups It's not meant to be super smooth, but I did soften it a lil  <span style="">23:11 Sat Oct 1 

CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:43, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Star) ~ For Approval
Hollyspots (talk) 19:51, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is TOO dark. Lighten it.  ~ Silver Cloud ~  20:09, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

What Silver said. Also smudge the earpink a bit. --

Reuploaded Hollyspots (talk) 00:52, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten it just a bit more. Also, is the nose colored?  ~ Silver Cloud ~  20:48, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

Black cats have black/dark gray noses, so it's fine the color it is. Define your lightsource, as this image looks completely black to me. <span style="">20:52, 10/01/2016

What do you mean by define the light source? Should I define the shading? Because I just lightened it. I color-picked the base from the lightest spot on his kit image, so I really don't know what to do. I also used a shading source I've seen on a lot of other images Hollyspots (talk) 20:54, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

You know how in art class when you work on 3D images? You have to make them look real, per se? It's like that, when you define your lightsource, make sure we can see where the light is coming from. Choose one spot where the light could be coming from and try to match the shading where the light wouldn't shine. If you need any more help, I'd be glad to give you a redline for a few different lightsources you could use! <span style="">22:50, 10/01/2016

Imo I think it looks fine. The base on his other images is pretty dark for a black base (But I mean, it's black, so...) which would make the image look blacker than some others. The light source they used is one that's on many other images, and I can see it fine.

I guess I'll keep it as is until I get another opinion, since the ones above (kinda?) cancel out? I used a light source I've seen on a lot of other images, so...

Beenose (Ro) ~ For Approval
I'll darken the nose in the next upload. <span style="">22:50 Sat Oct 1

Define the light and shading on the legs? Try and do kind of a half and half thing for those. Also, I feel as if the stomach and rump shading is a tad too dark compared to the other areas. Mind toning it down or darkening the rest to match those areas? <span style="">22:53, 10/01/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">23:06 Sat Oct 1

Define the texture a bit. 23:36, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

Could you smudge the black on the ear a little bit, please?  <span style="">23:39 Sat Oct 1 

Re-uploaded <span style="">18:33 Sun Oct 2

Storkkit (Star) - For Approval
Sorry this took me a bit to get done. I'm pretty pleased with it, though. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:33, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front half of the cat? <span style="">18:47, 10/03/2016

Reuploaded. Also made the earpink brighter and pinker, you couldn't really make it out before. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:38, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Finchflight (Star) ~ For Approval
Pretty kitty! <span style="">18:39, 10/03/2016

Smokepaw (VS)(App) ~ For Approval


This needs to be short-furred. 20:04, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reyploaded Oops.

Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Evaluation
Hi, sorry if you guys think this is bad... this is my first time making a charart for a character. My shading isn't so great, but I do like the eyes on Poolcloud. Please comment if you like or think I need improvement.

<font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:16, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

Try not to align your images^^ And also this

should technically be '~For Evaluation' since you are a kit in the Project, but eh. Perhaps try to match the placement of the white and gray better on the --> side of the cat and on the tail

Oh oops. <font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:43, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

How do I become an apprentice

<font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:44, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

Switched the heading for you (although it'll probably be switched back shortly knowing my bad timing). And to become an apprentice, basically, a lead just has to promote you when they feel your image is (according to guidelines) "50%" complete, and it seems that you know what you're doing. Doesn't take long, in most cases.^^

I made some changes- the new one is below.

You need to keep uploading under File:Poolcloud.star.png, not make a new file every time. It's a lot for us to clean up of people don't reupload under the same file. It also needs to be at the top of your section, not at the bottom.

There's waste in the space between the body and the tail. 02:12, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Hareflight (TR) (Star) ~ For Approval
My second charart! Comments, concerns? Jose1106 (talk) 21:03, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job, but the image needs to be named File:Hareflight (TR).star.png with the (TR) part

Fixed. Jose1106 (talk) 21:16, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Renamed. It needs to be File:Hareflight (TR).star.png, not what you have. Spacing is important for our templates to work.

Voleclaw (star) ~ For Approval
On a scale from bad to bad, how bad is it? 22:32, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define tail shading--  23:14, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking around the image, and throughout it in general. Try looking at the category for approved StarClan images for an idea as to how the shading should look next to the lineart.

Rowanberry (Star) ~ For Approval
<span style="">22:43 Mon Oct 2016

Sharpen the cream. The warrior is the first in this set, and that isn't smudged, only blurred slightly.

Wildfur (Star) ~ For Approval
i don't know how to tail 23:04, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste on --> side of the back

I provided you with some red-lines to better help guide your tail anatomy :P If you like, you could follow them. This one is for a tail off to the side, but if you want to keep it how the tail is now, I've provided this one to better help with that. It guides it along more smoothly perspective-wise. As it is now, it looks a little out-of-place, like it's sticking straight into the air oddly. Hope this helps, and again, you don't have to follow it if you don't want to :) <span style="">23:53, 10/03/2016

I love the pattern on this. :D Darken the shading a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:40, October 4, 2016 (UTC)