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Sheer (CG) - For Approval
The mud... 00:29, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading, lovely work Malina457 (talk) 01:20, November 3, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Re-uploaded: Thank you. 01:46, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

This is wonderful! The face seems like it has very little definition everywhere except for the right side. Maybe add some highlights or mud to the left side/forehead?  H A W K  F I R E  13:36, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, the whole character looks dull on my screen. Please add more highlights or mud. Still, wonderful work Icy!=)Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:36, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

I do not use highlights as they are optional, but I will add mud. 15:38, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Good lord. 22:34, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere. Cannot see it.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:54, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 23:19, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Swoop (CG) ~ For Approval
I haven't done a charart in like - 5 years please be gentle. 00:41, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

What are you talking about? This is amazing!! Regardless, I think the ginger is too neon compared to the queen. 01:29, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded aah thank you! I tried my best to dull the colour. 03:05, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the body. Nice work Echo!Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you!! Hopefully this looks a bit better. 21:14, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There's pinkish tint near her right cheek.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:55, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

The top of the shoulder shading and the outside of the haunch seem to be a little over-defined, sorry I know that's annoying. xD  H A W K  F I R E  23:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Pebble (CG) ~ For Approval
idk this was a pretty lazy job 00:41, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded slight adjustments 02:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:40, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

What do you mean David? She must be related to Ashfoot. Anyways, can you make the mud look more brown-ish? Looking too light at the momentHeyoitpotater (talk) 15:40, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in and say the mud can be any color as long as it is visible, which it is. 17:39, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Um... her nose is two different colors. On the kit image it's full dark gray.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:58, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Scree (CG) ~ For Approval
Comments? 01:46, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit, and maybe make the eyes less cross eyed just a tad? Malina457 (talk) 02:42, November 3, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded. 03:15, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading please? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:41, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:10, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried something different with the mud. 06:45, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

The mud looks super realistic! I love this style. The darker ears need to be blended into the head fur a bit more, they seem kind of abrupt, and they are darker than the rest of the stripes.  H A W K  F I R E  13:33, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

He does look cross-eyed. Can you change the nosepink so it doesn't blend in with the character?Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:42, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Moss (CG) ~ For Approval
Moss is the most productive, the most paramount, the most essential character in all of the Tribe. 02:28, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

This is gorgeous!! Define the mud a bit more, or make it darker? It blends in a bit too well. 03:38, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Thank you! 04:32, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a bit more in the left ear?  H A W K  F I R E  13:27, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 15:06, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading, cannot see it.Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:44, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reups ...ok 17:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define earpink.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:00, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Jag (CG) ~ For Approval
Gosh, the mud was a challenge! I'm still not sure if i even did that well on it, but I tried. Ah well, I like challenges! I'm just gonna get this up before I ruin it more by fiddling. ^^; SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define the shading a bit. 03:33, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Can you fix the pupils a bit? They might just look weird on my screen but they look a bit off with them being pointed to the ground. This is super cute btw and you did great on the mud! 03:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed eyes. And tysm, Echo. ^^ SquidwardPlays 03:54, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Is there a red or pink tint on the shading or something? It kind of sticks out, and I'm not sure if it goes well with the rest of Jag. Also, light source? Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:15, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There is the tint as Shadow said.. can you make the mud on the tail brighter? I can barely see it. Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:47, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Messed around with the mud on the tail a bit, is it any better? I also completely redid the shading. SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I can't see shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:01, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? SquidwardPlays 11:07, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Bird That Rides the Wind (CG) ~ For Approval
ugh, that mud. I can't

This is probably because of the old pattern, but is there any way you can make those two back markings more "attached"? Malina457 (talk) 13:15, November 3, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Re-uploaded Like.. that?

Add more mud patches, she looks very bare.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:02, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Night (CG) - For Evaluation
This is probably an unpopular opinion but I enjoyed doing the mud. Also, yes, I'll fix the shading. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:19, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and smudge the mud a little bit. It looks kind of clump in some areas, like the front leg and the flank.  H A W K  F I R E  13:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups nvm I don't like mud now Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:02, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. And the mud needs to be smudged a tad more. And is it me, or does her eyes make her look like an ailen from space? You don't have to change the eyes by the way.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:06, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Talon (CG) - For Approval
Wow, love the new blanks! There's some things I need to correct (like the overly dark stomach/haunch shading) but I just wanted to get it up for now.  H A W K  F I R E  23:21, November 3, 2018 (UTC)