Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Nettlepaw (A) - For Approval
My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing him again. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Did you remove the '120 px'in front of it? Maplefern 12:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded now he still needs alot more help, but THANK YOU ICESTORM! your blank made ti so the eye was correct and the whiskers, and i didn't have to spend 15 mins going over the white spots like in my old blank. Help? -- ♥Shine star♥  19:54, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You missed a spot whan you were coloring(his hind leg) and tabby stripes are usually darker than the base pelt color, darken them some. otherwise this is much better.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again. Now? --User:Shinestar ♥Shine ]] star♥ 20:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes thicker. Also, save over the former photo. You don't need the older versions.--Maplefern 22:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern is right, Try re-doing the tabby stripes with a size 3 brush. Look at Graystripe's apprentice picture for help. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe darken the earpink a bit. It is a bit bright. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

oh my star clan! i am soo annoyed! i can't find my nettlepaw file on my computer! -- ♥Shine star♥  21:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Did you try a search? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:33, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

ya -- ♥Shine star♥  17:56, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Can't you just copy and paste the image from here?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 18:10, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Uhh...you could just save the image to your computer again. (i think that's what Ashshadow meant.) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:16, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah it is sorry I wasn't clear.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 03:21, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I tried doing that but it comes out all blurry! -- ♥Shine star♥  15:58, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry but it sounds like you'll have to start over.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 17:14, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, I'm already trying, just give me a little while to get a new one -- ♥Shine star♥  15:12, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, heres my new nettlepaw, now he needs more work but at least i have something to work WITH. Comments? -- ♥Shine star♥  15:56, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the eye like on my tutorials, and add shading, if it's there I can't see it. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 16:51, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, i'll get on that soon, my big sis is on the desktop right now. and also, on this computer the tabby stripes look all bad, and icethroat, do you think i should redo my tabby stripes the way it says so on your tutorials, or the way it is already? and it sort of confuses me on the eye thing on your tutorials. -- ♥Shine star♥  00:19, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

please work on this or it will be declined--Echopaw 01:21, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw what are you talking about it was just updated.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:30, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

No, your stripes are fine! I'm not very good at those type of stripes, so I didn't bother making a tutorial for them, that's all. and the eye thing, each block is like a pixel, if that helps any. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 02:03, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, i'll get on it soon, its just that i'm at my cousins for New Years and i'm sleeping over there so my work is on my computer at home. I'll get back on him soon though! -- ♥Shine star♥  16:23, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Also, ice, when i do my new shading, (cause mine you CANNOT see) should i just do it over the tabby stripes or remove them, shade, then put them back on? -- ♥Shine star♥  16:35, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Go over the tabby stripes. The shading should be on both the stripes and the fur. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 18:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

ya, i'm working on it, its just really hard for me to do the eyes! i'll have a new one up soon though! promise! -- ♥Shine star♥  17:28, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I am SO sorry i haven't been on! i just keep getting BOATLOADS of homework! and we have a science project, but i promise to work on him when i have time! (and i have sewing and CDD and science club, and well you get the point) SO sorry! -- ♥Shine star♥  12:49, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too red, and I can't see the eye color.-- Dark hallows 14:23, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

you might be right about the ear pink but the eye color for my computer is a very bright blue. Is it dark for anyone eles? -- ♥Shine star♥  18:12, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, now I see it, make it a little larger.-- Dark hallows 18:47, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

k, i made the eye like in icestorm's tutorials, and i made the ear more pink. How is it now? -- ♥Shine star♥  21:43, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the changes, upload it under a new file (Nettlepaw.A.png) and then put on the old image. --  Icy -chan   ♥  21:55, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

bangs head on table* i am so dumb! i put up the same file as before! ok, so HERE is my new file! -- ♥Shine star♥  22:08, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Much better! :D Just make the ear pink smaller and blur the tabby markings. --Icestorm I LIKE TACO BELL!!! 22:10, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Shinestar there's no shading, please add some-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:50, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

ok, i THINK i fixed it. Now? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:19, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm, it might just be my computer, but I still don't see any shading at all. Look at an approved apprentice picture, or a tutorial for shading-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 01:26, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Millie(Q)- For approval
-- ok since whitewing is approved i thought i'd put up Millie. she is my first tabby! and i am quite proud of her. comments? Santamoon Merry Christmas!

Looks good. The thing is, The stripes should be thinner --Rainstripe c: 16:33, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, discounting the 3 discussion sections this just fits nto 35 images. The stripes need to be less cartoony; look at some aproved tabbies for reference. There are a few different styles you can try. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ears are too dark and need blurring. Sandy's right. The tabby markings are too thick, and could do with more blurring. --Birchy (I don't know how to get a signature!!)

The tabby stripes need to look more like Millie's stripes on her warrior image. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, the ear pink needs blurred, and fix the color; make it more like the color in Millie's warrior image. You don't need ear pink on the ear farthest from us (the left ear), so get rid of that. You need to make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image, and then blur the stripes. -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 15:38, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image,please.Blur the ear pink,fix color,like her warrior image.Delete the farthest ear pink,it's not needed.I can see your proud to,everyone is for there first's of anything!-- '''FirePelt  02:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

ok with these comments i will redo her completely. she should be reuploaded in around 2 days,Santamoon Merry Christmas!

This needs to be worked on or it will have to be declined. Also, please sign with ~ so the timestamp will be displayed. Thanks Sa  nd  y!  14:14, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploadedeven more proud!--Santamoon Merry Christmas!  17:43, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look much better but they're to dark. Lighten them some.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 23:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 01:25, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

how do i liten the stripes without lightning the pic?--Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas! 17:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Change the size of the brush on the dodge tool. --  Icy -chan  22:22, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

kk. just gimme a day or 2. my teacher is giving me so much home work that i rarely get on. =( <font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas! 18:27, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Darkmoon - I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to put a 24 hour limit on this staying on the page. Please work on it, or it will have to be declined. There are just too many people unable to post their work because images like this that aren't being worked on are keeping the image number up. Sorry. If you don't have time at the moment, it might be best not to be working on this image - perhaps repost her when you do have time to give the image the attention it needs to become approval standard. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  17:40, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Molepelt (MC) For Approval
Did I go over the image limit? If I did, feel free to remove. I just did this for fun. Still waiting for comments on Ryewhisker. Anyways how is he? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:58, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Neat! I really like it. Maybe make the medicine stuff in his mouth a darker green, so it looks more natural. Otherwise, it's awesome! --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 23:15, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I love it Icy! But I think you should probably blur the shading and highlights some, especially around the neck. But it's awesome!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:32, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

His ear pink seems to be a bit too bright - the shade is right, its just light. Highlights would make it seem like there's more shading, and the herbs would look better if all three were different shades(don't forget to shade them, too!). -- Quiet !... 08:08, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I had actually reserved him, but you keep this up; I still haven't got around to doing him anyways, haha. Also, merry Christmas! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:07, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

This is awsome! Darken and blur earpink and it should be good! Merry Christmas! 18:23, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with maple,darken and blur the ear pink. FirePelt  14:28, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Okay for some reason I can't get to pixlr.com. I'll try to get to this as soon as I can. Please don't decline! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whole image re done. Why you ask? I just wanted to! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 21:37, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

LOL! Okay, I think you should probably blur the shading a little more, and the ear pink looks a little too bright. Try and darken it some--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 03:03, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the midriff, like on Bluestar's deputy image, or like on Molewhisker and Silvermask. Also, darken all of the shading. --  Icy -chan  16:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little too bright also - try a Rippletail, Whitethroat, or other darker coloured cat reference like Dustpelt or Swallowtail (RC) Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  16:38, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  11:49, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I keep uploading it but it won't show up! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 21:28, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, here's what to do. Upload your new version under the file name Molepelt.medcat.png and then mark your current file with the tag. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  21:43, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I try uploading the new file but it says "Error" and I cant remember the other part. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 21:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

...try it again, I don't know what else to do since you don't remember what the entire message was, so try uploading it again and if it doesn't work try to remember the whole message this next time. --  Icy -chan   ♥  22:03, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

NVM. I just uploaded a new file. Anything else? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:fushia; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Icestorm I LIKE TACO BELL!!! 22:07, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the midriff. --  Icy -chan   ♥  22:25, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The changes showing? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 00:54, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval


'''((Well, I figured because there are a few images on 24 hours that this would be alright to post.. If not, please decline/withdraw/whatever this!))''' I've been waiting a while to try doing a blank set, and I finally got my chance. (: I tried to make it so there are no odd pixels(ones you'd miss with the fill tool). What do you guys see that needs to be fixed/changed? -- Quiet !...  00:09, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

I like them,but the mouth seems,odd to me.Here,I'll add a pic of when I saved this for a tester cat.I did'nt want to get all into detail,but I wanted to see how it would fill in,and how the shading would look.I think they look ok.I'll check them over some more. FirePelt  00:20, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, only the left ear should need pink. The right ear is facing the side, but both can have pink, I guess. As for the mouth, how does it seem odd to you? I might be able to fix it. -- Quiet !...  00:38, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

These look pretty good, but the tuft of hair, make it just a straight line (well, curved along the head line, but not with the extra fur) on the shorthairs, kind of like on the cave-guard blanks where the tuft of fur is only on the longhairs. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 01:05, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

They seem a little too chubby for a sharpclaw. They look more like kittypet blanks to me (not a bad thing, though, seeing as we need those).--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:41, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded the short haired blanks. Shaf, its probably because their belly isn't visible at all. Its hidden behind their hip and front leg. -- Quiet !...  01:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This might just be me and not matter but it's hard to put tabby stripes on these. Again I dont think they're any tabby sharpclaws.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 03:12, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

'''Reuploading right now because I forgot their whiskers.. >.< -- Quiet''' !...  06:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Three tabbys in the ancients: Stone song, Furled Bracken and Jay's wing.

this is Beutiful! --Echopaw 14:27, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, Quiet! Just make the ears a bit smaller, and the chest on the longhairs kind of look wierd... -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P16:35, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I made an example for the shorthaired blank. If you color the nose black, it looks strange. I also used a different style for the eyes.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 17:34, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Wow, the lineart is really smooth. Do you have a tablet?

Anyways, the only things are that the eyes and mouth look slightly twisted, the shoulder should be brought in a bit, and there's a thick black spot. I made you a diagram to help explain.

Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:39, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I understand the shoulder, but why the jaw and eyes? Their heads are tilted slightly, and putting their jaw and eyes completely straight up would be awkward. :\ As for the thick spot, I'll see what I can do.. -- Quiet !...  01:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Oh, I didn't relize that their heads were turned. *Fail* Nevermind. Oh, also shorten the wiskers on the right side a bit. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 01:29, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

This are so awsome Quiet! But, they look soooo cudly! A little too cudly for Sharpclaw blanks however. If you put a collar on these, they'd make PERFECT Kittypet blanks! Oh well. But for the blanks themselves, I think the eyes might be a little bit difficult to do. I mean, I don't know since I haven't colored one yet. But they look a little big. Maybe make the eyes a little more like the ones on the Cave Guard blanks?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:11, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I made an example of one. You should make the ear bigger and fix what Mosswhisker and Sleathfire said. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 17:47, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

No more examples; it's already been determined these blanks can be used. However, as two other users have commented, they look much more like kittypets than sharpclaws. The ones Lonewolf97 has up at the moment haven't been worked on for a while, and he can't even have them up; he hasn't had any approved yet, so he's only allowed to have one image up; Stonestar. Would you please consider changing these to kittypet blanks? -- Bramble -sama  19:05, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Please please please? All you'd have to do is add a collar--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

These would make excellent Kittypet blanks,Quietstep.I think you should tske this into though,it's easy to do the collar. FirePelt  00:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, been a bit busy last two days. XD; Yeah, I can make them into kittypet blanks. -- Quiet !...  18:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! *starts cabbage patch dance*--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. yours are WAYYYYYYYYYY better than mine. Wayyyy better. Mine stinks. I really like the pose! --<span style="font-family:Kartika; background:black; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">~Lonewolf~ 21:32, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the look totally says, "Pet me, I'm adorable!"--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:42, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for agreeing!They do look adorable! FirePelt '''DONT mess with me. 03:46, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

hmm..i changed the boldface for you.i love this!!-- *Ivy  spring!!*  07:43, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think if you add the collar it will be ready to go! (in my mind i would think) -Shinestar i didn't put my siggie cause i am logged on to my sis's account so ya.

Where's the collar Quiet? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 16:07, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''


 * Enough. Stop pestering - Quiet will get to it when he (?) has time to. This has only been sat here for two days without work or comment from the artist. Give people a chance to have their lives too. (Also - people's names are capitalised...) Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  17:33, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'ma she.. ;-; Anyway, I'm getting on it right now... And yes, I DO have a life outside of this Wiki. -- Quiet !...  02:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wow these are adorable! Quiet, your a great artist. :) Anyway, just add a collar and make the eye a little smaller, and they should be good t go! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:09, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Hawkey!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:03, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Aw!! So cute! The heads seems a tad too round on the short hairs. Maybe add a fur tuft or two?-- Darkhallows 17:57, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for not being able to get to these till now. Big Health Class project is due on Monday, was eating up quite a bit of my time. And Dark, I had some on them but was told to remove them from the short hairs. :\ -- Quiet !...  21:28, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I've removed the example images as they're taking up space. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  21:45, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the short hairs look fine :) Just do what Hawkfire said and these should be perfect!-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:50, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, OK. Maybe add a collar? They are pets.-- Darkhallows 22:31, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. And I knew to add a collar. It was only said five times now.. >.> -- Quiet !...  22:32, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

These are sooo adorable!! Maybe thicken the collar's lineart? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆22:34, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the collor line art and change the file name from sharpclaw to kittypet please. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ  Have a happy Valentineღ 23:05, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It's amazing overall, but you might want to darken the collar lines a bit so it's easier to see. --PabloDePablo 23:37, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

i don't know pablo,i tried cody and it is good.--.-- :) Ivy Hi there!! 03:27, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the collar lineart needs to be thickened. As opposed (Is that how you spell it?) to the rest of the lineart, it looks to thin.-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:41, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the kittypet kits are just gorgous! Except, you should consider making some non- kittypet ones also...- 17Silverthistle

Silverthistle, what does that even mean? -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:25, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

You know, like Clan kits. Without the collar, more Clan cat like? - 17Silverthistle

Here's one I made of Princess and Firestar. I like it!  Night shine   ★  02:17, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

My character, Millie as kittypet. 17silverthistle 02:56, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Silverthistle, there already are kit blanks. And I don't really think we need any more examples, but these are really good :) Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 02:59, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

How do I get it on Millies page though? That was my whole purpose in the 1st place, and I was hoping Bramble and Icethroat (my mentor) would comment.17silverthistle 03:10, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Woah, slow down! These blanks haven't even meen approved yet! And the mentor apprentice system is gone now. But we have to wait until Quietstep can thicken the lineart on the collar. Then you've got to reserve Millie's kittypet version, and then you can put her up for approval here. And please, for the second time, you've got to sign with the four ~ Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:12, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

heres my new smudge i made! this is a really good blanks Quiet!

I repeat, no more examples. The blanks have been proven to work. Now please stop pestering and only comment if it's something constructive about the images. Bramble -sama  22:16, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think they are perfect!--  Night shine   ★  00:30, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I dont think the collar line art is that big of a problem, but thickening it wouldn't hurt. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 02:35, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Rainstorm (W)-For Approval
(Yes this image is #36.) However, I saw my image for Rising Moon ready for approval and (yes it's me again) I put him up!!! My first mottled cat...Comments?-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 19:11, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

He seems a bit dark. Maybe lighten him up a little? -- Quiet !...  21:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

He, he looks a little blue to me. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:07, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

He's supposed to be blue.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 20:54, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch more.-- :) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 21:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The spots look a bit like a pattern to me, maybe try scattering a few more of varied sizes in an uneven way? Usually on mottled cats I see the spots concentrating toward the spine, so if you just sprinkle a few more along his back, it would probably look a bit more natural. <font color="#FF6600">★ <font color="#009999">Insane <font color="#FF9900">Batteries not Included 15:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for almost a week. Please work on this soon or it might be declined. -- Hд₩ ₭₮д  £O₦  23:51, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I have to take a short hiatus from working on this. Stupid homework. *Kills Pre-algebra.* So can someone decline this, and I'll put it back up later?-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 21:08, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

NVM what I said, I finished homework and my work for the weekend :) I'll work on this tonight.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 21:13, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. yep!-- Moss I'm Up There!  22:46, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps make the spots a little darker. -- Hд₩ ₭₮д  £O₦  17:30, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, we can barely see them now.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  02:30, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Workin' on it, thank god death week is over ^.^ Moss I'm Up There!  23:29, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur them (the spots) more, please. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  00:28, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Berrynose(KI)-For Approval


This is my 2nd Kit.It was gathering dust in my files,and finally we are allowed to do non-current ranks.I know im the 2nd image over the limit,but I think there 4 images ready to be approved.Critque?Comments?questions?help? FirePelt  22:32, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

blur shading and your NOT over page limit very good!--Echopaw 01:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.thank you echopaw!I blurred the shading more.Anything else?And Echopaw,Please sign with 4 tidles(~). FirePelt  16:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Nothing it's purrfect firepelt lets let sandy look at it!Echopaw 16:47, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment.I can't wait for bramble or sandy to look at it.I am quite proud of myself.This took a while to make.I did my best!^.^. FirePelt  17:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Looks like your opinion is high value, Sand. ;) The ear pink needs to be darker and more visible, Fire. Other than that, the image looks great. -- Bramble -sama  17:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

lol, no idea why =/ Anyways (see my Americanism there?), all I see, besides Bramble's mention above, is that the eyes ook very red. A paler, more yellowish amber may be better as the kits' eyes are too small to make orange visible properly. Sa nd  y!  17:59, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Kk.I'll work on this soon. FirePelt  18:08, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Thank you for the compliment Bramble!^.^ FirePelt '''Hows the prey running? 00:36, January 1, 2010 (UTC)'''

I think this looks good =) Comments before approval? Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  23:43, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I absolutely positively HATE to point this out, but Berrynose's warrior image is long haired. Shouldn't this one be long haired too? --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I agree and also the color isn't quite right. -- Ashshadow Rawr :3 21:56, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

So what your saying is,I have to REMAKE THE WHOLE THING??!! FirePelt '''DONT mess with me. 03:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

No, you don't. I can easily layer a longhaired blank over the image and fix it with minor changes to the original picture, and then all you'd have to do is run the burn tool (set on Highlights) over it a few times to make it look like the warrior version. -- Bramble -sama  04:27, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

omg.Thank you bramble!Your a big help!I'll run the burn tool over him.thank you again! FirePelt '''DONT mess with me. 16:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded.I did the best i could to fix it.How's it look? FirePelt '''DONT mess with me. 16:21, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Yep, that's much better. I'm sorry I scared you for a minute Fire! Okay, I'd blur the shading just a tinsy bit more. Good job!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 17:37, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lol.It's okay night.I'll fix the shading. FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 17:44, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 17:47, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Blur the neck shading. Happy New Year! 18:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.Anything else? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 23:26, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

The eye color still isn't quite right. Make it more of an orangy color, like his warrior image---Berrynose --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 05:16, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm doing the best I can with the color,but it's getting harder to change it. FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 15:08, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''

I'm sorry Fire, I didn't mean to upset you! I'm just trying to go for consistency.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:23, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

You did'nt upset me!XD.It's just it's getting harder to change the color and blend the new color in with thie shading,cause the new color is darker than the shading.I can't change it now without re-doing it. FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 20:06, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''

Oh no, I didn't mean the pelt color, I meant the eye color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:12, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ohh!I'm a mousebrain!I did'nt read the eye color I though it was pelt color! FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 20:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 20:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''

Yeah, the eye color is much better! I'd blur the shading more though.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:55, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Dull the color a bit, it's too bright. Look at his warrior image.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:06, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having a really hard time with the color,but I just need to find the right tool for the job.Which tool do I use? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 21:45, January 5, 2010 (UTC)'''

Use the sponge tool and set it to desaturate.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Thank you mouse!Anything else? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 20:12, January 6, 2010 (UTC)'''

I think you shouls redo the shading. He looks kind of sunken in.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 22:37, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Can anyone help me a bit with the shading if it's worse? FirePelt '''RAWRZ!!!! 21:50, January 7, 2010 (UTC)'''

Blur the shading under the chin some more. And on second thought, I liked the image you had of him before you changed it.<span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:03, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED.Anything else at at all? ☆ ★Fire★☆  X 23:41, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

the eyes look a little funny...-- QuailflightTheAVATAR! <font color="Black">Give me a mouse. NOW!09:40, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

No, the eyes look fine. But maybe lighten the ear pink more? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 18:42, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Done! ''' ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ    Have a happy Valentineღ |undefined 22 21:15, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) for approvel
well some how would not upload blueh's one she fixed for me so heres the original --Echopaw 01:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Here you go, Echopaw. Again, please sign with four ~. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I doEchopaw 20:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

It doesnt look like you do.I can't even click on anything to go on your profile,so it doesnt seem like tidles are used.NONE of your comments are click able except for he one at the top of this message.PLEASE sign with 4 ~. '''FirePelt  Hows the prey running? |undefined 20:07, January 1, 2010 (UTC)


 * Yes well on to the charart :) The ear pink should be in the middle of the ear. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 17:25, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED i hate saying that but any more? problems --Echopaw 18:45, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and shading and this should be good. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 20:58, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED how's this? Echopaw 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * There's little gray marks floating around her. Clean those up.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  03:58, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well... i try to do that but it dosen't wark so ya help me! Echopaw 02:41, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Use the eraser tool.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  02:30, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

i do but it has a checkored backround so it's hard! Echopaw 21:31, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Fill in the background and erase it again.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:12, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blackclaw (E) - For Approval
Since there are a few images that are being approved/declined, I decided it was okay to post Blackclaw as an elder. Comments/Criticism? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 01:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

dodge the middle,cause i chan't see the shading now.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:04, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Anything other comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 19:20, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the ear pink a little? More like his warrior image- Blackclaw--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:41, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 14:20, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 10:01, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 15:03, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bit darker, the same color as his warrior image. --  Icy -chan   ♥  22:46, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Mothflight (W) For Approval
Second Charart! Yay! Well I decided to do Mothflight as a warrior now that were aloud to put up non current ranks again. I tried to do the shading but it would never show up! Please help! Comments? Blacky OMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 19:59, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Make it a pale grey (not too grey but a bit grey)so the shading will be visible. Happy New Year! 20:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Aww your off already! I agree with Maplefern. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:16, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in more than a week. Please work on it or it will be declined. It should have been declined by now. As for the image, there's some blurred lineart by the ear. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆19:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Relax, she has till tomorrow before the week limit is up, and after that we give her another 24 hours, then decline it if there's no response. -- Bramble -sama  00:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

i'm sorry. My computer was sooooo slow. I uploaded the new one. Blacky OMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 02:23, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Umm, I like the old one better-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:38, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink is too dark and needs blending in a little, I can't see any colour in the eye - perhaps change it if it's already there; if it is, my apologies -, and the shading looks too dark. Blend the chest, back and haunch shading and get rid of the smudgy grey marks around the midriff. The tail has too much shading - just a single line along the bottom edge is enough - then blend. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  13:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'll wait a little while for the changes to show up. Blacky OMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 23:07, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:09, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Stonefur (K)--For Approval


I finally have a picture and uploaded it but the picture won't appear. What do I do? WoodClan 19:21, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

1. Because it says Image instead of File.

2, xcf is not a um thing. Example png. Save it under png. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:27, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

My first Charart at last! I did this one because Stonefur appears as a kit in BP. What do you think? (Thanks for the help in uploading the image) WoodClan 20:18, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's a little to blue. Try to match the color of his warrior image.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC) I agree with Ashshadow. He needs to be blue-gray, like on his warrior image. (see here. The chest shading also looks smudged. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P20:51, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Better. The title needs to say '(Character name)--For Approval'. Just so you know. Happy New Year! 22:42, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright and purplish. Make it a more reddish colour and blur. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  16:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-changed ear color WoodClan 21:43, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

It still is too bright- see Stonefur-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 21:55, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-changed ear color. How is it? WoodClan 22:46, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Better =) Just bur the shading and highlights and this looks good Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  19:31, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-blurred the shading and highlights some more. Is it ready now? WoodClan 01:16, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on his front leg still needs more blurring.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-altered the shading and tints for the front legs WoodClan 20:26, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look good, but they need to be blurred some more. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:01, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-altered the highlights WoodClan 23:37, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the highlights and shading need to be blurred-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:00, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

And the ear pink looks too hot pink, try making it a little more of a reddish color like his warrior image-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:47, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-altered the shading again, the ear color is identical to Stonefurs warrior picture WoodClan 18:08, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more and instead of altering the highlights blur this time. Sometimes after altering the color it blurs more. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:07, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Healer Blanks - For Approval


There are a couple of images in the approval stage, so here are my healer blanks! I made two sets, because I wasn't sure which one looked better. The ones on the top have the regular leader tail, and the ones on the bottom have an altered one. I didn't leave the tails on the long-hairs the same. Credit goes to Melonlemon for making the leader blanks, which I modified these off of. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

SO CUTE!!! LOVE IT! Echopaw 17:38, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Can't really tell the males and females apart. . . wait, are there males and females?-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 17:47, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

These are really good!! I personally like the top ones, but the bottom ones are good too. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆17:56, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

There really good.I like them.They look alot like the leader blanks!The tail and some other things are diff though,there really good. FirePelt How's the prey running?

You need a short haired female one and a long haired female. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 18:26, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, we agreed that we should only make male healer blanks, as Stoneteller is the only healer we've ever seen. If Stoneteller's next apprentice is a she-cat, then we can make female ones--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 18:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

actually,We have seen rock,who is a mysteriouse Healer from long ago!;D FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 18:52, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''

They are all male and we need no female blanks for now (see Blackclaw's user talk page). They look like the leader blanks, because they are, FirePelt. They have been modified, as the warrior blanks were to make med cats etc. These look good. I think I prefer the changed tails and the herbs with two pieces (if that makes sense) The only problem I see is that there are too any tiny lines on the tails that may make them hard to colour. Perhaps try and simplify the longhaired tails a little. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  18:45, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I made one of Stoneteller. He looks pretty good!-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 20:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand what you said about the tiny lines on the tails, Sandy? And the healers with the two piece herbs are the top right image and bottom left image, right? Thanks for all the nice comments, everyone! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 23:30, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Blackclaw. I don't think the lines on the long haired one's tail would make it difficult to color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:05, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

can i do stoneteller if this gets aproved i really want to do him!!! Echopaw 00:32, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I was hoping the one I made could be used for Stoneteller-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 01:01, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, ignore me then ^_^ You just need to choose which two you want to keep and take the others off the page. Night Shine: Your Stoneteller is wow but you two need to discuss it yourselves and come to some sort of agreement. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  17:41, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I guess I'll use the ones with the changed tails and the two piece herbs. The extras I'll remove from the section. --24.186.167.60 01:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC) Blackclaw09 not logged in

Aww I like the one piece herb. I'll change the one of Stoneteller now.-- Nightshine Let it snow! 02:11, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one piece herb better too. The two peice herb looks, unnatural-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:01, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. The one-piece herb looks much better. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆16:57, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think they are perfect!The one-piece herb looks better. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ  Have a happy Valentineღ 23:08, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

they look nice. except... no offence but the one shown looks like it has a moustache. Rofl =D--<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas! 18:31, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I've put the ones with the one piece herbs back up. I just need to change the tail on the shorthairs. Or should I leave that the same? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:White; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:LightGray;">Snowfall 09 20:00, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should change them only because you changed the long hairs. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:06, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Dewspots (W)-For Approval
My first tabby!!!!!!! Is there anything I could do to it? Comments? Thanks!!!!--Echoheart 22:03, January 3, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

Darken the tabby stripes some.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 23:32, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright, and needs to be blurred.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 00:02, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

This needs shading, or more shading Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  18:13, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is to bright.It needs more shading,the eye needs colored in properly,and darken the tabby stripes. '''FirePelt  How's the prey running? |undefined 21:53, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the name of the file to Dewspots(Warrior).png accidentaly.Anyway,is there anything else I could do to it?--Echoheart 11:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

This is much better. But the flecks look a little too much like snowflakes. Make them more of a gray color, and more irregular-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:54, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I kind of like them. . .-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 01:37, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, you're right Mousey. I look at it now and I wonder, "What in StarClan's name was I thinking?" :) On second thought, the flecks look fine Echo. But add a stripe that starts at her eye lash, and then goes down more to her neck. Look at an approved image of a tabby cat for an example-- Swiftbreeze, Brambleclaw, Tornear, Voletooth-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:10, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Shes really pretty. Blur the earpink some more.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 03:18, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

What happened to the pretty one?-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 21:06, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean Mouse?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:09, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

lol, this one looks pretty to me =) Just darken the shading and she'll be good. Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  13:18, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Forget that, my computer was wacked up and showed the old one.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 23:20, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Tadpole (Ki)- For Approval
So this is my first cat up for approval. Any suggestions?--QuailflightTheCat 00:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Good job for your first charart! But the lineart seems kind of blurred... try doing it again with this blank: The shading looks great though! -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆00:54, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. That's probably my horrible shading. 8)--Quail 01:01, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

No, the shading's great! Tell me if you need any help with it. I'm fairly good at black cats. And you've took on a hard one for your first charart! Black and white cats are the hardest to shade - trust me, I know! Snowfur was my first cat! -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆01:06, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I know too. Before it switched to Kestrelflight, that section was Hollyleaf-who I'm thinking of reposting. Snowfern Snow!

Thanks, Batwing. I'm going to re-upload it, and make sure it looks better. I didn't use any highlighting, oh yeah, something's wrong with my siggy! :( 8|--Quail! Meow! 01:53, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Okay, I re did it. Hopefully this is a little better.--Quail! Meow! 03:00, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, I think Blackclaw had this reserved first, but I'm not positive. I'll check the history--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:22, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually Quail, I don't even see your siggie on the current project list. Did you even reserve Tadpole?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I did. At the bottom. Sorry for any problem, Snowfall. --Quail! Meow! 03:31, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Well it looks as if Blackclaw reserved Tadpole under the status as a rogue, however Tadpole was seen as a rogue kitten. You may have reserved him later on under the right blank I believe, but Blackclaw did reserve Tadpole first even if it wasn't under the right status. I'm not a senior warrior anymore so I think we might have to ask Sandy or Bramble about this...or maybe Blackclaw will let you keep the image up.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  03:55, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm....I didn't see Blackclaw's name on the reserve list, and no Tadpole, it should be okay.--Quail! Meow! 04:02, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, you only reserved Tadpole after I told you you weren't on the list. Anyway, Shimmerpool's right. Ask Bramble, Sandy, or Blackclaw--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:04, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Blackclaw is under a different name as they changed their for the holidays. It is Rainwhisker and the 6th user on the page. Check for yourself and click the link and it will take you to Blackclaw's page. I for one only have to hover over a person's name to see what userpage it will take me too.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  06:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Talk to Rainwhisker about it, Quailflight. I'm going to stay out of this one, because of her doing a rogue version when he's just a kitten. -- Bramble -sama  22:54, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

You can keep this up for approval, since I reserved him in the wrong blank and you got him up first, so keep it. I'll remove him from my reservations (current projects list). --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 00:09, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks really strange, it's lighter than the pelt. The shading is supposed to be darker the pelt, not lighter. Also, darken and blur the ear pink. There are some white pixels on his front left paw, and the eyes don't really look right. Look at Icethroat's tutorials to see how to do the kits's eyes-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:53, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Blackclaw let me keep the image, so I reuploaded it. The file is Tad5.-- Qua il! <font color="Green"> Meow!06:54, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink and nose need to be a bit darker. People usually choose Rippletail as a good color. Also try to make the earpink as close to the same size as possible, right now his left ear is bigger than the right.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 03:30, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I changed the ear and nose colors. Anything else?-- Qua il! <font color="Green"> Meow!00:48, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay...I'm pretty happy with my charart....but I'll reupload it...-- QuailflightTheAVATAR! <font color="Black">Give me a mouse. NOW!10:10, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-It doesn't look like I did much, but I was trying to make the ears a little lighter, and balance out the highlights. Any suggestions? QuailflightTheAVATAR! <font color="Black">Give me a mouse. NOW!10:27, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'd personally advise you get rid of the highlights and just use shading on a kit. Thicken the neck shading and blend. Make the ear pink smaller and get a tiny size 3 brush to blur slightly. Also - take a darker reddish-pink colour such as on Crowtail or my awful image of Cloudspots ^_^ Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  18:25, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-lightened ears and nose, and got rid of highlights, as Sandy said.-- Quail! <font color="Black">Jack in the Box21:00, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks too hot pink to me. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:26, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Violet (R)- For Approval
Guess who's back? Don't ask why I'm on here today. Anyway, I couldn't see this image go into waist so comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Hawkey C'mon 2010! 14:59, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...it still looks more yellow than orange, but using the sponge tool on saturate a couple of times should fix that. ;) Also, the ear pink needs blurred some more. Otherwise, this looks really awesome. :D --  Icy -chan  15:06, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploadedeh! Mwar the highlights look yellow now! T.T Oh well, she looks oranger. :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yah, looks awesome. The only thing I can see now is that I can barely see the ear pink, make it more of a reddish color. Also, I think I see blurred lineart in a couple of spots near the lineart in the highlights. --  Icy -chan  15:20, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bit wider, and it should be good. --  Icy -chan  15:34, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:50, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * I still think she is a little to bright.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  20:33, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more ginger-orange. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆22:18, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more a ginger color and the shading looks like a sun is hanging over her.Make the shading darker and add it to the needed spots.Also make the ear pink alittle smaller. FirePelt '''RAWRZ!!!! 23:13, January 7, 2010 (UTC)'''

The backround is light gray; make it transparent Evanphoto 22:55, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

The tail tip looks too yellow, maybe burn it a little?-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  03:53, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched in a week. Please work on it, I don't want it to be declined!-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:30, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Hawkey, but Nightfall's right. Please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. --  Icy -chan   ♥  22:51, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkey, if you don't work on this, Sandy and Bramble will decline it! I can't bear to watch! QuailflightTheAVATAR! <font color="Black">Give me a mouse. NOW!09:35, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I redid the whole image. 00:40, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

That looks better! But darken the shading because I don't see any. Darken and blur the stripes a little more, and her white paws look to cream colored. Make them more white  Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:34, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

star that shines on water-For Approval
i'm sorry to bramble by yelling,but i've got minnowtail aproved so this is the 2nd one.-- *Ivy  spring!!*  03:09, January 5, 2010 (UTC)



The mudstreaks look unnatural... make them darker, and disconnect the ones that are connected. The streak on the head also looks strange. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 18:51, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur them and maybe smudge them a bit.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:17, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded i think its ready for approval,but thats for b,s,i,e,d,m&s to decide.-- *Ivy  spring!!*  03:48, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add a streak to the top of her head, and blur the shading and highlights-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:49, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  pool~*  04:03, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on her haunch still needs to be blurred.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:38, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded,but i'm not sure where the haunches are.--.-- :) Ivy Hi 03:47, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I've circled the haunches-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:55, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

reyploadedthanks night!!i'm really proud of this.--.-- :) Ivy Hi there!! 11:09, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Dodge the muzzle, it looks flat.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:42, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.-- :) Ivy Hi there!! 11:06, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks kind of flat, and the eyes look wierd. look at Icy's tutorial for help with that. -- Night whisker 98 Rawr! 21:14, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded!!--.-- :) Ivy Hi there!! |undefined 02:38, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The streak that goes from the neck the past the shoulder, could you make it look like it follows the shape of her body more? Right now it's just there. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:34, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sheer path beside water fall (CG)-For Approval


I am having a difficult time with the mud stripes,seeing if I try and make them more red,I'd have to re-do the entire image because of there postioin.Anyways,Questions?Help?Comments?Critque? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:21, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Well, first of all his nose pink is way to bright. Make it the same color as his ear pink-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:39, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a bit too dark. Lighten him a little bit. -- Hд₩ ₭₮д  £O₦  21:37, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

His description is a Dark brown tabby tom Im just making him the color I often see for dark brown tabbys.Actally,he's a little lit for dark brown. '''FirePelt RAWRZ!!!! |undefined 21:45, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are too thick. Snowfern Snow! 22:57, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?I fixed the tabby stripes. '''FirePelt RAWRZ!!!! |undefined 21:39, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add a few more stripes.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I added some more tabby stripes.I made one coming from his eye,seeing as I see alot of tabbys that have that,how does the eye stripe look?oh,and,anything else? ''' ☮★Fire★☮  Starclan watchs over me★ |undefined 22:09, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the eye stripe looks cool. As for the image blur the stripes and mud some more.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:31, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Thank you Ash about the eye stripe! ^.^  ''' ☮★Fire★☮   Starclan watchs over me★ |undefined 23:36, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

The mud looks like patches, not streaks, giving the appearance of a tortie. Can you make them more... streaky?-- Dark hallows 14:41, January 9, 2009

Reuploaed.Anything else? ''' ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ    Have a happy Valentineღ |undefined 23:31, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Icecloud (Ki)
This is my first charart. It's Icecloud, as a kit. I saw that it said that we could do any cat. even if they already had a charart. Someone [I forget who] reserved Icecloud as a warrior, so I did her as a kit. How did I do?--Rage♥♥ 21:05, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is good for your first try, but it needs shading. There are lots of tutorials that will tell you how (found here). And don't forget to blur the ear pink. -- Hд₩ ₭₮д  £O₦  21:31, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added the shading and blurred the ear pink.

The shading should be darker and when you reupload the image please reupload over the same file name. -- Ashshadow Rawr :3 21:56, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Two things about the eyes, first of all they look teal. Icecloud has bright blue. Second of all, the overall design of the eyes is bothering me. Look at one of Icethroat's tutorials for help on how to do them-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made the shading slightly darker. Thanks Ashshadow, I didn't know that. Sorry. I made the eye color bright blue, and changed how I made the eyes.--Rage♥♥ 00:59, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes are much better! But there is a lot of lineart blurred, mainly on the sides of her head, and down around her legs and paws-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:49, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuloaded. I fixed the lineart, along with any other blurred lineart.--Rage♥♥ 00:59, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading should still be darker. I can't really see it.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:27, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened Shading. Also fixed the ears-they are now the same color and size.--Rage♥♥ 13:12, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to be honest and say I don't see a whole lot of shading, until I move my screen. And it doesn't look much like shading, just random lines across the image. Look at some kits and try to mimic the shading.-- Dark hallows 14:37, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darkhollows, I don't know what you mean. I followed the shading rule sin the tutorials for white cats...--Rage♥♥ 17:10, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Darkhallows is right. I can hardly see the shading. It just looks like very thin, light, lines against the lineart. Just try and make it bigger, and make it a lot darker, then blur.-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 22:45, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the lineart and blurred it.--Rage♥♥ 13:11, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm still having trouble seeing the shading on the right side of the body. Also blur the earpink some more.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 17:46, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred ear and darkened shading to a darker gray shade--Rage♥♥ 21:56, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks too thick -- '''Icecloud33 23:06, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

You've got to make the shading bigger. It just looks like a very thin dark gray line right next to the lineart. Be sure to use the correct brush size, I use the 3 or 5 sized square.-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:11, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) for approval
My third cat. She looks a bit strange -- Icecloud33  23:27, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 23:27, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Icecloud33  23:42, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'd recommend changing the shading style, that style looks odd on white cats. You can look at this list for tutorials, there are many other styles which look a bit less awkward on white cats :) and don't forget to blur it well. <font color="#FF6600">★ <font color="#009999">Insane <font color="#FF9900">Batteries not Included 00:16, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think Insane's right. Try looking at Cloudtail, Whitewing or Whitetail as examples Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  12:19, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Better? is it a little dark? -- Icecloud33  18:10, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It needs highlights. Use the dodge tool set on 50.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 19:05, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional. You don't have to add them but you can if you want.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:08, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I tried adding them but they wont show up -- Icecloud33  01:29, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The exposure should be 100. Mind you, that isn't the brush size. Snowfern Snow! 12:40, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I tried that, but they will not show up -- Icecloud33  01:31, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Set it to highlights.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  01:38, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

What should it be set to (exposure, not size) -- Icecloud33  01:40, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? -- Icecloud33  23:52, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a lot. They look to much like neat circles-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:12, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

And the shoulder highlights are way too high. Look at my tutorial or Bluestar's for help.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  00:26, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Better?, are the changes showing up? -- Icecloud33  01:16, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

The changes are showing up. But they still look kinda strange. Get the brush size on 50, and choose the brush style with the faded edges. Then do the highlights Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:19, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Um, what should the exposure be set to Icecloud33  00:24, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, just 50 I believe. I think that's the normal setting Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:25, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Someone told me to put it on highlights because they wouldn't show up so, should it be set at 50 in highlights (that's what I used last time and they look a little bright Icecloud33  00:57, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Highlights always look bright on white cats. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:23, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Rock Beneath Still Water (CG) - For Approval
I know this is #41(whoa), but there's one discussion, four images in the 24 hour stage, and one to be declined. I really hate his tail. Why did Sharptooth have to bite it off? G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 10:58, January 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * I really like the mud lightning, but I think the ear pink could be red, or darker. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:45, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, his stumpy tail doesn't look right. There's no lineart to indicate where the tail ends. Try fixing that-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:25, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I like the coloring, but I think the tail would look a smidge less odd if it stuck out past the body a little bit. Not a ton, because I know it has to be short, but the way it is now it almost looks like part of the body, so if you made it stick out a bit it would be more clear that it was the tail. <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 21:12, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really understand what you mean. If you do that on a cave guard blank....As for the ear pink, I took the same colour which I used on Jag, as if I'm not wrong, that's the standard colour. If I am wrong, just tell me, and I'll change it. G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 05:01, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

But Jag isn't the same color as Rock. I can barely see the ear pink on this one-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:07, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I was looking at the tail in the wrong direction, but I figured out what the problem is after looking at the blank again. I think you just forgot to put the end of the tail in? It looks like the tail just vanishes... (Maybe it's my computer screen, since his fur is so dark) but I made a diagram to show what I mean. I think when you were erasing the tail you just forgot to put in a new end, like that. As I said, I'm on a semi-cruddy monitor right now, so it might be the screen not letting me see it, but... yeah... <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 17:31, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

No Insaneular, you're right. There's no end to the tail. That's what I was trying to say in my first comment.-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 22:41, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 09:28, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

The way you ended the tail looks odd. Maybe make it a bit longer. I dont really know how to describe what I'm talking about.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:12, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree with Ashshadow, can you make the tail a bit longer, so it overlaps with the front leg a bit? <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 21:17, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

It is supposed to be a stump. And I don't think stumps are that long. "...whose tail was merely a stump."– – G r  a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  – – Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 05:47, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah but maybe make the end more round. It looks to boxish-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:52, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

D'oh! Just ignore me, then. I was thinking just a short tail, not a stump. *fail* <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 12:06, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.– – G r  a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  – – Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 04:05, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the tail is better. But his hanuch is bothering me. Do them more like this maybe?-

-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:52, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.– – G r  a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  – – Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 09:46, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Icicle (K) For Approval


Hi! This is my first charart. It's Icicle the kit from the Ravenpaw's Path Manga series. Please leave comments and stuff so I can fix it. Also, as an apprintice I want to say Bluestar's tutorial was very helpful. Thank you Bluestar! I had no clue what to do! This isn't very good but like I said, it's my first cat. Tell me what to do and thanks! May StarClan light your path!Artimas Hunter 19:14, January 8, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Okay, first of all in needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail. Second, I see you've saved it in jpg format. It's a way better idea to save it in either png. or gif. Third, the background needs to be transparent right now it's black. Fourth, the eyes need eye white. Look at this for help--User:Icethroat21/Tutorials. Fifth, the ear pink is to hot pink, make it lighter and then blur. Sixth, she's supposed to be pale gray, with a white stripe on her forhead, a white chest, see here -Icicle She just looks white. Darken the gray on her pelt, and blend the spots where it's supposed to be white-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:23, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Glad I could help! Ok, go back and save it in your image program, but save it as a PNG, so the background will be transparent. You need to make the white mark very, very pale gray, and darken the pelt color. The ear pink looks too hot pink - see the chart on my tutorials for reference. He needs highlights, and the shading needs to be darkened/thickened. The eyes also need a glare (little white dot). See Icethroat's tutorials on how to do the eye. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆23:09, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for your edits! I changed it so it fits both of your suggestions!Artimas Hunter 17:11, January 9, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Better. Now blur the white parts.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 19:04, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?Artimas Hunter 20:02, January 10, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

This looks good =) You need to blur the white a bit more though - try looking at some other patched cats to see how much to blur. Also, the shading needs to be a bit thicker and blended in more. Look at Applefur's kit version for an example as to how I would shade a kit. Be careful not to blur the lineart though. This is a great start to a first image =) Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  20:30, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you so much! I think it turned out okay too. :D Is this better?Artimas Hunter 21:01, January 10, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

This is really good but, darken the earpink a tad.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:09, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Do you think this is better? I'm so excited for it to be approved! I hope it's soon!00:05, January 12, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Okay sorry if this goes into another chart, my computer's got a problem, anyways here is Icicle again for approval. Comment back! I think she's almost ready for approval but I am kinda biased on the opinion! :D Artimas Hunter 21:42, January 13, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Hi! I know I'm being really impatient but I'm bored and no one has comented for days. Would someone have mercy and comment PLEASE??!! I want her to be approved cause I made 2 other chararts that are ready to go when she gets approved.Artimas Hunter 22:10, January 14, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

The highlight looks too bright Icecloud33  00:25, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''I think you're looking at the white chest and think theyre highlights. The earpink color still isnt quite right, try a color like Tess or Husker and blur it'''.The font is actin up on me T.T Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:42, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you soooooooooooo much for commenting! i think I was about to explode! :D I see what you mean aboutt the font.....anyways, here is Icicle revised! Ashshadow is right, she has a white chest not highlights but if those were highlights they would be WAY to bright! What do you think? I'm so excited!Artimas Hunter 01:28, January 15, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

- Okay, I know this is my own image and I don't normally give them as examples, but you need to make the shading thicker and darker and blurred. You could also use Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  18:29, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sootfur (Ki) For Approval
I know this is the 41st one, but there are 1 or 2 join requests and like 4 with a comments before approval on them. So here is one of my favorite ThunderClan cats as a kit! -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 21:36, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shding alot more please. ☮★Fire★☮  Starclan watchs over me★ 22:12, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded... Better?  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 22:16, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

abit more.And the shading near the left side of the head looks weird to me. ☮★Fire★☮  Starclan watchs over me★ 23:46, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and darken ear pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:fushia; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:violet;">Icestorm I LIKE TACO BELL!!! 01:50, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, how's this? And FirePelt, what do you mean by it looks weird. If you could help me, that would be great.  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 14:24, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good, but the lineart is a little patchy, and the ear pink is hardly visible.-- Dark hallows 14:31, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Patchy how?  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 15:32, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks blurred in some places.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 19:04, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded... Anything else?  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 14:02, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, the ear pink is too large and barely visible, and theres no dodging. Otherwise, it's great! :D Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

I'm not sure about this, but highlights aren't required, although shading is, also I have blurred the shading to the max on pixlr, If you wanted to help me with the shading, that would be awesome, and about the earpink, what color should it be?  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 21:22, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

You're right about highlights, they're not required. And as for the ear pink, look at his warrior image for help on the color- Sootfur-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:45, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Soory, but uploads are disabled. I fixed the ear pink color though.  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 20:33, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuloaded. better now? -- Night whisker 98 Rawr! 20:24, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading on his hind foot. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:41, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Kit) for approval
Ok.... This is my first kit. I looked at the tutorials, and i'm not quite sure if I shaded, dodged, burned, and blurred right but..... I'm an apprentice, and proud of my work! :D Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

Try uploading it on here so we can see the picture without clicking on the link.-- Nightshine Let it snow! 01:39, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I tried, but It didn't work... Do you think you could save it and upload it yourself? Swiftpelt 04:01, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Got it. That's a very interesting file name though-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:44, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred more, and... it looks a little yellow.-- Dark hallows 14:28, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the yellow spots. Make the ear pink darker and thicken the tabby stripes.--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:fushia; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Icestorm I LIKE TACO BELL!!! 21:42, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is like, hot pink. Make it like his warrior image-- Brackenfur. And the stripes look way to much like thin veins. Maybe try and make them a little thicker, or bigger, then blur them. -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 22:00, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

The ear pink is much better. But his nose needs to be the same color as the ear pink, or at least really close-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:49, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nose fixed. Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

The Tabby stripes need to be blurred, and his pelt color looks a bit too orange, can you try and make it a bit more golden brown like his warrior pic? <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 00:46, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now it's about as golden brown as It can get. Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

Look at his warrior image and take the colours from there. Snowfern Snow! 01:44, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I gave it better coloring. Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

Okay, the color is a lot better. But the ear pink looks weird, one's smaller than the other. Please make them as even as possible. Second, the stripes still need to be blurred some. And third, the eyes look... strange. Like maybe some lineart was cut off? Look at User:Icethroat21/Tutorials for help on the eye-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:10, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Eyes fixed, ears fixed, stripes blurred. Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

Add a stripe to each of the front two paws, blur the highlights, and there's some lineart missing in multiple places. Also, the ear pink looks a little purplish, make it more pinkish or reddish. --  Icy -chan  16:56, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded A else? Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

The ear pink is too bright, make it more salmony. Second, blur his chest shading.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  02:26, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

Look at his warrior image for earpink color and blur chest shading more. -- Night whisker 98 Rawr! |undefined 21:11, January 14, 2010 (UTC) Brackenfur

Patchpelt (W)- For approval
Well, I wanted to do a black-and-white-cat. I tried to copy the elder image. Constructments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 03:11, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink and blur the patches a tiny bit more. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:fushia; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Icestorm I LIKE TACO BELL!!! 03:12, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ahh, this is really good coming from my horrible elder image. :) Anyway, thicken the shading on the white fur, and the ear pink doesn't need darkened, it actually needs lightened just a little bit, and made the some color as the elder image. --  Icy -chan  03:19, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Hawkey! Okay, right on his chest, there is a very straight, white line that runs down into the black patch on his chest. Turn the part of it that's on the patch black. Also, darken the shading a little bit more on the white parts of him-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:20, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sasha (Q) - For Approval
if somebody has it, please let me do it!!it took me time.and leafpool;s for comments before approval, so i think its okay..-- :) Ivy Hi there!! 11:54, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good, but you should either blur or burn the brown parts.. Then it will look perfect! Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

The shading looks a little lumpy. Blend it more.-- Dark hallows 14:25, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Can you darken the brown stripes and other markings a bit? They look a little lighter then the rogue version... <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 17:33, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks AMAZING!!!! I don't know how you get approval cuz I'm an apprintice but you should get it!!!Artimas Hunter 22:37, January 10, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Blur the belly shading A LOT.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  00:50, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.-- :) Ivy Hi there!! 10:44, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it some more. --  Icy -chan   ♥  22:07, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded.-- :) Ivy Hi there!! 03:06, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

She looks a little cross eyed. Try making the eyes like in Poppyfrost--  Night shine   ★  04:14, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, she looks a little cross-eyed, but overall beautiful-- QuailflightTheAVATAR! <font color="Black">Give me a mouse. NOW! 04:17, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.-- :) Ivy Hi there!! |undefined 02:41, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorreltail (Q) - For Approval


I know, this is image number 43 (:O). But lots are in the 24 hour stage. Feel free to decline due to image number. Anyways, here's Sorreltail as a queen! Awesome cat in my opinion. Comments? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆22:38, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I thought I had her reserved?-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:39, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Well, whatever. First, it looks nothing like her warrior image.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:41, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the very end of the back. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:fushia; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Icestorm I LIKE TACO BELL!!! 22:42, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Mouse - nope, you had her reserved as an apprentice, and just changed it, if you look at the history, I had her first. -sigh- I can't make it look like the warrior image, not texture-wise atleast, 'cause I got the colors from the warrior image. And, you didn't need to post yours here, as it looks even less like her warrior image. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆22:44, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred back shading. Better? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆22:46, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I know, that's why I said whatever. I didn't mean the texture, I don't know if anybody can do that, I mean the pattern of her fur. But I don't care about mine. I used it as an example. But, the side of the queen is the same side as the warrior, and her fur pattern doesn't look like her warrior image.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:53, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Mouse is right, it doesn't really look anything like her warrior picture. Here, look-- Sorreltail-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:18, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

You should let Mousetalon have it. She reserved it first. This one doesn't look like her warrior image. The white is supposed to be on her belly.-- Nightshine Let it snow! 23:40, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Right, this one should be declined, Mousetalon not only reserved it, but also hers looks more like her warrior pic. Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

HEY! STOP! She reserved it before me, apparently, and she could always edit hers.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:13, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

ENOUGH. If you get off your butts and check the history, you'll see that I reserved it first, Swiftpelt and Nightshine. I doubt you even looked to see who reserved it first. It's not your place to say things like that. Swiftpelt, you're a new user here, so please don't go around saying what should and shoudn't be declined. That's up to Bramble, Sandy and the senior warriors. Mousetalon had the apprentice version reserved, and changed it today. I've had her reserved as a queen for quite away. And about it looking like the warrior image. This happened with Lionheart as well, and I'm pretty sick of it. I'm not a copy machine, please don't act like I should be, 'cause I doubt any of you who commented could make a better one. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆00:24, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

And Swiftpelt, if there's anything that makes me mad, it's comments like yours. It's not your area to say this should be declined. Why don't you go check the history and see how wrong yoou are? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆00:25, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, It's just that they said it.... It's not like I meant to say anything against you... Sorry.... Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

Hey guys, calm down. You can take this to your talk pages and discuss it gently. As for it not looking like her warrior image, wer'e just trying to go for consistency here. Lionheart was coming out very well, and it was your choice to withdraw him. Just get to work on her, and at least try to make her look as much like her warrior image as you can-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:48, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Swift : -sigh- Sorry, I just hate it when people say stuff that they have no idea about. Night : As I said, I'm not a copy machine, and it seems like you guys won't accept less than that: a copy. I'll try to re-do it, but then it will probally look even less like her warrior image. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆00:53, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Not trying to "feed the flames" here, but I think if you make her belly white and focus the black and ginger on her back, that could make it look a bit more like the warrior image. (I think that's the main issue the others have with it, but correct me if I'm wrong). I don't think they're trying to say that you need to have the patches PERFECTLY, just that it does look a bit odd with the patches on the stomach (although none of them said anything about how you should change it, so I can understand why it was frustrating). I'm sure if you just did that, everyone could calm down... I agree that this is getting very out of hand. <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 00:54, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Bluestar, I didn't ask for them to say that stuff.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:00, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's not your fault Mouse. And I agree with Insane. If you tell me what to fix I'll be fine, but if you just tell me it needs fixing, I won't be that happy with you. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆01:25, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

If you look at the patches on her warrior image, you can see how to do them, that;s what I did.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:32, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Now why couldn't anybody have told me that in the first place? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆01:39, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There, I completley redid her. Better? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆01:53, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good. The one thing that I see is that the ear pink could be more darker so we can see it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 01:54, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

That is better Bluestar! Blur the shading and highlights, and then maybe daken the shading on the white parts of her body-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 01:58, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome, Bluestar :) That was what the people complaining were referring to, right? It was the only thing I could see wrong with it. <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 02:23, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I think I made the shading on the white too dark... -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆03:23, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine, just blur it some more.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 04:20, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the white fur, I can barely see it. --  Icy -chan  14:47, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. Icethroat, I don't know if it's just my computer, but the shading already looks really dark on mine. -- ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  17:16, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Also, the shading is dark depending on what angle you look at it for white cats, so make the brush size bigger and go over the shading you have now as well as adding some new shading (making it thicker), so it looks sort of like the shading on the white fur of Poppyfrost's queen image. --  Icy -chan  17:31, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? -- ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  17:37, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur the highlights on the tail.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  02:25, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading and on the fore arm and neck--  Night shine   ★  04:26, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is a shadow on the image.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:12, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - The changes aren't showing up... ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  21:09, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

...Ok now they are. Better? ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  21:08, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yep! But it's kinda hard to see the ear pink, maybe lighten it some? And then that small strip of ginger color on the very tip of her tail could be blurred more Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:03, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I got the ear pink from the warrior image, but I lightened it anyway. Better? ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  00:40, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfur (W) For Approval
I know this is over the image limit, but there are 10 with comments before approval (including Husker *Smiles*) and one problem thingy. So technically, this is 33 or 34... anyways... comments?  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 14:13, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I am so stupid! I forgot to shade it!  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 14:20, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Are you sure you can't lighten his fur even the tiniest bit? It's so dark I can't see the outline. Example: Blackclaw Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

To lighten it, I suggest you redo the image and color it a really dark gray that isn't so dark like the one you have. Then you can run the burn tool over it to make it look black. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 15:05, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Run the Burn Tool over the whole image?  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 15:12, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, Blackclaw means (I think) That you should make the base color of the fur a dark gray, so you can still shade it, but it still looks close to black. <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 15:51, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh... I got it now... Night whisker 98 Rawr! 18:09, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- this better?  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 22:22, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too thick. Thin it. Also, darken ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 01:00, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Night whisker 98 Rawr! 20:29, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks weird, it's gray. Try making it the color of the following- Molewhisker, Blackclaw, Hollyleaf, or Nightcloud  Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:32, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hareflight(W) - For Approval
I know this is wayover teh limit, but I've been waiting since new year's to post this up and each time I look there have been new images posted up. Feel free to take this out if it's way too much. Comments? Hidden -Valentine ღ  15:58, January 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * frowneth* This was MY image! But anyway, lighten it up a little. It looks dark brown. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 16:01, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The shoulder highlights look too bright. Maybe run the burn tool over a time or two? Swiftpelt How's the prey running?

I'm taking by that Hawkey that you're happy for Hidden to use this image? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  17:29, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The shoulders look concentrated. Make them wider.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 23:53, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-is this better? Hidden -Valentine ღ  00:16, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Runningstorm (W) - For Approval

 * Mufufu, Insane returns to PCA >D  I know this is pushing the limit even with a ton about to be approved, but I haven't done charart in AGEEESSS, and other people have been posting stuff too, so... yeah :P I tried to make it look as much like the kit version as I could, but I admit I am a bit out of practice. Comments?? <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚  16:05, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I don't remember the description saying he had a cream chest. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 16:08, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I know, but his kit version had that, so I put it on this one. <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 16:09, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Noo... his kit version doesn't have a cream chest either. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 16:10, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I took the colors exactly from his kit version. It does have a patch of lighter fur going from the chest to the muzzle. <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 16:12, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

He has a highlight on his chest, but that's it. Take off the cream chest, and replace it with a highlight. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 16:13, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I dunno, I kinda liked the way it looked with the lighter chest, but... I removed it now. <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 16:19, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Insaneular. It looked like a cream chest on the kit charart to me too.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:33, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing up, but I clicked on the image itself and could see the changes in the thumbnail, so make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and if the changes still don't show up try uploading a new file under Runningstorm.W.png or Runningstorm.warrior.png and put on the old file. (I think, that's what I saw Sandy say somewhere...I think that's what you do...) --  Icy -chan  17:25, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

lol, yeah. Find a new file name and mark the old one to be deleted - saves Bramble and I having to go through the unused files deleting them later - did you know that there were about 700 before we went through them recently? (I actually forget how many times I marked an image with the delete tag...) That was a fun job =) Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  17:27, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, it should be the newer one now. I still liked the lighter chest though, Plain tabbies look so... plain XD But I suppose we can't put in things it doesn't say. And, Icethroat, I used the ear pink color from the kit image, so I thought this would be okay? (even though it is a bit pale) <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 18:15, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Great! Just blur all the shading. ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  20:50, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded made ear pink a bit more pink and blurred more... <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 01:01, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --  Icy -chan   ♥  22:12, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q)- For Approval


There are many pictures about to be approved. I used the same colors as the Speckletail elder I made-- Nightshine Let it snow! 20:53, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good, Nightshine:) Blur the marking on the tail tip more, though. -- Hд₩ ₭₮д  £O₦  22:01, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred the tail tip.-- Nightshine Let it snow! 23:47, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks strange. Blur it more.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  00:45, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I redid the ear pink-- Nightshine Let it snow! 01:10, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

She looks great. (: Just blur the shading on the belly and tail. ß  ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  20:49, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred belly and tail--  Night shine   ★  01:14, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on her face and soulder is brighter than the one on her haunch. Other than that very good. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:37, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I added more highlight to the haunch  Night shine   ★  02:21, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Dappletail (E) - For Approval


(M) - She's so sweet! *huggles*

Long story short, I got Photoshop for Christmas and had trouble installing it. I didn't want to do this image until it got installed. So now it's installed and I got to do her.

There are five images in the 24 hour stage and this is the fourth over the limit so I thought it would be okay. I'll take it down if it isn't.

Constructive criticism?

Oh...my...gosh... This is awesome, Mosswhisker! I can't really see the ear pink, though. Lighten it a bit, and this should be ready:) -- Hд₩ ₭₮д  £O₦  22:06, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Cool she looks like a reverse tiger! I agree with Hawktalon about the earpink.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:10, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful!-- Nightshine Let it snow! 22:13, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Aww, thanks guys! *Hugs* I lightened the ear pink, and there was a small strip at the top of the image that wasn't transparent, so I fixed that too. (It might take a while for the changes to show up though.) Anything else I should fix? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:20, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still seems alittle odd to me.Make it alittle lighter. ''' ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ    Have a happy Valentineღ |undefined 00:54, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Moss, I'm not sure if I'll get to call you tonight, so I'll comment here. OMSC, this is good! I take back everything I ever said about fat, lazy, or sitting on hindquarters! But I do agree with firepelt about the ear pink. It sort of looks... gray. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:36, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks! Lightened the ear pink again and fixed some pixelation on the haunch while I was at it. Does the ear pink look any better? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:13, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome. But, to complain about the ear pink agaian, it looks a bit too purply (I know it's not a word. :P). Make it like Yellowfang's color. ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  20:47, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hm. . . just make it lighter and make the brush thicker for the ear pink I guess.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  03:04, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thornclaw- For Approval
Since there are three discussions, I decided to post this. But if need be, I can take it down. =) Comments? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:24, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a little bit. --  Icy -chan   ♥  23:05, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look a little strange. Is there any white in them?--  Night shine   ★  01:19, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nice tabby stripes! But, make the eye like on Squirrelflight's apprentice image, or Jayfeather's medicine cat apprentice picture. There's also a highlight by the front leg closest to us that looks like it needs blurred. ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  20:42, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 23:56, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --  Icy -chan   ♥  03:05, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oakheart (W) - For Approval
Take this down if it is past the limit. There are discussions, and other things with "comments before approval?" or getting approved. Other than that the title says it all. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 22:34, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

All of the shading needs blurred some more, and the shading on the midriff needs thickened. --  Icy -chan   ♥  23:06, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Icy! Well, the ear pink also needs blurring.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  03:50, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the shading a lot. Maybe add a few highlights? Also, the ear pink needs darkened and blurred - I can barely see it. ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  20:36, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, working on it. Bluestar: I did add highlights. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 20:49, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Then you need to darken them. I can't see any on the haunch, tail and forehead. ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  22:42, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the overall body color more of a darker red like his deputy picture WoodClan 00:16, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the coloring is fine, maybe darken the shading a little though?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:17, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? Is the changes showing? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 01:01, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:35, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! Highlights too? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 23:11, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, a tad. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:23, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Working on it. And WoodClan, I copied the pelt color from Echo's image. I think it's just the highlights that's bothering you. ;) (It happens to be A LOT) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 21:56, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Too much highlights on the tail. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  00:25, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

How do I get rid of them? But anyways '''Reuploaded. '''Are the changes showing up? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 00:45, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (MCA)--For Approval
You might remember this....LOL, I completely redid the shading today. I thought I'd be safe, if not, take this down. Anyway, comments? Snowfern Snow! 22:53, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a little bit more. Also, add shading to the herbs:if there's any I can't see it, add it either like you did to Gingerfrost on PCWiki (with the different colors), or add the shading like on my tutorials. --  Icy -chan   ♥  23:11, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Snowfern Snow! 23:27, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really see the color of her eyes.--  Night shine   ★  01:36, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look a little strange. Blur them a bit. On black cats, if the highlights won't blur any more, a little trick is to run the smudge tool around the edge of the highlight then try blurring it. ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  20:38, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded--how is she? Snowfern Snow! 23:46, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, and the shading on her haunches more-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:55, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 23:21, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the shading is better. But the ear pink looks a little weird, it's like solid on one side and on the other it's blurred. Make it more triangular, then blur it all Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:29, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How is she? Snowfern Snow! 23:34, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look as if you've changed anything Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:06, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Snowfern Snow! 11:37, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Graypool (Q)- For Approval
There are a few images up for approval, if I'm too far up go on and decline. . . well, do I need to add scars? Because she was an elder with scars and such, but was she a queen with scars? Hm. . . comments?-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  03:49, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is very nice Mousetalon! But the eyes look very strange, could you maybe do them like these? Splashnose, Lilyfur-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:42, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I don't think you need to add scars.--  Night shine   ★  04:50, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, Nightshine's right about scars. I bet she got those after she left the nursery-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:31, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes do look a bit strange. Make them like in Icethroat's tutorials, or like Nightfall said. The highlights and the tail and face could be blurred a bit more. ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  20:39, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else?-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  00:23, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

There is a random black line near her face. She's really good. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:33, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that was a result of my suckish typing. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  00:07, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --  Icy -chan   ♥  03:02, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Smallstar (L)-For Approval
Okay, I have been waiting for forever to put him up. He's been finished for like, three weeks. But, if you think this is to far over the limit then I'll take him down. But anyway, I got his coloring from his kit version. Comments?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:54, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on his leg? And make the ear pink smaller. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 00:56, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the shading on his legs as much as I could. And as for the ear pink, it's excatly the same size as Sunstar's approved leader image-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 01:01, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I love it!--  Night shine   ★  01:08, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

On the black patch near his neck, the blurring seems kind of sudden. Blur it some more.-- Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  03:38, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred it, is it better?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:39, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the hind leg (haunch?) looks too dark, try lightening it some. (The hind leg with black fur.) --  Icy -chan   ♥  22:23, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better? I ran the dodge tool over the shading there a couple of times. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:10, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

River (Lo) - For Approval


I've been waiting forever to put him up. Since Wing was just approved, here is River as a loner. I'm super proud of him - I think this might be my best image ever. :) ß  ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  23:31, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! But the blur the shading and highlights more, they look a tad lumpy Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:36, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ah, how I hate Pixlr's blurring tool! -.- Anyways, better? ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  00:36, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller and darker. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:18, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Willie (R)- For Approval
I saw plenty of images for approval, and several pages are discussion pages, so here he is, the tom from Shattered Peace. Comments? Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  00:42, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a little strange, like in some parts of them there is a tiny spot that is thicker than the rest of the stripe. Try thickening them, then bluring them. And then the shading needs to be blurred some, and I'd add a little more shading around his legs and belly. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:09, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, stripes, and shading some more. -- Night whisker 98 Rawr! 21:08, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Blanks - For Approval


Ok here are the Sharpclaw blanks from left to right it short hair male, short hair female, long hair male and long hair female. What do you think? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lightblue; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-darkblue: 1em; color:darkblue;">AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 01:10, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

These are great! Maybe for the long haired you could make the face a bit shaggy.  Night shine   ★  01:13, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Do you mean like add couple lines like what on the chest to show the fur? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lightblue; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-darkblue: 1em; color:darkblue;">AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 01:17, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah.  Night shine   ★  01:43, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded how is that? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lightblue; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-darkblue: 1em; color:darkblue;">AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 02:50, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, these are really good, but I think Hawktalon (Or Flamingomom) had these reserved first. The date says Jan. 11 Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:02, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's great! But I guess Hawtalon did reserve it first. Maybe these could be something else? But there is nothing else  Night shine   ★  03:03, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I guess you could ask Hawktalon if you could keep these. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:05, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Shot I looked but I guess I missed her. I spoke to her know I'm waiting to hear back. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lightblue; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-darkblue: 1em; color:darkblue;">AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 03:34, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I kinda dought Hawktalon's on right now. You might have to wait until tomorrow Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:28, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

i heard back from Hawktalon she said that i could have it : ) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lightblue; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-darkblue: 1em; color:darkblue;">AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 21:44, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thickin the line art for the features such as eyes and nose. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:46, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Really good! But maybe thicken the pupil in all the eyes. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:MidnightBlue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;">Wetstar Taylor Swift! 22:13, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ok before I edit all of them here is what one looks with thicker lines on the featues and thicker puplis does it look better? Personaly I like the first ones better <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lightblue; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-darkblue: 1em; color:darkblue;">AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 22:19, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure about the pupils but I think the features look better. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:28, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I've got a few things. First of all, they all look kinda sad, like their whiskers are all droopy and their eyes are flat. Both the ears and paws are too round. Sharpen the ears some, and as for the paws, make them a little more flat on the bottom. And then their elbows look a little too flappy, make them a little straighter Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:13, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

ok how is this? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lightblue; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-darkblue: 1em; color:darkblue;">AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 00:33, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think the "eyelashes" on the females should be at a more horizontal angle--  Night shine   ★  00:43, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded like that? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lightblue; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-darkblue: 1em; color:darkblue;">AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 00:55, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

That's better!--  Night shine   ★  00:58, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (W) - For approval
Evanphoto 12:35, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken shading. Snowfern Snow! 12:42, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:57, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading. --  Icy -chan   ♥  22:19, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? Evanphoto 11:46, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Birdflight(Q)--For Approval
Here she is-my first queen! Comments? Snowfern Snow! 12:45, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, that's really good...Nothing to point out...My prediction is this is gonna be approved in less than a week!-- QuailflightTheAVATAR! <font color="Black">Give me a mouse. NOW!16:00, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are too light. Make them darker like the warrior picture. WoodClan 17:56, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

WoodClan's right. She looks nothing like her warrior image. She's to golden colored. Make her like a creamy brown. The stripes nedd to be thicker and darker, and the ear pink needs to be lighter. And also, the eye farthest from us looks very strange. Make them both like the ones on Icethroat's tutorials Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 18:38, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks Quail. Anyways, is she better? Snowfern Snow! 12:29, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yup. Maybe make her eye and earpink a bit darker. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:16, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading a little bit more, and make the stripes touch the lineart. --  Icy -chan   ♥  21:48, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Ki)- For Approval


There are a few in the 24 hour stage. Take this down if there are too many--  Night shine   ★  01:38, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, this is good. But blur the patches on the chest and make the eye color lighter, so it matches her apprentice image. The white hing leg also needs some shading. ß ą  է  ω  ï  и  ց  01:52, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I blurred the chest a bit more. lightened the eye color and added some shading to the leg/foot--  Night shine   ★  03:34, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Her hind leg visible should be ginger. It's on her apprentice image. Snowfern Snow! 12:13, January 15, 2010 (UTC)