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Furled Bracken (L) - For Approval
Here he is! Comments? 17:09, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and blur the stripes a little more. They look softer on his other images. 17:48, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:00, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there are more stripes on the ancient and sharpclaw. Also, smooth the shading some more everywhere. 18:52, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Okay, I added a tail stripe and a haunch stripe, but if this needs more stripes still then I'll add more. :P 19:18, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I really think you should add stripes at least to the tail. There are 13 stripes (I think I counted right) on the tails of both of the other images, whereas this only has eight, which is significantly less. 20:14, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes look blotchy, and the shading, I can't tell the difference. Did ya smooth it? 21:35, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Well, I sure did try! :) 21:47, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The face stripes don't appear to match the other images

Reuploaded I'm going off of the ancient image. 22:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in and say that the sharpclaw image is first in the set. 22:54, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah. You gotta match both of 'em Shy. Also, well done on the approved images of yours. I'm genuinely proud of you on your progress. 22:56, 6/06/2017

Perhaps you could give some shape to the haunch shading? Also, the shading seems to be leaking in some places. 18:40, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you so much, Broken! 19:38, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add more stripes to his --> leg or haunch thing? And his like shoulder chest area? It has more on his other images Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded 21:08, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking away from the line art in a few places all around the image.

Can you please redline them? 01:42, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I mean, it's sorta,,, everywhere

Reuploaded 17:56, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the hard-edged lines in the earpink, and smooth out all the shading all over the image, it doesn't look different then the other uploads where I've told you to smooth it out 19:33, 6/08/2017

Reuploaded 20:11, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

For the stripes on the tail, especially the part closest to the body, can you make them reach the lineart? Some of them seem to just stop a little before the lineart. For the stripes on the main body, can you make them taper a bit? 16:19, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:20, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the stripes. 18:13, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little and smooth out that bit of shading on the back

Reuploaded 19:34, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the right front leg. 12:48, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:16, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

I still think that the stripes should be tapered a bit. 19:38, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:21, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hard-edged stripe. 01:59, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pupil? I think you put a highlight over a pixel in the pupil, and if the blank has set pupils, you can't change them. (Unless putting a highlight over the pupil is fine, idk, all I know is Snowed said no changing the pupil if it's pre-set

Reuploaded Yikes! 02:27, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes seem to be longer on his other images

Reuploaded 23:11, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere 00:46, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:14, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes appear sharper/less smudged on his other images.

Reuploaded 20:07, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? ErmineGlow (talk) 21:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Smooth shading near the rear?(No rhyme intended! :P) 21:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad, and define the light on <-- paw. Also, I belive there is leaking shading on --> back paw, and eye color leaking outside the lineart. 21:39, 6/06/2017

Reups Thanks Shypaw! And broken, the front paw you're talking about isn't supposed to have any light on it. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, maybe add some shading to the <--- ear (just a tad) and darken the nose colour? 22:15, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think there is any nose color, and if there is, define it a bit 22:33, 6/06/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the front paw farthest from us. Also, lighten the shading a little bit? 22:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I'm confused with your shading placement. The shading on the tail, back, and chest/neck area indicate that the light is coming from <--- (from the right/behind the cat) while the legs, haunches, and head indicate that the light is coming from the ---> (from the left/in front of the cat). I believe you're going to have to switch one of these in order for it to make sense. 23:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I switched around the shading. Is it better now? --ErmineGlow (talk) 13:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading around the belly and definitely the face shading need to be swapped now. Also, define the light on the closest hind paw.

Vec said that if I only switched on of the shading parts around, I would be good. I switched around the legs and haunches, so I don't think I need to swap the chest/belly and face shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I made a mistake (mostly because I was super tired when I wrote that, but that's not important); the head shading needs to be swapped (covering more of the <--- face with the light coming from the <---). Don't only just take my word. That's why there are other people here. I'm bound to make mistakes (like I just did). Danny's got a good eye for critiques. As for the belly shading, I personally think it's optional (artist's choice) for this shading perspective. If you're keeping it, I think it should be swapped so it hugs the foreleg instead of the hind leg. Or you could make it just emcompass the lower part of the belly. 23:28, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

The shading's leaking a little bit on the lower chest and the haunch, and I think the earpink might be layered over the lineart in ---> ear? 22:35, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on his back and some in the upper left corner of the image. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 13:34, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and the closest back leg/paw

There's some waste on the back and above the head. 19:04, June 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * Opps, I didn't mean leaking, what I meant was waste! Lol. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 19:11, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There is still some shading leaking on the back leg closest to us. 13:00, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:21, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's leaking shading almost everywhere, see here http://vvcap.com/sJTZiQGhuRX 09:38, 6/11/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:37, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define <--- earpink. 18:15, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:49, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Add some light to the back leg furthest from us? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 23:46, June 12, 2017 (UTC)


 * Not light, I mean shading. My bad. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 01:01, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:32, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart on the haunch a little bit

Re-ups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:26, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is still leaking on the haunch. 01:33, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

The highlight in the eyes needs to be in the provided hole in the pupil I think

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:10, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste all around the back. 23:22, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:25, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the closest back paw. Not the leg, just the paw

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:46, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten shading a little.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:07, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 20:35, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch and the back area above the haunch some^^

Reups Just Re-did the shading because I didn't really like it. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:45, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Defined some of the shadingErmineGlow (talk) 16:52, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the chest, front leg closest to us, and the haunch. There are also light-colored pixels on the back leg closest to us, which should be removed. http://i.imgur.com/u5QxPBc.png 20:48, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:21, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

This is looking nice so far! Define the shading depth on the closest front leg?

Can you define the tail shading?

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:23, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Blossom (W) - For Approval
I'm pretty sure putting this up again is allowed, did what was said after the last reupload before this was declined because of lack of work. 13:53, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the neck shading

Maybe also curve the neck shading at an angle or something. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:56, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

I think if Branch smooths it, Cosmo, it might fix the issue without having to alter it any further. I've had the same problem countless times before and smoothing usually fixes it.

so i think to match her other images better you should try and recreate that "smudgey" affect as opposed to the blurry look they have now. in my personal experience, it will save you a lot of hassle if you redid the patches with the style of the other images in mind and smudge them towards the flow of the body with a hard edged 1px brush (i think thats what the OAs of the other images did?). ofc if you dont wanna redo the patches thats perfectly fine, it's just i think it will be more convenient to do so since it unfortunately, as much as it'd look nice as a stand alone image, doesnt really match the other present images rn   Life actually sucks 24/7   so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:13, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smoothing it didn't really make much of a difference, so I just angled it a little bit like Cosmo said to do and smoothed it quite a bit. I didn't totally redo the patches, but I smudged them more. 17:50, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the closest front leg shading

Reuploaded 19:59, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Mind smoothing out the neck shading a bit more? Also Re: your comment from before Danny commented. Sometimes smoothing it out does fix the problem, but it appears in this case it didn't. I just know what a pain tweaking shading to curve more can be, so I tried to see if there were other ways to save you what can be quite an annoyance; I've had to do that a lot to my earlier images.

Reuploaded 16:44, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Ok so, I recommend lowering the opacity of the neck shading. Sometimes blurring it over and over or curving it (especially on white cats) doesn't work. In this case I feel like you should lighten it and it might do the problem.

Reuploaded 14:05, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Rain (TAQ) (Alt R) ~ For Approval
... this looks extremely creepy. Anyway, this is an alt for the missing eye, but everything else is the exact same as the other image, since I was told I could do that like it is in Percy's case

There should be pale fur covering it

Reuploaded there is pale fur covering it and the surrounding area^ I changed the color a bit, but it's definitely there

I feel like the eye socket should be there still. I know the eye is gone, but the socket should be left behind imo <span style="">21:18, 6/16/2017

I agree with Broken. 21:48, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

no, it shouldn't. it literally says it covers where it used to be. that goes against he description. 22:04, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, didn't see that. It's fine then. 22:12, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the scars or something? it kinda looks like a streak of pink paint (sorry if this is offensive :T)

Would adding lineart to represent the fur covering the eye be a good idea, or nah? I'm not totally sure, but wanted to pitch the idea.

Think so. Because just a patch of color seems strange imo. Hoping I don't sound offensive <span style="">06:03, 6/17/2017

yeah i agree with using linear art. or if spookycat doesn't wanna do that she should at least make the scar a more defined shape :)   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:14, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, the description doesn't say scar, and just says a patch of pale fur, so there's a limit to how scar-ilke I can make it without being contradictory.

Just gonna say, so I don't have to tweak it later, we just approved a tweak nomination for the Tribe Rain for removing the pupil because he has a missing eye, and the pupil shouldn't be there. Isn't this the same case or something, because I just added the pupil back in and just covered it with pink but he has a missing eye too

That's why I personally believe the socket should be left, but pale fur covering it. <span style="">22:03, 6/17/2017

But if it says pale fur is covering it, you won't be able to see the eye socket.

Then prehaps there should be a little indent to show where the socket would be? Like a tiny bit of shading? <span style="">02:36, 6/18/2017

Reuploaded Yeah okay thats what I originally thought, so I removed the socket again. Also, I added a tiny bit of shading where you suggested, but the description itself says pale fur covering where the eye was and adding too much there would darken it and therefore make it not pale anymore.

Cedarpelt (RC) (Star) - For Approval
Idk. <span style="">19:34 Sat Jun 17

Lighten up the shading on the head, or at least smooth it out a little bit. Also, I think the stripes are a little bit thinner on the warrior and kit images. 19:43, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading and stripes. I didn't like the way it looked anyways. <span style="">19:56 Sat Jun 17

This is probably because of the shading, but I'm having a hard time seeing if the entire muzzle and neck is pale? Ignore me if it's just the shading though. =P

It is the shading lol. <span style="">16:04 Sun Jun 18

Can you define the shading a tiny bit? This is pretty cool my dude 👌

Reuploaded Thanks dude ^^ <span style="">01:17 Thu Jun 22

Prehaps define the <-- earpink. Pretty as always Sun 👏 <span style="">06:46, 6/22/2017

Reuploaded I just moved it above the shading, since shading over the earpink is not required lol. <span style="">17:07 Thu Jun 22

Nettle (DTC) (W) - CBA
This was matched to the rogue. 21:56, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the ear <span style="">21:59, 6/17/2017

Yeah, I saw it and I already removed it. 22:00, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink 22:08, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:28, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

I think the pale part on the chest is just highlights on the rogue, but you might want to ask the OA about it. 23:22, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think that's just a highlight. If it is, it's a really thick one, so thick that it obscures the texture and everything. And the color there is much lighter than any of the other light parts of the image. But I'll ask Sorrel about it anyway. 23:56, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

I think Sorrel is inactive. If that's the case, then the loner and ES would have to be tweaked to match the rogue. 00:05, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Sorrel still comes around from time to time, so I think it's worth an ask. And as far as the other images, the chest is covered in shading on the loner, and I think there might actually be a bit of a pale chest on the ES? I mean, I don't want to get yelled at for asking for a second opinion, but I would like to hear what others think before I change it. 00:15, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

They can't possibly be highlights, as the rogue has a pale muzzle and chest and that is clearly not highlights. <span style="">03:13, 6/18/2017

It's still better to ask first, instead of assuming. If it turns out Branch is correct, then Ivy can remove it. It feels like you're forcing Ivy to change something/edit it without first finding out if what you're trying to get her to do is even correct.

Re-uploaded. All right, since Sorrel says they're probably just highlights, I removed the pale chest. 21:23, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Dew Petal (W) ~ CBA
shrug emoji 15:44, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the front paw closest to us prehaps. Love it Skt^ <span style="">05:15, 6/19/2017

reuploaded forgot i had it up 15:15, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Rabbitfur (Star) ~ For Approval
I'll just dump this here and fix up some things. Don't comment on that shoulder patch--I'll fix it up later.

Define the shading depth

the base is darker. There just appears to be a paler chest.

Define the tail shading Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:43, June 19, 2017 (UTC)chat

The stripes are darker too, I believe. 21:26, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

(Just gonna jump in and add that it appear as though you used to pale color as the base, and the base color as the stripes, to clarify.)

I think the elder has texture <span style="">23:00, 6/19/2017

Can someone clarify the texture thing? I looked to see if there was texture, and I didn't see any.

I definitely see texture.

Also, the paws might be pale too, but you probably want a second opinion considering they're under shading on the elder.

re-up Texture = pain in the butt.

There's gray inbetween the tail bend <span style="">00:48, 6/20/2017

Smooth shading depth and the stripes on the head should be thicker. This is really cute, Star. 00:53, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

The chest and muzzle need to be pale. 01:54, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I left the face stripes alone because I'm pretty sure they're the exact same thickness. (thanks Shy)

There's still that grey patch where the tail is wrapped. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 15:31, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps you could lighten the shading on the head? The stripes kind of fade into the shading. 16:56, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

I think the stripes are still a bit lighter than the other images. 17:35, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add a little shading to the <-- ear, seems kinda flat imo. This is nice my dude Star, good job <span style="">03:53, 6/21/2017

Maybe smooth the shading on the base of the tail, or lighten it? Either would be good.

re-up For some reason the stripe layer's opacity was like 60 and I was so confused. XD

Smooth the flank shading a little? <span style="">21:23, 6/21/2017

Define shading on the <-- shoulder, lighten tail base shading. Also, smooth the shading on the bottom of the chest.

re-up 10 layers and counting. ..

Birchbark (App) ~ CBA
Here's Mr. Beige bby. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 15:05, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the closest back leg, under the haunch?

'''Re-uploaded. '''Also, added some more shading on the other legs. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:13, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Nicely done^^ CBA?

Zelda (R) ~ For Approval
someone send help

Define the shading depth

Re-uploaded

Might just be the tint, but is there any light on the tail? <span style="">05:29, 6/20/2017

yes, but it's hidden by the dorsal stripe. and i also added a highlight there even.

Smoothen out the shading on the tail. 04:51, June 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i tried

Maybe blur the highlight Fox <span style="">06:44, 6/22/2017

Re-uploaded

Firestar (Alt. D) ~ For Approval
He was shown as solid in the YS manga, which is set in Rising Storm, and Firestar is deputy at that time. All colors from alt apprentice, which got all it's colors from the alt leader. Comments? 17:38, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's some leakage on -> ear. Good job! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 17:40, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. 17:42, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth on the legs. 17:56, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:17, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 19:27, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:19, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paw closest to us prehaps <span style="">21:15, 6/19/2017

Reuploaded. 01:07, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink 16:54, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:58, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Wolfstep (Ki) - For Approval
The stripes may look intimidating on the other images, but on this blank, they aren't literally the worst thing ever. Nice.

I don't think the white on the tail on the other images are that smudged. Cute kitty!

reups Wolfstep will always be the cutest kitty :^>

Is there texture on this? I think there is texture on his other images. It just doesn't look like it here. But he's so cute! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:34, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

He looks tinted purple to me, or maybe that's just my screen <span style="">05:53, 6/20/2017

reups There's texture, and I knew that, I just rushed and forgot it :P. + He was like, just a tiny bit purple, so I made it solid gray, but imo it wasn't a noticeable change.

reups Tweaked texture

Oatwhisker (TC) (Star) ~ For Approval
Went for sharp shading, and first time using highlights. Subtle, but there. I smudged shading then blurred, so I can't blur it much anymore, only a little. As soft as I can get it, basically. I like this eye style :) 03:01, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the ear pink a tad? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:02, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks, Reuploaded, I tried but I colorpicked and it's the colour that blends in, so... Hope this is better. 03:05, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Lovely kitty! ^^ define shading?

Reuploaded I did, but only a tiny bit. Sorry, but I can really really see it well...and I actually lightened it and removed some for it being too much. Not sure if it might be your screen or a glitch but it's quite noticeable for me. 03:10, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

I can see it fine. Smooth out the shading on the tail. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:11, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:22, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

I wish I didn't have so much problems with the earpink because I really wanted to work on this. There's some waste by the tail in the bend <span style="">03:28, 6/20/2017

Reuploaded 04:33, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading? This is pretty good! ErmineGlow (talk) 05:29, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

I can see the tail shading just fine imo <span style="">05:37, 6/20/2017

It wouldn't hurt to define it; I'm having issues making out where the shading stops and it looks like the entire tail is engulfed in shading.

Maybe define the eye depth a little? 17:37, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:24, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Mallowfur (E) - For Approval
LOL THIS IS SO BAD PLS DESTROY ME THX 11:21, June 22, 2017 (UTC)

Defibe the shading Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:37, June 22, 2017 (UTC)chat\

Nah this is pretty. The stripes on the star are a bit softer, so smudge them a little.

I feel like the stripes would be barely visible if they are smudged again. They're pretty soft as is, and the pattern could fade into the shading or fur if they're smudged anymore. <span style="">20:12, 6/22/2017