Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Poppyfrost (K) - Redone
Colors picked from Sorreltail's kit Moo (talk) 08:24, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you dull the shading tint some, and maybe smudge the blotches a bit more? 19:04, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sure! I just cant get on my computer for a few hours! Moo (talk) 23:36, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 06:53, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

There should be more variation in the dapple size and shape, and the patches should be sharper than what you've currently got too - if you'd like I have sorreltail's warrior file handy (which is the master design/colours)

I dont think i know how to make them sharper and still looknatural... Moo (talk) 22:18, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Just give it a go, it doesn't hurt to just just try it - after all, this place is for constructive criticism so we'll be able to help you to get it looking right if it needs it. Again, I can offer the file I mentioned above that might help getting it to look right.

Thanks! '''Reuploaded! Moo (talk) 08:42, October 13, 2019 (UTC)'''

The patch placements have some differences from Sorreltail's kit, notably on the face/bum etc

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:13, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

From Sorrel's kit, this is missing the ginger patch on the << side of the haunch, and I believe the white eartip on the << ear could be defined

Still working?

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 20:46, October 22, 2019 (UTC)

Add/define the orange on the tail. Also, remove the white eartip, as Sorreltail's warrior, the first in the set, doesn't have it. 05:57, October 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 04:00, October 26, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the tail needs to be defined; the previous upload has now made it a little flat. -- 22:12, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Tallstar (R) ~ Redone
OA was me. redone to match official art

the belly on the deputy only seems to be on >> this side of the image, with black being under the front arms?

can you add some shading on the << front paw and smooth it on the >> front paw?

Re-uploaded

Could you recede the white patch just slightly where it's right on the top of the haunch? It almost overlaps/touches where the tail starts, and the deputy doesn't show the two almost touch and all

The white needs to be removed from the back (cat's) right paw, according to the official description 23:28, 10/18/2019

Depending on what gets done with the nomination, he might not need any white paws. Please do not archive or make changes until the nomination is said and done. ​​

Tawnypelt (A) - Redone
OA is me 14:33, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

White needs to be white. This was a main reason for her images being done. Could have sworn I said that, but Fox must have not told you. ​​

I also think the brown could be darker to make it more black? 17:14, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

reup it is supposed to be white 01:51, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

still looks brown, and if it's supposed to be mostly matching to the tug and whatever art, the patches are much too smudged in comparison. the patches on the tail also don't really seem to match. 06:34, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

Im sorry hut why exactly does it have to match to the T to the official art? Cant burnt have a tiny bit of freedom with th pattern? 08:03, 10/18/2019

the entire point of the nomination was to match it to the art. that's what it says on the tweak page, and the only reason it was nominated to begin with was that she's one of the very few with an actual consistent pattern that was decided to be matched to. 08:06, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

As per David. That was why I brought it up, and the pattern needs to be matched. That was one of the requirements of it being redone. There isn't any creative freedom this time. ​​

I'm kinda confused about which style and which colors I should match, because these colors+style do directly come from the icon image (which has the smudgy style that I matched to). in addition, the facial patterns all differ from each other between the images. ill get to the body pattern and tail 15:34, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

The white needs to be brightened a lot more, btw. She is very clearly shown with pure white in her images. Anyways, I did say on the nomination that Echo's alternate warrior should have been the master pattern for this. I'm not sure why this was never mentioned in the approved redo list, but this is very much what should be done. This was the reason her set was nominated and approved to begin with. Colors aside, the placement and general layout of the image is what we're trying to go for here. I'm not sure which icon you're matching, but in this case it should be what's shown here, which is pretty much the best side view we'll get of her. The excessive smudging in this case contradicts what she's shown as, given that the pattern appears to be less smudged and more... pretty solid, for lack of a better word here. ​​

Tallstar (Star) ~ withdrawn
Redone to match official art. OA was Mounty 00:06, 10/19/2019

reups quietly <.< 00:14, 10/19/2019

the base colour should be #0b1213 for the black, to match the other images, and the white is a bit bluer - try #CAD8E5 with pure white highlights to make the textured appearance. Could you also define the shading depth in the >> ear? It's looking rather flat in comparison to the other areas.

Depending on what gets done with the nomination, he might not need any white paws. Please do not archive or make changes until the nomination is said and done. ​​

as title says. cya 21:10, 10/30/2019

Flipclaw (A) ~ Redone
OA is me. Redone per artist's choice. 20:23, October 30, 2019 (UTC)

Splash (KP) ~ Redone
All colors from reference images. Comments? 03:57, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Splash (Lo) ~ Redone
All colors from reference images. Comments? 03:57, October 31, 2019 (UTC)