Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 27

Gorsetail (P3) (W) ~ Redone
Okay, it was on the redo list because the patches need to be lighter and shading needs to be redone. OA= Flamingomom3 with a redo/tweak by Moonleaf. Comments? 00:07, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the patches on her front legs and hind foot closest to us darker. It was only a tweak. 00:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Tone done zee highlights please. 00:01 Tue Jan 10

Reuploaded. Deleted the highlight layer. 02:14, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Ivy, but... could you change the pattern? This pattern makes it look like it's a white cat with bad shading, sorry. :C 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not fond of the pattern either. =3 I'll redo it and have it up soon. 04:15, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There we go. Redid the patches and shading. I really like this now. =P I tried to make it realistic as possible, I looked at pictures of dual colored cats, and I tried to make the color realistic. 19:02, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

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Adderfang (D) - Redone
OA was Honeyfur and then it was tweaked by Maplepool. I wanted to redo them both, because even before the dapples were added, they didn't look much like each other. Thoughts? 00:45, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Shrink the earpink and define the shading. 00:48 Thu Jan 12

Give him a more realistic tabby pattern. All the triangle tabbies are being redone for a reason. 01:13, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid it with colors from his warrior. 03:16, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripe? He looks like he rolled around in mud (no offense, it just all kind of blends together) 04:12, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:20, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading 05:58, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

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Cody (KP) - Tweaked
Nine. Freakin. Layers. OA=Darkhallows and the collar needed to be removed, earpink tweaked 03:59, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck a little less ginger. Good job. :) Also, I know it's the artist choice, but is there any chance of you changing the eyes? Honestly, this style always creeped me out. That's just me though. I'll understand if you don't want to. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:35, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

The tail seems to be a different shade of brown then the rest of the body.. It also looks a bit ginger on the muzzle area. 18:28, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded -Eh, decided the tail and eyes were fine 02:39, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

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Echosong (KP) ~ Redone
The stripes needed to be redone. This was on the redo list. OA was Hiddensun and was redone by Rainwhisper. Comments? 01:58, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink smaller and blur it. - 02:41, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:58, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

The tail shading looks flat, pretty! 03:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Ivy :D DeRp I forgot the dark gray paws. 03:45, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Try to make the stripes curve around her back rather than flow in a diagonal line. 03:54, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I redid the stripes because Shelly commands it X3 04:37, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

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Deadfoot (D) - Tweaked
So. Much. Blurred. Lineart. X.X Anyways, there's was messed up lineart, as I said, the scar needed to be removes, and shading needed to be tweaked. Practically redone, but I did go through the tweaking process, so... Comments? OA was Darkhallows. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:49, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

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Aspentail (W) - Tweaked
This really shouldn't have been archived. There were still comments that hadn't been tended to. Anyways, just tweaked the tail. OA was Sandstar, then redone by Scarlet, then tweaked by Elorisa. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:49, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the tailtip more pointy. That was one of the comments that hadn't been attended to properly >.< 21:23, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

The changes weren't showing. They're showing now. This alright? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:15, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

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Birchfall (W) ~ Redone
I'm glad I could finally re-do this cat. o.o Comments? 01:25, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ze tail shading. Seems a little too dark. Lighten it a smidgeypoo? Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 01:32, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smidgeypoo? Oi. XD 01:38, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

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