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Sharpclaw (Ki) - Redone
M'kay, needed to be redone to match the deputy image. Original artist was moi. Kits are soo small! Dx 02:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

He's so cute! Spread the stripes out more. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  03:34, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose pink like the kittypet and rogue images. 15:10, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

The nose pink is fine since the rogue and kittypet are going to be redone. Blur the earpink a tad. So cute! ^^ 16:54, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white pixels in the eyes....white. XD Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 12:12, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:51, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give him the slightly lighter chest & muzzle like in his other images? Elork  13:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken the stripes just a tad to match the other images? 00:27, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:54, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tad. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:12, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 02:30, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W) - Redone
Okay, Willowclaw. OA was Bramble, then Sky. Was redone due to shading. :3 Comments? 17:46, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink a but. 17:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft, but? You may have been on that site too much xD Blur the shading and maje the earpink less red. Ugh, Willowclaw. I hated that redo xD Sky Everyone likez teh cats 05:08, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Maje? Sky, you've got it too. :3 Anyways, Reuploaded. 23:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit~ ☾ ~Pouncey~ ☽ 04:14, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 20:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 20:44, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose(MC) ~ Redone


Was told to redo. Ew...Comments?... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons, and make the ear pink bigger. 02:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, the patches... Try looking at Spiderstar for what patches ought to look like on short-furred cats. And could you go back to the old pattern? I'd rather not have to redo the MCA unless absolutely necessary. 02:29, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, define the shading so it actually shows up on the white, please. 02:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please go back to the old pattern. Redoing doesn't necessarily mean changing the pattern. There's no reason to redo his other images. Anyways, darken the gray to match and darken the shading all together. 18:30, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, me and another SM chat (not gonna mention names unless she tells me to) think this should be auto-declined, as it's not 80% complete. 20:25, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

It's at least over 50%. Maple, you have a week from the upload date (2:08 AM Wikitime on the 23rd) to get this over 80% before it's declined. 21:45, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Maple, are you working on this or not? 04:06, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

No i'm not, 'cause of the car wreck, im spending so much time in and out of hosspitals, and only have one arm...i cant work on this, 'yall, i'm sorry. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 01:07, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

If this is up for grabs for people to take over, I will. 05:50, 27, 02, 2012

Sorry to hear about that, Maple. Okay, DJ, you go ahead and take over. 12:46, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - Redone
I've always wanted to put this up. Original artist was Sparrowsong, with Bramble taking over, then Icestorm/Appledash redoing it, then redone by Frostheart which was declined, and then Rainfacestar took over, but she withdrew it. His stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 18:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ooooh, Lovely! ^^ Just blur and center the earpink and fix the paws and it'll be perfect. :) 18:23, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also define the shading a little? This is phenominal, great job! 19:07, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad (along with that Ivy said). This is amazing... I love it. Job well done. =) 19:31, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ... :')! 21:12, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry - and this is a beautiful image - but since I nominated him, don't I have claim to his images? I had an idea of what I wanted to do for his warrior, but I wasn't sure if we were going to redo him completely, so I held off until I was sure. This probably sounds really selfish of me, but could I please take over this image? You could do his apprentice or kit if you wanted to. 21:53, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think that rule has been integrated yet. 22:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

While it may not be a "rule", it's still common courtesy; since it was my idea, I thought I would get claim to it. You don't have to give it to me, but it would be much appreciated. 22:56, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'd rather keep this, since I really like it. You could do one of his other images. 23:19, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more 02:28, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and define the shading. 02:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:38, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He looks really green; make him more brown. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 03:24, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't look green to me o3o Define the haunch shading and enlarge the earpink. Sky Promises, promises 12:09, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty, Leaf! Define the scar and the light on the tail a bit more, please! 01:20, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Once you enlargen it, define the earpink. (Unless, y'know, it matches with the other images). 09:59, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think it has to match the other images, those are going to be redone anyways. 18:25, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Sky Promises, promises  13:29, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - Redone
First elder for me. ._. 03:06, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 03:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad and make it more triangular. c: If ya use highlights, tone them down a tad, otherwise just blur the shading like Cloudy said. *Is stupid Dx* Sky Promises, promises  06:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Maple? 20:44, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (W) ~ Tweaked
Blurred the highlights, fixed blurred lineart, and eye wasn't in depth. OA was Ashshadow with a tweak from Atelda, I think. (This is my first tweak so please tell me if I'm doing this right.) 19:12, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around. 01:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:59, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights. Also, I fixed the heading for you. 02:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't match his description at the moment. It says he's a dark grey tom, and now he looks like a light grey one. :3 When I nominated it, I was told to redo the colour too. 02:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (SC) (W) - Redone
Modified triangle tabby or something. x.x OA = Ashshadow with a tweak by Sweetflower. Sky Promises, promises 03:33, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Amazing, Sky dear! :3 Define the tail shading? 05:21, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tail shading on short hairs. >:U Sky Promises, promises 05:30, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the overall shading. Also, agreed on the tail shading. 'tis a pain in the "add", if you catch my point. ;) 05:56, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (Ki) - Redone
To match other images. 05:53 Sun Feb 26

OA was Icethroat (derp) 05:54 Sun Feb 26

Define the earpink a tad. <3 -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:09, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lionheart (W) ~ Redone
Redone to match the other images. OA was Dawnfeather I think and was tweaked by Sky. Everything is exactly the same as the deputy except for the tail and legs. Comments? 21:16, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is his warrior and apprentice different shades of golden? 01:31, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think I can see it too o3o Blur the tail shading. :3 *Glares at mane* Sky Promises, promises 05:24, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploade Eh heh Sowry Sky. The base coats are the same color o3o 05:52 Mon Feb 27 05:52, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft, it was evil anyway. 8F Define the top half of the tail shading a tad. *Likes stalking your images* Sky Promises, promises 12:46, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded XDD 14:47 Mon Feb 27 14:47, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

The uhm...lineart of the mane on the apprentice just looks different then this one. XD I'm so picky. 11:31, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

If you can make it look more like the apprentice (probably can, durr) maybe you should. Though you'd have to re-tweak the deputy. o3o Sky Promises, promises 13:28, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

This style matches the warrior fur style. The apprentice fur style matches the fur style on the apprentice. If I changed it, it would really fit with the warrior lineart. 23:40 Tue Feb 28 23:40, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Redone
I don't know if changes are showing, he needed to bbe redone to match apperntice image. OA = Bramble. 22:17, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading. 02:05, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Ratscar (W) - Tweaked
His scar needed to be defined, and since the torn ear on his page was a false cite - and had been since April - I redid the earpink. OA was Icethroat, with a redo by Atelda. 03:07, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

There's a lump of extra lkineart in his ear. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 14:04, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:24, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) - Tweaked
I personally think it needed to be tweaked more for the shading, but the stripe needed to be defined. OA is Evanphoto, with a tweak by Appledash. 05:54, 27, 02, 2012

Can you blur the shading a bit on his chest? 09:53, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

I thought I was going to get this... I nominated him. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:04, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the part of the stripe thats on his tail. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:03, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

There's some blank pixels in his torn ear. 23:25, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I don't like the shading on this, and transperant pixels are annoying. =P 09:36, 28, 02, 2012

I don't suppose there's any way to blur the shading on the front? It looks like a continuation of his stripe. •_• <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises  09:39, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripe on his tail more. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:03, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste in the triangle thingy. <333 20:59, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D) ~ Redone
I hate to take a reservation from someone I admire so much, but Wildheart's reservation time ran out and I did suggest this one for redo. So, I made her a straight up red tabby, I can provide a picture for anyone that doesn't believe that this is a realistic pallet for a cat. So no, I'm not toning down the red on the stripes, I like them. Comments? 18:58, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the stripe of orangeish fur going from her muzzle to her forehead? This ish purdy. :3 20:15, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Who's the OA? 8D. Define the shading and make the earpink a tad smaller. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 22:49, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Really, it's my own fault :P I've been so inactive lately I've had no time for making charart. Could you add a stripe on her ear? It looks kind of bare. <span style="">00:11 Tue Feb 28

But seriously this is beautiful. <span style="">00:12 Tue Feb 28

Re-uploaded. Thanks Wildy! <3 02:31, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful job Shelly! =D Blur the shading a bit towards the edges. <span style="">09:29, 28, 02, 2012

It's blurred to 100%, DJ. Thanks, though. 12:58, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad more red, it looks very gray. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 13:46, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:02, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (Q) ~ Redone
Since Scarlet said this could be a redo, that's what it is. OA is Nightshine, and the shading needed to be extended, the highlights blurred and a bunch of other small things which Cloudy can't remember. 8D 20:57, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

EDIT: I just realized how stupid that tail highlight looks... Imma gonna go and fix that nao. 20:58, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 00:37, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:31, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

LIghten and blur the shading. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 14:03, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:14, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Crowfeather (K) ~ Redone
Who's a cute little kit? Crowfeather is! Shading needed to be redone and the highlights were too think, so it was said to be a redo. OAs were QuailflightTheCat, Sandstar12, and Iceheart22. Tried a different shading style; will fix if recommended. 21:39, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose black/gray. ^^ Cute~ 21:41, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Cute little grumpy WindClan cat 83 Enlarge and define the earpink, and possibly put his eye colour over top of the shading if it isn't, so it don't get lost in the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 23:20, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

No offense, but the shading looks rather flat. 23:23, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Alt. Ki) - Redone
The changes may or may not be showing. OA Was Goldenpaw, and, it was a triangle tabby. Comment-o's? :P 23:18, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:36, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Wasn't he described as a she-cat at this point and time? 15:52, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeppers. I just checked. Nice catch. 21:02, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink ~ 21:20, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I like this one. =D Stripes needed to be thickened and blurred (I hope no one minds, I kinda smudged x3). OA was Sandwich989 with a redo by Mistystar. You may have to check file history to see the changes. Comments for improvement? 01:17, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (D) - Redone
It's a scoop of kitty Orange sherbert! OA was me and then redone by me. Stripes were unrealistic and let's just say, I'm a bit protective about my earlier chararts xD. Comments? 03:17, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head highlight/thing a tad brighter, and if there's a light source on the tail, define it. Also, *coughit'sHoneyleafnotHoneyfernchangedthatforyoucough*<font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 13:52, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded lol, thanks Sky! I think I did that last time I had this up too. 22:34, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Brightspirit (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandy, then redone by Scarlet. Stripes were unnatural. Loonie watched me almost the entire time..and so did Rain and Hazel. xD 03:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

If you're going to use a mackerel tabby pattern, she ought to have a stripe along her spine. 03:26, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Erm... it wasn't meant to be a mackerel, but, I'll make it one for the heck of it... I don't even know what kind this was supposed to be. I just made the stripes. xD 03:29, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno, Cloudy... I hate to say it, but those stripes seem rahter hard edged and give her charart a cold feeling that doesn't suit her. It might just be me. 03:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Eh. To each their own. But, of course, I don't want to offend anyone. Does this suit your fancy? Re-uploaded. 03:47, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe add some light to the forelegs, thicken and darken the stripes on the tail a touch and brighten and sharpen the ear-pink, please m'dear 03:59, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

'kay, I was having issues...so I tried something else. I've always admired the way Silverstream's alt warrior is, so I tried to use that as a base for what I've tried here. I wanted to match it the best I could, without looking like I copied it. I suck at tabbies... 04:46, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, hush, Cloudy! You do not! Maybe make the stripes around the eyes a bit thinner and make the ear-pink a bit pointier 04:54, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 05:02, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten her a little <3333 so pretty. 05:25 Tue Feb 28 05:25, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:32, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

There's a teensy bit of waste around her tail. Otherwise loverly~ <3 13:15, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe add a few stripes in the head area? It looks a tad bare. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 13:25, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <33  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:07, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:14, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (MC) - Redone
Redid the stripes so I guess this could be considered a tweak, but you can hardly tell. I'm also tempted to give him a white chest, cause on google images, a lot of gray tabbies are shown with white or pale chests. OA was Icecould and then I redid it 03:45, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

This is so purty <333 Enlarge the 'highlight' on the haunch. 03:50 Tue Feb 28 03:50, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye Sir! 03:54, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more and maybe desaturate it a bit? 13:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should give him a pale chest C:. Blur the highlight/lighter part on the tail. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:09, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Elo. Go ahead and see what it looks like. Also, blur the ear pink. 21:01, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. C: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 21:34, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't really like the pale chest idea much any more cause it'd mean I have that I'd have to redo the stripes. 22:46, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
I seem to attract solid gray chararts. This definitely isn't my best. Comments? OA was Echomist. Just a shading tweak. 20:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

What needed to be done, and who was the OA? Also, define the ear pink. 21:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:51, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Larkwing (MC) - Redone
I tried to mimic a classic tabby. Original artist was Dawnfeather, with a redo by Mistystar, and the stripes were unrealistic. 20:54, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the markings, if you don't mind. They seem a little too hard-edged. 20:55, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading please. Lovely job. 20:59, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also gave her a furry texture. I was expecting many more comments, but oh well! 02:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Fish Leap (TB) ~ Redone
This is my first to-be, and probably the only one I'll ever be able to do for the project, so... comments? 20:56, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Moonflower (W) ~ Redone
Moonflower <33 Redone because it was a triangle tabby. OA was Bramble with a tweak/redo by Leggy. Join.me w00t! Comments? 00:30 Wed Feb 29 00:30, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Holy craappppp..... O.o Darken the shading a touch and just my opinion, maybe make the stripes a pixel or two thicker. 00:54, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Woah. Blur the stripes just the tiniest bit. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  01:12, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dude. •_• Blur the tail shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 01:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat earpink. <3333  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 01:20, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (W) ~ Redone
I like this one. 8D OA was Sand, with a redo by Icethroat, then Icestorm. Reason to be redone was because it's an unrealistic dappled tabby. The file changes aren't showing yet. Comments? 00:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)