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Oliver (KP) ~ CBA
Eww

Smoothen out the shading by the < eye :) 05:09, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out all the shading, imo.

Define the ear pink just a tiny bit 01:59, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there shouldn't be quite so much shading on the left cheek, with the direction the light's coming from. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:58, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm late lmao xP Is it better?

CBA? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 22:00, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Bluebellkit (K) ~ For Approval
Sorry if this looks bad, or I am doing something wrong. ;-; Fallenice the Great (talk) 23:59, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. Maybe define the shading on the tail, legs, and back paw. 00:02, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Thanks Ivy! Fallenice the Great (talk) 00:08, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. 00:32, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Also, I changed the name to Bluebellkit.kit instead of Bluebell.kit X) Fallenice the Great (talk) 02:34, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the front legs please? 20:05, January 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading tint should still be darkened^^

''Updated. ''Fallenice the Great (talk) 15:08, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the shading a bit on the right foreleg and back paw. 00:41, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little on the chest, to show it's roundness, if that makes sense? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 03:12, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Fallenice the Great (talk) 13:41, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad. 19:36 Sun Jan 29

Shading is leaking away right above the foot that is the most towards right.--Shadowbright67 (talk) 16:12, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Changing heading as per promotion guidelines.

Whorlpaw (K) ~ For Approval
wow this was hard to shade. i'm not sure how to feel about this. ~Patch   feather~   19:12, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

I like it! My favorite part is the white "stripe." Breezy1235 (talk) 02:07, January 28, 2017 (UTC)Breezy1235

Breeze, please do not just comment for the sake of a complement. Please give advice if needed. Also, maybe read the rules if you would like to join, so you know. 02:13, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Looking good! Define the shading on the right front leg please? 01:44, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the flank please.❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 22:02, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Tinycloud (Q) - For Approval
00:22, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit 00:43, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but there's already quite a bit of depth and I was using the same eye color as her other images. 02:26, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Very pretty! Blur the shading at the top of the haunch a touch more and maybe smudge the ear pink? 18:27, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:51, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Sandynose (W) ~ For Approval
03:03, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Can you make the eyebrows more apparent and a little higher above the eye? 03:09, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 23:59, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Oakfur (R) ~ For Approval
guess who's back from hiatus hell 14:59 Sun Jan 29

Define the shading/light source. 19:41 Sun Jan 29

re-ups 20:58 Sun Jan 29

I feel like the shading should go up higher along the edge of the hip. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:58, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

re-ups 00:27 Wed Feb 1

Dawnpelt (Ro) - For Approval
And I actually started liking her in TaS too :| 18:44 Sun Jan 29

Could you smooth out the markings a bit? I don't think they're this sharp on the other images, though I could be wrong. 22:38, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I smoothed the edges a little bit but I'm not really able to do much more with them without straight up blurring them and they are more defined than that on other images. 01:24 Mon Jan 30

I think they're blurred, but not that blurred? I'm not entirely sure... I'd suggest asking Stealthfire, since I think she made the main pattern?

I'm just not sure 'cause the only one with really blurred stripes is the queen. And it was so long ago that they were tweaked that I don't remember which was done first lol. 15:18 Mon Jan 30

Waterkit (Ki) - For Approval
07:08, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs?

Re-uploaded 05:01, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the front right (our right) leg? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:57, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Foggy (Ro) (Ro) - For Approval
Howdy there.

Either I'm blind, or that's my screen, but define the shading on the back leg?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 13:26, January 30, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Which back leg? He's got two.

The one most visible to us...❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 13:38, January 30, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Re-uploaded.

So much better than mine. X) Smudge the Earpink a bit more? .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 20:43, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

can u define the shading on the front legs a little my guy 21:26, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the back? I can't tell if there is shading at the top..sorry if it's supposed to be that way❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 21:50, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Rileypool (W) - For Approval
Ehhhhh...I may mess around with the stripe placement later. :/ 17:25, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

On the other images, the black doesn't curve around the ear, but is only on the tip part, and the earpink is a tiny bit brighter. :) 17:47, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ^^ 17:52, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

I think the tail stripes should be a bit more jagged on the edges, like the other images

Reups 20:30, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Rippletail (SC) (Ro) ~ For Approval
First rogue...comments?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:02, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Lighten the shading a lot. Also, rememeber to have a heading, and don't align your images! .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:07, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart

Smooth out the shading. Also there's leaking shading throughout the image. 00:12, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

There isn't any color in the nose hole. Also, should the file be named "Rippletail (SC).rogue.png" ? 00:17, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste spots around the image; near the back of the paws and a spot above the back. 00:24, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Changed the heading to evaluation, again. I think this is still your first image... 00:39, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. This isn't my first image, but the other one didn't get approved'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:52, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

The alignments must be taken off. Someone has already said this. Also, there is still waste around the image, and between the tail and back leg. The shading is leaking away along the ears and tail, and all shading should be lightened. Nose color is still not there. :) 00:55, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out shading. Shadowbright67 (talk) 01:19, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading;; looks too dark for a white cat, and makes it seem like a dark gray/white cat

Re-uploaded❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:21, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

For the third time, do not align your images. :/ I took them off. 02:39, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry to nag you, but you still need to lighten the shading. Try changing the opacity. Also, there's waste by the front paw closest to us. 02:46, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! I also fixed the darkness :3'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 04:22, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Re-uploaded after I quickly noticed some waste above the tail-tip❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 04:28, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

You need to lighten the shading a lot. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:49, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! This is about how much I can lighten it before it gets a bit too light, I'm pretty sure'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 18:11, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

No, I think it wouldn't hurt if you lightened the shading a bit more and smoothed it out as well. 21:24, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! Apple's at it again'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 21:49, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Perhaps remove some of the shading on the <-- side of the --> back leg, since your light source wouldn't have very much there

blur the shading a lot more 00:40, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! Hopefully it doesn't look so choppy'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:43, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Curlypaw (A) ~ For Approval
First appie! ^^ Curlypaw. . .so. . .enthusiastic. :/ .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:04, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

The eye on the other image, mine, are much darker. 00:16, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups   .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:25, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Where is your light source? Can you please define it? It's hard to tell where your light source is with the shading on the legs. And I think there should be at least some light on the neck and back. 00:31, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:45, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge / smoothen shading a bit. Shadowbright67 (talk) 01:17, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Echomist (Star) ~ For Evaluation
So. . .I read the guidelines... I hope i did all this right. Ripplewave123 (talk) 01:44, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the eyes and define shading on the face :} 01:50, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the back..not sure what happened there❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:25, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

I don't think the base colour matches? It looks a bit cream to me? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:50, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more. Also, where is your light source? If it's from below, I feel like the top of the tail-tip, the top of the head, and above the forelegs should be shaded inside of the underise. If from above, then the bottom of the back should be shaded, not the top. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:56, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Grassheart (W) ~ For Approval


The stripes look a bit sharp to me..didn't check if it's supposed to be that way though❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 21:51, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Hmm... they are pretty sharp on the other images when I looked at them up close, so I want a second opinion before I mess with them.

The stripes do look extreamly sharp, maybe smudge them? 00:37, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Smokefoot (Star) ~ For Approval
22:18, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

If I can't do Smokefoot, someone else can. Define the shading on the tail-tip a bit?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 22:28, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Reuploaded 00:53, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Stonewing (Ro) - For Approval
Here's my second. :] 23:59, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Define the shading on the fank and maybe smooth it out a bit?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:00, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Blur/smudge the shading 00:25, February 1, 2017 (UTC)