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Hailstar (K) ~ For Approval
He's so cute :). Burntclaw (talk) 09:03, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded couldn't find the xcf file for it so I had to redraw it :/Burntclaw (talk) 09:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Hum... The shading seems a bit misplaced, there is some shading on his left cheek. Correct me if I'm wrong. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:04, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. By the way, I accidentally used my sister's account to re-upload the picture, so it will say it has been re-uploaded by The Fox Girl. Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups removed some waste.

Darken the base coat a tad, and define the light on the legs. 12:56 Sun Nov 16

Re-uploaded I'm pretty sure the coat color was fine... Cause I color picked from his apprentice version, but I darkened it like you said so. I also defined the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 13:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. 13:13 Sun Nov 16

Just removed it as soon as I realized after the re upload :'D Burntclaw (talk) 13:16, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy, smooth it out? 13:17 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups. Is it better? Burntclaw (talk) 13:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

It still looks rather blotchy; you can try blurring it with the blur tool at rate 100 instead of using gaussian blur, and it's causing some of the shading to recede at the lineart. I can't see where your light source is, either. Also, there's waste all around the image. 16:22 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups Completely re-did the shading. Never realized shading was so complicated :'D. Also removed all of the waste. Burntclaw (talk) 04:11, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's still waste The Fox Girl (talk) 04:30, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Burntclaw (talk) 05:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Give the shading a good blur/smudge. Look at examples of other solid coloured cats for help. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Not sure if I overdid it. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more, and define it in the legs. Also, every time you do something, make sure to select outside the lineart and erase on every layer, because there's still waste. 07:14, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I hope changes are showing, because the internet is being weird again. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:18, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make the eyes look a bit more yellow, like his Starclan image? Brick  The Bite of '87  15:50, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the eyes are fine, can you get rid of the waste and define the shading a tad please. 16:01 Mon Nov 17

Re-ups Not sure if I got ridden of all the waste Burntclaw (talk) 04:01, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Getting rid of all the waste can be a pain with long-furs. Zoom in really close to find it all. It's a smaller image so it won't be much of a hustle. Look especially around the spiky parts of the fur, there is one pixel wastes hiding there. Also, can you darken the shading slightly? --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:29, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm pretty sure I've gotten rid of all the waste. Just worried that changes aren't showing because of my internet -_-. Also darkened the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 05:56, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got it! Now, the shading is leaking away from the lineart, meaning it's not right next to the lineart. Even one pixel off is noticeable. Try even moving the shading to the right or carefully add more shading so it will be alined. --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:17, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I fixed the problem. XD Burntclaw (talk) 06:27, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got his left shoulder, can you do the same with the rest of shading? The rest of his side, legs and tail I think where it needs work.--Stealthfire star (talk) 06:34, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Jeez, I didn't know shading was so complicated! :D Pretty sure I got this right. Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I think with solid cats is especially focused. It's still leaking away from the lineart. Look really closely to see the gaps. Look at other pictures for examples. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:25, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 07:32, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Much better! At his side, lighten the shading slightly and make sure there is shading on his spiked fur and all his back paw. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:40, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I spy a little waste at his side The Fox Girl (talk) 12:18, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I made things worse -_- Also, accidentaly used my sister's account to reupload it again :/ Burntclaw (talk) 13:23, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Naw. It's fine, as an artist never doubt yourself, believe in your own work. I've been an artist(in real life. on here for only a couple of years) for many years, first thing I had to learn was to believe in my painting or drawing or even my image on here. Now that I've done my pep talk xD, it looks like the shading is receding from the lineart on the tail, and the back especially. If you add more shading along the lineart it'll fix right up. =) 14:04, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 08:41, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

Still seeing waste around the image. Sometimes when the fancy ways don't work, just take a size one hard-edge eraser and go erase it pixel by pixel. 16:00, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm pretty sure all the waste is gone. Also, I was just wondering, how do you become an apprentice? Burntclaw (talk) 08:54, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

If a senior warrior, deputy, or leader thinks you know what you're doing, they can promote you to apprentice. Which I'll go ahead and do. 10:56, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! :) Burntclaw (talk) 11:06, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

There's still a little waste underneath every hair spike on ---> this side. And I see a pixel or two in between his legs. 13:30, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups btw I used my sis's account to upload it Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and face shading some? 21:27, 11/24/2014

Smooth out the shading, too. And I think there are still a few pixels of waste in between the fur spikes over here > ^^ 01:58, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

If there is more waste call me a mouse. Burntclaw (talk) 05:09, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the earpink is fine. The Fox Girl (talk) 09:03, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Ferk, actually. Please define the earpink. 10:28, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 10:36, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I still can hardly see it, please define it more. 10:44, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, it's defintely visible now. Burntclaw (talk) 12:26, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and that blotchy bit on the part below the (our right) shoulder. Also, are there two white pixels in his back foot? 20:41, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

It looks like the shading's leaking away around here and a bit on the legs, but that could be my eyes. Regardless, this is a really good image- well done!

Re-ups Thanks! :) Burntclaw (talk) 08:46, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Extend the tail shading to the tip, please. Also; is your shading layer on top of your earpink layer? One side looks darker than the other on my screen; Mind fixing that? if not, its completely fine. =)-- 23:40, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Please remember to sign with 4 tildes (~'s). And why is having the shading layer on top of the earpink layer bad?? I /always/ have my shading layers above the earpink layer. Ears have shading too, so I think that's fine. But I do agree about the tail shading, and it's also leaking away from the tail lineart ^^ 23:49, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

It honestly does not matter either way if the shading layer is above or below the ear pink. I personally put my ear pink above the layer of shading, since it's smudged and blurred so much you can barely see it in most cases anyways. Commenting solely for ear pink unless it's like neon pink or purple really isn't necessary- it's fine as it is and each person will make it differently. There's no one way to do the ear pink on any of these blanks.

My bad; I forgot to sign with my signature. And alright =). My comment on the tail shading still stands, though. Could you also define the light on the front legs a bit, while your at it? I can barely see it.-- 00:02, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 08:56, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? Nice job, he's cute c: 21:13, 11/28/2014

I personally can clearly see the light on the legs clearly. :$ but thanks for the compliment! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:11, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups oops. Anyway, sorry! Stupid Fox Girl I used her account AGAIN Burntclaw (talk) 06:23, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Alrighty, since I really want you to get this approved, I went through and circled some major problems in the image. Red = Waste, Yellow = Stray pixel that didn't get shaded, and Green = Shading that is leaking away from the lineart. I really hope this helps; this is a lovely image. =) Here it is. 18:34, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Jake (Ki) ~ For Approval
He has a cite, so I can post this, right? 13:12, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

So adorable! Lighten up the face shading a tad? Burntclaw (talk) 13:35, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not, it's the same shade as the rest of the shading, and it's not that dark V_V 14:29, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. I can't tell they're there.

Reups 10:42, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define them again; still can't see them. I love this a lot he's adorable. =) 14:59, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes on his tail look fine, tbh. Define the leg shading just a little bit? 16:49, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reup 18:35, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

He looks very bright compared to his kittypet image. Maybe darken him a tad? — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:22, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's the same color. I colorpicked from it, and the only reason it looks that way is the shading on the kittypet, and the highlights on this. I will ask for the file, though, so I can make it match 110%. 13:56, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Half Moon (Ki) - For Approval
my queen <3. The shading is icky and if I'm asked to define it, please don't expect much as it looks awful any darker than this. 00:06, 11/28/2014 She is absolutely beautiful! <3 Could you brighten up the cheek just a little? NikiandCats (talk) 03:19, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined a bit. I know it's there, but I'm having issues seeing it in some places, mainly the main part of the body.

reups I just redid the shading because that other light source was ~No~ 15:56, 11/28/2014

Smokepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
prepare yourselves for a kit party! XD The shading isn't as bad as I thought it would be. --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:31, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. This is gorgeous though! The Fox Girl (talk) 02:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I really love everything about this picture! Could you lighten the face a smudge? NikiandCats (talk) 10:11, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:21, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can hardly se it. 09:27 Fri Nov 28

Define your light source please. Burntclaw (talk) 13:05, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 22:10, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is cute!

Reupload thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:25, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Pinestar (Ki) - For Approval
Hi, my name is Jayce and I really love Pinestar. Have a baby version of him. PC implemented a thing saying all cats with confirmed littermates or parents get kit ranks, so here we go.

Blur the shading a bit more on the neck? Burntclaw (talk) 07:55, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Windflight (Ki) ~ For Approval
a la kit 05:58, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps define the tail shading a tad? Beautiful ^^ 13:02 Fri Nov 28

Define the earpink a bit, it's a little hard to see. Gorgeous as always~ 15:23, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the earpink easily, it's fine. 16:14 Fri Nov 28

reuploaded. I colour picked off his other chararts, so no. 01:16, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Dustpelt (K) - For Approval
Since the new PC thing passed, I figured I'd try out Dustpelt's pattern. I'll probably play with it more later, I'm not entirelly happy with it yet. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:13, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just me, but I can't see the earpink. Can you define it? It might just be my screen though. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is fine. On another note, I spy some waste by the paws. Beautiful image Jayie ^^ 09:26 Fri Nov 28

I'm actually gonna agree with The Fox Girl, I can't really see the earpink. Lighten the shading on them some, and maybe that'll do the trick. I likey=) 15:25, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the earpink clearly. It's fine. Nice job, Jayie! 15:38, 11/28/2014

Reuploaded. Tweaked the earpink and the stripes, and removed the waste. Thanks Amber and Ferk. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:50, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Moonflower (Kit) ~ For Approval
I bet in three seconds, someone will tell me to either redo the stripes or define the shading. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:18, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tiny bit? 10:36, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not happy about the stripes :\ by the way, if this image gets approved, will I become a warrior? (this is my third image) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups My sis told me to define the tail shading The Fox Girl (talk) 11:44, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

define the light on the right front paw? Nicely done! 21:08, 11/28/2014

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 06:29, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Snowbird (K) - For Approval
First character ever!! (I'm so proud of myself) Echorunner (talk) 12:50, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, I did it for you. This is amazing! :) maybe blur the shading more? There needs to be nose pink as well. This is very good for your first charart The Fox Girl (talk) 12:51, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

If you are a kit, it should say "For evaluation" instead of "For Approval"- Anyway, please define the shading on the tail and the legs, but great work! :) Burntclaw (talk) 12:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think you can define it everywhere. <span style="">13:00 Fri Nov 28

Plus, this should be called File:Snowbird.kit.png. I also fixed the thumbnail. <span style="">13:06 Fri Nov 28

Thanks! I'll remember next time!!!!

Remember to sign your posts with four "~"s, also, when ever you re-upload something, remember to notify us by writing something like Re-ups. XD Btw add shading to the legs plz. If you need help with the placement of the shading you can look at the apprentice tutorials. Also, the file is still not named correctly. Burntclaw (talk) 14:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

To rename it, just rename it in the next upload The Fox Girl (talk) 14:26, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, it makes less work for admins (maybe) if you wait and have an admin rename it for you. 14:54, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, please, it's much easier to just let me rename it. Which I just have. I'm also gonna change the heading to "For Approval" since I think this is good for an apprentice-rank promotion tbh.

Along with defining the shading on the legs and tail, maybe add another layer of shading on top of the existing one at a lower opacity ro create some depth? <span style="">21:07, 11/28/2014

Blur the earpink a bit? The Fox Girl (talk) 07:12, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Benny (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
I have returned, memes. Comments? 13:24, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tabby stripes? I can barely see them. Lovely image :) The Fox Girl (talk) 14:15, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're fine - for one, they're the same opacity as the ones on the kittypet. 16:51, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, i can see them perfectly fine. Beautiful as always, you meme. <span style="">16:54, 11/28/2014

Blur or smudge the ear pink a bit? It kinda seems a bit "woah" compared to the rest of the image. Not saying that's a bad thing; it's just really bright.

re-up 19:22, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

re-up i tried adding a collar since he's a kittypet and therefore needs one 17:24, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? <span style="">16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful <span style="">21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Mossfire (Kit) ~ For Approval
Here's little Mossy:3 17:57, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

how do you even art. wow. This is great! Maybe add a bit of a highlight to that hind paw? Its kinda grey and flat. <span style="">18:05, 11/28/2014

Re-ups Thanks!:) 18:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC) http://www.ezimba.com/work/141129C/ezimba12232578445300.png

Lily (Ki) ~ For Approval
K so yeah. Siamese. meep. <span style="">11:12 Sat Nov 29

Smooth out the collar lineart, and bring the collar tag down. The collar tag is hanging from the collar, not behind it. 11:17, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the back a bit? Burntclaw (talk) 11:19, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, and the changes are here! <span style="">11:35 Sat Nov 29

Beautiful picture! Though the face could use a little smoothing out a bit. Just to fade into the tan colour of the cute cat ;3 Could you define the back just a smudge too? NikiandCats (talk) 14:15, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 15:54, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you possibly tint the shading? It appears as though you've used black, but I think that a darker brown would suit the cream more. If not, that's fine by me. 19:38, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Goosefeather (Ki) - For Approval
how do i even do fur ruffles Brick   The Bite of '87  11:37, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the dapples, I can't tell they are there. Lovely job :) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:39, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and inbetween the legs. This is amazing, Brick~ =) 18:18, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Brightflower (Ki) ~ For Approval


Tried out Jayie's shading style which I love <3. I adore her cute lil' muzzle. The eyes are larger because in her description it states that she has "wide-set amber eyes" so I just wanted to add emphasis on that. Colour & design taken from the warrior & queen pixels. all the kittens    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:51, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Forgot the pale paws. ._.    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:59, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I fixed the alignment for you^^ Also, define the stripes a bit, as they're more pronounced on her other images. And define the shading & shading depth. This is pretty =) 13:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the eyes are normal on the other images, and you //need// to match that, so make them normal size please. And define the shading. 13:53, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Clawface (Ki) ~ For Approval
Kit storm! =) I feel like I'm the only one who really liked Clawface..now I'm not sure if he had any scars that were confirmed when he had been a kit. I can go through YS again later, but you all could make it easier on me if you just say he had one over here or there. Now 1 thing I must be clear on: I cannot define the earpink. I'm matching other images and that's the color they were when I picked, and that's the color they are now. Thank you. Comment away~ 14:04, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Why would he have scars as a kit?? He doesn't have them as an apprentice, how would a kit get scars? Anything big enough for that would probably be mentioned XD Define the shading a tad? 14:08, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. XD well I've seen kits in real life that have scars because of cuts on things left around, and other cruel humans things..it's a sad thing when you see kits with scars. So I assume anything can happen, too, in the series lol. Especially when your name is Clawface. :3 14:32, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Mm. It's pretty sad indeed. Define the shading some more on the tail and legs? 15:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:15, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

You're gonna have to do something with that ear pink, Darkfrost. I can't see it at all, and it looks like he doesn't have any. Try picking from the lighter spots, and I'd go so far as to say you can even use the ear pink color from the alt warrior. I honestly can't even tell he's got ear pink. These blanks are terribly small and sometimes you have to tweak colors to get them to show up.

Re-uploaded. Before, I had picked from the rogue. This time, I picked from the warrior, which seemed to have lighter earpink. Let me know if you can see it or not. I know, these blanks are so freaking small it's hard to make anything appear, like shading and earpink. *.* 18:47, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Splash (KP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
He does not get a collar since he was born a loner. And I think this is cute 18:57, November 29, 2014 (UTC)