Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 58

Birchstar (RC) (StarClan) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? First one 8D -- Atomic The collective baby~  18:58, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

High five XD Define the shading 19:04, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Eyes are too dark and don't match, stripes are a bit blotchy, and there needs to be some lighter spots on the front side of the body. 19:09, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

ReuploadedI personally think the eyes are fine- I took the colors from the leader image. However, I did fix the stripes and add light to the front side of the body. --                       Atomic  The collective baby~  19:18, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps rearrange them so the colors flow a little more? They really don't look like they match very well, if at all.

Reuploaded-- Atomic The collective baby~  19:27, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on the paws and legs. 22:20, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Atomic The collective baby~  22:34, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

The patches still don't quite match, perhaps, enlarge the pale stripes, great job Starry. =) 22:49, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Atomic The collective baby~  23:53, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the tail and belly shading. 00:16, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Atomic The collective baby~  00:38, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading by the jaw and underneath 01:15, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Atomic The collective baby~  01:28, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part on the shoulder and round it out. 01:41, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Atomic The collective baby~  01:47, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Stretch the ear-pink down on <-- this side and lighten --> this side, it looks really dark; i'm not sure if it's because the shading layer is over the ear-pink or not 03:00, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I accidentally put the shading layer over the earpink. Then, my computer derped and didn't give me the .xcf, so I've been working with the .png, in a way. x.x -- Atomic The collective baby~  03:30, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes to match the leader. If that's possible.... -Feather 12:08, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, since the leader's image doesn't reveal her back and I feel that I matched the stripes closely with the way the leader's side was presented. However, if anybody else feels that a thickening of stripes is needed, I will indeed do so. --        Atomic  The collective baby~  20:36, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Thicken them and define them. I can't see them and it seems like they get lost in the shading.

Reuploaded. I know waste is showing and I just removed it, so changes aren't showing. --       Atomic  The collective baby~  20:53, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

It looks like there's two layers of stripes here...it doesn't match the leader image. All the stripes on there are at the same opacity there, and there are a few darker than the rest on this. 19:23, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Atomic Pumbaa! Let me define babysitting! 19:49, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes and base colors still don't match, there's waste, and the shading on the back and base of the tail needs to be thickened. 20:50, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

When you change colors, connect some stripes and make them, eh.. bigger. Yep and there is so much fur blurred into her ear-pink. , 15:21, January 6,2013 (UTC)

The mouth lineart is miscolored. 00:22, January 7, 2013 (UTC)

Hm, on the leader the stripes cross almost the whole body, so can you make these do that? owo 01:08, January 8, 2013 (UTC)

I see two waste pieces, but beautiful image! Blur some of the tail stripes x3  Prussia:  The Awesome Time Lord 01:23, January 8, 2013 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

I'm going to withdraw this. School's started up again and I'm busy with extra sports, now. I don't have the time to work on this charart- apologies. -- Atomic Pumbaa! Let me define babysitting! 01:50, January 11, 2013 (UTC)

Archiving.