Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 77

Yellowfang (E) ~ Approved
Feathertail was declined, so yeah. ;)

Here we go...And I shortened the muzzle as much as I could without ruining it, but if it needs to be done more, let me know, and I will try my best. . 03:02, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Moved image 'cause OCD. How come she gets an elder? *missed that discussion* 03:05 Sun Nov 27

She was technically an elder between officially joining ThunderClan and Spottedleaf dying. Smooth out the bottom of the muzzle. 03:06, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, match the style of spikes in the other images. 03:08, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nick her ears and I thought she was a prisoner, not elder 03:10, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

After she joined ThunderClan, before Spottedleaf's death. She was an elder. 03:11, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang was never and elder. True, she was old, but she had never retired from her duties as a Medicine cat. When she was thrown out of ShadowClan, she had been and MC and then was accepted into ThunderClan as a prisoner and then made the ThunderClan medicine cat. She was never an elder. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:14, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Then what would you say she was between officially joining ThunderClan and Spottedleaf dying? She wasn't a prisoner then, and she wasn't a warrior or medicine cat. 03:15, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

They never said she was an elder, she was a prisoner and was technically still a rogue. They didn't treat her with respect like an elder should be treated with. I think this should be declined. 04:23, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar got an elder image for when he was in ThunderClan. What's the difference? 04:25, November 27, 2011 (UTC)


 * Point taken, Cloudy. i totally forgot about that (lol OA was me xPP). Any objections? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 06:06, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I have none, but could you make the eyes orange? XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:01, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. How could I forget the eyes and ears!? Re-uploaded. :D. 08:57, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. XD There's some white specks at the tip of the ear though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:09, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

No objections here.) But could you shrink the earpink a tad and make it more triangular. 12:30 Sun Nov 27

Very nice! Blur the scar above her eye. 16:10, November 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can I just say something? When ShadowClan attacked, and Rosetail was killed, Bluestar invited her to join the Clan. This image was made wrongly for the right reasons, as she was a warrior, not an elder. If, for some strange reason, I am wrong, then thicken the ear outline. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 18:32, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea. Either way, Re-uploaded. xD. 19:28, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

P.S I fixed the ear best I could, but it would go away and blend in naturally. Dx. 19:35, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Regi, exactly how was she a warrior? I don't get it. She wasn't a warrior. o.o 20:59, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think Regi meant MC ? 21:27 Sun Nov 27

No. Look, after the first attack on ThunderClan by ShadowClan, when Yellowfang was found to have protected the Clan's kits from her past brethren, Bluestar made Yellowfang an official member of ThunderClan. This was a bit before Spottedleaf was killed by Clawface. Between these two events, Yellowfang was treated as an elder of ThunderClan, and I believe she even lived outside the elder's den. She was no prisoner and not a warrior, medicine cat, loner, rogue, or anything else but an elder. That's that. 00:47, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out a few of the thicker scars just a tad to keep consistent with the other images. No need to do al lthe thick scars, just a couple will do. 12:40, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My layers merged earlier on, so now i'm bearing with what I've got. . 14:17, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, it looks fine. It doesn't need to match exactly since this is the other half of her not seen in other chararts. For future reference, tho, if you're working with GIMP and you want to keep you layers, save the file as .xcf as well as .png. 17:24, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thistle, are you sure you're not a warrior with your skills? Anyways, I can see nothing wrong with such a wonderful image...soooooo, CBA? 17:52, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt but you have a scar in the clump of fur. It is impossible in placement so either move it or move the patchy fur  01:25, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know how, as said before, I lost my layers. But if someone can help me, that would be great. . 04:30, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I can help, just give me a few minutes... :3 01:13, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hope this is good enough for you, Thistle! 01:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? 01:21, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Good job! 05:22, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Velvet (Q) ~ Approved
Since Fallow's was declined, I wanted a shot at it. Comments? 04:25, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Cloudy! Make the collar bend in towards her neck a bit more; it looks like it's a bit thick on that side xP, define the area without the shading (light) on the haunch and shoulder a bit more, and, this is just my opinion, but lighten the eyes up a tad; they look a bit dark. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:31, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. Nice job! 05:34, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the midriff. (I think that's a highlight, if not, never mind.) 06:13, Mon, Nov, 28, 2011

No highlights on this one. Hollyleaf was a one-time deal. I'll fix her up and re-upload in the morning. 06:19, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Color in the nose. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:48, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:57, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, please Skye! Looks nice! 21:16, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:19, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading the front legs a small tad? :D Very awesome. ^^ . 22:34, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:40, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the stomach highlight or brighten the face. 00:08, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Cool, maybe move the tag to the front of her neck more. 00:13, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

No highlights on this one. Re-uploaded. 00:21, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Doesnt matter if theres highlights or not the stomach and face need to be the same brightness. 00:25, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

I know that, Iceheart. I'm not stupid. I'll just redo the shading - no big deal. 00:27, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. 06:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

On the front paw farthest away from us, there is a little gray line or something right next to the line through the foot. I don't think it's supposed to be there. 21:19, November 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Dunno, but's it's gone now. Re-uploaded. 21:31, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! CBA? 22:34, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 23:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (Alt. L) ~ Approved
This is most likely going to be declined. See CotC, he is some light brown tabby with white markings. Comments? 01:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're fine. He looked like he had white srtipes on his legs and tail in CotC, but the error must be put in trivia on his page and the page must be cited before this can be done. 02:04, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

His white markings on his legs and tail look almost pale gray, not white so try to brighten that. And blur where the white meets the brown on the chest. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   02:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Also, since you're working from this image, it looks like his body and haunches have white stripes as well. Try to match the image as closely as possible. 02:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly. Maybe enlargen the white strip in the chest. Lighten the shading on the haunch a little bit. Good work. 02:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shading is fine, Sandstorm, oh well, it looks strange... 03:33, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

You could try making the white stripes less prominent as it goes up. That would probably look more natural. ~Breezewhisker~ 03:48, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look cream to me. My motto is: When in doubt, color-pick! 04:06, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

It looks cream to me too. And could you make the stripes slightly more pointed? It makes them look more natural. Looks good! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:48, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fail. I made the stripes slightly more pointer, and I made them white. Next time I won't choose a such a difficult tabby. 15:46, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is actually really cool looking. Blur the white stripes more. Givingheartstar Enjoy :D  19:22, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

No, I (and I think Ivy) meant the stripes look cream in the CotC image. XD Not on here. I was saying you should make them cream on here to match. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:28, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The bottom stripes are white, but slightly cream, all of the others are white. 03:40, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I like that color Stoneclaw, but Im looking on this and can you blur the white stripes and blend them with brown a little? Its good on the tail :-) 16:54,November 15,2011 (UTC)

Pretty! But with the white and cream stripes, it looks awkward just switching colors on the stripes, could you maybe make them all one colour? 01:12, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste on <- side of his face in between the whiskers, and can you smudge the white stripes? 17:58, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's also a tiny bit of waste above both his ears. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  19:44, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge and blur the white stripes, and smudge the earpink into the ear. 01:11, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I will fix the waste. 01:21, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch on -> that side a touch. Beatiful! 23:08, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There is no waste. 05:25, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, there is a bit of waste right above the gap between the forepaw and haunch as well as right to --> that side of the haunch. Tilt your screen to see it. Also, make the earpink on <--- that side of us stay confined to the ear as there is a bit it on the side (->) where you can see the ear tilted. This looks great! 04:51, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

The stripe on the legs look sprayed on. Could you smudge then or blur them more? Also, there is some white leaking from his hind paw onto his haunch. 09:05, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the image. 18:39, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

This look really good. The only thing I'd do is maybe darker the fur on the back. It appears a little darker in the picture. ~Breezewhisker~ 18:51, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

I lied. Looking at it again it looks just fine. Ignore me. ~Breezewhisker~ 18:53, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit yellow instead of white. 21:08, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can i do lillykit and withdraw this one? I am withdrawing. 00:57, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

I am withdrawing this to do Pinenose. 01:00, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, she is reserved. 01:09, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The creamy brown stripes comes from the image, oh well. I color picked. Wait... Why aren't changes showing? 01:31, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better. 01:46, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. wrong file name... 01:51, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes on the body look yellow. The ear pink looks a little bit to bright. There are two dots right above the ears, waste. 01:58, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is completely fine. 23:52, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome Stoney! I think you should blur the stripes on the tail. Tell me if you disagree though. S  t   a   r   s   h   i   n   e   C   i   n   <font color="Gray">d   <font color="Black">e   <font color="Gray">r   <font color="Black">h   <font color="Gray">e   <font color="Black">a   <font color="Gray">r   <font color="Black">t   <font color="Gray">A   <font color="Black">w   <font color="Gray">a   <font color="Black">i   <font color="Gray">t   <font color="Black">s   <font color="Gray">L   <font color="Black">i   <font color="Gray">o   <font color="Black">n   <font color="Gray">b   <font color="Black">l   <font color="Gray">a   <font color="Black">z   <font color="Gray">e   <font color="Black">'s   <font color="Gray">R   <font color="Black">e   <font color="Gray">t   <font color="Black">u   <font color="Gray">r   <font color="Black">n   22:37, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe the white stripes on the tail should be thinner like the cream stripes on the body. 16:39, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are fine. 19:33, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes so they're less rounded at the ends and sharper. <span style="">02:22 Sun Nov 27

Reuploaded. I am a failure. I messed with the stripes, :)-- 01:14, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are too dark, and a bit dirty yellow, maybe make them more like Daisy's color? And make ALL the white on him that color, instead of having some white and some cream? It looks odd this way. Also, the tips of the stripes need to be pointed a bit more still. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:49, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- 00:38, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I totally didn't mean for you to smudge the stripes like that, but it looks really cool this way ^^ smudge the pelt colour into the earpink a tad more. <span style="">04:00 Wed Nov 30

It does look cool~ Blur where the white meets the rest of the body on the chest/belly/whatever you call it. Not a whole lot, but you get my point. xD 05:21, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, they look awesome like this. 8D But ALL the white needs to be cream. Meaning the chest and the tail too. It's been commented on multiple times, but it's still not fixed.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:53, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Paleclaw, I know it's bad but I am trying my best, though it probably won't make it. XD 23:44, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, shut up, Stoney. This is beautiful <3 CBA? <span style="">04:00 Fri Dec 2

Approved. 05:49, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Alt. Q) - Approved
Ugh... Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 15:20, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! She looks kinda cross-eyed, though, and can you put less shading on the foreleg closest to us? Because I think you used highlights on this one, and if you did, make it not look so straight. Sorry, I'm a terrible explainer. :3 17:46, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading a lot. 19:47, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may not be showing. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 20:00, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

If they are showing, the eyes still looked cross-eyed. <span style="">00:58 Thu Nov 24

The changes aren't showing yet. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:26, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Now they are - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 17:40, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more visible. It's kinda hard to see. 21:22, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, just make it a bit bigger. Anf blur the shading. <span style="">01:36 Fri Nov 25

Re-uploaded. Reworked the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:52, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mm. Much better. However, there seems to be an area of non-shaded pelt right beside the haunch. Shade that in, please :3 <span style="">04:59 Fri Nov 25

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:08, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:23, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:46, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the top of the hind leg to keep the shading consistent. ~Breezewhisker~ 06:45, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:58, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste on the back. 18:39, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:26, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

No one's commented in a while, so I'm gonna say, CBA? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:45, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry to break CBA, but pinken the earpink a bit. 19:17, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Leopard, change the heading next time. 19:18, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back looks blotchy. 19:19, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Instead of saying what's wrong with it, Sandstorm, try suggesting a way to fix it. 19:24, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I just wanna ask: where's the light source? The shading placement doesn't make sense to me :s <span style="">21:15 Tue Nov 29

Re-uploaded Huge shading make-over... Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:38, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stomach shading. 01:59, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:47, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Much better ^^ Darken the shading a tad. <span style="">03:52 Wed Nov 30

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:03, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the muzzle, in the little area right below the whiskers. 05:26, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:57, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the bottom of the belly. <span style="">01:47 Thu Dec 1

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 Hours - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:10, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:23, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Shadepelt (Lo) ~ Approved
Now I can upload it. *shot* ~Breezewhisker~  01:26, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty, Breeze! Brighten the ear-pink, blur the shading on the neck and maybe add some under the chin. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:28, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink and make it triangular too. Som eof the shadin gis in the wrong place too if you look on the tutorial. The two middle paws are covered in shading and the hindquarter line goes up to the back. And the tail is covered in shading too. (Just going by what's on the tutorial). <span style="">01:34 Mon Nov 28

There should be some shading on the front of the middle legs and the top of the tail since the light source is in front of the cat in slightly above. ~Breezewhisker~ 01:42, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Not shading, I meant light/highlights. XP ~Breezewhisker~  01:42, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice Breezewhisker, brighten the earpink a bit. <span style="">06:03, Mon, Nov, 28, 2011

I broke the wiki. OTL I don't know what I did.

Anyway, I'll try and edit it tomorrow. ~Breezewhisker~ 06:00, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There's a subtle difference. ~Breezewhisker~ 21:57, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Again). Fixed the shading a bit. ~Breezewhisker~ 22:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink. <span style="">00:21 Wed Nov 30

I think with the loner lineart, the ear pink could go either way. The head's facing front, so, the ears might as well. It's all up to the artist, and how they see the image, I believe. Just like the eyes on an image. 05:31, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

So move it or no? ~Breezewhisker~  21:39, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Only if you want to. I like it like this personally. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:21, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I like the earpink. Blur the shading just a little bit. -- 01:13, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading. I didn't center the earpink as I think the ear is facing forward. ~Breezewhisker~ 21:53, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay all of the other images have the ear pink just in the center. The rules shouldn't change. Also dull the ear pink and blur the highlights a tad. <3 15:34, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

@Sandstorm It's not really a rule.... and it looks more natural if its facing that way. More realistic. -- 22:03, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't center the earpink since these ears look as if they're facing forward to me, and several have said that it looks fine. ~Breezewhisker~ 22:07, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Comments before approval? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:55, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for interupting CBA but I don't like the earpink. Could you please make it a bit more pink? But if anyone disagrees feel free to change the heading back and put up CBA again. 19:48, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Cinder, when you comment during CBA you have to change the heading back to "For Approval". 19:50, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I did...at least I meant to. Sorry 'bout that. 19:54, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly I really do think the earpink is fine.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:36, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, can you make the earpink the same as her other images? Because this one is duller <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 3

The ear pink is fine, Sweet. It's probably how the ear pink is blurred or something. 22:44, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gah. I'm so confused. So do I need to change it or not? ~Breezewhisker~ 23:09, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

No. I am continuing the CBA on this image. 23:11, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't mean to be annoying, but it's been 24 hours. XD ~Breezewhisker~  00:46, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

For future reference just wait dont comment. 06:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Lo) - Approved
I think he would get one since he got left back in the old forest when the Clans left. Well, comments? 16:46, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Does he get a loner? Did we ever discuss this at all? Well, if he does, define the earpink and blur the highlights. 16:53, November 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The discussion is on the talk page. Are his eyes purple? I think you should change them to more of a blue. 17:04, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

@Shadewing. No highlights on this one.

@Ivyheart. I took the eye color from his elder image... should I change it still? 18:20, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well he could get one along with the others who died. Tone down the shading a tad and make the ear pink more visible. 18:43, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes are purple, fix that, define the earpink, and blur the shading a tad. 20:02, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye if you want too. <span style="">20:22 Sun Nov 27

Yes, you should change it to another color. 20:45, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 00:13, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading pwease. <span style="">01:26 Mon Nov 28

And make the ear-pink more triangular please. <span style="">01:29 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded Sorry, I've been really busy. -- 20:21, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a tad bigger. <span style="">23:25 Sat Dec 3

Earpink looks fine to me. CBA? <span style="">08:06 Sun Dec 4

Approved. 06:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (Alt.W) - Approved
Tell me youre not going to declide this, its manga alt, look in The Lost Warrior. Please :-) 07:25,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading a bit. And define the earpink. 17:02, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm I mistakenly blurred hightlights, I maded something with it 18:02,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Oh and I forget earpink, fixed now 18:06,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Erm, wasn't he an apprentice? <span style="">18:07 Wed Nov 30


 * steals* The stripe on the head looks a tad uneven, could you smooth it out please? I love this.  19:17, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

If it was The Lost Warrior, he's a warrior, not an apprentice, Sweet. 20:15, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yes reuploaded :-) 20:46,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Could you add a bit of depth to his eye? Maybe one lighter pixel at the bottom? 18:48, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:26,December 1,2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail stripes. Nice! 20:31, December 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Could you colour pick the eye colour from his warrior? They're a lot lighter than this. 20:44, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, reuploaded 09:17,December 2,2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I see nothing wrong with this, it's beautiful! CBA? 05:48, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 06:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Bouncefire (Alt. W)~ Approved
If Russetfur gets one so does he, comments? 00:04, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Now this is what I call pro. Define the tail shading - 00:16, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty x3 *noms* Brighten the earpink. 01:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldnt he be short haired, or was it shown otherwise? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 01:21, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- He was shown as long hair as far as i can tell. This is my 43rd charart... 01:57, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. Blend the shaded parts more into the non-shaded parts. <span style="">06:06, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Lighten the ear pink. Right now it looks purpleish. 15:36, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 21:59, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. 22:07, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

If i blur it more then it blends to well with the pelt, the ear pinks on this colour are impossible. 22:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Iceheart, this is a beautiful image. 19:20, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Why thank you. 19:46, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong, so CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:24, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. -- 06:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Frogleap (W) ~ Approved
Hah! I found viable reasons to make both the Ceaderpelt kits! :D Comments? 01:16, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Add neck shading. 01:26, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Neck shading is fine, this is lovely. 01:30, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. <span style="">01:35 Fri Dec 2

Re-uploaded. 01:46, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

I still think there should be neck shading. :/ 02:00, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

There is neck shading. The light is just coming from the front, and he's a dark cat, so it looks lighter. 02:10, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, then darken it a bit. <span style="">2:43am Fri Dec.2/11

I'd rather not. The lighting is coming directly from the front. He shouldn't have much of a shadow there, if any. 03:22, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

There shouldn't be shading on the front of the neck if the light scource is forward. I would erase some of the shading on the shoulder a bit. Cats have large shoulders and it would help the neck shading look better. ~Breezewhisker~ 05:27, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:32, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Shellheart, but can you lighten this a bit? I can barely see his stripes. 14:44, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I prefer subtlety, and I picked this color based on his father's charart made slightly darker. I won't lighten the coloring. 14:49, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly. The color looks good. Blur the earpink a little. 20:29, December 2, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Lighten the shading on his tail, then; it looks darker than on his body. 20:30, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Since the light is coming from the front, maybe darken the leg shading. <span style="">8:42pm Fri Dec.2/11 20:42, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:54, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading on his belly, just above where the line of the haunch is. 03:34, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:43, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the belly and dull the ear pink. It's too bright for the body. 19:11, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on his belly is blurred and the ear-pink is appropriately colored. 20:14, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit and blur the shoulder shading ever-so-slightly. I love this image so much. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:34, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does he look like he's tinted green? No offense Shelly, I just want to make sure I'm not seeing things. 05:47, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't use a greenish-brown for it, but the highlight may be giving it a green look. I don't think it's so bad, though. It isn't blatantly green like Jingo used to be, haha. 17:52, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a little? 00:10, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's fine like this. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:37, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours. 04:28, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (KP) ~ Approved
They were taking food from kittypets, and now that her gender's confirmed, she gets a kittypet image as well. I figured she didn't get the collar though, so I removed it. 02:26, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, Sunfish KP :P. It really does look like Sunfish. Lighten the shading a tad, or darken the base a tad. That's it really. :P  ~Regifloat222  Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 02:32, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I colored picked again, and this is the darkest I'll make it. Re-uploaded. 02:36, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart where you removed the collar.

~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 02:55, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

You need to be more descriptive. Where do I thicken the lineart? 02:58, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Between her shoulder and her chin. 03:22, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. At least someone was specific enough. >.> 03:25, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The neck looks weird. Like on the chest where the collar was. It should be moved and curved in a bit. ~Breezewhisker~ 03:56, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does that look better? 04:06, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Much. :) ~Breezewhisker~  04:09, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. Define the earpink slightly and if you can blur the shading a bit more. <span style="">05:21, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011

Re-uploaded. 05:29, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the nose and blur the shading just a little bit. <3 <span style="">08:16 Sun Dec 4

Re-uploaded..... I'm not adding shading to the nose...it's fine. 15:43, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, Cloudy. CBA? 13:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 16:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)