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Thornclaw (W) ~ Redone
Pine was approved, and well, i love Thorclaw, so when he needed to be tweaked, i was jumping :D Oa was Sandstar12, then Bramble, then Icestorm, his stripes didn't look real, so i tweaked them, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I love your tabbies ^^ Define the stripes on the tail. 23:21, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) Practic makes perfect, no one is perfect, but my tabbies will bee soon ;) Reuploaded-comments?

Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. 00:22, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

When did I tweak him? There's a lack of shading. 00:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, it just says your name so....Okay give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and shading neesd to be darkened. Yeha, I fixed the eye x3 21:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure, give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now lighten it and add more shading all around. 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the stripes some more as well as shading. 00:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights tons and make the shading curve at the haunch -- 01:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is it a some sort of lighter color between the highlights and the shading? Is it the pelt color? If so, blend in the highlights with it, the highlights should not throw off the color of the pelt that much. 01:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I....have...no....idea what that was...Anyway, reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm sorry xD There's some sort of contrast between the highlights and the shading (which I believe was a streak of pelt color.) I just wanted you to blend it in more xD 19:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

This might be just me but I think the shading doesn't fit with the muscles well. 20:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is how Ashfur has his shading, I'll leave it as it is. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you won't. It's nothing how Ashfur has his shading. Change it. 23:24, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine, i'll mess around with it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Sorry this took so long, I lost his shading layer, so i had to re-make his shading layer, and then, i rushed it, and got this....^^; Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and blur the highlights. 14:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Wow....that was fast ;D Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred more. 15:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-it has now been blurred to a max. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, it still needs to be blurred and blended a little more. 03:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried, had like 1% affect every here and there, but not much.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:26, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, I have some advice for you that helped me before I learned the other-worldly powers of the guassian blur tool. If you smudge the shading a lot with the second-to smallest or third-to smallest brush, then blur it on 100%, that actually helps to make the shading have a natural gradient. 00:47, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

.....What? I'm sorry, i'm diselxic..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 12:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

What don't you understand? You use layers, yes? 21:38, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

He still seems kind of shiny. Maybe dull the highlights a tad? Sky- Killer of Daleks and Cybermen 22:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy....I don't understand any of it, and No, i don't..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

The shading. It needs to be blurred. 22:57, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

sighs* Alright, let me try to rephrase it (it's going to be more difficult since you don't have layers) The smudge tool (which is a hand with the pointer finger sticking out) is what you need. Use it like you would normally do to something to smear it, make it go back and forth. Then, take your blur tool. There should be a setting somewhere that has a bar and some numbers, it should say "Rate", slide it to the right until it says 100%. It should really help smooth your shading out a lot. This should be much more informative, yes? 03:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, i got it that time :) I'm sorry....I can understtand things that well, and then i get sonfuesed, and then i get mad, and then i kill a pillow.....DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the shoulder, move it up a bit, darken the highlight on the haunch, and blur all the shading and highlights. 03:51 Thu Oct 6

Okay, give me some time, my laptop is being spazzy, so, let me get it squared away, or let me buy a new one, give me like two or three days, 'kay? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, my laptop is fixed now, give me sometime, all right? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

No. Maplepool, I'm sorry, but we can't wait forever. Either fix this or withdraw this. 14:00, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it, i was talking about giving me time  to fix Thornclaw :P should have been more clear on that, sorry ^^;  Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:42, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's what I was talking about. The shading still needs to be blurred. 16:19, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eye. 01:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, this hasn't been re-uploaded since the third. Please reupload soon or it will be declined. 03:27, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

If the leads wish it and Maple gives me permission, may I take over this once Brackenfur is completed? 15:52, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, go ahead, if the other leads agree. Maplepool, please don't kill me with a blow torch, but this is taking you a VERY long time to do, and many other images are getting approved while yours isn't completed. Letting Icestorm do it will get it done much faster. Maybe you could try doing something easier for now? 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

No problem here. Since Brackenfur was archived, you can take this one over. Sorry, Maple, but you can't spend forever and a day on an image. =/ 14:33, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Comments? 22:14, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make him a tad bit more golden? 22:20, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded': 23:31, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I understand it's your style to make the shading dark, but that doesn't mean it should always stay dark on every image. Is there any chance of you lightening it on this one? Or does what you said on some of your other images about not lightening the shading still apply? Personally, I think you should lighten it, I like dark shading too, but it's almost black in the darkest part. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:58, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I'd rather appreciate it if I wasn't told to lighten the shading, because dark shading is my style and I imagine cats with dark shading. Sure, I'll lower the opacity, but still. I lightened the shading on this one. 21:00, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. 21:01, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you move the earpink a little more into the ear? 15:13, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded: I didn't define the tail stripes, they're fine. They're three large stripes instead of tiny ones. 01:28, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 18:26, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy, I know, i know, and its cool, this looks way better, its just, life is getting to me, and with so many things going on, im not having as much time to lazy around as i would like to, im up to my eyes in homework(Thats what i get, for taking extra classes.) So, im not as free much.....i'm going to be inactive till December, so is flowerpatch, she's in the hosptial, her whole left side is broken, and she as put into a coma for medical needs. So....i've had like ) time to play on my laptop, i need to drop most of my extra classes *Latian, German, French, etc* So. I wont be on much, I'm sorry...... Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:04, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

It's alright. Iceheart, if I define the ear pink, it gets blotchy. 22:33, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur ~ Redone


OA was either Icethroat21, Sandstar12, or Moonleaf:). She needed to be redone as longhair. Comments? 11:44, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Icethroat, Sandstar just changed the eye colour, and I just tweaked it :). Blur the chest and leg shading. 17:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading all together as well. 19:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur the gray tansistion. And blur the shading alltohether. 20:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make the transition form white to gray smoother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Now blur the shading. 13:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Chest shading needs to be blurred and lightened. 11:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

^ Looks like someone forgot to sign! 00:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:44, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; other than that, I think its awesome! =3 21:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:56, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source. 23:53, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:12, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Re-uploaded. 11:23, October 12, 2011 (UTC)'''

Darken the shading a bit. 14:32, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 11:02, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the neck shading just a tad? 15:11, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the haunch shading and lighten the chest shading alot more. 23:49, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lionstar (L) ~ Redone
OA was Sandwich989, and it needed stripes and the shading redone and since it only had one image, i redid it. Comments? 19:29, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, it's very bright. The stripes a little awkward, they look orange and the fur is light ginger. May just be me, but desaturate them a tad. ☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have a problem with the stripe colour. 21:48, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't either. I think it looks good. Add more depth to the eye and blur/smudge the left earpink. 00:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes look amazing, Iceheart, so don't change a thing. Lighten the shading a tad though. 06:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 22:17, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you dull the earpink a bit? Its too neon. 20:56, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuoloaded- Thats the last time im changing the ear pink. Its impossible on this coat colour and im not jumping through hoops over it. 04:34, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Applefur (W) - Tweaked
Alright, original artist was Honeyfur :3. Tweaked the shading, fixed the mottles, and altered the base color a tad to make her more brown. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:25, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading a lot. 22:42, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you mottled the earpink too. Define the earpink and make it a solid color. 02:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

And there's a random stripe running down her back. Any way to get rid of? Sky- Stealing all ur  candy 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. '''better~? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:31, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred and the mottles look more like dapples. 20:55, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:31, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

While you're at it, blur the earpink as well, and make it a little more triangular. Looks good. 15:09, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It might just be me, but on her chest there's some pinkish stuff that makes it look like skin. Maybe remove those? 20:19, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded~! '''the pinkish stuff was some desaturated shading. I altered the base color because that was the only way to get rid of it without killing it T.T. I would prefer not changing the mottles. If I did, the entire image would have to be redone, which is more effort than I would like.

The shading needs to be lightened and blurred. The mottles need to be changed, though. 15:04, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Why do the mottles need to be changed? Elorisa~ 15:20, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

I've stated above. 15:41, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Is there really that big of a difference between mottles and dapples? There are around 3 images that have mottles similar to mine, and there was no fuss about them. Criminal Scum Stealing from the Imperial City;  one house at a time~ 15:51, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (W) - Redone
I redid her apprentice, so I did this too. She needed to be longhaired, and the original artist was Sandwich989. 22:04, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink and redden it a tad and darken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:30, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (W) - Redone
ugh... why did I even make this? I suck at black cats! Anyway, OA was Spottedwing and then it was tweaked by Rainwhisper and Bramble. Redone as a longhair. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire pelt color, darken the highlights, lighten the shading, blur the highlights, make the ear pink smaller and redder. 01:29, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:40, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the shading, it was really bothering me, took all the colors from Darkflower's queen charart. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:19, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and make the ear pink smaller. 12:44, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Molewhisker (W) - Redone
Finally! A free space! Original artist was Nightfall, and it needed to be longhaired, and the shading looked blotchy. 01:24, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, and possibly highlights if you're using them. 14:33, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Only defined it in a few places, I can't define it anymore without the shading looking blotchy. 19:23, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Ki) - Redone
Ok, so don't comment on any of the colors, they were all taken from her warrior image directly from the .xcf file, so I'm not changing them. the shading needs to be darkened though, doesn't it? Originally by Sandstar I think, and the nose color was changed by Iceheart. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:32, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Paleclaw. Excellent. Outstanding. Lovely. Amazing. Awesome. And all the synonyms of "amazing", "beautiful", "excellent", "outstanding", "lovely", and "awesome". Can you lighten the paws a bit? 01:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Icy! ^^ (though honestly I don't agree that this is very good, Splashy'd probably kill me if I said so..... oops. XD) And sorry, but no. I said this on the warrior version before it was archived, but the paws were made to be the same color as the stripes. And since the warrior version was approved now, it wouldn't match if I made them lighter. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:57, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw. You shut your mouth. If you object your amazingly, epic charart skills, I will slap you through the internet. Yes, it's that serious. Define the shading along the back a little bit :3 <3 (it's so amazing btw. I died of awesomeness, I'm a ghost.) 02:07, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'll BEAT her if she insults her skills again. I should decline this to teach you a lesson...but then, I'd haet myself forever for declining such a BEAUTIFUL piece of art. 02:25, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - O.O *gulps and hides* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  02:49, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Amberclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
Okay, so the original artist was Honeyfur, then Riverpelt, and Mintstarr then tweaked it. I toned down the opacity, thickened the stripes, and thickened the shading. 03:13, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely, Atelda! Darken the ear-pink and make it a bit smaller. Darken the shading on the back and around the head and define the stripes on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:20, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you. 03:49, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly make the stripes into thinner lines, instead of Y stripes? 12:44, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink, please! I love it! Leaf-storm,09:25,October 15,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I really hope this is what you mean Icy. Thanks Leaf-storm. 22:29, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed to match his warrior image. OA is Rainy. 03:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe connect some stripes. Also Yatz was the original artist actually.- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 07:20, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, no, Yatz took over, but Rainy DID start this. XD But anyways, BEAUTIFUL! ^^ Maybe just define the earpink a tad. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:53, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

I went by who was the first artist on the file. And I'm not connecting stripes. Kitty, if you would look at his warrior, you would see that they're straight lines, and not connecting. 13:33, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

God, I hated the original image... thankies for making it pretty again. :3 Anyway, smudge the stripes a tiny bit more. 13:52, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

The original image look like crap, Rainy, considering the lineart is so small and you can't fit a lot into it. I mean, that was what? Your first one or something? xD Re-uploaded. 15:35, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes a bit wavy? You don't have to. 15:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Look at the warrior image. They're not wavy, and it looks epic. xD 15:37, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

OHDERP. -waves hand across face- Blur the ear pink 15:39, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also, looking at the file, all Yatz really did was fix ear pink issues. I consider the OA to be Rainy, since she did most (if not all) of the work. XD 15:42, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste all around the image. Mainly by the feet, but I think there's some pretty much all around it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:15, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Mosskit (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I just realized how fun tweaking an image can be. Anyways, I fixed the eyes, earpink, and blurred lineart, and added in shading. I think I've defined it enough for this style, but if someone tells me to define, I can. Comments? 13:57, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Much better :) Define the ear pink. 14:19, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks. :3 14:32, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more pink. Also, who was the OA? 15:43, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Seedpelt (D) - Tweaked
Added in ze flecks, which probably makes it look mottled. xD Sky- Stealing all ur  candy 14:10, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, zis is epic, Sky. As always. Anyway, while you're at this tweak, can you possibly change the eye to make it have a pupil? 14:13, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink darker and smaller, and blur and darken the shasding. 14:18, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- Stealing all ur  candy 15:59, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 18:33, October 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Pouncetail (W) - Redone
Tried matching it as best I could ^^' So anywho, redone as longhair and added stripes. Originally by Sandstar12. Comments? 18:16, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, blur thew htei, darken the shading, blur the shading, and liughten the ear pink. 22:28, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

^ ??? Anyways, there's some lighter pixels along his haunch, or is that part of the white? 23:11, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (MC) - Redone
OA may have been Nightshine, but I believe she may have just renamed the file.. anyway, it needed to match her warrior image (Stripes re-done). Comments? 23:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)