Changes: Crookedstar's Promise/Comic

Revision as of 15:59, 7 December 2013

This is about the manga is Crookedstar's Promise

Summary

It begins with Crookedstar strolling along the shore and comments. "You're supposed to catch fish with your claws Mosspaw not your teeth." Soon he finds his daughter wandering off. He worried about her and approaches her. SIlverstream turns around and simply replies she's going out. Crookedstar worried decided to watch her. He soon finds her tail in tail with a ThunderClan cat; Graystripe. Crookedstar catches her and consults her about her choice. Yet Silverstream still wishes to be wtih Graystripe. Crookedstar gives up and waits for the consiquences. Until one night he is bordering StarClan and The Dark Forest. He looks towards StarClan and recognizes Silverstream heading their. And he realizes his daughter is dead. As she says "Take care if my kits". Soon Mapleshade appears saying he has lost everything fullfilling his promise. But Crookedstar replies no Mapleshade I still have RiverClan. Back in the waking world Crookedstar is told Mistyfoot has bad news about Silverstream. Of course Crookedstar already knows this due to his dream. Soon after Graystripe has moved to RiverClan to be with his kits Featherkit and Stormkit. Crookedstar recognizes him as noble warrior. Soon Brambleberry comes and tells him its time to go. For his family is waiting for him. At the end Crookedstar says he has had a good nine lives and ready to leave. And he finally is reuninted with his love Willowbreeze

Characters

Major Characters

Crookedstar

Silverstream

Minor Characters

Graystripe

Sunfish

Mosspaw

Shadepaw

Mapleshade

Featherkit/tail

Stormkit/fur

Brambleberry

Willowbreeze

The rest of Crookedstar's family

Mentioned

Mistyfoot

Births/Deaths

Births Featherkit/tail Stormkit/fur

Deaths

Crookedstar Silverstream

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 This is about the manga is [[Crookedstar's Promise]]
 ==Summary==
-It begins with [[Crookedstar]] strolling along the shore and comments. "You're supposed to catch fish with your claws Mosspaw noot your teeth." Soon he finds his daughter wandering off. He worried about her approaches her. SIlverstream turns around and simply replies she's going out. Crookedstar worried decided to watch her. He soon finfds her tail in tail with a ThunderClan cat;[[Graystripe]].  Crookedstar catches her abd consults ehr about her choice. Yet [[Silverstream]] still wishes to be wtih Graystripe. Crookedstar gives up and waits for the consiquences. Until one night he is bordering [[StarClan]] and [[The Dark Forest]]. He looks towards StarClan and recognizes Silverstream heading their. And he realizes his daughter is dead. As she says "Take care if my kits".Soon [[Mapleshade]] appears saying he has lost everything fullfilling his promise. But Crookedstar rreplies no Mapleshade I still have [[RiverClan]]. Back in the waking world Crookedtsr is told [[Mistyfoot]] has bad news about Silverstream. Of course Crookedstar already knows this due to his dream. Soon after Graystripe has moved to RiverClan to be wtih his kits [[Featherkit/tail]] and [[Stormkit/fur]]. Crookedtsr recognizes him s a noble warrior. Soon [[Brambleberry]] comes and tells him its time to go. For his family is waiting for him. At the end Crookedstar says he has had a good nine lives and ready to leave. And he finally is reuninted with his love [[Willowbreeze]]
+It begins with [[Crookedstar]] strolling along the shore and comments. "You're supposed to catch fish with your claws Mosspaw not your teeth." Soon he finds his daughter wandering off. He worried about her and approaches her. SIlverstream turns around and simply replies she's going out. Crookedstar worried decided to watch her. He soon finds her tail in tail with a ThunderClan cat; [[Graystripe]].  Crookedstar catches her and consults her about her choice. Yet [[Silverstream]] still wishes to be wtih Graystripe. Crookedstar gives up and waits for the consiquences. Until one night he is bordering [[StarClan]] and [[The Dark Forest]]. He looks towards StarClan and recognizes Silverstream heading their. And he realizes his daughter is dead. As she says "Take care if my kits". Soon [[Mapleshade]] appears saying he has lost everything fullfilling his promise. But Crookedstar replies no Mapleshade I still have [[RiverClan]]. Back in the waking world Crookedstar is told [[Mistyfoot]] has bad news about Silverstream. Of course Crookedstar already knows this due to his dream. Soon after Graystripe has moved to RiverClan to be with his kits [[Feathertail|Featherkit]] and [[Stormfur|Stormkit]]. Crookedstar recognizes him as noble warrior. Soon [[Brambleberry]] comes and tells him its time to go. For his family is waiting for him. At the end Crookedstar says he has had a good nine lives and ready to leave. And he finally is reuninted with his love [[Willowbreeze]]
 ==Characters==