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*[[Crowfrost]] is mistakenly described as the ShadowClan leader during a confrontation with Bramblestar.{{R|vs2|271}} |
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Revision as of 21:25, 28 May 2019
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The Warriors series is incredibly long, with each book published in a relatively short span of time. As a result, mistakes often appear in the novels, the images, and in the official website devoted to the series. This article documents many of these mistakes in the A Vision of Shadows arc.
The Apprentice's Quest
- Beetlewhisker is listed, despite having died in The Last Hope.[1]
- Dustpelt is said to have died in the Great Storm, when he was actually killed by badgers.[2]
- Alderkit is mistakenly called by his apprentice name shortly before his ceremony.[3]
- A sentence is mistakenly typed to read, "Needlepaw gave her ears and impatient flick." instead of "Needlepaw gave her ears an impatient flick."[4]
Thunder and Shadow
- Larkwing is listed as an apprentice.[5]
- Beetlewhisker is listed, despite having died in The Last Hope.[5]
- The word "a" is missing from a sentence. The sentence reads, "She probably had lot of friends in ThunderClan."[6]
- Tawnypelt is called the ShadowClan deputy.[7]
- The word ears is misspelled as eats.[8]
- Despite Cloudtail being told to guard Furzepelt's body,[9] he is seen back at camp.[10]
- Juniperpaw is called a she-cat.[11]
- Twigpaw is called Twigkit after receiving her apprentice name.[12]
- Medicine den is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-den" on multiple occasions.[13][14]
- Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-cat," on multiple occasions.[15][16][17][18][19]
- Wavepaw is mistakenly called a tom on multiple occasions.[20]
- Brindlepaw is mistakenly called a tom.[20]
- Twice on one page, Alderheart is called by his apprentice name after being made a full medicine cat.[21]
- The stream that separates ThunderClan territory from WindClan territory is mistakenly described as separating WindClan territory from ShadowClan territory.[22]
- A sentence reads looked confused he stopped when it should have read as looked confused as he stopped.[23]
- A sentence reads didn't move from their mentors' side. It should be ...their mentors' sides.[24]
- Crowfrost is mistakenly described as the ShadowClan leader during a confrontation with Bramblestar.[25]
- The word beat is misspelled as best.[26]
- There is an extra word in a sentence. A sentence reads, "Then he leaned toward to Alderpaw."[27]
- Puddleshine is mistakenly called Pinenose.[28]
- A sentence reads "Violetpaw's gasped at Crowfrost's words." when it should read "Violetpaw gasped..."[29]
- Violetkit is mistakenly called Violetpaw before receiving her apprentice name.[30]
- Twigkit is mistakenly called Twigpaw before receiving her apprentice name.[31]
- "You're" is incorrectly used. It should be, "Your".[32]
Shattered Sky
- Wasptail is listed in the allegiances, despite dying in Thunder and Shadow.[33]
- When Twigpaw is listed in the allegiances, apprentice is spelled with an extra c, so that it reads "Apprenctice" instead.[33]
- Rain is said to have both of his eyes despite losing one.[34]
- Beetlewhisker is shown alive despite dying in The Last Hope.[35]
- Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-cat."[36]
- Twigpaw is mistakenly called Violetpaw.[37]
- Petalfur is said to be alive[38] despite dying earlier.[39]
Darkest Night
- Beetlewhisker and Heronwing are listed in the allegiances, despite dying in earlier books.[40]
- Furthermore, Beetlewhisker is given his own apprentice, Harepaw, despite his death years earlier.[40]
- Violetpaw is called a tom.[41]
- 'Showed off' is misspelled 'showned off'.[42]
- Beenose is said to have been persuaded to leave the Kin, despite dying of yellowcough before then.[43]
- Dewpaw is called a brown tabby.[44]
- While Rabbitleap is seen helping to free Finpaw from the fallen branch,[45] he is said to have gone hunting, and he is soon after seen in the SkyClan camp.[46]
- RiverClan's territory is mistakenly said to border ThunderClan's.[47]
- Larksong is called a gray-and-white tom.[48]
- "Unforgivable" is misspelled "unforgiveable".[49]
- Violetpaw and Twigpaw are said to have barely opened their eyes when Pebbleshine went missing.[50] However, when Alderpaw and Needlepaw originally found them, their eyes were still closed.[51]
- Cloudmist is called tortoiseshell-and-white. [52]
- Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads "medicine-cat," multiple times.[53][54][55][56][57]
- Harestar is called Harespring twice.[58][59]
- Hawkwing uses the term summer instead of greenleaf.[60]
- Ratscar was listed as a "darn brown tom", rather than a dark brown tom.[40]
- Needletail was mistakenly called a ShadowClan warrior, despite never earning the rank.[61]
- Hawkwing is called Hawking.[62]
River of Fire
- There are multiple mistakes in the allegiances:
- Millie is called a silver tabby.[63]
- Finpaw and Twigpaw are listed in SkyClan, despite having left already.[63]
- Beetlewhisker is listed[63] despite dying in The Last Hope.[64]
- He also still has an apprentice, Harepaw,[63] despite having died many books ago.
- Heronwing is listed,[63] despite dying in Shattered Sky.[39]
- Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-cat," multiple times.[65][66][67][68][69]
- Chervil root is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "chervil-root."[67]
- Bramblestar tells Twigpaw that he was an apprentice when Graystripe left to join RiverClan, although in reality he was still a kit at the time. [70][71]
- Blossomfall is called Blossomheart.[72]
- Burdock root is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "burdock-root."[73]
- Tree is called a rogue.[74]
- Jayclaw is called Heronwing multiple times.[75][76][77]
- Twigbranch is called Twigpaw after receiving her warrior name. [78]
- Heronwing replaces Jayclaw in a section of the bonus scene.[79]
The Raging Storm
- Millie is called a silver tabby.[80]
- Violetshine is listed with yellow eyes.[80]
- Beetlewhisker is listed[80] despite dying in The Last Hope.[64]
- He also still has an apprentice, Harepaw,[80] despite having died many books ago.
- Mistystar is called gray.[80]
- Heronwing is listed,[80] despite dying in Shattered Sky.[39]
- The word "slewed" is used instead of "slowed," twice.[81][82]
- Medicine den is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-den," twice.[83][84]
- Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-cat," multiple times.[85][86][87]
- The word "it" is used instead of "if."[88]
- "Mood" is spelled "moood."[89]
- "You" is repeated in the sentence "Do you have you bees in your brain?"[90]
- Willowshine is called a pale tabby.[91]
- SkyClan is called StarClan.[92]
References and citations
- ↑ Revealed in The Apprentice's Quest, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in The Apprentice's Quest, page 16
- ↑ Revealed in The Apprentice's Quest, chapter 1
- ↑ Revealed in The Apprentice's Quest, page 247
- ↑ 5.0 5.1 Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 46
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 18
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 56
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 69
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 74
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 82
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 197
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 219
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 368
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 9
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 53
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 178
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 217
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 272
- ↑ 20.0 20.1 Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 351
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 374
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 229
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 231
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 236
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 271
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 354
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 66
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 293
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 302
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 157
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 110
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 101
- ↑ 33.0 33.1 Revealed in Shattered Sky, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 45
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 101
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 112
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 201
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 113
- ↑ 39.0 39.1 39.2 Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 105
- ↑ 40.0 40.1 40.2 Revealed in Darkest Night, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 6
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 26
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 30
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 55
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 62
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 64
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 69
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 72
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 88
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 129
- ↑ Revealed in The Apprentice's Quest, page 267
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 130
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 166
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 197
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 199
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 202
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 255
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 263
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 265
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, chapter 12
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 95
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 125
- ↑ 63.0 63.1 63.2 63.3 63.4 Revealed in River of Fire, allegiances
- ↑ 64.0 64.1 Revealed in The Last Hope, page 160
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 30
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 37
- ↑ 67.0 67.1 Revealed in River of Fire, page 38
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 39
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 51
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 46
- ↑ Revealed in Rising Storm, page 19
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 150
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 162
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 196
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire: Bonus Scene, page 7
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire: Bonus Scene, page 8
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire: Bonus Scene, page 9
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 248
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire: Bonus Scene, chapter 1
- ↑ 80.0 80.1 80.2 80.3 80.4 80.5 Revealed in The Raging Storm, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 19
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 157
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 45
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 287
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 57
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 162
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 165
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 160
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 229
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 264
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 279
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 301