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*[[Dustpelt]] is said to have died in the Great Storm, when he was actually killed by [[Badger|badgers]].{{r|vs1|16}} |
*[[Dustpelt]] is said to have died in the Great Storm, when he was actually killed by [[Badger|badgers]].{{r|vs1|16}} |
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*[[Alderheart|Alderkit]] is mistakenly called by his apprentice name shortly before his ceremony.{{r|vs1|chapter 1}} |
*[[Alderheart|Alderkit]] is mistakenly called by his apprentice name shortly before his ceremony.{{r|vs1|chapter 1}} |
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− | *A sentence is mistakenly typed to read, "[[Needletail|Needlepaw]] gave her ears ''and'' impatient flick." instead of "Needlepaw gave her ears ''an'' impatient flick."{{r|vs1|247}} |
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===''[[Thunder and Shadow]]''=== |
===''[[Thunder and Shadow]]''=== |
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*[[Larkwing (BS)|Larkwing]] is listed as an apprentice.{{r|vs2|a}} |
*[[Larkwing (BS)|Larkwing]] is listed as an apprentice.{{r|vs2|a}} |
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*Beetlewhisker is listed, despite having died in ''The Last Hope''.{{r|vs2|a}} |
*Beetlewhisker is listed, despite having died in ''The Last Hope''.{{r|vs2|a}} |
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− | *The word "a" is missing from a sentence. The sentence reads, "She probably had lot of friends in ThunderClan."{{R|vs2|46}} |
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*[[Tawnypelt]] is called the ShadowClan deputy.{{r|vs2|18}} |
*[[Tawnypelt]] is called the ShadowClan deputy.{{r|vs2|18}} |
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+ | *[[Violetshine|Violetkit]] is described with amber eyes.{{r|vs2|31}} |
*Despite [[Cloudtail]] being told to guard [[Furzepelt|Furzepelt's]] body,{{r|vs2|69}} he is seen back at camp.{{r|vs2|74}} |
*Despite [[Cloudtail]] being told to guard [[Furzepelt|Furzepelt's]] body,{{r|vs2|69}} he is seen back at camp.{{r|vs2|74}} |
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− | *[[Juniperpaw]] is called a she-cat.{{r|vs2|82}} |
+ | *[[Juniperclaw|Juniperpaw]] is called a she-cat.{{r|vs2|82}} |
*[[Twigbranch|Twigpaw]] is called Twigkit after receiving her apprentice name.{{r|vs2|197}} |
*[[Twigbranch|Twigpaw]] is called Twigkit after receiving her apprentice name.{{r|vs2|197}} |
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− | *Medicine den is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-den" on multiple occasions.{{r|vs2|219}}{{r|vs2|368}} |
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− | *Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-cat," on multiple occasions.{{r|vs2|9}}{{r|vs2|53}}{{r|vs2|178}}{{r|vs2|217}}{{r|vs2|272}} |
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*[[Wavepaw]] is mistakenly called a tom on multiple occasions.{{r|vs2|351}} |
*[[Wavepaw]] is mistakenly called a tom on multiple occasions.{{r|vs2|351}} |
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*[[Brindlewing|Brindlepaw]] is mistakenly called a tom.{{r|vs2|351}} |
*[[Brindlewing|Brindlepaw]] is mistakenly called a tom.{{r|vs2|351}} |
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*Twice on one page, Alderheart is called by his apprentice name after being made a full medicine cat.{{r|vs2|374}} |
*Twice on one page, Alderheart is called by his apprentice name after being made a full medicine cat.{{r|vs2|374}} |
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+ | *The stream that separates ThunderClan territory from WindClan territory is mistakenly described as separating WindClan territory from ShadowClan territory.{{R|vs2|229}} |
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− | *A sentence reads ''looked confused he stopped'' when it should have read as ''looked confused as he stopped''.{{r|vs2|231}} |
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+ | *[[Crowfrost]] is mistakenly described as the ShadowClan leader during a confrontation with Bramblestar.{{R|vs2|271}} |
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− | *The word beat is misspelled as best.{{r|vs2|354}} |
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+ | *[[Puddleshine]] is mistakenly called [[Pinenose]].{{R|vs2|293}} |
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+ | *Violetkit is mistakenly called Violetpaw before receiving her apprentice name.{{r|vs2|157}} |
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+ | *Twigkit is mistakenly called Twigpaw before receiving her apprentice name.{{r|vs2|110}} |
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===''[[Shattered Sky]]''=== |
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*[[Wasptail]] is listed in the allegiances, despite dying in ''Thunder and Shadow''.{{r|vs3|a}} |
*[[Wasptail]] is listed in the allegiances, despite dying in ''Thunder and Shadow''.{{r|vs3|a}} |
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− | *When Twigpaw is listed in the allegiances, apprentice is spelled with an extra c, so that it reads "Apprenctice" instead.{{r|vs3|a}} |
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*[[Rain (AVoS)|Rain]] is said to have both of his eyes despite losing one.{{r|vs3|45}} |
*[[Rain (AVoS)|Rain]] is said to have both of his eyes despite losing one.{{r|vs3|45}} |
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*[[Beetlewhisker]] is shown alive despite dying in ''The Last Hope''.{{r|vs3|101}} |
*[[Beetlewhisker]] is shown alive despite dying in ''The Last Hope''.{{r|vs3|101}} |
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+ | *[[Snowbird]] is said to have two [[Kit|kits]], when in actuality she is nursing three kits at the time: [[Conefoot|Conekit]], [[Frondwhisker|Frondkit]], and [[Gullswoop|Gullkit]].{{r|vs3|180}} |
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− | *Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-cat."{{r|vs3|112}} |
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*Twigpaw is mistakenly called Violetpaw.{{r|vs3|201}} |
*Twigpaw is mistakenly called Violetpaw.{{r|vs3|201}} |
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*[[Petalfur]] is said to be alive{{r|vs3|113}} despite dying earlier.{{r|vs3|105}} |
*[[Petalfur]] is said to be alive{{r|vs3|113}} despite dying earlier.{{r|vs3|105}} |
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===''[[Darkest Night]]''=== |
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*Beetlewhisker and [[Heronwing (RC)|Heronwing]] are listed in the allegiances, despite dying in earlier books.{{r|vs4|a}} |
*Beetlewhisker and [[Heronwing (RC)|Heronwing]] are listed in the allegiances, despite dying in earlier books.{{r|vs4|a}} |
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− | **Furthermore, Beetlewhisker is given his own apprentice, [[ |
+ | **Furthermore, Beetlewhisker is given his own apprentice, [[Harelight|Harepaw]], despite his death years earlier.{{r|vs4|a}} |
*Violetpaw is called a tom.{{r|vs4|6}} |
*Violetpaw is called a tom.{{r|vs4|6}} |
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− | *'Showed off' is misspelled 'showned off'.{{r|vs4|26}} |
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− | *Beenose is said to have been persuaded to leave the Kin, despite dying of yellowcough before then.{{r|vs4|30}} |
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*[[Dewspring|Dewpaw]] is called a brown tabby.{{r|vs4|55}} |
*[[Dewspring|Dewpaw]] is called a brown tabby.{{r|vs4|55}} |
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− | *While [[Rabbitleap ( |
+ | *While [[Rabbitleap (SkC)|Rabbitleap]] is seen helping to free [[Finleap|Finpaw]] from the fallen branch,{{r|vs4|62}} he is said to have gone hunting, and he is soon after seen in the SkyClan camp.{{r|vs4|64}} |
*RiverClan's territory is mistakenly said to border ThunderClan's.{{r|vs4|69}} |
*RiverClan's territory is mistakenly said to border ThunderClan's.{{r|vs4|69}} |
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− | *[[Larksong ( |
+ | *[[Larksong (AVoS)|Larksong]] is called a gray-and-white tom.{{r|vs4|72}} |
− | *"Unforgivable" is misspelled "unforgiveable".{{r|vs4|88}} |
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*Violetpaw and Twigpaw are said to have barely opened their eyes when [[Pebbleshine]] went missing.{{r|vs4|129}} However, when Alderpaw and Needlepaw originally found them, their eyes were still closed.{{r|vs1|267}} |
*Violetpaw and Twigpaw are said to have barely opened their eyes when [[Pebbleshine]] went missing.{{r|vs4|129}} However, when Alderpaw and Needlepaw originally found them, their eyes were still closed.{{r|vs1|267}} |
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*[[Cloudmist]] is called tortoiseshell-and-white. {{r|vs4|130}} |
*[[Cloudmist]] is called tortoiseshell-and-white. {{r|vs4|130}} |
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− | *Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads "medicine-cat," multiple times.{{r|vs4|166}}{{r|vs4|197}}{{r|vs4|199}}{{r|vs4|202}}{{r|vs4|255}} |
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*[[Harestar]] is called Harespring twice.{{r|vs4|263}}{{r|vs4|265}} |
*[[Harestar]] is called Harespring twice.{{r|vs4|263}}{{r|vs4|265}} |
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− | *[[Hawkwing]] uses the term summer instead of greenleaf.{{r|vs4|chapter 12}} |
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− | *[[Ratscar]] was listed as a "darn brown tom", rather than a dark brown tom.{{r|vs4|a}} |
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*Needletail was mistakenly called a ShadowClan warrior, despite never earning the rank.{{r|vs4|95}} |
*Needletail was mistakenly called a ShadowClan warrior, despite never earning the rank.{{r|vs4|95}} |
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− | *Hawkwing is called Hawking.{{r|vs4|125}} |
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===''[[River of Fire]]''=== |
===''[[River of Fire]]''=== |
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***He also still has an apprentice, Harepaw,{{r|vs5|a}} despite having died many books ago. |
***He also still has an apprentice, Harepaw,{{r|vs5|a}} despite having died many books ago. |
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**Heronwing is listed,{{r|vs5|a}} despite dying in ''Shattered Sky''.{{r|vs3|105}} |
**Heronwing is listed,{{r|vs5|a}} despite dying in ''Shattered Sky''.{{r|vs3|105}} |
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− | *Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-cat," multiple times.{{r|vs5|30}}{{r|vs5|37}}{{r|vs5|38}}{{r|vs5|39}}{{r|vs5|51}} |
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− | *Chervil root is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "chervil-root."{{r|vs5|38}} |
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*[[Bramblestar]] tells Twigpaw that he was an apprentice when [[Graystripe]] left to join RiverClan, although in reality he was still a kit at the time. {{r|vs5|46}}{{r|os4|19}} |
*[[Bramblestar]] tells Twigpaw that he was an apprentice when [[Graystripe]] left to join RiverClan, although in reality he was still a kit at the time. {{r|vs5|46}}{{r|os4|19}} |
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*[[Blossomfall]] is called Blossomheart.{{r|vs5|150}} |
*[[Blossomfall]] is called Blossomheart.{{r|vs5|150}} |
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− | *Burdock root is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "burdock-root."{{r|vs5|162}} |
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*[[Tree]] is called a rogue.{{r|vs5|196}} |
*[[Tree]] is called a rogue.{{r|vs5|196}} |
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*[[Jayclaw]] is called Heronwing multiple times.{{r|vs5bs|7}}{{r|vs5bs|8}}{{r|vs5bs|9}} |
*[[Jayclaw]] is called Heronwing multiple times.{{r|vs5bs|7}}{{r|vs5bs|8}}{{r|vs5bs|9}} |
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===''[[The Raging Storm]]''=== |
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*Millie is called a silver tabby.{{r|vs6|a}} |
*Millie is called a silver tabby.{{r|vs6|a}} |
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− | *Violetshine is listed with yellow eyes.{{r|vs6|a}} |
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*Beetlewhisker is listed{{r|vs6|a}} despite dying in ''The Last Hope''.{{r|om6|160}} |
*Beetlewhisker is listed{{r|vs6|a}} despite dying in ''The Last Hope''.{{r|om6|160}} |
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**He also still has an apprentice, Harepaw,{{r|vs6|a}} despite having died many books ago. |
**He also still has an apprentice, Harepaw,{{r|vs6|a}} despite having died many books ago. |
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*Mistystar is called gray.{{r|vs6|a}} |
*Mistystar is called gray.{{r|vs6|a}} |
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*Heronwing is listed,{{r|vs6|a}} despite dying in ''Shattered Sky''.{{r|vs3|105}} |
*Heronwing is listed,{{r|vs6|a}} despite dying in ''Shattered Sky''.{{r|vs3|105}} |
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− | *The word "slewed" is used instead of "slowed," twice.{{r|vs6|19}}{{r|vs6|157}} |
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− | *Medicine den is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-den," twice.{{r|vs6|45}}{{r|vs6|287}} |
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− | *Medicine cat is spelled with a hyphen, so that it reads, "medicine-cat," multiple times.{{r|vs6|57}}{{r|vs6|162}}{{r|vs6|165}} |
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− | *The word "it" is used instead of "if."{{r|vs6|160}} |
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− | *"Mood" is spelled "moood."{{r|vs6|229}} |
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− | *"You" is repeated in the sentence "Do you have you bees in your brain?"{{r|vs6|264}} |
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− | *Willowshine is called a pale tabby.{{r|vs6|279}} |
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*SkyClan is called StarClan.{{r|vs6|301}} |
*SkyClan is called StarClan.{{r|vs6|301}} |
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Revision as of 23:12, 4 December 2019
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The Warriors series is incredibly long, with each book published in a relatively short span of time. As a result, mistakes often appear in the novels, the images, and in the official website devoted to the series. This article documents many of these mistakes in the A Vision of Shadows arc.
The Apprentice's Quest
- Beetlewhisker is listed, despite having died in The Last Hope.[1]
- Dustpelt is said to have died in the Great Storm, when he was actually killed by badgers.[2]
- Alderkit is mistakenly called by his apprentice name shortly before his ceremony.[3]
Thunder and Shadow
- Larkwing is listed as an apprentice.[4]
- Beetlewhisker is listed, despite having died in The Last Hope.[4]
- Tawnypelt is called the ShadowClan deputy.[5]
- Violetkit is described with amber eyes.[6]
- Despite Cloudtail being told to guard Furzepelt's body,[7] he is seen back at camp.[8]
- Juniperpaw is called a she-cat.[9]
- Twigpaw is called Twigkit after receiving her apprentice name.[10]
- Wavepaw is mistakenly called a tom on multiple occasions.[11]
- Brindlepaw is mistakenly called a tom.[11]
- Twice on one page, Alderheart is called by his apprentice name after being made a full medicine cat.[12]
- The stream that separates ThunderClan territory from WindClan territory is mistakenly described as separating WindClan territory from ShadowClan territory.[13]
- Crowfrost is mistakenly described as the ShadowClan leader during a confrontation with Bramblestar.[14]
- Puddleshine is mistakenly called Pinenose.[15]
- Violetkit is mistakenly called Violetpaw before receiving her apprentice name.[16]
- Twigkit is mistakenly called Twigpaw before receiving her apprentice name.[17]
Shattered Sky
- Wasptail is listed in the allegiances, despite dying in Thunder and Shadow.[18]
- Rain is said to have both of his eyes despite losing one.[19]
- Beetlewhisker is shown alive despite dying in The Last Hope.[20]
- Snowbird is said to have two kits, when in actuality she is nursing three kits at the time: Conekit, Frondkit, and Gullkit.[21]
- Twigpaw is mistakenly called Violetpaw.[22]
- Petalfur is said to be alive[23] despite dying earlier.[24]
Darkest Night
- Beetlewhisker and Heronwing are listed in the allegiances, despite dying in earlier books.[25]
- Violetpaw is called a tom.[26]
- Dewpaw is called a brown tabby.[27]
- While Rabbitleap is seen helping to free Finpaw from the fallen branch,[28] he is said to have gone hunting, and he is soon after seen in the SkyClan camp.[29]
- RiverClan's territory is mistakenly said to border ThunderClan's.[30]
- Larksong is called a gray-and-white tom.[31]
- Violetpaw and Twigpaw are said to have barely opened their eyes when Pebbleshine went missing.[32] However, when Alderpaw and Needlepaw originally found them, their eyes were still closed.[33]
- Cloudmist is called tortoiseshell-and-white. [34]
- Harestar is called Harespring twice.[35][36]
- Needletail was mistakenly called a ShadowClan warrior, despite never earning the rank.[37]
River of Fire
- There are multiple mistakes in the allegiances:
- Millie is called a silver tabby.[38]
- Finpaw and Twigpaw are listed in SkyClan, despite having left already.[38]
- Beetlewhisker is listed[38] despite dying in The Last Hope.[39]
- He also still has an apprentice, Harepaw,[38] despite having died many books ago.
- Heronwing is listed,[38] despite dying in Shattered Sky.[24]
- Bramblestar tells Twigpaw that he was an apprentice when Graystripe left to join RiverClan, although in reality he was still a kit at the time. [40][41]
- Blossomfall is called Blossomheart.[42]
- Tree is called a rogue.[43]
- Jayclaw is called Heronwing multiple times.[44][45][46]
- Twigbranch is called Twigpaw after receiving her warrior name. [47]
- Heronwing replaces Jayclaw in a section of the bonus scene.[48]
The Raging Storm
- Millie is called a silver tabby.[49]
- Beetlewhisker is listed[49] despite dying in The Last Hope.[39]
- He also still has an apprentice, Harepaw,[49] despite having died many books ago.
- Mistystar is called gray.[49]
- Heronwing is listed,[49] despite dying in Shattered Sky.[24]
- SkyClan is called StarClan.[50]
Notes and references
- ↑ Revealed in The Apprentice's Quest, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in The Apprentice's Quest, page 16
- ↑ Revealed in The Apprentice's Quest, chapter 1
- ↑ 4.0 4.1 Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 18
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 31
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 69
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 74
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 82
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 197
- ↑ 11.0 11.1 Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 351
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 374
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 229
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 271
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 293
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 157
- ↑ Revealed in Thunder and Shadow, page 110
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 45
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 101
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 180
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 201
- ↑ Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 113
- ↑ 24.0 24.1 24.2 Revealed in Shattered Sky, page 105
- ↑ 25.0 25.1 Revealed in Darkest Night, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 6
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 55
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 62
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 64
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 69
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 72
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 129
- ↑ Revealed in The Apprentice's Quest, page 267
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 130
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 263
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 265
- ↑ Revealed in Darkest Night, page 95
- ↑ 38.0 38.1 38.2 38.3 38.4 Revealed in River of Fire, allegiances
- ↑ 39.0 39.1 Revealed in The Last Hope, page 160
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 46
- ↑ Revealed in Rising Storm, page 19
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 150
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 196
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire: Bonus Scene, page 7
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire: Bonus Scene, page 8
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire: Bonus Scene, page 9
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire, page 248
- ↑ Revealed in River of Fire: Bonus Scene, chapter 1
- ↑ 49.0 49.1 49.2 49.3 49.4 Revealed in The Raging Storm, allegiances
- ↑ Revealed in The Raging Storm, page 301