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Style Concerns
- All most all of the history could be expanded a lot.
- Add some quotes.
- He needs his apprentice ceremony,
and warrior ceremony (if possible).He becomes a warrior between Sunset and The Sight. [[User:Dappleclaw|<span style="font-family:AR Berkley;background:#ffffff;color:purple;">'''Dapple'''</span>]]<sup>[[User Talk:Dappleclaw|<span style="font-family:AR Berkley;background:#ffffff;color:orchid;">'''claw'''</span>]] 16:18, October 8, 2010 (UTC)
Questions
I thought that Birchfall was gray, and Hollykit and Larchkit were brown?
Birchfall and Larchkit are brown tabby, and Hollykit is gray. There was a typo in Twilight during his apprentice ceremony, when he was described as a gray cat. But he is really brown tabby--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:47, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Technically, Hollykit was brown tabby and Birchkit was grey, but when he became a warrior, they described him as brown tabby, so we made Hollykit grey to be consistent with Midnight's description of two tabby kits and one pale grey. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 23:27, August 6, 2010 (UTC)
I know his ceremonies, but I can't do the template!! Could someone help me? 67.180.19.149 17:37, October 2, 2010 (UTC)Snowpoppy (need an account!)
It's in Secrets of the Clans, I think. Snowpoppy67.180.19.149 02:32, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
If his CharArt is that of a longhaired cat, why doesn't his description say long haired? Emberstarfireclan 20:54, November 20, 2010 (UTC)
WAIT! Birchfall can't be a brown tabby! The Erins must have made a typo when they called him brown because birch trees are gray/white! He has to be gray because otherwise they wouldn't have named him Birchfall! Emberstarfireclan 20:59, November 20, 2010 (UTC)
Ravenpaw
On the article is says Ravenpaw is Birchfall's Great-Uncle, but if Ravenpaw and Dustpelt were brothers that would make Ravenpaw Birchfall's uncle not Great-Uncle. I went ahead and changed it and if I am wrong please tell me. --Whitestorm17 19:44, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
That's fine, but don't remove the citation, or that his status is unknown, since we don't know if he is alive or not. Skyfeather '95 19:57, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
I'm sorry about citation, but we do know he was alive as of Dawn. --Whitestorm17 20:16, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Yes, but Dawn was a long time ago (for the cats), and things might have changed since then. Skyfeather '95 20:30, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
I fixed it on him and all his siblings. --Whitestorm17 23:37, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Technically, he's both, since he's Dustpelt's brother, but Ferncloud's uncle. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 23:29, August 6, 2010 (UTC)
Well, Ravenpaw is alive because of "The Lost Warrior". Nothing could have changed since then, because Barely would've reported it to Firestar!
Anything could have happened since then, so we don't know his status! He could have been killed by rats, hit by a monster, or something else. And if he died, Barley might not have been able to reach them because A. He doesn't know where they are, and B. It's a looong way. Emberstarfireclan 20:50, November 20, 2010 (UTC)