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Style Concerns
Needs formal family tree.
charart
Fernshade needs a charart! Moontail 02:26, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
Well considering she has no description it'd be tough. insane brick'd 02:30, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
How can you draw a cat without a description? --Quailflight 11:37, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
In Night Whispers it is mentioned that she is a tortoiseshell
True, but there a couple things wrong with making a charart. First off, we must wait until the book is released. Second, PCA is closed until the 23rd. oblivionAudience? 19:46, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
In Night Whispers it is mentioned that she mentored Russetfur
But she is mentioned in prologue and the stuff said, is already enough description, maybe we should put THAT in first and then wait for book to be released to extend what we wrote?
--220.128.147.46 03:03, November 22, 2010 (UTC)The one who had been trying to write stuff on her but somehow keeps getting what she wrote removed...
No. As I've said a thousand times before, we do not post spoilers until the book is actually released. oblivionAudience? 03:27, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
well, someone put of a charcat anyway :/ Starrlingpool
charart
Fernshade needs to look more tortoiseshell, torties are usually black lighter brown and ginger with brindle patterns and she shouldn't have white on her she's not tortoiseshell and whiteRedfern ~May StarClan light your path~ 17:52, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
She doesn't need to look more like a tortoiseshell, there are different styles of them anyways. Please take up any art "problems" with PCA. Sweetflower18:13 Wed Dec 28
Apprentice?
In Yellowfang's Secret, she is younger than Russetpelt and could not have possibly mentored her. I know that in Night Wihspers, Russetpelt was said to be her apprentice, but that's kind of insignifigant, considering bot cats appeared more in Yellowfang's Secret. But under 'Apprentices' it says Russtepelt. Should this be removed?
Dovewing66 (talk) 23:45, August 27, 2013 (UTC)Dovewing66