More detailed history in both sections. It's too general. References and citations.
- Crookedstar's Promise section needs to be expanded, an entire chunk of the middle of the book is missing.
Battles of the Clans
"the Lost Kits"
His mate in the sneek peek in skyclan's destiny is echomist because she is seen with her kits and hailstar thrusts his SON volekit to a warrior and tells echomist to take them to the elders den. Also later she comes to help rainflower's kitting and hailstar hollers "echomist beetlekit is crying for you" to this she leaves when brambleberry tells her to.184.108.40.206 02:52, May 10, 2011 (UTC)Silverthistle
Here, I re-read it. I must've read this part wrong. He thrust his son at Timberfur, who was chasing another nest. "Take Volekit to the Elder's Den!" ^.^ I'll change it now, Even though I swore it read "He thrust the kit at his son Timberfur." Splook sweet creature 21:04, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
Oh well that makes more sense!--14:28, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
I did some editing on the Crookedstar's Promise section of the article and something strange has happened with the Charart. Instead of the normal blue box, there are just lines of text. Could someone please explain this?
---Rockpelt 14:11, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
Does anyone know his warrior name, and the leader before him?Sorreltail45 12:43, September 3, 2011 (UTC)
Citation of Kits?
I noticed that the citation number 3 says that the book claimed his kits were revealed to be his kits in the Allegiances, but all it says is that his kits belonged to Echomist; it doesn't say they belonged to him until page 1 or so.
Starry Hawk 21:28, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
Also, on pages 58 and 109 of Crookedstar's Promise, they state that Hailstar has wide/broad shoulders. Should we add that to his description? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Starry Hawk (talk • contribs)
Eye Color- Amber or Yellow?
(If I am wrong, please correct me, but I believe that we go by the description that is mentioned most) Hailstar's eyes are stated as yellow, but he is only mentioned with the eye color once, while he is mentioned with amber eyes three times. I do have all of the cites for the amber eyes and believe that his eye color should be said to be amber in the description instead of yellow. User:Starry Hawk/Sig 21:48, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
I'm pretty sure yellow is simply a more specific shade of amber, honestly... Like with Willowshine only being called dark gray once and just gray the rest of the time. That one time we got a specific description we included it. So I feel the same way about yellow vs. amber. Shelly For a limited time only 21:53, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
Also, the wiki usually goes with the first mention anyways. For example, Dovewing's eye color. She's mentioned with blue eyes more, but she was mentioned with yellow eyes first. (and Dovewing is a huge controversy that I don't want to bring up...) Splook sweet creature 22:53, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
In Crookedstar's Promise, it is mentioned by Hailstar that 'Oh, yes! The barn, I remember I went there as a 'paw myself'. Terribly sorry if I got the sentence wrong, but, Hailstar himself mentioned being a 'paw. Should there be a charart for this, and should it be listed as one of his names? Thanks. ✤Creameh✤