- History needs great expansion.
- Could use more quotes from Ravenpaw's Farewell and Hawkwing's Journey
Needs SkyClan's Destiny section. Info from Warriors App needs to be paraphrased. Needs his deputy ceremony added.
Shouldn't this be a disambiguation page linking to Sharpclaw (SC) and Sharpclaws? Softpaw is for that reason. The note is okay, but it kind of deviates from what is usually seen on the website. Shelly For a limited time only 16:17, October 31, 2011 (UTC)
You've got a good point, and I see no reason why it shouldn't change. The Softpaw page is the same exact thing, if you ask me. It was probably added as an afterthought because if memory serves me correctly, Firestar's Quest was released before Sharpclaws were even mentioned. —Jayce ( ) 16:57, October 31, 2011 (UTC)
Working on expanding Sharpclaw's history in SkyClan's Destiny. Edited through almost half of the book, so hopefully the history is getting expanded enough! I'll finish up in the morning; I hope everything looks good with it so far- might be some grammatical/spelling errors to be fixed. Fluffpudge (talk) 06:34, July 2, 2013 (UTC)