History for The Sight and Dark River should be expanded if at all possible Mentors and description need to be cited Needs citation for his description, trivia, and some family membersWhiteStorm is back! 21:50, October 20, 2010 (UTC) LionClan and TigerClan afflictions need to be made (Modern)WhiteStorm is back! 21:50, October 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Most sections need to be expanded
- Flow of writing needs lots of attention
- Needs a few quotes.
I know it says that Graystripe continued to teach Stormfur when the apprentice was in ThunderClan... But, does that really count as a mentor? Should it say that Graystripe was Stormfur's other mentor, or, should it be removed? ♥ Çlóüdskÿε™ ♥ 19:46, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
Well for Tawnypelt's three kits it shows their temporary mentors in ThunderClan, so I'm sure it can stay. Dappleclaw 01:34, January 14, 2010 (UTC)Dappleclaw
- A reference might be good, mentors need to be cited anyway, don't they? ∑✐+ᖱ =ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ 20:01, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
This might be discussion for the forums, if it is then I'm sorry. In Moonrise, Stormfur was out hunting with, Crag (I'm pretty sure it was Crag) and he said to Stormfur, you'll make a great Prey Hunter. But now that he's officially joined the Tribe, he's a Cave guard. Did he change his mind? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:47, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
Ok, I've been wondering about this as well. On page 52 of Outcast, Brook says, "...Stormfur was a cave-guard when he lived with the Tribe, and I was a prey-hunter." But in the allegiances of Eclipse, he is listed with Brook as a prey-hunter. If we look at his physical traits, he is described as muscular and broad-shouldered, which are more cave-guard like traits. In other books he is just listed with Brook as a member of the Tribe. And, you are correct, Crag tells Stormfur that he would make a great prey-hunter, but maybe Stoneteller chose otherwise...? ßąէωïиց 19:52, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
Oh man, I'm so confused... well, maybe he went back and forth with postitions in the tribe. Like, he decided to be a prey hunter, then a cave guard, and so on. That's very unlikely, it's probably just a big mistake. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:56, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
It could be a mistake but I wouldn't be surprised if he switched jobs one or more times. Seeing as how in the Clans, he learned how to hunt and fight, it wouldn't be hard for him to adapt both skills to the mountains. I think it'd be reasonable to post him as both ranks, but that's just my opinion. ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐ☚ 20:55, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
I think it's a mistake on Erin Hunter's part. No, I am not badmouthing them, but the Erins have made tons of mistakes in the past, this could just be another one.126.96.36.199 14:43, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
i know that there still is an arguement about this but until we find out the truth, but maybe he is both and until we find out could we put a prey-hunter picture on the charart? It would make more sense considering that the stuff about him says cave guard: stormfur prey-hunter: stormfur. 188.8.131.52 21:36, April 22, 2011 (UTC)Silverthistle
A loner is rather a matter of choice than a status. He left to rejoin the Clan, not to live on some farm. We can still count him a Clan cat as he was always one at heart; he never chose to live on his own. (But if people insist to list him as Clanless, he should rather be listed as a rogue than a loner - according to SotC, exiled cats always count as rogues). Helixtalk 08:30, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
He had been thrown out of the Tribe, and they'd been wandering for over a month. I don't know what page, but he says, 'We took it very easy on the journey. Its been more than a moon since we left the Tribe.' -Elmostar
Midnight's (the book, I mean) part is too short. It needs to be lengthened and probably smoothed out. Most of it is missing. For some reason, it didn't sign my post properly. I'm signing it now. ωiſdɦɛɑrŧ 05:02, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
What is wrong with his "cave-guard" sprite? He has brown splotches!
I think it should be taken off. I mean, it looks like hes covered with leeches! The others are fine because they are more smudged. Taken off, or at least looking like that...
If you have a problem with it, please consult PCA =313:36, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
Oh my gosh, so sorry if I sounded mean! Im fine with it now. I think someone fixed it. =3
hey just because he was a tribe cat and put mud on to blend in does not mean you put them on his picture! I mean it looks like he should be described as a dark gray tom with dark brown stripes! I'm so sorry if I sound mean, I'm just saying my opinion, I mean no offense.184.108.40.206 03:54, February 26, 2011 (UTC)Silverthistle
The mentor references aren't working. I tried to fix them, but it didn't work out..... somebody help?01:20, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, thanks. When I tried to fix it I put in the right code, but then it wouldn't work... so I have no idea what I was doing wrong XD22:26, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
Ok question in his famliy thingy just before quotes its says 'source' for his mother being Sliverstream and his father being Graystripe where as of Forest of scrects AND Sunset it was fortold tht graystripe was his father and graystripe's mate at the time of the first sersies was Silverstream so y is it scoured?Maplepool 14:00, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, I think what you are trying to say, is it wasn't cited. I added references, so it is fine now. Also, if something is sourced, that just means that there is no reference provided for it, not that it is unknown. WhiteStorm is back! 22:40, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
In Erin Hunter chat page Seven, she revealed there was going to be new kits in Sign of the Moon. Should it be mentioned that he could be the father, since there's no queens expecting in Night Whispers?Sagestar 23:51, November 20, 2010 (UTC)Sagestar
Sagestar, Stormfur and Brook are part of the Tribe of Rushing Water. They're not going to be mentioned until Sign of the Moon. So says the Erins, anyways. Of course it should be mentioned. It did say Stormfur and Brook will be the parents of those kits, last I checked. Let's wait to see what others think. 13:36, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
Theres's at least two kits, I got the preview from the back of Seekers, the names of the two I know of are Pine and Lark
Isn't Stormfur a longhaired cat? In midnight it tells he had "long dark gray hair like his father."
Page 43-- "Leafpaw touched noses with the young warriors, realizing that she should have guessed Stormfur was Graystripe's kin. The two cats had the same muscular bodies and long gray pelt."
don't you think stormfur wants to return to the clans?220.127.116.11 15:52, December 24, 2010 (UTC)berrystorm
Brook was revealed to have given birth to Stormfur's kits in Sign of the Moon. A sneak peek in Spirits in the Stars (Erin Hunter's Seekers series) reveals his kits names are Lark and Pine, last names unknown. Egyptian Jewel 00:03, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
- We can't put them in until the book comes out, sadly. Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 13:16, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
It says that Lark and Pine are alive as of Sign of the Moon. Shouldn't it be changed to The Forgotten Warrior?
Squirrelxbramble235 20:10, March 31, 2012 (UTC) No, as their last appearance was in Sign of the Moon, not in The Forgotten Warrior.
I found a nice main quote for him, but I don't know how to add it
"The mountain breeze stirs his heart as well as his pelt."
-Jaypaw's thoughts, Eclipse, pg. 21 $~^*Cinderblaze12*^~$ 00:13, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
- I think that would be a good quote. If no one has a problem with it, I can add it in. Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 13:16, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
- If you could that would be great, thanks! $~^*Cinderblaze12*^~$ 19:57, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Added in. Enjoy. 14:46, March 22, 2011 (UTC)
- I don't like that quote. I think I know what it SHOULD be. Here it is. I've lost Feathertail and I never knew Silverstream. I have no kin left in the clans. Even my mentor, Stonefur, is dead. Apart from Feathertail, he was the closest thing to kin I had in Riverclan. I don't even have a home anymore. It feels as though everything has been stolen from me, one thing after another. Dawn pg. 321
- There's another quote that I like, it's what Firestar says to Stormfur right before he decides to live with the Tribe, near the end of Dawn. It's probably the most significant.Neonstar (talk) 00:29, May 3, 2014 (UTC)
Hey, so I know his tribe name....
Ok so I wanted to get to Stormfur, well theI started typing Storm break at dusk(Strom) and it came to Stormfur, shousay that is his Tribe name or not untill we get proof, but still thats kinda cool.... I'm a star gazer~ 20:41, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
But...wait a minute...I checked my copy of outcast(that is where i found the name), and Stromfur is listed as a Thunderclan cat not a Tribe cat so is Storm break at dusk, a differ cat, or the same? I'm a star gazer~ 08:24, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
Squirrelxbramble235 20:14, March 31, 2012 (UTC) Actually, he doesn't have a Tribe name. It is proved in the allegiances. In Sign of the Moon, for example, he is shown as Stormfur in the allegiances, not as Storm Break at Dusk. Besides, if he changed his name, it would probably be Tongue of Deceased Warrior, as Tribe cats are named by the first thing they see, and the first thing Stormfur saw was Tigerstar's tongue.
Sign of The Moon
Sorry if this is in the wrong spot, but in the All. of Sign of The Moon, it says he is a Prey-Hunter, while he is really a Cave-Guard. Again, sorry if this is in the wrong spot... Mistcloud22 20:10, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
I know it is weird!
I had a idea, what if the reason, he was listed as a prey-hunter, is a tribe tradtion? Like If a tom's mate has his kits, he fills in her position.
It said Stormfur's mother was Millie, so I fixed it to Silverstream. I wonder why it said Millie?
Squirrelxbramble235 20:16, March 31, 2012 (UTC) OK, I looked up Forest of Secrets, and it said that Goldenflower gave Stormfur milk while he was in ThunderClan. So shouldn't Goldenflower be listed as one of Stormfur's foster mothers?
On sunset, page 241, paragraph two. If you read that, doesn't it seem that Squirrelflight called Stormfur a her in the last sentence. Or is she referring to Brook?
Splashcloud Clouds that look like splashes 17:03, May 28, 2012 (UTC)