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Concerns
- Writing style could be improved
- There may be more appearances; if there are any missed they should be added
I think that there could be a list of victims and near victims on the thunderpath. Like Whitethroat.--LeopardkitSunClan Forever! 17:34, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
Those are on the Monster page, since they were technically killed by the Monster, not the Thunderpath. ★Insane Batteries not Included 23:43, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Stub
Should this article still be considered a stub even though we added all the Appearances? I'll change it unless someone makes an objection. --Whitestorm17 01:18, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
It's not short enough to be a stub, you're right, but I added the Style tag since it's still not a great page. ★Insane Batteries not Included 23:43, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Okey-Dokey! --Whitestorm17 01:18, January 8, 2010 (UTC)