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References needs to have the r lowercase. Also, there appears to be a broken link in paragraph 5. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:05, October 20, 2019 (UTC) |
References needs to have the r lowercase. Also, there appears to be a broken link in paragraph 5. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:05, October 20, 2019 (UTC) |
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+ | I actually think the summary needs to be shorter. Two paragraphs per page is... more of a play by play instead of a summary; and this has about that much. There's a lot of fluff that can be easily trimmed out.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|23:37, 10/20/2019}} |
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==[[Shadowstar's Life/Chapter 7]] - Silver Nomination== |
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Shadowstar's Life/Chapter 5 - Silver Nomination
--Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:03, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
CBV? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:56, October 17, 2019 (UTC)
Shadowstar's Life/Chapter 6 - Silver Nomination
--Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:03, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
CBV? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:56, October 17, 2019 (UTC)
SkyClan's Destiny/Chapter 5 - Silver Nomination
❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 13:47, October 17, 2019 (UTC)
CBV? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:34, 10/20/2019
The Last Hope/Chapter 17 - Silver Nomination
oh yeah yeah ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:40, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
Split the paragraphs up a bit; some of them are a little big and long. Also, change References and Citations to Notes and references. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:48, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
update ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 23:00, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
References needs to have the r lowercase. Also, there appears to be a broken link in paragraph 5. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:05, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
I actually think the summary needs to be shorter. Two paragraphs per page is... more of a play by play instead of a summary; and this has about that much. There's a lot of fluff that can be easily trimmed out.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:37, 10/20/2019
Shadowstar's Life/Chapter 7 - Silver Nomination
--Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:50, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
Shadowstar's Life/Chapter 8 - Silver Nomination
--Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:50, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
Shadowstar's Life/Chapter 9 - Silver Nomination
--Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:50, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
Shadowstar's Life/Chapter 10 - Silver Nomination
--Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:50, October 20, 2019 (UTC)