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The Sun Trail/Chapter 9 - Silver Nomination
I think that's the right nomination, my first time doing this so hopefully I did it right lol Ellie life is an illusion 23:26, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
- Needs a main quote
- We have a lot of lengthy subpages, but even those are shorter than one paragraph per page, and optimally much shorter because they're summarizing. This has a lot of extraneous detail that could be trimmed and sentences combined to come across as a not-rewrite of the novel, to be shorter than the chapter.
- Bright Stream is missing from the mentioned list.
- You actually might want to check and reread as at first glance Rainswept Flower and Quick Water are missing from the minor characters list, and there's more missing too.
- I'd do a run through on grammar and missing links, as well.âspooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:49, 4/28/2019
Remove the italics in the paragraphs. It makes it sound un-summary like for a lack of better words. Only use them when mentioning a prophecy!Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:10, April 29, 2019 (UTC)
updated, will add the main quote soon Ellie life is an illusion 03:50, May 3, 2019 (UTC)
- Still, you're missing characters. It wasn't just the ones I mentioned specifically; the chapter should be reread to catch them all, as that's the nominator's job.
- For future nominations, be advised to link as much as you can, as it was missing most of them here. I've fixed everything else of note via copy-edit. Things such as past-tense, sentences without a cat/PoV identifier that are usually extraneous, wording such as 'still' and 'finally' isn't proper, no italics in summaries etc. Usually it'd be your job, but it's a bit tedious to comment on. âspooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:52, 5/03/2019
Still working? âspooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:26, 5/20/2019
The Last Hope/Chapter 24 ~ Silver Nomination
â„ Star red and black â„<23:55, 5/24/2019>â
Remove the CS template at the bottom. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:34, May 25, 2019 (UTC)
done â„ Star red and black â„<02:44, 5/25/2019>
CBV? âPatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:32, May 27, 2019 (UTC)
Join request
Can I join PB? I clicked 'random page' and it came out a stub book page. ---â€Cattown, pReCiselyâ€
Indeed, I'll add you in as a warrior. Please check out the guidelines before participating, and welcome to the project! âPatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:32, May 27, 2019 (UTC)
Thanks! ---â€Cattown, pReCiselyâ€15:53, May 27, 2019 (UTC)
Hawkwing's Journey/Chapter 19 - Silver Nomination
Av Out of sight and out of mind () 19:43, May 27, 2019 (UTC)
A bit of an odd case, but I do believe that this would need an 'Important events' section to have that a) SkyClan formally decided to abandon their territory and b) the allegiance change of Ebonyclaw and Harveymoon, since they decided to be only kittypets.âspooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:19, 5/27/2019
Updated Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:13, May 27, 2019 (UTC)