| Template:Project talk | |||||||||||
| |||||||||||
| |||||||||||
|
|
| ||||||||||
Return to the Clans ~ CBV
- "No one will ever know Tigerstar is their father... if I'm not around for anyone to recognise."
- Sasha on leaving RiverClan, on page 83
- "I am very proud of my children. They will make great warriors. And I will watch over them forever. I promise."
- Tigerstar on page 86
- "I'll take good care of them, no matter what. They're all I have. And Tigerstar will never get his paws on them, no matter how often he invades my dreams."
- Sasha on her kits and Tigerstar, page 20
- "As soon as they're old enough, I'm taking them as far from ShadowClan's borders as possible. Tigerstar will never see them. He won't be a part of their lives at all, I'll make sure of that."
- Sasha about Hawk, Moth, Tadpole and Tigerstar, page 8
- "Warriors... am I a warrior? My kits are half-Clan, but... what am I? But then... my time in ShadowClan comes back to me. And I know."
- Sasha over what she is, page 64
I like the last one, myself. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:45, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
I like 1, 4, and the last one :3 Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 21:04, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
I like two and three. —Tawny Lace is my otp<3 20:55 Wednesday July 3
2, 3, and 5. -Ducksauce 20:58, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
I like the third one. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 19:43, 07/15/2013
A bit late here, but CBV? Rainlegs 00:11, August 9, 2013 (UTC)
The Forgotten Warrior/Chapter 15 ~ CBV
Comments? —Tawny Lace is my otp<3 19:08 Sunday July 14 2013
Not really sure if this is just me, but the first paragraph is slightly choppy... Can the wording be slightly improved? Stoneclaw 04:32,8/23/2013
No, it's not just you. I think I fixed it. —Tawny Lace is my otp<3 15:50, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
CBV? Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 14:07, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
Cloudstar's Journey/Chapter 2 ~ CBV
Okie, so I created the page and added the info. Comments? Stoneclaw 19:49,8/11/2013
Looks good to me! CBV? Rainlegs 02:41, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
Tallstar's Revenge/Prologue ~ CBV
One more.. So, I added the summary. Comments? Stoneclaw 19:56,8/11/2013
Could you extend the summary just a touch? If not, that's fine, as well. I haven't read this book yet so idk how long that prologue is.. Rainlegs 02:42, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
Rising Storm/Chapter 1 ~ CBV
Not sure if the references are right as I did this with the English copy. I added the summary and the characters. Comments? Amber The One and Only 13:02, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
It looks good! Although, your P.O.V usage kind of confuses me. But that could just be me, in case, maybe read other subpages to see how their p.o.v usage is x3, since I'm kind of a derp of explaining things. Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 23:06, August 25, 2013 (UTC)
Done. sorry it took so long Amber The One and Only11:31 Wed Sep 4
It is okay Can't see anything wrong now, be sure to check for gammatical or spelling mistakes :3. Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 21:47, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
CBV? Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 20:51, September 12, 2013 (UTC)
Chapter infobox positon
I was looking at some book pages, and it's quite difficult to notice the Chapter links at the very bottom of the page. I'd say that inexperienced visitors won't even notice them, even if these are very important pages. I'd rather add the chapter links to the Book infobox (above or instead the Summary cell). Just an idea, of course. :) Helixtalk 18:24, August 15, 2013 (UTC)
That's a pretty good point. Viewers might not take their time to look at the very bottom of the page. I think that's a good idea, to add it to the infobox, or at least somewhere more visible. So, I agree. Stoneclaw 18:31,8/15/2013
Hai Helice. ouo I like this idea, and I think moving it sounds like a good idea. I'm not entirely sure how to edit the infobox to add new sections, but I'm pretty sure I can tinker around with it and come up with something. Hmm. Or does anyone else have any other ideas? —Jayce(18:50, 8/15/2013)
The editing part is simple and I guess there are many cats who are willing to do it - we just need to decide if we go with this idea, or with another idea, or leave it as is. Helixtalk 20:40, August 20, 2013 (UTC)
Tallstar's Revenge - CBV
- "Why had he trusted anyone? Hadn't he learned that he could only rely on himself? I came here for revenge, and I'm going to get it."
- Talltail on his trust and hunt for revenge, page 405
2. "By killing him? I know you, Talltail. You're not a killer. You'd die to defend those you love. But to kill a cat you hardly know?"
- Jake to Talltail about his intention, page 404
3. "He will stray, and you must let him, even if you fear he will never return. It is the only way he will discover where he truly belongs."
- Mothflight warning Heatherstar about one of her warriors, page 5
4."There will be a warrior whose loyalty to WindClan will waver, a cat who will seek far byond the confines of your territory to discover where his heart truly lies."
- Mothflight to Heatherstar about one of her warriors, page 4-5
5. "Just remember, there is no need to be afraid of every flame. Fire can bring life, warmth, new growth, as well as death."
- Sandgorse to Tallstar (not sure how to put it, though) page 502
6. "He felt lost and empty, and his paws were dragging him who knew where. Would he really be able to let Jake go?"
- Talltail wondering if he'll be able to part with Jake, page 426
7. "I'll always be your friend, Talltail. But I'm a kittypet, and you're a warrior. You'll always be a warrior."
- Jake on parting with Talltail page 432
Comments? I like 5, 1 and 4. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:02, August 28, 2013 (UTC)
I like 3, 4 and 5. ✤Creameh✤ 14:09 Wed Aug 28
I like 1, 2, and 5. Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 15:33, August 28, 2013 (UTC)
I like 1, 3, and 5. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 15:49, August 28, 2013 (UTC)
4 and 1 one me. Stoneclaw 20:20,8/28/2013
Four and five are both good ones, but might I suggest getting rid of the first sentence in quote five? —Jayce(21:50, 8/28/2013)
4, 3, and 1. Might I suggest adding some quotes about how Jake insists Tallstar is his best friend, and how they're forced to break apart? Appledash the light of honor 21:53, August 28, 2013 (UTC)
Done both. I really like 7 x3 ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:11, August 28, 2013 (UTC)
I really love all these quotes but I think 5 is my absolute favorite. —Tawny Lace is my otp<3 15:56, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
CBV? Rainlegs 02:40, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
Night Whispers/Chapter 21 - Silver Nomination
ok I actually did this like last week but and I was gonna nominate it the day after but I forgot. comments? Splook sweet creature 19:14 Sat Aug 31
Looks good Splook! I didn't see anything particularly (Arg spelling? Blehh) Be sure to double check though :3 Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 14:09, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
Into the Wild/Chapter 2 ~ CBV
Comments? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 13:47, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
Oh I didn't realise Into the Wild/Chapter 2 didn't have silver, completely missed it. I don't see anything wrong, but be sure to check for sneaky spelling/Grammar mistakes. Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 20:47, September 8, 2013 (UTC)
Only one spelling mistake c: ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:56, September 8, 2013 (UTC)
CBV? Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 13:54, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
OuO...
Okay, don't shoot me for this, but this is something I would like to address to the project leads.
No offence, but look at the page. There are some nominations that have been sitting there since June or so. This isn't acceptable, imo, and not fair to a lot of us users who's nominations are just sitting there. There are four leads, and look at the progress that's being done. It takes sometimes two months to get things done. It's not right. I'm sorry if this comes of as rude, I'm not trying to be rude, I know you guys have lives, and I'm not in the greatest mood right now, but I think that this needs to be adressed on the behalf of the project, as it's really just not right, imo. Stoneclaw 02:23,9/13/2013
Ahhhh, I knew this was coming sooner or later. I'd actually like to thank you for bringing this up. I really would. I know it's taking forever and I feel really really really bad about that. I'm going to try and boost my activity here, I promise. Seriously thank you I needed that slap in the face. —Jayce(02:29, 9/13/2013)
Oh, I'm horribly sorry...I've had some issues all summer and adjusting to school's been a pain. I'm sure as soon as I'm fully adjusted my activity will certainly boost, but right now things are a bit crazy. Rainlegs 02:40, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
Yeah, things are a bit crazy for me too (Last year of highschool and all), I also would have done the quote nominations sooner if I knew how the coding for their particular forums worked :P (Coding doesn't like me half the time). Then I'd lose track of time doing other things. blarg I'll try my best to get my motivation going, been kind of in a rut :C Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 13:56, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
October FA
It's that time of the month again...so, any ideas? Do we have any books primarily focused around autumn or things that go bump in the night? None are exactly coming to mind, for me, but any suggestions are welcome. \o/ Rainlegs 02:48, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
Did Long Shadows already have featured article? Because if not, that'd be a cool one to do. Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 13:57, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
Long Shadows would be cool. Amber The One and Onlycolor: purple">16:20 Fri Sep 13
Long Shadows was already an FA, you dorks. Check the page. ouo Since we can't do that, maybe Dark River? I was thinking because of Fallen Leaves, and leaves are normally associated with Fall/Autumn, so.... —Jayce(16:25, 9/13/2013)
Omg, YES. That's a brilliant one. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:28, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
I agree that Dark River should be the October FA. Queen Beebs 18:23, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
Dark River sounds great for the October FA~ —Tawny Lace is my otp<3 02:09, September 14, 2013 (UTC)