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Tigerclaw's Fury/Cliffnotes ~ Silver Nomination

I think this article is ready to be graded silver. Comments? ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible 03:02, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

This looks really good :D Nothing to change stands out to me, but just double check for those sneaky grammar/spelling errors. They can slip by the best of us :) Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 15:49, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, thank you. ^^ ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible 05:59, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

pokety poke Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 01:24, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Only thing I can see is the 3rd-last line under chapter 10 for awkward tenses (fear me I am the tense nitpicker of the century) Dazzy 13:28, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure if they're still working on this, so I fixed the tense (hopefully :P) Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 02:31, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

~poke~ Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 02:25, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't think Pinely's still working on this. Bird, would you like to take over, since you already fixed the tense? Tbh, I think some of the chapters could be expanded a bit. Jayce(10:18, 3/25/2015)

Sure I'd be happy too! I'll start working on that this weekend. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 12:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

In the next two weeks, I have about 10-12 tests I have to take, so I won't be able to work on this until afterwards. I'm sorry, but those take priority and I'll try my best to get to this after. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 03:48, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Mapleshade's Vengeance/Chapter 1 ~ Silver Nomination

[wipes off sweat] comments? I worked damn hard on this. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:13, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

There is a bullet point error in the characters list and you should check the placement of some commas in the 1st and 3rd paragraphs. Also, in the infobox, for chronology (the bottom bit of the infobox) you can link to Chapter 2 even though it's a redlink right now. That's all I see at the moment, nice work Fox :) Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 13:09, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Updated could you fix the chapters template for me? It's not really working, therefore I can't do the preceded thing either. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:31, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

There you go Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 00:55, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

The overall phrasing of the article feels a bit choppy, the comma placement in particular. Try reading the whole article out loud to yourself so you can get a feel of how it sounds and then just change it so that it flows better (I'll point out specifics that need it most if you want) Dazzy 06:46, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Updated There were many errors too, I'm not sure if I fixed everything - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

I went through and fixed the comma placement and the flow in a few spots, but in general it still feels awkwardly phrased and the comma placement is still iffy. Dazzy 02:47, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Updated I fixed it - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:44, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Check the spelling/grammar again, and then this should be good! Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 04:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Updated - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:05, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Join

May I join? I can see there are a lot of pages that need to be made/finished and I know I can help with that. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:27, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, welcome to to the project! Here are the guidelines and here is some more information on the chapter subpages if you need it. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 13:00, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:00, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Fire and Ice/Chapter 22 ~ Silver Nomination

Boy I hope this goes well. How many silver nominations can we do at a time? I can't find anything in the guidelines about that. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:00, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

I don't believe there is a limit. I mean we need as many articles to silver as we can get, so... Anyway check for spelling, and remember to not directly quote from the book in the summary (i.e. dialogue). Otherwise, this looks quite good! Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 03:46, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Updated. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:57, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty good, but it's a little bit too text-heavy, as in the paragraphs drag on a bit much. Also, keep it in a consistent present tense what else would you expect from me lmao. Dazzy 12:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Dovewing's Silence/Cliffnotes ~ Silver Nomination

Wow that was fun. I'm going to give it another crack with a different book. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:58, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

This looks pretty good, just spotted a few grammatical errors. I haven't read this one, so someone who has should check it for content. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 04:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Updated Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Still a lot of grammatical errors, put it through a spellcheck or something maybe? Dazzy 12:38, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Join?

I'd like to join this project, please, if you will have me ~Snow~ 07:24, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Of course, I'll add you in right now! Here are the guidelines to read through and here is a chapter subpage tutorial if you wish to look at that as well. Welcome to PB! Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 04:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudstar's Journey/Cliffnotes ~ Silver Nomination

Finally done. Comments? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:18, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Same as above Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 04:36, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Updated Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Join?

holla — User:Diablo./Sig Sun Apr 19 04:14

Welcome to PB! Here are the guidelines and here is a chapter subpage tutorial to get you started. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 04:19, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

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