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Furzepelt - Silver Nomination

I added quotes, which was pretty much all she needed. oblivion^Audience? 01:55, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly detail The Sign of the Moon just a bit more? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done. oblivion^Audience? 21:01, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Expand TFW? Sweetflower17:25 Mon Jan 16

This is the best I can do. She's not in it much. oblivion^Audience? 02:33, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

It looks good to me. User:A Cat Named Cheshire/Sig

CBV? Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 06:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar-Silver Nomination

I would like to nominate Onestar, any coments? Icy Forbidden Love ☮

Add a section for The Forgotten Warrior. ✧Twi✧ Happy New Year~! 02:29 Fri Dec 30

where would i add it Icy Forbidden Love ☮

Under the section for Sign of the Moon. ✧Twi✧ Happy New Year~! 02:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Firestar's Quest? I haven't read that book in a while, so I don't know if there's anything *to* expand. :P -Hollydapple798- 02:58, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

ok, any more comments there is nothing to add on firestars quest. Icy Forbidden Love ☮

Expand Dawn. Sweetflower18:41 Fri Dec 30

The style in Fire and Ice could use some work, Forest of Secrets might be possible to expand, The Darkest Hour needs to focus more on Onestar, Eclipse needs expanding, and The Forgotten Warrior does too. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 21:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

i havent read the forgotten warrior what do i do Icy Forbidden Love ☮

Use the browse inside of it. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}23:18, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Expand The Fourth Apprentice. -Hollydapple798- 02:21, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Get that expanding done Icewhisker? If you need any help, I'll help you! Sweetflower00:21 Thu Jan 12

You still working on this Icewhisker? Sweetflower01:33 Tue Jan 17

I'm going to take over this nomination. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 18:23, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Just checking in to say that I won't be able to work on this nomination till Sunday, sorry. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 06:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbittail - Silver Nomination

I added some quotes. I think they describe him pretty well. Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 04:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Should you describe that in WindClan, they had picked out warriors to travel down in the tunnels in the beginning? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 04:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I will, but, where would I add that? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 04:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I added it into the quotes section. If it should be moved just tell me. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 06:41, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Rephrase the third paragraph please. -Hollydapple798- 17:25, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Done. ^.^ User:Twilightheart200/Sig 06:01, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 06:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) - Silver Nomination

I've always loved her too! Comments? Sweetflower18:33 Tue Jan 3

Can you detail Night Whispers a tad bit more? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:07, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you work on The Sight? Just some rewording, and explain why Ivytail got first pick off the fresh-kill pile during the Daylight Gathering. -Hollydapple798- 21:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you expand Outcast and Dark River? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Done with The Sight and Night Whispers. I'll get on with Dark River and Outcast. Sweetflower21:37 Thu Jan 5

Epico. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, and all done. Sweetflower18:15 Fri Jan 6

Any quotes? Very well done Sweet! ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}00:51, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Imma derp xD I'll get quotes in now. Sweetflower17:09 Sat Jan 7

Besides quotes, could you please detail Long Shadows any more, if possible? -Hollydapple798- 17:22, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can't, sorry. :/ I'm working on getting quotes. Sweetflower21:46 Mon Jan 9

Quotes are in. Sweetflower01:31 Wed Jan 11

Maybe detail overall history.  Stoneclaw    01:19, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Done, it's hard to detail a minor charachter... Sweetflower21:52 Thu Jan 12

CBV? Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 06:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Percy - Silver Nomination

Needs work, yes. Comments? -Hollydapple798- 21:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. The history needs expanding majorly, and the quotes need to show more of his personality. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 21:49, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Changed the main quote, rewrote the history, and worked on the quotes. -Hollydapple798- 22:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

All in all, though it may be a short article, it is very well-written. Possibly expand the history slightly? Just DanceGonna be okay...

Thank you, Soleil. ^_^ Did some minor expanding, but I'll probably do more later on. -Hollydapple798- 18:29, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 06:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Nettleclaw ~ Silver Nomination

I added the only quote relating to him, and expanded his history as much as possible. Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:16, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the quote the main quote. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}00:44, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Maybe detail his history a bit more. Looks good.^^ -- Stoneclaw    19:01, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, he's only seen in 1 sentence, so thats as good as I can do. And, the quote is better as a dialogue quote...so it can't be the main quote. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:17, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes that could be added? I don't have the book, so I'm not sure. =P  Stoneclaw    03:07, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, none. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:53, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw ~ Withdrawn

I made a Beyond the Code section for her, and overall it looks good to me. Quotes will be added soon. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:20, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Well done. My only suggestion would be to find a main quote that describes her a little more. -Hollydapple798- 15:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I added a link for the nomnom... Sweetflower00:40 Thu Jan 12

Yeah, find the quotes, and also, can you expand her history a bit more? -- Stoneclaw    01:18, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Adding more quotes, and I expanded The Rescue since SkyClan's Destiny seems to be fine, and in Beyond the Code, she was only mentioned/seen a couple times. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 18:27, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I'm going to have to withdraw her.. I am going to work on her article a bit more, then nominate her. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 13:57, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart - Silver Nomination

I added 2 quotes as well as adding a description and rewrote the second paragraph of BP. Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 22:24, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If you can, break up the paragraphs of the history in CP, expecially the first one. Other then that, this looks great! ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}05:12, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Done. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 00:53, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a while since I've read BP, and I'm curious. Does Shellheart appear anywhere else aside from the little battle at Sunningrocks? If so, please elaborate. If not, this is an article that's very detailed, despite him only being in two books. —Jayce() 06:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I searched his name in BP on my kindle and found nothing, but, I'll look again. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 00:44, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I searched the browse inside if anyone still cares, and he's only in the allegiances and pages 297, 298, 300, and 302 o3o oblivion^Audience? 03:43, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just curious, are there any more quotes? -Hollydapple798- 17:13, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I added two more. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:01, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Flower (Lo) - Silver Nomination

Expanded as much as possible, I added the only quote about her, so comments? Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 01:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you mention how Flower came to join Sol earlier in the history? Otherwise this looks really nice. -Hollydapple798- 02:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Done -ish, it 'twas always the first sentence. x3 Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 01:24, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Pepper - Silver Nomination

Comments on issues other than quotes? =3 Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 05:48, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Quotes are added. =3 Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 02:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you find just one more quote, other than that, well done!  Stoneclaw    01:16, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the only quote that might've worked is stating that he's dead and honestly, I'd rather have two substantial quotes then have three quotes with one extremely poor one. x3. Anyways, thanks! Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 01:22, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Expand or detail his article in any way, shape or form? xD Sweetflower21:53 Mon Jan 16

Nope, only what? Like 8 words about him? x3 Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 01:40, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Woo! 8 words! Good 'nuff x3 Sweetflower01:47 Tue Jan 17

Smoky - Silver Nomination

I'm determined. I rewrote a lot of the history (haven't worked that much on TFW, but there isn't much to do there), but I still have more to do with it. I just needed something more to work with. Yes, I'm about to deal with the quotes. Oh, and I don't want to hear anything about Sign of the Moon and why it doesn't have a section, because he wasn't listed in the allegiances for whatever reason. xP All right, then, comments? -Hollydapple798- 19:58, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Seriosuly, he's perfect in my opinion! Sweetflower23:33 Sat Jan 14

I agree, its great, but the main quote, in my opinion, doesn't show a lot of his personality, can you change it? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:22, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, guys. Still not too confident about the main quote; I typed the rest of it in. The alternatives I had in mind are the first two in the quotes section. Of course, only the third part of the second one. -Hollydapple798- 22:11, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Morningmist ~ Silver Nomination

Comments? I've expanded as much as possible. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:50, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes? Sweetflower00:23 Sat Jan 14

None, thats all. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:18, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Willowstar ~ Silver Nomination

Comments? I added a quote and expanded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:50, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Anymore quotes? Sweetflower00:26 Sat Jan 14

Nope, thats all she ever says. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:15, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Patchfoot - Silver Nomination

I looked it over and it looks pretty good. It only needs an opening quote. I am looking through Firestar's Quest and I'm debating over, like four quotes to use. However if you figure one out, you are welcome to do so. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 23:09, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I gave him bronze status. Just lettin' you know. Add some quotes if you can, and expand Firestar's Quest. Sweetflower23:14 Sat Jan 14

Is it possible at all to detail Beyond the Code? -Hollydapple798- 23:19, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll look over. I haven't read Beyond the Code yet so I'd like some help with that. --User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 23:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I can help, if you want. -Hollydapple798- 23:55, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If possible, expand SkyClan's Destiny. And if there are like 3 quotes you don't use that are still good, then just make a quote section and add it in (but I assume you already knew that). :) User:A Cat Named Cheshire/Sig

Did you get the stuff in there Quailflight? Sweetflower21:07 Sat Jan 21

I wrote down so many notes....but I misplaced them....but I'll find them. I would need some help expanding SkyClan's Destiny though. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 10:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Robinstar ~ Silver Nomination

There are no quotes I can use, but if it needs expanding or re-wording I'm all up to it! Comment? Sweetflower23:46 Wed Jan 18

Make the quote the main quote? ;/ ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}00:35, Thu, Jan, 19, 2012

I don't think your supposed to use dialouge quotes for a main quote. Sweetflower00:38 Thu Jan 19

Actually, a lot of cats have dialogue main quotes, so I think it would be fine. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 13:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, I'll add it in. Sweetflower22:21 Thu Jan 19

Otterheart ~ Silver Nomination

Tehe. Comments? :P Sweetflower01:00 Thu Jan 19

Withdrawing to pursue a different article :3 Sweetflower22:22 Thu Jan 19

May I take this on?  Stoneclaw    03:04, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it bro! Sweetflower00:56 Sat Jan 21

Guys, keep in mind that this is not PCA. Whether a nomination is withdrawn or declined doesn't change the fact that it's a silver nomination. In any case, it needs quotes and a bit of expanding. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 01:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry. :/ Sweetflower18:04 Sat Jan 21

...I just realized that I wouldn't be a help on this article. I don't have TFA, so I can't find quotes, and I can't expand it. Withdrawing.  Stoneclaw    00:25, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Mosspelt ~ Silver Nomination

Woo! I got Mosspelt! :P Comments? Sweetflower22:23 Thu Jan 19

Possibly re-word Rising Storm.  Stoneclaw    02:34, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Done. Sweetflower02:40 Sat Jan 21

Any references? I don't see very many tags. If you don't have those books, then that's understandable. Just a suggestion. User:Shadewing/Sig 21:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Grasskit (CP) ~ Silver Nomination

The article looks good. I could expand her bio though, I guess. Comments?  Stoneclaw    02:47, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I expanded her bio some more, comments?  Stoneclaw    03:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

You mean history? :3 Add quotes if you can, even if their narrations. Sweetflower21:18 Sat Jan 21

Yes, history. xD I added a main quote. It was the only quote I could find that had anything to do with Grasskit. xD  Stoneclaw    22:47, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Join Request ~ Willowfern

Hi. Can I join...? ;.; Willowfern 03:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Of course, please take a look at the guidelines and if you have any questions, check out the FAQ. Welcome to the project. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 06:37, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Burr

In the Warriors Adventure Game setting The Plaintive Howls, there is a rogue named Burr. I think this cat should get it's individual page. He should be considered a character, but because how he appears....I don't know if we should add him. Comments? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 11:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it counts. If characters from The Warriors App count, this should too. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:33, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Leaving

To all members of this project: I'm sorry, but I'm leaving the wiki. I know, by leaving, I'm being an irresponsible deputy, but the truth is, I already am. I know I haven't been as active as I used to be, and should be, but I do have a life, and its getting busier and busier. Through all my 1.5 years on this wiki, this project has always been one of my top 2 favorites, and its really hard to think that I'll never be able to nominate anything again, but who knows? Maybe once my life gets less busy, I'll rejoin. But, for now, I think this project needs a more active member to serve as deputy. I'm sorry for leaving, but this wiki is just too stressful for me. I'm sure that, with all PC's supporters and experienced members, this project will be just the same, or even better without me. Again, I'm so sorry for letting you all down, but I just don't have enough time for the wiki. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:32, January 26, 2012 (UTC)