Jumpfoot - Approved

Jumpfoot.warrior This is Jumpfoot. Comments? HawkfireMy Den 16:58, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

The eye looks deformed, the ear pink looks like anime, and there's a big black scratch mark on the back. GB57 17:36, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

The shadows and highlights look well placed, they just need to be blended a lot. Try to make it look as smooth as you can without completely smudging the color. --♫ insaneular ♫ 17:58, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Blend. The ear pink and the shading both need blending.  Sandy Talk! 18:00, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I will blend. And mess with the ear. The "Black scratch mark" is his muscle, he is a muscular tom. HawkfireMy Den 02:39, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

You can take that out. We can't really show that he's muscular. Showing him as a black tom with green eyes will suffice. --Bramble My Realm 18:50, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Better? I blended shading and messed with ear. I also took out the muscle. Is that all? HawkfireMy Den 19:20, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

I think this is the best one you've done, Hawkey. :) You just need to make his ear pink more this color:[[File:Pixel2.png|20px]] and more triangular. That's all I can see off the top my head. --Bramble My Realm 21:52, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? I fixed the ear. HawkfireMy Den

Because he's a black cat try making the ear pink smaller. It's exactly the right colour, only it is too big. On a black cat it is not so visible. Almost there Hawkfire  Sandy Talk! 13:50, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Better Sandy? HawkfireMy Den 18:33, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Better but it still needs to be a little smaller.  Sandy Talk! 08:26, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? I smallered (lol) the ear. :) blended a little more too. HawkfireMy Den 01:55, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Better :) This looks really nice Hawkey. Any more comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 09:59, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

The ear colour is still a bit... dodgy... -- Dawnfeather  talk! 13:47, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Its supposed to look like that, Dawn :) I think it looks fine, maybe it's just your computer. All comps are different HawkfireMy Den 02:16, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

I think I know what Dawn means. It looks like you put red on it and dodged it a couple times. You could make it more pink-ish. ;)--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 18:38, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the ear. Can he be approved now? HawkfireMy Den 01:59, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

No becuase the color is too dark. Use this:[[File:Ear.jpg]]Minnowclaw 16:12, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

That color is too light for a black cat.

Okay I fixed the ear. And also, the color is supposed to be a lot lighter than pure black so that we can see the line art HawkfireMy Den 18:25, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

I am such a nut I forgot to sign and didn't finish the post. I meant to say the ear color; it needs to be dark pink, because that looks like a wad of gum is stuck to his ear. Keep it inside the lineart, and make it more triangular. Copy it like the other approved ears exactly. --Bramble My Realm 20:56, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded HawkfireMy Den 02:50, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

It looks like a fluro dark red color. Try a more pink color. What I do is go to a bright hot pink, then go darker and bring the palette a left so it's a touch lighter. Also try to bring it up more and smooth it out because i looks like it's popping out of the ear.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 22:28, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

F.Y.I Bramble told me to make it dark pink, and also I am getting real tired of changing the ear pink. Accept the color please. HawkfireMy Den 00:44, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Don't be rude, Hawkey. It does look like it's popping out of the ear. Blur it. A lot. So it looks like it's inside the ear, and not stuck on like a wad of cotton candy. Do the same for your Talltail, and make his a darker pink. As for the color, note that dark pink is not the same as hot pink. --Bramble My Realm 01:21, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

You need to use the pink Bramble gave you further up this section: 20px  Sandy Talk! 08:45, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Sorry for being rude, I am just frustrated. I am way overeacting, and I will fix the ears witha smile on my face. Okay that color pink coming up! HawkfireMy Den 13:05, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Does the ear look better? I made it more triangular and a lighter color. HawkfireMy Den 15:26, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

iIt stills looks fluro. If your using pixlr, copy the image adress of the color Bramble and Sandy gave you, use the color picker and click it. Then go back to the image and put that color in it.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 20:34, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Done HawkfireMy Den 23:56, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments? HawkfireMy Den 21:42, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Make it smaller and blend it in. Look at the pixels for Nightcloud, Whitethroat, Blackclaw to see how the ear should look on black fur. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:30, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Like this? HawkfireMy Den 14:33, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

yay!! We got there eventually! Any more comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:25, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:19, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Thunderstar - Approved

File:Thunder.leader.png Comments?Minnowclaw 16:07, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Please...Minnowclaw 20:00, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I could have sworn I commented...oh yeah there was some editing conflict. Well I said that I know he is orange and is bright as autumn leaves, but I believe he is well...too orange and bright.Maybe darken him some. It might be my computer's saturation and brightness.-- ♪Shimmer 21:12, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Is this better shimer?Minnowclaw 21:29, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I think he should be a reddish brown color but he looks very nice.Stonestar

Decided to look at an Autumn Leaf to help me compare, and I believe Stonestar is right. A reddish brown, but don't make it too dark. Other than that he's fine.-- ♪Shimmer 03:33, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree. (Stonestar, can you please sign with 4 ~s thanks)  Sandy Talk! 07:16, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Ok like Shimmer said don't make him too dark--Stonestar 12:37, 18 July 2009 (UTC)User:Stonestar

Also make his nose a slightly darker pink. It looks too pale. --Bramble My Realm 20:17, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Is this any better?Minnowclaw 23:01, 18 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It looks better but it need to be more of a brownish orange color Stonestar 0:05, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

I think I finally have the right color. Is this good?Minnowclaw 02:21, 19 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Ooh! I <3 The ear on our right is at a strange angle though. Make sure both the ear pinks are triangular, of the same size and are blended properly. Try and follow the inside line of the ;ineart (if all that makes any sense at all)  Sandy Talk! 12:23, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 13:42, 19 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It looks a lot better but it needs to be slightly browner. --StonestarStonestar 22:04, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

I disagree. He's a ginger cat not a brown cat. He doesn't need to be any more brown.  Sandy Talk! 08:52, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

He doesn't need to be darker, but his tail is very light. It could use more shading. Also his ears seem like they are an unnatural pink. Make them a little darker.-- ♪Shimmer 18:21, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the ear pink and the tail, is this better?(Sorry about not getting to updating)Minnowclaw 20:46, 21 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Looks good to me. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:26, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments before approval in 24 hours? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:53, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:30, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Dawnstar - Approved


Well, I can finally post here, and I decided to use the fancy leader template for my first character art! I wasn't sure if I should blend the ear in or not, just because to me it looks okay without it on her. Feel free to criticize away! --Quiet! 08:41, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

-gasps-. That is just... amazing. love the texture. It's like I could reach out and touch it. The only thing that I see is just maybe you the soft brush and run it along the bottom of her ear so it's looks more natural. =)--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 17:45, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Is this your first image Quiet? I can't see any faults other than mentioned already. Nice work!Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:07, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, guys. I'll go fix the ear now. (: Edit: Blended the ear. Anything else? --Quiet!.. 19:16, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Are you kidding me? There can't be anything else wrong with it because it is FABULOUS!!!!!!! I have never seen an image like this, let alone a first! I think it's ready for approval.Minnowclaw 20:51, 21 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

This is your first image? *Hyperventilates* You.are.amazing. Quietstep, this is BEAUTIFUL! Officially the best-looking image I've ever seen. I can't see anything wrong with it, except the shading could be just a little darker. Other than that, wow...I wish my images were half this great. Sparrowsong 21:21, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

She's gorgeous! I can't believe this is your first image on the PCA! Amzing! HawkfireMy Den 21:42, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree. The most beautiful cat ever! --Spottedwing 03:01, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

lol. I think everyone's had a chance to comment now! I don't think her shading should be darker though Sparrowsong as she is a pale cream cat... Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:18, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful. No one really seems to have a problem, so comments before approval? (Quietstep, aren't you glad that you tried so hard to get on here? ;) --Bramble My Realm 15:46, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:53, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Poppyfrost - Approved


Here's my first Tortoiseshell. I know it needs major improvements but I want your guys' opinion. Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 21:56, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

That's so cool Sandwich! I think she looks pretty good, I just think that she needs some color on her face, if you know what I mean. I also need some help creating a charcat, everytime I try, it won't do the right color! It ends up black or white or gray. Please tell me what painting sites are used by the charcat project warriors. HawkfireRock and roll all nite! 22:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

She's pretty nice, and there's certainly plenty of shading that I can see. I would suggest splitting that big black patch that comes down from her ear with orange, because that looks better in my mind. We'll see what it looks like after that. --Bramble My Realm 23:18, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

The only thing that jumps out at me is that tortoiseshells have more black on them than any other color most of the time. Your picture looks like it has more white on it than anything. Try making the head black, and we'll see how that looks. Looks great! --Goldencloud 00:37, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

MAde her more black. Sandwich989 00:42, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Add chin shading, also there is a gray line under her. Nice job though ^^.-- Darkhallows  Lair 03:21, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Er...Poppyfrost is a tortoiseshell... You made her a tortoisehsell-and white,becuase the base color is white. Try to put more black...--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 16:13, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

I thought Poppyfrost was tortie and white Warrior...  Sandy Talk! 17:19, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the gray line, added chin shading and even a little more black. And in Twilight she was described as a tiny copy of Sorreltail adn Sorreltail is a tortie and white.Sandwich989 18:08, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh, she is... Strike my post, then. But the ginger looks a bit....bright.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 20:48, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?(Sorry I'm really impatient)Sandwich989 14:57, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

The ginger patch on the head looks a bit bright. Maybe try darkening it a shade. --Warrior♥Warrior's Den 17:00, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Darkened it.Sandwich989 18:23, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I'd get rid of that white/grey strip under the tail. It looks unatural. Other than that, this looks great. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 20:29, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

I didn't know what you meant by that but I fixed the tail. Sandwich989 20:42, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Look at the tail. That white on there looks unatural; I'd take it off and simply continue the ginger and black. Sorry for not being clear the first time. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 17:42, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

The black is too black; it blends right in with the lineart. Try making it like a light black color, like with a Breezepelt or Blackclaw color. --Bramble My Realm 21:02, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Cross out what I said about the tail. Sorreltail has it too, so... I'd just do what Bramble said. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 16:21, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Made the black lighter. Sandwich989 22:47, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

In the process of doing that you also made the eye lineart gray. And there is still a dark black patch by her hind foot still. --Bramble My Realm 22:54, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Made eye lineart black. But I thought since the black on her hind leg is in the shadows it would be that color anyway.Sandwich989 19:51, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

It looks out of place. Make it the same color as the rest of the black and then shade it. It will look more natural. --Bramble My Realm 11:18, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

Fixed what you said to fix. Sandwich989 18:41, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

The back ear is black. Then that's all I see, and she can probably be approved. Great job! --Bramble My Realm 01:43, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

fixed ear. Sandwich989 03:35, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

You turned the lineart on the back ear and part of the head gray. :) --Bramble My Realm 14:25, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

fixed ear.Sandwich989 18:46, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks great. I'll turn her transparent for you when she's approved. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 18:50, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

Most of the ginger areas have shading, but you left out a few places, the base of the tail for instance. Also, I can't see any shading on the black at all. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 11:44, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

I didn't like the tail shading so I changed it. Sandwich989 19:38, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 09:56, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

The ginger on the tail is different to the ginger on the rest of the body. (I'm picky =D) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 13:50, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Really? I used the same color for it...Sandwich989 19:14, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

It looks more fluoro in the shading. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 00:14, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

I don't get what your saying.Sandwich989 18:31, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

On the tail, the shading for the ginger isa fluoro-ish colour, where as on the rest of the body, it is just a darker ginger. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 23:26, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

So the shading on the tail is darker where as the shading on the body is lighter? Sandwich989 02:34, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

No, the shading on the tail looks fluoro, but the shading on the body looks normal. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 01:21, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

I think she means the tail looks buldgy. Try blending it a tiny bit more.Minnowclaw 17:14, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Is this better? If not I guess it's because the shading I did was like almost 3 weeks ago and I can't remember it. Sandwich989 00:17, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - There's a faint gray line under the paws. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 00:16, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

I think I fixed it, but I couldn't see it though XD. Sandwich989 20:20, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Much better. However, there is some smudging outside of the lineart. (If you have the wand tool, click the background, then zoom in 800%. This make it incredibly easy to see smudging.) Also, the background needs to be transparent. (I can do this for you, if you want.) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 20:41, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

FIxed I think. I can't wait to ge this approved so I don't have to work on this anymore (Its been forever) XD. And it would be much appreciated to change it to Transparent, Mosswhisker. Sandwich989 19:19, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Image is now transparent. She looks great! Mosswisker&Stealthfire 21:29, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Repeating, comments before approval in 24 hours? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:18, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:23, 25 July 2009 (UTC)



Here's Bluestar! The first leader we were all introduced to back in the good old days =D. I had fun making this with the upcoming release of Bluestar's Prophecy. The only problem I had doing was with her silver tinge lining her muzzle. Any suggestions on it?-- ♪Shimmer 01:05, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

There's too many smudges on the lineart, and I have a suggestion on the muzzle, just run over it with the silver brush lightly along the sides and blur. That's what I did on my very ugly Bluefur. --Mal Sorrel-Wolf 01:25, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

I alwasy thought that she was short-furred. The books said that she was 'sleek' didn't they -- Dawnfeather  talk! 03:36, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

This is beautiful. Just blend some of the colours together more as it does look a little smudgy. She really is beautiful though  Sandy Talk! 09:53, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink and the muzzle a tiny bit more. Also, I agree with Dawn. It did say that she was sleek and I think that means she is short haired. Where is a reference that she had long hair?Minnowclaw 23:07, 14 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It says several times she has long fur, I'm not at home so I don't have a book to check... -- Darkhallows  Lair 16:05, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

Well until we can have this all cleared, I made two versions of Bluestar, one thats longhaired and the other is shorthaired. When we can figure it all out, I'll delete the one that isn't needed since they are on the same file together (takes up less space). I took Mal's suggestion with the muzzle and I blended the colors and ear.-- ♪Shimmer 02:36, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

She's longhaired. Remember when she asked Fireheart the newly appointed deputy to escort her to HighStones? Just the two of them? It says then something about her getting out of breath and Fireheart hopes it was just because of her thicker fur. Um... here we go. p61/62 of the paperback version of Rising Storm (Sandstorm and Fireheart cover version) "Perhaps it's just climbing in this heat, he thought hopefully, After all, her pelt is thicker than mine." I think this shows she is longhaired but I can find another reference if there's still doubt. This was just the first that came to mind. Keep the longhaired, Shimmer  Sandy Talk! 14:35, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

Ok since that is solved, here we have just longhaired.-- ♪Shimmer 15:56, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

blend the silver linning a bit more.Minnowclaw 17:01, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowlcaw

(M) - Try making the muzzle tinged completely. On Firestar's Quest, look at Firestar's muzzle on the front. Try doing it like that. (And I can show you, I you'd like.) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 16:25, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

UpdatedWell I redid the muzzle.I decided to just try and do the whole muzzle. I can always change it.-- ♪Shimmer 18:19, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Much better, but could you smudge it a little more, especially around the chin? Mosswisker&Stealthfire 19:43, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

UpdatedI smudged the part with the muzzle of course if i do it anymore i'll start smudging the line art on her chest.-- ♪Shimmer 19:18, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

[[File:Diagram Bluestar.png]]

(M) - The tinge is still bothering me. I drew you a diagram (hope you don't mind) of where the tinge should go. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 21:36, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Updated thanks for the diagram Mosswhisker.-- ♪Shimmer 18:11, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - That looks much mroe natural in my opinion. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 18:45, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

She's amazing, Shimmer. Comments before approval in 24 hrs? --Bramble My Realm 21:58, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

>:( I sort of strongly dislike this dang project... -_- --MUMBLE785 00:06, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

What's that red on her muzzle? Boltstar 00:19, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Scroll up, Boltstar, that's just the diagram I made for Shimmer to explain where the tinge should go. :) MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 00:36, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments irrelevant; approved. --Bramble My Realm 21:14, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Brightheart (A) - Approved

Brightheart.apprentice All her other images have either been done or are being done so I thought I'd complete the set! Constructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:20, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Very nice, Sandy. I just think she should have a ginger patch around her eye, besides that, add a little more shading. :) HawkfireMy Den 14:36, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Could you make her patches a darker shade of giner? They seem light compared to the other Brightheart poses. Other than that she looks great! Mosswisker&Stealthfire 15:23, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

I added a ginger patch around her eye and changed the colouring on the tail to match the warrior pixel. I upped the saturation of the colouring as well. I was going to add in her injuries but she gained them as she bacame a warrior so I thought it would be better to show her as she was for the majority of her apprenticeship. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:51, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

She's great, and I agree with not having her injuries here, as you explained, Sandy. (OT: I laughed when I saw your sig, Sandy. You dragonkitinized your whole theme! :) Your sig is awesome and talk page are awesome.) Does anyone else have any comments? --Bramble My Realm 15:49, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

lol. well I didn't really have a theme before so I thought it would be perfect! I need a little firebreather to guard my page from vandals! lol Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:59, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The patch on the head is still the lighter color (the part of it that isn't shaded, that is.) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 17:16, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Increased saturation on that patch. :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:41, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Much better. Also, she needs a pupil and a highlight in her eye. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 17:49, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

add pupil. --MUMBLE785 23:45, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I get it. She needs a pupil. She actually already had one but I changed it all around. This better? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:46, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks wonderful now! --MUMBLE785 20:24, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 20:44, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 23:36, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Leafstar - Approved


After my epic failure with Spottedleaf, I decided to do the cat she gave a life to. I couldn't find a pic of a cream-and-tabby cat, so I hope this is alright. Constructments? --Bramble My Realm 21:08, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Bramble she is gorgeous! I just think that she should have a creamy muzzle and chest. Maybe blend the ear pink a little more, besides that she is just amazing. :) HawkfireMy Den 22:09, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful Bramble! I think you should do as Hawk said and make her have a white muzzle and chest. Otherwise, perfect as usual!Minnowclaw 01:47, 19 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I tried her as a warrior, and I did a cream cat with brown markings, but this is better. I do suggest adding a cream muzzle and chest. --Mal Sorrel-Wolf 16:12, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

I tried adding a creamy colored chest and muzzle but it looked very odd when I did. I tried a palish brown muzzle, but the chest I kept the same. --Bramble My Realm 18:43, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

I really like this and think she looks okay without a cream chest (I can see how that would be kind of tricky). Does anyone else have nay comments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:24, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

G-O-R-G-E-O-U-S! I like the lighter muzzle. The color is absolutely beautiful, and the shading is perfect. It looks just like I imagined her. My only suggestion? You could blend the cream patches a little more.  Sparrowsong  (talk!) 17:37, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Thank you Sparrow. :) I tried my best, though I don't think it did much. It's hard to blur the patches without making the stripes look wonky. --Bramble My Realm 01:25, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I always thought of her as being cream with brown tabby stripes. But this looks good! Jaypaw189 21:26, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Bramble, you are true to form. When I saw this put up just before I left, I thought it would be the only time I ever saw it on this page, and it would soon be on the main project page. I am rather surprised that it isn't. I think we should upgrade it. Unless anyone has any objections, it will be approved within 24 hours (This is just a slightly fancy way of saying: Comments before approval in 24 hours?) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 01:20, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved -- Dawnfeather  talk! 01:23, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Runningnose (E) - Approved


(M) - Now that the Prey-Hunter blanks have been accepted, I went ahead and did Runningnose. I always felt bad for the guy, having to serve under Brokenstar. :( Anyways, I used the same colors as Dawnfeather's amazing Runningnose, and mimicked the same markings (seeing as they are the same cat.) Is that okay with you, Dawn? Mosswisker&Stealthfire 17:29, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

You did a great job impersonating Dawn's style! I thought it was Dawn's at first. I really don't see anything wrong, he looks great. --Bramble My Realm 21:57, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I guess I'm a great mimicker, huh? xD MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 22:47, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

I aggree with bramble. Great job M&S!Minnowclaw 17:28, 25 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

WOW! Fantastic! I love how you did the whole thing with the markings while he's in a different position! Comments before approval in 24 hours? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 01:15, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 01:48, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Blackstar (Le) - Approved


I finally got around to be able to post him. Here's Blackstar. I think the problem I see may be my own shading. Comments?-- ♪Shimmer 19:55, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

I think his shading could be a tad bit thicker; also lighten his paws cause I can't see the lineart. I like your highlights on the black paws though. --Bramble My Realm 21:36, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Make his eyes more amber,there yellow,i agree with Bramble,lighten up the paws and have his shading aittle bit thicker.The higlights are nice on the black paws,as bramble said. --Firepelt 02:42, 27 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Blend the shading, and make his eyes amber, orange, they are yellow. Besides that he looks great! :) HawkfireMy Den 01:27, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Where does it say he's long-haired? Boltstar 17:27, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

I've been wondering the same thing as Boltstar. I don't remember it ever saying he's long furred, fluffy, or anything of the sort. The eyes are fine, as they never say what color they are. Everything else has already been addressed by Bramble.--Quiet!.. 18:04, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Does it actually say anywhere in the books that his eyes are amber/yellow? If not then I think you should change them to blue as that is the colour depicted in his image on the cover of Codes of the Clans. As far as I can remember this is the only kind of indication we have towards his eye colouring... Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:05, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Why is no one looking at the Blackstar (W) up for approval? No one said anything about that being long haired. Plus the same thing happen with my Bluestar one said anything about the approved Bluefur image being longhaired, but as soon as I did the leader, it pops up out of nowhere....Sorry its just really annoying me. His picture in The Cats of the Clan show him having amber eyes and that came out before Code of the Clans. Just want everything cleared up before I upload my image cause I don't want to have to do multiples like I had to do with Bluestar too with one long haired and one short haired.-- ♪Shimmer 20:42, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. Leave his eye colour amber then. Sorry. As for his fur, I don't see a problem with him being longhaired. It doesn't say eitherway. As long as it's consistent in his images. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:35, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry Shimmer, I didn't notice. I know how you feel.(Just not with Character art images.) I think it looks pretty good, I always imagined his eyes to be amber too. Boltstar 13:49, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Updated-- ♪Shimmer 19:21, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail; I can barely see it. But other than that, I like this image a lot. Sparrowsong 02:05, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

All I can see is there is some smuged lineart above the tail. Other then that I think he's very handsome. --Spottedwing 02:54, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Yes he is. (I started a fad). The only thing I see is that there seems to be a gray pinprick pixel at the tops of both eyes, and on his right (our left) ear, where the outside of the ear curves up. --Bramble My Realm 15:53, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

The image looks are blurry to me, but it just might be my computer...--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 16:08, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Updated Made the shading darker and I'm not sure what's up with the blur thing. I think it happened during the uploading process. On my laptop, sometimes it looks blurred here, but when I click then it looks normal. Then other times when I come back it looks normal too. On my computer downstairs...everything looks normal there too. Not once has it looked blurred. I'm guessing its the server or something =/ very strange...-- ♪Shimmer 18:13, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

He isn't blurry for me at all... dunno if it was just the wiki being tricky or something like that or if that was just the image beforehand. I don't see anything else, I think he looks great, Shimmer. Does anyone else have comments? --Bramble My Realm 21:41, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

I have just one thing- there is a darker line/mark right above the visual hindquarter that really bothers me. I suggest removal. User:Tortiekitty ----

Fixed it. That line came from my excessive over shading.-- ♪Shimmer 03:59, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours before approval Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:07, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:21, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Warrior Apprentice) - Approved

[[File:Cinderpaw.png]] This is my charart of just before she was injured. You like, you like? (I have just been reading Dawn again, and I have to submit. She was most definitely dark gray) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:48, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks great Dawn. I actually don't know what to say - I can't see anything wrong.. :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:02, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I see nothing wrong either. Great job! MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 17:47, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong,she's perfect,there are no visable flaw's in her,keep oup the good work!--Firepelt 18:07, 26 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Is there an echo here? :) I agree with it. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 02:35, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:48, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Gray Sky Before Dawn - Approved

I thought I'd try out Moss's great blanks. This is Gray, a pale gray tabby tom. The brown streaks are mud; I had trouble getting it to look right, as I want visitors to tell that the cat is pale gray while still seeing mud. --Bramble My Realm 03:33, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Nice cat bramble.its good enough --Firepelt 03:46, 26 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

He looks great! The only thing I can see is that there is some colour outside the lineart on the tail and part of the back. Just a little bit Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:05, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Love the way you did the streaks of mud. The only thing I see wrong is what Sandy said. (Also, there is a tiny bit of smudging outside of the muzzle too.) MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 17:49, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

All smudging has been removed. --Bramble My Realm 20:57, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments before Approval? She's beautiful. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 03:24, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved! Our first approved prey hunter! Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:58, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Brightflower (Q) - Approved


My first queen (I think...) Constructments?  Sandy Talk! 12:36, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

This is amazing Sandy i think she needs a small black patch on her chest.User:Stonestar 13:45, July 19 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Stonestar. I reuploaded her with an extra patch. Anything else?  Sandy Talk! 08:51, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks PERFECT i think she's ready for approval!--StonestarStonestar 13:43, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Maybe put one more black patch on her left frint leg.Stonestar 17:31, 20 July 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

(M) - Could you put on one more small balck patch on her belly, near the other ones (but not in the center of them.) It looks sort of ab-normal right now with them all grouped around in a circle like that. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 19:40, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe lighten the shading a little; there's a big differenece between it and the regular black color. --Bramble My Realm 21:34, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. The second image is the next level down of shading I can get. If it's too light then there isn't any in between. Sorry Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:54, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

I like the second shading job better, personally. It just needs to be blurred on the edges. The other shading just seems like there was black paint on her gray pelt. --Bramble My Realm 15:56, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I blurred it in and made the background transparent. Anything else? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:05, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Maybe put a small black patch on her left front leg.Stonestar 20:15, 23 July 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Stonestar! I'm so sorry you had to say that twice. I didn't see it the first time. :( Here, better? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:57, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Its ok if i was a senior warrior i would approve it ut i cant.:( Stonestar 16:48, 24 July 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

I like this. The patch on the head is a bit unnatural, though. Sparrowsong 17:29, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Thank you Stonestar. Sparrowsong: I don't really get what you mean by unnatural so I changed the shape a bit. I can't move it completely else I'd have to start the whole image again as for some reason it won't let me get rid of it completely. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:48, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

It looks great now.  Sparrowsong  (talk!) 17:36, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I corrected the file upload so the right file shows here. Anything else? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:16, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks great. Approval after comments? ;) --Bramble My Realm 23:20, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 00:38, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) - Approved

Brackenfoot.warrior My first Charat in a while. What do you think? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 00:52, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Brackenfoot looks pretty good,But I think the nose should be colored like,light pink,or light red.Other than that,good image! --Firepelt 01:52, 26 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

No, it shouldn't. We color the noses black. Dawn, beautiful pic. GB57 01:56, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, he looks great, except he seems to me more a pale brown or tan color than pale ginger with darker ginger legs. Make him slightly more gingerish, and he'll look great. --Bramble My Realm 02:03, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

He probably looks more pink now... Oh well, if anyone agrees with me I'll go back and try again. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 09:50, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

This looks good to me. I see no problems. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:01, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 23:17, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 00:38, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Tiny (Ki) - Approved


(M) - As mentioned on our user lookup, Tiny is our favorite character in the Warriors series. Both me and Stealth love him. So naturally I had to make a character art of him. :) This is my first time doing a kit, but I'm pretty satified with the way it turned out. The collar and the jingle bell was the hardest thing, but I think I got it. Comments? MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 17:30, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Aww!Tiny is so cute!I bet the collor did take alot of flaws to me,leave him the way he is!don't change him! --Firepelt 18:00, 27 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

This is sooo cute. I actually can't think of anything wrong! I like the way you remembered he was a kittypet kit and needed a collar :) Just going to give everyone a chance to comment though. Nice work. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:03, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Aww, thanks guys! Any other comments? MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:57, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

No one seems to have any problems. 24 hours before approval. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:15, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:09, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Hawkfur - Approved

Hawkfur.warrior Another black cat. xD He seems cool, so I did him. Comments?--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 23:16, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

The ear looks...... strange. Try making it more solid, less blending. Only blend the edges of the ear pink, not the whole thing. Also, make the ear pink a hot pink color, sort of like Jumpfoots' I just think it looks tons better hot pink. HawkfireMy Den 00:47, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Try using a color similar to Blackclaw's for the ear pink. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 00:59, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Better?--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 16:44, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
Much better, but I can hardly see the shading.-- ♪Shimmer 18:28, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 19:53, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Still needs more shading if you ask me. It needs to be thicker. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:22, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

I'm working on it now.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 16:58, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
Better?--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 21:37, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? I'm bored. xD--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 16:11, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

That bit of shading under the ear looks unnatural. I'd take it away altogether. That's about all I can see. He looks great. --Bramble My Realm 21:39, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

I took it out.=)--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 22:18, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

darken shading.--MUMBLE785 23:50, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Done.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 00:13, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
Anything else?--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 20:30, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I think he's good. Does anyone else have anything? --Bramble My Realm 20:56, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

The shading just doesn't look neat. It sits up in places, and is quite uneven and a bit blotchy. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 01:18, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Better?--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 14:27, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Any comments?--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 17:40, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

I can't see anything. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:42, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 12:09, 31 July 2009 (UTC)