Fircone (ES Alt) - Approved
I used the colors from Hawky's image... I tried lmao. Mottled brown and white aka "this was fun". —Jayce(05:08, 12/18/2015)
Whoa that's amazing 0; Define face shading a tad, perhaps? ✺Misty~ R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~ 07:21, December 18, 2015 (UTC)
Actually define the hsading in general and smudge the earpink. Also expand the shading on the tail. Appledash the light of honor 14:56, December 19, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I'll tweak it again later, don't whine for me not doing everything at once. —Jayce(16:43, 12/19/2015)
Re-uploaded. Ah, there we go. —Jayce(05:56, 12/20/2015)
Lighten the shading everywhere, it looks too dark right now. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:28, December 20, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. But it looks cool darker. ;-; —Jayce(18:03, 12/20/2015)
CBA? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:01, December 23, 2015 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(00:39, 12/24/2015)
Bubbling Stream (Ki) ~ Approved
^.^ Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•14:39 Mon Dec 21
There's white waste around the right side. Songheart
Define the shading everywhere? ❄ BlossomstreamWhite Christmas 03:28, December 22, 2015 (UTC)
reup Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•12:42 Tue Dec 22
reup Changed the shading tint to match ES. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•14:34 Thu Dec 24
Comments? (Am I allowed to ask...second upload was only because the tint looked a little weird to me) Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•12:23 Sat Dec 26
CBA? Splook sweet creature 19:11 Sun Dec 27
Approved. —Jayce(02:29, 12/29/2015)
Pearnose (MCA) ~ Approved
Comments? ✺Misty~ R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~ 10:31, December 21, 2015 (UTC)
Lighten up the shading some? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 17:31, December 21, 2015 (UTC)
Reups ✺Misty~ R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~ 23:52, December 21, 2015 (UTC)
Reups Removed eyelashes ✺Misty~ R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~ 00:58, December 22, 2015 (UTC)
define shading on the herbs. nice! ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 16:04, December 23, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded ✺Misty~ R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~ 00:48, December 26, 2015 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 22:41, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(02:29, 12/29/2015)
Mud Paws (ES) - Approved
I used highlights for the first time in like four years Splook sweet creature 21:42 Mon Dec 21
Smudge the earpink and define the shading. Appledash the light of honor 02:19, December 22, 2015 (UTC)
I honestly think the highlights could be dulled down or smoothed out much more- right now it makes him look shiny, like he was made out of plastic. User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:12, December 23, 2015 (UTC)
define shading on the tail. There is extra waste between his upper neck part and the whiskers. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 16:06, December 23, 2015 (UTC)
reuploaded. how's this? I lowered the highlight opacity quite a bit. Splook sweet creature 07:54 Thu Dec 24
Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 02:38, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
I know I'm not in PCA so I might not know what I'm talking about, but it seems like there is a sudden transition from the neck to the face (it's bright above the chin, and is suddenly darker below). 🏵️ Maple 🏵️ 16:02, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
reuploaded-ish. I think what you're seeing is texture. I blurred the shading layer around that area and smudged the texture upwards around that area, but it might've been too small of a change to be noticed. Splook sweet creature 19:11 Sun Dec 27
No, I can see the difference. I'm pretty much clueless on what texture and shading and all of that is, but regardless I think it's better now ^.^ 🏵️ Maple 🏵️ 19:25, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
Re-CBA? Appledash the light of honor 22:40, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(02:29, 12/29/2015)
Red Claw (ES) - Approved
All colors from the loner and rogue. —Jayce(03:13, 12/24/2015)
CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:20, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
Again, I'm not in PCA so you might not want to take my word for it, but the shadow for the neck seems a bit too dark... Also, I don't know if it's just me, but there seems to be some odd bit of extra lineart to the very left of where the chin and body meet. 🏵️ Maple 🏵️ 17:13, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
Remember to change the title when you interrupt a CBA. Appledash the light of honor 22:38, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. It wasn't lineart, it was harder-edged shading. —Jayce(23:01, 12/27/2015)
Re-CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:31,12/29/2015
Approved. —Jayce(03:00, 12/30/2015)
Robinwing (Star) - Approved
Sziri the goat sails away ツ 15:04, December 25, 2015 (UTC)
Define the facial shading a bit? —Jayce(17:05, 12/25/2015)
with the eye style you're going for, I think the white that surrounds a cat eye would probably be visible. your choice though. david 🌈 17:17, December 25, 2015 (UTC)
Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 18:49, December 25, 2015 (UTC)
the eyes look strange can u fix that
no, they don't. and leave a signature when you comment. david 🌈 06:02, December 26, 2015 (UTC)
how do u do that???---coffeelover
To sign, place 4 "~"s after you comment. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:17,12/26/2015
Could you smooth out the transition from shading to pelt a little more? This looks lovely. Splook sweet creature 08:18 Sat Dec 26
Could you add some depth to the face? You've made her look so beautiful. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ · ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ ★ 14:50, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
Re-ups Thanks c: Sziri the goat sails away ツ 15:33, December 27, 2015 (UTC)
CBA? Splook sweet creature 04:23 Tue Dec 29
Approved. User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:01, December 30, 2015 (UTC)