Larksong (AVoS) (Alt. W) - Approved[]
Just sitting here making alts, man. Branchwing★ 21:20, November 7, 2017 (UTC)
Cute! Smooth out the shading and define it on the tail. 21:25, November 7, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thanks! Branchwing★ 02:26, November 8, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading on the white just a bit more. Nice pattern choice; I like it. 8D —Jayce(14:57, 11/09/2017)
Reuploaded Is this any better? And thank you! ^^ Branchwing★ 01:20, November 10, 2017 (UTC)
Recede the shading on the chest a bit. Jayie Just you wait~ 16:49, November 11, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Branchwing★ 17:47, November 11, 2017 (UTC)
Define the light source a bit on the farthest front leg. Comet ☄ Blazing Star 13:34, November 12, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Branchwing★ 18:34, November 12, 2017 (UTC)
Define shading on the front legs. 03:06, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Branchwing★ 00:30, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —Jayce(06:19, 11/19/2017)
Approved. —Jayce(11:22, 11/20/2017)
Twigbranch (W) - Approved[]
All colors from her other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:52, November 16, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading on her legs. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 00:57, November 16, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading depth and define the ear pink madie the wicked witch of the west
Reuploaded. The shading on these blanks is soo difficult. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:03, November 16, 2017 (UTC)
The ear pink doesn't match with the other images in my opinion. They seem more darker. 01:22, November 16, 2017 (UTC)
I think it's just the size; iirc, Bluestar is the OA of her other two images, so I think all of Twigbranch's colors should be the same. —Jayce(05:33, 11/16/2017)
CBA? —Jayce(11:19, 11/20/2017)
Approved. Jayie Just you wait~ 21:54, November 22, 2017 (UTC)
Cloudmist (Alt. Lo) - Approved[]
Yup Black Hole / Green Sun – 15:43, November 10, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth those dark patches of shading a little on the belly and hindleg furthest from us, the white on the back paws and belly look a bit gray. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 18:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Black Hole / Green Sun – 09:18, November 13, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading on the back leg furthest from us. 03:06, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Black Hole / Green Sun – 06:52, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
I think the shading is leaking a bit from where the neck shading meets the front leg shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:28, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Could you smooth out the neck shading and define the shading depth on the head? Branchwing★ 00:35, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
I think the eye colour is leaking a bit? Nice Job! ErmineGlow (talk) 13:18, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
What means "leaking"? Black Hole / Green Sun – 14:10, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Black Hole / Green Sun – 14:19, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
Erase that one black pixel underneath the chin. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:58, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Black Hole / Green Sun – 05:48, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —Jayce(11:21, 11/20/2017)
Approved. Jayie Just you wait~ 21:56, November 22, 2017 (UTC)
Sandynose (W) - Approved[]
This really sucks :^/—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 09:36, 11/12/2017
Define the shading on the sll the legs except for the front one closest to us. --ErmineGlow (talk) 15:50, November 12, 2017 (UTC)
Can you define/add stripes on the legs? madie the wicked witch of the west
Re-uploaded.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 23:30, 11/12/2017
Re-uploaded. Color change.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 23:37, 11/12/2017
Define the leg shading a smidge? 02:58, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Can you specify please? Like, all the legs?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 05:41, 11/14/2017
Yea. All of the legs. 05:46, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:32, 11/15/2017
Define the lighting on the tail? 00:19, November 19, 2017 (UTC)
There is light. Its just hard to see bevause of the dorsal stripe, but if other's agree I'll see whar I can do about the tail.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:41, 11/19/2017
Oh there's a dorsal stripe on the tail? I'll fix that on the kit then! 00:51, November 19, 2017 (UTC)
Haha, yeah^ It's just slightly difficult to see because of the way it blends in, but its there.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 05:59, 11/19/2017
CBA? —Jayce(11:20, 11/20/2017)
Approved. Jayie Just you wait~ 21:59, November 22, 2017 (UTC)
Gravelpaw (Lo) - Approved[]
This isn't very good but don't worry about it madie the wicked witch of the west
Smooth out the shading. ♥ Star red and black ♥<17:15, 11/15/2017>
reups redid the shading madie the wicked witch of the west
reups again messed with texture madie the wicked witch of the west
CBA? —Jayce(11:19, 11/20/2017)
Approved. Jayie Just you wait~ 22:02, November 22, 2017 (UTC)
Palepaw (Ki) ~ Approved[]
Can't decide between Litten or Rowlet. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:34, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the chest? And Litten. Because Dark/Fire is the best. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•16:40 Fri Nov 17
Smooth the haunch/flank/whatever that triangle of shading is next to the -> leg. Also Rowlet, because grass/ghost beats all madie the wicked witch of the west
Reups I chose Litten in Sun, so I might pick Rowlet this time just for a change of scenery? Ended up redoing the shading because I didn't like it. I'll go back and smooth out the chest shading in a bit. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:59, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Sorry, flank shading, whatever it's called Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:03, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
If you didn't notice, there's a bit of black on the left side of her chin on the apprentice image. Other than that, this matches well - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:04,11/18/2017
Reups Whoops! Didn't see that. Thanks, Fox! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:45, November 18, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Smoothed some of the shading Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:09, November 19, 2017 (UTC)
Maybe smooth the shading on the hindleg. Looks cute! —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:37, November 20, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Thank you! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:30, November 20, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? Jayie Just you wait~ 21:52, November 22, 2017 (UTC)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:57, November 24, 2017 (UTC)
Nectarpaw (A) - Approved[]
Sweet name. ♥ Star red and black ♥<02:08, 11/10/2017>
Can you define the shading on the back paw furthest away from us? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)
I think the shading on the left side of the face should be moved to the right, since that looks like where the shadow is coming from on the rest of the body, also define the shading on the front paw furthest from us. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 18:15, November 10, 2017 (UTC)
Define shading on two paws furthest from us ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:12, 11/10/2017 )
re-up Light source is from above, slightly to the right, if that makes sense. ♥ Star red and black ♥<00:18, 11/11/2017>
Since the light source is from above, can you add a little more shading to the chin and neck area? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:12, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading a little on the legs closest to us. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:54, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
re-up Might fix some things. ♥ Star red and black ♥<18:23, 11/15/2017>
Smooth out the shading on the head a bit! Purdue!! 06:00, November 16, 2017 (UTC)
re-up Thanks! ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:40, 11/20/2017>
CBA? —Jayce(18:03, 11/23/2017)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:07, November 25, 2017 (UTC)
Sandynose (App) - Approved[]
not sure about this shading... —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:54, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
Possibly define the sahding on the ginger parts of the front legs? Also, I think the tail shading would be switched, but I'm probably just tired idk. madie the wicked witch of the west
Re-uploaded. the shading is supposed to be coming from the bottom, so the tail should be good. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:03, November 16, 2017 (UTC)
Could you define the shading on the ginger bits again? ErmineGlow (talk) 02:26, November 16, 2017 (UTC)
The stripes on the warrior seem softer than these ones are. I think Broken might have blurred those ones a bit more. —Jayce(05:32, 11/16/2017)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 06:38, November 16, 2017 (UTC)
The texture was meant to be (idk how to word it) invisible of sorts, but this seems too defined. The darker texture layer should be at 11% while the lighter texture layer should be at 18%—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:27, 11/17/2017
Re-uploaded.—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:39, November 18, 2017 (UTC)
I guess per broken, the tail needs to have a dorsal stripe. Didn't realize it, lol. 00:15, November 20, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:36, November 20, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —Jayce(18:02, 11/23/2017)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:07, November 25, 2017 (UTC)
Gravelpaw (Ki) - Approved[]
Ereeee—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:14, 11/23/2017
Add some lighting to the back paw. Perdy! 00:42, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ThANK—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:52, 11/23/2017
CBA? —Jayce(12:04, 11/26/2017)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:47, November 28, 2017 (UTC)
Fringepaw (Lo) - Approved[]
Wow, sorry for deserting the wiki! I'll try to be more active. ShypawDo the trickor treat 01:59, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Beautiful! Define the facial shading a bit? I know it may hard to see it. 02:57, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thanks Cosmo! ShypawDo the trickor treat 03:13, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded again Waste. :P ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:16, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
Define the light a little on the tail and hindleg furthest from us. Maybe smooth the shading a little, unless it's supposed to be a bit bold. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:57, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
Still working? —Jayce(11:20, 11/20/2017)
Declined due to lack of work. —Jayce(18:03, 11/23/2017)
Taking over/reups madie the wicked witch of the west
Should the nose be black like the apprentice ? 05:50, November 24, 2017 (UTC)
The apprentices nose isn't black. the shading makes it look like that, though. From what I can tell, its probably the same color as the ear pink, so that's what I made it. madie the wicked witch of the west
The apprentice's nose is the same color as the fur ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (18:53, 11/24/2017 )
reups hm. idk why it really looks pink to me. probably the shading tint you used madie the wicked witch of the west
CBA?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:49, November 28, 2017 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(14:16, 11/29/2017)
Dewpaw (Alt A) - Approved[]
Define the shading a bit? madie the wicked witch of the west
He looks more dark brown then just a neutral brown.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 20:46, 11/17/2017
Pretty sure that if the shade isn't specified, you can choose whichever one you want. madie the wicked witch of the west
Shade is my choice unless one is stated. Actually, Broken, the base color is the one you used on your version. I liked it. —Jayce(21:32, 11/17/2017)
I'm honored!! :o Anyways, can you soften the haunch shading?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 22:52, 11/17/2017
Re-uploaded. I think it only looks that hard because there's also a stripe or two at the edge of the haunch lineart. —Jayce(22:17, 11/18/2017)
Define the shading on the belly? Jayie Just you wait~ 02:36, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Yay, a comment. 8D —Jayce(17:22, 11/23/2017)
Maybe define the shading on the legs? If others think it's fine, ignore this! 03:44, November 24, 2017 (UTC)
Can you define the face shading a little bit too? madie the wicked witch of the west
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(05:09, 11/26/2017)
Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 21:04, November 28, 2017 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(02:47, 11/30/2017)
Sandynose (Ki) - Approved[]
I love doing kits. 00:28, November 19, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading on the front legs please. Great job! ErmineGlow (talk) 13:11, November 20, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. 00:42, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
Define the earpink in the <--- ear a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:36, November 24, 2017 (UTC)
Okay so a few questions: 1. Does this have texture? I know the textures supposed to be hard to see but I can't see it at all here. 2. Does this have the paler muzzle/chest? Also, the only face stripes should be the lines next to the eyes (shouldn't touch the eyes) and the stripe on the forehead. One last thing, the stripes are a little bit smoother/blurrier on the other images. (Sorry for the long comment lmao, this looks awesome) madie the wicked witch of the west
Oh. I didn't realize there was texture. No, there isn't a pale muzzle/belly. It wasn't on the warrior or apprentice that I didn't see. There's the stripe on the forehead. It's hard to see with the shading up there. Ok. I'll make sure to fix all of this. I'll smooth them out a little bit. 21:43, November 24, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. 01:18, November 26, 2017 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 21:06, November 28, 2017 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(02:47, 11/30/2017)
Nectarpaw (Lo) - Approved[]
Ew Branchwing★ 16:31, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a bit? —Jayce(17:23, 11/23/2017)
Reuploaded Branchwing★ 17:57, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
Just a tiny bit more on the main body? And define the tail shading too. —Jayce(18:02, 11/23/2017)
Define the earpink if you can?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 18:20, 11/23/2017
Define the shading on the tail. 19:08, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
Jayce already said that ^^ Define the shading depth on the farthest back leg? madie the wicked witch of the west
Reuploaded tfw you're about to reupload but a new comment popped up Branchwing★ 19:41, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading on the ---> front leg a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:34, November 24, 2017 (UTC)
Which leg are you talking about, Vec? The closest one to us? Branchwing★ 17:13, November 24, 2017 (UTC)
Yeah the leg closest to us. My bad. ^^; Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:48, November 25, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Branchwing★ 18:02, November 25, 2017 (UTC)
Define the light on the front legs. --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:10, November 26, 2017 (UTC)
I feel like the light is visible enough on the closest leg, just not the furthest.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 11:36, 11/26/2017
Reuploaded Branchwing★ 16:57, November 26, 2017 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 21:06, November 28, 2017 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(02:47, 11/30/2017)
Fringepaw (Ki) - Approved[]
been a while since i made a charart luke my last (マイラスト) 23:38 Thu Nov 23
You need to have a date in the reservation table. madie the wicked witch of the west
Define the ear pink in --> ear. 05:51, November 24, 2017 (UTC)
re-ups luke my last (マイラスト) 15:20 Fri Nov 24
Smooth out the chest and head shading Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:38, November 24, 2017 (UTC)
re-ups probably looks worse now but i tried luke my last (マイラスト) 16:52 Fri Nov 24
The base looks a lot darker than the other images. I can barely see the shading here. madie the wicked witch of the west
re-ups i colorpicked from the apprentice image but this should be a bit lighter now luke my last (マイラスト) 21:02 Fri Nov 24
It might just be my eyes/computer, but I still can't really see the shading. --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:08, November 26, 2017 (UTC)
I think it looks fine now. If it gets lightened more than this, it might not match the apprentice. madie the wicked witch of the west
Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 21:07, November 28, 2017 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(02:47, 11/30/2017)
Guardian Cat Blanks - Approved[]
Is this right? I don't know what to name the file, or the heading. I can change it later if needed. But thanks everyone who voted for me!! 01:41, October 21, 2017 (UTC)
I'm not sure how approving a blank works, but I would wait until someone who has been here longer than me says how to name it. Anyways, could you make the ears a little longer on both blanks? Many cats have longer ears than what is shown on the blank. I think that's how comments on blanks works. I would wait until someone who has seen a blank approved to comment before you do this though. (Just to make sure I'm commenting on this right). Branchwing★ 12:08, October 21, 2017 (UTC)
The front legs should be longer and the front paws flatter CØØKIE (talk) 12:22, October 21, 2017 (UTC)
I believe the heading needs to be Guardian Cat Blanks - For Approval. Can you make the inner lineart a bit thicker? (If that makes sense) Most of it appears to be 1px madie the wicked witch of the west
the eyes should be somewhat smaller, and maybe make the longhaired tail more fluffy. it is long fur, after all. david 🌈 16:12, October 21, 2017 (UTC)
Maybe the nose shouldn't be connected to the eyes, or spaced out a bit more? :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 17:56, October 21, 2017 (UTC)
Don't know a lot about anatomy, but I think it only looks connected because of how the face is situated/the direction the cat's head is facing? —Jayce(18:19, 10/21/2017)
I think it's ok, when the eyes get made a bit smaller there'll be more distance to represent the bridge of the nose. maybe make the nose slightly smaller too david 🌈 18:25, October 21, 2017 (UTC)
Make the tail a bit longer. ♥ Star red and black ♥<18:51, 10/21/2017>
The left front leg looks a bit smaller and squished than the others. Comet ☄ Blazing Star 16:57, October 22, 2017 (UTC)
I'll upload later tonight, sorry for such a wait for the past couple days. I'll rename them gc.long.png and gc.short.png when I get the chance tonught and thanks for all the critiques. I appreciate it. 22:30, October 22, 2017 (UTC)
Actually, Cosmo, can you rename them guardian cat.long.png and guardian cat.short.png? Appledash the light of honor 00:07, October 23, 2017 (UTC)
Yes I will. Also, I'll need to upload them under two different files as I realized it as these are only under one file. I'll get around to that sometime tonight or tomorrow! 00:08, October 23, 2017 (UTC)
It's good, Cosomo. Blanks are not held to the same time restrains as regular images are; that would be impossible, due to the fact that anatomy is difficult and forcing someone to produce a new blank in a short amount of time by restricting them is just asking for rushed and sloppy work. Doesn't mean you can take two weeks to upload though, it just means that the one-month limit does not apply here. —Jayce(04:59, 10/23/2017)
Re-uploaded. Thanks for all the nice comments and sorry for taking so long to upload. I may edit the eyes again. They still bother me, lol. But I think it's looking better! Also, uploaded with two different files and renamed them with the proper naming, and thanks to Appledash and Jaycie for being so kind about this! It means a lot. 23:21, October 24, 2017 (UTC)
You're doing a great job, Cosmo! Anyways, could you make the tail on the short-haired blank end a little thinner? If I know one thing about cat anatomy, it's that a cat's tail becomes thinner as it nears the end of it. Branchwing★ 01:17, October 25, 2017 (UTC)
Make the eyes a little wider and more oval, and space them out a bit. Also I feel like the hip should be wider on both. Jayie Just you wait~ 12:54, October 25, 2017 (UTC)
I think the ears should still be a little bit smaller and more pointed, the lineart around the paws is still a little thin, plus the front paws seem....small for lack of a better word? like when you look up a cat sitting down, you know what I mean? david 🌈 04:34, October 30, 2017 (UTC)
Sorry for taking so long to upload. I got caught up with homework, and then I got really sick. Hopefully, I'll upload tomorrow!! 02:42, October 31, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I still think the face is way off. 02:55, November 2, 2017 (UTC)
to match the style of the other blanks, i think you should make the fur tips less round, if you get what i mean. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:50,11/2/2017
Could you widen the -> eye on both blanks by like one pixel? It looks a little off to me compared to the other eye. Branchwing★ 10:20, November 3, 2017 (UTC)
Could you thicken the paw lineart just a bit? Particularly the two front paws. And this is beautiful! :D Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 13:37, November 3, 2017 (UTC)
Could you also thicken the eye lineart? ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, November 3, 2017 (UTC)
I think the thickness of the eye lineart is fine. On all of the other blanks, the eye lineart is one pixel thick, so why make it thicker here? Branchwing★ 22:55, November 3, 2017 (UTC)
Perhaps make the nose(s) a bit smaller? madie the wicked witch of the west
When will be introduced schemes of shadow on this chararts if chararts be introduced in wiki? I can not wait to start making Fierce! ::::D Black Hole / Green Sun – 14:14, November 7, 2017 (UTC)
Please don't comment unless it's a critique. I know it's taking a while for me to upload each time, but please be patient. 14:31, November 7, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. These are turning out much better. 01:28, November 9, 2017 (UTC)
they are, dude. I think you should thicken the linear art on the tail a little bit. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:18,11/9/2017
Re-uploaded. 00:58, November 10, 2017 (UTC)
Thicken lineart on paws and ears ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:19, 11/10/2017 )
I think the ear lineart is fine, but agreed on the paws ^^ These look awesome so far! madie the wicked witch of the west
I think the cheeks are a bit too wide, maybe make the face a bit more narrow? Jayie Just you wait~ 16:46, November 11, 2017 (UTC)
The right hind leg seems to be sticking out to far. Maybe narrow it. Gosh Cosmo this is a great blank! Comet ☄ Blazing Star 13:30, November 12, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. 01:30, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
Bring the line for the left (our left) cheek on the shorthair to the right a little, it's still a touch too wide. Jayie Just you wait~ 20:43, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. 00:08, November 19, 2017 (UTC)
So the short-haired blank's legs are a bit more straight, while the long-haired ones are slightly curved. Is this intentional, or allowed? Lmao I've never been around for any blanks being approved, so I'm not very sure. Sorry.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:45, 11/19/2017
I see what you mean now. I'll fix them to curve a little bit to match the long-haired. And then I'm gonna thicken the neck and shorten the hind leg on the short haired blank as well.. 00:49, November 19, 2017 (UTC)
Could you make the <- ear on the long-haired blank match the short-haired's ear? And perhaps thicken the ear lineart on the short-haired blank as well. These blanks are really coming along! Branchwing★ 14:43, November 19, 2017 (UTC)
Not sure if it's appropriate, but I think that the back on the short-haired one could be a bit more curved? Loving these blanks though! — ☆ paper · finches ★ 22:35, November 20, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks !! 00:54, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
I think they're supposed to be the same blank besides the fur length, but the short-hair is smaller than the long-hair. I think it's mostly the leg length ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (03:50, 11/23/2017 )
I think they look equal. --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:37, November 26, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. The other legs look better on the short-furred, but fixed it. 01:41, November 26, 2017 (UTC)
Probably gonna get shot for this, but I really like these... so I'm going to try and CBA these? I feel they're pretty dang good as they are. So, comments before approval??? —Jayce(14:14, 11/29/2017)
Approved. —Jayce(14:18, 11/30/2017)
Mittens (GC) - Approved[]
probably gonna redo some parts of this lmao david 🌈 17:46, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
There's waste on the tail.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 17:51, 11/30/2017
Smooth out the shading on the tail. 19:18, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
what shading on the tail? david 🌈 19:41, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
Near the start of it by the leg. 19:50, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
reuploaded david 🌈 20:19, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
I love the pattern. :) Define the shading overall, it's a bit hard to make it out from the darker pattern. Jayie Just you wait~ 22:48, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
reuploaded david 🌈 06:47, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading just a little bit more? —Jayce(15:46, 12/01/2017)
reuploaded "model it after jinkies. she's your cat, it'll be easy as." -famous last words david 🌈 19:41, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —Jayce(11:31, 12/03/2017)
Approved. —Jayce(13:31, 12/04/2017)
Cobweb (GC) - Approved[]
I love him. Too bad my new pen isn't here yet so he looks ugly >.>'; Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•17:15 Thu Nov 30
Reuploaded I lightened the shading. Still hideous since I suck at blurred shading, but its a little better. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•17:18 Thu Nov 30
Define the shading depth. Cool!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 22:13, 11/30/2017
Reuploaded Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•00:40 Fri Dec 1
Could you make the eyes more green? They look a little blue to me right now. Could you also define the ear pink a little bit? Branchwing★ 01:58, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
I think it's an aqua green. The shade of green wasn't specified so I think it's okay.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 03:23, 12/01/2017
Actually, the cite for him having green eyes was talking about Fierce, not Cobweb. Eye color is now Sunjaw's choice. —Jayce(07:19, 12/01/2017)
Reuploaded This looks better. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•15:43 Fri Dec 1
Define the shading on the tail and chest area? Tbh, I never thought I would do Blanks for this wikia! 01:10, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded I just ended up redoing most of it since I got the pen yesterday. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•14:53 Sat Dec 2
Could you define the shading a little bit? Branchwing★ 16:53, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —Jayce(11:31, 12/03/2017)
Wait, are you allowed to deem it CBA??? He hasn't reuploaded since I've posted that comment. Branchwing★ 14:53, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
I actually didn't notice your comment, my apologies. Also, Sunjaw uses she/her pronouns. —Jayce(15:00, 12/03/2017)
It's okay. And my bad on the pronoun, Sunjaw. Wasn't aware of what pronouns you used. Branchwing★ 15:07, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded You're okay! I don't usually make references to much about me lol. And this is as much as I can define it on the tail without completely masking the pattern. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•22:03 Sun Dec 3
Okay, now I'm going to CBA this. lol —Jayce(02:28, 12/04/2017)
Approved. —Jayce(06:33, 12/05/2017)
Peanut (GC) - Approved[]
these blanks turned out lovely. appearance is based off of my cat. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 21:41, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
There is an image to match Patch.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:44, 11/30/2017
oh! lol i didn't even notice! i'll reupload in a bit. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 21:49, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. all right, there we go. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 22:03, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
Maybe define the shading on the <-- front leg? This is really pretty!! madie the wicked witch of the west
Re-uploaded. thank you! —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:43, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —Jayce(11:31, 12/03/2017)
Shouldn't this have herbs, like Spiresight? She is a healer, after all. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:28, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:02, December 4, 2017 (UTC)
Re-CBA? —Jayce(13:32, 12/04/2017)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:30, December 6, 2017 (UTC)
Boots (GC) - Approved[]
Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:03, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
He seems a tad too..red? Maybe lighten the shading a touch.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 22:14, 11/30/2017
Reuploaded. How's this? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:19, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
He still looks red to me. Maybe make it more brown? Branchwing★ 01:47, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
The ear pink looks orange. make it just a few shades redder? madie the wicked witch of the west
Reuploaded. Colorpicked from Husker, cause why not? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:59, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
What is that dark red line on his eye? Is it a scar?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 03:29, 12/01/2017
Yes, it is. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 03:34, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
Is that scar allowed to be there? He isn't specified with any scars, and he could've lost the eye due to an infection. I'm not sure about the missing fur around the eye either.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 03:38, 12/01/2017
The scars are fine and I think it's artist's choice in this case as to whether or not to add them. I've seen this on other images. Boots doesn't have an eye; it's not just gonna be a blank socket as far as I'm aware. There's bound to be at least some scarring around it, regardless of how he lost it. It doesn't say he's blind in that eye, it says he doesn't have the other eye. I'd be more surprised if there wasn't scarring. —Jayce(07:07, 12/01/2017)
can u add some more depth to the shading and maybe the eye socket itself david 🌈 19:28, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:41, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? Loving that eye socket tbh. —Jayce(13:33, 12/04/2017)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:30, December 6, 2017 (UTC)
Rascal (GC) - Approved[]
Some more short-hair love Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:26, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
Is the nose filled in? madie the wicked witch of the west
Yep. Just doubled-checked. It's a very pale pink, but I can make it darker if it needs to. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:36, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
In my opinon, maybe make it darker. It clashes quite a bit and looks too light for a darker cat, but I may be wrong! :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 00:48, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
Maybe add some shading to --> behind the muzzle a bit? 01:08, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:13, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? The eyes. They beckon me. They're so shiny. —Jayce(13:34, 12/04/2017)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:30, December 6, 2017 (UTC)
Spiresight (GC) - Approved[]
He has herbs because he was a healer right? My little bby Spire </3. I'm so happy how well done my blanks are.. thanks everyone for the critiques! 03:00, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —Jayce(13:34, 12/04/2017)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:30, December 6, 2017 (UTC)
Feather (GC) - Approved[]
White GC it is then Branchwing★ 21:02, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
Define the eye depth a touch? everyone is using the long-haired blanks xD—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:10, 11/30/2017
Perhaps lighten and smooth the shading a bit, define it on the back hind paw closest to us. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 21:42, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading depth on the head. This is good :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 22:49, November 30, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thank you! i know :^) Branchwing★ 01:46, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
I think there is some shading leaking onto the ----> forearm from the...haunch shading? Don't know how else to describe it. Not from the belly, but the other side of the forearm. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:34, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Got it. Fixing that leaking shading was a pain x.x Branchwing★ 16:24, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Forgot to make the (very faint) texture layer visible again Branchwing★ 16:28, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
CBA?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:27, December 6, 2017 (UTC)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:44, December 8, 2017 (UTC)
Dovewing (GC) - Approved[]
while doing the shading i realized halfway through i was using the wrong brush sorry if it looks weird lmao. also, don't these need to be added to the shading tutorial thing? madie the wicked witch of the west
will reups for green eyes in a min pls don't comment on that madie the wicked witch of the west
reups madie the wicked witch of the west
Smooth out the shading a bit more Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 00:27, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
reups just took the blur tool over the entire thing. rip madie the wicked witch of the west
There's a speck of waste outside --> haunch.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 01:05, 12/01/2017
Try defining the eye depth and/or expanding the pupil--that may help with the eyes. ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:40, 12/01/2017>
reups the pupil is supposed to be small. if someone else agrees, i'll widen them a bit, but slit eyes are my favorite :^( madie the wicked witch of the west
Perhaps desaturate the shading just a tad. And I will be adding these once I get the pen for my tablet. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•01:48 Fri Dec 1
Could you define the eye depth again? --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:50, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
reups okay I KNOW I'm really annoying for this... but can I get a second opinion for the eye depth? honestly I can see it just fine and I think it's really clear as a transition from light to dark. it is my image so I'm probably just biased lmao madie the wicked witch of the west
I think the eye depth's fine imo. Anyways, I don't think the smoky parts have texture on the other images? I'm probably wrong though. Could you define the ear pink as well? Branchwing★ 01:56, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
Eye depth is fine. —JayI hope they remember you....ϟ 01:57, 12/01/2017
reups the choice of ear pink color was not a good one for this pelt color madie the wicked witch of the west
I actually think the eye depth could be defined a bit, and might the transition to lighter/darker colors in the eyes be softened a bit? It seems a little too abrupt and sharp, and could probably be blurred or smudged or something. —Jayce(07:09, 12/01/2017)
seems to be a little shading leaking from the foreleg closest to us (near the top of it) and the base of the tail. david 🌈 19:29, December 1, 2017 (UTC)
reups I have not once blurred or smudged my eyes, but ok. (i'm sorry if i'm salty it's been quite a day. merry christmas) madie the wicked witch of the west
Can you define the shading in both ears? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:33, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
I put the ear pink over the shading because it was really hard to see. I'm like 86% sure I can do that?? idk if I can't I'll go ahead and put it back madie the wicked witch of the west
Whoops. Sorry about that - didn't mean to make it difficult. I'm just having a hard time seeing it that's all. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:45, December 2, 2017 (UTC)
Shading ear pink isn't even a requirement of the project. It's a personal preference. Danny, the ear pink is difficult to see if you place it under the shading, so I think in this case, we'll let it as-is, no? —Jayce(11:33, 12/03/2017)
sounds good to me 👌 madie the wicked witch of the west
Okay sorry about this but can you smooth out the shading on the legs just a little bit? Then I'll CBA this. —Jayce(13:33, 12/04/2017)
reups i really need that wacom drawing tablet thing for christmas so i can have GOOD art. yall aren't even gonna be ready for the glow up. madie the wicked witch of the west
Maybe expand the tail shading a wee bit? 05:26, December 5, 2017 (UTC)
reups my art program keeps shutting down unannounced so i have no idea what color the shading is supposed to be to work with the layer settings. end result: the tail shading is a different color than the rest of the shading but it's fine madie the wicked witch of the west
CBA? —Jayce(13:25, 12/09/2017)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:46, December 11, 2017 (UTC)
Dotty (GC) ~ Approved[]
I'm not sure if the larger ginger patches would need stripes.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 16:56, 11/30/2017
Re-uploaded. Changed the pattern.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 17:47, 11/30/2017
In regards to your question: we used to say that adding stripes to ginger-and-white patched cats (people being picky+art style changes haven't shown this recently) was a choice, depending on patch size and all of that nonsense. I'd say we'll still abide by that. Plus, you can only add so many stripes on an image. —Jayce(18:17, 11/30/2017)
Ah thank you! Okay. I just wasn't so sure it'd be allowed or not. I did a google search for ginger and white cats, and most had tabby stripes on the ginger. So I just added it.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 18:25, 11/30/2017
Well, just because google says something, doesn't mean we abide by it. While stripes are mandatory on solid ginger cats, when they have something else, it's a bit different. It's the same as a tortie that has ginger; stripes are not mandatory on torties who have specified ginger parts as well. It's an optional thing as far as I'm aware. —Jayce(07:04, 12/01/2017)
Maybe add some shading by --> side of the muzzle and add some shading to the start of the tail(by the legs)? 05:27, December 5, 2017 (UTC)
Wait, are there stripes on this at all? Because the dots aren't stripes... we've redone images for having those dots on images before. If your patches were a lot smaller, then you could get away with it, but these are really big patches and do need the stripes. —Jayce(06:31, 12/05/2017)
Those are stripes. It's just a style I do. If it's too confusing I'll change it. And Cosmo, what do you mean? There is shading at the start of the tail.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 08:19, 12/05/2017
How exactly are those stripes? I don't get it. You'll have to change it, I think. —Jayce(08:24, 12/05/2017)
I can kind of see how they are stripes because of the arrangement of the dots, but they can easily be mistaken as dots. I'd say change it. Branchwing★ 20:13, December 5, 2017 (UTC)
Lighten the shading on the right (our right) outer ear a bit, it's too dark for me to make out the fur color. Jayie Just you wait~ 01:52, December 6, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Sorry for the wait. I couldn't decide on a pattern, and I still am not sure if this looks good. I just went ahead and re-did everything.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 16:08, 12/06/2017
smooth out the shading on that whole area to the --> of the --> front leg if that makes any sense at all madie the wicked witch of the west
define/add some light to -> ear or deifine/add shading to <- ear ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (05:55, 12/07/2017 )
Re-uploaded. I don't think adding shading to earpink is a requirement.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 06:21, 12/07/2017
Nope, that it is not. It's just a personal preference that people seem to like to do. —Jayce(06:37, 12/07/2017)
CBA?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:35, December 10, 2017 (UTC)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:03, December 12, 2017 (UTC)
Redclaw (Alt. W 2) - Approved[]
Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:22, December 6, 2017 (UTC)
there seems to be a dot of lighter color in the earpink? idk if it's my screen or not. + could you smooth the ear pink a small bit? madie the wicked witch of the west
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:14, December 6, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading on the front legs. 01:49, December 8, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:54, December 8, 2017 (UTC)
CBA?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:45, December 11, 2017 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(06:52, 12/12/2017)
Palepaw (Lo) - Approved[]
I've gotten nothin' Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:09, December 8, 2017 (UTC)
Nice! I like it! Anyway, is there a way you can make the side texture possibly flow with the arm texture? It looks kinda cut off. I apologize if that is the way it's supposed to look.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 17:46, 12/08/2017
The black on the chin should be much bigger. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:36,12/9/2017
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:05, December 10, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —Jayce(15:20, 12/12/2017)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:23, December 14, 2017 (UTC)