Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 190

Cobweb (GC) - Approved

I'm gonna mess with the colors and shading. Just wanted to get this posted. Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{15:22 Fri Jun 22}

Reuploaded Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{15:52 Fri Jun 22}

Again I can't get it to look how I want -___- Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{16:56 Fri Jun 22}

Could you lighten the texture just a little? It seems a little rough, in some parts? It could just be me though. But I am the _{Chosen One} 16:57, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shoulder shading. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<18:02, 6/22/2018>

The shading looks a little flat. Could you add more depth? This is nice, though! Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 20:56, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid it (again). The pale is light silver, not white btw Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{00:42 Sun Jun 24}

I know you said it isn't white, but could you dull it down just a bit more? david ^🌈 02:02, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{15:14 Fri Jun 29}

CBA? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 00:32, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. —Ivy ☆ 01:41, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Peanut (GC) ~ Approved

pfft i spent an hour and a half trying to shade this, i might redo the shading. love the new blanks though! —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 00:56, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Add the herbs, as she's a healer. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 01:55, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the back leg some? But I am the _{Chosen One} 20:34, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also tried fixing the shading a little. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 00:35, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

There should be some smaller patches on the main body. The biggest patch should be slightly smaller. And I think the patches could be smudged more. I smudged it across the entire pattern if that makes sense.

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:05,6/27/2018

Re-uploaded. does this look better? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:33, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, a lot. Just smudge the yellow more on the front legs and it's good to go.

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:02,6/28/2018

Re-uploaded. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 05:12, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 00:33, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. —Ivy ☆ 01:41, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (GC) - Approved

Appledash ^{the light of honor} 22:17, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Define the ear pink; I can't see any at all. —Jayce(23:07, 6/24/2018) ( 23:07, 6/24/2018 )​

The tear is on the wrong ear.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 00:42, 6/25/2018

Perhaps add some shading behind the head? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 07:33, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded:

Appledash ^{the light of honor} 22:15, June 26, 2018 (UTC) Define the facial shading. Specifically on the cheeks and neck.

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:37,6/27/2018

Could you try to define the ear pink some more? It's still hard-to-see. Branchwing^★ 02:00, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded:

Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:02, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

I don't think you really... did what my comment said. To illustrate what I meant, I highlighted the parts you need to add/define shading with red, and the parts you need to remove with blue. http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2dcd7vo&s=9#.WzV17rT5ixI

Also, you overly defined the shading everywhere else. The previous image had satisfactory shading depth in parts that weren't the face, tbh.

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 00:00,6/29/2018

What do you mean everywhere else? I did not touch the shading anywhere except the face.

Appledash ^{the light of honor} 06:03, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Also, can you upload the image again? I think it is a broken link - it is not showing any image. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 06:04, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Nevermind, I went back and I accidentally increased the entire opacity of the layer, so that was the issue. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 06:09, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

I see. I thought I was imagining things again. Anyways, hopefully this new link will work: http://oi68.tinypic.com/2dcd7vo.jpg - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:14,6/29/2018

Re-uploaded: Appledash ^{the light of honor} 06:46, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:11, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. —Ivy ☆ 01:41, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt A) ~ Approved

Since nobody took this image when my reservation ran out, I believe I can post this now? (finally back home with wifi, thank goodness) I renewed my reservation.

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 13:25,6/26/2018

Define the shading depth just a little bit? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 22:36, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sigh, not a fan of this image

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:02,6/27/2018

Define the shading, and also the depth a bit more. Smooth the shading on the tail. I think it’s a good image C: Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 22:37, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 谢谢 :]

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:04,6/28/2018

Maybe smooth the shading on the tail a little more (the upper part, near the tip)? This is really pretty. —Ivy ☆ 00:09, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Ivy. Is this any better?

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:00,6/29/2018

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:10, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, it looks good. :) Approved. —Ivy ☆ 01:41, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Dotty (GC) - Approved

I have no clue how to reserve images or even join... help? Like I added my name to the reservation table, but does that count. I tried Malina457 (talk) 01:54, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Soften the edges around the stripes. Define the shading depth. There is waste all around the image, please erase it. Good job on this! :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 03:53, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I see some foot waste, but other than that, I think I got it? Thanks btw :) Malina457 (talk) 04:47, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups Waste be gone, I think Malina457 (talk) 04:50, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

There is still some waste on the other edge of the image, left of the elbow on the front leg closest to us. Please smooth out the shading. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 04:59, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I think I got the waste? It's being very elusive, and I tried with the shading Malina457 (talk) 05:32, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the shading on the tail, chest, and ---> front leg. Very nice! Waaaay better than my first image. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 07:32, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

You still missed the waste. It’s in the same spot, plus behind the tail and behind the back leg. I can try to circle it in red and show you, if you need? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 13:43, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Can you please circle it, I did try XD I will uploading soon Malina457 (talk) 13:46, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups I literally can't see the waste at all, anywhere, not in my program or on the wiki, it's being very elusive XD. Also thanks Vec :) Malina457 (talk) 14:08, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the tail shading, define the eye depth, and maybe add some shading along the top of the > ear since it looks slightly flat^^ gg for your first one —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 14:14, 6/26/2018

Reups Better? Malina457 (talk) 14:50, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth the shading everywhere. Branchwing^★ 22:04, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Malina457 (talk) 22:14, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I think the shading could be smoothed on the tail a little bit. Define the shading on the face too. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:35, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Malina457 (talk) 23:23, June 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I’m sorry, but there is still waste. It’s everywhere, around the whole image. Some close to the lineart, some totally far away. Could you just erase everything outside of the lineart on the shading layers? I tried to make a redline for you but I couldn’t. Sorry to keep bringing it up, but there’s a ton there. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 23:33, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

I can't see anything, can I get a second opinion as I've tried so hard to find it Malina457 (talk) 23:40, June 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups?? Malina457 (talk) 23:44, June 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The waste still there in several places, namely: under the tail, top of the tail, on the backside, and up onto the tail's < side, elbow and along the leg, between the legs and up along the chest to the chin, ear, and tail tip; hope this helps you find it. —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 00:43, 6/28/2018

I'll get right to it, thanks so much! Malina457 (talk) 01:55, June 28, 2018 (UTC)Malina 

Smooth the shading on the tail and legs. Branchwing^★ 01:59, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I cant really smooth the shading more there without it needing to be defined again Malina457 (talk) 02:12, June 28, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reups again Malina457 (talk) 02:23, June 28, 2018 (UTC)malina

Actually, I think it wouldn't hurt to smooth the shading on the hind leg and tail a little more; it still seems kind of hard-edged there and I don't think doing so would make the shading difficult to see. I also think you should expand the shading on the tail a bit. —Ivy ☆ 00:15, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reups How's this? Malina457 (talk) 01:08, June 29, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth the shading on the flank. Branchwing^★ 03:10, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

reups I hate that flank shading Malina457 (talk) 03:16, June 29, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Maybe dull down the tail shading just a tiny bit? good job on your first charart. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 19:01, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

reups ah thanks patch Malina457 (talk) 04:42, July 2, 2018 (UTC)malina

reups again Malina457 (talk) 05:40, July 3, 2018 (UTC)Malina

CBA? —Jayce(05:07, 7/07/2018)

Approved. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 07:38, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Hazel Burrow (Ap) - Approved

I shaded this on a rigidty bus and I now just got some miserable wifi. Here's hoping this works. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 07:13, June 30, 2018 (UTC)

Is the base that dark on her other image as well? Because I can't make out anything other than the white... —Jayce(10:16, 6/30/2018)

Reups Whoops! You're right. My b. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 05:51, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the lower chest a little? —Ivy ☆ 01:47, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:48, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(19:47, 7/06/2018)

Approved. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 07:50, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Marigold (GC) - Approved

I officially dislike doing black cat chararts, but it’s whatever. :P This file is titled correctly, right? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 21:34, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading and is that texture on it, if so could you lighten that a tad and smoothen it a tad? But I am the _{Chosen One} 01:30, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Please expand the shading, as well. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 06:11, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 23:43, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(19:49, 7/06/2018)

Approved. :D Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 07:52, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Cinnamon (GC) - Approved

File:Cinnamon.gc.png —Ivy ☆ 00:45, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure which way the light is meant to be coming from? the back shading suggests < that way, but the shading on the tail and hind leg suggests the other way. david ^🌈 08:22, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Still working, Ivy? —Jayce(05:06, 7/07/2018)

Re-uploaded. Yes, the light source is coming from > direction, sorry. —Ivy ☆ 15:03, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

Cool beans, then I can CBA this. —Jayce(15:07, 7/07/2018)

Approved. —Jayce(04:14, 7/09/2018)

Minty (Ro) (Q) - Approved

new laptop means trying to find out what shading looks like. yes, there is quite a color difference between this and her old appearance and it does warrant the old images being moved. —Jayce(17:31, 7/01/2018)

i dunno if its just me but she looks a lil cross eyed david ^🌈 01:42, July 4, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think it's just how I had the eye coloring. Does this look better? —Jayce(01:27, 7/05/2018)

Comments before approval? Great image, Snowed! Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 07:58, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. —Jayce(19:34, 7/09/2018)

Bee (Ki) - Approved

File:Bee.kit.png I'm sure there's an effort in here, somewhere david ^🌈 22:47, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

CBa? I love this. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 08:02, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. —Jayce(19:34, 7/09/2018)

Dew Nose (W) - Approved

好恶心 - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:52,7/6/2018

nice can you define the shading on the body and legs a bit? david ^🌈 01:28, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks. is this any better? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:54,7/8/2018

Yes, much better! The two pixels outside the lineart of front chest, underneath that little tuft of fur, are coloured in. Sorry if this is nit-picky, I just thought I’d mention it. I have on other images. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 08:12, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

There’s also waste all around the tail and outside of the rear end/back leg. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 08:14, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Nah, you're good - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:30,7/9/2018

CBA? —Jayce(04:15, 7/09/2018)

Approved. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 05:57, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Hawkheart (K) - Approved

aw well those eyes aren't even remotely creepy looking. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 03:29, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

This is awesome, Patch. Define the shading depth a bit. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 08:10, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you^^ —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:06, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, this is awesome, I agree. CBA? —Jayce(04:15, 7/09/2018)

Approved. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 06:03, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Fierce (GC) - Approved

So I forgot to edit the paw, but I can fix that later. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:46, 7/02/2018>

Define the shading on the tail? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:35, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-up Any tips on how to fix that paw would be greatly appreciated, as I cannot lineart. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<21:36, 7/03/2018>

Maybe curl the paw a little bit? Not as much as if her leg/wrist was twisted, but enough to round it off? Idk I'm sorry if this isn't easy to understand. I'll do a red line if you want Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{23:03 Tue Jul 3}

A redline would be nice, thank you. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<03:36, 7/04/2018>

Here Hopefully this helps. Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{20:24 Fri Jul 6}

Still working, Star? I know you just got the redline two days ago, but I’ll still check in. :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 08:00, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm still working. I'll upload this later, since that's when I'll finally have all the time I need. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<13:26, 7/08/2018>

Uh, Sun, can you link somewhere that isn't TinyPic? Because that link isn't working for me. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:11, 7/08/2018>

nvm sorry for this mess Thanks again Jayce. <3 ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<04:03, 7/09/2018>

There be waste near the paw leftover from the previous paw shape. —Jayce(04:14, 7/09/2018) ( 04:14, 7/09/2018 )​

re-up oops ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<20:47, 7/09/2018>

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 12:40, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. —Jayce(19:42, 7/11/2018)

Crookedstar (Lo) ~ Approved

My favorite warrior character. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 08:05, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Fixed the shading and stripes because it was bothering me. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 10:07, July 11, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? very nice. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 22:53, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Approved david ^🌈 02:51, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Beetail (W) - Approved

I'll fix the flank stripes later, just wanted to get this up. Branchwing^★ 21:43, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Just a suggestion about the stripes: they should be more "connected" and tangled if you get what I mean. Also, did you receive the file? Just wondering.

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:52,7/6/2018

Yes, I did. Branchwing^★ 04:14, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the pale chest into the brown a bit more. Blurring might work. Good job!

Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 08:16, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the neck too.

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 13:41,7/8/2018 Still working, Branch?

Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 05:41, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll get it up later today. Branchwing^★ 16:50, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Might redo the stripes later because I still don't like them. (and to winter - thank you!) Branchwing^★ 17:10, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe I'm blind, but maybe defie the body shading? Malina457 (talk) 04:52, July 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded There's not much I can do to define it, the shading's was at 77% visibility before. I did make it 80% to maybe help you see it better. Branchwing^★ 13:29, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

Hm, CBA? —Jayce(05:37, 7/15/2018) ( 05:37, 7/15/2018 )​

Approved. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:34, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Rushtooth (W) - Approved

LOL I don't remember how I made the DF Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{15:12 Sat Jul 7}

That dark forest is beautiful, anyway, maybe smooth the darker shading spots, they look a tad off to me, and a bit hard edged Malina457 (talk) 15:46, July 7, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth all of the shading, maybe. Great job!

Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 08:10, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{15:12 Fri Jul 13}

CBA? —Jayce(05:37, 7/15/2018) ( 05:37, 7/15/2018 )​

Approved. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:34, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Dewspring (W) - Approved

I’ve been working on this all day and I’m really happy with how it turned out! (Sorry for this text being so low; my signature was touching the image.)

Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 02:02, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 05:04, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 05:39, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

This is great^^ i think the texture could be dulled a little, and define the shading in between the ears. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 12:38, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 20:13, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Dull it just a tiny bit more? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 22:53, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 22:56, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? david ^🌈 02:50, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:34, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Spiresight (GC) - Approved

all colors from the StarClan, including the ear pink. It just looks lighter because of the shading on the StarClan image. —Jayce(18:00, 7/15/2018)

Smooth the shading a bit? It looks a bit hard edged. It's okay if you can't, it may just be the screen I'm looking at 😌 Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{20:48 Sun Jul 15}

See, I'm not sure if it's the screen or not??? This laptop is still new, so I'm not used to making black cats on here yet. Could someone else chime in as well with what they see so I know what exactly I'm looking at here? This laptop is calibrated differently than my old laptop was, and my phone isn't any help here. —Jayce(21:21, 7/15/2018) The shading should indeed be smoothed out. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 22:41, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't even see it to smooth it out, but I tried. —Jayce(22:51, 7/15/2018)

CBA? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 20:58, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 06:49, July 20, 2018 (UTC)

Littlecloud (Star) ~ Approved

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 09:31, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading slightly.

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 14:31,7/16/2018

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 04:56, July 17, 2018 (UTC)

holy heck man this is awesome. CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 02:30, July 19, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 06:51, July 20, 2018 (UTC)

Violet (KP) (W) - Approved

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:37, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little; it kind of clashes with the pattern if you get what I mean

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 20:30,7/15/2018

Smooth the shading on the haunch. The transition is a bit abrupt. Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{20:49 Sun Jul 15}

Re-uploaded. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:17, July 17, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 06:52, July 20, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. —Jayce(18:00, 7/21/2018)

Dew (W) - Approved

I realize that a crap ton of things are wrong with this photo so I will fix them soon. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:32, 7/17/2018>

Define the earpink. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 01:47, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the pale parts a little? They seem paler and more visible on her other images. —Ivy ☆ 11:45, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

re-up ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<14:58, 7/18/2018>

Smudge/blur the pale parts more so that it transitions well to the darker gray - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 16:08,7/18/2018

re-up I tried ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<21:26, 7/18/2018>

CBA? —Jayce(19:08, 7/20/2018)

Approved. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 21:32, July 21, 2018 (UTC)