Talk: Charart/Accepted 282

Toadfoot (W) - Approved

--Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:06, November 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:47, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:22, November 30, 2019 (UTC)

Patch (RF) (K) - Approved

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 00:03, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Nice job matching! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:48, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:22, November 30, 2019 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. K 3) - Approved

--Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:06, November 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Looks great! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:51, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:22, November 30, 2019 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt W) - Approved

~Ripple ☆ 18:47, November 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading seems very blotchy on the lower chest and along the chest lineart. Try adding some more? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:27, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 17:10, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a little bit of light to the back foot closest to us? The shading over all looks a bit inconsistent; the front legs are lighter, the head and bottom of the chest look darker, while the hind leg appears to be the same darkness as the head, but seems to be lacking depth, which is making it look flat. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 20:53, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. sorry about that. :/ ~Ripple ☆ 23:45, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the back foot closest to us, think you may have missed that in my first comment. Can you define the shading depth more on the haunch and tail? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:41, November 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 22:00, November 16, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:02, November 16, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 01:56, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe change the direction of the eyes? Sandy ^{My Talk} 06:11, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

May I ask what's wrong with it? ~Ripple ☆ 20:58, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Sandy that she looks a little cross-eyed. You can have the pupils face that direction, but perhaps change the eyeshine position or round the pupils a bit snd that will help. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:04, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded.  ~Ripple ☆ 23:59, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

I meant add some light here, I'm not really seeing any difference between your reupload for that. It also looks like there's waste around -> this side of the image. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:40, November 19, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:46, November 23, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:35, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

illtake over ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 14:48, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

I'll take over. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:53, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

Nvm, Brambleshade's taking over. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:54, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

reup ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 18:18, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth and expand the haunch shading just a bit more? I dig the shading style ^^ Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:46, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup im just testing new brushes lol ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 02:59, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 05:37, November 30, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:29, December 1, 2019 (UTC)

Littlekit (YS) (K) - Approved

forgot i finished this a while ago, also probably gonna have to redo it in a second ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 14:56, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

reupdefined shading ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 15:00, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes on the face, legs, and tail need to be much thicker to match the old kit. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:02, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

reup ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 17:08, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

Which version of the old kit are we matching...? This doesn't look anything like Winterwhisper's old version at all; he has a spotted tabby-like design, and I'm not seeing this here. —Jayce(17:13, 11/25/2019)​​​​

oopsie, mistook is for tabby ish markings ill adjust it ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 17:16, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

reup think ive had a charart fallout ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 04:04, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the markings should be a little fader...if that makes any sense. I think lowering their opacity should help. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:47, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 02:59, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 05:37, November 30, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:29, December 1, 2019 (UTC)

Tallstar (W) - Approved

aw yees, i love this boy!! — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:30, November 10, 2019 (UTC)

Just putting a small comment hold on this; the tweak nom for this set on the color of his paws discussion is still ongoing, and thus this can't slide by until that is also solved —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 01:41, 11/11/2019

In the meantime, Finch, might you define the overall shading? I'm having a rough time making it out. —Jayce(00:21, 11/12/2019)​​

Re-uploaded: I added some depth to the shading hopefully that makes it easier to see. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:41, November 12, 2019 (UTC)

there shouldn't be texture on the black, but, there should be a little on the white? would you like a file? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (21:38, 12/11/2019)

Re-uploaded - Thank you Max for the file! I re-did the texture and darkened the shading. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 17:10, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

With the nomination having passed, the white paws and tail tip need to be removed to match his official art. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:11, November 19, 2019 (UTC)

Might you brighten up the white? —Jayce(19:00, 11/19/2019)

Re-uploaded — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:30, November 21, 2019 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing for some reason? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:31, November 21, 2019 (UTC)

They are showing. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 18:24, November 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also make the tail just a *bit* longer? It only seems slightly longer than the original warrior blank. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:19, November 21, 2019 (UTC)

define the light on the paws? i can't make out the lineart on either of my screens - the base should also be a little more greener - per the file I gave you I think? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (08:16, 22/11/2019)

still working? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (00:40, 27/11/2019)

Yes, I'm still working. I'll reupload tonight! — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:47, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:57, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

the base still doesn't look right to my eye? it should be #0B1213 if it isn't, but, it might also be that the highlights from the file/set also add to the bluish/green tinge? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (21:31, 29/11/2019)

Re-uploaded: I made the base the same colour, but I also changed the shading to a blue tone. Hopefully that helps? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 17:22, December 1, 2019 (UTC)

Nah that definitely helped, sorry for my nitpicking! CBA? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:12, 03/12/2019)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:35, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Thistle (TC) (K) - Approved

Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 22:40, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe make the pelt colour a little darker to match, on both? Also maybe smudge/blur the stripes a little more, looking at the hunter image. --Wavetail (talk) 22:43, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

The kit (and later es) were first in the set, and I actually think the colors match just fine in comparison. I do believe the dorsal stripe is missing, though. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:50, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

I have seen the es image, and the colours are actually quite good. But I still think the stripes are a little too sharp. --Wavetail (talk) 08:16, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

Personally, I think the stripes are okay - the old kit and warrior have the same sharp stripes. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:30, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup added the dorsal stripe and blurred the stripes a tiny bit Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 17:29, November 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:12, 03/12/2019)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:35, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Thistle (TC) (W) - Approved

Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 22:40, November 27, 2019 (UTC)

Same with the kit. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:50, November 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup ^ Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 17:29, November 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:12, 03/12/2019)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:35, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather (DF) (W) - Approved

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:55, December 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:13, 03/12/2019)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:35, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (W) ~ Approved

—Hrafnsmál ^{The raven's call} 00:42, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:14, 03/12/2019)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:35, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Thunderstar (K) - Approved

— max ^{it is the real thing,} (21:27, 29/11/2019)

The stripes appear a bit too saturated compared to the other images? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:33, December 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:29, 02/12/2019)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:38, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:21, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Violetshine (Alt. K) - Approved

I love Violetshine. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:26, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

I think the texture should be a smidge lighter? I think don't quote me on that Moo (talk) 01:07, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the texture a small bit but I don't want to go any lighter than this. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:11, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

The base you have currently looks lighter than the rest of this set; it should be a couple ticks darker. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (22:08, 02/12/2019)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:07, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:39, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:21, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Splashkit (K) - Approved

colourpicked from the icon. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:39, 02/12/2019)

I know you colorpicked from the icon, and feel free to shoot me if you wish, but he doesn't look black. He looks gray. Could you darken the base just a tiny bit? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:48, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

the cite comes from the icon, so I'm more inclined to think the cite should state a dark gray instead of the black (seeing as black is shown as it should be on the tree). — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:56, 02/12/2019)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:41, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:21, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Whitestorm (Ki) ~ Approved

Comments? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:14, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:42, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:21, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Ki) ~ Approved

Comments? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:14, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:42, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:21, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Volepaw (ShC) (Ki) ~ Approved

Comments? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:14, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:42, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:21, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Whitestorm (W) - Approved

— max ^{it is the real thing,} (22:05, 02/12/2019)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:43, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:21, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Whitetail (W) - Approved

~Ripple ☆ 03:23, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:43, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:21, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Tallstar (K) - Approved

just forcing myself to do art at this point. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 04:42, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:44, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:21, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Voletooth (W) ~ Approved

Had a little trouble with this one. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:09, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Nicely done, CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:02, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:03, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

White Tail (K) ~ Approved

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:09, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:02, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:03, December 5, 2019 (UTC)