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Willowpelt (K) - Approved

Willowpelt.kit this is gross Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 04:17, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

Whereabouts is your light source coming from? max 烈火國 (07:35, 19/1/2020)

It is the source I've used on Rainwhisker, Hatchkit, Stormfur, and a few others. Should I change anything? --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 13:32, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

I understand it’s a source you’ve used before, but, I can’t tell where it’s coming from. I can do up a redline to help if you could let me know where the lights coming from - I’m about to head to work so I’m not much use right now. max 烈火國 (21:42, 19/1/2020)

I think it's ^^^ (because the light is shining on the bottom)? Gah, I can't explain my own sources for the life of me. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 21:50, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

If it's going up, the back top tail, where it's being cut off by shading, should also be covered in shadow as well, or it looks like the lights are pointing from east to west. That could be a different light source, if you removed the shading on the back legs farthest from us. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:33, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 00:27, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

The shading on <--- ear looks a little blotchy. And I think with this lightsource, there'd be less shading on the face/cheek (where the head meets the neck; there'd still be shading on the neck area but here it seems to extend beyond that) and more shading on <--- side of the haunch. See this and this for what I mean if this helps ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:50, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, and also smooth out the shading on the shoulder. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<01:44, 1/22/2020>

Reuploaded As per usual, the shading still hates me. Well, most of it. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 00:56, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 15:17, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

Approved spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:08, 1/25/2020

Graystripe (L) - Approved

Graystripe.leader having a lot of feelings about the tpb squad rn max 烈火國 (06:00, 24/1/2020)

Wait, when was he leader?---Glacier () 18:17, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

Temporary leader during Firestar's Quest when Firestar and Sandstorm leave to rebuild SkyClan. The cite is from the most recent article on the official website. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:23, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:26, January 26, 2020 (UTC)

Approved spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:43, 1/27/2020

Willowbreeze (Alt K) - Approved

Willowbreeze.kit.alt - o god how do i shade again? ScarletwindGo Beyond Plus Ultra!! 07:27, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

could you add/define some of the lighter belly parts that were on the old kit? max 烈火國 (06:02, 30/1/2020)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindGo Beyond Plus Ultra!! 06:30, January 31, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:19, February 3, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:25, February 4, 2020 (UTC)

Black kittypet - Approved

TLW.kittypet-1 All colors from the manga. This was more pain that it should have been. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 21:31, February 9, 2020 (UTC)

I believe this was short-haired in the manga? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:10, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 02:24, February 13, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:46, February 16, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:03, February 19, 2020 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (K) - Approved

Nutwhisker.kit I color picked from the kit but used the warrior as a reference. I also probably have to fix the shading and everything because I did this at 1am when my brain doesn’t work---Glacier ()​​ 22:08, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Sharpen the texture a lot more. I'd recommend asking Finch for the warrior's file, I feel tht will help a bit. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 22:29, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Actually, the texture could almost stay as is considering the original kit was first in the set, followed by the apprentice (which also has a softer texture than the redone warrior). Maybe smudge the earpink a little more for now? max 烈火國 (22:46, 21/1/2020)

Reuploaded I already redid the texture, I softened the ear pink too---Glacier ()​​ 22:51, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture, I do believe you oversmudged it. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 22:52, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded texture---Glacier ()​​ 23:06, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looked a little to light so I darkened it---Glacier ()​​ 23:17, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<01:44, 1/22/2020>way down hadestown 01:44, 1/22/2020way down hadestown 01:44, 1/22/2020

Reup---Glacier ()( )( )​ 02:03, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

add shading to the chin. —Ripplewater (school > quarantine)  03:26, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

I’m not sure how to do that---Glacier ()​​ 04:01, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Grab your paintbrush/pencil tool and trace over that area; then smudge/blur and you should have some lovely shading over there. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 04:04, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Reup is this what you meant?---Glacier ()​​ 04:52, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, but I can barely see it. Darken it? —Ripplewater (school > quarantine)  15:38, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Reup--Glacier ()​​ 21:58, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 00:58, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture a little bit? Looking at the original kit, I feel like the texture lines should be a bit thicker than you have them as well. – Ivy 03:15, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Reup---Glacier ()​​ 15:20, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading overall. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<01:38, 1/24/2020>way down hadestown 01:38, 1/24/2020way down hadestown 01:38, 1/24/2020

Reup--Glacier ()​​ 19:23, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

I believe the texture should have a shaper appearance - slightly; it appears more blurred out here than on the other images.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:10, 1/25/2020

Reup-Glacier ()​​ 03:30, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Smudge the texture a bit. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 03:31, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reup wow Potato that was quick-Glacier ()​​ 03:40, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

yes i fast Add more shading to the tail. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 14:00, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reupyeet—-Glacier ()​​ 15:52, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Add more shading along <<< this side of the tail. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 16:39, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit too, if you don't mind. It seems fairly blotching. Jayce  ( 17:06, 1/28/2020 )​​​

Reup ---Glacier ()​​ 18:32, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reup sry Jayce I just saw your comment. I forgot to save the shading laste time so I had to redo it...---Glacier ()​​ 18:34, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

About my comment right above this, it was the textured I had to redo because I forgot to save it, not the shading---Glacier ()​​ 00:22, January 29, 2020 (UTC)

Texture’s looking a tad too sharp, mind smudging it a bit? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<04:13, 1/29/2020>way down hadestown 04:13, 1/29/2020way down hadestown 04:13, 1/29/2020

Reup I had to go so I couldn’t say reup right when I reuped it—-Glacier ()​​ 02:17, January 30, 2020 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the base colour a little bit? This looks darker than the apprentice. max 烈火國 (04:24, 02/2/2020)

Reup-Glacier ()​​ 19:31, February 2, 2020 (UTC)

I feel like the texture lines should be slightly thinner. Jayce  ( 03:52, 2/04/2020 )​​

Sorry Jayce but that’s as thin as my tools go, my computer is broke so I have to use my tablet.---Glacier ()​​ 19:12, February 4, 2020 (UTC)

Also, that tool is 1px, the same size as the line art pixels, it should be good.---Glacier ()​​ 23:18, February 5, 2020 (UTC)

I agree with Jayce, the texture needs to be thinned. If you have an eraser, use a 1px size and erase some of the texture, then resmudge it. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 23:33, February 5, 2020 (UTC)

Reup---Glacier ()( )​ 02:37, February 6, 2020 (UTC)

Can you add some shading in the ear? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:03, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reup-Glacier ()​ 14:17, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I decided to redo the shading because I really want to show the progress I’ve made. Blurred shading is pretty hard for me and I think this looks better anyways.---Glacier ()​ 16:36, February 12, 2020 (UTC)

I think the texture can be smudged just a little bit to match. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:46, February 16, 2020 (UTC)

Reup-Glacier ()​ 21:50, February 16, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth the texture a bit more. try using the blur tool on a low opacity over it and that should get it, just a tad, not too much. maybe add a little bit more highlight too, if you need help on where to place them let me know. if the highlights look too sharp you can use the blur tool a bit over them, if they look too bright, lower the layer's opacity a bit. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:55, February 17, 2020 (UTC)

Reup-Glacier ()​ 17:05, February 17, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 16:07, February 20, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 23:03, February 21, 2020 (UTC)

Wasptail (w) ~ Approved

Wasptail.warrior

Danny GVivaLaVida 03:04, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Define shading?---Glacier ()​ 17:32, February 14, 2020 (UTC)

Perhaps define the eye depth? Jayce  ( 18:52, 2/14/2020 )

reuploaded

Danny GVivaLaVida 00:14, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 16:07, February 20, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 23:03, February 21, 2020 (UTC)

Light gray cat - Approved

TLW.kittypet-2 All colors from the manga. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 03:02, February 20, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the overall shading, especially on the rump. Jayce  ( 18:10, 2/20/2020 )​​

Add depth?---Glacier ()​​ 22:57, February 20, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 01:55, February 21, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading here. Could you also define the light/shading/depth on the collar as well? Because I honestly can't make out any of the coloring and it seems pretty flat. Jayce  ( 19:46, 2/21/2020 )

Reuploaded Lightened the collar a tiny bit. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 03:31, February 22, 2020 (UTC)

Idk if it's just me, the shading looks a bit pale...I can't really see it. Sandy My Talk 09:21, February 26, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whoops, completely forgot this existed. Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 00:12, February 29, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:13, March 2, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 15:15, March 3, 2020 (UTC)

Light brown kittypet - Approved

TLW.kittypet-3 Tried my best to copy the patch placement; all colors from manga/graphic novel images. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 22:27, March 8, 2020 (UTC)

Define, darken, and smooth out the shading. Jayce  ( 22:32, 3/08/2020 )

Reuploaded --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 22:43, March 8, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a little? I can’t see it very well. --Wavetail Ya Yeet 08:26, March 11, 2020 (UTC)

I think expanding it, especially on the back leg closest to us, would help define it. Also, I don't have a copy of the manga, so I can't say much, but I feel like the patches could be a little sharper as most of the manga characters have quite defined patches and markings. max 烈火國 (08:47, 11/3/2020)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 01:09, March 12, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tongue? (sounds really silly, but, it looks quite flat at the moment). max 烈火國 (21:05, 14/3/2020)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 21:07, March 14, 2020 (UTC)

Could you just expand the overall shading, I'm still having a hard time seeing it, and this image also looks a little flat just because of the pattern (which I'm aware is out of your power). Also define the shading on the brown patches too as well, if possible? max 烈火國 (04:36, 15/3/2020)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 20:12, March 15, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 17:28, March 20, 2020 (UTC)

Approved max 烈火國 (20:14, 22/3/2020)

Orange kittypet with a striped back (KP) - Approved

WR.kittypet-3 beep boop max 烈火國 (21:09, 14/3/2020)

The stripe is hard to tell apart from the shading. Maybe define it a litte---Glacier () 21:21, March 14, 2020 (UTC)

The stripe is along the back, but, I also colourpicked from the manga image and that's the colour I get. There's no shading along the back either, really - so I'm not sure there's much I can do. max 烈火國 (21:25, 14/3/2020)

I think it looks fine^^ CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 17:30, March 20, 2020 (UTC)

Approved max 烈火國 (20:14, 22/3/2020)

Gorsepaw (TPB) (K) ~ Approved

Gorsepaw (TPB).kit hard meh.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 03:49, 3/21/2020

CBA? max 烈火國 (20:01, 24/3/2020)

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:17, March 26, 2020 (UTC)

Tricolored rogue (Ro) - Approved

WR.rogue-1 matched everything to manga max 烈火國 (20:41, 22/3/2020)

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:03, 3/24/2020

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:17, March 26, 2020 (UTC)

White rogue (Ro) ~ Approved

ROS.rogue-3 aaaaand i need to do lineart tweaks that i absolutely forgot about yes i'm an idiot. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<18:19, 3/15/2020>

The manga also implies she is short-furred - looking at the tail and the overall image.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:26, 3/15/2020

Darken the shading, define the shading depth, and she also needs gray mottling per her image. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 18:28, March 15, 2020 (UTC)

Those mottles you're referring to might be shading, Potato, but I'm not sure. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<21:24, 3/15/2020>

hello sorry that cat’s description is on me - most of the art in that manga doesn’t have an apparent shading style and this guy just stands out, so I wrote it as a mottled description. max 烈火國 (21:27, 15/3/2020)

re-up ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<18:16, 3/16/2020>

You've got a couple unfilled pixels on the front leg, and there's a piece of waste in that pixel tucked under the tail. I would also reduce/remove the shading around the eye; the source seems to call for it not being there, tbh.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:43, 3/19/2020

re-up ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<23:10, 3/19/2020>

I'm not sure Max's prior comment was addressed; the cat's description is the same, mottled, that is - because a lot of TRoS panels have no shading. Like, most of the mangas do, but as the oldest one, as a whole, the thing doesn't have much in the way of it. To the prior comment, because it does stand out from the other cats, which also don't have shading, I agree that it should be depicted as mottled per what the description still has.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:15, 3/22/2020

re-up ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<15:49, 3/23/2020>

With the patterning now on - could you darken the shading and add some depth to it? Seems to fade more, less visible, now.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:03, 3/24/2020

re-up ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<23:38, 3/24/2020>

CBA? This is gorgeous, Star! max 烈火國 (20:58, 28/3/2020)

Approved max 烈火國 (04:43, 01/4/2020)

Reddish-brown tabby BloodClan cat (Ro) - Approved

RP.rogue-1 the boys max 烈火國 (04:36, 26/3/2020)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:30, April 1, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:59, April 4, 2020 (UTC)

Flipclaw (MC) ~ Approved

Flipclaw.mc My child was a medicine cat for two whole days Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:01, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:54, 4/07/2020

Approved spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:06, 4/08/2020

Rootspring (W) - Approved

Rootspring.warrior my boy! max 烈火國 (00:02, 07/4/2020)

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:54, 4/07/2020

Approved spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:06, 4/08/2020

Bristlefrost (D) ~ Approved

Bristlefrost.deputy i LOVE her spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:02, 4/07/2020

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:06, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Approved spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:06, 4/08/2020

Sunrise (Ki) ~ Approved

File:Sunrise (cat).kit.pngAll colors from other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:29, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the tail? max 烈火國 (00:32, 07/4/2020)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:38, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:54, 4/07/2020

Approved spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:06, 4/08/2020

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