Squirrelflight (Re) ~ Approved

Squirrelflight.refugee This pose confuses me for stripe placement lol Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 06:28, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

Reups Fiddled with the shading a bit. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 06:36, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 19:52, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:56, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Finchpaw (Re) - Approved

Finchpaw.refugee light source is coming from the front-lefthand side. — eilish ゴジラ (08:41, 02/5/2020)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 19:52, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:56, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Twigbranch (Re) ~ Approved

Twigbranch.refugeeAll colors from other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 06:30, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

Hmm if the top hunch of the shoulder is in shading, shouldn't the back and ---> part of the upper exposed shoulder (it doesn't have any shading on it now) have some shading too? If your lightsource is going ---> way? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 06:38, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

Could you perhaps smooth out the shading and lighten it some? Also, add some shading to underneath the front leg where it's in front of the back leg on >> side? — eilish ゴジラ (08:42, 02/5/2020)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:18, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

There'd also probably be some shading >> under the head on that shoulder area too, according to your source? — eilish ゴジラ (01:46, 03/5/2020)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:09, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 17:00, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:05, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Fuzzball (Re) ~ Approved

Fuzzball.refugee —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:42, 5/03/2020

Lighten the shading on the back? It looks almost black now Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 17:48, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:50, 5/03/2020

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 17:01, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:05, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Calico tom (DF) - CBA

NO-18.df-2 was gonna match Patsy, but I'm too tired for that. Not sure if I should also add white patches, or not... because calicos are primarily white, so also having white patches seems redundant. —Jayce  ( 17:42, 5/03/2020 )​​​

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 14:34, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. —Jayce  ( 15:51, 5/06/2020 )

Lionblaze (Re) - Approved

Lionblaze.refugee —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 01:27, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

I would think the neck fluff would appear a bit above the shoulders (little bit over the head) as well? Correct me if I'm wrong. Maybe also smooth out the shading underneath the chin a tiny bit? Juniperclaw (talk) 01:38, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

It seems like the pale areas are more distinct on his other images. -Glacier (03:45, 5/04/2020)

Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 14:55, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:34, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:01, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Mothwing (Re) - Approved

Mothwing.refugee queen — eilish ゴジラ (23:32, 04/5/2020)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:33, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:01, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Re) ~ Approved

Ravenpaw.refugee shading woes Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:05, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Looks amazing, I wish I was as good as you. Iceclaw111 16:22, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Also, Iceclaw; keep in mind, kind comments are great and appreciated, however shouldn't be given on the approval page unless you're also providing constructive criticism, as it can clutter the page. If you would like to compliment an artist, leave them a message on their talkpage :) —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 14:25, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 15:38, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Root (Ghost) - Approved

Root.ghost Should I use this version or the gaussian blur version? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 07:43, April 13, 2020 (UTC)

Comparing to the loner, I believe the leg stripes should be thinner and the speckles on the main body should smaller and there are more of them in varying sizes? — eilish ゴジラ (08:07, 13/4/2020)

Reuploaded I think this is better? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 09:29, April 13, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere. It’s a bit dark and sharp right now. Lightening it a bit wouldn’t hurt either. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 01:27, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

I think there are supposed to be pale parts on the belly, chest and muzzle. And more speckled throughout the image at different sizes. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:33, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded I’ve fixed a few things, but I already have the paler parts done? I’ll get to work on the speckles --Eastertail Hop Hop! 02:54, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

Reup Fixed the speckles --Eastertail Hop Hop! 03:05, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

Despite the different side, I feel the haunch stripes don't really match the spirit of the swirls presented on the loner. I would also add a touch more shading to the ears. Also - something about it, when plopped next to the loner, makes this overall seem like a different color. I don't know whether you have Egg's file or not, but that might help. Might be a matter of making the shading tint just a hint warmer.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:09, 4/15/2020

I colourpicked from the loner, or at least tried to. I’ll fix what I can, but my art program doesn’t have a very good hsb tweaking system. It keeps making the colour lighter, even if i try to make it darker. If I do chararts in my other art program (which has a better hsb system), the pixel blanks come out all fuzzy D: I’m not really sure how to fix this --Eastertail Hop Hop! 23:43, April 15, 2020 (UTC)

Hmm, which art program do you use? Sandy My Talk 00:55, April 16, 2020 (UTC)

I use Medibang Paint (not pro version). --Eastertail Hop Hop! 02:59, April 16, 2020 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little everywhere except for the legs? – Ivy ☆ 21:11, April 17, 2020 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I don't think I can help, cuz I use the pro version D: Darken the shading, maybe? Sandy My Talk 00:18, April 18, 2020 (UTC)

Reup --Eastertail Hop Hop! 03:08, April 19, 2020 (UTC)

I think there should be some speckling on the face. And can you make the speckles that you already have flow more with the stripes? There's this odd outline of negative space between the stripes and speckles (and a bit with the back lineart too); it appears like the pattern is straightforward stripes and speckles and stripes, when it should really flow together and be like stripes mixed with freckles. If that makes any sense. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:55, April 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I think I’ve got it. If not, could someone provide a redline please? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 23:48, April 21, 2020 (UTC)

Per my prior comment - those issues stand. The haunch stripes don't match the spirit of the loner's, despite the other side, and the shading tint clashes on this base, and making it warmer like the loner's will make the set congruent.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 03:49, 4/24/2020

While tint is generally a choice, in cases where it throws off images and makes it appear different than the others, the color difference should be addressed and fixed. Spooky is correct, Root's other image looks warmer than what you have here. —Jayce  ( 06:30, 4/25/2020 )​​​​​

Reup Ok, I’ve downloaded a program which can properly adjust the colour. Thanks Patch for the redline for the stripes! Is this better? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 01:50, April 26, 2020 (UTC)

Hmm, I think some shading could be removed from the >> side of the ears, per source, and also to let it's color show through, since it appears much darker than the loner's with the layering on top. I think filling in some of that blank space on the flank might be beneficial; just a couple more smaller flecks. Seems from the loner that there's less blankness, overall.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:07, 4/27/2020

Reup Have I filled the blankness enough? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 22:17, April 27, 2020 (UTC)

Why did you change the shading tint in the last upload? It was fine before; and we're back to me objecting it throws the set as black, and not the warmer.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:08, 4/28/2020

Huh, it must just be my art program. I haven’t changed it, when I made the tint warmer I didn’t touch it after that. --Eastertail Hop Hop! 04:19, April 28, 2020 (UTC) I think it might be the shading definition that’s a bit off. I’ll try to fix it --Eastertail Hop Hop! 04:21, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reup okAy something went wrong but I think it’s fixed now --Eastertail Hop Hop! 04:27, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

The image/pattern still seem slightly off; the speckles seem softer just a tad and still seem to be in different sizes. There could be more shading depth (seems consistent overall) and I think the pale parts extend a bit upward on the belly, and all the pale parts seem smoother a bit. The speckles also seem to have a pattern on the rogue; like in a diagonally top left to bottom right motion (from top of hip to lower belly; from top of back to at the elbow, etc). Maybe that'll help you with placement. I'd also consider maybe asking Eggheart for assistance since it's their pattern. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 06:18, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reup fiddled with a few things, I asked and Egg said the pattern seems to be fine? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 01:19, May 1, 2020 (UTC)

I said the stripes looked fine, but Vec's comment about the speckles still stands Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 01:58, May 1, 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, I tried to lighten the opacity of some of them but they sorta... vanished??? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 02:16, May 1, 2020 (UTC)

Reup ike --Eastertail Hop Hop! 05:08, May 1, 2020 (UTC)

No comments in six days, I'm gonna try and CBA this for you, Wave. —Jayce  ( 02:34, 5/07/2020 )

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:45, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Berrynose (Refugee) - Approved

Berrynose.refugee Wasn't sure about his tail nub, but I don't think it would be visible? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 20:29, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

I feel like if we do see any of it, it's only going to be a small portion of it and not the entire stub. I'm not sure how that would work on these blanks, though. —Jayce  ( 20:40, 5/02/2020 )​​

Maybe just put a little bit so it doesn’t look like he has no tail-- -Glacier () 20:41, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

youre not gonna be able to see any of it, especially since its a stump. that implies only a couple of vertebrae are left and this is basically a head on view; you also cant see the whole tail of the refugees to begin with. david 🌈 20:54, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

The eyes look more dull on thus than the rest of the set-Glacier () 23:41, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to shaded side of the image? It looks a little flat — eilish ゴジラ (23:42, 02/5/2020)

Re-Up! yeah not sure about the consensus on the tail? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 15:29, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

I think if you do choose to add a tail, you could possibly add a stump on --> side, instead of displaying what the blank has. If we follow what the blank has for the tail, you won't see it at all, but given that it is a major part of his description, perhaps see if you can't do something. If you can't get it to work out, I won't force it on you. I mainly just want to see what it would look like. —Jayce  ( 17:44, 5/03/2020 )

Re-Up! added a nub on the --> side like reccomended, and I like how it looks- also fiddled with the shading ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 19:12, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

The base looks a little ligher than the rest of the set? Could you also smooth the shading out some, and maybe lighten/recede some of that extra shading you've added? — eilish ゴジラ (23:06, 03/5/2020)

Re-Up! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 19:27, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce  ( 02:35, 5/07/2020 )

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:45, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Velvet (AVoS) (Re) - Approved

Velvet (AVoS).refugee —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:48, 5/05/2020

Perhaps you could make the heart on the collar a tad bit bigger? It seems a bit bigger on Velvet's other pictures. --Iceclaw111 15:48, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

While it is bigger on her other image, collars matching has never been a requirement. They do look similar in appearance because of simply me choosing to do so, but that doesn't mean I have to alter anything that isn't otherwise technical issue, or make it match more or less than before. I'm quite alright with it the way it is, and rules will allow me not to change it, which is what I'm choosing to do.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:06, 5/06/2020

CBA? Artist's choice on the collar, after all, and I can't see anything else that needs tweaking. —Jayce  ( 02:37, 5/07/2020 )

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:45, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Ghost Kit Blanks - Approved

Diablo personal ended up fiddling with it a little because anatomy is hard fellas. still not happy with it; so im only posting the shorthair for now to nail the anatomy down first before making a fluffy one. — eilish ゴジラ (09:49, 26/4/2020)

i feel like the head should be less round and more rectangular if that makes sense? also i feel like the muzzle should be a little bit more up on its face and > this ear's line connecting to the > side of its head needs to come down a waysSnowdapple ❄ 19:28, 4/27/2020

reuploaded - had a fiddle; still feeling quite 'meh' about this one — eilish ゴジラ (22:57, 27/4/2020)

reuploaded - ? it's probably the perspective that's messing me up with this — eilish ゴジラ (23:06, 27/4/2020)

reuploaded - finally happy with the shorthair so here's a fluffy baby — eilish ゴジラ (22:03, 28/4/2020)

reuploaded - very tiny fiddles; mainly on the longhair's neck — eilish ゴジラ (04:57, 03/5/2020)

Given these haven't been commented on in a few days, and the only comment was over a week ago... I think it's safe to CBA these guys. If Max needs to fix something else, they can always break the CBA themselves if they notice something. —Jayce  ( 02:33, 5/07/2020 )

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:45, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Icewing (Re) - Approved

Icewing.refugee Icestar would be so cool Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 19:29, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

reup messed with the shading Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 22:02, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Could you add a touch of shading on the bottoms of the paws? I also think the shading is a touch sharp on the --> front leg —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:53, 5/05/2020

reup Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 20:55, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Nicely done! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:32, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

There is a couple infilled pixels by the tip of the tail

-Glacier (02:23, 5/06/2020)

Im pretty sure thats the gap of air between the end of the tail and the whiskers Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 03:10, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

reup hard to interpret Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 03:13, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading just a tad? This looks a bit gray compared to her other images. – Ivy ☆ 03:24, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

It looks like there are some unfilled pixels on the tip of her tail. --Iceclaw111 15:50, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Egg, do you need a redline for the pixels? --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 16:23, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

reup No, I do not. It's not that I don't see those pixels of interest, but as I said before, with the whisker intercepting the tail it's hard to tell what is solid and what is air. Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 16:30, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Re-CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:51, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:41, May 9, 2020 (UTC)

Strikestone (refugee) ~ Approved

Strikestone.refugee just wanted to get it out of the way ill tweak some things maybe when it isnt 4am david 🌈 16:41, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:53, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:41, May 9, 2020 (UTC)

Thin gray tom (Ro) - Approved


-Glacier () 11:40, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

The cites on the minor character page show no reasoning for this cat having stripes.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:45, 4/28/2020

Reup sorry about that, I’ve seen other characters that were said to be a gray cat that had a special touch. Is there any subtle markings that I can add as a special touch?--

-Glacier () 15:13, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

If you're going for a Himalayan style, you can just use a color slightly different from the base and add it to the muzzle, tail, and legs. Of course, this is optional and a style preference for some artists, so you don't have to do it. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 15:28, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

^ pale/slightly darker markings are allowed. my comment was more per it being defined stripes (ones that couldn't be written off as texture). Per those two examples though - I'm fairly sure the only reason they're like that is to match their mother. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:47, 4/28/2020

I’ll just leave it because I know I’ll mess it up if I try something :p

-Glacier () 15:51, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading in the blue circles? Its quite hard-edged compared to the rest of the image. — eilish ゴジラ (22:05, 28/4/2020)


-Glacier () 23:00, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference between the uploads? — eilish ゴジラ (23:40, 28/4/2020)

ReupI accidentally reuploaded the same thing lol

-Glacier () 23:56, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

Still not seeing any changes between uploads; if there are changes and wikia's just being painful, could you upload them somewhere else so that users can see the difference? — eilish ゴジラ (00:04, 29/4/2020)

Where should I upload it?

-Glacier () 14:06, April 29, 2020 (UTC)

There’s places like imgur or vvcap where you upload images and provide links. — eilish ゴジラ (19:48, 29/4/2020)


-Glacier () 23:53, April 29, 2020 (UTC)

The link doesn't seem to be working? Try just reuploading here on wikia as well because no changes are showing between the uploads still. — eilish ゴジラ (00:21, 30/4/2020)

Leftlike this?

-Glacier () 00:49, April 30, 2020 (UTC)

The shading still looks very hard-edged in the areas Max indicated, and the haunch too imo. It also seems like there are paler parts in the shading as well. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:04, April 30, 2020 (UTC)

Correct me if I don't understand, but shouldn’t textured shading be a little hard-edged

-Glacier () 01:08, April 30, 2020 (UTC)

It can be hard-edged yes, but in this case its harsher than the rest of the shading making it stand out a little too much. When I said smooth, I meant to imply to make it a smidge more to match the other areas you've got. — eilish ゴジラ (01:11, 30/4/2020)


-Glacier () 21:16, April 30, 2020 (UTC)

Could you recede some of the shading as well? I don't believe it needs to be as far spread as what you've got currently. Could also do with some more smooth, those previously mentioned areas still seem a lot sharper than the rest of the body. — eilish ゴジラ (01:48, 03/5/2020)

Reup-Glacier () 00:55, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

There still appear to be awkward lighter lines throughout the shading, like on the tail, foreleg/shoulder and neck area. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:36, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Reup-Glacier (02:17, 5/06/2020)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 23:38, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Approved — eilish ゴジラ (00:09, 10/5/2020)

Graystripe (Re) ~ Approved

Graystripe.refugee I love him. —Danny GVivaLaVida 22:53, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Can you define his stripe on the back and tail? Juniperclaw (talk) 16:56, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

I think based on the anatomy of the blanks you actually wouldn't be able to see the stripe. —Danny GVivaLaVida 18:03, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

I'm going to second Thunder here, you wouldn't be able to see it. —Jayce  ( 18:04, 5/07/2020 )

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 23:36, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Approved — eilish ゴジラ (00:09, 10/5/2020)

Mistystar (Re) - Approved

Mistystar.refugee back when she was still cool — eilish ゴジラ (07:55, 07/5/2020)

Could you smooth the shading on the > front leg? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:31, 5/07/2020

reuploaded solids — eilish ゴジラ (21:19, 08/5/2020)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 13:38, May 9, 2020 (UTC)

Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:09, 5/10/2020

Skystar (Re) ~ Approved

Skystar.refugee hhhhn Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:45, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

His other images look just a tad bit lighter

-Glacier (16:47, 5/07/2020)

His base colors are all the same throughout because I was the one who tweaked them. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:49, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe dim down the shading a tiny bit? Maybe that might help. He'll also need his torn ear. Juniperclaw (talk) 16:53, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:01, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 13:38, May 9, 2020 (UTC)

Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:09, 5/10/2020

Thriftear (R) - Approved

Thriftear.refugee —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 14:08, May 9, 2020 (UTC)

it Looks realy good but there is one thing the eyes look a bit more amber then the one on her page Ravenblaze may 9 3:35 PM

They're the same shade as her kit, which came first. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 22:54, May 9, 2020 (UTC)

okay sorry this is my first time-Ravenblaze -May 9 4:56

People Still Need to Make a Spotfur,Juniperclaw,Dawnpelt,Tigerstar the 2nd and Flametail Refugee and they also have to Make a Stonefur,Yellowfang,Jessy,Oakfur,Blossomfall,Stormfur,Brook,Bumblestripe,Cinderheart,Crowfeather and Featherpaw is all i can Remember Refugees-Ravenblaze-May 9 4:59

Just as another heads up, Ravenblaze, this page is for commenting critues and such on the art and not discussing what needs to be done. If anything, that can be done on the talk page, but most people are aware what refugee images are in need of doing as they are listed in the refugees category. — eilish ゴジラ (00:07, 10/5/2020)

sorry it my first timeRavenblaze

CBA? —Jayce  ( 19:39, 5/11/2020 )​

Ravenblaze, you arent even a part of the project, so why are you commenting?

Iceclaw111, April showers bring May showers 18:34, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

You don't need to be a member of the project to post comments. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 18:37, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:36, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Haze (Ghost) - Approved

Haze.ghost What is shading, eye placement, and texture. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:35, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

Could I suggest adding a little shading underneath >> the front paw where it's sort of resting on top of the back leg? — eilish ゴジラ (23:22, 11/5/2020)

reups yee ofc Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:17, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? These are so cute. —Jayce  ( 03:57, 5/13/2020 )

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 06:25, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Stream (Ghost) - Approved

Stream.ghost — eilish ゴジラ (23:22, 11/5/2020)

CBA? —Jayce  ( 03:57, 5/13/2020 )

Approved! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 06:25, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Harelight (Re) - Approved

Harelight.refugee Ooh, I like this! Let's see how the first refugee goes.. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 19:29, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

Might you smooth out the overall shading? Good job! —Jayce  ( 19:39, 5/03/2020 )​​​​

Reuploaded Thanks! --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 20:53, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

Could you curve the belly shading some, and also I think the tail shading should be underneath, not on top, I think to follow along with your source? Also add a little bit more depth to the chest area. — eilish ゴジラ (23:05, 03/5/2020)

Could you move the eyes so they're not bug-eyed? His other images don't have this so I don't see why he needs to. Something like Max's eye placement tutorial is what I mean.

—Danny GVivaLaVida 23:13, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I got everything? --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 23:11, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Much better! Minor thing, but > eye has some extra pixels compared to the other eye. Could you remove those?

—Danny GVivaLaVida 02:15, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Per the tutorial up, and other logic, given this --> source, the tail shading would definitely not extend all the way to the tip of the tail. The <<-- ear having shading on the <<-- side also doesn't make sense.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:56, 5/05/2020

Reuploaded Summerflower Cool for the Summer 23:08, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:51, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Sorry for breaking CBA, but could you smooth out the shading some more, and perhaps add some more depth to it along our right side? It seems to fall a little bit flat and makes the additional chest depth look blotchy in comparison. Could you also add some shading to where the front arm sits in front/above the back leg please? — eilish ゴジラ (21:21, 08/5/2020)

Reuploaded Summerflower Cool for the Summer 23:08, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Almost there! A couple more things; the little "triangle" of belly/back foot underneath the arm right at the front, that wouldn't have any light on it what so ever and would be completely in shadow (with assumingly both layers of shading to show that).

The second thing; could you add a little bit of shading >> of the muzzle/face to give it some depth? Right now without any shading there, it falls very flat compared to the rest of the image. There also probably wouldn't be as much shading at the top of the << back leg either with the current light source.

And lastly, I would personally curve the >> back leg shading a bit more to flow the blank's shape and have a little bit of shading just above where the back paw peeks out from underneath. — eilish ゴジラ (23:54, 09/5/2020)

There would also be shading >> underneath the head too. Also if any of this is really confusing, please let me know and I can draw up a redline of it for you! But its basically what is in the shading tutorial, that Spooky also linked as reference earlier. — eilish ゴジラ (23:56, 09/5/2020)

Reuploaded Back after a few days of burnout. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 23:12, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:23, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:43, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Finleap (Re) ~ Approved

Finleap.refugeeAll colors from other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:15, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe it's just the perspective of the blank, but the kit and apprentice/alt apprentice images only have the ginger/stripes going on the foot... while the warrior and loner have it further along the haunch. I feel like it should match the original kit and apprentice images, and maybe have some of the ginger reduced, because as it is now... they don't match. —Jayce  ( 17:23, 5/05/2020 )​​

Reuploaded. How's this? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:34, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Part of the whisker seems to be detached.

-Glacier (18:59, 5/05/2020)

Reduce it a bit more? Unless you want to tweak the apprentice images/kit image to reflect adding extra ginger, that is. Given you're the OA, it's entirely up to you, but if we're going by first images, there's still too much ginger on the haunch when you compare it to what was posted first. —Jayce  ( 19:01, 5/05/2020 )​

I actually would like to tweak his images. The ginger on the apprentices' hind legs seems a bit low even just compared to the images' front legs, plus the shading on them could use work. I was thinking the front legs match the apprentices/kit images, while the back legs match the warrior images, which seem to be lower than the loner, but higher than the apprentices. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:33, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Then you may feel free to nominate your images, and go ahead and fix them up to however you want the pattern to look, and then we can go ahead and not comment on the ginger any further. That being said, may you smooth out the line of shading going along -> side of the neck, up to the back? It appears rather rough around the edges. —Jayce  ( 19:38, 5/05/2020 )

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:55, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Did you do the underbelly shading on a different layer to the rest of it? Because similarly to another one, the shading on the underbelly looks to me like it doesn’t cover all of it, while the rest of the shading goes above it. Might be just me though --Wavetail Ya Yeet 09:13, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:03, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

I really can't see the shading on the pale near his leg anymore. Would you mind darkening it? --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 02:26, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 04:26, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

As mentioned on the tweak nom, could you make sure that the ginger placement matches Sandynose's? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:54, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you provide a redline? That way we can just move on and not have to worry about the ginger anymore. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:09, May 10, 2020 (UTC)

Sorry for the late reply; I worked the past two days. I'd think in order to match Sandy, the ginger would have to be removed on the two haunches. The ginger on the forelegs seem good as they go up to his "elbows". Kinda like what's on Sandynose's art and Finleap's.Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:14, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:28, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:24, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:43, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Feathertail (R) - Approved

Feathertail.refugee —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 23:34, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Though it Looks Amazing i see on the  Warrior Feathertail It Shows her with a bit grayer for the top otherwise AMAZING job -Ravenblaze always Burning like fire   02:24, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

A bit confused by what you mean. Could you elaborate on "grayer for the top"? These are the same colors i used for her kit, are you sure it's not shading you're looking at? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 03:03, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

I feel as if there could be a bit more shading, but maybe not.

Iceclaw111, April showers bring May showers 16:13, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

That's not a contributive critique. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:26, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened it a tad, does this look better? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 16:35, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Yes, it looks better. I think you should just shade the area on the right arm, where it is kind of bright, and it would look perfect. Iceclaw111 Its Spring! 16:51, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is fine how it is. With the light coming from --> side, if I am correct? Juniperclaw (talk) 17:00, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

I believe the light source is actually coming from our right, meaning that arm an area you mentioned, Iceclaw, is fine as is. — eilish ゴジラ (17:45, 14/5/2020)

Ok. I was a bit confused on where the light was coming from. Iceclaw111 Its Spring! 20:17, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:55, May 16, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:55, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (Re) ~ Approved

Tigerstar (AVoS).refugee I dunno Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:54, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Add his torn ear. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:10, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

This is from when he was an apprentice, I think? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:14, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Reups Oh wait I'm dumb, Tigerheart wasn't in the category. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:18, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? — eilish ゴジラ (00:24, 17/5/2020)

Approved. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:55, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Lioneye (G) - Approved

Lioneye.ghost sort of rushed the shading on this because im about to go hiking lmao — eilish ゴジラ (23:10, 14/5/2020)

Define the shading on the lower chest a bit more, if you know what I mean. Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 19:29, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded - shading opacities match the set too, as a heads up. — eilish ゴジラ (21:47, 15/5/2020)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:01, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:55, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

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