Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 292

Flametail (Re) ~ Approved

cries Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:26, June 12, 2020 (UTC)

Really nice! Could you smooth the shading a bit on the tail and arm? It looks a little blocky, might be just me though --Wavetail ^{Ya Yeet} 00:52, June 13, 2020 (UTC)

Reups ye Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:57, June 13, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe dim down the darker spots of shading a smidge? Juniperclaw (talk) 03:52, June 14, 2020 (UTC)

If you mean my shading depth layer, I'm gonna have to ask a second opinion on that cause fiddling with those would result in me dimming the entire shading, unless that is what you mean. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:58, June 14, 2020 (UTC)

looks fine to me ^^ ~Ripple ☆ 04:48, June 14, 2020 (UTC)

Its Looks So Good Why Hasn't Spooky or Patch Put CBA On this ThingRavenripple13 (talk) 05:59, June 18, 2020 (UTC)

Raven, they’ll get to that when they get to it. Please don’t ask for CBAs, it’s rude and against the rules. The approval page is also for contributive comments, not just for saying that it looks good. —Sleekfang^{The future is ours to decide}() 19:34, June 18, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Love this lad, Vec — max ^{it is the real thing,} (23:16, 18/6/2020)

Approved. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:29, June 20, 2020 (UTC)

Patched RiverClan Kit (Ki) ~ Approved

Colors picked from the book (because I finally got a hard copy), so we should be good there. Comments? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 16:51, June 13, 2020 (UTC)

Could you maybe smudge/blur the edges of the patches a little? --Wavetail ^{Ya Yeet} 00:13, June 14, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 02:41, June 14, 2020 (UTC)

The colors seem significantly brighter on my digital and physical copy? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:20, June 18, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Colorpicked from the picture Vec provided. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 00:35, June 18, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:02, June 19, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 19:15, June 20, 2020 (UTC)

Needletail (ghost) - Approved

I spent just as much time on the pupils as I did the rest of it--

-Glacier (02:02, 6/04/2020)

The base seems significantly lighter on the rest of the set. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:04, June 4, 2020 (UTC)

ReupOwo

-Glacier (02:09, 6/04/2020)

The whole part of the ———-> hind leg that’s to the left of the tail should be shaded, I think. (That wording was probably confusing, sorry) —Sleekfang^{The future is ours to decide}()​​​ 03:28, June 4, 2020 (UTC)

there's waste between her front legs ~Ripple ☆ 04:20, June 4, 2020 (UTC)

Reup

-Glacier (08:21, 6/04/2020)

i feel like sleek's comment still stands a little, and there's still some waste between her legs ~Ripple ☆ 01:10, June 5, 2020 (UTC)

The texture should also be slightly softer. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 05:47, June 5, 2020 (UTC)

Reup

-Glacier (15:45, 6/06/2020)

My prior comment still stands; the texture should be a bit softer (you can see this image in her charart section and see what I mean when it's next to the others). Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:41, June 7, 2020 (UTC)

I’m sorry, but I don’t quite understand what I should do to fix it

-Glacier (21:47, 6/07/2020)

try smudging it or try using a pen that has softer texture. ~Ripple ☆ 21:53, June 7, 2020 (UTC)

Reup

-Glacier (23:51, 6/09/2020)

maybe lower the opacity for the texture? it seems a bit darker than the set? ~Ripple ☆ 23:59, June 9, 2020 (UTC)

Reup

-Glacier (18:19, 6/12/2020) Comments? Don’t mean to sound impatient but it’s been five days

-Glacier (21:07, 6/17/2020)

I think the shading could be smoothed out overall, just a little bit. Also you could feasibly remove some of the shading from the muzzle as if your source is coming from >>> there would be some light on that side on the face and such. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (22:21, 17/6/2020)

Reup-Glacier (16:23, 6/20/2020)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:47, June 24, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:44, June 25, 2020 (UTC)

Brown Tabby Kit (Ki) ~ Approved

Not totally happy with this, but oh well. Comments? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 19:21, June 20, 2020 (UTC)

Could you smooth the haunch shading a bit? —Jayce(19:23, 6/20/2020)​​

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 19:28, June 20, 2020 (UTC)

After looking back at it, there only appears to be three tail stripes and maybe six on the body? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:38, June 24, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 23:08, June 24, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:36, June 24, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:44, June 25, 2020 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Re) ~ Approved

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:23, June 20, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 23:09, June 24, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:44, June 25, 2020 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Re) - Approved

stan a QUEEN — max ^{it is the real thing,} (00:57, 21/6/2020)

She no-scoped Berrynose. CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:53, June 24, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:44, June 25, 2020 (UTC)

Ratscar (Re) ~ Approved

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:48, June 26, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:41, June 29, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 19:24, June 30, 2020 (UTC)

Gray and white kit (Ki) - Approved

last one before my small hiatus. ~Ripple ☆ 20:18, June 26, 2020 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the neck a little

-Glacier (22:16, 6/26/2020)

reuploaded ~Ripple ☆ 22:22, June 26, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:10, June 29, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 19:24, June 30, 2020 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Re) - Approved

I really dig this pattern — max ^{it is the real thing,} (23:04, 26/6/2020)

I think she needs the little "M" on her forhead. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:11, June 29, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded lol didn't even notice that — max ^{it is the real thing,} (20:15, 29/6/2020)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:54, July 1, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 03:34, July 2, 2020 (UTC)

Brightheart (MC) ~ Approved

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:54, July 1, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 03:37, July 2, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 03:38, July 3, 2020 (UTC)

Tulipkit (Star) - Approved

think this is the first time i've made a starclan kit. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 17:25, July 2, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 14:56, July 4, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:47, July 5, 2020 (UTC)

Swallowtail (RC) (App) - Approved

this was fun to match — max ^{it is the real thing,} (23:00, 02/7/2020)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 14:58, July 4, 2020 (UTC)

Approved. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:47, July 5, 2020 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Re) ~ Approved

oof Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:00, July 3, 2020 (UTC)

Does he need a torn ear? --Silverfeather ^{Be Happy!} 18:11, July 3, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Reups why do I keep forgetting the torn ears Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:22, July 3, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:22, July 7, 2020 (UTC)

Approved! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:24, July 8, 2020 (UTC)