Talk: Charart/Accepted 68

Cinderheart (Alt. KI) - Approvedd

My first charart! I spent a ton of time on it ^^". Cinderheart's alternate kit form -- she was described in Sunset as 'looking exactly like Cinderpelt (dark fluffy gray)' instead of gray tabby. Comments? Maplefrost! 19:40, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:57, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose; gray cats usually don't have pink noses, and rename it Cinderheart.kit.alt oblivion^Audience? 21:03, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add some highlights to the tail. ❋ Rainwhisper ❋ 21:11, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Move the highlight to the chest and add highlights to the fronts of the legs. Mistfire^{Owl City!} 21:39, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. What now? :) Maplefrost! 00:05, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a little more. ❋ Rainwhisper ❋ 00:06, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

*coughs* Rename it Cinderheart.kit.alt, please. oblivion^Audience? 01:23, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

*Facepaw* Sorry... I was being an idiot xD. I named it Cinderheart.alt.kit... ugh... Sorry, I'll rename it when I re-upload it (in a few minutes when I finish editing) Maplefrost! 01:53, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! (/Is very glad she re-read her post before clicking save page. That would've been an embarrassing typo.) Maplefrost! 02:00, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is an extra period after alt. You just need to name it Cinderheart.kit.alt, it will add the .png to the end on its own. Sorry for the lack of image-related comments, I will once you name it correctly ^_^ oblivion^Audience? 03:33, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Uggghhh xD sorry... you have permission to cyber-punch me. I know, I'm exasperating. It's part of my internet charm ^_^ (NOT). Okay... it's named right, now. I think... xD. Maplefrost! 05:20, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Change the nose color to a darker gray. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:15, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading thoroughly. BlizzardfuSnowkit (OS)^{WhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare!} 17:39, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Maplefrost! 19:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look... mismatched and blotchy. Can you try and fix that? ❋ Rainwhisper ❋ 20:43, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks crooked. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 20:44, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maplefrost! 23:23, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading thoroughly. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:26, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Are they too strong or something? I keep getting told to do that... they're as blurred as they possibly can be, so are they just too strong? Maplefrost! 23:34, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The nose is still a bit pink. And no, they're not too strong. You need to blur them, they're too blotchy. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:01, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make the nose completely black/very very dark gray? Or just darken the current pinkish-gray nose? Maplefrost! 05:05, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose colour a dark gray --Nightshine 00:12, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I fixed the nose and splotchiness. It doesn't look splotchy anymore ^^", thank goodness. I'm sick of the Blur tool. xD Maplefrost! 17:53, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks really blotchy to me. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:24, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Me, too. There are scraps of shading and highlights everywhere, and looks a bit disorganized. Also, blur the tail shading a tad. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 21:26, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? Maplefrost! 21:57, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Now it looks how it did before XD Blur it mostly on the chest area, but on the legs and the tail too. ❋ Rainwhisper ❋ 22:07, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Would you want some help with the blotchiness? ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:41, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

-Sigh-... Whenever there's blotchiness, there's something I like to do called... REDOING THE SHADING AND HIGHLIGHTS. I just fill 'em in again and redo the shading and highlights and hope it works. BlizzardfuSnowkit (OS)^{WhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare!} 04:03, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

If they redo the shading and highlights, it may make it more blotchy, with the Pixlr blurring. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:05, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

The earpinks should be a bit more consistent. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I completely restarted--been working on this nonstop. :D I think I got it fixed. Comments? *Crosses fingers* Oh, and please give me little details, too--like, say, the eyes are a bit to greeny-blue, etc. Don't be afraid to point something like that out--I want you to. I'm trying to become a great Charart member :). Maplefrost! 06:28, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Much better, Maplefrost. :] Make the nose lighter and blur the ear-pink more. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:53, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll go work on it now :). P.S.--Has nothing to do with this, but... can ANYONE tell me what happened to Bramble and why Oblivion's now leader? It's like one day I logged on and Bramble was listed as leader, then suddenly Oblivion... and I can't find anything about it. I checked PCA news, tried the (confusing) forums, and even poked around on Bramble's profile... nothing. On his/her (I think last I read Bramble's a her xD) profile it still says 'I'm the leader of Project Charart, yada yada yada". Maplefrost! 03:45, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Read the discussion on "New Leadership" in the discussion area. :3 ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:50, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, I read it :) congratz on being new Dep. Humm... does that look any better? Note: For some odd reason every time I clicked 'overwrite existing photo with yours' ('cause I have to name it Cinderheart.kit.alt), it would say 'success!' and I'd click 'return to editing', yet it would look exactly the same... I tried to get it to work about ten times, to no avail. So now I'm just crossing my fingers that it'll show the 'right' new one. Maplefrost! 04:25, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the shading--Nightshine 22:58, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten highlights. This is quite good =3 ޓSun spiritޓ^{Santa Paws is coming to town!} 09:30, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Great job, Maplefrost. 8) The ear pink should be even on both ears. :) --User:Midnitesky/Sig 21:13, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Is that better? I think the ear pink's a bit too faint now... am I right? Comments? ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 22:00, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, you're right XD so brighten it up a little. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 03:30, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

xD Is that better? (Reuploaded) ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 17:06, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Whoa! Nice sig, Maplefrost. This is really good, just make the nose a lighter gray. Mistfire^{Owl City!} 17:13, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks and thanks! :) Thanks also for giving me the link to Oblivion's Sig tutorial, back when I was a WWiki noooob... Heh, I'll go change the nose color now. :) ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 17:44, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

How's that? (Reuploaded) ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 04:03, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

There's a single circle of highlights on her chest. Blur and smooth it out. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 15:27, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the highlights, and I can hardly see the ear pink. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 19:07, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Dodge the face a tad more. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Working on it! Just making sure you don't think I've abandoned it ;) ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 19:32, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Just darken the shading a little on the paws, unless the light is coming from the front. It seems to be coming from the top. Otherwise, it's FANTABULOUS! Butterfly }{ Song! 00:25, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and brighten the highlight there. Try making the transition smoother. =) --User:Midnitesky/Sig 14:29, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 19:48, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

If it is declined, might I work on it? I'm horrbily bored now that I have no charart to do Maplepool 04:08, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you can work on this now--Nightshine 04:17, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

What? No! I'm right here! I'm reuploading now! One sec. It's still mine. I never resigned... ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 21:33, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... how's this? I think I fixed the ears. I still need to work on the paws, which I'll do on my next upload, but I kind of rushed this one... I don't want this to be taken away from me :/ I never withdrew it. It's just... been the holidays. I couldn't be on 24/7. I'm back, though. This is my first charart; please don't take it away from me. Anyway... reuploaded, comments please. ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 21:57, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Maplefrost, this is wonderful! Just blur the shading at the base of the tail a little. Mistfire^{I'd like fries with that} 18:33, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more consistent. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thank ye ^^. Okay, I fixed the tail and paws, but I haven't reuploaded it because... well, what exactly do you mean by consistent? Heh, please don't laugh... just need to make sure before I mess it up more. ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 20:41, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Consistent means to make them the same. The right (our right) earpink seems a little brighter than the left and they are not in the same shape. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:33, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

And while you're at it, brighten it a bit more =) --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 04:46, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is great Maplefrost! Just brighten the face a little. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 05:16, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 23:35, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yup! :) ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 04:33, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded! ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 04:39, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Juuust making sure XD Blur the chest highlight/shading --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 00:23, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rename the image 'Cinderheart.kit.alt' Rainlegs 15:53, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe a little less shading, or maybe some more highlights? Either will work. -

UNI 01:04, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 16:51, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not entirely sure on this so bear with me. The shading could be blurred and are there hightlights? I don't seem to see any:PMINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 01:14, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

If this is declined, may I take over? :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 22:44, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm workin' on it, sorry. It's not an excuse, but my dog passed away recently. I haven't been on much. ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 01:02, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Poor you and doggie D: Make the earpink brighter and redder. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 03:48, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks fine to me, just darken the nose colour/make it dark gray--Nightshine 05:41, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Why is the charart called KitLongFehmm222 O_o? Rename it Cinderheart.kit.alt please --Leafstrike-- 15:32, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know O_o Why the heck did it name it that? It's saved in my comp as 'Cinderkit charart'. Anyway, I reuploaded. ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 22:17, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Looking good. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:22, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 01:58, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. Are you still working on this? --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 06:49, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 02:59, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

If Maplefrost can't/doesn't want to finish, I can take over. Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 14:03, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'm done. I don't deserve to continue this; I'm not on enough. So... I'm withdrawing it... sorry... this doesn't mean I can't do other chararts in the future, does it? ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 04:28, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

I doesn't, don't worry. I'm assuming Cloudskye will take over this image now, so it won't go to waste. :) Rainlegs 04:34, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm working on it. No image should go to waste. Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 13:25, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I changed the color of the eyes, blurred the chest and re-did the ear pink. So, does it look better? Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 13:37, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can the highlights/shading be blurred anymore? Riverpelt^{StarClan's Chosen One XD} 22:10, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. River, I did what I could without killing the lineart. Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 13:32, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the body, darken the nose colour--Nightshine 23:11, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading near the tips of her fur and create a bit more of a contrast between the shading and the highlight. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 15:55, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. The kit image is getting hard to work with. Give me a bit to get it done. Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 12:50, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does she look any better? I am not good with the shading. The more I try and fix it...the blacker it looks. Even when I try and repair it with highlights. I don't think it looks that bad, though. Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 18:12, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pinks look like they're different sizes, or maybe that's just me. And also maybe brighten the eye color to it matches Cinderpelt's eye color, since she was described as looking like Cinderpelt's spitting image. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 23:32, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the eye color to match Cinderpelt's, and I also re-did the ear pink. Comments? Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 13:30, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks like there is a black spot above her eye.   Darkhallows...^Mew? 20:05, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:46, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a black dot over her eye. Echostar229 01:37, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better now? Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 12:23, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight a bit more. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 14:59, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred like I was told. I'm not sure if I can blur anymore. Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 17:11, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail, thicken the shading on the right Nightshine 00:50, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added a highlight and thickned the shading. Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 12:41, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?  Darkhallows...^Mew? 21:15, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the right. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:12, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Frostheart, I think the lightsource is the top left corner, in which case it shouldn't be changed.  Darkhallows...^Mew? 07:50, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. Darkhallows is right. Repeating 24 hours Nightshine 19:10, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (Ki) - Approved

Creekfeather as a kit Rainlegs 21:55, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing, lighten the ear pink, darken the stripes--Nightshine 22:02, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes and smudge them. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:27, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened whole image, lightened earpink, darkened stripes, and smudged them more. Rainlegs 23:00, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more; make them look feathery. It kind of looks like he is flecked.Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 23:33, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged them even more...... I think I need to smudge them all around, not just going with the fur, to make them look more feathery..... Rainlegs 02:05, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and darken it a tad. Also, maybe try smudging the stripes with the size 1 brush and just run it back and forth through the tabby mark. If my charart was approved I was going to do Creekkit and that's what I did. (I made his image because I was bored XD) If that doesn't make sense then just leave it be :) Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 02:22, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm trying my best..... I'm also starting to despise the smudge tool..... ;) Rainlegs 03:53, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the spots more stripe-ish. :) ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to make them more stripe-like :S Rainlegs 14:27, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little bigger. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 14:41, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Enlarged earpink. Rainlegs 01:48, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too fuschia, and the stripes don`t look like stripes. Make them a lot thinner. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:46, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I Fixed the earpink, although I'm not too sure about the stripes. They aren't very stripe-like on his warrior image, and I want a few more user's opinion on that. No offense. Rainlegs 00:47, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think they should look a little sharper and a little less thick. Maybe even get rid of a few of the stripes. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:22, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes should be in a triangle shape and then smudged heavily. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:09, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It looked so good and strip-y, until I smudged it.... :( Rainlegs 16:24, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

It looks really nice! Just make the earpink a little pinker, like on the warrior image. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer 02:06, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Use the smallest possible brush for smudging. It will help your outcomes. =) --Wildheart ^{W h a t i s r i g h t n o w ?} 03:31, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a tad skinnier. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 05:48, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 04:51, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Good. You got the idea when you smudged it. Looks good, but make the stripes smaller so that it's like little patches. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 06:56, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Great job, Rainlegs! =) Can you add some highlights to the tail? --User:Midnitesky/Sig 14:06, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 03:33, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to make the stripes into something more resembling the patches on his other chararts. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 04:37, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay..... Stripes or Patches? I'm switching back and forth here. Rainlegs 02:42, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

They are stripes, but they are smudged to look like patches. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:38, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay. That clarifies things..... Rainlegs 14:51, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just make stripes and smudge them a lot with the small circle tool to make it look somewhat like a patch--Nightshine 23:06, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the image. Rainlegs 02:55, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, add shading under the chin, lighten the ear pink, smudge the patches. --Nightshine 04:14, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lemme guess...... Thin out chin shading? Rainlegs 01:35, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Haha chin shading looks fine. I know this is kind of contradicting what nightshine JUST said, but darken the earpink. Not a LOT, so that it's like it was before, but just so it doesn't look so bubble-gum pink, y'know? =P Make the patches a leetle bit smaller and smudge them a leetle bit more XD --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 06:09, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 03:28, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour, lighten the ear pink, define the patches--nightshine❄ 02:08, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good! Move the chest highlight up a bit. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 02:01, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Nerp. Was grounded from the computer. I'm back, though! Rainlegs 00:52, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but in the way of consistency, could be a bit better. Perhaps make the patches a bit smaller. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:29, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 01:02, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry! I was re-doing the image, then I had some other life-issues, and didn't get around to this. Will re-upload in a minute. Rainlegs 01:16, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-did image. I stole all the colore from Creekfeather's warrior image. Rainlegs 01:34, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes some more. This looks great! Ravensoul101 03:02, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 19:31, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and the nose colour--Nightshine 23:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is it normal to want to shred a fictional character into teeny-tiny peices? Rainlegs 01:33, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink just a tad. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 18:17, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 02:39, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches some more and darken the shading a tad --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 04:34, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 16:32, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Three days, and no comments....... Anyone? Rainlegs 01:26, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs, be patient. Blur the darker stripes. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 05:02, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.... I might need a little help with blurring the shading... Rainlegs 00:29, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

I can, if you want...Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 02:17, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you? That would be great! Rainlegs 03:17, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches some more. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 21:12, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done. Mistfire? Rainlegs 02:54, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it even more. Perhaps with a larger brush. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 23:26, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I smudged it even more, using a variety of brush sizes. Mistfire? Rainlegs 23:37, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and add shading under the chin. Darken the shading as well--Nightshine 02:59, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Chinshading= UBER failure....... Mistfire? Rainlegs 01:38, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really see any stripes on this, make them darker. Blur the shading --Nightshine 05:42, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Guys, I'm just having issues with this cat..... I'm gonna withdraw him. If anyone wants him, go ahead. Rainlegs 21:17, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

May I take over this one? ✳ YatzSliversword ^{Let it snow...}✳ 22:26, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Knock yourself out. :) Rainlegs 22:29, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading under the chin, brighten the ear pink, and brighten the highlight on the chest. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 15:52, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good, but blur the chest and shading. Rainwhisker⁵⁶⁷ 01:50, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I blurred everything and made the ear pink lighter. ✳ YatzSliversword ^{Let it snow...}✳ 15:37, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Needs to be blurred a lot more, and the ear pink should be made even. Also, change the nose to pink, or at least a lighter gray.  Darkhallows...^Mew? 20:11, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes more noticeable. Just make the nose colour lighter, don't make it pink though. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:48, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red and blur it. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:10, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

You need to rename it 'Creekfeather.kit'. Not 'Creekfeather.kit2'. Echostar229 03:07, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Uh... I don't know how to overwrite the existing photo, so does the name matter? ✳ YatzSliversword ^{Let it snow...}✳ 11:08, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Just name it 'Creekfeather.kit' and upload it. It'll take you to a page with both versions of the image and click on 'overwrite current image with new image' or something. And that's how to re-upload images over previous ones rather than creating a new one each time. I hope that wasn't too vague... Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 21:53, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Righty ho. I did it. ✳ YatzSliversword ^{Ah, spring...}✳ 16:02, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the top of the chin shading. Darken the stripes, make the ear-pink more reddish, and blur it, too. Rainlegs 00:26, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt. L) - Approved

This is my first leader as well as the first PCA charart I made with GIMP. I'm not sure about the highlights. What do you guys think? ☾Moonflight☽ 00:07, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur/smugg the ear pink, and lighten the whole image. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:19, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights a little and blur them. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 00:38, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflight, when you use the blur tool, turn the rate up to 100. Not sure if you knew that. But anyways, lighten the entire image and make the nose colour darker. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:06, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image, and brighten the highlights. Also, when you make a black cat, make sure you fill it in with a very dark grey, instead of solid black. Also, darken the shading. I love the way you did the ear pink, by the way! ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 01:22, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

It looks as if you've colored his pelt with solid black, because I can't see the lineart. My suggestion is to redo the image, using a dark gray for the pelt like Nightflower said. You can try lightening it, though. Rainwhisker⁵⁶⁷ 03:09, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I didn't use black, but it was close. I redid it and completely did away with the highlights. ☾Moonflight☽ 03:17, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Blur and thicken the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:13, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur highlights and shading. ℳĨ₰₮₣ĨȒ€^Happy New Year! 16:35, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

lighten him just a little bit, and smug the ear pink with the black. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 06:17, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I redid him. Comments? ☾Moonflight☽ 18:25, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and darken the whole image; right now it looks dark gray. Add shading under the chin and lighten the ear pink--Nightshine 00:17, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. Darken the shading on the tail. ❄Icy❄^{Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells!} 17:43, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the front legs more*Wildfire* 15:01, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Bleck...comments? ☾Moonflight☽ 18:54, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading under the chin on the right side, blur the shading thoroughly, darken the nose colour, smudge the black into the ear pink--nightshine❄ 02:08, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add/brighten the highlights. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:26, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Ah. Much better. ☾Moonflight☽ 22:17, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight a bit and make it a bit bigger as well. Looks great. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 00:00, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't add highlights. ☾Moonflight☽ 00:20, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then just thin out the shading a bit on the haunch. =) --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 02:10, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think I can without it looking messed up. Sorry. ☾Moonflight☽ 19:34, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image. Just dodge it on like .5% and then maybe we'll be able to see the lineart better. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 00:20, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ☾Moonflight☽ 10:27, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and blur it--Nightshine 01:01, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh Blackstar is white with black ears and paws KAT 03:20, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is an alternate picture. Hence the "Alt. L" on the heading. Please sign with four tildes (~) on talk pages like this. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:15, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur highlights and shading. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 05:01, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay everyone. I am working on this, so please leave this as it is. ☾Moonflight☽ 19:55, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights around the neck Splook ^{sweet  creature} 17:29, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reploaded17:23, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the front leg highlights go up and down the legs. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 02:19, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Um...huh? ☾Moonflight☽ 23:38, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken nose colour--Nightshine 02:27, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading between the legs. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 21:15, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight a little. MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 21:27, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 05:41, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, people! Thanks to Scarletwind, I did this. She said it hadn't been worked on in a long time. ^_^ ✳ YatzSliversword ^{Let it snow...}✳ 12:50, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 16:26, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Please please don't. This is my first chance at an approved charart. ✳ YatzSliversword ^{Let it snow...}✳ 16:28, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

...Um... Reuploaded. Can I still work on this? ☾Moonflight☽ 17:20, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you can. Darken the nose colour--Nightshine 23:10, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading down by the paws, left haunch, and tail. I can't see the lineart. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 15:51, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it should be lightened. I can see it fine.  Darkhallows...^Mew? 20:16, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ya keep it dark. He is a black cat. Make the nose black. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:11, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a patch of shading on the lower chest above the forelegs, that isn't continued on down. Either get rid of the patch or continue it into the space of belly between the legs. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 21:55, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going out soon, so I'll get to this tomorrow. ☾Moonflight☽ 21:12, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt. Apprentice) - Approved

Oh, meow. Cinderpelt, with a deformed leg, as an apprentice. I tried my new style with shading, then blurred it. Honestly it's better than before. The earpink didn't work so well for me. Comments? ❄Icy❄^{Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells!} 00:45, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and straighten it out a little (if that makes sense) and blur the haunch highlight. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:47, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the highlights. oblivion^Audience? 01:54, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Straightened the ear pink; blurred, and blurred the highlights as well. Constructments? ❄Icy❄^{Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells!} 01:56, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

It needs to be long-haired. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 04:45, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 03:15, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 18:47, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

It has been a week since Icestorm has reuploaded this. May I take over? ☾Moonflight☽ 01:41, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a few more days--Nightshine 15:53, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Icestorm's computer broke. She might not be back for about 10 more days. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:38, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well, do I have permission to take over? Is it possible you could ask her? Or, shall we wait? ☾Moonflight☽ 16:42, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

We should wait.☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:52, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work--Nightshine 00:21, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I am reposting this, Icestorm's computer had only just began working again. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:04, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. I'll get started right away. ❄Icy❄^{Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells!} 17:25, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Done. ❄Icy❄^{Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells!} 15:43, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and the earpink. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 16:41, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be bigger and triangular, and the highlights blurred. It looks great though! Rainwhisker⁵⁶⁷ 18:35, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks Great! Just darken the image a little more so it looks more like her other chararts. Rainlegs 18:46, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, they just look like circles of pale gray. Mistfire^{I'd like fries with that} 14:47, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Someone can take over on this since Ice has left for a little while--nightshine❄ 02:07, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do it! Ravensoul101 02:36, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger, and more blurred.

Blur the shading. Brighten and make the earpink into a more triangular shape. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:34, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten** --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 07:09, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Are you working on this, Ravensoul? --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 00:21, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ravensoul e-mailed me last night and told me that the wiki isn't letting him edit anything. It happened to me once, but it only lasted a day. Rainlegs 00:47, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the hi-lites on the shoulder and haunch. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 18:14, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is unnaturally bright, tone it down a bit. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 21:13, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

If Ravensoul still isn't able to edit this, I think somebody else should take over. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 00:16, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Test... Test... Ravensoul101 15:35, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It works! Yay! I'll work on it. I'm going to re-do the highlights and shading ompleatly. They really aren't workin for me. BRB Ravensoul101 15:37, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

If you're up to it maybe you could add just a tiny bit of a paw on the other side of the haunch? It looks like there's actually no leg right now XD --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 07:03, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Can you help me with the blurring? Pixlr is KILLING me. Ravensoul101 02:58, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. I'll do that right now. If you really hate pixlr, though, you can download GIMP for free. That's what I use, and it's wonderful XD --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:05, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it a bunch. There was also some blurred lineart that I fixed, which meant I had to change the earpink a bit. Hope that's okay. Did I help? --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:46, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

The line art on the far foot is too thick, also I suggest you get rid of the clump of black pixels around the hind foot--Nightshine 16:47, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Wildheart- My dad won't let me download it, and, thanks a ton! Ravensoul101 03:38, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't really look like her leg is deformed. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 22:09, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it's a little hard since it's the hind leg on the other side, but I guess I can make it a little curved. Ravensoul101 04:51, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried my best.... :S Ravensoul101 16:42, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading so it's fading smoothly into the pelt. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 05:00, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and try to make the foot lineart curling up, like her medicine cat charart --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 05:20, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined---Nightshine 02:26, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm back! Had to buy a new computer. My three-year-old sister snapped some wires, and it died. Got a new one, and re-uploaded. Can somone help me a little more with blurring? Ravensoul101 03:42, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

The foot lineart looks great! Too bad about your computer. I suppose I could help if you want... --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 05:02, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please! Ravensoul101 04:10, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred to the max. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 07:58, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten highlights. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 16:35, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Wildheart! Ravensoul101 16:41, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Right now this looks kind of like half of the image is dark and the other half is light, so try to give it more dimension. Nightshine 23:09, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred it as much as pixlr would let me. Help? Ravensoul101 01:34, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Still needs a lot more blurring. Want me to do it in GIMP for you?  Darkhallows...^Mew? 21:17, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please! Ravensoul101 00:27, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Done.   Darkhallows...^Mew? 04:48, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

The whiskers seem like they've been elongated or blurred. Also, I think the shading could be blurred more. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 00:00, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt. A) - Approved

first carart project cat *Wildfire* 23:53, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches, and make them a pale gray so the shading will show up. Darken the shading under the chin and on his left foreleg and hind leg. Darken the ear-pink. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 23:55, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rainbreath already has this reserved so it will be declined--Nightshine 23:57, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

My mistake, Rainbreath has his kit image reserved. No one else has this currently reserved so it is fine. Rename this Berrynose.apprentice.alt.png. Blur the patches of white and darken the shading.--Nightshine 23:58, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

um.. no she reserved the alt. kit*Wildfire* 00:02, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the tail, and make the stump look the the warrior image. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:06, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad! Blur the shading, there is too much of a *searches for word* difference, if you know what I mean. Mistfire^{I'd like fries with that} 01:11, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

do i get rid of the tail or not and how do i reupload it*Wildfire* 02:05, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

get rid of the tail. You re-upload it by left clicking on the image, clicking on 'open link' and then going to the bottom of the page it takes you to and clicking 'upload new verson', or some saying like that. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 02:53, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

i would also like to join project carart*Wildfire* 03:13, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded*Wildfire* 03:17, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail look more natural like in his apprentice charart. Blur the shading a ton and blur the earpink. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 03:21, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white patches, make the ear pink more reddish, darken the shading--Nightshine 03:32, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *Wildfire* 15:47, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

can i join project carart? *Wildfire* 15:49, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *Wildfire* 16:23, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure I'll add you in. Smudge the white patches. Darken the shading a lot, especially on the white areas. Darken the ear pink--Nightshine 19:58, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

what else do i need before the 24 hrs. can start?*Wildfire* 22:09, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Um, what Nightshine said above your comment? And it's not that easy, you know. Most chararts need truckloads of work, and just a couple re-uploads won't get you very far. Should I also suggest blurring the white patch on the muzzle more? It looks sort of unnatural right now. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 22:40, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

okay, sorry *Wildfire* 22:48, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

No, no. It's not your fault. I'm just saying, don't get too impatient with yourself, 'kay? :3 --User:Midnitesky/Sig 22:52, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

yah i understand but i was being a little rude*Wildfire* 23:04, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the skinny gray area between the forearm and the chest white and darken the shading there. Smudge all the white patches, darken the ear pink, blur the shading and highlights--Nightshine 01:38, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded*Wildfire* 01:03, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white transition, make the gray area in front of his fore arm white, blur the shading and highlights, --Nightshine 04:13, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *Wildfire* 21:54, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Rainlegs 00:55, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *Wildfire* 15:37, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading some more and brighten the earpink. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 22:49, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Rename it Berrynose.apprentice.alt.png please :) --Leafstrike-- 21:44, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

i don't know how i tried but couldn't so how do i rename it *Wildfire* 00:26, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

You reupload the image with the correct name. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:53, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

i dont know how could you please help*Wildfire* 02:12, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

okay i got it*Wildfire* 22:02, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading and highlights more consistent. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 06:30, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink some. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:28, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

This technique of shading looks awesome! Only blur the shading a bit. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 03:50, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded *Wildfire* 17:13, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and shoulder. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:10, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink some more. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:32, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 01:01, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

sorry i will get to workWildfire 03:40, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

reuploadedWildfire 03:47, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the bottom of the haunch shading, lighten the earpink, and blur the shading some more. Better, though =) --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:50, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I suppose since Wildfire's leaving =( this means this is up for grabs. Speak now or forever hold you peace, people. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 04:58, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

-speaks- I will do et! xD User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 16:21, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

i said kittycat or nightshine could have it sorry Wildfire 16:31, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wildfire, you don't really have a say over that. There's a lot of new users who haven't even done a single charart, and this is one of their only opportunities. Rainlegs 17:58, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs is right, any user who isn't currently working on a charart can take over on this--Nightshine 16:45, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

So...I can do it? User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 17:48, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you can. :) Rainlegs 19:14, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 21:50, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

There is some colour outside of the line art, fix that, get rid of the clump of black on the hindfoot, darken the shading, take the line art from Berrynose's apprentice image for the tail. Add some more white areas, add ear pink--Nightshine 23:27, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bah, I think I made it worse. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 23:26, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches and shading and brighten the earpink so it shows up more. 173.183.120.76 02:54, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

(computer logged me out. that was me, sorry) --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:25, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added more white and redid the shading. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 22:10, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and maybe lighten the gray a tad. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 18:17, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened shading, I think it looks too dark now. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 21:10, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks pretty dark on the white part on his head. Lighten it a little. Rainlegs 04:43, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the white patches, get rid of the gray speckles around the charart, and the shading just looks more like a darker shade of gray rather than shading. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 02:39, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried a different style, a back light source. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 22:30, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Just darken the light pixles on his right paw. Rainlegs 04:19, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry about the bits of grey around him, it's the way I shade.User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 20:33, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and eye colour. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 07:37, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

The white looks too gray. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 03:29, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I understand that the gray is shading but 1) hardly any white spots 2) just barely blur the shading, hardly MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 01:01, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is so much shading on the white it looks gray, and the white markings don't look natural- just like one big swooping line down the cat, if you know what I mean. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 05:26, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added more white, and redid the shading again.User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 16:43, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The gray and white areas just don't look natural. Try looking up a picture of a gray-and-white cat to get ideas. Lighten the ear pink a bit.Nightshine 05:15, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the comment, Nightshine. I think finding a ref helped a bit. c: User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 22:43, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add some gray to the fore arms, lighten the ear pink a bit, smudge the gray parts, lighten the white areas--Nightshine 02:26, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nightshine, what do you mean about adding gray to the forearms? They're supposed to be white. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 00:34, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

It will give the charart a more balanced look--Nightshine 00:16, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I gave him gray 'socks', it's a marking that's natural with cats. Is that alright? User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 01:03, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the gray markings and darken the shading--Nightshine 01:58, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I smudged around the white markings, is this what you meant? User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 22:03, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Inbetween his left legs, there's a few pixels that are a grey-ish color. Make these transparent. Rainlegs 16:56, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I got rid of most, if not all of the grey pixels.User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 22:52, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the gray transition, give the image more dimension; it's really flat right now--Nightshine 23:09, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I smudged it a lot. How, exactly, would I make the image have more dimension? User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 17:36, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

That means to make the image look realistic, 3D looking. Riverpelt^{StarClan's Chosen One XD} 20:10, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white bits. And perhaps blur rather than smudge.  Darkhallows...^Mew? 20:21, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more. --Moonleaf 20:21, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I ended up redoing the image. better? User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 21:41, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and try and blur the gray on the haunch. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 00:54, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried a different style of shading. Made the ear pink a bit smaller. The gray on the haunch is blurred to the max. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 21:51, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading, lighten the ear pink a bit, Nightshine 23:14, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 00:23, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the gray/white transition if it cant be blurred any more. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 20:00, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

erase the gray speckles by his muzzle. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 13:14, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 16:27, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Really good for a first charart (i'm probably not the first to say that). The gray and white look almost too smudged together. Try blurring it as hard as you can. Remember to keep the blur strength at one hundred...but the brush is nice and small. If it can't be blurred anymore...just try and smudge it so it looks more natural and smoothed. :) Tawnytastic_{YOUR JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!} 19:27, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 22:13, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely! Blur the shading on the tail a bit more and the gray around his face. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 22:31, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt(Alt. W)- Approved

I did the best I could, but idk... 01:12, January 22, 2011 (UTC)Mintstarr (Talk)

I moved this to the right section. I don't see her being mentioned as cream coloured in the trivia nightshine❄ 01:15, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I believe this is for her tawny colored alternate. The reference is I believe on page 3 of Midnight. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 02:55, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Assuming this has a correct reference for now: Tawnypelt should be more ginger or orange-colored; this looks too brown/cream. The earpink is too small and too light, make it dark redder and a tad larger. Add a clearly visible highlight to the tail, and brighten the highlights. Darken the shading, make it thicker, and blur them thoroughly. In my opinion, the ear could use a slight highlight; it looks a little dark right now. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 02:59, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll add that to her trivia. As for the image, blur the highlights and shading, make the ear pink more reddish. Right now this looks cream colour and it should be tawny (ginger) --nightshine❄ 03:00, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Tawnypelt.warrior.alt.png ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 09:19, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I will fix all of this, but did I do the shading right? Mintstarr (Talk) 14:30, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine :P The ear pink needs to be redon badly, it looks more like a circle right now. Blur the shading on the front leg a bit. Other then that, nice work. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 17:06, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I can't reupload the file because I'm getting a message saying, file type verification error. Mintstarr (Talk 17:59, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better? Mintstarr (Talk) 19:26, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Move the shoulder highlight down and it still needs to be more orange. Make the ear pink smaller and more red, and blur the shading. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:33, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

If you want to know what color she should be look at her alternate kit image. Also, blur the tail shading and make the shoulder highlight more oval shaped. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:27, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, scratch that with the alternate kit. Just do what Iceheart said and make it more ginger. ;) 21:31, January 22, 2011 (UTC)Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥}

The shading could still be darker. The earpink looks unnatural, fix that, please. It should be darker red and more saturated, as well as more consistent and more evenly dark. Also shade her midriff, please. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 21:20, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I don't think I shaded the midriff right. I made more ginger and made her earpink smaller and redder. Mintstarr (Talk) 23:10, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton and darken the earpink. The midriff shading should be from the middle of her back to her stomach. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:01, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I fixed the earpink and shading. Mintstarr (Talk) 23:19, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more and perhaps make her a bit more tawny (gingery brown) --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:03, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- the shading has been blurred. Mintstarr (Talk) 22:08, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be more tawny-coloured. Tawny is a gingery-brown, whereas this is more of a pale yellowy-ginger. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 02:33, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it is gingery-browner. Mintstarr (Talk)Mintstarr 01:10, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

It could still be more ginger, and blur the shading. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:41, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it is more ginger and the shading has been blurred Mintstarr (Talk) 22:31, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

It should still be more richer ginger. Is this your idea of ginger? This is mango. Take a look at Tawnypelt's alternate kit image or Cherrykit's image to get an idea, Mintstarr. You've been asked to make this image ginger many times, and I still don't think you've gotten the idea. Thanks, --User:Midnitesky/Sig 23:17, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Also, you've named it wrong. Please rename it Tawnypelt.warrior.alt, thanks. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 23:21, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it's so much the ginger aspect she's missing, but the brown. Right now it's a ginger. A pale ginger, but a ginger nonetheless. You need to make it a little more brown. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 23:50, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the hi-lites. Mistfire^{I'd like fries with that} 02:19, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I borrowed the pelt color from her alternate kit image so if it isn't tawny I was lied to. Mintstarr 18:14, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

(sigh) Mintstarr, I made Tawnypelt's alternate kit image, and you weren't "lied to". -_- It still could be a tad more saturated. Try comparing it again:

See how it looks a tad more ginger? That's the color I think Tawnypelt's alternate warrior image should be. I hope you understand! :) Thanks, --User:Midnitesky/Sig 19:37, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Her alternate kit image wasn't tawny-colored though. it was pale ginger like Goldenflower. It needs to be more brownish and the shading needs to be blurred a ton. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 00:56, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it should be more ginger. User:Mintstarr 01:03, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to be more brown, right now it just looks yellow. This is the color of a tawny-colored cat: link. The shading still needs to be blurred too. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:22, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the hi-lites. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 19:16, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- more brown or more ginger? sigh... Mintstarr (Talk) 23:38, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red, blur the shading, and maybe darken the entire image to make it look more likr the kit. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:12, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows that? Mintstarr (Talk) 00:27, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

The image still needs to be a light brown. I wouldn't use the kit image as a referance, because it's ginger. Also, make the earpink a tad smaller, it's kinda falling out of the ear right now, and blur the shading on her haunch. Rainlegs 01:17, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Sasha doesn't have this pelt color and she is a tawny cat. Mintstarr 17:35, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink duller and this still needs to be brown-er. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 01:27, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mintstarr (Talk)Mintstarr 20:54, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this really needs to be browner. Here is a picture of a tawny-coloured cat. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 00:11, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading. Rainlegs 01:15, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

The hi-lites seem to be just... there, when they should be smoothly flowing into the pelt. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 14:53, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I found the colors off the internet so which one is tawny-er, excluding highlights and shading? Mintstarr (Talk)Mintstarr 16:38, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

File:Tawny 1.png File:Tawny 2.png

The one on the right, but it would need to be a little lighter, and not as orange-y. The one on the left is too cream-colored. Rainlegs 16:43, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Rainlegs. Would be much better. =) --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y} )Mintstarr 16:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)_{m y t h o u g h t s.} 23:31, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Mintstarr (TalkMintstarr 16:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

A little less orange, and a tad more brown, but other then that, tou have the right idea. :) Rainlegs 16:41, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Mintstarr (Talk)Mintstarr 19:29, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

The Ear-Pink I personally think looks to red. Try to brighten it and make it more pinkish.♥♥♥Valentine♥♥♥ 19:49, February 7, 2011 (UTC)
Much better. Enlarge the highlights and blur them. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 02:23, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm having trouble uploading the new image. I'll upload it, change it to full size, and the I get a screen telling me a photo with the same name (old one) already exists. When I click, "overwrite the existing photo with yours," the old one shows up again instead of the new one. Help please. Mintstarr (Talk)Mintstarr 18:29, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry. It almost always takes forever for the photo to update itself. Right now it's a pretty brown color, but just lighten it a tad. You're almost there. :) Rainlegs 01:21, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I lightened it a tad.MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 03:24, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:11, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 17:18, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thats better...the highlighting on the back and paws could probably be just a little bit lighter ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:32, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes,I agree with Mistystar. The paws and back could use a little more highlighting ❋Rainey 23:54, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink so it's color doesn't blend with the pelt so much, and blur the shading. Rainlegs 01:15, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- should be fixedMINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 16:10, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

You need to name the image 'Tawnypelt.warrior.alt' Rainlegs 16:14, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the chest highlight and add some highlights to the front legs. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:54, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better? I'm seeing the original picture so it might be loading?MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 00:42, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 18:17, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- could someone tell me how to tell if the shading, highlights, and earpink need to be blurred (any image, not being specific)MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 00:06, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mostly it's if your shading or highlights or earpink looks really obvious, if you know what I mean? The shading/earpink/highlights need to look soft, like they were created by the sun, not by your computer =) Like if there are straight lines or if it just all around looks like you USED a pixellated brush to make the highlights/shading/earpink? I don't really know how to explain it. Hope I helped... --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 04:19, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur or lighten where the highlights meet the shading by the chest a tad. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 00:11, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it'll be up in a second I'm experimentingMINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 00:29, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good! Blur the hi-lites. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 00:50, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

And the shading. And fix it so the earpink is not touching the lineart. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 03:17, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Should be better MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 00:54, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, I realized this photo has gone a day without comments, so should it of been approved? MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 01:05, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

No, a lead must say CBA? for it to be in the twenty-four hour stage. Make the earpink more noticeable and make the shading more consistent. 99.58.17.98 21:01, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

More consistent?MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 22:00, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think s/he means that it's darker in some places, and lighter in others, so even it out. Blur the shading, add neck shading, and blur the highligts, too. Also, this is a very fluorescent shade of ginger, for a pale ginger cat. Lighten her. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 05:21, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, is this an alt for her being described as tawny coloured? Tawny is light brown, not ginger! Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 05:23, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shoulder highlight. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 04:30, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Would someone mind fixing the shading so it could be more consistent as that contributor said? I'm not sure I could. MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 21:20, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Fixed everything but the consistency, which I'll need help with. MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 01:55, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and define the ear pink, blur the highlights--Nightshine 05:14, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 23:50, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more, desturate it, blur the highlights--Nightshine 02:24, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

You might want to blur the shading a bit too. Riverpelt^{StarClan's Chosen One XD} 15:30, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- should be better. MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 00:32, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe give her amber eyes since she was described with those too. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 04:18, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Otherwise, looks pretty :) ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 23:29, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- someone is doing Oakheart as a tawny alternate farther down this page and the pelt colors of my charart and their's don't look the same. MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 14:51, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights, define the ear pink Nightshine 23:27, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by define? (This is Mintstarr, but I'm in a hurry so I can't log in.) 75.91.245.189 13:53, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

She means to make the ear pink stand out more, so that it doesn't clash with the pelt color. All you have to do is just make the ear pink either lighter or darker, you might want to make it lighter. Riverpelt^{StarClan's Chosen One XD} 20:13, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- When will this just get approved :(? MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 21:21, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mintstarr, some chararts are up for months. You just need to be patient :P. Lighten the earpink and blur the shading. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 00:06, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make this less orange? It's supposed to be tawny.

Reuploaded- the shading doesn't look right to me but I'm not sure why. MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 22:27, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I fixed it up a little. MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 22:34, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blurr the highlights on the hauch and shoulder Feathermoon 23:32, March 7, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Add highlights to her left front leg, blur the shading around the haunch, and make the ear pink more triangular, it looks ovalish. Riverpelt^{StarClan's Chosen One XD} 22:18, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- should be better. MINpan style="color:orange;">I was a child, always with something to prove. A chip on my shoulder. 23:23, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not being rude, but really wondering, and my patience is starting to go away, how is this supposed to be approved if Nightshine is the only lead on? MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 22:57, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can approve other images easily, but for my own images another lead has to say it's ready. As for this image, lighten the ear pink so it's easier to see and smudge/blur the highlights--Nightshine 23:07, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Some images have red areas showing what needs to be fixed. If the shading or highlights need to be blurred, could someone show me one of those? MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 02:28, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

File:Tawnypelthelp.png The blue areas are where shading still needs to be blurred a little, and the red is where I had concerns with the highlights. The tail, face, and hind paw highlights are brighter then the others, and I was wondering: Why are there highlights on the back paws, and not the front? Hope this [VERY] sloppy guide helps. :) Rainlegs 03:13, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Center and make the ear pink more red. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:17, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Sorry it took so long. Anyways, fixed everything that should be fixed. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 19:37, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

If the shading/highlights need to be blurred more, a user who uses GIMP needs to do it because I use Pixlr and that's about as much as I can blur it. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 17:42, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?  Darkhallows...^Mew? 21:21, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Try and make the earpink more noticeable. Maybe try darkening it? And maybe try making the shading more consistent because the shading by the midsection is a lot darker than the rest of the shading.

Reuploaded- Someone wanna help me with the consistency? MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 22:44, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry that was me. XD Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 23:03, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help with the shading, and I'll also fix the ear pink since it's too dark--Nightshine 23:04, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I did what I could Nightshine 23:14, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, repeating CBA.  Darkhallows...^Mew? 04:50, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Nightshine! MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 16:44, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

I still can't really see the earpink, try and use a darker red-pink color. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:46, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 01:55, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink on cats this color are next to impossible. I'd just leave it, because it will always be too pale, or too bright.  Darkhallows...^Mew? 07:55, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Brook (alt.W) ~ Approved

Brook, as described on page 216 of Sunset. Comments? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 23:39, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, make the ear pink less purply, and make sure that the shading and highlights are on the stripes. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 00:09, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and the earpink is kind of crooked. And the stripes look like they're overlapping onto the lineart. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 00:19, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Definatly blur the stripes, darken the shading a tad, shrink the earpink so it's not hanging out of the ear, and make it a more natural, darker color. Also, fix the lineart, because the stripes are covering the lineart, and there's some weird white stripes on her tail-tip. Rainlegs 00:32, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 17:33, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can a cat be gray and have brown stripes? Also, center the ear pink. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 23:47, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, it does seem weird. I checked again, and it said gray-brown. so should it be gray and brown, or solid colored? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 23:52, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes still need blurring... Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 04:57, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

But if it says gray-brown, would it mean gray-brown as a solid color, or mixed colors/tabby? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 17:09, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. (blurred stripes) ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 18:19, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! But I do think that the color is a solid gray-brown instead of tabby. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 01:41, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Shrink the earpink a tad, darken it a little, (So it isn't such an un-natural color) and I agree with Nightflower. Rainlegs 02:43, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I didn't change the color though; I think it looks fine as a tabby, but if more people think it should be solid colored, I'll change it. ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 19:21, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not officially a member yet, but I couldn't help commenting. Is it just me, or is the eye plain white? I thought that was a bit odd... Paleclaw 02:01, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I checked Brook's page and her alternate description was 'gray-brown', not gray and brown tabby striped. Also, the ear pink is a bit . . . ummm . . .lumpy looking and it's very purple-ish. I can see that her eye isn't plain white, but it is a very light shade of gray so darken it. The lineart is also smeared where some of the stripes are. Considering all that you have to change, removing the stripes, changing her eye colour . . . I would suggest just redoing it. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 05:12, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll re do it. I did gray and brown instead of gray-brown, because I didn't think there would actually be a gray brown color, since they are so diffferent, but I'll try. ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 16:44, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 17:03, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are looking a little blotchy. Smooth them, and lighten the face highlight to match the shoulder and haunch. Mistfire ^{Epic Fail} 03:29, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make this a little more brown-ish. The ear pink should be a more red colour, the line art is blurred in a few areas and it looks thin on the chest.--Nightshine 05:27, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is too triangular. Blur it please >:D --Leafstrike-- 15:41, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

That doesn't look like the right earpink color. Blur highlights. MINTSTARR You have a sailor's mouth! 21:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink to the middle of the ear.❋Rainey 02:38, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Re-Uploaded. Comments? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 23:08, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be more red. Echostar229 04:57, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink a little bit upper. ❋Rainey 11:24, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is centered already, but I'll change the color more redder. ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 22:57, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 23:28, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink some. There's something wrong with the lineart on the bottom of the chest and on the front left leg (her left) --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 05:06, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Oh, I never noticed. I'll fix it later :D ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 22:44, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

It just looks dark grey now, make it more brown. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 02:50, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. I'll change that now. ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 22:46, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? Sorry for being impatient, but I think thats good enough and doesn't need more fixing, but thats just my opinion... ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 22:59, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

The line art is thin in many places, I can fix it if you'd like. Move the ear pink up and desaturate it. Darken the shading and make this a little more brownish--Nightshine 00:07, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Can you do it for me, please? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 00:15, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded okay. You just need to darken the shading, make the ear pink more reddish, and move the ear pink up--Nightshine 00:21, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you so much! I'll do that right away! ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 00:25, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Is it good enough now? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 00:32, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, darken the shading around the midriff, the neck, and base of the tail--Nightshine 00:40, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Better? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 00:48, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay now there is just a really dark brown side and a gray side. Give the charart a more life-like look by making the shading thinner around the muscles, or something like that. File:Brookshading.png The shading should go around the areas that stick out more--Nightshine 00:59, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so I darken the shading around the muscles? I'll try that. ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 01:02, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. What do you think? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 01:07, March 5, 2011 (

UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, lighten the highlights, make it more bdfrownish--Nightshine 01:13, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Please, is it good enough? I might not be able to come on next week, so I hope it gets approved soon. XD ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 01:15, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights a bit and blur them, make the ear pink more reddish and blur that too--Nightshine 23:24, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 00:41, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

The pelt looks blotchy, blur the pelt. Feathermoon 00:53, March 6, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Yes, the pelt does look a little blotchy. As Feathermoon said,blur it more.❋Rainey 02:12, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

No need to repeat it twice XD RE-Uploaded. ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 02:55, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it some more. Make the shading look more like the image that Nightshine posted. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 07:21, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried, but if someone could help me it would be nice :D 75.6.240.3 21:36, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help!! (Wildheart who is on a school computer XD)

Reuploaded I changed the shading according to Nighshine's picture. If you don't like it, feel free to revert the edit XD Also, you had some blurred lineart in the ear that I fixed. Unfortunately, I had to change the earpink to do so. Hope it looks good. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 01:58, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is this image a very dark-gray, not grey-brown? Can you make it lighter? Rainlegs 02:03, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks gray-brown to me... but this is up to Mistystar. --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 02:34, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I agree, this looks very gray now. Make it a lot more brown --Nightshine 02:53, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Would you suggest something like this colour, Nightshine? -->File:Colourexample.png--Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 06:23, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that one looks good--Nightshine 05:32, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Give her amber eyes, since she was described with those too, move the highlight up a tad higher on her forehead, and make the ear pink a tad smaller. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 03:39, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is really nice! --Moonleaf 23:43, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thx. Sorry I've been really inactive lately; but I'm back from my camping trip!!! I'll reupload it! ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 23:56, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm pretty sure its good enough, comments? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 00:07, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken or blur the highlights. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 16:47, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the haunch shading--Nightshine 17:58, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

She has been described with amber eyes, says so in the trivia, so make that the eye color. It's an idea. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 20:06, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes are amber. I'll re-upload it now. ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 21:52, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

RE-Uploaded. Good enough now? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 21:56, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's looks a bit like gray. Would this color work? ------>2.File:Grayish.Brownish.png or something like this: 1.File:Grayish.Brownish..png Feathermoon 23:30, March 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Its supposed to be gray-brown. Since she is brown, it makes sense to look a bit gray. XD Anyway, is everything else good? ✳Mistystar ✳ ^{Trust the fire within...} 21:49, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the shading/highlights seem a bit blotchy. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:27, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. But seriously, after that, I think there's nothing else wrong with it. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well then. Re-Uploaded. Is it ready now? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:33, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more and make the hioghlights bigger. Move the shoulder highlight up too. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:01, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:01, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Now? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:07, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to re-do this. The haunch highlight is very blotchy. --Moonleaf 01:23, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. huh, could someone help me fix it? I fail at hauch hilights. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:35, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I can... but I might have to re-do all of the shading in order for it not to get all messed up. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:40, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. that's fine. 209.188.162.10 19:29, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I did the shading like this because the other way like you had before wasn't turning out too good... but you can always change the shading if you want. :P Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:48, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Its great! Thanks, Rainy! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:00, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay now it looks like half of it is brown and the other is gray. Add more dimension to this, make the ear pink smalled and desturate it --Nightshine 00:48, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:16, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Highlight the tail. ❋Rainey 00:33, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

The tail doesn't need hilights. ~ Mistystar who's not logged in

It still looks as if one side is brown and the other is gray. Refer to the shading redline I put up earlier, Make the ear pink smaller and blur it. Nightshine 19:02, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't look like its brown/gray in my opinion, and besides, its supposed to be gray brown, so why shouldn't it be like that? 207.62.246.71 21:30, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Rain that Rattles on Stones (Alt. E)~ Approved

Comments? -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:53, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! But make the pink ear all the same color and I belive there is a line of somesort in the middle of the tail. Feathermoon 01:55, March 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Blur the shading on the forehead and near the base of the tail, and maybe add some white around his muzzle to show his age? Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 01:58, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is soooooo good! Blur the ear pink a little more and re-blur the shading near his haunches, tail, and face.Cardinalfire1234 02:05, March 12, 2011 (UTC)Cardinalfire1234]

Re-uploaded- I tried giving him a lighter muzzle, but it only made it look like the face highlight was to bright. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 02:24, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur back and neck shading. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 16:35, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Rain (PoT).elder.alt.png --Moonleaf 16:58, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Everythings as blurred as it's going to get. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 20:22, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular--Nightshine 23:12, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:12, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?  Darkhallows...^Mew? 21:41, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to interrupt CBA... but you still didn't rename it Rain (PoT).elder.alt.png. --Moonleaf 22:45, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

If you look at the image page, you can see that it been requested to be renamed already. So can my CBA continue because there wasn't acctually an issue? -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you just upload another image with the file name Rain (PoT).elder.alt.png? Nightshine 00:45, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE-uploaded- -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 03:19, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. Is that the right earpink color? just wondering. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 22:46, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me; repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 23:00, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is unevenly blurred. At the top, it's more blurred. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:14, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur highlights or darken them. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 17:38, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink and highlights look fine to me. Repeating 24 hours Nightshine 18:58, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

The 24 hours was finished when they commented, can't this just be archived? -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 21:02, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Since they did comment, the 24 hours had to be restarted. I'll approve this once it's been 24 hours Nightshine 04:34, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

No comments; approved Nightshine 22:01, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Alt. R) - Approved

This was fun ^_^ Comments? ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 05:52, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Darken the shading, define the scars, and maybe add some more back to her left ear. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 05:56, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I forgot the nose color. *head desk* ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 06:36, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it's showing the changes. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 06:48, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I got it. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 06:55, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Define the scars some more. Could you add the reference on her page? --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 07:13, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is excellent, Nighty! Make the scars more prominent. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 17:36, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Defined the scars. Wildheart: The reference is on her page already. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 20:32, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add another** reference to her page. It says she is mentioned several times as gray, and she has a warrior charart as well as a rogue... so... (Wildheart who is too lazy to log in)

Done. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 23:22, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

The nose should be grey not pink. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 06:02, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's still only one reference... --Wildheart _{L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s.} 06:09, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Someone removed it saying, "We only need one citiation." So I don't know if I should re-add it. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 22:06, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I think you should re add it --Nightshine 23:04, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done, and I'm not sure if the nose should be gray or pink. For example, Dovepaw, Hollykit and Willowpelt have pink noses. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 00:35, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the fronts of the legs. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 16:23, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

The nose should be gray since most gray cats have gray noses--Nightshine 18:39, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:49, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - But it's not showing the changes yet, so comment when you see a gray nose :P ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:17, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

The nose looks gray to me. Maybe it takes a moment or two for the changes to show up. Cloudskye ^{The Dark Forest Is Rising} 17:14, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why is some of the shading darker than the rest? 98.22.152.78 23:47, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Some changes are deeper or need more shading. Make the earpink less smudgy, otherwise, it looks pretty good. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:17, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shoulder highlight. Great job Nighty! Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 17:43, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:22, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and darken the scars. Nightshine 23:08, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:41, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Great job, I see nothing wrong. Icy123 ♥ 23:58, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 22:05, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:58, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Alt. A) - Approved

lol, all my approved chararts are some shade of black or gray :P ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 07:16, March 27, 2011 (UTC) Great job, Nightflower! Darken the shading a bit and define the ear pink. Other than that, it's great. Icy123 ♥ 14:30, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! The highlights look great, but yes, you should darken the shading. Holly♥ ^{Medicine Cat} 19:40, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Fantastic! Make the ear pink more noticable. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 19:56, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I actually really like this one :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 20:41, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad more. Great job nighty! ;) Splook ^{sweet  creature} 21:56, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 21:57, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading or brighten the highlights. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 23:55, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Think I need to blur the shading some. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 23:59, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks pretty good to me =) Lighten the earpink some. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 00:00, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the ear pink a little redder. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:24, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think that the shading looks like a gradient. It doesn't look like there is shading on the tail at all. Define the light and dark areas a little. Ivystripe 00:03, March 29, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Reuploaded - I think the shading is fine. It's supposed to be blended well, after all.

Darken the shading and brighten the highlights. Make the ear pink more triangular. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 03:43, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I think I ruined it >.< ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:59, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think that looks a little better. I like it!Ivystripe 19:56, March 29, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe
Nice job. Darken the tail shading a bit more and I believe this will be ready. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 20:32, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 22:46, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck and tail shading Nightshine 00:59, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 01:38, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Make the ear pink a bit smaller. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:27, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Save this as a .png, not a .gif =) --Leafstrike-- 17:19, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Moonleaf, it can be saved as a .gif. That's what files are when you make them on GIMP. :P Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 19:55, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 20:05, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Great job. CBA? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 21:06, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 07:02, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Violet (K) - Approved

Ok, Frostheart told me that she and her siblings should get a charart so I'm posting this again. :P Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:02, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good! Darken the shading and blur the stripes a tad :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 21:03, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little less purple. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:05, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:17, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, is it really necessary for her to get a kit image? She was hardly mentioned as being a kit. It only was only mentioned by Barley when he said one sentance about he and his littermates. I think we should discuss this a bit more before deciding Nightshine 23:10, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Even if it's one sentence, she still gets one. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:28, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, Frostheart. But would that mean my Barley (K) can be moved back to this page and continue being up for approval? Feathermoon 02:11, March 24, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

If you say so...darken the stripes a bit and saturate the ginger Nightshine 21:56, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 22:18, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Either darken or lighten the earpink so that it doesn't blend into the pelt. Doesn't matter which. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 02:10, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ~Rainwhisper~ 16:21, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

OMGEESH This looks awesome Rainy! Blur the stripes a bit. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 22:08, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

The orange is way too bright, and her ear pink is very dark. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the stripes a tiny bit but if I did they would become less noticeable. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 23:12, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's really nice. Darken the shading just a tad. :) ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:46, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 16:09, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 23:55, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

When I blurred it, it made the stripes fade away so I think it looks fine as it is. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:56, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 19:57, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink color a little more noticeable. It gets lost in the color of her fur. I hope I helped a little. Ivystripe 00:16, March 29, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 00:44, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the bottom of her right haunch --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 00:47, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:27, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ginger - she's getting too . . . reddish. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:33, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think it has shown the changes yet. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 19:42, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'm having some uploading issues so it might take a litle long for it to show the changes. >.> Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 22:11, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I think it finally has shown the changes, so comments? Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 22:46, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink a little more triangular? It looks a bit round... or is it just me? - Gingertail ^{The air is getting warmer!} 19:32, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Most kit earpinks look mostly like mine. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 19:57, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job. CBA? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 21:05, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you call CBA when you're not a leader/deputy/senior warrior?

To whoever wrote that^ no. Icestorm is a senior warrior. Sign talk pages with four tildes. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 00:04, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job, I see nothing else that needs to be changed. Maple♥pool^{I'm a star gazer~} 01:43, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

No comments; approved--Nightshine 07:02, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt. K) - Approved

She was described as dark grey in Dawn. Comments? --Gοldenpelt 20:34, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Just blur the neck shading a wee bit. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 21:24, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Gοldenpelt 21:50, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller. Maplepool 02:37, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the right (our right) of her. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 16:26, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Gοldenpelt 16:35, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it, it looks black instead of dark gray. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 22:46, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shade is fine. Darken the nose colour, it is too similar to the pelt. Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm not sure how noticeable it is, but the value used to be 25; now it's 15. --Gοldenpelt 20:56, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Still needs to be lightened some. Looking better, though =) --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 23:02, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine said she thought the fur shade was fine. --Gοldenpelt 02:00, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine isn't the whole world, Goldenpelt. xD I agree that is still needs to be lightened a little bit. Blurthe shading, and add shading to her back paw. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:47, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

I agree it has to be lightened. Darken the ear pinkand the shading a bit. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 20:34, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, but the changes aren't showing up. --Gοldenpelt 21:01, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 06:57, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck and back shading. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 20:47, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Gοldenpelt 21:08, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours Nightshine 21:31, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 21:53, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Snake (character) (Lo) - Approved

File:Snake.loner.png I'm not sure if he would get a collar or not, What do you think? ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 03:33, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Just lighten the Highlights and darken the shading. Feathermoon 03:44, March 13, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Yes I believe he should get a collar. Make the ear pink more reddish--Nightshine 06:18, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, they need collars. Use Bone and Scourge's images to help, I found them sueful when dooing Ice's collar. - Gingertail ^{The Luck Of The Irish...} 14:43, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Collar fail. XP

Maybe put some shading under the collar. Riverpelt^{StarClan's Chosen One XD} 20:46, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I just realized ICE was the one who had a blue collar. Snake has a red one. I added some shading under the collar like Riverpelt said.

Thicken the shading or add highlights. The midsection just looks... emptyish.   Darkhallows...^Mew? 21:38, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the end of the tail. Not a highlight, but just not in shadow. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:24, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I won't be able to work on this for a fewdays. My computer's been acting wacky and my brother can't fix it for a few more days. I'll work on this as soon as it's fixed though. Sorry. D: ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 06:21, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading and highlights. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 17:07, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

My computer's starting to work better, though it still acts up sometimes. I'll get back to working on this as much as I can now. :) ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 09:11, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Not completely sure I like this version.... :/ And just cause people keep sayng stuff about highlights, let me just say, there is none on this image, so don't bother commenting about those. XD ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 09:20, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the belly highlight and make him a color that is closer to Ice's. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 20:18, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is ready. Comments before approval? Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

The back shading and belly shading are so . . . thick . . . they almost meet. And the shading altogether is a bit blotchy. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:56, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blotchy? I don't know exactly how to fix that..... It's blurred pretty much to the max, and I don't really see where it's blotchy. How do I fix it? And I'll thin out the shading on the back and stomache. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 07:33, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - The changes aren't showing quite yet, it might take a minute. I did my best, but I still don't quite get what you mean by 'blotchy'. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 22:06, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind what I just said, it's showing up now. XD ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 22:10, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely job, I see nothing wrong. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 05:37, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 07:07, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 21:56, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (alt.A) ~ Approved

Brackenfur was described as a brown tabby apprentice in Forest of Secrets. Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:52, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. --Leafstrike-- 21:53, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, add more stripes to his face, forearms, and tail. Make the ear pink smaller and more reddish Nightshine 21:57, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more noticeable and darken the shading on the legs a tad. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 22:09, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 22:13, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:27, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Would Brackenfur get an alternate? I mean, Golden-brown and brown are quite similar. Feathermoon 22:41, March 21, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I think so...because they're actually really different golden-brown is more golden, and brown is more...brown. Brackenfur is often called ginger, too, but thats too close, I guess.... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:50, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Well Brackenfur is a ginger-golden tabby and this is just brown. So I think it's fine. Darken the tail stripes, make the stripes thinner and add more of them. Add stripes to his face. Lighten the ear pink Nightshine 23:07, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:11, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:23, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up a little and blur it. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:29, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:01, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 20:59, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes so they will blend in more with the pelt. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:03, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

But he was called a tabby, so shouldn't the stripes stand out, instead of blending in? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:41, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't mean to make them really hard to see . . . just . . . blend in more. XD But I think the stripes are too big and thick. Maybe make them smaller and add a few more? Darken the shading, brighten the highlights. Move the shoulder highlight up so it isn't half on his arm/belly, and the face highlight should be in the middle around the cheeks/whiskers with shading on top of the head. Make the ear pink smaller and add stripes to the legs. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:22, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

RE-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:23, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to the legs, and define them a bit --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 01:34, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 17:21, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 21:53, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth those two little stripes by the eye. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 00:46, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and lighten this a lot; this is a light brown tabby alternate, not just a brown tabby alternate. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 00:54, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Wildheart; it needs to be lightened a lot. The stripes are still really thick and there still aren't any on the legs. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 01:19, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you added the stripes after you did the shading and highlights. Make sure the stripes have shading and highlights along with the rest of the pelt. Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

RE-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:18, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image a bunch more. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 22:48, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think its light enough. :P Besides, as long as its not dark brown, its light enough, right?... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:50, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I lightened it XD ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:52, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be nitpicky... but lighten it a little bit more? kthxbye XD --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 00:07, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are bothering me. They look like huge triangles and they don't fit together, but then the leg ones are really small, and they don't cover the entire legs, they're only on one leg. Also, the two lines under his eye are huge. His back legs don't have stripes. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 03:40, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then...I'll try, but I might need help... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:55, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:18, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 23:01, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

RE-Uploaded. Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:20, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

The back leg still needs stripes. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:00, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

The back front leg? I added them, but they're not easy to see... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:01, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:04, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Add a stripe to the top of his head, add shading and highlights to the stripes. Could you make the stripes a little thinner so you can add more to the haunch? It would look more realistic that way. Lighten the ear pink a bit Nightshine 01:13, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if it's just me, but the stripes on the legs look blotchy. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:29, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred them... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:28, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:46, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

The front leg stripes seem a lot... bolder then the other stripes. Maybe blur them some more or lighten them? Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:21, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone help me with that? My computer's Adobe Flash player isn't working today :( ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:52, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help, Misty :D --Leafstrike-- 17:27, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. --Leafstrike-- 17:46, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:48, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I don't think there's any more things that need to be fixed...comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:59, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are too triangular. Make them flow more with the pelt and smudge them as well. Try looking at some other tabby stripes to get an idea of what could make them look more realistic. The highlights also look a little splotchy. Center the ear pink and lighten it. Nightshine 07:05, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more on the shoulder and haunch. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 14:37, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

The computer I'm using right now still isn't working...anyone want to help? XD still not logged in :P 75.6.251.235 23:12, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

I can help again, if it's okay if I can re-do the stripes. --Leafstrike-- 15:56, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great to me! I can't tell if much more needs to be done. Ivystripe 18:35, April 4, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Reuploaded I re-did the stripes for you =) --Leafstrike-- 21:42, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot to add stripes on the other front leg, so Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:44, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Moonleaf, it looks great, but I hope you don't mind if I change it... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:49, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

I don't mind --Leafstrike-- 22:23, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.. Thanks, you've been a great help, but my computer is working again =) ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:25, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink :) --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 23:25, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:29, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! :D ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:29, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes, make the ear pink more reddish and lighten it. Nightshine 00:36, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:40, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 01:17, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 40th time! XD ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:20, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten and center the earpink. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 02:50, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 42nd time! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:52, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 23:45, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Iveh Yo! 00:43, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 01:06, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (A) ~ Approved

I know that it doesn't really match Echostar's but I'm still playing around with different patterns, until I see Night Shine's. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 04:01, March 16, 2011 (UTC) Scratch that, I'm gonna redo it, I saw her description as "Silver and gray she-cat". Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 04:03, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Redone. Comments for improvement? Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 04:22, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink less purple. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 04:24, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing, it's too light right now--Nightshine 04:30, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 04:47, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading on far forearm, add shading under chin and to space in front of forearm on chest. Add/darken the ear pink Nightshine 04:53, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 20:00, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 20:13, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 21:18, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit Nightshine 00:44, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 02:13, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, it looks kind of flat--Nightshine 22:59, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the fronts of the legs Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 21:15, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 21:49, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, the shading is just a bit lumpy/rough/uneven. Blur it all a bit. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 01:34, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 02:07, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten/blur neck shading Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 16:52, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 22:26, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 22:51, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

And the haunch shading. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 20:45, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is haunch shading... Anyway, blur the haunch highlight. :3 Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:31, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 02:34, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken shading on the forearms, darken the chest shading, add a bit of shading under the chin Nightshine 22:03, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it looks a little lumpy, and add shading to the top of the head. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:14, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I just made it worse though... Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 18:51, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, or darken the highlights. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 21:36, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 16:26, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights a bit and blur them. Looks good. =) --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 23:26, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 01:01, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading a bit. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 03:37, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

There appear to be blurred pixels on the tail. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 23:03, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 00:46, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a very small amount and make the ear pink a bit bigger Nightshine 01:16, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 01:20, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and maybe make it a little more red. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:22, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 01:26, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 07:06, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten/blur the shading.Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 14:30, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine. Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 17:57, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be nitpicky... but could you darken the front ear? The way the shading is, I think it needs to be in shadow... then your charart will be perfect XD --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 03:41, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

You mean, add shading inside the ear? Or darken the ear-pink? Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 04:39, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Shading inside the ear. The earpink is a perfect shade, but the rest of the ear is lighter than the shaded parts of the body. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 04:42, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 04:52, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little smaller. Nightshine 05:47, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 14:18, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink Nightshine 21:55, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 21:59, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks way too big, and you brightened it too much. The shading is a bit intense, and a wee bit blotchy, so blur it out and maybe even lighten it a teeny bit? Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:41, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 22:56, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 01:00, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still looks blotchy-ish and needs blurring. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 01:34, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 02:38, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?  Darkhallows...^Mew? 02:58, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patch of shading at the base of the tail. Rainlegs 03:01, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 12:30, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 23:46, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

No comments; approved--Nightshine 01:10, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Troutstream (W) - Approved

Here she is. ^_^ I took all of the colors from her apprentice charart, and tried a different style of shading. Comments? Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 20:42, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and save it as a .png please --Leafstrike-- 21:00, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back. You don't have to save it as a .png, it can be .gif. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:02, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Fail. Not darken the shading on the back. XD But since it's coming from the front, maybe make it thicker. Lovely job. :3 ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:06, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Dude...this is just amazing. I see nothing wrong with it whatsoever instead of the things already pointed out. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 21:24, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the flank just a touch more, brighten the ear-pink, and define the stripes on the tail. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 21:33, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 22:34, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit, they look a little darker on her apprentice image. Darken the tail stripes as well. Nightshine 23:21, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading and center the ear pink a bit. This looks great. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 23:25, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Darken the tail shading a bit. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 01:29, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 02:32, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Purty 8D The tips of the stripes look a bit blurrier than the rest. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 19:36, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 20:00, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes may need smudged a little. This is beautiful though, better than my Ivypool picture! Your doing a good job! Iveh Yo! 23:37, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 00:16, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Could the neck shading be lightened just a tad? It seems a bit too dark. Cloudskye 16:20, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's fine, that's how it is supposed to be. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 20:02, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks fine too, but darken her stripes to match the apprentice image and change her leg stripes. They look too random, on her apprentice image it's just a straight line of stripes. Add shading along the back and top of the head. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:42, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't add the shading because that's where the light source is coming from. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 23:09, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

You should save it as a png file. Darken the face and tail stripes. Nightshine 01:00, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, it's fine. It works as a gif, too. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 03:29, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yea. People always forget that you can use gif files, too. :3 Make the earpink smaller. The tabby stripes are a bit messily blurred. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:32, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

But don't you think we should keep all the files as png? It would be more organized that way. Nightshine 04:09, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? I don't see how it effects anything/ The ear pink is too blurry. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 07:04, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 20:54, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, Raineh! Enlarge the earpink. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 16:18, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well, they told me to make it smaller before... so I'll keep it how it is for now. Unless others think it's too big. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 16:32, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 00:06, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not much of a difference... but it's blurred. xD Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 00:17, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

I still think this should be a png file so everything stays consistent. Darken the shading on the haunch and tail. Nightshine 00:24, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine, some people can't upload chararts if they're .png, such as me. And it's not like it makes a difference anyway. As for the image, blur the shading :) ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 06:27, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. My Brackenfur alt. was a .gif, and there never seemed to be a problem with that. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 13:52, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Great job, Rainy. I see nothing wrong with it. Comments before approval? --Appledash ^{the light of honor} 14:34, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

...shouldn't this be approved? XD --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 02:56, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I think so... We'll just have to wait for a lead to archive it. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 19:40, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the wait. No comments, approving. --Nightshine 22:41, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Patch (K) - Approved

Comments? I took all the colours from his kittypet image. Nightshine 00:45, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a little. This looks great! Rainlegs 00:57, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened ear pink. Nightshine 01:00, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little bigger. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:13, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white patch on his chest just a tad more and darken the shading under his chin a tad. Lovely work! Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 01:22, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white chest, made ear pink bigger, darkened chin shading. Nightshine 02:13, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 00:02, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink a tad, it looks pale. Maple♥pool^{I'm a star gazer~} 00:57, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

That's because it's on white. It looks fine to me. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 01:00, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes seem a little dark to me, but it just might be my school's computers. Lol. Nice job on this :P Ivystripe 16:33, April 1, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

I took the eye colours from his kittypet image, so it should be fine. Thanks! --Nightshine 02:56, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? (My first one :D!) -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 20:40, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks . . . uneven but I guess it doesn't really matter and the whole thing is quite dark. The shading looks almost pure black. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 20:46, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 03:55, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

There's like a gray pixel where his leg is touching his chest fur. It might be because of the whole white touching the lineart thing, but just to be sure I would say check it.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ^{♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮} 15:41, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed up pixels --Nightshine 21:41, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't look fine to me. It's way too dark. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:34, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Does it look dark to anyone else? It looks fine on my screen. Nightshine 22:39, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

He looks perfectly fine on my screen as well Nightshine-- ♩ Shimmerpool ^{♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮} 01:36, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the paws a tad more? Rainlegs 01:38, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred shading on paws. Nightshine 23:52, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Blur the white on the tail. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:04, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white on tail. Nightshine 00:06, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me!Iveh Yo! 00:40, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 04:29, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink on the left ear up a pixel and lighten the shading on the paws. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 03:35, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened paw shading. The ear pink looks fine to me. (aw man...it was almost 24 hours) Nightshine 04:12, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading? I can scarcely see it. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:27, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

If I darken the shading any more on the black, it will be too dark Nightshine 05:10, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a touch. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 15:33, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded altered ear pink. Nightshine 18:21, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink just a tad bit smaller. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:13, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink smaller. Nightshine 00:29, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where black meets white. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 17:22, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition. Nightshine 17:57, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. I see nothing wrong. --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 01:30, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?  Darkhallows...^{Enter the cave?} 10:25, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 22:46, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeltail (Alt. A) - Approved

I really liked this one; 1st charart for PCA!

Moved this to the correct section. It doesn't quite look like you used the full size image as there are white pixels surrounding it. Fix that please. Otherwise, it's pretty good. 18:19, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Save the image as a png, not a jpg. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 19:02, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, got it. Holly♥ ^{Medicine Cat} 22:13, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the backround transparent, and get rid of all the random little pixels on the image. Rainlegs 22:16, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

I did make the backround transparent. Holly♥ ^{Medicine Cat} 19:20, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Redo it, but don't save it as a .jpg image save it as a .png and her tail-tip is too bright, it looks white, and blur ther earpink, and make it smaller, and make the background transparent. Maplepool 22:26, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Holly♥ ^{Medicine Cat} 20:37, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the highlights, as they look quite blotchy. Darken the ear pink and rename this Hazeltail.apprentice.alt.png. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 19:31, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Very stunning^^, and tis is yourfirst charart for PCA? darken her tail tip and her muzzle, blur the earpink a bit more add shading to her ear that is farthest from us. Very nice, its better then mine, im jealous.... :/ Maplepool 20:19, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the pixels on the stomach, and make the ear pink smaller. And was she described as mottled, or just gray? because this looks mottled. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 20:50, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading, not smudge them. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 21:24, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the bits of gray outside of the lineart. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 00:03, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Holly♥ ^{Medicine Cat} 01:48, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

There is a white area on the belly that should be filled in, darken the shading, make the ear pink more noticeable. Rename this Hazeltail.apprentice.alt.png. Nightshine 01:57, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Holly♥ ^{Medicine Cat} 02:04, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken this a lot. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:44, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

And then make the hilights more noticable. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:36, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the lineart on the back of the haunch a lot thicker than the rest of the body? --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 03:50, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the chest, haunch, and face.Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 04:41, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Holly♥ ^{Medicine Cat} 18:11, April 3, 2011 (UTC) ...Does the shading look a bit stiff, or blothy?

It doesn't look blotchy. But it needs a face highlight, and add shading to the muzzle. Darken the whole thing, it looks pale gray, and darken the shading a lot. The ear pink is a bit hard to see and the tail shading looks like a gradient. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:36, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:33, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Should I brighten the face highlight? :Holly♥ 23:40, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole image a bunch :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:23, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more. I can hardly see it. BloodangelStarshine 07:46, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading. This is beautiful, Holly. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 15:26, April 9, 2011

REUPLOADED - Should I darken it more? :Holly♥ 23:38, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks ok, but blur the shading and earpink. :3 Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:11, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the legs. --Leafstrike-- 00:46, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink just a tad. --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 02:45, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

The face highlight seems lighter than the body highlights; they should be the same. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:39, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

This actually looks ready to me. Comments before approval? Nightshine 22:47, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wait.. If the light's coming from the back, why is there a highlight on her muzzle? Rainlegs 02:37, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think we should just approve it since It's been 9 days since Hollyheart edited this. So, repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 05:50, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

I love it! It's a great charart:)Sandstormrocks32 23:09, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Darkhallows ^{Enter the cave?} 16:00, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Rain (To-Be) - Approved

Here she is... I don't know her eye colour yet, so I just made it blue. When I do, I'll change it. Comments? --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 01:49, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

As epic as the spots look, I think speckled would probably be something like the speckles on Goosefeather or Ashfur. I don't think these spots would necessarily be described as speckles. That's just me though. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 01:53, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think the speckles would be fine, but maybe Frostheart or Night Shine think different. Darken the shading and brighten the highlights, and desaturate the ear-pink a tad. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 01:55, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Paleclaw; giving her leopard spots makes absolutely no sense. She was described as flecked. Darken and blur the shading, and the colour of the ear pink and eye are way too bright. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 01:58, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nobody knows what kind of speckled she is. I'll redo it if a lead asks for it. The eye colour is temporary, and the earpink is now redone. Please don't post to say what has already been said, Dovesong/Mosspool. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 02:08, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Umm . . . leopard spots aren't a kind of speckled, which Paleclaw didn't say. I was agreeing with them. That's allowed. And I said other things. Cats can't even have leopard spots, and call me Mosspool. You don't need to put Dovesong/. And her eye colour may never be revealed, so you choose whatever it want, but that doesn't mean you should make it insanely bright. And the ear pink is still too bright, and the shading is still unblurred and too light. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:15, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is insanely bright, she is speckled, not a leopard, and her eyes shouldn't be neon blue.^{我如何爱春天} 雲⻗晴Ice Cave雲⻗晴^{我如何爱春天} 02:22, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Moss: I meant the shading and the earpink comments. They didn't need to be said twice. I'm waiting until there is a reference for her eye colour, and if it turns out there isn't one, then I'll change the eye colour. This is temporary. I forgot to mention I was working on it.

Ice Cave: Please don't post to re-state what has already been said. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 02:42, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and if I didn't mention it before, we're waiting for lead comments. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 02:45, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I didn't see Scarletwind has said it. And like I said before, her eye colour may never be mentioned, so the fact that it is 'temporary' is not excuse for it to be horrendously bright. :3 And I still think the shading should be darkened and blurred, as well as the ear pink is still hot pink. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:53, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'll look for an eye color. Rainlegs 02:56, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well if you DO get to keep the leopard spots, I think you should take them off the ear. It looks a bit odd with the ear pink over it for some reason. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 08:49, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really think we should keep the leopard spots. IT's not speckled, and it just seems unrealistic. :P ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:20, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Frostheart, I'm redoing it =) --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 22:45, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I LOVE the spots! Very nice! The highlights could be defined a little bit. Iveh Yo! 23:41, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Haha thanks Ivystripe, but I have to redo them =( --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 00:46, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more too. ;) Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 00:52, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid image. --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 01:33, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

The spots are bothering me . . . they just look like tiny little brushed on spots. I always though speckled would be like Ferncloud. Darken and blur the shading a lot. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:35, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten highlights and blur/darken shading. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 16:33, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay in progress. I agree, Mossy, it does kind of look terrible. I just didn't know how to fix it, but I'm working on a different design as we speak. A new one should be uploaded in the next couple days. Again, sorry, guys! It'll be up soon. Thanks for your patience. --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 23:53, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mkay. It doesn't look terrible. XD Just throwing this out there, a good way (or at least I like it :P) of doing spots is to draw on a whole bunch of various sizes (have them overlap a lot and don't always click the same number of times) and then smudged them very carefully. That's what I did for my Thistleclaw picture. But if you like waht you have and you're already doing it . . . yeah. XD Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 03:50, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

You're lying to me haha it's terrible. Much too symmetrical. And thanks for the advice. I'll try that =) --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 03:53, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the pattern again... but I'm still not satisfied. Maybe I'll try your method, Mossy... --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 04:30, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I got bored and changed the pattern again. Comments? --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 06:04, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm impatient XD anybody...? Comment on my pic...? haha maybe this means it's just too terrible for people to say anything lol wildheart spring rain ♫ 06:17, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks great! Lighten the ear pink, lol! No, don't but I think the ear pink looks a bit purple? Leopardclaw ^{Box as blue as blue...} 06:29, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:44, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Grar! **murders earpink** haha thanks Leopardclaw =) wildheart spring rain ♫ 00:00, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, saturate the ear pink a bit. Nightshine 22:40, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? wildheart spring rain ♫

06:39, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Its great! I don't see anything wrong with it, except maybe make the earpink a bit smaller. :D ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 18:59, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur that highlight spot on her back. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 21:18, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Try blurring the shading more on her back; it's sort of blotchy and resembles a V, and the highlight ring-shaped spot around her neck. Koisplash 07:38, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded What else? wildheart spring rain ♫

01:16, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Jus blur and darken all the shading, a lot. I can clearly see the transitions between dark and light, we don't want that. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 17:53, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? wildheart spring rain ♫

06:21, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! I see nothing wrong with it, ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:40, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, I think this is perfect the way it is! Lovely work! Iveh Yo! 00:24, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading a lot. The eye colour is too bright and the ear pink is too . . . hot pink. xD Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:10, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? wildheart spring rain ♫

02:37, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 00:48, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved --Nightshine 05:57, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. W) - Approved

Before any of you say something about blurring the shading/highlights, I just want to say I've blurred it as much as Pixlr has allowed me. Someone want to help? Rainlegs 01:07, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'll blur it in GIMP. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 01:31, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Rainlegs 01:56, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Amke the ear pink more triangular, blur it, and make it more red. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 02:26, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred the shading for you, but I don't think I did it enough though :P ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 06:02, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear-pink more noticeable. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:37, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the highlights have to be blurred more as well. Also there is some blurred lineart on his front left paw and back left leg. The eye color looks like a brown, maybe make it more amber. Riverpelt^{StarClan's Chosen One XD} 20:05, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the shading, re-did the earpink, and triple-checked for blurred lineart. I found nothing. Besides, I took the eye color from the regular Birchfall. I also blurred the shading as much as it'll blur. Will someone heelp me a teensy-bit more? Rainlegs 03:40, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the earpink? ❋Rainey 12:15, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink as well to make it more noticable. (Phew, glad I'm not the only one who uses Pixlr on everything!) Splook ^{sweet  creature} 21:16, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading ot the chest and maybe add highlights (If they are already there brighten them :3). Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't add too much shading to his chest, 'cause the light is kinda coming, like, directly in front of there. I also fixed the earpink, and blurred everything to the max. Can someone help me some more? Rainlegs 03:04, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'll blur it some more if you want :) -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 03:42, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please! Rainlegs 03:45, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- It helped some. Could use a bit more... -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 04:04, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-re-uploaded- Sorry did the wrong one the first time X /. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 04:15, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

lol....anyway, thanks Iceheart! Rainlegs 00:17, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink either brighter or darker, whichever makes it look more noticeable. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 01:02, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened it. :S Rainlegs 03:32, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and scoot it farther up the ear a little. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 14:03, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 02:53, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Mistfire ^{1000 Edits!} 17:27, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

darken the ear-pink. Maybe make it a bit of a dark red/maroonish color? Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 19:19, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 03:15, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink up a little bit in the ear and maybe widen it a bit because it looks too thin, but don't make it too big. :3 Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 20:44, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job =D Make the ear pink a lighter color because it's too red. --Icy123 ♥ 23:59, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't lighten it, because I'm not too sure what people want me to do. Some say darken, others say lighten. :P Rainlegs 00:15, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know this has been said before, but the earpink really should be lighter. It needs to match the coat more. Don't lighten it a lot, but it shouldn't be so dark-purple. --Wildheart _{Living with only my thoughts.} 06:59, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Wildheart on this. Also, can the shading be darkened? It looks like there's not a lot there. Skye ^Meow 22:09, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Just darken and blur the shading, and lighten the ear pink a bit, like Wildheart said. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:24, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading a lot, so if it needs more, [which it probably does] can someone help me? Rainlegs 02:09, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

I will. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:15, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading a lot, and I feel your pain, Rainlegs. It was really hard to do. It involved the smudge tool, and halfway through I realized I'd killed the ear pink so I had to erase it and redo it since I didn't wanna start all over with my blurring. The changes aren't showing up for me, though. Are they for any of you? Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:56, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, they're showing up now. Does anyone else think the shading could be darkened a bit? I think I over-blurred. :/ Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:56, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, someone finally understands my issues with this cat! XD I think it could be darkened a tad more. Do you want me to do it, or would you still want to do it, so you can blur it after it's added? Rainlegs 03:02, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's your charart, so, it's your call. :3 Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 03:09, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mmmkay. I darkened it, can you blur it some more? Rainlegs 03:17, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 21:46, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading on the back. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 20:16, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 14:35, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the left (our left) ear and the neck. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 04:28, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the chin/neck area Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred the shading. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 21:06, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added the chin shading, but I think it needs to blurred more. :P Rainlegs 01:03, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah blur that =) Put your blur tool on 100%, if it isn't already. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 01:35, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

There is like a stripe on his neck, get rid of that. Maple♥pool^{I'm a star gazer~} 13:40, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Maplepool- It's shading, not a stripe. Anyway, I blurred it to the max. Can someone help me? :P Rainlegs 14:04, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading, I can't see it very well. Nightshine 17:59, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

When you darken and define the shading, I'll blur it for you =) --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 03:27, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 14:06, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

The way you did the shading on his neck, it just really stands out. You say you blurred it, but I think it's just way too dark to go with the shading for him. That might be the problem with this image. Yes, it does look blurred but it also looks sharp against his fur color as well. I say make it lighter and try bringing some of that shading down onto his chest.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ^{♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮} 15:29, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. I could blur it for you on GIMP if you'd like. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 16:49, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

People, please listen! Read what Wildheart said right above my last upload. All I did was darken the shading. @Shimmerpool- the reason I didn't bring shading down onto his chest is because the light is coming from right in front of it, so there wouldn't be any shadow there, as stated above. Rainlegs 18:10, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Do you need help blurring the shading again? I'll go do it right now if you want. ^_^ Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 22:43, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead. :P Rainlegs 01:21, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:38, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Rainlegs! I'm working on it now, but I was cut off from computer priviledges for a couple days. I'll reupload it in a sec. --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 22:57, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it for you =) --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 23:50, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Wildheart! :) Rainlegs 23:58, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpen the eyes and add more color to them. I can't tell if they're mber or black Rainsong43 01:48, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Rainsong43

I took the color off of his regular warrior image, so they're fine. Rainlegs 01:49, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?  Darkhallows...^Mew? 02:57, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear-pink a tad. Blur the shading by the base of the tail, shoulder, and flank. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 03:00, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If anyone else thinks it needs more blurring, can someone help me? Rainlegs 03:22, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink could be a bit lighter, and I don't think it needs any more blurring :D ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:33, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 03:42, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA  Darkhallows...^Mew? 12:47, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 14:38, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

First of all, highlights aren't necessary on chararts. Secondly, there are some on already. Rainlegs 14:45, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 20:34, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I have it as blurred as it will get. Pixlr won't let me get it anymore blurred. Do you mind helping me with that? Rainlegs 20:38, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred the shading for you Nightshine 00:45, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Rainlegs 00:46, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur neck shading. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 15:36, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Blur the head shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:50, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Nightshine 22:51, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I was on a week-long trip, and just got back. As I stated before, I can't blur it anymore. Rainlegs 02:11, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I can help you blur it some if you want wildheart spring rain ♫

06:22, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I know you can't really blur it anymore, but to whoever IS going to blur it, the shading on the top of the head needs to be blurred a bit. Looks great Rainlegs! :) ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 21:26, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

You should darken the highlights Sandstormrocks32 22:45, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, Wildheart, that would be great. @Sandstormrocks32- The highlights are nearly invisible; it's just the shading making them look bright. Rainlegs 01:57, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for that.Sandstormrocks32 22:22, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll blur it for you when I have a sec. Remind me on my talk page if I don't do it by tomorrow. =D wildheart spring rain ♫

01:38, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it for ya =) wildheart spring rain ♫

05:22, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:00, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good but the ear pink looks to darkSandstormrocks32 17:37, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks perfectly fine to me. Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 00:57, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved --Nightshine 06:04, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Rushtail (RC) (W) - Approved

Finally! I'm getting sick of all the gray apprentices X3 ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 03:03, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a tad more, darken the ear-pink, and darken the shading a bit more. Scarletwind^{Step into theLight} 03:11, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the stripes; they're greyer on her apprentice image. --Gοldenpelt 03:12, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:39, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes lighter and darken her pelt a tiny bit,Honeybreeze 12:08, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 17:22, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

You've got a really big dark patch. Lighten it up a bit E-SCOPE IS HERE 18:18, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

I believe that's the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 19:44, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights on the tail. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 19:51, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 19:53, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! Blur the ear pink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:09, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Rushtail (RC).warrior.png. Define the stripes, darken the shading. Nightshine 00:07, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 00:34, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight on the tail, or if you aren't using highlights, lighten the shading a lot, and darken the shading on the midriff/belly. Looks good =) --Wildheart ^{Back from Maui; tanless} 01:30, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 19:42, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights or darken the shading on the tail, it looks too flat. Beautiful job Nighty. ;3 Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 21:21, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are too blurry and thick, and the shading looks like a gradient. I would suggest changing the face stripes, as putting just one over the eyes gives the appearance of a uni-brow. XD Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 07:09, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I redid it :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 22:25, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, Nighty! Blur the shading. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 16:04, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 19:51, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and stripes. Nightshine 00:26, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 01:11, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a lot --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 01:37, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think they need to be defined; I can see them quite clearly. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:00, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I can too, but they're too blurry. If you won't define them, at least darken them. --Wildheart ^{In mourning for Duckling, my phone.} 04:19, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The ear pink looks a bit blotchy, but other than that, I can't see much wrong. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:37, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the head match the tone of the rest of the body, it looks duller. --Leafstrike-- 21:02, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

GIMP is being spazzy at this moment, so excuse my lack of reuploads; I'm still working on this. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 16:24, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpen the earpink a bit. Mistfire ^{Spring rain falls} 17:29, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Other than what's already been said, I see absolutely nothing wrong with this. Good job! :) ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 05:08, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 03:27, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes. wildheart spring rain ♫

05:54, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes look ok, except you could define the tail stripes a little. Make the highlights bigger as well. :3 99.58.17.98 19:53, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are big enough, its just that they're too light. Darken the highlights a little bit. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:04, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 22:39, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 00:50, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I hate to ruin somebody's CBA, but I really think you should define the stripes. wildheart spring rain ♫

00:38, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think they need to be defined; I can see them clearly and they're the same color as her apprentice charart o3o ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:45, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look really cool! Repeating 24 hours Nightshine 05:59, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:53, May 1, 2011 (UTC)