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Wildcat kit blank - For Approval[]
Sorry for the delay, here comes the little guy Abyst 17:17, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
This is adorable! Mind making sure the outline is approximately 2 pixels thick throughout the image? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:28, 17 November 2024 (UTC)
Reup, should be all good now ^^ Abyst 22:59, 17 November 2024 (UTC)
Not really sure how to word this, I’m sorry that it’s kinda vague, but the far back leg position seems a little off—like its making the kit lean too far forward almost? - Ghost 💀 () 01:21, 11/22/2024
Should the tail be longer? ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 13:25 UTC 23/11/2024
Also, I like the texturing in the tail, but maybe it should be more round ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 12:13 UTC 4/12/2024
i think the tail's roundness is fine, but i do agree that it could be a bit longer ~ ♡ Nightclaw ♡ is unstable ⭐ 19:33, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
The wildcat's tail is round in real life (at least in the tip), however, it doesnn't need to be a scientifically acurate representation¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 15:05 UTC 6/12/2024
The way they have it is accurate, the kittens' tails aren't as rounded as the adults' tails are. Sunpath The silent moon 17:23, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
Well, I looked at wildcat kits, and they have a sharp tail, so the tail is fine, it just needs to be longer. ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 15:01 UTC 7/12/2024
the tail is bent at an angle so a good portion of it is hidden like how the tail on the warrior blank is curved. although, taking this into account, i feel the part of the tail being (sat on right now) could be brought to the front? imo the angle is kinda odd, so that could be done or it count be flipped so the tail is going along the side we cant see. sorry if this makes absolutely no sense lol — willowthroat ° • , + ~ =w= 01:01, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
I think I understood you Willow, the angle of the tail is… off ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 14:35 UTC 8/12/2024
Really sorry for the lack of updates. I changed the tail, now it's longer and visibly bent, i hope it looks better now ^^ Also, I'm sorry but i don't have any idea how to approach the leg problem IllusionaryInfiltrator mentioned (there are two far back legs visible) and i personally think they look fine, but maybe I'm just not catching something ^^" Abyst 18:04, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
maybe try moving it back a little? i feel like that might help, i can try to redline it maybe. i feel like based on the position the kit is in we shouldn't see that much of the hind leg like illu said — Velochi Pink goes good with green »19:32, 14 December 2024 (UTC)«
Likewise, I think the ---> hind leg could be scooted back so we don't see as much of the haunch at least Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:31, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
Also, the leg looks like it's angled to the inside of the body, like the angle of the forepaws are different, and the one that is a little hidden is more forward than it should ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 13:23 17/12/2024
Okay, this is completely not a necessary thing, so if you don't for whatever reason, that's completely fine. But, from my experience, having the whole/most of the white sections connected and removing/connecting single pixels of white, makes blanks far easier to work with. -Bobaþy Teaᛚᛖᚨᚠᛖ ᚨ ᛗᛖᛋᛋᚨᚷᛖ? ☽Fri 07፡35⛤03᜶1᜶2025☾ 07:35, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Is this still being worked on? It's been a minute since anything's been uploaded, so I want to make sure and ensure these didn't get forgotten about because of the rush from The Elders' Quest. — Jayce ♡ [23:25, 1/7/2025]
Reup, hi everyone, sorry it's been a while. I moved that one leg back and changed it a little bit in general. Added small changes to the lineart, cleaning it up a little bit. I also followed Bob tea's advice and removed some single white pixels + connected ears to the head. Abyst 22:39, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
Just as a simple request; once these are approved and whatnot, you'll make sure to crop the images, yeah? It seems like there's loads of extra space surrounding the blank that generally shouldn't be there. You don't need to do it now, just an fyi once everything's all done. — Jayce ♡ [14:38, 1/12/2025]
Can you think out the lineart on the tail-tip a bit? Some parts appear to be too thick - 2 pixels for the outer lineart is our rule of thumb ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:07, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
Is there too much fur on the chest? ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 19:26 12/01/2024
Reup; cropped the image, thinned out the tail tip, but i personally think the chest fur is fine, aren't they supposed to be fluffy? Abyst 20:21, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Stemleaf (Alt W.) - For Evaluation[]
My first charart!!! ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 20:50 UTC 31/12/2024
This just looks like Illusion's image and I don't see anything new in the upload history. You're supposed to make your own image. Sunpath The silent moon 20:57, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Hi, this is considered art theft, as you are using someone else's work. Since you are still a kit, I'll leave you with a warning. Please recreate the image in its entirety. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Sorry Vec, what do you mean with "Please recreate the image in its entirety"? ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 21:32 UTC 31/12/2024
Since the image you're currently using is mine, you need to redo it, using your own file, your own drawing, etc. Tracing over something that someone else made would also be considered art theft, so your version of it needs to be different from the ground up. The base color, patches, shading, etc. all need to be done by you, not copied from someone else. - Ghost 💀 () 21:35, 12/31/2024
Oh, now I understand, I'm really sorry for the mistake ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 20:50 UTC 31/12/2024
Mistakes happen, it's alright. Looking forward to seeing what you create Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:43, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Redone ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 20:50 UTC 31/12/2024
could you expand, lighten and smoothen out the shading? the texture should also be longer. let me know if you need his starclan file and i can send it to you :) —Sakura ⋆｡𖦹 °.❀˖° 22:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
The base color looks paler than the StarClan image, and it's missing the white patch on the elbow on the front leg closest to us. Sunpath The silent moon 22:10, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Adding on to what Sakura said about the shading, I'd suggest looking at Warriors Wiki:Charart/Apprentice Tutorials, which also has shading placement references that you can base yours off of ^^ - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 22:13, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Reup: Fixed orange shade, and the elbow spot, but, also working in other issues ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 22:05 UTC 31/12/2024
Reup: Shading and waste, let me know if the texture looks better ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 22:25 UTC 31/12/2024
theres still some waste by his chest, and the hind paw farther from us isnt fully filled in. adding on to the comments on shading: id suggest adding a new layer and putting down ur shading, blurring it, then setting it to multiply and lowering the opacity (this is the broader shading layer). then add a second layer and do the same thing, just keeping this area of shading smaller and in the areas the shadows would be more extreme (i recommend shading in a color other than black for an image like this (i just personally think it looks better, but that is artist's choice). for this image, maybe a brown of sorts?) ~ ♡ Nightclaw ♡ is unstable ⭐ 22:26, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
The elbow patch should be larger, and the ear pink should be more orange to match the StarClan image and the icon. Sunpath The silent moon 22:31, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
the waste is more by the beginning of his -> front leg, oops (if ud like a more in-depth explanation of the shading thing, shoot me a message on my talk page) ~ ♡ Nightclaw ♡ is unstable ⭐ 22:33, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
the eyes look a bit dark compared to the other images -Bobaþy Teaᛚᛖᚨᚠᛖ ᚨ ᛗᛖᛋᛋᚨᚷᛖ? ☽Tue 22፡39⛤31᜶12᜶2024☾ 22:39, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Reup will take care of the eyes "the next year" ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 22:40 31/12/2024
the waste is still present by the top of where his -> foreleg meets his chest ~ ♡ Nightclaw ♡ is unstable ⭐ 22:49, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
The patches on these look more rough while on the star they look to be a bit more cloudy and light. Use a different brush perhaps? —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 00:44, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
The nose needs a patch of white to match the star. Sunpath The silent moon 14:55, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup, tell me if the patches should be more blurry ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 16:52 UTC 01/01/2025
Reup, redone shading ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 17:08 UTC 01/01/2025
Reup, lacked shading in the back ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 17:26 UTC 01/01/2024
it looks like uv colored over the lineart in some spots on his back. the waste by the start of his -> foreleg is still there. the spot between his hind paw and <- foreleg still isnt colored in fully. his earpink is also too neon compared to the starclan image. ~ ♡ Nightclaw ♡ is unstable ⭐ 17:28, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
I think my comment above about the shading still stands—-the direction of the lightsource/where the shadows are could be clearer (there seems to be shading on the back when the rest of the body only has the -> side shaded, so I would actually remove that). I would suggest looking at the shading placement chart or some already-approved warrior images such as File:Blackstar.warrior.png, File:Whitestorm.warrior.png, and File:Ashfoot.warrior.png for some ideas. Also, the Warriors Wiki:Charart/Apprentice Tutorials has some good guides in general on making an image. - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 18:24, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
I think my comment on the texture still stands - i used long strokes to create that texture on his star image. It's also a little darker here. If you need it, texture should be #c95a00 and the layer settings should be multiply at a 30.7 opacity :) —Sakura ⋆｡𖦹 °.❀˖° 19:08, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup, I think I solved everything you mentioned, tell me if not ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 00:49 02/01/2024
Reup, Shading and eye color ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 00:55 02/01/2024
There is still a lot of waste. Around the chest area like Nightclaw pointed out but now also around the --> ear, hind paw, and furthest front paw. The lineart still seems to be colored in as well in some places (the spine, hind paw, the lineart of the haunch by the hind leg, and --> ear, I think, and maybe a little on the chest by the white patch). Sunpath The silent moon 00:59, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 01:26 02/01/2024
The texture is beginning to look better! However, it is still really dark. What program are you using? I can give you some tips on what I did for the texture. —Sakura ⋆｡𖦹 °.❀˖° 01:37, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
I really really hate to be a broken record but previous critique on the waste still stands. There is still the same waste previously pointed out and more, around the closest front paw as well now. Waste refers to the coloring outside the lineart. I also see that the front paw closest to us now has unshaded pixels. Sunpath The silent moon 01:58, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
The eye color is also leaking out over into the face - Ghost 💀 (02 Jan 2025 @ 10:21 am)
What brushes are you using? It looks a lot more rough compared to the star. Also, the shading, especially on the haunch, could be more smooth/blurred —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 17:58, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup, I'm using an online program as I can't afford photoshop nor anything similar right now ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 20:16 02/01/2024
Does the patch in the chest look too smooth and faded??? ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 20:29 02/01/2024
Yes. Your shading is also very blotchy still—I recommend drawing it outside of the line art and only blurring the inner edge. His eyes are pointing in two different directions as well. - Ghost 💀 (02 Jan 2025 @ 9:36 pm)
Also! I have no idea what kind of computer you have/use, but GIMP and Adobe Fresco are both free. Adobe also works on iPads. - Ghost 💀 (02 Jan 2025 @ 9:37 pm)
I think the shading in general could be defined, I'm having a hard time seeing most of it except bits on the haunch and shoulder. There is also a spot of waste beneath the hind paw, by the furthest foreleg, and by the --> ear, and a white speck in the lineart on the closest forepaw. I also think the lineart's been smudged or blurred in a few spots (like the back, the haunch, the chest)? Unless that's shading. The lineart on <-- ear also looks off when I compare it to the blank, seems slightly thicker. Sunpath The silent moon 21:49, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
To add to Illu's comment, there are plenty of free art programs. GIMP is one, and I use Firealpaca. I'm sure there are others out there for computers. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:35, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup, Temporaly removed shading, thanks ghost to advice me despite stealing your art ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 22:54 02/01/2024
Does your program support layers? Layers can help with the waste issue —Sakura ⋆｡𖦹 °.❀˖° 23:03, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
Yes ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 16:24 03/01/2024
You have too many spots on the flank, and they still look a bit off from the star. For the texture, I would recommend a 1px pencil in smooth strokes down the flank with no smudging or blurring. Layer wise, I formatted my layers as: base pelt (orange), spots (white), ears (orangish), texture layers, shading layers, eye color/pupils, line art. - Ghost 💀 (03 Jan 2025 @ 5:03 pm)
It also looks like you erased the far back foot: it's that little triangle between the front legs, the near haunch, and the near back foot - Ghost 💀 (03 Jan 2025 @ 5:04 pm)
I'm having trouble seeing the shading now. Make sure the layer setting is on "multiply", and adding another layer on top is a good idea. Also could you possibly expand the shading? Brambleheart ♥I've come to bargain!♫ 18:45, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Brighten the eyes a bit, they are quite dark compared to the other images. Sunpath The silent moon 19:36, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 23:49 03/01/2024
I don't know how to do the patch behind his front paw as it isn't bent in the master pattern, however, it would be quite hidden here, so, please advise me. ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 23:58 03/01/2024
The whisker lineart is now colored in when it shouldn't be. Actually all the lineart looks that way. Sunpath The silent moon 00:05, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
You seem to have changed the size and in turn altered the quality of the blank/image -Tulip For A Fortnight 00:06, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
The shading is leaking around the lineart, I saw it most often on the back and head. The quality of the blank seems to be a lot lower than usual. Also hate to pester about the shading again but it's very flat. Do you know how to do shading on multiple layers? —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 00:17, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
You also have an extra marking on the haunch that shouldn't be there now iirc? Since the star and warrior share the same side, it's supposed to match pretty closely. The exceptions being things like the back feet, since we don't see those on the star. I also agree on the shading, the earpink is still the wrong color per the star as well. - Ghost 💀 (04 Jan 2025 @ 1:26 am)
I will do the other details as soon as I can, however, what do you suggest for the shading? Is something I always have problems with. ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 18:47 04/01/2024
For the shading, I suggest using a blur tool at a rate of 100 and just blurring the edges. I usually keep 2 separate layers: one for the depth, and one for the main. On the starclan image, the depth was at an opacity of 70 and the main was at an opacity of 40. Both layers are on multiply :) —Sakura ⋆｡𖦹 °.❀˖° 19:41, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
The back seems to be a more reddish color while the rest seems black. Can you fix the lineart? It also seems too big and the quality looks messed with, not sure what is up with that but may have something to do with your program. If you want help, feel free to contact me on Discord (raquesislionheart) and I'd be happy to walk you through the process! —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 20:24, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 16:00 08/01/2025
this is great so far! can you define, then smooth the shading? also smudge the white patches a little more into the coat and define the texture? --~ Northfeather *Wild at Heart* 21:00, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
Well I think I matched all the colours, now is only texturing and shading. ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 22:45 08/01/2024
Is there even shading depth on this? It looks very flat to me. And the shading overall needs to be smoothened. —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 04:19, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup, the best shading I've done, but tell me if it needs to improve. As the texture i've defined it, tell me if I need to re-do it
It still looks flat and needs to be smoothened. It looks like one black layer with a low opacity. Do you know how to shade? Shade the right areas with usually a dark color (I would use dark red here but you can use other colors too), and add a depth layer and smoothen both. Be sure to use the multiply setting and set them both to about 50%, maybe lighter or heavier as fits. —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 20:59, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
I feel like the white patches could still stand to be smudged a little more, especially on the tail. Sunpath The silent moon 21:39, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup, the patches will be smudged tomorrow. ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 23:26 10/01/2025
I think the paws could be smudged at the edges, and the shading could use some blurring at the edges too - Ghost 💀 (11 Jan 2025 @ 1:21 am)
Reup ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 23:10 11/01/2025
There's waste around the image (I'm not sure if you're using dark or light mode, but I can see it easily on dark mode) on ---> side of the chest and between the hind legs where it meets the foreleg. Selection your layers in your program should highlight everything that you've drawn for a certain layer, and that might help too. Also, the shading needs to be darkened significantly. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:19, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
the shading on the paws looks kind of muddy and it needs to be smudged out imo isabella ♥ 01:22, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
The --> white patch on the haunch seems very over-smudged. Once the shading is darkened, I think some of it could also be smoothened, particularly on the shoulders. Sunpath The silent moon 01:49, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
Tail shading needs some smoothening, also maybe define the light source on the tail. -Bobaþy Teaᛚᛖᚨᚠᛖ ᚨ ᛗᛖᛋᛋᚨᚷᛖ? ☽Sun 06፡03⛤12᜶1᜶2025☾
Should I define the texture too? ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 19:17 12/01/2024
Well, no answer, so I reupoladed with the stronger texture. Also, the shading is mutch stronger, it should all be better now ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 21:54 12/01/2024
Much better! Can you expand the shading on the face and smoothen the shading on the tail? —Sakura ⋆｡𖦹 °.❀˖° 22:03, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
The overall shading still looks blotchy imo, and could use some definition as well. The spots seem less ragged and irregular compared to the star. - Ghost 💀 (13 Jan 2025 @ 3:48 pm)
Reup ¬Yuki😹 the way to victory, is patience⭐ 21:21 13/01/2024
Is the --> white patch on the haunch intended to be split up and super smudged? Also, I feel that the shading on the paws is still quite dark and muddy, and the shading in general could still be defined (less so on the haunch). Sunpath The silent moon 22:07, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Could you smooth and define the overall shading? It’s still looking flat to me ✨Dust✨ Chasing sunsets and dreams 18:13, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Kestrelflight (Ki) ~ CBA[]
slighttt liberties with the pattern since the other 2 images are from the other side of his body but if i need to make it match more i'll try my best BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 05:17 Sun Jan 5 2025
I would look at the old mca file, since it shows that side Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:58, 5 January 2025 (UTC)
This looks like it has a faint amount of fur texture on it. I don't see fur texture on Kestrelflight's other images. —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 20:25, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
I’ve not done it as texture. If you look at the other images I’ve noticed there’s some darker spots under the white. Not sure if it’s shading that I’m just seeing wrong, was just my attempt to match that part of the image. BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 13:15 Tue Jan 7 2025
^ I think it looks fine; can confirm that I put the darker spots on the app and they're visible on some older revisions of the mc as well. - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 23:08, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
it looks fine to me as well, CBA? —Cobrasnarl ♡♡ (01:10, 1/10/2025)
Sorry but my comment was never addressed about matching the old mca file Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:53, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
Reuploaded sorry for taking so long my first week back at work wiped me the hell out x_x i fiddled with the shading and the layer below the white spots a little more as well cause they were bothering me a little but i still have the first version saved if those are preferred over this BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 08:00 Mon Jan 13 2025
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:44, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Bristleclaw (W) - CBA[]
second charart incoming ~ CalicoMarine 07:23, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
this is beautiful!! would you like her files? ^^ ~Ripple ☆ 08:38, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
Thank you so much!! And yes please! -- could you send them to #charart-help? ~ CalicoMarine 17:37, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
sent! ~Ripple ☆ 05:43, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
Reuploaded! Improved color accuracy and stripe accuracy ~ CalicoMarine 20:49, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
Decrease the white a bit on <--- side of the face per the app. The colors still seem off when comparing it to the rest of her set, mainly the oranges. Are you using highlights? I ask because I know her colors are picked from Stemleaf's line too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:58, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
Reuploaded! Thanks! Adjusted the white and the intensity of the highlights so that the oranges match better. ~ CalicoMarine 22:23, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit throughout? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:11, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
Reuploaded! Darkened my shading layers ~ CalicoMarine 23:05, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
I could be mistaken, but I believe this is an extra stripe on the haunch that you have here, and I'm not seeing it on the apprentice? I'll ping you in discord too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:24, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
Reuploaded! I went and counted the stripes on the apprentice and modified a few others to be more accurate as well. ~ CalicoMarine 15:48, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
Add some more shading to the head? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:53, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Reuploaded! & thank you for the feedback you've given, this sprite has improved a lot since my initial upload! ~ CalicoMarine 21:14, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
No problem, and it's looking great! CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:43, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Floatshimmer (Q) - For Evaluation[]
~ Frosty let the storm rage on ( UTC) 21:02, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
this is so pretty! could you smooth out the shading overall (especially on the tail, belly, and top of the head)?
Cute! Seconding the shading part though. I did her kit, would you like the PSD to reference? Just let me know your Discord username and I'll send it to you. —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 21:17, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup ~ Frosty let the storm rage on ( UTC) 21:49, 7 January 2025 UTC
I still think the shading can be smoothened overall, especially on the tail and <- leg. —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 05:30, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
Done ~ Frosty let the storm rage on ( UTC) 14:46, 10 January 2025 UTC
The fur texture looks like it's just going in circles. Can you make it so it's following the direction of the fur? —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 22:23, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
^ forgot to clarify to the above, I mostly see it on the face —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 22:23, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
Remove the nose pink, there isn't a nose pixel slot on this blank as its part of the lineart Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:54, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup ~ Frosty let the storm rage on ( UTC) 12:13, 13 January 2025 UTC
Define the shading a smidge on the face/head. I think the texture in the same area could still use some work too — it doesn’t seem to be going with a growth pattern. BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 06:27 Tue Jan 14 2025
Troutshine (W) ~ For Approval[]
going to a pink floyd tribute band later this month Brambleheart ♥I've come to bargain!♫ 23:23, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
Wonderful charart! Comparing to the kit pixel, I think his shoulder(s) should be white ~ CalicoMarine 00:15, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
The shading is a bit sharp, but I think adding some paler/lower opacity sketches along the edges will help. Add some underneath the chin too? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:47, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
reups i didn't see vec's feedback, will up again soon Brambleheart ♥I've come to bargain!♫ 21:06, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
reups decreased the opacity of the bottom shading layer (the one that goes farther out) and increased the opacity of the top layer to preserve definition! also he already has shading on his chin ^^ Brambleheart ♥I've come to bargain!♫ 21:03, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
I think the shading, especially by the bottom of the haunch, could be smoothed a little. Looking great! ^^ ✨Dust✨ Chasing sunsets and dreams 03:20, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
Maybe reduce the shading on the -> side of the tail a bit, since it’s covered in shading right now? I think erasing a few strokes in this area would help. - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 04:03, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
reups Brambleheart ♥I've come to bargain!♫ 23:33, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
The hind leg furthest from us isn't filled in. And add some shading underneath the chin? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:26, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
The kit image appears to have ear fluff, could that be added? -Bobaþy Teaᛚᛖᚨᚠᛖ ᚨ ᛗᛖᛋᛋᚨᚷᛖ? ☽Sun 06፡11⛤12᜶1᜶2025☾
reups the ear fluff on the kit was from me smudging/low opacity erasing the ear pink, so i did the same here Brambleheart ♥I've come to bargain!♫ 18:55, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
smooth the shading just a tad? The texture of it is a bit too sharp atm (imo at least) BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 06:35 Tue Jan 14 2025
Ridgeglow (W) - CBA[]
!! i was really excited to draw this !! ridgeglow was mentioned as having "such a cute little white nose" in the elders' quest; i wasn't sure if that was reffering to her actual nose or the fur around it . but i went with the nose coloring on her kit image and colorpicked her pelt from her icon on the website family tree. was also unsure if this image needs fur texture. eager to see what you all have to say about this one so i can improve it 1!! yipee ✩ PROWL ✩
im pretty sure this needs texture since the kit has it and its the first in the set ! aside from that, could you define the shading on the haunch and face? —Cobrasnarl ♡♡ (01:04, 1/10/2025)
The white spot on the nose is a little bit off-center on the kit. If you want, I could give you the file for the kit, which I personally would recommend, as I gave her a very subtle stripe pattern as well. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:06, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
This is looking awesome! Could you saturate the eyes just a tiny bit to match the kit’s? Also I think the shading could be a little more defined. Great job! ^^ ✨Dust✨ Chasing sunsets and dreams 02:12, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
oh okay gotchu thank you all very much i will implement those edits !!! plus blue thanks for the offer to send me the kit file it would be greatly appreciated. i've sent you a message via discourd . ✩ PROWL ✩
sooo ... i ended up redoing the whole thing ?? idk lmk how we feel loll ^_^ u ✩ PROWL ✩
Could you smoothen where the shading ends at the top of the tail's bend just a tad? It looks like there's an abrupt line there, if you can see what I mean. Sunpath The silent moon 10:01, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
alright, it has been hopefully adequately smoothed !! (the subtle stripe pattern under the shading may also be a cause of the abrupt appearance of the tail.) ✩ PROWL ✩
Expand/define the shading overall? I'm having a hard time making it out Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:04, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
reuped ✩ PROWL ✩
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:43, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Graywhisker (W) - For Approval[]
YEOOOOOOOOW la creatura isabella ♥ 01:14, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
Might you smooth out the edges of the shading on the muzzle a small bit? — Jayce ♡ [03:42, 1/10/2025]
Define the depth a bit? - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 04:09, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
The back hind leg from us isn't filled in ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:02, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
oopies lol reupped isabella ♥ 23:42, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
It’s still not filled in, I think they were saying that gap near the hind paw is meant to be the other leg and should be filled in. ^^ ✨Dust✨ Chasing sunsets and dreams 04:03, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
I also think the shading depth could still be defined a little bit. The legs and face in particular still look a bit flat. —Ivy ☆ 15:34, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
The ear pink color doesn't seem to quite match the rest of the set -Bobaþy Teaᛚᛖᚨᚠᛖ ᚨ ᛗᛖᛋᛋᚨᚷᛖ? ☽Sun 06፡13⛤12᜶1᜶2025☾
I used #be6c6c on the apprentice. He should also have a gray belly, and the gray on his tail doesn't quite extend to his tail tip. - Ghost 💀 (13 Jan 2025 @ 2:27 pm)
I think the foreleg closest to us is missing a gray patch. I believe it would be visible from this angle. Sunpath The silent moon 22:17, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Good catch, it is! Should be the one below the big one at the bend of the leg on the apprentice, kinda at where his ankle would be - Ghost 💀 (14 Jan 2025 @ 12:44 am)
Redpaw (CS) (A) ~ For Approval[]
Here’s Redpaw’s apprentice, marking my first charart! NeptuneWiki23 (talk) 04:45, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
well done! Maybe just define the shading a little? BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 14:47 Fri Jan 10 2025
Re-up Put the shading layers on multiply, hopefully that helps! NeptuneWiki23 (talk) 21:08, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
Bumping you up to an apprentice since you see to know what you're doing ^^ You can use "For Approval" in your headings from now on. To comment - the "front" half of Redpaw appears very dark compared to the rest of the charart. Can you expand the shading on the haunch, back legs, and tail? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:00, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
Re-up Nice! How’s this? NeptuneWiki23 (talk) 23:09, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
Better! Can you lighten the shading on the front half? It still looks drastically darker Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:28, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
Re-up This good? Or should I lighten up the shading more? NeptuneWiki23 (talk) 22:05, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
I did lighten it up, but hopefully it’s not too light now! NeptuneWiki23 (talk) 23:33, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
Could you expand the shading on the tail a bit more? Sunpath The silent moon 22:19, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Re-up Hope it looks good now! NeptuneWiki23 (talk) 01:56, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Silkypaw (A) - For Approval[]
Beetlejuice IT'S SHOWTIME! 05:35, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
darken/define shading and ear pink a little. BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 06:38 Fri Jan 10 2025
Reupped Beetlejuice IT'S SHOWTIME! 05:15, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
can you expand and define the shading + depth? — willowthroat ° • , + ~ =w= 15:27, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
Darken the ear and nose a bit more too? - Ghost 💀 (11 Jan 2025 @ 7:12 pm)
Can you smooth the shading on the tail? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:16, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
Reupped Beetlejuice IT'S SHOWTIME! 01:29, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Define the shading depth overall? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:57, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
I really hate to sound like a broken record, but I think the earpink could still be darkened/defined. If you want to keep the gray tone, maybe #5c4a57 or #705b6a? Somewhere in there? - Ghost 💀 (13 Jan 2025 @ 2:25 pm)
Reupped Beetlejuice IT'S SHOWTIME! 01:23, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
shading is leaking from the line art in some spots — can see it a bit on the chest just beneath the chin, behind the front leg on the belly a bit. BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 06:32 Tue Jan 14 2025
Could you add some depth to the eyes? This is looking great! ^^ ✨Dust✨ Chasing sunsets and dreams 18:04, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Reupped Beetlejuice IT'S SHOWTIME! 01:22, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Heronkit (RC) (K) ~ CBA[]
brought to you by procreate nebula to boldly go where no one has gone before <06:39, 1/11/2025>
This could just be the lighting, so forgive me if I’m wrong, but it kinda looks like lighter splotches/spots on her haunch, maybe smooth it out a little? UrHat♣ 12:39, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
I think that’s intentional. Looks fine to me. BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 06:29 Tue Jan 14 2025
Likewise. CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:42, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Duskshine (W) ~ CBA[]
huzzah! first official charart. Magalgamate
ooh nice work! mind expanding the haunch shading just a tad? - Ghost 💀 (11 Jan 2025 @ 3:36 pm)
Reup! Hope this is better :] Magalgamate
Darken the shading just a tad? And I'll promote to you an apprentice since you seem to know what you're doing :) Feel free to use "for approval" in your headings from now on Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:01, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup Darkened shading and added a little more to the ears. Magalgamate
this looks great! could you desaturate the tint just a wee bit? not too much —Sakura ⋆｡𖦹 °.❀˖° 05:58, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup Desaturated, not sure if it's super noticeable though Magalgamate
CBA? Nicely done Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:42, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Lightleap (Q) ~ For Approval[]
I had to make this from scratch instead of copying from the other clones ;u; Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:59, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
can you define the shading overall? not sure if its my computer but im having a hard time seeing it (this looks amazing btw) —Sakura ⋆｡𖦹 °.❀˖° 05:57, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
I'm squinting at my phone currently so forgive me—but I think you might be missing a few stripes on her body? - Ghost 💀 (13 Jan 2025 @ 12:44 pm)
reups oopsies you're right Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:25, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Floatshimmer (Alt. Q.) ~ For Approval[]
Boop. Sunpath The silent moon 20:55, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Re-up Lowered opacity of the texture, that looked way more prominent than it did earlier. Probably due to sun glare. Sunpath The silent moon 22:25, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
smooth out the shading? ~ ♡ Nightclaw ♡ is unstable ⭐ 22:44, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Re-up Hope this is better, smoothened a ton and also lightened the shading to help. Sunpath The silent moon 23:31, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Can you add some shading behind the shoulder fluff too? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:57, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Re-up Sunpath The silent moon 02:05, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Could you smooth the shading overall? ✨Dust✨ Chasing sunsets and dreams 02:45, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Re-up Smoothened more. Sunpath The silent moon 03:11, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Looks a lot better! Could you smooth the belly shading a tad more? ✨Dust✨ Chasing sunsets and dreams 18:19, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Re-up It's not going to blend much more than this. Sunpath The silent moon 18:27, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Appleshine (Q) - For Approval[]
this was an experience - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 05:06, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
omg you did such a good job. The tail-tip needs to be pale, per the old app (first in the set) Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:04, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
reup ty <3 - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 06:34, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Needleclaw (Q) - For Approval[]
it's needletime —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 06:42, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
smooth and maybe lighten the belly shading a little. It kind of looks like a grey patch to me at the moment. BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 07:48 Tue Jan 14 2025
Think it could be shaped a little more to follow the curve of her belly, too - Ghost 💀 (14 Jan 2025 @ 12:20 pm)
the black on the chest could curve upwards to above the shoulder Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:02, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
reuploaded —EaglesOfAdrestia"A rose could never become a lilac." ♱ 18:44, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
I think the black on the chest could still curve a bit <--- way towards the top of the shoulder Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:41, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Oakkit (TC) (K) ~ For Approval[]
How the Erin's probably felt after pairing Myrtlebloom with a married man who's also her cousin 🗿 UrHat♣ 13:44, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Reup fixed the pupils UrHat♣ 16:03, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Moonpaw's sister (Ki) - For Approval[]
Rapidsplash (Warrior) - For Evaluation[]
this is my first charart ever btw <3 (shout out to Vector Sigma for helping me!) MayuriMagica (talk) 00:02, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Could you lighten the shading? It's quite dark. Sunpath The silent moon 00:12, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Is this good? MayuriMagica (talk) 00:45, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Much better! Can you smoothen the shading a smidge between the shoulder and neck, and reduce the lighter gray around the patches to match the kit a bit better? Sunpath The silent moon 01:06, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
I tried! Is this good enough? MayuriMagica (talk) 01:26, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Looking good ^_^ can you blur or smudge the grey patches a little more and add a bit more depth to the shading? Maybe add another layer of shading with the colour closer to the line art in spots where there would be darker shadows. BERRY ♥ メズマ ライザー 02:36 Wed Jan 15 2025
I tried again! I didn’t really understand the maybe part (hope it isn’t a huge issue and just a minor suggestion) , if it makes you feel a bit better I tried making the shading closer to the spots :3MayuriMagica (talk) 02:58, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
So, Uhh me speaking. Any updates on the Charart (if there is a ton of polite critism if any) will be done at 3:00 PM to 3:20 PM (UTC) because I usually get off school that time, so updates may be slow, thanks! :3 MayuriMagica (talk) 03:47, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
This is looking amazing! Could you define the overall shading? It’s looking a little flat to me ✨Dust✨ Chasing sunsets and dreams 05:55, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Pouncestep (Q) ~ For Approval[]
My girl. All colors from her other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:15, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Sparrowpelt (SkC) (E) ~ For Approval[]
uhhhhhhh dang when did we get old, Alexa play Despacito - Ghost 💀 (15 Jan 2025 @ 2:12 am)