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==BloodClan Blanks - For Approval==
  
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<pre>==[[Character]] ~ For Evaluation==
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[[File:BloodClan.short.png]] here's these bad boys; the pose is from a ref that I can provide if need be. {{Diablo./Sig2|00:53, 29/8/2020}}
  
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[[File:Character.rank.png]] ~~~~</pre>
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New members must use the "For Evaluation" heading, and members who are apprentices and above should use the "For Approval" heading. Click [[Special:Upload|here]] to upload a new image.
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==[[Stempaw (ASC)|Stempaw]] (A) - For Approval==
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I think the legs are a bit...bulky if you know what i mean? The top of the front legs should be thinner, if that makes any sense. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 12:49, August 29, 2020 (UTC)
  
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[[File:Stempaw (ASC).apprentice.png]] these stripes did not want to be done {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 02:15, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
   
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the stripes could he thinner un some places, smoother and imo toned down. {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|03:36, 2 April 2024 (UTC)}}
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[https://vvcap.com/img/CywTUVoPI.jpg this is my reference] for the whole pose; so I think, speaking from an anatomical view, the legs are fine as is? There's also a fair bit of perspective in this pose, so its all on angle, but when the blank is [[:File:Diablo personal.png|filled in]], the legs don't look as awkward or wide. {{Diablo./Sig2|09:17, 30/8/2020}}
  
   
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I think the stripes need smudging <div style="font-family: adelon book;"><span style="font-weight: bold; text-shadow: 0 0 10px #003186; color: #007fff;">[[User:EaglesOfAdrestia|EaglesOfAdrestia]] ([[User talk:EaglesOfAdrestia|talk]])</span></div> 03:47, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
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Given pretty much all of the BloodClan cats seem to be shown with teeth in their collars in the graphic novels.. should we actually just add the teeth into the blank to start with? It might help in the long run. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|01:24, 9/01/2020}}​
  
   
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i think the paler parts should be more smoothen out, on the kit it kinda seems like it’s fading into the orange. Great job, nice to see how far you’ve come! Tabbies are tough but you can do it^^ {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 05:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
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'''reuploaded''' - how's that? {{Diablo./Sig2|05:09, 01/9/2020}}
  
   
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'''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 19:31, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
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Can you define the first pawpad on the paw that's sticking out, and also smooth out the mouth lineart a little bit? Also maybe define a tongue for easy definition in the future. β€”{{User:RiinRin/Sig2|05:25, 9/02/2020}} <span style="color:White; font-family:Segoe Script;=">β™‘</span> <sup>[[User:Hawkfire98|<span style="color:White; font-family:Script MT;="><span style title="And like a message in a bottle cast to sea,">we cast</span></span>]] [[User:Appledash|<span style="color:White; font-family:Script MT;="><span style="style" title="Until their ends, our candles burn, until we&lt;span data-rte-entity=">'</span>re free!" data-rte-attribs=" style title=Until their ends, our candles burn, until we're free!"&gt;off tomorrow!</span>]]</sup> <small><span style="color:White;font-family:Palatino Linotype;">(05:25, 9/02/2020)</span></small>​
  
   
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The stripes overall should be more close together and wavy - I know Stempaw's design is slightly based off his father's stripes. {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|14:48, 03 4 2024}} 14:48, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
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Im pretty sure they should have dog teeth claws? {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 09:16, September 7, 2020 (UTC)
  
   
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'''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 17:07, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
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'''reuploaded''' - hopefully I got what you meant echo ;-; also I added in the claws to the front paws only because, unless I'm mistaken, not all of them have claws on their back paws? {{Diablo./Sig2|09:41, 07/9/2020}}
  
   
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I think highlights could be lightened or removed since they throw off the base a bit, and looking at the kit, there also seems to be a paler gradient underneath the stripes that’s visible on the haunch, paws, face, and tail. {{User:Arenzel/Sig}} 00:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
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The cheek fluff looks a bit funky on our left. Maybe lower it down a little. {{User:Raelic/Sig_1}}<span style="{{User:Raelic/Time}}">3:03 Thu Sep 10 2020</span>
  
   
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it might just be me but i think theres leaking shading near the bottom of the chest where it meets the > front leg {{User:Snowdapple/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Snowdapple/Time}}">21:47, 4/04/2024</span></small>
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'''reuploaded''' - hows that? {{Diablo./Sig2|06:26, 11/9/2020}}
  
   
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Could u maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and <- hind leg? Love the eyes :0[[User talk:Dawnleafofriver|<span style="text-shadow:palevioletred 1px 3px 4px;color:violet;font-family:georgia;font-size:10pt">Dawnleaf</span> <span style="text-shadow:palevioletred 1px 2px 4px;color:orchid;font-family:georgia"><sup><big>of river</big></span>]] 05:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
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On the longhair, a tooth from the collar is going over the cheek fur, if that makes sense. I dont think that should be there? {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 11:47, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
   
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'''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 16:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
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I disagree. If you lower the tooth it'd look like it's coming from the bottom, and the collars have alternating teeth going up and down (Hope this makes sense!) {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} --Leopardpelt71 01:12, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
   
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Shading could be expanded and defined slightly overall {{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Sig2}} <big><sup><span style="{{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Time}}">14:11, 4/07/2024</span></sup></big>
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I'm genuinely confused? What do you guys want me to do? Because Leopard, I'm pretty certain Cypress is asking me to move the tooth to be below the cheek fluff, which makes sense and I'll probably get to in the next day or so - but your comment has gotten me scratching my head. {{Diablo./Sig2|08:45, 18/9/2020}}
  
   
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I believe he is supposed to have a dorsal tail stripe too. Could you also reduce the shine in the eyes? I think you have a top and bottom part, and having them both restricts the visibility of the pupil and the eye color {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|20:35, 07 4 2024}} 20:35, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
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Here's what I mean: So typically when you have the teeth on the collar, the teeth alternate going up and down. That means that one tooth is hanging down, then the next tooth hangs up, etc. And I'll change what I said; the collar on the cheek fur can be lowered but not much/ {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} --Leopardpelt71 01:32, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
  
   
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The collar seems fine to me. {{User:Sunshade/Sig}}02:03, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
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define the eye depth a bit? {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|21:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)}}
   
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'''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 21:49, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
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Forgive me if this was said already but i think the cheek on < side of both blanks need to extend out further {{User:Snowdapple/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Snowdapple/Time}}">13:21, 9/19/2020</span></small>
  
   
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CBA? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:49, 4/9/2024}}
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'''Reuploaded''' - I did try to fiddle with the cheek, but when I did it didn't look right on the shorthair, so for
 
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the time being, I'd like a second opinion for that cheek? {{Diablo./Sig2|08:54, 20/9/2020}}
  
   
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sorry, but the stripes could be softer and the tail markings could be defined. the earpink doesn’t seem to match, but that could be shading. the eyes don’t seem to match either? the kits eyes are a brighter, more contrasting grrrn and this images seems fuller and darker. the shading could be smoothed overall as well imo. {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 19:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
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I think the faces match the references pretty well, so I don't know if that really ''needs'' to be changed. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|03:16, 9/21/2020}}
  
   
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alsoo i feel like the light mustache looking part (idk what else to call it srry) looksout of place {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|00:01, 10 April 2024 (UTC)}}
   
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I think the muzzle is fine. We don't see a ton of it on the kit so this might fall under artists choice. {{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Sig2}} <big><sup><span style="{{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Time}}">01:12, 4/10/2024</span></sup></big>
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==[[Fang]] (KP) - CBA==
  
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[[File:Fang.kittypet.png]] {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 22:53, September 3, 2020 (UTC)
  
   
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on the [[:File:Stempaw (ASC).kit.png|kit]], there is no mustache as you have here. the muzzle is paler, but not swept out (can’t think of anything else to describe it as lol) as you have it here. to some extent, you can keep the mustache effect on the (<-) side of the muzzle but remove on the (->) side of the muzzle. (i think) {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 18:04, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
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He's missing texture. The earpink I feel could be lightened a tad to match the deputy too. He's also missing his lighter gray belly/chest/muzzle. The shading could also be smoothed out a bit too. His left eye looks a little odd too, I'm guessing it's the eyeshine placement, but could you correct that?
  
   
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The face is also really dark so I think removing some of the shading might help overall as well {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|18:32, 10 4 2024}} 18:32, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
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I also think the tail patch placement should be flipped vertically as the base appears on the underside of the tail on the deputy. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:26, September 4, 2020 (UTC)
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'''reups''' changed the eyes for the more vibrant colorpick to be the main color. ears are mainly a shading thing. Also smoothed the shading, and the mustache thing is mainly a lighter face thing from the kit's markings. {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 18:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
   
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I think the paler gradient under the stripes could be defined/lightened a bit, since I'm color picking #C7853D at the lightest part on the kit. The stripes also seem to have a gradient from the top to bottom on the kit, where it's darker/redder near the back. {{User:Arenzel/Sig}} 22:34, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
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'''reup''' {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 04:25, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
  
   
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The shading on the face is still very dark and is making it hard to see the face details. I might also suggest making the eye shine smaller on the right (our left) eye. {{User:Eggheart/sig}} 23:58, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
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There should be a lighter patch on the tail tip, no? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|01:51, 9/07/2020}}​​​​
  
   
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'''reups''' the main pelt gradient was off bc i had forgotten to turn it back on after editing ^^ {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 19:20, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
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There should be a lighter patch on the tail tip, yes. I think the texture could be defined a small bit too. By "his left eye", I meant from Fang's left. The other eye was fine, but the left one still looks odd. The patch on his tail I feel should curve some more too, like the deputy's (I can give a redline if you'd like). I also don't know if this happens to be the blank/shading placement, but his gray belly looks a bit off? Could just be me.
  
   
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Define the earpink color and shading a bit? It looks pretty flat rn {{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Sig2}} <big><sup><span style="{{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Time}}">12:40, 4/13/2024</span></sup></big>
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'''reuploaded.''' i'd like the redline, please. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 15:27, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
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'''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 21:45, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
   
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imo my comment still stands about the leaky shading on the chest, where the furthest front leg meets the chest. {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 21:48, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
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[https://imgur.com/a/Uty9gG0 here you are]. Tbh it's really the patch closer to the start of the tail that I feel needs to curve slightly more.
  
   
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'''reups''' should be gone now ^^ {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 23:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
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i don’t know if you saw where i ment, so [https://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/e/ea/20240414003623%21Willowthroat.personal.png] <- this should help {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 00:39, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
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'''reuploaded.''' thanks {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 02:11, September 17, 2020 (UTC)
  
   
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can you define the tail shading a smidge? looking great!! {{User:Cobrasnarl/Sig2|20:24, 4/14/2024}}
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Sorry but I just noticed this now, but he needs a patch on the bottom of <- hind leg, you can see it on the deputy's image. It's a little obscured by the shading, but it's still there.
  
   
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-> ear looks a little flat imo {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|01:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC)}}
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'''reuploaded.''' {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 01:38, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
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'''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 21:11, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
   
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I would still erase some of the facial shading, as it's still obscuring the facial markings. I think the stripes overall could be a tad smoother. {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|16:55, 17 4 2024}} 16:55, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
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CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:15, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  
   
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''reups'' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 19:43, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
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==[[Minor_characters/SkyClan_and_the_Stranger#Sol.27s_tortoiseshell-and-white_sibling|Sol's tortoiseshell-and-white sibling]]Β (Ki) - CBA==
  
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[[File:SS-2.kit-2.png]]Β darn im not too keen on this one. babys first smudged shading + official art matcheroos. let me know if i named the file wrong!Β Β {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 04:22, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
  
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The colors don't really match the [[:File:Sol's_tortoiseshell_and_white_sibling.SS.png|image]], and I have some [https://vvcap.com/uXrIOhIPr screencaps] [https://vvcap.com/Eks3hRU1M for] reference. The shading also appears very blotchy overall. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 06:00, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reups!''' im not sure ive fixed the shading problem, but ive made her a tad more orange! {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 06:31, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
  
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If that's supposed to be white, can you brighten it up? It looks very gray. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 13:08, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reup'''Β turns out there was some bleed on the shading layer. desaturated the ginger patches a bit because it was bothering me {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 01:58, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reups x2!Β '''had to play around with colours to get it to match official art, whoops {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 04:29, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I don't think the patch placement matches the official art, such as [https://vvcap.com/Eks3hRU1M this] one (the bottom portion with all four of them running away from a kittypet). Looks like most of the haunch should be black, the shoulder area and above mostly orange, and the middle section being black and orange. And the tail mostly orange.
  
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I also think there's shading leaking along the bottom of the tail-tip? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 00:43, September 15, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''re-ups:''' couple of issues with this upload, but i needed feedback on patch placement. i retained theirΒ white chest because that occurs on a close-up portrait and that miight override the panels you linked me for reference? let me know if i should change it {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 10:56, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Oh that area is not the chest; it's like a shoulder area. You actually can't see it on the long-furred kit version as per the [[:File:Paleclaw.personal.png|non-tailed]] version, but you can see a tiny bit on the [[:File:Kit.short.png|shortfurred]] version. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:04, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''re-ups:''' oh no... oh dear {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 06:59, September 17, 2020 (UTC)
  
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(last thing I swear) I believe the haunch should be mostly black. The orange flank area will mostly be minimal since it's all scrunched up on this blank's pose. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:10, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reups''' <small>do you promise...</small> ill have to darken my shading a bit when i find some time but while i work on it: do the patches look okay here? {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 11:08, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Yes they do! {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:55, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reups''' good lord i had to redo shading and it looks awful {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 09:41, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I actually think it looks fine. I'd like to CBA this. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|00:34, 9/23/2020}}​
  
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'''reups''' sorry to break cba - it occurred to me that their nose was unfilledΒ {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 09:37, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Re-CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 06:11, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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==[[Chester]] (W) ~ For Approval==
  
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[[File:Chester.warrior.png]] --{{User:Silverfurries/Sig2}} 18:27, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Expand the shading overall? Maybe fiddle with the hue as it seems really purple/pink atm {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 19:09, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reuploaded.''' im not gonna expand it more on the haunch/back and the legs unless its really necessary as i like it the way it is now. --{{User:Silverfurries/Sig2}} 12:19, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Can you smooth out and lighten the shading depth on the tail? It looks like he has a black stripe going down it. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 20:19, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reuploaded.''' sorry im super late on this but pls say its ok --{{User:Silverfurries/Sig2}} 00:17, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
  
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idk if it's just me, but I think the shading style/pattern on the tail makes it look striped almost? It's probably because the shading is rough and there's rough texture involved too. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:13, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Just gonna nudge and see if you're still working on this? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|03:29, 9/24/2020}}
  
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== [[Minor characters/Graystripe's Vow#Black-and-white_tom|Black and white kittypet tom]] ~ For Evaluation ==
  
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[[File:SE-13.kittypet-1.png]]
  
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Thoughts? i had to repost this because i kept posting fan-made chararts, sorry! [[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 05:43, September 13, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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i'm pretty sure you have to withdraw the other image, and wait for it to be archived, before uploading a new one? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 05:47, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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also, ive changed your heading from for approval to for evaluation since youre a kit in the project and linked the cat. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 05:51, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Is the shading on the same layer as the pelt? it doesn't seem to be. {{User:Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 10:36, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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It needs to be smoothened out as well, and the earpink is too bright. {{User:Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 11:31, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Oh, alright! [[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 11:32, September 13, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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Re-uploaded! Tooned down the bright pink in their ear! [[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 11:55, September 13, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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unfortunately your colouring of the blank has bled over onto the lineart. does the program you're using have layers? ideally you should be doing your colouring on a separate layer under the lining :00Β other than that, you seem to be using cell shading - the shading should be much more subtle. blurring would be good but anything works!Β {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 12:27, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I can't edit it right now since my tablet needs to be charged so it should be fixed soon [[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 13:20, September 13, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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What program are you using? {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} Leopardpelt71 17:16, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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You need to reserve this on the [[Warriors_Wiki:Charart#Reservation_Table|reservation table]]. I've also renamed this to [[:File:SE-13.kittypet-1.png]] so please continue to reupload over that. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 19:08, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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The earpink, lighting and shading has overlapped the outline. The lighting needs to be smoothed out until it looks natural. {{User:Coralflame/Sig}} 20:25, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Earpink is still to bright, and also smoothen out the shading. {{User:Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 22:16, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Yes that and try too get the earpink a little more pinkish grayish. {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} Leopardpelt71 01:58, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
  
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The paws seem to be covering the lineart. {{User:Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 07:31, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Just a reminder to please not repeat comments unless you are elaborating or offering further advise. The issue with the lineart and to smooth the shading has already been repeated twice since Autumn brought it up. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 22:12, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I would expand the shading as well. {{User:.iNebula/Sig2|22:21, 9/15/2020}}Β Β 
  
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Fixed the line-art problem! [[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 22:45, September 15, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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Can you make the patches just one color? For a black cat, it should be a really dark shade of grey, almost black. And there's some waste on the patch by the belly, the tailΒ and the pawpad. {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} Leopardpelt71 00:44, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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There still appears to be lineart missing or overlapped with your pattern, such as on areas on the paw pads, along the back, and along the tail. Also, keep the file named as [[:File:SE-13.kittypet-1.png]] as that's how we keep track of the images. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 00:54, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Smoothen out the shading and define it. {{User: Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 02:02, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Is the lighter color among the back meant to be a definition of the light source? If so, turn down the opacity and blur it. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 11:15, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I would add some eyeshine to the eyes for there's none. {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} Leopardpelt71 20:58, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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What program are you using? I use GIMP, but if you use a different one the tools still may be similar enough that I can help you out in figuring out how to use them and finding a method that works for you. {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 18:36, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
  
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There is waste around the image. [[User:Iceclaw111|'''<big><big><span style="font-family:Cursive;color:#53bfee;">-Iceclaw</span></big></big>''']] ''' [[User talk:Iceclaw111|'''<sup><span style="font-family:Cursive;color:#044dff;">I Need Coffee</span></sup>''']] ''' 20:49, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Especially around the tail and belly. Can you make the shading different layers? {{User: Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 22:18, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Changed the pattern and the lighting, hopefully it's better. [[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 23:47, September 19, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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Blur the shading. {{User:Sunshade/Sig|12:34, 9/20/20}}
  
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my previous remarks about colouring bleeding over into lineart still apply to your reup, unfortunately. other than that, lower saturation on earpink and add depth to the eyes {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 01:37, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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What is the blue thing? I'm supposing the light source? {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} Leopardpelt71 02:14, September 20, 20
  
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Smoothen out the shading and the pink is still too bright. {{User: Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 04:04, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Expand the shading on the legs a bit? {{User:Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 09:34, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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darkened the ear pink and fixed the color bleeding and shading and I'm using Mediabang paint moblie if you're wondering
  
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[[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 17:49, September 21, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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youre still using cell shading? please blur or smudge the shading. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 17:52, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Where is your light source coming from? The shading on the face seems to be conflicting the shading everywhere else. {{User:.iNebula/Sig2|18:21, 9/21/2020}}Β  Β 
  
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blurred the shading!
  
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[[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 22:30, September 21, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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Your shading has gone inside the ear. If you use FireAlpaca I can help you.
  
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the shading is supposed to go inside the ear
  
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[[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 22:47, September 21, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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The shading could be black/dark gray. And I would add some black patches too. {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} Leopardpelt71 22:51, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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it's a van reverse tuxedo [[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 23:12, September 21, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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I wouldn’t do that if that’s not the description. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}
  
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The shading is still not smoothed out enough, especially on the belly. {{User: Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 02:05, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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it's a black and white kittypet tom, as long as it's black and white, it's fine. [[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 03:36, September 22, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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Fawn’s not talking about the color. {{User:Sunshade/Sig|3:40, 9/22/20}}
  
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i was talking to star, sorry for the confusion [[User:Honeynectar|Honeynectar]] ([[User talk:Honeynectar|talk]]) 04:10, September 22, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
  
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Like I said earlier, the shading needs to be black/ Dark grey. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}} Leopardpelt71 04:40, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Shadiing tint is up the user in question; and this colour is acceptable as is. Honestly, the only time someone should change a tint is when its super conflicting with colours, or clashes with the set's style/tint in question. {{Diablo./Sig2|04:43, 22/9/2020}}
  
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Oh okay. I'm just so used to seeing shading black or something else. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 16:34, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I believe the tint is fine as it is, though perhaps the light source is a bit conflicting, and shading could be smoothened out on the legs as well. {{User:Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 06:23, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Shading's leaking away from the lineart, and i think it could stand to be lightened on the white parts. {{User:.iNebula/Sig2|16:38, 9/22/2020}}
  
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haunch closest to us looks a bit flat - perhaps add some shading along the leg opposite the light source :o) {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 07:18, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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If I were you, I'd reduce the opacity of the shading. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 01:28, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Smoothen put the shading on the tail. {{User: Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 03:20, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Is this still being worked on? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|04:11, 9/25/2020}}
  
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==[[Bugeater]] (KP) ~ For Approval==
  
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[[File:Bugeater.kittypet.png]]bugeaters name is holy. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 08:52, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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liddol babey girl whom i adore. mayhap give her belly textures a smudge? theyre a bit stark at the moment {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 11:30, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Define shading overall? --{{User:Silverykittencat/Sig}} 13:44, September 16, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
  
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Smooth out the shading on the chest and I think it's also leaking. {{User:.iNebula/Sig2|15:41, 9/16/2020}}
  
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'''reup'''. i ended up completely redoing the shading. also i have to get this approved before next wednesday because im going on a school trip until october 10 so if you have any comments please post them. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 17:43, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reup''', there was waste. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 17:49, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Smooth out the shading, and define the depth overall too? I also think the white flash on the forehead is missing. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:08, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reuploaded.''' i forgot the bit of ginger above her nose as well. also, false alarm about the school trip, i can take my computer. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig|06:57, 9/18/2020}}​ 06:57, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Smooth out the shading overall? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:14, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reuploaded.''' {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 05:24, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Smooth out the shading a bit more on the face, especially the shading on the white muzzle and the side of the face. {{User:Ivybreeze/Sig}} 22:55, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Perhaps lighten the shading a bit? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 04:11, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reup.''' {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 04:26, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''reuploaded.''' i did some things. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 19:29, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I don't think there's a dorsal tail stripe on the warrior, and I think [https://vvcap.com/AHurlzNv0 this] patch is missing on the kittypet? The placement of the haunch stripes also looks a little bit off too. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:12, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  
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==[[Sunflower]] (KP) - For Approval==
  
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[[File:Sunflower.kittypet.png]] <small>left you in the dust</small> --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:00, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Expand the shading on the haunch and tail, and I think there's shading covering the --> eye? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 03:01, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
  
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No shading is touching the brown eye. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 03:03, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Could also add some shading to >> side of the arm closest to us (the screen?). It just looks a little flat in that section. {{Diablo./Sig2|08:42, 18/9/2020}}
  
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May I ask you to change the other eye color so it's not brown? Since it's an unrealistic color. If it were more on the amber side, that'd be fine. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:04, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Reuploaded''' To orange we go. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:33, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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the eye still looks very brown; perhaps try adding some depth using different colors? Usually for an amber look, I pick colors from the reddish-orange, orange, and yellow areas. Like [[:File:Bramblestar.warrior.png|Bramblestar]] {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:17, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Reuploaded''' Changed the eye to green because it looked more amazing. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:04, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Could you still add shading to where I specified earlier? It's the front of the upper arm, that's not stretched out if that helps. I also think that the shading, in general, could still use some smoothing as well. {{Diablo./Sig2|01:07, 22/9/2020}}
  
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'''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 02:00, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I really feel like there should be some shading [http://vvcap.com/7mErvr4At around this area], because it seems rather flat. I would think there'd be something there due to the lineart showing the extra fur on the haunch. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|06:36, 9/25/2020}}
  
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==[[Minor characters/Graystripe's Vow#Sandy-colored_tom|Sandy-colored tom]] (KP) - CBA==
  
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perhaps define and expand the shading? {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 10:07, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Lighten the pelt color so it looks more sandy-colored? Right now it looks closer to tawny/brown. {{User:Sleekfang/Sig2|14:34, 9/19/2020}}
  
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The shading looks fine to me. {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} Leopardpelt71 18:11, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
  
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no...i still think it could definitely be defined/darkened and expanded. especially on the belly. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 18:24, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I think I'll still disagree. {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}} Leopardpelt71 18:31, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Re-uploaded''' anyway. {{User:Sunshade/Sig}}18:33, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I still think it could be a tad lighter (see [[:File:Mousefang.star.png|Mousefang]], another sandy-colored cat), and I think the shading is fine. {{User:Sleekfang/Sig2|18:35, 9/19/2020}}
  
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The coloring is fine, sand isn't always just a lighter coloring like what I have for Mousefang. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:52, 9/19/2020}}​​​
  
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'''Reuploaded''', just fixed up some things {{User:Sunshade/Sig}}18:53, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
  
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maybe define the light source? {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 04:45, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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My light source is currently coming from <β€”β€” this direction, so can you maybe specify what you mean? I’m confused. {{User:Sunshade/Sig|5:24, 9/20/20}}
  
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make a new layer and go over where the light is falling with white. then blur/smudge the white and turn down the opacity. hope this makes sense. also, the shading on the tail should be on the other side of the tail i think. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 08:06, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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You can also just erase some shading. Not every image needs highlights. I hardly use them. But I can see the light source on this image just fine. But could you flip the tail shading since the light source is going <β€” that way. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 15:07, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Reup''' {{User:Sunshade/Sig|3:59, 9/20/20}}
  
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CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 03:51, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Sorry for breaking cba, but could you maybe add some more eye depth? {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 13:26, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Reup''' {{User:Sunshade/Sig|1:56, 9/23/20}}
  
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Re-CBA? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|06:37, 9/25/2020}}
  
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==[[Nectarsong]] (Q) - CBA==
  
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There's a tiny white patch in her earpink {{User:Leopardpelt71/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 18:27, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''re-up''' {{User:.iNebula/Sig2|18:29, 9/21/2020}}​​
  
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CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:13, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I'm so sorry for breaking the CBA but can you make the texture flow in one direction? {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 17:33, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  
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no I think it's fine it's supposed to flow how in real life, fur would go into the direction of. {{User:coralflame/Sig}}17:34, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Looks fine to me, we're going to continue from Vec's CBA. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|17:48, 9/25/2020}}
  
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==[[Minor_characters/Graystripe's_Vow#Skinny yellow BloodClan tom|Yellow BloodClan Tom]] (Ro) - For Approval==
  
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Could you smooth out the general shading? {{Diablo./Sig2|19:32, 21/9/2020}}
  
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'''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 19:43, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Define shading on the tail, or darken it a tad.
  
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'''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:44, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Could you also do that with the shading by the ear?
  
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'''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 00:36, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Actually the rest of the shading needs to be defined too.
  
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The shading seems fine to me. {{User:Sunshade/Sig|2:21, 9/22/20}}
  
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I agree with Star, actually... some definition wouldn't hurt. This pelt color is both fun and not fun to shade at the same time. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|02:50, 9/22/2020}}​​
  
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'''Reuploaded'''. How's this? {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 21:16, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  
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CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:14, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Terribly sorry for breaking the CBA (y'all know I actually hate doing it)... but could you possibly smooth out the belly shading? The edges appear rather rough and end abruptly. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|06:38, 9/25/2020}}
  
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==[[Gremlin]] (K) - For Approval==
  
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CBA? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|03:27, 9/24/2020}}​​​
  
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I'm sorry to break the CBA but can you define the shading on the tail? {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 17:35, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Reuploaded''' - just remember to change the heading from 'CBA' back to 'For Approval' if you are breaking a CBA. {{Diablo./Sig2|21:59, 24/9/2020}}
  
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One more thing, could you add some shading to the paw? {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 22:13, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Which one? They all have shading, it’s the same shading I’ve used on [[:File:Scourge.kit.png|here]]. {{Diablo./Sig2|22:15, 24/9/2020}}
  
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The one in the front {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 22:29, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Reuploaded''' - it has shading, I've just added a little bit more. {{Diablo./Sig2|22:44, 24/9/2020}}
  
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==[[Minor characters/SkyClan and the Stranger#Black and white rogue|Black and white rogue]] (Ro) ~ For evaluation==
  
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Can you add some nosepink? {{User:Sunshade/Sig|11:50, 9/22/20}}
  
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The ear pink is too bright. {{User: Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 00:16, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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The ear pink is fine; I've used colors similar on my own black-and-white cats. If it's smudged or shading is added to the ears, it'll look perfectly normal. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|00:23, 9/23/2020}}​​
  
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I believe the shading could be smoothened on the belly, expanded on the front legs and slightly darkened on back legs, it’s slightly over blurred. {{User: Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 00:31, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''ReupsΒ '''Β I hope it's a little better. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 21:16, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I still can't see any nosepink? Or am I simply blind. {{User:Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 21:26, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Ugh I forgot again. How's the shading? {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 21:30, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''ReupsΒ '''added it finally! {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 21:32, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I feel like it's slightly leaky on the chest, but I get it's hard;it's a black and white cat. {{User:fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 21:47, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Is the shading on the legs okay? I'll get to the chest as soon as I can. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 21:49, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I feel like it could be smoothed out a bit? Also, there's a white path near the start of the tail, I believe it should be black? {{User:Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 22:08, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Reup'''Β Better? {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 22:26, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Smooth out the shading a bit more, add a little more to the face, and possibly lighten it a bit? --{{User:Silverykittencat/Sig}} 12:39, September 24, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
  
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'''ReupsΒ '''Better? I kinda destroyed the white chest with the shading lol. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 18:05, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Add some nosepink to it? {{User:Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 21:07, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Reups'''Β why does it keep disappearing every time? Weird. How's the shading? I'm not happy with it. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 21:58, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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'''Reuploaded'''Β better? {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 22:02, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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I'm going to redo the whole thing: May take some time. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 03:01, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  
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==[[Fang]] (K) ~ For Approval==
  
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[[File:Fang.kit.png]] This gave me more trouble than necessary but oh well. I'll probably be fiddling with the shading later on.
  
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forgive me if this is trivial but i think the density of the texturing could be increased a little, especially around the eyes? because theyre so parallel it does just look like translucent lines esp with this patterning, at least to my untrained eye :’) and yeah i agree that shading could be smoothened out but you already knew that {{User:Autumnbright/Signature2}} 07:10, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Can you maybe brighten the nosepink a bit? Its looking a little like the pelt color. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 15:06, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Scrap that, nosepink is fine I wasn't lookin close enough. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Leopardpelt71 20:57, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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==[[Chester]] (KP) ~ For Evaluation==
  
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You need to reserve this on the reservation table, the image isn’t named correctly, and please don’t thumb your images. And the image also lacks shading. {{User:Sunshade/Sig|2:30, 9/24/20}}
  
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This needs to match the [[:File:Chester.warrior.png|warrior]] and be long-furred. The blank also appears to be the wrong size. Also, please continue to reupload over [[:File:Chester.kittypet.png]] {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:36, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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The earpink and nosepink needs to be a bit darker. {{User: Fawn that Crosses Stream/Sig}}--Fawn that Crosses Stream 03:18, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Please try to avoid repeating comments as I already stated it needed to match the warrior. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 03:24, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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He needs texture, since his warrior image has it. And where's yuor light source? {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 15:12, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Sleek does that mean light source too? And there's some waste by the back paw. {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 22:08, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
  
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==[[Minor_characters/SkyClan_and_the_Stranger#Rogue_leader|Rogue leader]] (L) - For Evaluation==
  
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'''Reups''' twice changed the nosepink made the face shading a bit lighter, darkened stripes to make them more visible and lightened shading.{{User:Coralflame/Sig}}14:45, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  
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Define the shading? I can’t really see it. {{User:Sleekfang/Sig2|14:53, 9/25/2020}}
  
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Can you blur the stripes a bit? {{User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig}}Β Leopardpelt71 17:44, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
  

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Stempaw (ASC).apprentice these stripes did not want to be done Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 02:15, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

the stripes could he thinner un some places, smoother and imo toned down. β˜… Winter β˜… Just say my name! Β»03:36, 2 April 2024 (UTC)Β«

I think the stripes need smudging

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i think the paler parts should be more smoothen out, on the kit it kinda seems like it’s fading into the orange. Great job, nice to see how far you’ve come! Tabbies are tough but you can do it^^ ~Ripple β˜† 05:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

reups Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 19:31, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

The stripes overall should be more close together and wavy - I know Stempaw's design is slightly based off his father's stripes. Vec I am Iron Man! πŸ‘Ύ 14:48, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

reups Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 17:07, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

I think highlights could be lightened or removed since they throw off the base a bit, and looking at the kit, there also seems to be a paler gradient underneath the stripes that’s visible on the haunch, paws, face, and tail. - arenzel β­‘β­‘β­‘ 00:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

it might just be me but i think theres leaking shading near the bottom of the chest where it meets the > front leg ✧Winter✧ 21:47, 4/04/2024

Could u maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and <- hind leg? Love the eyes :0Dawnleaf of river 05:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)

reups Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 16:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)

Shading could be expanded and defined slightly overall β€”Illusion β˜„. *. ⋆ 14:11, 4/07/2024

I believe he is supposed to have a dorsal tail stripe too. Could you also reduce the shine in the eyes? I think you have a top and bottom part, and having them both restricts the visibility of the pupil and the eye color Vec I am Iron Man! πŸ‘Ύ 20:35, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

define the eye depth a bit? β˜… Winter β˜… Just say my name! Β»21:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)Β«

reups Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 21:49, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

CBA? β€”Jayce(18:49, 4/9/2024)

sorry, but the stripes could be softer and the tail markings could be defined. the earpink doesn’t seem to match, but that could be shading. the eyes don’t seem to match either? the kits eyes are a brighter, more contrasting grrrn and this images seems fuller and darker. the shading could be smoothed overall as well imo. β™₯ willowthroat β€ži am starclan!β€œ 19:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC)

alsoo i feel like the light mustache looking part (idk what else to call it srry) looksout of place β˜… Winter β˜… Just say my name! Β»00:01, 10 April 2024 (UTC)Β«

I think the muzzle is fine. We don't see a ton of it on the kit so this might fall under artists choice. β€”Illusion β˜„. *. ⋆ 01:12, 4/10/2024

on the kit, there is no mustache as you have here. the muzzle is paler, but not swept out (can’t think of anything else to describe it as lol) as you have it here. to some extent, you can keep the mustache effect on the (<-) side of the muzzle but remove on the (->) side of the muzzle. (i think) β™₯ willowthroat β€ži am starclan!β€œ 18:04, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

The face is also really dark so I think removing some of the shading might help overall as well Vec I am Iron Man! πŸ‘Ύ 18:32, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

reups changed the eyes for the more vibrant colorpick to be the main color. ears are mainly a shading thing. Also smoothed the shading, and the mustache thing is mainly a lighter face thing from the kit's markings. Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 18:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

I think the paler gradient under the stripes could be defined/lightened a bit, since I'm color picking #C7853D at the lightest part on the kit. The stripes also seem to have a gradient from the top to bottom on the kit, where it's darker/redder near the back. - arenzel β­‘β­‘β­‘ 22:34, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

The shading on the face is still very dark and is making it hard to see the face details. I might also suggest making the eye shine smaller on the right (our left) eye. Eggheart!πŸ₯A True Warrior 23:58, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

reups the main pelt gradient was off bc i had forgotten to turn it back on after editing ^^ Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 19:20, 12 April 2024 (UTC)

Define the earpink color and shading a bit? It looks pretty flat rn β€”Illusion β˜„. *. ⋆ 12:40, 4/13/2024

reups Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 21:45, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

imo my comment still stands about the leaky shading on the chest, where the furthest front leg meets the chest. β™₯ willowthroat β€ži am starclan!β€œ 21:48, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

reups should be gone now ^^ Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 23:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

i don’t know if you saw where i ment, so [1] <- this should help β™₯ willowthroat β€ži am starclan!β€œ 00:39, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

can you define the tail shading a smidge? looking great!! β€”Cobrasnarl β™‘β™‘ (20:24, 4/14/2024)

-> ear looks a little flat imo β˜… Winter β˜… Just say my name! Β»01:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC)Β«

reups Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 21:11, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

I would still erase some of the facial shading, as it's still obscuring the facial markings. I think the stripes overall could be a tad smoother. Vec I am Iron Man! πŸ‘Ύ 16:55, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

reups Brambleheart β™₯ β™« 19:43, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

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