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Stempaw (A) - For Approval

these stripes did not want to be done Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 02:15, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

the stripes could he thinner un some places, smoother and imo toned down. ★ Winter ★ ^{Just say my name!} »03:36, 2 April 2024 (UTC)«

I think the stripes need smudging

EaglesOfAdrestia (talk)

03:47, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

i think the paler parts should be more smoothen out, on the kit it kinda seems like it’s fading into the orange. Great job, nice to see how far you’ve come! Tabbies are tough but you can do it^^ ~Ripple ☆ 05:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

reups Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 19:31, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

The stripes overall should be more close together and wavy - I know Stempaw's design is slightly based off his father's stripes. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 14:48, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

reups Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 17:07, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

I think highlights could be lightened or removed since they throw off the base a bit, and looking at the kit, there also seems to be a paler gradient underneath the stripes that’s visible on the haunch, paws, face, and tail. - arenzel _⭑⭑⭑ 00:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

it might just be me but i think theres leaking shading near the bottom of the chest where it meets the > front leg ✧Winter✧ 21:47, 4/04/2024

Could u maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and <- hind leg? Love the eyes :0Dawnleaf ^{of river} 05:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)

reups Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 16:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)

Shading could be expanded and defined slightly overall —Illusion ^{☄. *. ⋆ 14:11, 4/07/2024}

I believe he is supposed to have a dorsal tail stripe too. Could you also reduce the shine in the eyes? I think you have a top and bottom part, and having them both restricts the visibility of the pupil and the eye color Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:35, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

define the eye depth a bit? ★ Winter ★ ^{Just say my name!} »21:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)«

reups Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 21:49, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(18:49, 4/9/2024)

sorry, but the stripes could be softer and the tail markings could be defined. the earpink doesn’t seem to match, but that could be shading. the eyes don’t seem to match either? the kits eyes are a brighter, more contrasting grrrn and this images seems fuller and darker. the shading could be smoothed overall as well imo. _♥ willowthroat ^{„i am starclan!“} 19:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC)

alsoo i feel like the light mustache looking part (idk what else to call it srry) looksout of place ★ Winter ★ ^{Just say my name!} »00:01, 10 April 2024 (UTC)«

I think the muzzle is fine. We don't see a ton of it on the kit so this might fall under artists choice. —Illusion ^{☄. *. ⋆ 01:12, 4/10/2024}

on the kit, there is no mustache as you have here. the muzzle is paler, but not swept out (can’t think of anything else to describe it as lol) as you have it here. to some extent, you can keep the mustache effect on the (<-) side of the muzzle but remove on the (->) side of the muzzle. (i think) _♥ willowthroat ^{„i am starclan!“} 18:04, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

The face is also really dark so I think removing some of the shading might help overall as well Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:32, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

reups changed the eyes for the more vibrant colorpick to be the main color. ears are mainly a shading thing. Also smoothed the shading, and the mustache thing is mainly a lighter face thing from the kit's markings. Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 18:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

I think the paler gradient under the stripes could be defined/lightened a bit, since I'm color picking #C7853D at the lightest part on the kit. The stripes also seem to have a gradient from the top to bottom on the kit, where it's darker/redder near the back. - arenzel _⭑⭑⭑ 22:34, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

The shading on the face is still very dark and is making it hard to see the face details. I might also suggest making the eye shine smaller on the right (our left) eye. Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 23:58, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

reups the main pelt gradient was off bc i had forgotten to turn it back on after editing ^^ Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 19:20, 12 April 2024 (UTC)

Define the earpink color and shading a bit? It looks pretty flat rn —Illusion ^{☄. *. ⋆ 12:40, 4/13/2024}

reups Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 21:45, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

imo my comment still stands about the leaky shading on the chest, where the furthest front leg meets the chest. _♥ willowthroat ^{„i am starclan!“} 21:48, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

reups should be gone now ^^ Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 23:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

i don’t know if you saw where i ment, so [1] <- this should help _♥ willowthroat ^{„i am starclan!“} 00:39, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

can you define the tail shading a smidge? looking great!! —Cobrasnarl ^♡_♡ (20:24, 4/14/2024)

-> ear looks a little flat imo ★ Winter ★ ^{Just say my name!} »01:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC)«

reups Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 21:11, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

I would still erase some of the facial shading, as it's still obscuring the facial markings. I think the stripes overall could be a tad smoother. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:55, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

reups Brambleheart ^{♥ ♫} 19:43, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

could you maybe define the face shading? _♥ willowthroat ^{„i am starclan!“} 11:39, 19 April 2024 (UTC)