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BloodClan Blanks - For Approval
here's these bad boys; the pose is from a ref that I can provide if need be. — max it is the real thing, (00:53, 29/8/2020)
I think the legs are a bit...bulky if you know what i mean? The top of the front legs should be thinner, if that makes any sense. —Cypressduskツ(text) 12:49, August 29, 2020 (UTC)
this is my reference for the whole pose; so I think, speaking from an anatomical view, the legs are fine as is? There's also a fair bit of perspective in this pose, so its all on angle, but when the blank is filled in, the legs don't look as awkward or wide. — max it is the real thing, (09:17, 30/8/2020)
Given pretty much all of the BloodClan cats seem to be shown with teeth in their collars in the graphic novels.. should we actually just add the teeth into the blank to start with? It might help in the long run. —Jayce(01:24, 9/01/2020)
reuploaded - how's that? — max it is the real thing, (05:09, 01/9/2020)
Can you define the first pawpad on the paw that's sticking out, and also smooth out the mouth lineart a little bit? Also maybe define a tongue for easy definition in the future. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (05:25, 9/02/2020) ♡ we cast 're free!" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?Until their ends, our candles burn, until we're free!?">off tomorrow! (05:25, 9/02/2020)
Im pretty sure they should have dog teeth claws? —Cypressduskツ(text) 09:16, September 7, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded - hopefully I got what you meant echo ;-; also I added in the claws to the front paws only because, unless I'm mistaken, not all of them have claws on their back paws? — max it is the real thing, (09:41, 07/9/2020)
The cheek fluff looks a bit funky on our left. Maybe lower it down a little. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith3:03 Thu Sep 10 2020
reuploaded - hows that? — max it is the real thing, (06:26, 11/9/2020)
On the longhair, a tooth from the collar is going over the cheek fur, if that makes sense. I dont think that should be there? —Cypressduskツ(text) 11:47, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
I disagree. If you lower the tooth it'd look like it's coming from the bottom, and the collars have alternating teeth going up and down (Hope this makes sense!) —Sakura ✧.* () --Leopardpelt71 01:12, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
I'm genuinely confused? What do you guys want me to do? Because Leopard, I'm pretty certain Cypress is asking me to move the tooth to be below the cheek fluff, which makes sense and I'll probably get to in the next day or so - but your comment has gotten me scratching my head. — max it is the real thing, (08:45, 18/9/2020)
Here's what I mean: So typically when you have the teeth on the collar, the teeth alternate going up and down. That means that one tooth is hanging down, then the next tooth hangs up, etc. And I'll change what I said; the collar on the cheek fur can be lowered but not much/ —Sakura ✧.* () --Leopardpelt71 01:32, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
The collar seems fine to me. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»02:03, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
Forgive me if this was said already but i think the cheek on < side of both blanks need to extend out further ✧Winter✧ 13:21, 9/19/2020
Reuploaded - I did try to fiddle with the cheek, but when I did it didn't look right on the shorthair, so for the time being, I'd like a second opinion for that cheek? — max it is the real thing, (08:54, 20/9/2020)
I think the faces match the references pretty well, so I don't know if that really needs to be changed. —Jayce(03:16, 9/21/2020)
Fang (KP) - CBA
~Ripple ☆ 22:53, September 3, 2020 (UTC)
He's missing texture. The earpink I feel could be lightened a tad to match the deputy too. He's also missing his lighter gray belly/chest/muzzle. The shading could also be smoothed out a bit too. His left eye looks a little odd too, I'm guessing it's the eyeshine placement, but could you correct that?
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 23:01, September 3, 2020 (UTC)
I also think the tail patch placement should be flipped vertically as the base appears on the underside of the tail on the deputy. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:26, September 4, 2020 (UTC)
reup ~Ripple ☆ 04:25, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
There should be a lighter patch on the tail tip, no? —Jayce(01:51, 9/07/2020)
There should be a lighter patch on the tail tip, yes. I think the texture could be defined a small bit too. By "his left eye", I meant from Fang's left. The other eye was fine, but the left one still looks odd. The patch on his tail I feel should curve some more too, like the deputy's (I can give a redline if you'd like). I also don't know if this happens to be the blank/shading placement, but his gray belly looks a bit off? Could just be me.
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 01:00, September 8, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. i'd like the redline, please. ~Ripple ☆ 15:27, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
here you are. Tbh it's really the patch closer to the start of the tail that I feel needs to curve slightly more.
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 16:24, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. thanks ~Ripple ☆ 02:11, September 17, 2020 (UTC)
Sorry but I just noticed this now, but he needs a patch on the bottom of <- hind leg, you can see it on the deputy's image. It's a little obscured by the shading, but it's still there.
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 05:07, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 01:38, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:15, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Sol's tortoiseshell-and-white sibling (Ki) - CBA
darn im not too keen on this one. babys first smudged shading + official art matcheroos. let me know if i named the file wrong! —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 04:22, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
The colors don't really match the image, and I have some screencaps for reference. The shading also appears very blotchy overall. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 06:00, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
reups! im not sure ive fixed the shading problem, but ive made her a tad more orange! —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 06:31, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
If that's supposed to be white, can you brighten it up? It looks very gray. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:08, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
reup turns out there was some bleed on the shading layer. desaturated the ginger patches a bit because it was bothering me —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 01:58, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
reups x2! had to play around with colours to get it to match official art, whoops —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 04:29, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
I don't think the patch placement matches the official art, such as this one (the bottom portion with all four of them running away from a kittypet). Looks like most of the haunch should be black, the shoulder area and above mostly orange, and the middle section being black and orange. And the tail mostly orange.
I also think there's shading leaking along the bottom of the tail-tip? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:43, September 15, 2020 (UTC)
re-ups: couple of issues with this upload, but i needed feedback on patch placement. i retained their white chest because that occurs on a close-up portrait and that miight override the panels you linked me for reference? let me know if i should change it —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 10:56, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
Oh that area is not the chest; it's like a shoulder area. You actually can't see it on the long-furred kit version as per the non-tailed version, but you can see a tiny bit on the shortfurred version. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:04, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
re-ups: oh no... oh dear —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 06:59, September 17, 2020 (UTC)
(last thing I swear) I believe the haunch should be mostly black. The orange flank area will mostly be minimal since it's all scrunched up on this blank's pose. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:10, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
reups do you promise... ill have to darken my shading a bit when i find some time but while i work on it: do the patches look okay here? —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 11:08, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Yes they do! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:55, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
reups good lord i had to redo shading and it looks awful —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 09:41, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
I actually think it looks fine. I'd like to CBA this. —Jayce(00:34, 9/23/2020)
reups sorry to break cba - it occurred to me that their nose was unfilled —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 09:37, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Re-CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 06:11, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Chester (W) ~ For Approval
--Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 18:27, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
Expand the shading overall? Maybe fiddle with the hue as it seems really purple/pink atm Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:09, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. im not gonna expand it more on the haunch/back and the legs unless its really necessary as i like it the way it is now. --Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 12:19, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
Can you smooth out and lighten the shading depth on the tail? It looks like he has a black stripe going down it. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:19, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. sorry im super late on this but pls say its ok --Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 00:17, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
idk if it's just me, but I think the shading style/pattern on the tail makes it look striped almost? It's probably because the shading is rough and there's rough texture involved too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:13, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
Just gonna nudge and see if you're still working on this? —Jayce(03:29, 9/24/2020)
Black and white kittypet tom ~ For Evaluation
Thoughts? i had to repost this because i kept posting fan-made chararts, sorry! Honeynectar (talk) 05:43, September 13, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
i'm pretty sure you have to withdraw the other image, and wait for it to be archived, before uploading a new one? ~Ripple ☆ 05:47, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
also, ive changed your heading from for approval to for evaluation since youre a kit in the project and linked the cat. —Cypressduskツ(text) 05:51, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
Is the shading on the same layer as the pelt? it doesn't seem to be. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 10:36, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
It needs to be smoothened out as well, and the earpink is too bright. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 11:31, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
Oh, alright! Honeynectar (talk) 11:32, September 13, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
Re-uploaded! Tooned down the bright pink in their ear! Honeynectar (talk) 11:55, September 13, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
unfortunately your colouring of the blank has bled over onto the lineart. does the program you're using have layers? ideally you should be doing your colouring on a separate layer under the lining :00 other than that, you seem to be using cell shading - the shading should be much more subtle. blurring would be good but anything works! —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 12:27, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
I can't edit it right now since my tablet needs to be charged so it should be fixed soon Honeynectar (talk) 13:20, September 13, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
What program are you using? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 17:16, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
You need to reserve this on the reservation table. I've also renamed this to File:SE-13.kittypet-1.png so please continue to reupload over that. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:08, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
The earpink, lighting and shading has overlapped the outline. The lighting needs to be smoothed out until it looks natural. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望 20:25, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
Earpink is still to bright, and also smoothen out the shading. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 22:16, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
Yes that and try too get the earpink a little more pinkish grayish. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 01:58, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
The paws seem to be covering the lineart. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 07:31, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
Just a reminder to please not repeat comments unless you are elaborating or offering further advise. The issue with the lineart and to smooth the shading has already been repeated twice since Autumn brought it up. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:12, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
I would expand the shading as well. ♥ Star red and black ♥<22:21, 9/15/2020>
Fixed the line-art problem! Honeynectar (talk) 22:45, September 15, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
Can you make the patches just one color? For a black cat, it should be a really dark shade of grey, almost black. And there's some waste on the patch by the belly, the tail and the pawpad. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 00:44, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
There still appears to be lineart missing or overlapped with your pattern, such as on areas on the paw pads, along the back, and along the tail. Also, keep the file named as File:SE-13.kittypet-1.png as that's how we keep track of the images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:54, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
Smoothen out the shading and define it. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 02:02, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
Is the lighter color among the back meant to be a definition of the light source? If so, turn down the opacity and blur it. —Cypressduskツ(text) 11:15, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
I would add some eyeshine to the eyes for there's none. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 20:58, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
What program are you using? I use GIMP, but if you use a different one the tools still may be similar enough that I can help you out in figuring out how to use them and finding a method that works for you. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 18:36, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
There is waste around the image. -Iceclaw I Need Coffee 20:49, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
Especially around the tail and belly. Can you make the shading different layers? ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 22:18, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
Changed the pattern and the lighting, hopefully it's better. Honeynectar (talk) 23:47, September 19, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
Blur the shading. ♡ Dharma ♡ «12:34, 9/20/20»
my previous remarks about colouring bleeding over into lineart still apply to your reup, unfortunately. other than that, lower saturation on earpink and add depth to the eyes —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 01:37, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
What is the blue thing? I'm supposing the light source? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 02:14, September 20, 20 20 (UTC)
Smoothen out the shading and the pink is still too bright. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 04:04, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
Expand the shading on the legs a bit? ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 09:34, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
darkened the ear pink and fixed the color bleeding and shading and I'm using Mediabang paint moblie if you're wondering
Honeynectar (talk) 17:49, September 21, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
youre still using cell shading? please blur or smudge the shading. —Cypressduskツ(text) 17:52, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Where is your light source coming from? The shading on the face seems to be conflicting the shading everywhere else. ♥ Star red and black ♥<18:21, 9/21/2020>
blurred the shading!
Honeynectar (talk) 22:30, September 21, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
Your shading has gone inside the ear. If you use FireAlpaca I can help you.
—Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 22:45, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
the shading is supposed to go inside the ear
Honeynectar (talk) 22:47, September 21, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
The shading could be black/dark gray. And I would add some black patches too. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 22:51, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
it's a van reverse tuxedo Honeynectar (talk) 23:12, September 21, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
I wouldn’t do that if that’s not the description. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 00:15, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
The shading is still not smoothed out enough, especially on the belly. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 02:05, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
it's a black and white kittypet tom, as long as it's black and white, it's fine. Honeynectar (talk) 03:36, September 22, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
Fawn’s not talking about the color. ♡ Dharma ♡ «3:40, 9/22/20»
i was talking to star, sorry for the confusion Honeynectar (talk) 04:10, September 22, 2020 (UTC)Honeynectar
Like I said earlier, the shading needs to be black/ Dark grey. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 04:40, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
Shadiing tint is up the user in question; and this colour is acceptable as is. Honestly, the only time someone should change a tint is when its super conflicting with colours, or clashes with the set's style/tint in question. — max it is the real thing, (04:43, 22/9/2020)
Oh okay. I'm just so used to seeing shading black or something else. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 16:34, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
I believe the tint is fine as it is, though perhaps the light source is a bit conflicting, and shading could be smoothened out on the legs as well. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 06:23, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
Shading's leaking away from the lineart, and i think it could stand to be lightened on the white parts. ♥ Star red and black ♥<16:38, 9/22/2020>
haunch closest to us looks a bit flat - perhaps add some shading along the leg opposite the light source :o) —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 07:18, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
If I were you, I'd reduce the opacity of the shading. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 01:28, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Smoothen put the shading on the tail. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 03:20, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Is this still being worked on? —Jayce(04:11, 9/25/2020)
Bugeater (KP) ~ For Approval
bugeaters name is holy. —Cypressduskツ(text) 08:52, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
liddol babey girl whom i adore. mayhap give her belly textures a smudge? theyre a bit stark at the moment —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 11:30, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
Define shading overall? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 13:44, September 16, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
Smooth out the shading on the chest and I think it's also leaking. ♥ Star red and black ♥<15:41, 9/16/2020>
reup. i ended up completely redoing the shading. also i have to get this approved before next wednesday because im going on a school trip until october 10 so if you have any comments please post them. —Cypressduskツ(text) 17:43, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
reup, there was waste. —Cypressduskツ(text) 17:49, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading, and define the depth overall too? I also think the white flash on the forehead is missing. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:08, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. i forgot the bit of ginger above her nose as well. also, false alarm about the school trip, i can take my computer. —Cypressduskツ(text) 06:57, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading overall? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:14, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. —Cypressduskツ(text) 05:24, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a bit more on the face, especially the shading on the white muzzle and the side of the face. —Ivy ☆ 22:55, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Perhaps lighten the shading a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:11, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
reup. —Cypressduskツ(text) 04:26, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. i did some things. —Cypressduskツ(text) 19:29, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
I don't think there's a dorsal tail stripe on the warrior, and I think this patch is missing on the kittypet? The placement of the haunch stripes also looks a little bit off too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:12, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Sunflower (KP) - For Approval
left you in the dust --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:00, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
Expand the shading on the haunch and tail, and I think there's shading covering the --> eye? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:01, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
No shading is touching the brown eye. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 03:03, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
Could also add some shading to >> side of the arm closest to us (the screen?). It just looks a little flat in that section. — max it is the real thing, (08:42, 18/9/2020)
May I ask you to change the other eye color so it's not brown? Since it's an unrealistic color. If it were more on the amber side, that'd be fine. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:04, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded To orange we go. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:33, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
the eye still looks very brown; perhaps try adding some depth using different colors? Usually for an amber look, I pick colors from the reddish-orange, orange, and yellow areas. Like Bramblestar Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:17, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Changed the eye to green because it looked more amazing. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:04, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
Could you still add shading to where I specified earlier? It's the front of the upper arm, that's not stretched out if that helps. I also think that the shading, in general, could still use some smoothing as well. — max it is the real thing, (01:07, 22/9/2020)
Reuploaded --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:00, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
I really feel like there should be some shading around this area, because it seems rather flat. I would think there'd be something there due to the lineart showing the extra fur on the haunch. —Jayce(06:36, 9/25/2020)
Sandy-colored tom (KP) - CBA
♡ Dharma ♡ «»06:09, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
perhaps define and expand the shading? —Cypressduskツ(text) 10:07, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
Lighten the pelt color so it looks more sandy-colored? Right now it looks closer to tawny/brown. —SleekfangThe future is ours to decide(14:34, 9/19/2020)
The shading looks fine to me. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 18:11, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
no...i still think it could definitely be defined/darkened and expanded. especially on the belly. —Cypressduskツ(text) 18:24, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
I think I'll still disagree. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 18:31, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
Re-uploaded anyway. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»18:33, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
I still think it could be a tad lighter (see Mousefang, another sandy-colored cat), and I think the shading is fine. —SleekfangThe future is ours to decide(18:35, 9/19/2020)
The coloring is fine, sand isn't always just a lighter coloring like what I have for Mousefang. —Jayce(18:52, 9/19/2020)
Reuploaded, just fixed up some things ♡ Dharma ♡ «»18:53, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
maybe define the light source? —Cypressduskツ(text) 04:45, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
My light source is currently coming from <—— this direction, so can you maybe specify what you mean? I’m confused. ♡ Dharma ♡ «5:24, 9/20/20»
make a new layer and go over where the light is falling with white. then blur/smudge the white and turn down the opacity. hope this makes sense. also, the shading on the tail should be on the other side of the tail i think. —Cypressduskツ(text) 08:06, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
You can also just erase some shading. Not every image needs highlights. I hardly use them. But I can see the light source on this image just fine. But could you flip the tail shading since the light source is going <— that way. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:07, September 20, 2020 (UTC)
Reup ♡ Dharma ♡ «3:59, 9/20/20»
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:51, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Sorry for breaking cba, but could you maybe add some more eye depth? —Cypressduskツ(text) 13:26, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Reup ♡ Dharma ♡ «1:56, 9/23/20»
Re-CBA? —Jayce(06:37, 9/25/2020)
Nectarsong (Q) ~ For Approval
might fiddle around with the texture ♥ Star red and black ♥<18:17, 9/21/2020>
There's a tiny white patch in her earpink —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 18:27, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
re-up ♥ Star red and black ♥<18:29, 9/21/2020>
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:13, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
I'm so sorry for breaking the CBA but can you make the texture flow in one direction? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 17:33, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
no I think it's fine it's supposed to flow how in real life, fur would go into the direction of. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望17:34, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Yellow BloodClan Tom (Ro) - For Approval
Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:51, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Could you smooth out the general shading? — max it is the real thing, (19:32, 21/9/2020)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:43, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Define shading on the tail, or darken it a tad.
—Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 19:50, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:44, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Could you also do that with the shading by the ear?
—Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 22:30, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:36, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
Actually the rest of the shading needs to be defined too.
—Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 02:19, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
The shading seems fine to me. ♡ Dharma ♡ «2:21, 9/22/20»
I agree with Star, actually... some definition wouldn't hurt. This pelt color is both fun and not fun to shade at the same time. —Jayce(02:50, 9/22/2020)
Reuploaded. How's this? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:16, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:14, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Terribly sorry for breaking the CBA (y'all know I actually hate doing it)... but could you possibly smooth out the belly shading? The edges appear rather rough and end abruptly. —Jayce(06:38, 9/25/2020)
Gremlin (K) - For Approval
babey (also first charart on the new pc :o) — max it is the real thing, (04:31, 22/9/2020)
CBA? —Jayce(03:27, 9/24/2020)
I'm sorry to break the CBA but can you define the shading on the tail? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 17:35, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded - just remember to change the heading from 'CBA' back to 'For Approval' if you are breaking a CBA. — max it is the real thing, (21:59, 24/9/2020)
One more thing, could you add some shading to the paw? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 22:13, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Which one? They all have shading, it’s the same shading I’ve used on here. — max it is the real thing, (22:15, 24/9/2020)
The one in the front —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 22:29, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded - it has shading, I've just added a little bit more. — max it is the real thing, (22:44, 24/9/2020)
Black and white rogue (Ro) ~ For evaluation
Not to happy with this. And I don't know if this is named correctly. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 19:40, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
Can you add some nosepink? ♡ Dharma ♡ «11:50, 9/22/20»
The ear pink is too bright. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 00:16, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
The ear pink is fine; I've used colors similar on my own black-and-white cats. If it's smudged or shading is added to the ears, it'll look perfectly normal. —Jayce(00:23, 9/23/2020)
I believe the shading could be smoothened on the belly, expanded on the front legs and slightly darkened on back legs, it’s slightly over blurred. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 00:31, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Reups I hope it's a little better. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 21:16, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
I still can't see any nosepink? Or am I simply blind. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 21:26, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Ugh I forgot again. How's the shading? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 21:30, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Reups added it finally! —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 21:32, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
I feel like it's slightly leaky on the chest, but I get it's hard;it's a black and white cat. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 21:47, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Is the shading on the legs okay? I'll get to the chest as soon as I can. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 21:49, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
I feel like it could be smoothed out a bit? Also, there's a white path near the start of the tail, I believe it should be black? ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 22:08, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Reup Better? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 22:26, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a bit more, add a little more to the face, and possibly lighten it a bit? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 12:39, September 24, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
Reups Better? I kinda destroyed the white chest with the shading lol. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 18:05, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Add some nosepink to it? ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 21:07, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Reups why does it keep disappearing every time? Weird. How's the shading? I'm not happy with it. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 21:58, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading on the chest. ♡ Dharma ♡ «10:00, 9/24/20»
Reuploaded better? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 22:02, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
could still use some expansion and smoothing everywhere, really, but particularly on the legs. perhaps try lowering the opacity of your shading layer —autumn get thee to a psychiatrist! 22:49, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
I'm going to redo the whole thing: May take some time. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 03:01, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Fang (K) ~ For Approval
This gave me more trouble than necessary but oh well. I'll probably be fiddling with the shading later on.
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 21:59, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
forgive me if this is trivial but i think the density of the texturing could be increased a little, especially around the eyes? because theyre so parallel it does just look like translucent lines esp with this patterning, at least to my untrained eye :’) and yeah i agree that shading could be smoothened out but you already knew that —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 07:10, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Can you maybe brighten the nosepink a bit? Its looking a little like the pelt color. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 15:06, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Scrap that, nosepink is fine I wasn't lookin close enough. —Sakura ✧.* ()Leopardpelt71 20:57, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Chester (KP) ~ For Evaluation
For approval - contact 🍦❄️꧁༺Icestripe ༻꧂ ❄️🍦 (talk) 02:19, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
You need to reserve this on the reservation table, the image isn’t named correctly, and please don’t thumb your images. And the image also lacks shading. ♡ Dharma ♡ «2:30, 9/24/20»
This needs to match the warrior and be long-furred. The blank also appears to be the wrong size. Also, please continue to reupload over File:Chester.kittypet.png Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:36, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
The earpink and nosepink needs to be a bit darker. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--Fawn that Crosses Stream 03:18, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Please try to avoid repeating comments as I already stated it needed to match the warrior. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:24, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
He needs texture, since his warrior image has it. And where's yuor light source? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 15:12, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Star, it has already been stated that this image lacks shading and needs to match the warrior. —SleekfangThe future is ours to decide(15:24, 9/24/2020)
Sleek does that mean light source too? And there's some waste by the back paw. —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 22:08, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
I mean, light source kind of implies shading. ♥ Star red and black ♥<22:11, 9/24/2020>
If the image doesn’t have shading, then they wouldn’t have a light source. —SleekfangThe future is ours to decide(22:30, 9/24/2020)
Rogue leader (L) - For Evaluation
File:Rogue leader.png Going to tweak with shading and make the entire thing a bit lighter. It's not named properly, could someone change it for me?~Coralflame暗黒 絶望14:40, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Reups twice changed the nosepink made the face shading a bit lighter, darkened stripes to make them more visible and lightened shading.~Coralflame暗黒 絶望14:45, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Define the shading? I can’t really see it. —SleekfangThe future is ours to decide(14:53, 9/25/2020)
Reups~Coralflame暗黒 絶望15:05, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Can you blur the stripes a bit? —Sakura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 17:44, September 25, 2020 (UTC)