Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

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Gray BloodClan cat (Ro) - For Evaluation

my first charart! hope its good ~Cypressdusk ^{giving away free gift cards here!} 03:27, July 27, 2020 (UTC)

Darken shading a bit? --Silverfeather ^{Be Happy!} 16:14, July 27, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Reuploaded. Is it the right shade now? ~Cypressdusk ^{giving away free gift cards here!} 17:51, July 27, 2020 (UTC)

The teeth need to be more towards the center of the collar. -Iceclaw ^{I Need Coffee} 18:53, July 27, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also tweaked the shading a bit ~Cypressdusk ^{giving away free gift cards here!} 19:04, July 27, 2020 (UTC)

The shading is overblurred and lacks a defined light source, especially on the legs. Remove the shading from the eye too. The collar could also be a tad thinner too. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:07, July 27, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I changed the shading, and made the collar thinner. Also made the light source more defined. Anything else?~Cypressdusk ^{giving away free gift cards here!} 21:49, July 27, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tweaked the shading a bit more~Cypressdusk ^{giving away free gift cards here!} 00:21, July 28, 2020 (UTC)

Define shading depth and the light on the tail. I'm assuming the light source is coming from the top right corner? If so, there'd still be some shading on the face. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (00:31, 28/7/2020)

Reuploaded. ~Cypressdusk ^{giving away free gift cards here!} 01:27, July 28, 2020 (UTC)

The shading is still overblurred on the legs. I'd recommend looking at other rogue images, such as these with similar light-sources. I'd recommend erasing shading from those areas so there's an equal amount of shading and light on them. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:32, July 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ~Cypressdusk ^{giving away free gift cards here!} 20:03, July 28, 2020 (UTC)

can you recede some shading on his belly? ~Ripple ☆ 04:14, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ~Cypressdusk ^{giving away free gift cards here!} 13:13, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-7.png, please continue to reupload over that. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:56, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

The shading is still very flat and lacks depth; perhaps try adding a second layer of shading (only covering parts of the original shading layer). Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 12:38, July 30, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. —Cypressduskツ^(text) 14:29, July 30, 2020 (UTC)

Could you possibly smooth out the edges of the shading? It looks rougher than it should be. —Jayce(23:33, 7/30/2020)​​​​

Reuploaded. —Cypressduskツ^(text) 01:15, July 31, 2020 (UTC)

My apologies, it should be File:RP-2.rogue-6.png. And it might be the shading placement, but I think the gray should be a tad darker and the muzzle more paler. You might have to adjust the shading too after that. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:06, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for letting me know about the colors —Cypressduskツ^(text) 23:00, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

could you smooth out the pale muzzle and shading? ~Ripple ☆ 05:44, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. —Cypressduskツ^(text) 14:32, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Yellow BloodClan Cat (Ro) - For Evaluation

I don’t know if this has the right shading or if the fur is not really ragged enough. Hope it’s good. ---236stars^Pivot!|^Unagi 01:44, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

Oof, I don’t know how to name my image, I am not on a computer. ---236stars^Pivot!|^Unagi 01:45, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

could you remove the white background? ~Ripple ☆ 04:11, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

Hmm... how do you do it? ---236stars^Pivot!|^Unagi 05:32, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-9.png, please continue to reupload over that. When you upload an image to the wiki, once you select the file, you can change its name in the "Destination filename" box. And to remove the background, most art programs do it automatically but it may be a setting. What art program are you using? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:02, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

Oof, I use ibis paint x to do the chararts. ---236stars^Pivot!|^Unagi 21:42, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

You need to reupload over File:RP-2.rogue-9.png and continue to use this file for your image. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:02, July 30, 2020 (UTC)

Ok, I taken away the white. ---236stars^Pivot!|^Unagi 03:31, July 30, 2020 (UTC)

I believe this should be short-haired to match the image. I'd also picked a slightly less neon yellow. This also needs a slightly paler muzzle, and the teeth on the collar could be smaller too. This image is also not the right size, I recommend downloading it again. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 12:46, July 30, 2020 (UTC)

Make the lines around the dog teeth thinner.—Cypressduskツ^(text) 00:02, July 31, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

~ Fawn ^{Happy Times}() --236stars 01:35, July 31, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe blur the stripes on the tail? The collar seems too thin. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»03:10, July 31, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blur the stripes by how much? I made the collar thicker.

~ Fawn ^{Happy Times}()

Just enough so they don’t look completely solid. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»12:29, July 31, 2020 (UTC)

Darken shading? --Silverfeather ^{Be Happy!} 13:37, July 31, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Add a definable light source. —Cypressduskツ^(text) 14:58, July 31, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to add a bit more shading to it.

~ Fawn ^{Happy Times}() --236stars 01:51, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

i don't see the shading anymore? ~Ripple ☆ 02:35, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oops, I took it away, now I darkened the shading a bit more.

~ Fawn ^{Happy Times}() --236stars 03:34, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Due to a character mix up, I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-8.png, please continue to reupload over that. The stripes also need to be defined as per their image. And the shading needs to be defined more; I recommend checking the apprentice tutorials. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:00, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded, I think it’s got better shading.

~ Fawn ^{Happy Times}() --236stars 04:30, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

I'm not seeing much of a difference between the uploads; also most of Vec's comment still stands about the stripes - per their screen cap above. Also, the colour could be made a shade darker than what you've got currently to match the manga as well. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (04:37, 02/8/2020)

Hmm... so do I blur the stripes or not? I am confused. And I will make the colour darker.

~ Fawn ^{Happy Times}() --236stars 10:54, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Blur doesn't mean to make the make the stripes obsolete; right now they seem too blurred that you can hardly see them. Blurred in a sense means to make it softer. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 12:32, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

maybe try using the blur tool at a lower opacity and smaller size to prevent it from overblurring. ~Ripple ☆ 20:02, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

The image still looks neon yellow. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»06:14, August 3, 2020 (UTC)

Tri-colored BloodClan cat (Ro) - CBA

I had to eyeball the colours because I only have a hard copy at the moment; also the pattern is a rough approximation because this cat's pattern changed in each panel they were in lmao. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:06, 29/7/2020)

Mood. I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-2.png so continue to reupload over that. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:58, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

These are the colors I got? I think it's the paler brown that's different. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 12:48, July 30, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded - Vec you're incredible <3 — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:53, 31/7/2020)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:35, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Brown BloodClan cat (Ro) ~ For Approval

♡ Dharma ♡ «»21:19, July 31, 2020 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tail, haunch and back legs. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:45, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Reups, better? ♡ Dharma ♡ «»04:20, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Again, please do not thumb your images. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 12:45, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

I know, but then I found out that I named the image wrong. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»21:11, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

I've renamed this to File:RP-3.rogue-1.png, please continue to reupload over that. The colors are also slightly off but it is a night time scene. I think the brown could be desaturated a bit tho. I also think the shading could be expanded more on the tail, haunch and back legs; the shading seems super slim compared to the massive shoulder shading. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:41, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Reups, How this? I realized what u meant there, so I tried to bring down the saturation, and made the image a bit paler. Plus the shading. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»23:25, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Some of the teeth are transparent instead of being being white. You can see which ones here. —Cypressduskツ^(text) 00:42, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

What do you mean? ♡ Dharma ♡ «»00:53, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Basically, the teeth in the collar are transparent, like the background. You should change them to be white. Or maybe the fact that it's showing them as transparent is just a glitch on my computer. —Cypressduskツ^(text) 01:15, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Reups, idk. Made the teeth white. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»03:56, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

could you smooth out the shading? ~Ripple ☆ 05:45, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Reups, did I smooth it out enough? ♡ Dharma ♡ «»14:39, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

on the body, yes, but could you smooth it out more on the face? and maybe add some earpink? ~Ripple ☆ 19:00, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Reups ♡ Dharma ♡ «»19:45, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Red tabby BloodClan cat (Ro) ~ For Approval

Comments? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:05, July 31, 2020 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. —Cypressduskツ^(text) 00:54, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 01:41, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-5.png, please continue to reupload over that. I also think this should be short haired and the stripes black. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:47, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:11, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little? --Silverfeather ^{Be Happy!} 21:26, August 2, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:56, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Cream and brown BloodClan cat (Ro) - For Approval

I only have a physical copy and the picture I tried to color pick from was totally off, the colors are a mess. I tried a new style of shading and I’m not sure how I like it.-Glacier (06:29, 8/01/2020)

Rep shading was no-Glacier (20:03, 8/01/2020)

I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-7.png, please continue to reupload over that. Also, these are the colors I got ^^ Could you also add more teeth to the collar? Also the dude needs a paler underbelly, tail-tip and chest. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:53, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

I think you have the wrong cream and brown cat-Glacier (22:29, 8/01/2020)

this is the one I’m talking about. I’m pretty sure I can do it even though we only know what it’s face looks like-Glacier (22:33, 8/01/2020)

Oof. My apologies. But regardless of my mix up, I don't think having less than half a cat should warrant a place on the minor characters page, especially if they don't talk or have a relevant action. Like is a head really important to document on the wiki? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:47, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

It’s fine, can I switch to the other cream and brown one then?-Glacier (22:49, 8/01/2020)

Of course. Feel free to continue on this section instead of making a new one. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:03, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Reup-Glacier (00:42, 8/02/2020)