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− | honestly i'm not really sure about this one? the paw and tail stripes look decent when compared to [https://vvcap.com/7f58Lh9Gj here], but I don't know about the back stripes {{User:Hopewish/Sig}} 00:03, July 23, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | The back ones don’t look like they curve at all? {{User:Sleekfang/Sig}} 00:21, July 23, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | They do all appear to curve with the shape of the body. So they'd sort of look like a sideways 'u' shape, if that makes sense? James Barry's style is fun to match; for an idea of what you can do match the stripes - I did a [[:File:RP.rogue-1.png|rogue]] that uses the same style of stripes this image would be. I can provide a bit of a redline, if you'd like? {{Diablo./Sig2|03:55, 23/7/2020}} |
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− | '''Reuploaded.''' added some depth to the shading and removed the embarrassing amount of waste around the body that I somehow didn't notice until just now? sorry about that! also yes, please provide a redline! I need all of the help I can get to help figure out James Barry's stripe style haha {{User:Hopewish/Sig}} 07:09, July 23, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | [https://vvcap.com/iHTALUCNL Here's] the redline; some notes - the light red stripes are the true stripe colour, and basically I've found when matching the manga is to have them on their own layer and taper the points like I would on a normal tabby image. On top of these stripes, I'd possibly recommend adding the "hatching" that James does to his images - normally in a darker colour of the stripes and with a very small brush. Lemme know if you need any more explanation, or help with these stripes? {{Diablo./Sig2|21:15, 23/7/2020}} |
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− | '''Reuploaded.''' I redid the back stripes, added better forehead stripes (while heavily referencing the redline), added small dark brown lines to add texture to the stripes, removed the back leg stripes because I realize that the kittypet wasn't shown with any, and I smoothed out the shading a little tiny bit more! is there anything that I need to change? {{User:Hopewish/Sig}} 08:22, July 26, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Could you either define or add shading to the inner ear >> side? Just a tiny little bit to make the area look less flat. {{Diablo./Sig2|04:31, 27/7/2020}} |
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− | Could you also add shading depth throughout the image? Also, for the hatching that Max mentioned earlier, it wouldn't hurt to have some extend past the other thicker stripe lines, kinda like [[:File:ASIR.warrior-1.png]], just so the hatching stands out a bit more. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 21:10, July 27, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''Reuploaded.''' I fixed the shading on the ear, added darker shading, and added more texture lines to the stripes! I can definitely see what you mean by letting the lines extend a little, it looks so much more fluffy now! {{User:Hopewish/Sig}} 00:06, July 28, 2020 (UTC) |
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==[[Minor_characters/Ravenpaw's_Path#Gray_BloodClan_cat|Gray BloodClan cat (Ro)]] - For Evaluation== |
==[[Minor_characters/Ravenpaw's_Path#Gray_BloodClan_cat|Gray BloodClan cat (Ro)]] - For Evaluation== |
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+ | [[File:RP-2.rogue-6.png]]my first charart! hope its good [[User:Cypressdusk|<span style="" title="hi"><span style="font-family:Elephant;color:#3836A0;text-shadow: white 0 3px 3px"><font size="4">''~Cypress''</font></span></span>]][[User Talk:Cypressdusk|<span style="" title="hello"><span style="font-family:Elephant;color:#3C1A72;text-shadow: white 0 3px 3px"><font size="4">''dusk''</font></span></span>]][[Skystar|<span style="" title="best cat"><span style="font-family:Elephant;color:#3836A0;text-shadow: white 0 3px 3px"><sup>'' giving''</sup></span></span>]][[Violetshine|<span style="" title=" second best cat"><span style="font-family:Elephant;color:#3C1A72;text-shadow: white 0 3px 3px"><sup>'' away''</sup></span></span>]][[Needletail|<span style="" title="third best cat"><span style="font-family:Elephant;color:#3836A0;text-shadow: white 0 3px 3px"><sup>'' free''</sup></span></span>]][[Squirrelflight|<span style="" title=" fourth best cat"><span style="font-family:Elephant;color:#3C1A72;text-shadow: white 0 3px 3px"><sup>'' gift''</sup></span></span>]][[Dovewing|<span style="" title="fifth best cat"><span style="font-family:Elephant;color:#3836A0;text-shadow: white 0 3px 3px"><sup>'' cards''</sup></span></span>]][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ%7C <span style="" title=" click here!!"><span style="font-family:Elephant;color:#3C1A72;text-shadow: white 0 3px 3px"><sup>'' here! ''</sup></span></span>] 03:27, July 27, 2020 (UTC) |
Darken shading a bit? --{{User:Silverykittencat/Sig}} 16:14, July 27, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat |
Darken shading a bit? --{{User:Silverykittencat/Sig}} 16:14, July 27, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat |
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'''Reuploaded.''' {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 14:29, July 30, 2020 (UTC) |
'''Reuploaded.''' {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 14:29, July 30, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Could you possibly smooth out the edges of the shading? It looks rougher than it should be. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|23:33, 7/30/2020}} |
+ | Could you possibly smooth out the edges of the shading? It looks rougher than it should be. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|23:33, 7/30/2020}} |
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'''Reuploaded. '''{{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 01:15, July 31, 2020 (UTC) |
'''Reuploaded. '''{{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 01:15, July 31, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | My apologies, it should be [[:File:RP-2.rogue-6.png]]. And it might be the shading placement, but I think the gray should be a tad [https://vvcap.com/FOLRmzYWM darker] and the muzzle more paler. You might have to adjust the shading too after that. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 22:06, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | '''Reuploaded.''' Thanks for letting me know about the colors {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 23:00, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | could you smooth out the pale muzzle and shading? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 05:44, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | I think the base should be slightly lighter, and they need a paler muzzle and a striped forehead like [https://vvcap.com/CuyNJQ4Kb so] {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 12:43, July 30, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Could you smooth out the edges of the overall shading, and define or darken the shading on the tail? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|23:34, 7/30/2020}} |
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+ | Looking good, Cypress! Might you either define or darken the shading a little more? I can see it, but I do have to squint in some spots. It'll mainly be the legs and stomach, I think, that could use some defining. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:09, 8/03/2020}} |
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+ | '''Reuploaded. '''{{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 02:02, August 4, 2020 (UTC) |
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==[[Minor_characters/Ravenpaw's_Path#Yellow_BloodClan_cat|Yellow BloodClan Cat]] (Ro) - For Evaluation== |
==[[Minor_characters/Ravenpaw's_Path#Yellow_BloodClan_cat|Yellow BloodClan Cat]] (Ro) - For Evaluation== |
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+ | [[File:RP-2.rogue-8.png]] I don’t know if this has the right shading or if the fur is not really ragged enough. Hope it’s good. --[[Jayfeather|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#03ABD8;">-2</span></span>]][[Rootspring|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#0394D8;">3</span></span>]][[Silverstream|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#036ED8;">6</span></span>]][[Ivypool|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#0377D8;">s</span><span style="color:#034AD8;">t</span><span style="color:#4703D8;">a</span><span style="color:#9403D8;">r</span><span style="color:#B103D8;">s</span></span>]][[User:236stars|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size 14px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 4px;color:#00CC57"><sup>''Pivot!''</sup></span>]]|[[User talk:236stars|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size 14px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 4px;color:#00CC57"><sup>''Unagi''</sup></span>]] 01:44, July 29, 2020 (UTC) |
Oof, I don’t know how to name my image, I am not on a computer. --[[Jayfeather|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#03ABD8;">-2</span></span>]][[Rootspring|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#0394D8;">3</span></span>]][[Silverstream|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#036ED8;">6</span></span>]][[Ivypool|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#0377D8;">s</span><span style="color:#034AD8;">t</span><span style="color:#4703D8;">a</span><span style="color:#9403D8;">r</span><span style="color:#B103D8;">s</span></span>]][[User:236stars|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size 14px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 4px;color:#00CC57"><sup>''Pivot!''</sup></span>]]|[[User talk:236stars|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size 14px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 4px;color:#00CC57"><sup>''Unagi''</sup></span>]] 01:45, July 29, 2020 (UTC) |
Oof, I don’t know how to name my image, I am not on a computer. --[[Jayfeather|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#03ABD8;">-2</span></span>]][[Rootspring|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#0394D8;">3</span></span>]][[Silverstream|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#036ED8;">6</span></span>]][[Ivypool|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size:20px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 3px;"><span style="color:#0377D8;">s</span><span style="color:#034AD8;">t</span><span style="color:#4703D8;">a</span><span style="color:#9403D8;">r</span><span style="color:#B103D8;">s</span></span>]][[User:236stars|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size 14px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 4px;color:#00CC57"><sup>''Pivot!''</sup></span>]]|[[User talk:236stars|<span style="font-family:Zapfino;font-size 14px;text-shadow:#ABABAB 2px 2px 4px;color:#00CC57"><sup>''Unagi''</sup></span>]] 01:45, July 29, 2020 (UTC) |
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Darken shading? --{{User:Silverykittencat/Sig}} 13:37, July 31, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat |
Darken shading? --{{User:Silverykittencat/Sig}} 13:37, July 31, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat |
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Add a definable light source. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 14:58, July 31, 2020 (UTC) |
Add a definable light source. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 14:58, July 31, 2020 (UTC) |
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i don't see the shading anymore? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 02:35, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
i don't see the shading anymore? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 02:35, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''Reuploaded''' Oops, I took it away, now I darkened the shading a bit more. |
+ | '''Reuploaded''' Oops, I took it away, now I darkened the shading a bit more. |
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− | ==[[Minor characters/Ravenpaw's Path#Tri-colored BloodClan cat|Tri-colored BloodClan cat]] (Ro) - For Approval== |
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+ | --236stars 03:34, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | [[File:RP-2.rogue-2.png]] I had to eyeball the colours because I only have a hard copy at the moment; also the pattern is a rough approximation because this cat's pattern changed in each panel they were in lmao. {{Diablo./Sig2|03:06, 29/7/2020}} |
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− | + | Due to a character mix up, I've renamed this to [[:File:RP-2.rogue-8.png]], please continue to reupload over that. The stripes also need to be defined as per [https://vvcap.com/FOLOGHYsy their image]. And the shading needs to be defined more; I recommend checking the [[Warriors_Wiki:Charart/Apprentice_Tutorials|apprentice tutorials]]. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 22:00, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | [https://vvcap.com/fodxWz6LY These] are the colors I got? I think it's the paler brown that's different. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 12:48, July 30, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''reuploaded''' - Vec you're incredible <3 {{Diablo./Sig2|03:53, 31/7/2020}} |
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+ | '''Reuploaded''', I think it’s got better shading. |
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+ | --236stars 04:30, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | I'm not seeing much of a difference between the uploads; also most of Vec's comment still stands about the stripes - per their screen cap above. Also, the colour could be made a shade darker than what you've got currently to match the manga as well. {{Diablo./Sig2|04:37, 02/8/2020}} |
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+ | Hmm... so do I blur the stripes or not? I am confused. And I will make the colour darker. |
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+ | --236stars 10:54, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | Blur doesn't mean to make the make the stripes obsolete; right now they seem too blurred that you can hardly see them. Blurred in a sense means to make it softer. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 12:32, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | maybe try using the blur tool at a lower opacity and smaller size to prevent it from overblurring. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 20:02, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | The image still looks neon yellow. {{User:Sun that Casts Shadows/Sig}}06:14, August 3, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | '''Reuploaded'''I have made it less neon yellow, but it might be too dark, idk. I used a smaller blurring tool with the tabby tail. {{User:236stars/Sig}}--236stars 21:50, August 3, 2020 (UTC) |
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Expand the shading on the tail, haunch and back legs. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 00:45, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
Expand the shading on the tail, haunch and back legs. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 00:45, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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Again, please do not thumb your images. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 12:45, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
Again, please do not thumb your images. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 12:45, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | I've renamed this to [[:File:RP-3.rogue-1.png]], please continue to reupload over that. The colors are also [https://vvcap.com/d4dY1IQxK slightly] off but it is a night time scene. I think the brown could be desaturated a bit tho. I also think the shading could be expanded more on the tail, haunch and back legs; the shading seems super slim compared to the massive shoulder shading. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 21:41, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | '''Reups,''' How this? I realized what u meant there, so I tried to bring down the saturation, and made the image a bit paler. Plus the shading. {{User:Sun that Casts Shadows/Sig}}23:25, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | Some of the teeth are transparent instead of being being white. You can see which ones [https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/a/ad/RP-3.rogue-1.png/revision/latest?cb=20200801232605 here]. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 00:42, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | Basically, the teeth in the collar are transparent, like the background. You should change them to be white. Or maybe the fact that it's showing them as transparent is just a glitch on my computer. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 01:15, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | '''Reups,''' idk. Made the teeth white. {{User:Sun that Casts Shadows/Sig}}03:56, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | '''Reups,''' did I smooth it out enough? {{User:Sun that Casts Shadows/Sig}}14:39, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | on the body, yes, but could you smooth it out more on the face? and maybe add some earpink? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 19:00, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | '''Reups''' {{User:Sun that Casts Shadows/Sig}}19:45, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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==[[Minor_characters/Ravenpaw's_Path#Red_tabby_BloodClan_cat|Red tabby BloodClan cat]] (Ro) ~ For Approval== |
==[[Minor_characters/Ravenpaw's_Path#Red_tabby_BloodClan_cat|Red tabby BloodClan cat]] (Ro) ~ For Approval== |
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+ | [[File:RP-2.rogue-5.png]]Comments? {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 22:05, July 31, 2020 (UTC) |
Blur the stripes a bit. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 00:54, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
Blur the stripes a bit. {{User:Cypressdusk/Sig}} 00:54, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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'''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 01:41, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
'''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 01:41, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | I've renamed this to [[:File:RP-2.rogue-5.png]], please continue to reupload over that. I also think this should be [https://vvcap.com/CuHL5iUHJ short haired] and the stripes black. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 21:47, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | Smooth out the shading a little? --{{User:Silverykittencat/Sig}} 21:26, August 2, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat |
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+ | '''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 21:56, August 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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==[[Minor_characters/Ravenpaw's_Path#Cream-and-brown_BloodClan_cat|Cream and brown BloodClan cat]] (Ro) - For Approval== |
==[[Minor_characters/Ravenpaw's_Path#Cream-and-brown_BloodClan_cat|Cream and brown BloodClan cat]] (Ro) - For Approval== |
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+ | [[File:RP-2.rogue-7.png]] I only have a physical copy and the picture I tried to color pick from was totally off, the colors are a mess. I tried a new style of shading and I’m not sure how I like it.{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig2|06:29, 8/01/2020}} |
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+ | '''Rep''' shading was no{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig2|20:03, 8/01/2020}} |
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+ | I've renamed this to [[:File:RP-2.rogue-7.png]], please continue to reupload over that. Also, these are the [https://vvcap.com/gYhX4zePK colors] I got ^^ Could you also add more teeth to the collar? Also the dude needs a paler underbelly, tail-tip and chest. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 21:53, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | I think you have the wrong cream and brown cat{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig2|22:29, 8/01/2020}} |
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+ | [https://vvcap.com/pGsavfV5A this is the one] I’m talking about. I’m pretty sure I can do it even though we only know what it’s face looks like{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig2|22:33, 8/01/2020}} |
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+ | Oof. My apologies. But regardless of my mix up, I don't think having less than half a cat should warrant a place on the minor characters page, especially if they don't talk or have a relevant action. Like is a head really important to document on the wiki? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 22:47, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | It’s fine, can I switch to the other cream and brown one then?{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig2|22:49, 8/01/2020}} |
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+ | Of course. Feel free to continue on this section instead of making a new one. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 23:03, August 1, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | '''Reup'''{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig2|00:42, 8/02/2020}} |
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Gray BloodClan cat (Ro) - For Evaluation
my first charart! hope its good ~Cypressdusk giving away free gift cards here! 03:27, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
Darken shading a bit? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:14, July 27, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
Reuploaded. Is it the right shade now? ~Cypressdusk giving away free gift cards here! 17:51, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
The teeth need to be more towards the center of the collar. -Iceclaw I Need Coffee 18:53, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I also tweaked the shading a bit ~Cypressdusk giving away free gift cards here! 19:04, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
The shading is overblurred and lacks a defined light source, especially on the legs. Remove the shading from the eye too. The collar could also be a tad thinner too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:07, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I changed the shading, and made the collar thinner. Also made the light source more defined. Anything else?~Cypressdusk giving away free gift cards here! 21:49, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Tweaked the shading a bit more~Cypressdusk giving away free gift cards here! 00:21, July 28, 2020 (UTC)
Define shading depth and the light on the tail. I'm assuming the light source is coming from the top right corner? If so, there'd still be some shading on the face. — max it is the real thing, (00:31, 28/7/2020)
Reuploaded. ~Cypressdusk giving away free gift cards here! 01:27, July 28, 2020 (UTC)
The shading is still overblurred on the legs. I'd recommend looking at other rogue images, such as these with similar light-sources. I'd recommend erasing shading from those areas so there's an equal amount of shading and light on them. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:32, July 28, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. ~Cypressdusk giving away free gift cards here! 20:03, July 28, 2020 (UTC)
can you recede some shading on his belly? ~Ripple ☆ 04:14, July 29, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. ~Cypressdusk giving away free gift cards here! 13:13, July 29, 2020 (UTC)
I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-7.png, please continue to reupload over that. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:56, July 29, 2020 (UTC)
The shading is still very flat and lacks depth; perhaps try adding a second layer of shading (only covering parts of the original shading layer). Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 12:38, July 30, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. —Cypressduskツ(text) 14:29, July 30, 2020 (UTC)
Could you possibly smooth out the edges of the shading? It looks rougher than it should be. —Jayce(23:33, 7/30/2020)
Reuploaded. —Cypressduskツ(text) 01:15, July 31, 2020 (UTC)
My apologies, it should be File:RP-2.rogue-6.png. And it might be the shading placement, but I think the gray should be a tad darker and the muzzle more paler. You might have to adjust the shading too after that. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:06, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks for letting me know about the colors —Cypressduskツ(text) 23:00, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
could you smooth out the pale muzzle and shading? ~Ripple ☆ 05:44, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. —Cypressduskツ(text) 14:32, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Looking good, Cypress! Might you either define or darken the shading a little more? I can see it, but I do have to squint in some spots. It'll mainly be the legs and stomach, I think, that could use some defining. —Jayce(18:09, 8/03/2020)
Reuploaded. —Cypressduskツ(text) 02:02, August 4, 2020 (UTC)
Yellow BloodClan Cat (Ro) - For Evaluation
I don’t know if this has the right shading or if the fur is not really ragged enough. Hope it’s good. ---236starsPivot!|Unagi 01:44, July 29, 2020 (UTC)
Oof, I don’t know how to name my image, I am not on a computer. ---236starsPivot!|Unagi 01:45, July 29, 2020 (UTC)
could you remove the white background? ~Ripple ☆ 04:11, July 29, 2020 (UTC)
Hmm... how do you do it? ---236starsPivot!|Unagi 05:32, July 29, 2020 (UTC)
I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-9.png, please continue to reupload over that. When you upload an image to the wiki, once you select the file, you can change its name in the "Destination filename" box. And to remove the background, most art programs do it automatically but it may be a setting. What art program are you using? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:02, July 29, 2020 (UTC)
Oof, I use ibis paint x to do the chararts. ---236starsPivot!|Unagi 21:42, July 29, 2020 (UTC)
You need to reupload over File:RP-2.rogue-9.png and continue to use this file for your image. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:02, July 30, 2020 (UTC)
Ok, I taken away the white. ---236starsPivot!|Unagi 03:31, July 30, 2020 (UTC)
I believe this should be short-haired to match the image. I'd also picked a slightly less neon yellow. This also needs a slightly paler muzzle, and the teeth on the collar could be smaller too. This image is also not the right size, I recommend downloading it again. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 12:46, July 30, 2020 (UTC)
Make the lines around the dog teeth thinner.—Cypressduskツ(text) 00:02, July 31, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded.
~ Fawn Happy Times() --236stars 01:35, July 31, 2020 (UTC)
Maybe blur the stripes on the tail? The collar seems too thin. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»03:10, July 31, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Blur the stripes by how much? I made the collar thicker.
Just enough so they don’t look completely solid. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»12:29, July 31, 2020 (UTC)
Darken shading? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 13:37, July 31, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
Add a definable light source. —Cypressduskツ(text) 14:58, July 31, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I tried to add a bit more shading to it.
~ Fawn Happy Times() --236stars 01:51, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
i don't see the shading anymore? ~Ripple ☆ 02:35, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Oops, I took it away, now I darkened the shading a bit more.
~ Fawn Happy Times() --236stars 03:34, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Due to a character mix up, I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-8.png, please continue to reupload over that. The stripes also need to be defined as per their image. And the shading needs to be defined more; I recommend checking the apprentice tutorials. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:00, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded, I think it’s got better shading.
~ Fawn Happy Times() --236stars 04:30, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
I'm not seeing much of a difference between the uploads; also most of Vec's comment still stands about the stripes - per their screen cap above. Also, the colour could be made a shade darker than what you've got currently to match the manga as well. — max it is the real thing, (04:37, 02/8/2020)
Hmm... so do I blur the stripes or not? I am confused. And I will make the colour darker.
~ Fawn Happy Times() --236stars 10:54, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Blur doesn't mean to make the make the stripes obsolete; right now they seem too blurred that you can hardly see them. Blurred in a sense means to make it softer. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 12:32, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
maybe try using the blur tool at a lower opacity and smaller size to prevent it from overblurring. ~Ripple ☆ 20:02, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
The image still looks neon yellow. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»06:14, August 3, 2020 (UTC)
ReuploadedI have made it less neon yellow, but it might be too dark, idk. I used a smaller blurring tool with the tabby tail. ~ Fawn Happy Times()--236stars 21:50, August 3, 2020 (UTC)
Brown BloodClan cat (Ro) ~ For Approval
♡ Dharma ♡ «»21:19, July 31, 2020 (UTC)
Expand the shading on the tail, haunch and back legs. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:45, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Reups, better? ♡ Dharma ♡ «»04:20, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Again, please do not thumb your images. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 12:45, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
I know, but then I found out that I named the image wrong. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»21:11, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
I've renamed this to File:RP-3.rogue-1.png, please continue to reupload over that. The colors are also slightly off but it is a night time scene. I think the brown could be desaturated a bit tho. I also think the shading could be expanded more on the tail, haunch and back legs; the shading seems super slim compared to the massive shoulder shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:41, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Reups, How this? I realized what u meant there, so I tried to bring down the saturation, and made the image a bit paler. Plus the shading. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»23:25, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Some of the teeth are transparent instead of being being white. You can see which ones here. —Cypressduskツ(text) 00:42, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
What do you mean? ♡ Dharma ♡ «»00:53, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Basically, the teeth in the collar are transparent, like the background. You should change them to be white. Or maybe the fact that it's showing them as transparent is just a glitch on my computer. —Cypressduskツ(text) 01:15, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Reups, idk. Made the teeth white. ♡ Dharma ♡ «»03:56, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
could you smooth out the shading? ~Ripple ☆ 05:45, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Reups, did I smooth it out enough? ♡ Dharma ♡ «»14:39, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
on the body, yes, but could you smooth it out more on the face? and maybe add some earpink? ~Ripple ☆ 19:00, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Reups ♡ Dharma ♡ «»19:45, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Red tabby BloodClan cat (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:05, July 31, 2020 (UTC)
Blur the stripes a bit. —Cypressduskツ(text) 00:54, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:41, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-5.png, please continue to reupload over that. I also think this should be short haired and the stripes black. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:47, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:11, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a little? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 21:26, August 2, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:56, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
Cream and brown BloodClan cat (Ro) - For Approval
I only have a physical copy and the picture I tried to color pick from was totally off, the colors are a mess. I tried a new style of shading and I’m not sure how I like it.-Glacier (06:29, 8/01/2020)
Rep shading was no-Glacier (20:03, 8/01/2020)
I've renamed this to File:RP-2.rogue-7.png, please continue to reupload over that. Also, these are the colors I got ^^ Could you also add more teeth to the collar? Also the dude needs a paler underbelly, tail-tip and chest. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:53, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
I think you have the wrong cream and brown cat-Glacier (22:29, 8/01/2020)
this is the one I’m talking about. I’m pretty sure I can do it even though we only know what it’s face looks like-Glacier (22:33, 8/01/2020)
Oof. My apologies. But regardless of my mix up, I don't think having less than half a cat should warrant a place on the minor characters page, especially if they don't talk or have a relevant action. Like is a head really important to document on the wiki? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:47, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
It’s fine, can I switch to the other cream and brown one then?-Glacier (22:49, 8/01/2020)
Of course. Feel free to continue on this section instead of making a new one. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:03, August 1, 2020 (UTC)