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| + | <pre>==[[Character]] ~ For Evaluation== |
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| + | New members must use the "For Evaluation" heading, and members who are apprentices and above should use the "For Approval" heading. Click [[Special:Upload|here]] to upload a new image. |
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| + | ==[[Stempaw (ASC)|Stempaw]] (A) - For Approval== |
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| + | [[File:Stempaw (ASC).apprentice.png]] these stripes did not want to be done {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 02:15, 2 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| + | the stripes could he thinner un some places, smoother and imo toned down. {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|03:36, 2 April 2024 (UTC)}} |
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| + | I think the stripes need smudging <div style="font-family: adelon book;"><span style="font-weight: bold; text-shadow: 0 0 10px #003186; color: #007fff;">[[User:EaglesOfAdrestia|EaglesOfAdrestia]] ([[User talk:EaglesOfAdrestia|talk]])</span></div> 03:47, 2 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | ==Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Jose1106.blank.png]] Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - [[User:Jose1106|<font style="background:yellow">JArtz11</font>]] [[User Talk:Jose1106|<font color="teal"><sup>Oblivious to<sup> EVERYTHING!</sup></sup></font>]] 16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | i think the paler parts should be more smoothen out, on the kit it kinda seems like it’s fading into the orange. Great job, nice to see how far you’ve come! Tabbies are tough but you can do it^^ {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 05:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 19:31, 2 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | The stripes overall should be more close together and wavy - I know Stempaw's design is slightly based off his father's stripes. {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|14:48, 03 4 2024}} 14:48, 3 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 17:07, 3 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! {{User:Tybaxel/Sig}} 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel |
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+ | I think highlights could be lightened or removed since they throw off the base a bit, and looking at the kit, there also seems to be a paler gradient underneath the stripes that’s visible on the haunch, paws, face, and tail. {{User:Arenzel/Sig}} 00:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC) |
| + | it might just be me but i think theres leaking shading near the bottom of the chest where it meets the > front leg {{User:Snowdapple/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Snowdapple/Time}}">21:47, 4/04/2024</span></small> |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' - [[User:Jose1106|<font style="background:yellow">JArtz11</font>]] [[User Talk:Jose1106|<font color="teal"><sup>Oblivious to<sup> EVERYTHING!</sup></sup></font>]] 17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | Could u maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and <- hind leg? Love the eyes :0[[User talk:Dawnleafofriver|<span style="text-shadow:palevioletred 1px 3px 4px;color:violet;font-family:georgia;font-size:10pt">Dawnleaf</span> <span style="text-shadow:palevioletred 1px 2px 4px;color:orchid;font-family:georgia"><sup><big>of river</big></span>]] 05:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? {{User:Scarletwind/Sig}} 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 16:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | Shading could be expanded and defined slightly overall {{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Sig2}} <big><sup><span style="{{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Time}}">14:11, 4/07/2024</span></sup></big> |
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| − | Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|21:20, 7/09/2019}} |
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| + | I believe he is supposed to have a dorsal tail stripe too. Could you also reduce the shine in the eyes? I think you have a top and bottom part, and having them both restricts the visibility of the pupil and the eye color {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|20:35, 07 4 2024}} 20:35, 7 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop {{Diablo./Sig2|00:00, 11/7/2019}} |
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| + | define the eye depth a bit? {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|21:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)}} |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' - [[User:Jose1106|<font style="background:yellow">JArtz11</font>]] [[User Talk:Jose1106|<font color="teal"><sup>Oblivious to<sup> EVERYTHING!</sup></sup></font>]] 16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 21:49, 8 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? {{User:Paper Finches/Sig}} 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | CBA? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:49, 4/9/2024}} |
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| − | i think thats to show the shape of the head {{User:Snowdapple/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Snowdapple/Time}}">11:51, 7/17/2019</span></small> |
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| + | sorry, but the stripes could be softer and the tail markings could be defined. the earpink doesn’t seem to match, but that could be shading. the eyes don’t seem to match either? the kits eyes are a brighter, more contrasting grrrn and this images seems fuller and darker. the shading could be smoothed overall as well imo. {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 19:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Made it a little more straight - [[User:Jose1106|<font style="background:yellow">JArtz11</font>]] [[User Talk:Jose1106|<font color="teal"><sup>Oblivious to<sup> EVERYTHING!</sup></sup></font>]] 15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | alsoo i feel like the light mustache looking part (idk what else to call it srry) looksout of place {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|00:01, 10 April 2024 (UTC)}} |
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| − | I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though? {{Diablo./Sig2|21:55, 19/7/2019}} |
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| + | I think the muzzle is fine. We don't see a ton of it on the kit so this might fall under artists choice. {{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Sig2}} <big><sup><span style="{{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Time}}">01:12, 4/10/2024</span></sup></big> |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' - [[User:Jose1106|<font style="background:yellow">JArtz11</font>]] [[User Talk:Jose1106|<font color="teal"><sup>Oblivious to<sup> EVERYTHING!</sup></sup></font>]] 20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | on the [[:File:Stempaw (ASC).kit.png|kit]], there is no mustache as you have here. the muzzle is paler, but not swept out (can’t think of anything else to describe it as lol) as you have it here. to some extent, you can keep the mustache effect on the (<-) side of the muzzle but remove on the (->) side of the muzzle. (i think) {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 18:04, 10 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer. {{Diablo./Sig2|07:11, 24/7/2019}} |
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| + | The face is also really dark so I think removing some of the shading might help overall as well {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|18:32, 10 4 2024}} 18:32, 10 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|13:56, 7/24/2019}} |
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| + | '''reups''' changed the eyes for the more vibrant colorpick to be the main color. ears are mainly a shading thing. Also smoothed the shading, and the mustache thing is mainly a lighter face thing from the kit's markings. {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 18:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | I think the paler gradient under the stripes could be defined/lightened a bit, since I'm color picking #C7853D at the lightest part on the kit. The stripes also seem to have a gradient from the top to bottom on the kit, where it's darker/redder near the back. {{User:Arenzel/Sig}} 22:34, 11 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Oof sorry been super busy lately. Im not sure I have to fix the crop now? If this is approved can i do it then? - [[User:Jose1106|<font style="background:yellow">JArtz11</font>]] [[User Talk:Jose1106|<font color="teal"><sup>Oblivious to<sup> EVERYTHING!</sup></sup></font>]] 19:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | The shading on the face is still very dark and is making it hard to see the face details. I might also suggest making the eye shine smaller on the right (our left) eye. {{User:Eggheart/sig}} 23:58, 11 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | These are lovely and I can't see anything to comment on, so CBA? {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 23:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' the main pelt gradient was off bc i had forgotten to turn it back on after editing ^^ {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 19:20, 12 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | sorry, but i feel like the blank looks slightly too crowded in general. notably the face (might help if you remove some of the lines on the ears ig?), and how does the blank look with those three lines removed on the cat's back leg? also, i feel like the tail still looks too straight–feel like a cats tail would naturally be more bent in such a position. {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 04:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | Define the earpink color and shading a bit? It looks pretty flat rn {{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Sig2}} <big><sup><span style="{{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Time}}">12:40, 4/13/2024</span></sup></big> |
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| − | also, i feel like the linearart thickness is pretty uneven on the shorthaired blank– it's extremely thick on the cat's back and on the leg in which the paw pads are exposed but thin in other places. {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 04:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 21:45, 13 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' The tail is based of something like this https://www.omlet.co.uk/images/cache/1024/604/Cat-Chartreux-a_plush_coated_chartreux_cat_lying_down.jpg]] with the tail being straight and just the tip being curled. - [[User:Jose1106|<font style="background:yellow">JArtz11</font>]] [[User Talk:Jose1106|<font color="teal"><sup>Oblivious to<sup> EVERYTHING!</sup></sup></font>]] 18:39, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | imo my comment still stands about the leaky shading on the chest, where the furthest front leg meets the chest. {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 21:48, 13 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Meadowslip.warrior.png]] it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' should be gone now ^^ {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 23:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading. |
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| + | i don’t know if you saw where i ment, so [https://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/e/ea/20240414003623%21Willowthroat.personal.png] <- this should help {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 00:39, 14 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | I hope this helps! {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | can you define the tail shading a smidge? looking great!! {{User:Cobrasnarl/Sig2|20:24, 4/14/2024}} |
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| − | '''reuploaded.''' {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| + | -> ear looks a little flat imo {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|01:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC)}} |
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| − | Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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+ | '''reups''' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 21:11, 15 April 2024 (UTC) |
| + | I would still erase some of the facial shading, as it's still obscuring the facial markings. I think the stripes overall could be a tad smoother. {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|16:55, 17 4 2024}} 16:55, 17 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | + | ''reups'' {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 19:43, 18 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. is this better? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | What's the light source here? {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. top left corner. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|02:12, 7/24/2019}} 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | mhm. okay. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. is this better? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good! {{Diablo./Sig2|07:00, 24/7/2019}} |
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| − | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}}''' |
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| − | Add some shading to the other ear, define the shading depth, add more shading along the haunch, and remove the waste that's floating around her (ears, paws, tail is where the waste is). Define the light on >>> this side of the tail too. {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Just as a head's up, you should be matching the original warrior, which the coloring should be from [https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/8/83/Meadowslip.warrior.png/revision/20190723184033 this version], as that was posted first. I only tweaked some eyelash issues. For some reason, the queen looks a little darker... {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|07:48, 7/25/2019}} |
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| − | Ferk tweaked the queen and since I think she darkened the base because she was the OA. {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 12:16, July 25, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Regardless, this should match the original warrior, since that was first, not the queen. If anything, the queen should be tweaked to match the warrior. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|17:06, 7/25/2019}} |
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| − | '''reuploaded. is this better, Jayce? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 17:38, July 25, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | The shading on the tail seems to end abruptly, and there is a tiny bit of waste between the front and back paws. [[User:WarriorCatGirl37|<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"><span style="text-shadow: #c0a4ea 0.9em 0.2em 0.1em">'''Windsong'''</span></font></font>]][[User_talk:WarriorCatGirl37|<sup><big><font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"><font size="0"><span style="text-shadow: #9ec5d8 0.9em 0.2em 0.10em">Run with the wind... ❀</span></font></font></font></big></sup>]] 18:00, July 25, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Lighten the shading, too, overall. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 20:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Define the light source on the tail. {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 20:24, July 25, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. question - if my image doesn't get approved within a month, will it get declined? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 01:02, July 26, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | After a month of it being on the approval page, the image will be declined, yes. Can you define the light on the tail, and just a tad bit on the front leg closest to us? {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 23:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I feel the shading could still be lightened overall {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|02:45, 7/27/2019}} 02:45, July 27, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Define the light on the chest and legs. {{User:StarlightGirlHSS/Sig2|16:29, 7/27/2019}}[[User:.iNebula/Nominations|<span style title="on the outside always looking in"><span style="text-shadow: 0px 0px 9px;font-family:Century Gothic;color:#2C6CFF;"><big>r ♥</big></span></span>]] [[Sun Shadow|<span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i<span data-rte-entity=">'</span>ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"><sub><span style="text-shadow: 0px 0px 9px;font-family:Century Gothic;color:#A52CFF;"><big>waving </big><span style="text-shadow: 0px 0px 9px;font-family:Century Gothic;color:#FF2CF0;">through </span></span></sub>]] [[Ivypool|<span style="style" title="cuz i<span data-rte-entity=">'</span>m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"><sub><span style="text-shadow: 0px 0px 9px;font-family:Century Gothic;color:#FF2C86;">a <span style="text-shadow:0px 0px 9px;font-family:Century Gothic;color:#FF2C86;"><big>window</big></span></span></sub>]] <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:white; text-shadow: #e902ff 0px 0px 9px; font-size:90%"><16:29, 7/27/2019></span> |
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| − | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 23:08, July 27, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | The image still appears to be overblurred, try checking your layers for waste and removing it to reduce the blurryness. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. meadowslip, have mercy on me.'''{{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} |
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| − | Lighten/smooth the shading. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:36, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded.''' {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 03:00, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Smooth the shading out more. Here's a little tip: If you're constantly being told to smooth out the shading, smooth it out a lot more than you usually do. I learned this and it really helps, trust me. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | okay, thanks. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 19:47, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 19:59, July 28, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | The image has that overblurred look to it again. Try checking for waste to remove or see if the background is acting up. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 20:02, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded'''{{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 21:56, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Define the light on the tail and add more shading depth in general to the image. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:06, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 03:22, July 29, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Erase some of the shading on the tail to define the lightsource, and add some more facial shading? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded.''' {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 16:19, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I'm still not seeing much light on the tail. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 16:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded.''' {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 19:26, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Define the light on the other half of the tail. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 19:28, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reupreuploaded.''' |
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| − | You're not defining the light on the correct tail section. Define it on >>> this side, away from the bend. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 20:25, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | could you redline it, please? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 20:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | When I can get the computer, I'll gladly make one for you. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 21:46, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | okay, thanks. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 21:45, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | [https://gyazo.com/ca258a3862238234fac353f5243a1179] you go! Red is where there needs to be light, green is waste, and orange is where the shading needs to be defined. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 21:53, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. thanks, potato. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 05:18, August 2, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | Might you smooth out the tail shading and the shading on the visible back foot? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:46, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 18:59, August 2, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | ==[[Leafpool]] (K) ~ For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Leafpool.kit.png]] {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|01:53, 7/24/2019}} 01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I think the stripes on the main body should be thinner (you may have to add more after that), and the tips of the ears should be dark brown, too. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 03:42, July 24, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | There shouldn't really be texture, just smudge lines from the stripes. {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|10:49,7/24/2019}} |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' I might've did a thing {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|20:43, 7/25/2019}} 20:43, July 25, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I think the stripes are less curvy on her other images {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|05:05,7/27/2019}} |
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| − | The stripes also appear to be less soft and slightly sharper on the other images. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 18:59, July 27, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Better? Yes? No? Maybe? {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|02:27, 7/28/2019}} 02:27, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Sharpen the stripes more. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Attempts were made {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|15:02, 7/29/2019}} 15:02, July 29, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | The stripes appear not as dark on the other images and they have this sketchiness to them...try running a small pencil tool on low opacity with the base color over the stripes and see how that works. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 23:15, July 29, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | the stripes also look slightly overblurred {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|02:06,7/31/2019}} |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' y'know I was so confident when I uploaded this the first time... {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|03:25, 7/31/2019}} 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | For a lack of better phrasing, the stripes on the other images seem less broken up. The dorsal stripe also seems to be thinner. Also, the stripes still seem overblurred {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|13:24,7/31/2019}} |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' y'all are killing me {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|16:51, 7/31/2019}} 16:51, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Hey nice job on this, you're doing great^^ it might be my eyes, but the stripes seem a bit dark compared to her other images? And a little less blurred and more tapered at the ends. {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 23:22, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | On her other images, the stripes seem to connect with the dorsal stripe more often. |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' ok I fixed some of it but Patch I couldn't tell if you meant mine was too blurred or the others were blurred more.... I figured I'd end up having to upload this again anyway so {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|03:09, 8/03/2019}} 03:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Gorsetail (TNP)]] (W) ~ For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Gorsetail (TNP).warrior.png]] I think the shading needs to be smoothed some :/ also not sure how the tint came out {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|03:22, 7/28/2019}} 03:22, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Yes the shading is very blotchy. Could you expand it some on the haunch? That should help. And maybe de-saturate the tint a bit? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 04:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | The shading from the haunch is leaking onto the leg, and the shading is leaking on the back paw farthest from us. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 15:15, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Redid the shading entirely {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|03:25, 7/31/2019}} 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | <small>Don't forget your sig!</small> Smooth out the shading overall. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 17:05, July 29, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' idk what you're talking about I totally put my sig in last time {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|03:25, 7/31/2019}} 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Could you make the shading on the top haunch curve downward more? {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 23:18, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' ?? {{User:Warriorcat1196/Sig2|03:09, 8/03/2019}} 03:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Lilywhisker]] (Alt. W) ~ For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Lilywhisker.warrior.alt.png]] ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT 3/3 {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 04:32, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Same as above, but, could you also smooth out the lineart tweak a little for her leg? The bottom bit of the leg shouldn't slant upwards that much, I don't think, and could stand to be a little more horizontal? If you'd like, I could give a redline for what I mean? {{Diablo./Sig2|06:04, 28/7/2019}} |
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| − | Same as above, soften the texture and add more shading to the chest. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 15:20, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Hey Max! A redline guide would be much appreciated! I tried going off [[Deadfoot]] but uhhh, his twisted paw is on the other side of the warrior, unfortunately. {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 16:07, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''re-up''' istill wanna get that redline but i tried it again just for my sake {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 16:33, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Thicken the lineart on the leg, to make it more consistent with the image's lineart. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 20:04, July 28, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reup''' {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 04:12, July 29, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Thicken the lineart more around the paw area, but the leg area looks fine. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 04:16, July 29, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Here ya go Bramble; [https://i.imgur.com/bQ7vz9P.png here's my quick as redline] - hope it helps! There'd also be another line where the paw connects to the leg, to show a bit of a twist - like on Deadfoot's old warrior for reference :D {{Diablo./Sig2|08:58, 29/7/2019}} |
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| − | '''re-up''' thank you SO much max {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 20:23, July 29, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Thicken the leg a bit, since a cat's leg is not that thin. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 20:33, July 29, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''re-up''' forgot i was working onthis until i saw theother one get approved oops {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 01:36, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | The lineart seems slightly choppy on the paw, so smooth it out a bit? I also think that little triangle of lineart under the front paw should be removed as well. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:46, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''re-up''' you talking about the toe? {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | The toe on the raised leg, yes. Could you add more lineart to round it out a teeny bit more? Just so it doesn't look as pointy as it is now. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reup''' i personally likethe look of the toe, could we get a second opinion on that {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I think in order to match the rest of the lineart, adding a few more pixels to curve it wouldn't hurt. Could you also remove the random line/lineart down the middle of the tip of the tail? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''re-up''' the tail thing oops, so is that an okay on the toe lmao. also i dont know how to go about curving so tried something, tell me how it went! {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I think the paw can be curved a bit more. If you need a redline to help I can provide one^^ {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 23:15, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | hi patch! that would be soooo helpful. Its stressing me out atm hahaha{{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 04:08, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | [https://vvcap.com/kpx2wuapL Here you go] hope that helps! {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 15:45, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Leopardstar]] (W) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Leopardstar.warrior.png]] this was so hard why was this so hard, mainly reffed the starclan {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">00:29 Mon Jul 29</span></small> |
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| − | <small>No one knows</small> Can you define the tail stripes a teeny bit more? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:31, July 29, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">04:56 Mon Jul 29</span></small> |
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| − | <small>it's a mounty pattern</small> I think there's more variety in spot size, and the base seems lighter on the apprentice image, which came first. {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|11:10,7/29/2019}} |
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| − | Hi uh I don't know if I have a right to say this here but do the eyes look a bit funny? They kind of look like they are facing different ways (The opposite of cross eyes) Sorry if it isn't my place to say this! [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 01:23, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Sorry, but I think the eyes look fine. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:38, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' thank you fox for the file!! {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">04:13 Thu Aug 1</span></small> |
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| − | There's a line of waste by the tail. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 21:55, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | i believe that with this source, the shading on <== side of the face wouldn't look so prominent. {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 02:34, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">01:04 Sat Aug 3</span></small> |
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| − | this looks good! one final critique is that some shading could be added to the cheek to make it less prominent. i dont believe the cheek would protrude that much for it to be exposed to that much light with this source. {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 04:32, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | could you smooth the shading? {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|11:36,8/3/2019}} |
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| − | ==[[Minor_characters/Bluestar's_Prophecy#Dark-colored_ThunderClan_kit|Dark-colored ThunderClan kit]] (K) ~ For Evaluation== |
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| − | [[File:BP.kit-4.png]]Hopefully you guys like it? Im really not good at shading because there are no tutorials for Pixlr char art --[[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 23:11, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Since this is from a manga, this needs to be in grayscale and needs a lighter muzzle. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:13, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | It is? What is grayscale? [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 23:31, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Grayscale is the default manga color, so this must be defaulted to a darker gray. Could you also define the shading? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:32, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | So a dark grey? With grey eyes? or can they stay green. And I can try shading but I dont know how to chade on Pixlr X which is what I need to use now... Thanks! Also Is there any other single colour blanks to do? [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 23:37, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I would probably use a different program than Pixlr, such as GIMP or FireAlpaca, which are both free. Only the pelt would have to be in grayscale, the eyes and ear/nose pink can be any color you wish. You shade by getting a color, using the pencil tool to draw it on the pelt, lighten it, then blur/smudge it. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:41, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I have a chromebook and am only allowed to use pixlr X... Im confused also by what you mean RIP... and ok! SO a dark grey pelt [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 23:43, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Alright, so you have a color wheel, right. Well, click on any color you want, then get your paintbrush/pencil tool and paint it following a clear light source like [[:File:Tawnypelt.kit.png|this]], and then blur/smudge it with the respective tools to get a nice, smooth gradient. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:46, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I cant use the blur tool won't work? And ok! [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 23:53, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Try setting the blur tool at 100% strength and check the hard-edged box and see if it works then. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:55, July 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | It seemingly appears pixely and won't smooth out? Sorry if this is getting long... Should I delete MY messages? [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 00:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | No, all messages must stay on the approval page until the image is archived. I'd say post for now, and wait for further instruction. <small>please excuse my lack of knowledge</small> --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Its cool, Thank you! I will try to do it as best as possible. [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 00:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | NOOOO I just finished but then my wifi went out before I had saved it 0.o [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 00:39, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded '''Hopefully this is better? I have a version with the pencil lines but it doesn't look very good. If you dont like it could you fix the blur as pixlr just wont? [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 01:31, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Please do not thumb your images. I've also renamed this to [[:File:BP.kit-4.png]] so please continue to reupload over there. I'd also like to reiterate what Potato said that it is probably best if you do not use Pixlr, as it does not have a good history with images in this project. There are other free art programs, such as GIMP and Firealpaca, that can make this process easier; plus there are several members of the project who are familiar with those programs. |
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| − | The shading should be darkened a little more, and maybe smoothed out. Your light source looks very good. ^^ {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Ok! I found a tool but it is a bit hard to use... would this next reupload be more along the right lines? Also whats Thumbing? And ok! [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Thumbing is when the file name has a |left/right/thumb thing in the file name. To remove it, simply go into source editor and remove it from the name. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:59, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded '''uhh ok! [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Upload under the name Vec gave you. Smooth out the shading everywhere, and Remove the waste that's outside the lineart. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 02:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I think that might be the best I can do shading wise :( I did upload under BP.kit but i called it BP.kit-5? Hopefully, that was right... And can do! [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 02:04, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | No, you need to upload over [[:File:BP.kit-4.png]]. Simply click on the link, scroll down and click "Upload new version of file". Also, remove some of the shading on the tail and front limb; a similar light source that's easy to see is [[:File:Dawnpelt.kit.alt.png]]. See how smooth the shading is and it's not covering all of the limbs? Try to match that. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Darken the base quite a bit, since the description is dark-colored kit. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 02:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Ok! I'm back and ready for action! (I rage quitted yesterday because I had the PERFECT art but didn't save it and the Wifi went out Rip) [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 22:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded ''' Is this more along those lines? [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 01:10, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | It's looking better, though I would recede the shading some, darken the earpink, and smooth out the shading on the tail. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:13, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Please re-upload over [[:File:BP.kit-4.png]] like you were told to do. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:24, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Sorry I tried but it didn't work? I was gonna tell you but I forgot :( and ok Greenflower! Btw what do you mean recede the shading some? [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 01:27, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Fixed! --[[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 01:30, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | By recede, I mean remove. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:40, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Un-thumbed, Moved to Bp.kit-4, and '''Re-upped! T'''his a bit better? You guys are really picky about your charart rip me and my lil Pixlr editor [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Milliemoo92 Sso]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 02:16, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Remember not to thumb your images. Darken the earpink a little bit. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 03:41, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | there's some waste by the haunch. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 05:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Nettle (DotC)]] (W) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Nettle_(DotC).warrior.png]] I really love how the texture came out on this. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 02:53, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | i like it too! she looks pretty cross eyed. {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 03:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Thanks! --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 03:12, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Define the earpink. Right now it almost looks like there's none. {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 03:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 03:37, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Define the shading depth on the main body and maybe smooth out the shading there? It looks... off right now for lack of a better word. {{User:Juniperbriar/Sig}} 12:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:32, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Could you expand the haunch shading, especially adding some near the bottom to add the curve, and expand/define the facial shading? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 00:13, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | The texture seems more defined on the other images. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 17:27, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 20:29, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | The texture could still be sharper, almost like Lizardtail's warrior but a bit softer. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 21:50, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Like dis? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 02:06, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Could you curve the back leg and shoulder shading more with the shape of the space? [https://imgur.com/4eZMafA A bit like this sort of shape] {{Diablo./Sig2|06:19, 03/8/2019}} |
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| − | ==[[Berrynose]] (K Alt) ~ CBA== |
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| − | [[File:Berrynose.kit.alt.png]] His poor little tail. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 18:59, July 31, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Hey im pretty sure this is my image? I dont really know how else to word this and i apologize but id like my image please, sorry! {{User:Snowdapple/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Snowdapple/Time}}">17:28, 8/01/2019</span></small> |
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| − | Sorry, but as per [[Forum:OA_Claim_limits|this vote]], Winter, you did in fact lose claim to your images. If you want to see dates and whatnot, [[User:Spookywilloww|Spooky's]] got a chart that you're welcome to look at. The vote was made because people claimed a lot of things, and just didn't work on them at all. It was discussed and voted on as per PCA's guidelines on voting. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|17:43, 8/01/2019}} |
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| − | CBA? {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 18:55, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Lilystem]] (W) - CBA== |
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| − | [[File:Lilystem.warrior.png]] {{User:Tybaxel/Sig}} 03:27, August 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel |
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| − | Insanely minor, but I think the ear pink on the queen is a little lighter than this. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|03:42, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | [[File:Lakeshine.warrior.png]] {{User:Tybaxel/Sig}} 03:27, August 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel |
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| − | Would you object to brightening the white just a bit? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|03:43, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' {{User:Tybaxel/Sig}} 16:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel |
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| − | CBA? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:49, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | ==[[Mud Paws]] (W) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Mud_Paws.warrior.png]] {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">04:38 Thu Aug 1</span></small> |
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| − | Might you smooth out the overall shading a bit? I love what you've got going here, Splook! Another wonderful image. =) {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|07:16, 8/01/2019}} |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' thank you! {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">01:02 Sat Aug 3</span></small> |
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| − | ==[[Millie]] (Alt. K) - CBA== |
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| − | [[File:Millie.kit.alt.png]] matched to the old warrior's side {{Diablo./Sig2|09:09, 01/8/2019}} |
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| − | Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think some of these images are supposed to have texture? It looks like it's there on the old kittypet ''and'' queen images. I honestly can't tell, but I remember adding it when I took a crack at the kit version for this set. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|21:05, 8/01/2019}} |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' yeah there is texture, i just forgot to turn it on multiply on this vers. the new warrior has it too to match with the queen (which was second in the set?) {{Diablo./Sig2|03:38, 02/8/2019}} |
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| − | That's what I thought, because I remember the queen (which was second, yes) having texture as well as the old kittypet... since I ''think'' I had that file. Are you able to define the texture any, though? I'm having a little bit of an issue seeing it. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|03:40, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' how's that? {{Diablo./Sig2|06:30, 02/8/2019}} |
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| − | CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 21:45, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Lionblaze]] (Alt W2) - CBA== |
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| − | [[File:Lionblaze.warrior.alt2.png]] white boi. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|21:00, 8/01/2019}} |
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| − | CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 21:43, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Mintkit (YS)]] (K) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Mintkit_(YS).kit.png]] One of the most depressing kit deaths in the series. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:08, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Could you possibly re-arrange the eye here? I'm having a lot of issues seeing the coloring and it just looks like it's white-and-black. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|01:02, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Can you define the foreleg and head shading just a bit more? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 21:46, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 02:07, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Squirrelflight]] (Alt W) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Squirrelflight.warrior.alt.png]] and so, the stars have aligned, allowing me to revive. <sup>[[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet|<font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward</font>]] [[User talk:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet|<font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays</font>]] [[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet/Charart|<font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All</font>]] [[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet/Awards|<font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star.</font>]]</sup> <sub><font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I</font> <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am</font> <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram.</font> <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance.</font></sub> 23:35, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | There's quite a bit of waste floating around her (mostly around the back and tail). --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:51, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | There shouldn't be any stripes over the white chest. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 23:58, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | no prob thas easy '''reups''' <sup>[[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet|<font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward</font>]] [[User talk:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet|<font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays</font>]] [[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet/Charart|<font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All</font>]] [[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet/Awards|<font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star.</font>]]</sup> <sub><font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I</font> <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am</font> <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram.</font> <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance.</font></sub> 00:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Same with Cricket, and she looks a little cross-eyed? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 03:50, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Cricket (AFD)]] (Ki) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Cricket_(AFD).kit.png]] im not sure i got the haunch stripes right (im gonna toy with them for a little bit still probably) but other than that i feel good about this <sup>[[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet|<font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward</font>]] [[User talk:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet|<font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays</font>]] [[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet/Charart|<font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All</font>]] [[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet/Awards|<font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star.</font>]]</sup> <sub><font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I</font> <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am</font> <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram.</font> <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance.</font></sub> 23:38, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Add a little shading to the ear farthest from us? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reups''' <sup>[[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet|<font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward</font>]] [[User talk:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet|<font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays</font>]] [[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet/Charart|<font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All</font>]] [[User:SquidwardPlaysAllStarOnClarinet/Awards|<font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star.</font>]]</sup> <sub><font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I</font> <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am</font> <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram.</font> <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance.</font></sub> 00:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Could you define the eye depth? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 03:49, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Loudbelly]] (W) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Loudbelly.warrior.png]] Tried out an eye style that I liked. Not sure if I like my pupil job though.. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I feel like the shading could be defined just a bit more, and the tail shading smoothed a bit. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:28, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 02:13, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Moon Shadow]] (K) ~ For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Moon Shadow.kit.png]] I had an oc named Moonshadow long ago lol. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:13, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Dangling Leaf]] (W) ~ For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Dangling Leaf.warrior.png]] {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:13, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Pine That Clings to Rock]] (Ki) - CBA== |
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| − | [[File:Pine.kit.png]] baby. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|03:24, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:28, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Mistfeather]] (Ki) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Mistfeather.kit.png]] {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 03:28, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | would you mind adding a very light layer of shading to the cheek? the shading right now is making it look like she has overly puffed up cheeks. {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 04:23, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Mistfeather]] (W) - CBA== |
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| − | [[File:Mistfeather.warrior.png]] I like the way this turned out. {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 03:28, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Re-uploaded.''' I got the file from Skye and tweaked a few things. I'll update the kit to match in a bit. {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 03:59, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:29, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Piketooth]] (W) - CBA== |
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| − | [[File:Piketooth.warrior.png]] {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 03:28, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | CBA? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:29, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Mousefang]] (K) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[file:mousefang.kit.png]] ok this. thats it. thats the response. {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 04:07, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Do you want the file for her other images? I'm more than willing to send it your way. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|04:58, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | that would be so incredibly useful! email is meilinggesslerv2@gmail.com thakn you so much skye. {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 05:12, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | She's on her way! You'll find that the shading and highlights aren't quite what they seem to be with this set. =P {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|05:20, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | '''re-up''' Thanks skye!!!{{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 05:47, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | the stripes look darker here than her other images {{Diablo./Sig2|06:16, 03/8/2019}} |
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| − | ==[[Larkwing (BS)]] (Ki) ~ For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Larkwing (BS).kit.png]] matching old warrior {{User:~ Aritarius ~/Sig}} 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | could you define the texture? i believe old warrior had it as per beebs' style {{Diablo./Sig2|06:17, 03/8/2019}} |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' {{User:~ Aritarius ~/Sig}} 14:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Larkwing (BS).warrior.png]] ^ {{User:~ Aritarius ~/Sig}} 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | i believe the shading could be smoothed out overall {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 04:35, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | same as the kit ^ {{Diablo./Sig2|06:17, 03/8/2019}} |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' {{User:~ Aritarius ~/Sig}} 14:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Mintfur (SkC)]] (W) ~ For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Mintfur (SkC).warrior.png]] tabbies are 100x harder when its 2 in the morning {{User:~ Aritarius ~/Sig}} 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | can you smooth out the shading {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 04:59, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' {{User:~ Aritarius ~/Sig}} 14:10, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Swiftflight.warrior.png]] {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 07:24, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | there's some waste where the tail curls, and what's the light source? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 15:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | This looks more white, or even cream, than anything... if possible, could you darken the color just a smidge? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|17:52, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | '''reup''' <== {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 03:50, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | So it's really obvious on a [http://vvcap.com/zC4KEIi48 black background, but there's waste]. Also, I really hate to say this, but it's still looking really cream-ish. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|05:28, 8/03/2019}} |
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| − | '''reup''' {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 06:32, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Lightning Tail]] (Ki) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Lightning Tail.kit.png]] {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:44, 8/02/2019}} |
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| − | [[File:Featherpelt.kit.png]] {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 18:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | The stripes are overblurred and need to be thinner. Define the eye depth and light on the foreleg. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 18:57, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | She needs short fur. {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 18:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | oh shoot, sorry patch. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 19:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 20:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | This needs to match to the [[:File:Featherpelt.apprentice.png|apprentice's]] side in terms of the stripes. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 20:55, August 2, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Brackenfur.warrior.alt4.png]] {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 04:20, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Newtspeck.kit.png]] {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|04:36,8/3/2019}} |
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| − | [[File:Pouncetail_(RC).warrior.png]] {{User:Scarletwind/Sig}} 04:51, August 3, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Minty_(KP).kit.png|Minty_(KP).kit.png]] babie {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">06:24 Sat Aug 3</span></small> |
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Stempaw (A) - For Approval
these stripes did not want to be done Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 02:15, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
the stripes could he thinner un some places, smoother and imo toned down. ★ Winter ★ Just say my name! »03:36, 2 April 2024 (UTC)«
I think the stripes need smudging
03:47, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
i think the paler parts should be more smoothen out, on the kit it kinda seems like it’s fading into the orange. Great job, nice to see how far you’ve come! Tabbies are tough but you can do it^^ ~Ripple ☆ 05:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 19:31, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
The stripes overall should be more close together and wavy - I know Stempaw's design is slightly based off his father's stripes. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:48, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 17:07, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
I think highlights could be lightened or removed since they throw off the base a bit, and looking at the kit, there also seems to be a paler gradient underneath the stripes that’s visible on the haunch, paws, face, and tail. - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 00:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
it might just be me but i think theres leaking shading near the bottom of the chest where it meets the > front leg ✧Winter✧ 21:47, 4/04/2024
Could u maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and <- hind leg? Love the eyes :0Dawnleaf of river 05:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 16:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
Shading could be expanded and defined slightly overall —Illusion ☄. *. ⋆ 14:11, 4/07/2024
I believe he is supposed to have a dorsal tail stripe too. Could you also reduce the shine in the eyes? I think you have a top and bottom part, and having them both restricts the visibility of the pupil and the eye color Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:35, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
define the eye depth a bit? ★ Winter ★ Just say my name! »21:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)«
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 21:49, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
sorry, but the stripes could be softer and the tail markings could be defined. the earpink doesn’t seem to match, but that could be shading. the eyes don’t seem to match either? the kits eyes are a brighter, more contrasting grrrn and this images seems fuller and darker. the shading could be smoothed overall as well imo. ♥ willowthroat „i am starclan!“ 19:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
alsoo i feel like the light mustache looking part (idk what else to call it srry) looksout of place ★ Winter ★ Just say my name! »00:01, 10 April 2024 (UTC)«
I think the muzzle is fine. We don't see a ton of it on the kit so this might fall under artists choice. —Illusion ☄. *. ⋆ 01:12, 4/10/2024
on the kit, there is no mustache as you have here. the muzzle is paler, but not swept out (can’t think of anything else to describe it as lol) as you have it here. to some extent, you can keep the mustache effect on the (<-) side of the muzzle but remove on the (->) side of the muzzle. (i think) ♥ willowthroat „i am starclan!“ 18:04, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
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The face is also really dark so I think removing some of the shading might help overall as well Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:32, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
reups changed the eyes for the more vibrant colorpick to be the main color. ears are mainly a shading thing. Also smoothed the shading, and the mustache thing is mainly a lighter face thing from the kit's markings. Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 18:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
I think the paler gradient under the stripes could be defined/lightened a bit, since I'm color picking #C7853D at the lightest part on the kit. The stripes also seem to have a gradient from the top to bottom on the kit, where it's darker/redder near the back. - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 22:34, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
The shading on the face is still very dark and is making it hard to see the face details. I might also suggest making the eye shine smaller on the right (our left) eye. Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 23:58, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
reups the main pelt gradient was off bc i had forgotten to turn it back on after editing ^^ Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 19:20, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
Define the earpink color and shading a bit? It looks pretty flat rn —Illusion ☄. *. ⋆ 12:40, 4/13/2024
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 21:45, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
imo my comment still stands about the leaky shading on the chest, where the furthest front leg meets the chest. ♥ willowthroat „i am starclan!“ 21:48, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
reups should be gone now ^^ Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 23:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
i don’t know if you saw where i ment, so [1] <- this should help ♥ willowthroat „i am starclan!“ 00:39, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
can you define the tail shading a smidge? looking great!! —Cobrasnarl ♡♡ (20:24, 4/14/2024)
-> ear looks a little flat imo ★ Winter ★ Just say my name! »01:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC)«
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 21:11, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
I would still erase some of the facial shading, as it's still obscuring the facial markings. I think the stripes overall could be a tad smoother. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:55, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 19:43, 18 April 2024 (UTC)