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| − | [[File:Ghost.tweak.png]] Didn't feel right putting "Tweaked" as the heading on this page. I did change a couple things that were bothering me before I uploaded them (such as the far front leg, the cheek fluff on the longhaired, and the back leg placement so that it actually lined up with the other paws). Comments? {{Diablo./Sig2|01:10, 02/4/2020}} |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' don't mind me {{Diablo./Sig2|01:12, 02/4/2020}} |
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| + | [[File:Stempaw (ASC).apprentice.png]] these stripes did not want to be done {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 02:15, 2 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | + | the stripes could he thinner un some places, smoother and imo toned down. {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|03:36, 2 April 2024 (UTC)}} |
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| + | I think the stripes need smudging <div style="font-family: adelon book;"><span style="font-weight: bold; text-shadow: 0 0 10px #003186; color: #007fff;">[[User:EaglesOfAdrestia|EaglesOfAdrestia]] ([[User talk:EaglesOfAdrestia|talk]])</span></div> 03:47, 2 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' also fixed some other issues per feedback {{Diablo./Sig2|02:26, 02/4/2020}} |
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| + | i think the paler parts should be more smoothen out, on the kit it kinda seems like it’s fading into the orange. Great job, nice to see how far you’ve come! Tabbies are tough but you can do it^^ {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 05:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | Maybe make the front legs a little thinner on the shorthair? {{User:Whitestorm17/Sig}} 22:05, April 2, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | I hate saying it's fine; but [https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/550434697407365126/695083800891359252/bengal-cat-7-months-old-standing-in-front-picture-id168819900.png this is pretty close to my original reference] and I think the legs are fine as is - accounting for a generic cat build and not a "semi-foreign" one shown in the linked reference. {{Diablo./Sig2|22:11, 02/4/2020}} |
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| + | The stripes overall should be more close together and wavy - I know Stempaw's design is slightly based off his father's stripes. {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|14:48, 03 4 2024}} 14:48, 3 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' having a fiddle don't mind me again {{Diablo./Sig2|22:40, 04/4/2020}} |
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| − | The front left paw looks like it’s facing us more than the right front paw. I’m not sure if this is intentional or not.-{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig}} 14:27, April 6, 2020 (UTC) |
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| + | I think highlights could be lightened or removed since they throw off the base a bit, and looking at the kit, there also seems to be a paler gradient underneath the stripes that’s visible on the haunch, paws, face, and tail. {{User:Arenzel/Sig}} 00:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | Matching with Max's original reference image, it would be intentional, imo. The link to that is above.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|15:35, 4/06/2020}} |
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| + | it might just be me but i think theres leaking shading near the bottom of the chest where it meets the > front leg {{User:Snowdapple/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Snowdapple/Time}}">21:47, 4/04/2024</span></small> |
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| − | ^ It was intentional due to the perspective. The only thing that is facing forward is the cat's face and the chest slightly, but, to match the original ghost blanks, the front paws and such are facing away from us - also per the linked reference above as well. {{Diablo./Sig2|03:06, 07/4/2020}} |
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| + | Could u maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and <- hind leg? Love the eyes :0[[User talk:Dawnleafofriver|<span style="text-shadow:palevioletred 1px 3px 4px;color:violet;font-family:georgia;font-size:10pt">Dawnleaf</span> <span style="text-shadow:palevioletred 1px 2px 4px;color:orchid;font-family:georgia"><sup><big>of river</big></span>]] 05:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Patchfeather14.personal.png]] I'm going to fix some of the fur on the long hair once I'm on my computer, just posting them here now. {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 02:08, April 6, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | Maybe give the paw pads more shape. Right now they just kind of look like circles with lines going through them, try to make them look more like individual shapes if that makes sense.--{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig}} 14:30, April 6, 2020 (UTC) |
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| + | Shading could be expanded and defined slightly overall {{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Sig2}} <big><sup><span style="{{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Time}}">14:11, 4/07/2024</span></sup></big> |
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| − | Gonna leave a wall instead of peppering comments here and there, sorry in advance. Would you mind making the short-haired's tail thinner? I also think the ears could stand to be made slightly smaller - some breeds have it that large, but in the interest of being a more generic cat design. Also, very broad stroke, I know, but I think the fur lines on the long-furred could stand to reach a little deeper, while they should be less deep* for lack of better word, on the short-furred. To create a bigger difference between them. Also gonna leave a few pixel removal (red)/addition (blue) [https://vvcap.com/iEJw2ZagE suggestions] here. Just the typical type stuff, smoothing and the like - take or leave, I just had time to make it.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|15:05, 4/06/2020}} |
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| + | I believe he is supposed to have a dorsal tail stripe too. Could you also reduce the shine in the eyes? I think you have a top and bottom part, and having them both restricts the visibility of the pupil and the eye color {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|20:35, 07 4 2024}} 20:35, 7 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | Could you define the facial/chin/neck shading and smooth the shading on the white part of the tailtip?{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|16:04, 4/07/2020}} |
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| − | just a small thing that bugs me, i don't think the hind paw under the body would have any light, or at least a lot less. (oreo cat tho) {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 13:14, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Twigbranch.loner.png]] 20 pieces of prey? Ouch. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:46, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| + | sorry, but the stripes could be softer and the tail markings could be defined. the earpink doesn’t seem to match, but that could be shading. the eyes don’t seem to match either? the kits eyes are a brighter, more contrasting grrrn and this images seems fuller and darker. the shading could be smoothed overall as well imo. {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 19:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | Can you define overall shading depth, and perhaps smudge the earpink a little bit, so that its not a hard-edged line. {{Diablo./Sig2|01:26, 07/4/2020}} |
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| + | alsoo i feel like the light mustache looking part (idk what else to call it srry) looksout of place {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|00:01, 10 April 2024 (UTC)}} |
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| + | I think the muzzle is fine. We don't see a ton of it on the kit so this might fall under artists choice. {{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Sig2}} <big><sup><span style="{{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Time}}">01:12, 4/10/2024</span></sup></big> |
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| − | So, I can see that you did define the depth, but, I think the overall shading could be smoothed out, especially the area above the back leg - which also wouldn't reach that high with your current source. [https://vvcap.com/iEKjKqiQr Try this redline for shading]; the lighter red is what I'd recommend as your first layer of shading, and the darker red is where the depth is mainly required. Once that is properly smoothed out, so that it doesn't look hard-edged, which I think is what's throwing me at the moment, the depth might actually be fine at the moment. I'm also not really seeing a difference with the earpink either? {{Diablo./Sig2|01:35, 07/4/2020}} |
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| + | on the [[:File:Stempaw (ASC).kit.png|kit]], there is no mustache as you have here. the muzzle is paler, but not swept out (can’t think of anything else to describe it as lol) as you have it here. to some extent, you can keep the mustache effect on the (<-) side of the muzzle but remove on the (->) side of the muzzle. (i think) {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 18:04, 10 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Is that better, Max? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:53, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | + | The face is also really dark so I think removing some of the shading might help overall as well {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|18:32, 10 4 2024}} 18:32, 10 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' changed the eyes for the more vibrant colorpick to be the main color. ears are mainly a shading thing. Also smoothed the shading, and the mustache thing is mainly a lighter face thing from the kit's markings. {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 18:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Also tweaked up her torn ear a bit. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:49, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| + | I think the paler gradient under the stripes could be defined/lightened a bit, since I'm color picking #C7853D at the lightest part on the kit. The stripes also seem to have a gradient from the top to bottom on the kit, where it's darker/redder near the back. {{User:Arenzel/Sig}} 22:34, 11 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | I would say do even more so, for darkening - if you put it next to the other images, it looks quite flat in comparison with the set.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|01:23, 4/08/2020}} |
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| + | The shading on the face is still very dark and is making it hard to see the face details. I might also suggest making the eye shine smaller on the right (our left) eye. {{User:Eggheart/sig}} 23:58, 11 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Ooofffff this shading. Is that good? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:37, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' the main pelt gradient was off bc i had forgotten to turn it back on after editing ^^ {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 19:20, 12 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | When I said darker, I do mean ''darker''. And still, darker. I'm looking at it [https://vvcap.com/F85SNHsRE this way]; if you overshoot, that's fine, but bumping it up little by little really isn't helping in terms of my repeating comments reflecting it. The bum and the neck probably about 5% opacity more, while the rest of it's gonna be in the 10-13% ballpark.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|01:42, 4/08/2020}} |
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| + | Define the earpink color and shading a bit? It looks pretty flat rn {{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Sig2}} <big><sup><span style="{{User:IllusionaryInfiltrator/Time}}">12:40, 4/13/2024</span></sup></big> |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' Do you want it darker or is this good? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 02:33, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | That should be fine. Can you add shading depth for [https://vvcap.com/mh4m4hei7 these two spots on the belly], and add some shading for the neck triangle?{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|03:54, 4/08/2020}} |
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| + | imo my comment still stands about the leaky shading on the chest, where the furthest front leg meets the chest. {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 21:48, 13 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| + | '''reups''' should be gone now ^^ {{User:Bramble321/Sig}} 23:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | Shading is leaking from the belly onto the back leg <—- {{Diablo./Sig2|06:34, 08/4/2020}} |
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| + | i don’t know if you saw where i ment, so [https://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/e/ea/20240414003623%21Willowthroat.personal.png] <- this should help {{User:Willowthroat/Sig}} 00:39, 14 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| + | can you define the tail shading a smidge? looking great!! {{User:Cobrasnarl/Sig2|20:24, 4/14/2024}} |
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| − | [[File:Needleclaw.warrior.png]] {{User:Tybaxel/Sig}} 01:21, April 7, 2020 (UTC)Tybaxel |
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| + | -> ear looks a little flat imo {{User:Velochisaur/Sig|01:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC)}} |
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| − | Her eye colour seems a little warmer and more yellow on the apprentice and kit than what you've currently got here. {{Diablo./Sig2|01:27, 07/4/2020}} |
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| + | I would still erase some of the facial shading, as it's still obscuring the facial markings. I think the stripes overall could be a tad smoother. {{User:Vector Sigma/Sig2|16:55, 17 4 2024}} 16:55, 17 April 2024 (UTC) |
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| − | That's very fair; the hexcode I used for the kit is #C6902E and for the depth, I just added that on multiply, if that helps? {{Diablo./Sig2|01:37, 07/4/2020}} |
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| − | No worries! One last thing from me I promise; on the apprentice, there seems to be a little gap of white underneath the chin and the black chest. {{Diablo./Sig2|02:18, 07/4/2020}} |
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| − | Hmm, could you curve the haunch shading to contour with the body shape a little more? Just to make the haunch appear rounder, if you get what I mean. The shading also seems to be leaking away from the linear slightly at the elbow of the << front leg.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|16:41, 4/08/2020}} |
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| − | [[File:Bug.loner.png]] I love bug so much {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 15:47, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | Hmm, could you smooth the shading out? Seems a bit blotchy to me. Might be the light source. Given, if the light is also coming from the top as it looks like, there'd be less light on the legs, and the shading elsewhere on the body would contour more with the blank's body shape.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|01:26, 4/08/2020}} |
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| − | Re-Up! I think it was the light source- hope this is better. {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 12:27, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | Hmm. Better for the legs. However, I do think that generally; there is too much shading on the body; it goes higher on the flank than it would need to with a from-above source, now, as with any part of the body (top of the tail, back of the neck, ears, curving into facial shape) that is at the top of the image, needing more light.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|16:44, 4/08/2020}} |
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| − | Re-Up! hope this is better?? {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 19:54, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | What I'm essentially trying to convey is [https://vvcap.com/iENwxR2vI this]; all of the red is where light would be hitting if a sun was sitting right above the cat - thus, anything within the red shouldn't be shaded. Green's where shading could be added, because it's hidden beneath the tail, and thus not getting light. Blue's a small bit of discolored lineart I noticed. I would also lighten the base the barest pinch; just to still be black but so the shading/lineart is more visible.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|20:02, 4/08/2020}} |
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| − | Re-Up! {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 21:19, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | ==[[Bumblestripe]] (Lo) - For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Bumblestripe.loner.png]] I still have a little to do but want to put it up before I go offline for several hours--{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig|17:23, April 7, 2020 (UTC)}} |
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| − | Renamed to [[:File:Bumblestripe.loner.png]] with a lowercase L per naming conventions, please continue uploading under that.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|18:03, 4/07/2020}} |
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| − | Sorry, I didn’t know it mattered.--{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig}} 19:17, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | There’s a little bit of waste near the top right ear (our right). Could you also smooth out the shading on the two front legs? And there’s a fewwww pixels on the back (close to where the tail connects) where the stripe runs through that aren't as dark. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not. This is really good! 😀 {{User:Winterwhisper432/Sig2}} 02:10, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | stripes could be smudged just a wee bit more. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 13:15, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reup--{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig}} 22:59, April 8, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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| − | ==[[Alderheart]] (Lo) ~ For Approval== |
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| − | [[File:Alderheart.loner.png]] my bby boi {{User:StarlightGirlHSS/Sig2|17:46, 4/07/2020}} |
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| − | Smooth out the stripes a tiny bit. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 18:12, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | Sorry, I know it's hard to do earpink on a ginger cat, but could you define it just a tiny bit? 😀 I'm struggling to see it on my screen. {{User:Winterwhisper432/Sig2}} 19:44, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | i think the stripes are a bit lighter on his others images. its 1am though so i could be wrong lol {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 13:16, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Lionblaze.deputy.png]] pain {{User:ThunderStar321/Sig}} 21:32, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | the shading seems 2 be coming away from the lineart on the legs in a few places, just a few pixels. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 02:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded''' :angry: {{User:ThunderStar321/Sig}} 02:37, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | CBA? {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|16:45, 4/08/2020}} |
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| − | There's a lot of waste around the image. ---- Hawkstar |
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| − | To evaluate I believe there is waster right above the neck floof by the head. I think that’s what Hawkstar meant--{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig}} 00:51, April 9, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | To leave a paper trail of my edit summary: Waste doesn't break a CBA. I've thus changed it back.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|01:26, 4/09/2020}} |
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| − | [[File:Haze.sister.png]] It's nice to be back! Quarantine has me bored so I thought I'd try another image. {{User:Winterwhisper432/Sig2}} 22:02, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | I think the base should be lightened a little. With the darker texture on top - she doesn't look ''pale'' gray perse, overall and from color pick, more just a shade of medium gray on the lighter side.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|22:16, 4/07/2020}} |
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| − | '''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Winterwhisper432/Sig2}} 02:04, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | Perhaps define the earpink slightly; seems to fade into the pelt, can't see it very well.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|20:06, 4/08/2020}} |
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| − | [[File:Root.loner.png]] I really like this guy. Took aspects from Tree and Sunrise {{User:Eggheart/sig}} 23:42, April 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | Pretty. Would you mind darkening the shading the barest smidge, to help with the depth? {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|16:46, 4/08/2020}} |
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| − | [[File:Hawk (Sister).sister.alt.png]] {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|20:03, 4/08/2020}} |
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| − | Honestly, I feel like this should be her normal image, since, as far as I can recall, we have no proof that the unnamed tortoiseshell in ''Sqirrelflight's Hope'' is Hawk. It could just be another cat who was never named. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:33, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | There's not really any proof, no; Hawk is never said outright to be a tortoiseshell. But, through some hoop-jumping logic and process of elimination, PC's keeping it sooo....(internal shrug) {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|20:58, 4/08/2020}} |
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| − | can u mak her more ginger, she just looks light brown to me {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 00:58, April 9, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|01:32, 4/09/2020}} |
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| − | [[File:Billystorm.star.png]] {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 20:12, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Finleap.loner.png]]Might redo the shading. All colors from other images. Comments? {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:29, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | Lighten the shading on the body a bit and perhaps smooth it out as well? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:01, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded'''. I redid the shading. This is much better. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 01:30, April 9, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | [[File:Finchpaw.loner.png]] so glad she has some common sense {{Diablo./Sig2|21:17, 08/4/2020}} |
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| − | Maybe add some depth to the tail? You have no idea how long I looked at this so I could leave constructive criticism and say how much I love my baby. For some reason I just like Finchpaw...--{{User:Oceanpelt1532/Sig}} 23:00, April 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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| − | '''reuploaded'''; hopefully that helps, the shading is right ontop of the pale colour so its gonna look lighter than the rest of the normal shading. {{Diablo./Sig2|23:11, 08/4/2020}} |
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Stempaw (A) - For Approval
these stripes did not want to be done Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 02:15, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
the stripes could he thinner un some places, smoother and imo toned down. ★ Winter ★ Just say my name! »03:36, 2 April 2024 (UTC)«
I think the stripes need smudging
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i think the paler parts should be more smoothen out, on the kit it kinda seems like it’s fading into the orange. Great job, nice to see how far you’ve come! Tabbies are tough but you can do it^^ ~Ripple ☆ 05:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 19:31, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
The stripes overall should be more close together and wavy - I know Stempaw's design is slightly based off his father's stripes. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:48, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 17:07, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
I think highlights could be lightened or removed since they throw off the base a bit, and looking at the kit, there also seems to be a paler gradient underneath the stripes that’s visible on the haunch, paws, face, and tail. - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 00:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
it might just be me but i think theres leaking shading near the bottom of the chest where it meets the > front leg ✧Winter✧ 21:47, 4/04/2024
Could u maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and <- hind leg? Love the eyes :0Dawnleaf of river 05:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 16:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
Shading could be expanded and defined slightly overall —Illusion ☄. *. ⋆ 14:11, 4/07/2024
I believe he is supposed to have a dorsal tail stripe too. Could you also reduce the shine in the eyes? I think you have a top and bottom part, and having them both restricts the visibility of the pupil and the eye color Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:35, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
define the eye depth a bit? ★ Winter ★ Just say my name! »21:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)«
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 21:49, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
sorry, but the stripes could be softer and the tail markings could be defined. the earpink doesn’t seem to match, but that could be shading. the eyes don’t seem to match either? the kits eyes are a brighter, more contrasting grrrn and this images seems fuller and darker. the shading could be smoothed overall as well imo. ♥ willowthroat „i am starclan!“ 19:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
alsoo i feel like the light mustache looking part (idk what else to call it srry) looksout of place ★ Winter ★ Just say my name! »00:01, 10 April 2024 (UTC)«
I think the muzzle is fine. We don't see a ton of it on the kit so this might fall under artists choice. —Illusion ☄. *. ⋆ 01:12, 4/10/2024
on the kit, there is no mustache as you have here. the muzzle is paler, but not swept out (can’t think of anything else to describe it as lol) as you have it here. to some extent, you can keep the mustache effect on the (<-) side of the muzzle but remove on the (->) side of the muzzle. (i think) ♥ willowthroat „i am starclan!“ 18:04, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
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The face is also really dark so I think removing some of the shading might help overall as well Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:32, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
reups changed the eyes for the more vibrant colorpick to be the main color. ears are mainly a shading thing. Also smoothed the shading, and the mustache thing is mainly a lighter face thing from the kit's markings. Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 18:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
I think the paler gradient under the stripes could be defined/lightened a bit, since I'm color picking #C7853D at the lightest part on the kit. The stripes also seem to have a gradient from the top to bottom on the kit, where it's darker/redder near the back. - arenzel ⭑⭑⭑ 22:34, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
The shading on the face is still very dark and is making it hard to see the face details. I might also suggest making the eye shine smaller on the right (our left) eye. Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 23:58, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
reups the main pelt gradient was off bc i had forgotten to turn it back on after editing ^^ Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 19:20, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
Define the earpink color and shading a bit? It looks pretty flat rn —Illusion ☄. *. ⋆ 12:40, 4/13/2024
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 21:45, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
imo my comment still stands about the leaky shading on the chest, where the furthest front leg meets the chest. ♥ willowthroat „i am starclan!“ 21:48, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
reups should be gone now ^^ Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 23:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
i don’t know if you saw where i ment, so [1] <- this should help ♥ willowthroat „i am starclan!“ 00:39, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
can you define the tail shading a smidge? looking great!! —Cobrasnarl ♡♡ (20:24, 4/14/2024)
-> ear looks a little flat imo ★ Winter ★ Just say my name! »01:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC)«
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 21:11, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
I would still erase some of the facial shading, as it's still obscuring the facial markings. I think the stripes overall could be a tad smoother. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:55, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
reups Brambleheart ♥ ♫ 19:43, 18 April 2024 (UTC)