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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval

Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye Burntclaw 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 21:20, 7/09/2019

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop — max ^{it is the real thing,} (00:00, 11/7/2019)

Reuploaded - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head ✧Winter✧ 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (21:55, 19/7/2019)

Reuploaded - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (07:11, 24/7/2019)

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 13:56, 7/24/2019

I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oof sorry been super busy lately. Im not sure I have to fix the crop now? If this is approved can i do it then? - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 19:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

These are lovely and I can't see anything to comment on, so CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but i feel like the blank looks slightly too crowded in general. notably the face (might help if you remove some of the lines on the ears ig?), and how does the blank look with those three lines removed on the cat's back leg? also, i feel like the tail still looks too straight–feel like a cats tail would naturally be more bent in such a position. Burntclaw 04:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

also, i feel like the linearart thickness is pretty uneven on the shorthaired blank– it's extremely thick on the cat's back and on the leg in which the paw pads are exposed but thin in other places. Burntclaw 04:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded The tail is based of something like this https://www.omlet.co.uk/images/cache/1024/604/Cat-Chartreux-a_plush_coated_chartreux_cat_lying_down.jpg]] with the tail being straight and just the tip being curled. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 18:39, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation

it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it.  ~Ripple ☆ 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. ~Ripple ☆ 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. is this better? ~Ripple ☆ 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. top left corner. ~Ripple ☆ 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

mhm. okay. ~Ripple ☆ 02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. is this better? ~Ripple ☆ 02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good! — max ^{it is the real thing,} (07:00, 24/7/2019)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆

Add some shading to the other ear, define the shading depth, add more shading along the haunch, and remove the waste that's floating around her (ears, paws, tail is where the waste is). Define the light on >>> this side of the tail too. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a head's up, you should be matching the original warrior, which the coloring should be from this version, as that was posted first. I only tweaked some eyelash issues. For some reason, the queen looks a little darker... —Jayce(07:48, 7/25/2019)​​

Ferk tweaked the queen and since I think she darkened the base​ because she was the OA. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 12:16, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, this should match the original warrior, since that was first, not the queen. If anything, the queen should be tweaked to match the warrior. —Jayce(17:06, 7/25/2019)​​

reuploaded. is this better, Jayce? ~Ripple ☆ 17:38, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the tail seems to end abruptly, and there is a tiny bit of waste between the front and back paws. Windsong^{Run with the wind... ❀} 18:00, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, too, overall. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:24, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. question - if my image doesn't get approved within a month, will it get declined? ~Ripple ☆ 01:02, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

After a month of it being on the approval page, the image will be declined, yes. Can you define the light on the tail, and just a tad bit on the front leg closest to us? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the shading could still be lightened overall Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:45, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the chest and legs. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<16:29, 7/27/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?will i ever be more than i've always been?">_{waving through} 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass?">_{a window} <16:29, 7/27/2019>​

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 23:08, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

The image still appears to be overblurred, try checking your layers for waste and removing it to reduce the blurryness. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. meadowslip, have mercy on me.~Ripple ☆

Lighten/smooth the shading. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:36, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 03:00, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out more. Here's a little tip: If you're constantly being told to smooth out the shading, smooth it out a lot more than you usually do. I learned this and it really helps, trust me. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. ~Ripple ☆ 19:47, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 19:59, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

The image has that overblurred look to it again. Try checking for waste to remove or see if the background is acting up. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:02, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded~Ripple ☆ 21:56, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and add more shading depth in general to the image. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:06, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded ~Ripple ☆ 03:22, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Erase some of the shading on the tail to define the lightsource, and add some more facial shading? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 16:19, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I'm still not seeing much light on the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 19:26, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the other half of the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:28, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reupreuploaded.

You're not defining the light on the correct tail section. Define it on >>> this side, away from the bend. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:25, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you redline it, please? ~Ripple ☆ 20:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

When I can get the computer, I'll gladly make one for you. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:46, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. ~Ripple ☆ 21:45, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

[1] you go! Red is where there needs to be light, green is waste, and orange is where the shading needs to be defined. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:53, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. thanks, potato. ~Ripple ☆ 05:18, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Might you smooth out the tail shading and the shading on the visible back foot? —Jayce(18:46, 8/02/2019)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 18:59, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Leafpool (K) ~ For Approval

Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body should be thinner (you may have to add more after that), and the tips of the ears should be dark brown, too. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:42, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't really be texture, just smudge lines from the stripes. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 10:49,7/24/2019

Reuploaded I might've did a thing Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 20:43, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are less curvy on her other images - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:05,7/27/2019

The stripes also appear to be less soft and slightly sharper on the other images. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 18:59, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Yes? No? Maybe? Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:27, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes more. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Attempts were made Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 15:02, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes appear not as dark on the other images and they have this sketchiness to them...try running a small pencil tool on low opacity with the base color over the stripes and see how that works. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:15, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes also look slightly overblurred - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:06,7/31/2019

Reuploaded y'know I was so confident when I uploaded this the first time... Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

For a lack of better phrasing, the stripes on the other images seem less broken up. The dorsal stripe also seems to be thinner. Also, the stripes still seem overblurred - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 13:24,7/31/2019

Reuploaded y'all are killing me Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 16:51, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Hey nice job on this, you're doing great^^ it might be my eyes, but the stripes seem a bit dark compared to her other images? And a little less blurred and more tapered at the ends. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:22, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

On her other images, the stripes seem to connect with the dorsal stripe more often. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:21,8/1/2019

Reuploaded ok I fixed some of it but Patch I couldn't tell if you meant mine was too blurred or the others were blurred more.... I figured I'd end up having to upload this again anyway so Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Gorsetail (TNP) (W) ~ For Approval

I think the shading needs to be smoothed some :/ also not sure how the tint came out Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:22, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Yes the shading is very blotchy. Could you expand it some on the haunch? That should help. And maybe de-saturate the tint a bit? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 04:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading from the haunch is leaking onto the leg, and the shading is leaking on the back paw farthest from us. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:15, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading entirely Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Don't forget your sig! Smooth out the shading overall. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 17:05, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded idk what you're talking about I totally put my sig in last time Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the shading on the top haunch curve downward more? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:18, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ?? Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (Alt. W) ~ For Approval

ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT 3/3 ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 04:32, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Same as above, but, could you also smooth out the lineart tweak a little for her leg? The bottom bit of the leg shouldn't slant upwards that much, I don't think, and could stand to be a little more horizontal? If you'd like, I could give a redline for what I mean? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (06:04, 28/7/2019)

Same as above, soften the texture and add more shading to the chest. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:20, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Hey Max! A redline guide would be much appreciated! I tried going off Deadfoot but uhhh, his twisted paw is on the other side of the warrior, unfortunately. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 16:07, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

re-up istill wanna get that redline but i tried it again just for my sake ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 16:33, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the leg, to make it more consistent with the image's lineart. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:04, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reup ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 04:12, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart more around the paw area, but the leg area looks fine. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:16, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Here ya go Bramble; here's my quick as redline - hope it helps! There'd also be another line where the paw connects to the leg, to show a bit of a twist - like on Deadfoot's old warrior for reference :D — max ^{it is the real thing,} (08:58, 29/7/2019)

re-up thank you SO much max ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 20:23, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the leg a bit, since a cat's leg is not that thin. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:33, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

re-up forgot i was working onthis until i saw theother one get approved oops ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 01:36, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

The lineart seems slightly choppy on the paw, so smooth it out a bit? I also think that little triangle of lineart under the front paw should be removed as well. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:46, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up you talking about the toe? ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

The toe on the raised leg, yes. Could you add more lineart to round it out a teeny bit more? Just so it doesn't look as pointy as it is now. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reup i personally likethe look of the toe, could we get a second opinion on that ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think in order to match the rest of the lineart, adding a few more pixels to curve it wouldn't hurt. Could you also remove the random line/lineart down the middle of the tip of the tail? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up the tail thing oops, so is that an okay on the toe lmao. also i dont know how to go about curving so tried something, tell me how it went! ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think the paw can be curved a bit more. If you need a redline to help I can provide one^^ —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:15, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

hi patch! that would be soooo helpful. Its stressing me out atm hahaha❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 04:08, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go hope that helps! —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:45, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Leopardstar (W) - For Approval

this was so hard why was this so hard, mainly reffed the starclan Splook ^{sweet  creature} 00:29 Mon Jul 29

No one knows Can you define the tail stripes a teeny bit more? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:31, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Splook ^{sweet  creature} 04:56 Mon Jul 29

it's a mounty pattern I think there's more variety in spot size, and the base seems lighter on the apprentice image, which came first. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 11:10,7/29/2019

Hi uh I don't know if I have a right to say this here but do the eyes look a bit funny? They kind of look like they are facing different ways (The opposite of cross eyes) Sorry if it isn't my place to say this! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:23, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the eyes look fine. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:38, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you fox for the file!! Splook ^{sweet  creature} 04:13 Thu Aug 1

There's a line of waste by the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:55, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

i believe that with this source, the shading on <== side of the face wouldn't look so prominent. Burntclaw 02:34, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Splook ^{sweet  creature} 01:04 Sat Aug 3

this looks good! one final critique is that some shading could be added to the cheek to make it less prominent. i dont believe the cheek would protrude that much for it to be exposed to that much light with this source. Burntclaw 04:32, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth the shading? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 11:36,8/3/2019

Dark-colored ThunderClan kit (K) ~ For Evaluation

Hopefully you guys like it? Im really not good at shading because there are no tutorials for Pixlr char art --Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:11, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Since this is from a manga, this needs to be in grayscale and needs a lighter muzzle. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:13, July 30, 2019 (UTC) It is? What is grayscale? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:31, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Grayscale is the default manga color, so this must be defaulted to a darker gray. Could you also define the shading? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:32, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

So a dark grey? With grey eyes? or can they stay green. And I can try shading but I dont know how to chade on Pixlr X which is what I need to use now... Thanks! Also Is there any other single colour blanks to do? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:37, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I would probably use a different program than Pixlr, such as GIMP or FireAlpaca, which are both free. Only the pelt would have to be in grayscale, the eyes and ear/nose pink can be any color you wish. You shade by getting a color, using the pencil tool to draw it on the pelt, lighten it, then blur/smudge it. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:41, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I have a chromebook and am only allowed to use pixlr X... Im confused also by what you mean RIP... and ok! SO a dark grey pelt Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:43, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, so you have a color wheel, right. Well, click on any color you want, then get your paintbrush/pencil tool and paint it following a clear light source like this, and then blur/smudge it with the respective tools to get a nice, smooth gradient. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:46, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I cant use the blur tool won't work? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:53, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Try setting the blur tool at 100% strength and check the hard-edged box and see if it works then. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:55, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

It seemingly appears pixely and won't smooth out? Sorry if this is getting long... Should I delete MY messages? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, all messages must stay on the approval page until the image is archived. I'd say post for now, and wait for further instruction. please excuse my lack of knowledge --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Its cool, Thank you! I will try to do it as best as possible. Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

NOOOO I just finished but then my wifi went out before I had saved it 0.o Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:39, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better? I have a version with the pencil lines but it doesn't look very good. If you dont like it could you fix the blur as pixlr just wont? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:31, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Please do not thumb your images. I've also renamed this to File:BP.kit-4.png so please continue to reupload over there. I'd also like to reiterate what Potato said that it is probably best if you do not use Pixlr, as it does not have a good history with images in this project. There are other free art programs, such as GIMP and Firealpaca, that can make this process easier; plus there are several members of the project who are familiar with those programs.

The shading should be darkened a little more, and maybe smoothed out. Your light source looks very good. ^^ Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! I found a tool but it is a bit hard to use... would this next reupload be more along the right lines? Also whats Thumbing? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Thumbing is when the file name has a |left/right/thumb thing in the file name. To remove it, simply go into source editor and remove it from the name. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:59, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded uhh ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Upload under the name Vec gave you. Smooth out the shading everywhere, and Remove the waste that's outside the lineart. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think that might be the best I can do shading wise :( I did upload under BP.kit but i called it BP.kit-5? Hopefully, that was right... And can do! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:04, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, you need to upload over File:BP.kit-4.png. Simply click on the link, scroll down and click "Upload new version of file". Also, remove some of the shading on the tail and front limb; a similar light source that's easy to see is File:Dawnpelt.kit.alt.png. See how smooth the shading is and it's not covering all of the limbs? Try to match that. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the base quite a bit, since the description is dark-colored kit. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! I'm back and ready for action! (I rage quitted yesterday because I had the PERFECT art but didn't save it and the Wifi went out Rip) Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 22:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Is this more along those lines? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:10, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

It's looking better, though I would recede the shading some, darken the earpink, and smooth out the shading on the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:13, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Please re-upload over File:BP.kit-4.png like you were told to do. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:24, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry I tried but it didn't work? I was gonna tell you but I forgot :( and ok Greenflower! Btw what do you mean recede the shading some? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:27, August 1, 2019 (UTC) Fixed! --Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:30, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

By recede, I mean remove. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:40, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Un-thumbed, Moved to Bp.kit-4, and Re-upped! This a bit better? You guys are really picky about your charart rip me and my lil Pixlr editor Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:16, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Remember not to thumb your images. Darken the earpink a little bit. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:41, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste by the haunch. ~Ripple ☆ 05:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Nettle (DotC) (W) - For Approval

I really love how the texture came out on this. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:53, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

i like it too! she looks pretty cross eyed. Burntclaw 03:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:12, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Right now it almost looks like there's none. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 03:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:37, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the main body and maybe smooth out the shading there? It looks... off right now for lack of a better word. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 12:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:32, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the haunch shading, especially adding some near the bottom to add the curve, and expand/define the facial shading? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:13, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The texture seems more defined on the other images. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:27, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:29, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The texture could still be sharper, almost like Lizardtail's warrior but a bit softer. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:50, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like dis? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:06, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the back leg and shoulder shading more with the shape of the space? A bit like this sort of shape — max ^{it is the real thing,} (06:19, 03/8/2019)

Berrynose (K Alt) ~ CBA

His poor little tail. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:59, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Hey im pretty sure this is my image? I dont really know how else to word this and i apologize but id like my image please, sorry! ✧Winter✧ 17:28, 8/01/2019

Sorry, but as per this vote, Winter, you did in fact lose claim to your images. If you want to see dates and whatnot, Spooky's got a chart that you're welcome to look at. The vote was made because people claimed a lot of things, and just didn't work on them at all. It was discussed and voted on as per PCA's guidelines on voting. —Jayce(17:43, 8/01/2019)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:55, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lilystem (W) - CBA

tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 03:27, August 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Insanely minor, but I think the ear pink on the queen is a little lighter than this. —Jayce(03:42, 8/02/2019)​

reuploaded tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 16:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:44, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lakeshine (W) - CBA

tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 03:27, August 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Would you object to brightening the white just a bit? —Jayce(03:43, 8/02/2019)​

reuploaded tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 16:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? —Jayce(18:49, 8/02/2019)

Mud Paws (W) - For Approval

Splook ^{sweet  creature} 04:38 Thu Aug 1

Might you smooth out the overall shading a bit? I love what you've got going here, Splook! Another wonderful image. =) —Jayce(07:16, 8/01/2019)​

reuploaded thank you! Splook ^{sweet  creature} 01:02 Sat Aug 3

Millie (Alt. K) - CBA

matched to the old warrior's side — max ^{it is the real thing,} (09:09, 01/8/2019)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think some of these images are supposed to have texture? It looks like it's there on the old kittypet and queen images. I honestly can't tell, but I remember adding it when I took a crack at the kit version for this set. —Jayce(21:05, 8/01/2019)

reuploaded yeah there is texture, i just forgot to turn it on multiply on this vers. the new warrior has it too to match with the queen (which was second in the set?) — max ^{it is the real thing,} (03:38, 02/8/2019)

That's what I thought, because I remember the queen (which was second, yes) having texture as well as the old kittypet... since I think I had that file. Are you able to define the texture any, though? I'm having a little bit of an issue seeing it. —Jayce(03:40, 8/02/2019)

reuploaded how's that? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (06:30, 02/8/2019)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:45, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt W2) - CBA

white boi. —Jayce(21:00, 8/01/2019)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:43, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Mintkit (YS) (K) - For Approval

File:Mintkit (YS).kit.png One of the most depressing kit deaths in the series. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:08, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly re-arrange the eye here? I'm having a lot of issues seeing the coloring and it just looks like it's white-and-black. —Jayce(01:02, 8/02/2019)​​

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the foreleg and head shading just a bit more? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:46, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:07, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt W) - For Approval

File:Squirrelflight.warrior.alt.png and so, the stars have aligned, allowing me to revive. ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 23:35, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's quite a bit of waste floating around her (mostly around the back and tail). --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:51, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any stripes over the white chest. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:58, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

no prob thas easy reups ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 00:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Same with Cricket, and she looks a little cross-eyed? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:50, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Cricket (AFD) (Ki) - For Approval

im not sure i got the haunch stripes right (im gonna toy with them for a little bit still probably) but other than that i feel good about this ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 23:38, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little shading to the ear farthest from us? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 00:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:49, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Loudbelly (W) - For Approval

Tried out an eye style that I liked. Not sure if I like my pupil job though.. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Same with Mintkit, I'm not really seeing any coloring in these eyes at all. If possible, could you just use the multiple kinds of styles we already use? It's a bit off-putting and jarring. Or perhaps try and thin out the amount of black you're using so it shows more color? —Jayce(01:05, 8/02/2019)​​

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the shading could be defined just a bit more, and the tail shading smoothed a bit. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:28, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:13, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Moon Shadow (K) ~ For Approval

I had an oc named Moonshadow long ago lol. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:13, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Dangling Leaf (W) ~ For Approval

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:13, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Pine That Clings to Rock (Ki) - CBA

File:Pine.kit.png baby. —Jayce(03:24, 8/02/2019)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:28, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mistfeather (Ki) - For Approval

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 03:28, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

would you mind adding a very light layer of shading to the cheek? the shading right now is making it look like she has overly puffed up cheeks. Burntclaw 04:23, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Mistfeather (W) - CBA

I like the way this turned out. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 03:28, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I got the file from Skye and tweaked a few things. I'll update the kit to match in a bit. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 03:59, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:29, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Piketooth (W) - CBA

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 03:28, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:29, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mousefang (K) - For Approval

ok this. thats it. thats the response. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 04:07, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Do you want the file for her other images? I'm more than willing to send it your way. —Jayce(04:58, 8/02/2019)​​

that would be so incredibly useful! email is meilinggesslerv2@gmail.com thakn you so much skye. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 05:12, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

She's on her way! You'll find that the shading and highlights aren't quite what they seem to be with this set. =P —Jayce(05:20, 8/02/2019)​

re-up Thanks skye!!!❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 05:47, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes look darker here than her other images — max ^{it is the real thing,} (06:16, 03/8/2019)

Larkwing (BS) (Ki) ~ For Approval

File:Larkwing (BS).kit.png matching old warrior – Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the texture? i believe old warrior had it as per beebs' style — max ^{it is the real thing,} (06:17, 03/8/2019)

Reuploaded – Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 14:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ For Approval

File:Larkwing (BS).warrior.png ^ – Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

i believe the shading could be smoothed out overall Burntclaw 04:35, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

same as the kit ^ — max ^{it is the real thing,} (06:17, 03/8/2019)

Reuploaded – Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 14:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mintfur (SkC) (W) ~ For Approval

tabbies are 100x harder when its 2 in the morning – Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading Burntclaw 04:59, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Swiftflight (W) - For Approval

Burntclaw 07:24, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste where the tail curls, and what's the light source? ~Ripple ☆ 15:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

This looks more white, or even cream, than anything... if possible, could you darken the color just a smidge? —Jayce(17:52, 8/02/2019)

reup <== Burntclaw 03:50, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

So it's really obvious on a black background, but there's waste. Also, I really hate to say this, but it's still looking really cream-ish. —Jayce(05:28, 8/03/2019)

reup Burntclaw 06:32, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Lightning Tail (Ki) - For Approval

—Jayce(18:44, 8/02/2019)​

Featherpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation

 ~Ripple ☆ 18:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred and need to be thinner. Define the eye depth and light on the foreleg. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 18:57, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

She needs short fur. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

oh shoot, sorry patch. ~Ripple ☆ 19:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 20:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match to the apprentice's side in terms of the stripes. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:55, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt W) - For Approval

Burntclaw 04:20, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Newtspeck (K) ~ For Approval

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:36,8/3/2019

Pouncetail (RC) (W) - For Approval

~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:51, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Minty (KP) (K) - For Approval

babie Splook ^{sweet  creature} 06:24 Sat Aug 3