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Sorry, but I think Skt's right. I cant really see the stripes well. They're too close to the fur colour. I'd probably dull down the shadning just a smudge and make the stripes a tiny bit darking, imo. {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 15:05, March 26, 2016 (UTC)
 
Sorry, but I think Skt's right. I cant really see the stripes well. They're too close to the fur colour. I'd probably dull down the shadning just a smudge and make the stripes a tiny bit darking, imo. {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 15:05, March 26, 2016 (UTC)
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I'm sorry, but I don't know how! I can try, but I'm not sure how well it'll come out. [[User:Warriorcat1195|Warriorcat1195]] ([[User talk:Warriorcat1195|talk]]) 15:08, March 26, 2016 (UTC)
   
 
== [[Chiveclaw]] (MC) ~ For Approval ==
 
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Deputy Blanks - For Approval

Deputy.longDeputy.short having trouble with the tails :// Splook sweet  creature 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? Winter 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk ferk was here 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded. Songheart

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:51 Wed Jan 27

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here. Jayce(00:23, 1/29/2016)

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — paper · finches 17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? Splook sweet  creature 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (07:15,1/31/2016)

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:21,2/3/2016

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean. Jayce(19:06, 2/5/2016)

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. Splook sweet  creature 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... Sagestream Visible only in the shadows 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match? Songheart

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:01 Sat Feb 6

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? Appledash the light of honor 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text Splook sweet  creature 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. Sagestream Visible only in the shadows 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I already said that Sage :P Anyway, hope this helps. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:53 Sun Feb 7

I think the tail could be raised a few pixels up on the back of the cat, and the neck needs to be thickened a bit ( http://prntscr.com/a1872f ), and the raised paw should be backed up a few pixels and made smaller. The tum could be dropped a pixel or two, and the ears made a bit neater. The longhair should probably have long fur all the way up to the chin too, as well as the shoulder being fuzzy. ferk was here 23:45, 02/9/2016

reuploaded. thanks so much, i think they look a lot better now. Splook sweet  creature 02:41 Tue Feb 16

Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 03:59, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Add white to the chararts so they look like the other blanks. Great job! ^_^ Songheart

Sorry for bothering you again but could you add a little bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest while you're at it? Just one or two lines will do. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:58 Tue Feb 16

Can I ask why the blanks have to be white? VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 17:29 16/2/16

It's just below the lineart, Velvet. All of the other blanks have that, so I don't see why these shouldn't. That can be added afterwards, though. And I said the same thing on Skype that I'm gonna say now, the feet are a bit too... flat, for lack of a better word. Using what Berry also said to me, a cat usually walks on their toes, so the only way they'd be completely flat is if they're sitting. Jayce(17:35, 2/16/2016)

As I said on Skype, the picture Splook based this off has the cat in the exact same pose with her legs on the ground. In fact, my cats' legs are on the ground when she's asking for food in the same position. :/ Appledash the light of honor 04:29, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

The back legs would be up in the air a little bit, as per Skye. Cats do in fact walk on their toesies. Winter 12:47, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Also sorry foe edit spam but the whiskers that are going <== this way off the blank sre bothering me, since the other whiskers are flat against the side of the face. Basically get rid of those whiskers Winter 12:49, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

I think the back legs are fine. I have seen my cat and if you google images of a cat you will find some in this position or with their feet in that position. Just because it's not common doesn't make it inaccurate. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 21:03, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Exactly, Velvet. You bring up an amazing point. Anyways, here's a picture of the legs Splook used: [1] They're not on their toes. Splook's legs are fine. Appledash the light of honor 01:37, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

If someone would like to argue the opposite, may you please draw a redline and show me what it would look like if the legs were altered? Splook sweet  creature 02:05 Thu Feb 18

No, you don't need to change it becuase it's fine. I provided proof that cats legs cna look like it and in general, they can. Appledash the light of honor 02:06, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hey now, chill. She asked for a redline to see what they'd look like, and there's nothing wrong with that. If she chooses to not do so after the redline is given, then that's fine. But since she did ask for one to support the argument against her, then I think she should be given one. (I can't redline, sorry) Jayce(02:10, 2/18/2016)

I'm not particularly bothered what happens with the back legs, but is this what you guys had in mind? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:18 Thu Feb 18

I can do a redline later, but for now, I'd agree with what others are saying and say that something with the back legs needs to be changed. Yes, cats can lower themselves entirely on the "heel" of their leg (for lack of a better term). But the upper part of the leg would be more stretched out if that were the case, because if the rear is that high in the air, the leg needs to stretch out to compensate for the lower part of the leg being on the ground. You can see it in the picture Icy provided; yes, the lower leg is all on the ground, and you can see how the rear end doesn't appear to be low to the ground, but closer to even with the shoulders. But you can see how the "thigh" (I really don't know the proper words for cat anatomy) is stretch out, not rounded and curled up like drawn here, because it has to stretch out to account for the height lost from the lower leg being on the ground. I probably rambled too much and didn't explain myself very clearly, but I'll do a redline later that will hopefully make what I'm trying to say here clearer. ^^ That, or you could go the direction that Shinx is suggesting and take the lower leg off the ground entirely, so you can keep the bend to the upper leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:51, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Almost a week later. XD http://www.ezimba.com/work/160224C/ezimba11244534222500.png Here's a redline for the legs/back. But I'm not sure I did it totally right. Splook, could you post a link to the full picture you used for a reference, by chance? It might help me figure out how to redline it better, if I can see how low down the back was and such. Anyway, if not, hope this helps. ^^ Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:11, February 23, 2016 (UTC)

If I'm allowed to ask what's wrong with the old deputy blanks?— MinkclawRiver is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 17:12, February 23, 2016 (UTC)

Anatomy issues, mostly. There was a vote on whether or not to redo them and it passed. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:44 Tue Feb 23

Uhh... I've been thinking about trying to do some of the deputy poses, even though I'm just a kit, so now I'm wondering: are these blanks actually done? I'm having trouble telling XD --Warriorcat1195 (talk) 21:17, February 24, 2016 (UTC)

Nope, they're still waiting for be approved. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:26 Wed Feb 24

They aren't approved yet so /please/ don't rush her. She's also uploading it tonight anyways. Appledash the light of honor 15:11, February 25, 2016 (UTC)

I'm gonna be "that person", but these really do need to be uploaded soon. She's only uploaded twice in February, and while I understand that life can be hell, only uploading twice in a 30 day period isn't quite the best thing. It's not fair to anyone to just have these sit without any activity. Sorry if this is coming off as rude, but I do have a job to do as leader. Jayce(23:01, 2/29/2016)

reuploaded. Used Jayie's technique with the leg, hope it's fine.

Alright, I deeply apologize for the lack of uploads, but I am really busy. I am swamped with bookwork and studying every single night, and frankly, the wiki is the last thing on my mind at the moment. I know how eager you guys are to do art, and I'm sorry that it's taking this long, but I'm trying my best. I'm not trying to preach at how busy I am or whatever, nor am I defending myself for not uploading, but I'm really trying to cope with all my schoolwork, home things, and this responsibility. I'm working to get these approved, and I'm not going to give up, so please bare with me.

Once again, very sorry, and I'm trying my hardest to go in some sort of direction with the back leg. Splook sweet  creature 01:53 Tue Mar 1

I'm sure I'll relate to you next year, and I'm scared. But aside from the hind leg being too flat (I wouldn't think that'd be a difficult) I think it looks perfectly fine. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 01:56, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

What do you mean by "too flat"? It's on the ground and she was using the examples the others gave her. Appledash the light of honor 02:00, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I haven't been paying attention to all of this conversation. I just read some of this, so, uh, nvm (shy chuckle)Warriorcat1195 (talk) 02:20, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

The angle of the lower leg is definitely better. :)Though the lower leg seems too thin now compared to the front legs. The hip is still too rounded - with how stretched out it is, it should be less filled out, and the line should be flatter. I can do another redline for the shorthair, but I show what I meant for that on the longhair redline. The belly line is too far up on both blanks; there isn't enough room to fit the cat's ribcage and belly. Lower it, and make it jut up less on the longhair, if that makes sense. Again, I show it in my redline, but I can redo it/do one for the shorthair/explain myself more clearly if you want. If it's possible, I would really like to see the image you used as a reference (the full image, not the partial image of the legs that Icy posted). It would really help if I could see what you were trying to reference to be able to explain my critiques. I hope that made sense... Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:29, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

The back legs are not anatomically correct at all tbh. I sent you a redline on skype splook. Also remove the whiskers on the front of the muzzle they shouldnt be showing if the others are going backwards Winter 23:01, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

I'm getting conflicting opinions on the back legs again. Which do I follow now? Splook sweet  creature 23:53 Tue Mar 1

The redline jayie provided here, I think. The haunch is much thinner and closer to the bum and less round... That's how it'd be in a cat standing like this. In addition to that, the longhair's tail should look more like that at the top, as it looks unnatural rn. ferk was here 00:22, 03/2/2016

I'm sorry to repeat myself, but it would make it a lot easier to show what I meant if you gave the link for your reference... I saw the partial picture Icy provided, and I was having trouble telling the position of the back and the other hind leg were from that partial shot. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:50, March 2, 2016 (UTC)

I believe this is the image you used as reference from looking at the picture Icy posted I found what I believe is it. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 18:24, March 2, 2016 (UTC)

can you move the tails more to the left slightly? they look much too long and stretched out at the base of the tail as they are right now, especially the longhaired one. and I'm probably just being picky with this one but maybe move them up a couple pixels too, they seem too...low? david 🌈 16:05, March 5, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Velvetmoon. :) After looking at the reference image, I made this redline. Hope this helps: http://www.ezimba.com/work/160306C/ezimba11244574207200.png Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:37, March 5, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. thank you so much jayie! there's probably still issues with the longhair's tail since i had to redo it to put it closer to the body, as well as some other minor things, but it's getting there, lol. Splook sweet  creature 02:33 Sun Mar 6

No problem. :) The belly is still much too thin on both, and there's a few other little changes. I made a new redline for both the longhair and the shorthair: http://www.ezimba.com/work/160307C/ezimba11244514440400.png http://www.ezimba.com/work/160307C/ezimba11244520061500.png Hope they help. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:45, March 6, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the tip of the long hairs tail is drooping to much but know looking at jayie's redline I think that will fix it though. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 18:54, March 9, 2016 (UTC)

No I haven't forgotten about these. Sorry if it sounds like I'm full of excuses but on monday I started drum major tryouts which takes about 3 hours after school of physical exercise. I'm coming home completely exhausted, extremely sore, doing my schoolwork, and then going to bed. Tryouts will be done next Thursday and I would really appreciate your patience with me. Just letting you know that I haven't forgotten about this. I promise I'll get to them. Thanks again. --Splook sweet  creature 23:07 Thu Mar 17

Splook, if it makes you feel better I think this looks amazing, and tbh I have no clue how anyone is spotting such minor flaws! Warriorcat1195 (talk) 16:48, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

The back looks a little short; maybe add some more "weight" in lack of a better term to the haunches ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 08:25, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry if this has already been pointed out, but I don't think the entire foot should be flat on the back legs. The heels should be raised off the ground a little. I can't describe it any better than that, I'm sorry. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 11:29 Sun Mar 20

reuploaded hope i did things okay? i wasn't too sure what to do about the back so i just made it more rounder and even, and as for the paws, the legs are at a kind of an angle anyways so i didn't know how to address that, but if anyone has any tips then i'd appreciate it. also i just realized i forgot to edit the bellies and i'll do that tomorrow. i appreciate everyone's patience with me, sorry again. Splook sweet  creature 00:43 Sat Mar 26

Rain (TAQ) (Ro) ~ CBA

File:Rain (TAQ).rogue.png I've never really done this before so I tried with this one :) spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:56, 3/15/2016

Define the shading. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:34, March 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:15, 3/15/2016

Define the shading on the legs and tail. Also, where's the light coming from? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 20:42 Tue Mar 15

Define the head shading as well. Add earpink, or define it if it's there (sorry my monitor is bad I can't tell). —Ivy 20:45, March 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did what you said above^^ but I think I might need to define it a little more on the next upload. I'm not really sure about the light source, I think it's coming straight at the image. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:41, 3/15/2016

Define the shading on the face? Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:30, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:28, 3/16/2016

Define the shading depth and smooth it on the legs a bit. (I haven't gotten my glasses in yet so if I'm seeing it as blotchy but it isn't then ignore the smoothing part.) Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣13:01 Thu Mar 17

Reuploaded I tried :3 spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:13, 3/17/2016

Smooth out the shading a bit more, and define the earpink. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:00, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:06, 3/18/2016

This is gorgeous. Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 02:46, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

the shading is leaking away from the linart on his back and it still seems flat, and I can't see it on the tail. david 🌈 05:06, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed it on the back and defined the tail shading. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 12:51, 3/19/2016

I think the shading could be defined some more it looks sort of cloudy? VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 16:24, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Idk can't really define it too much more or it looks funny.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:03, 3/19/2016

Could you smooth it out more it looks streaky. Sorry for all this. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 17:15, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Idk I'm getting conflicting comments on whether to smooth or define so this is the result for now :3 spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:19, 3/19/2016

Spookycat, this is amazing! I do think that the shading in the middle of his/her body (haven't read the book yet) could be blurred a bit more, or smudged or something. Just that one section. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 21:38, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reups spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:58, 3/19/2016

Smooth out the shading where Warriorcat told you to before (not awake enough to explain it yet), and define the shading on the face, tail, and legs. Jayce(08:27, 3/22/2016)

The shading seems blotchy on the haunch and chest-front leg area (although that might just be me). ✺Misty~ R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~ 09:27, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:19, 3/22/2016

Darken the shading (not define, it's plenty defined, but the colours too light? make it black, and adjust opacity from there). If it's already black, then try adding a second layer of shading in your widest areas of shadow to add depth. Also, smooth it out a little more around the edges of your highlights, its pretty sharp. ferk was here 21:27, 03/22/2016

Reuploaded it was already black, so I made a new layer and tried that.. Idk.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:51, 3/22/2016

Blur the shading some more and then this looks ready for a CBA. Also you obviously know what you're doing so I'm promoting you to an apprentice. Appledash the light of honor 14:06, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reups lol I only know what I'm doing cause you're an awesome mentor! spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:29, 3/24/2016

Define the light on the legs farthest from us, and blur the main body shading a bit more. Very nice! —Ivy 14:05, March 25, 2016 (UTC)

Reploaded Ty. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:12, 3/25/2016

Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 02:03, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

Flame (R) ~ For Approval

Flame.rogue I have no idea who this cat is but I think she's beautiful Warriorcat1195 (talk) 20:33, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

Her description doesn't cite her having stripes, but idk if it was in the book but not on her article yet. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:42, 3/16/2016

ginger cats automatically get stripes. define the shading on the body, and please don't align the image next time. david 🌈 20:43, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

What do you mean by align the image? Warriorcat1195 (talk) 20:53, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh, I think I know what you mean. Sorry, but I don't really like source mode, so I hit "Add topic" and then it puts you in visual, and then you hit "Add photo" and then if you don't align it it ends up on the wrong side. Anyway, fixed it. Probably. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 21:05, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

Could you smudge the stripes more please. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 21:37, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

Define head shading and shading on the far front paw ✺Misty~ R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~ 02:13, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Actually define the shading everywhere, or just add some more depth. Appledash the light of honor 11:30, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

maybe make her less neon too. david 🌈 13:36, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

#D87E35 is a good color to use for your ginger base. ^^ Smudge the white and define the shading on the legs. I actually think overall, like Icy said, would be a good idea as well. I also suggest adding a couple smaller stripes in various places throughout the image, such as the feet and other areas where there's a good amount of space between the stripes. Jayce(14:33, 3/17/2016)

Reuploaded alright I tried that color "code" you suggested, and personally I think that looked terrible (no offense). It just seemed to dark for a cat that was named Flame. I blurred the ginger and stripes a little bit, added more stripes, and defined shading (I think) Warriorcat1195 (talk) 22:01, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

I still think it needs to be less neon including the stripes which could also be made less squiggly. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 23:05, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more overall, and add some light to the legs and tail. —Ivy 23:38, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded redid the stripes altogether to keep them from being squiggly. Defined shading and added highlights to the legs and tail. However I think I accidentally made the stripes disappear on the legs and tail. Just noticed that. Let me go fix it.... Warriorcat1195 (talk) 14:30, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded redid shading altogether. I made it thick enough that defining shouldn't be necessary but blurred it enough that you can still see the stripes. I'm begging you not to make me define the shading anymore because I don't want to have to do that again!!! It's annoying redoing the shading. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 14:55, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but it looks like either there is no shading on the legs or it takes up the entire leg and is overblurred. I have looked on multiple screens, and no matter which one I look on, the shading looks the same. I'm sorry, but can you please define the light source and shading on the legs? I know messing with shading gets annoying, but it really needs to have the light source and shading defined. According to the light source on the rest of the body, the shading should only be on --> side of the legs. Also, define the shading depth. None of this requires redoing the shading. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣15:16 Fri Mar 18

Alright, the legs won't be difficult, but I'm unsure what you mean by adding depth to the shading. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 17:49, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 (talk) 18:00, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

This probably comes from my own preference but I think this color is way too neon. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:31,3/19/2016

Well every time I change the color of the ginger it adds waste outside the lineart, and since it's not translucent like shading the magic wand can't really get it so getting rid of the waste takes FOREVER, so unless others agree I'd rather not try to edit it, if you understand. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 16:44, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink and colour the nose in. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 16:22, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded the nose was already colored in. Also somehow my shading and ear pink layers got merged, so that explains what happened to the ear pink. I fixed it. I'm just curious, despite me being a kit, could this eventually get posted on Flame's page? Warriorcat1195 (talk) 21:33, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

When it's approved, yes. And I'm sorry, but I agree that you do need to change the color, it's far too neon. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:04 Sat Mar 19

Dang it. I'm on my phone right now so I'll get to it later or tomorrow. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 22:57, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Do you want me to make it paler or darker? Warriorcat1195 (talk) 11:37, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

Just... less bright? Duller? The color Jayce suggested earlier (#D87E35) is good. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:47 Sun Mar 20

Reuploaded this is as much as I'm willing to give. The color you suggested to me looks awful with the color of the stripes, but when I went to change the color of the stripes it made them much too thick and the whole thing looked terrible. But now it's not neon and the colors still work together. If you really think I have to use the suggested color, I'll use it and redo the stripes, but I think this is an easier solution. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 19:15, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

This is to pastel in my opinion it needs to be deeper. Can I recommend this #D96805. No cat would be this pastel and I still think the stripes are too neon. Maybe make them this colour #B45604. Also can you define/deepen the shading. Sorry for all this. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 20:05, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

I have used this color many times on countless images and gotten them approved; it's not "too pastel". The color is perfectly fine. =/ Jayce(20:13, 3/20/2016)

The base is good, but perhaps make the stripes darker/less saturated? Personally they look like they are clashing a bit. Feel free to leave it if you disagree or want to get a second opinion on it though. It's not to terribly neon (and I am in the middle of a migraine episode) but they appear just a little too bright on the base. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣00:21 Mon Mar 21

Reuploaded I tried the colors you suggested, Velvet, and I will admit this looks better. However, I thought the color of the stripes was a little too brown, so I just added a bit of red to the mix. If you think I should lower how much red I used that's fine, but #B45604 looks too much like the stuffed cat I got when I was little (it's adorable but it's not terribly realistic). Warriorcat1195 (talk) 18:37, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

I don't really have that much experience here, but the tummy shading just looks a bit off to me. I personally think black shading might work better, or just make it flow better with the anatomy of the kitty. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:39, 3/21/2016

So, I just looked up the definition of "anatomy", and it might help if I've worked with that in science class. Personally I feel like Florida has one of the worst school systems ever but I don't want to go to a different one because here I can be gifted and hardly be trying XD Warriorcat1195 (talk) 18:46, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, FL's school system sucks. Go private schools! Anyways, the shading is leaking away from the lineart on one of the paws too. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:48, 3/21/2016

Reuploaded nothing a little magic wand can't fix Warriorcat1195 (talk) 18:50, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

I can't see the stripes at all now. david 🌈 18:57, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

And lighten the shading on the side. Appledash the light of honor 19:11, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

Ah dang it I didn't get your response, Appledash. I'll get to that in a sec. Trollsky, does this look any better? I also darkened the nose. Should I darken the ear pink as well? Warriorcat1195 (talk) 19:30, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Appledash, if this doesn't look better, then the answer is no. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 19:40, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the tail? I think it's covering too much and looks cloudy. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:42, 3/21/2016

Alright, I DID fix it, but I forgot to post it. I'll do it tomorrow after school, since I'm on my phone right now Warriorcat1195 (talk) 00:33, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

Make the stripes less triangular. Look at a picture of any type of tabby for reference; I personally like how you did them, but we've redone tons of images for triangular stripes, so it only makes sense to change em now and avoid the redo/tweak process. ferk was here 22:19, 03/22/2016

Reuploaded -sigh- I don't seem to get emails for this page anymore--unless it's not my art. Well, here's what I did yesterday. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 00:46, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded yesterday I accidentally merged the layers on the pic, so this was harder than I anticipated. I did the best I could, I'm sorry. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 00:54, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Anyways, you obviously know what you're doing so I'm promoting you to an apprentice. Appledash the light of honor 14:05, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

I'm really, really sorry for breaking your CBA, but could you define the shading? I can't really see it at all. And this one may just be my screen, but I can hardly see the stripes too, would it be possible to darken them a little? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 18:55 Thu Mar 24

The shading seems to be covering a lot of the tail, could you define it some? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:28, 3/24/2016

Sorry I haven't been on; I had school and then I had chores and then Mom was doing things with the computer and then it was dinner, then I had dishes. School was very interesting today but I won't get into that. I can fix the shading easy--just make a new layer, however I don't think the body shading should really be defined at all, but as I've explained above I accidentally merged the pic into one layer, so I don't think the stripes can be edited at this point--at least not unless I'm going to completely retry it, that is. I mean to be fair I don't think it'd be hard to redo the whole pic, but I'd rather not. I'll get to the shading now. Sorry, I have a problem with rambling. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 23:59, March 25, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm pretty sure this is better to some degree Warriorcat1195 (talk) 00:05, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

Look, right now there really isn't anything wrong I can see. Comments nbefore approval? Appledash the light of honor 03:13, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm extremely sorry for breaking your CBA again, but could you define the main body shading and define the light on the legs and tail? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 09:58 Sat Mar 26

and I still can't see the stripes. david 🌈 11:45, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

You guys seriously think those need to be defined? I made sure they're clearly visible. If you seriously want me to change it I'll do it after I shower, but I can't see where you're coming from; and I also don't see physically how I can change the stripes at this point. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 13:08, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'd smudge the white on the belly just a couple pixels to the right, also. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:13, 3/26/2016

Alright, that won't be too bad. I'll smudge it, add highlights and define shading, but I can't fix the stripes for you. They're plenty visible--even at first glance, I can assure you. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 14:46, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded defined shading, but I added highlights and it looked like too much, so I got rid of them. I'd like to stand by my belief that the light is obvious, as before the last upload I made sure the legs and tail had light on them as well as shade. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 14:52, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think Skt's right. I cant really see the stripes well. They're too close to the fur colour. I'd probably dull down the shadning just a smudge and make the stripes a tiny bit darking, imo. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 15:05, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I don't know how! I can try, but I'm not sure how well it'll come out. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 15:08, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

Chiveclaw (MC) ~ For Approval

Chiveclaw.mc Don't know how I feel about this. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 22:29, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and give it a bit more shape. Darken it too. Jayce(02:09, 3/17/2016)

Could you also blur it? it seems very hard-edged. ✺Misty~ R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~ 02:14, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload played around with the shading. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 08:13, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Blur it some more, especially on the chest. And define the eye depth. Appledash the light of honor 11:29, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 23:04, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Make the texture flow better with the body, especially on the back/stomach and haunch. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:44 Sat Mar 19

Sorry what do you mean? VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 16:20, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

the texture should follow the cat's anatomy rather than going down in straight lines. david 🌈 00:06, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload fixed texture. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 10:51, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge/blur/whatever the shading on the close back leg, and define the light on the other three legs and the tail please Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:46 Sun Mar 20

Reupload :) VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 20:01, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and give a bit more shape to the shading. Jayce(12:42, 3/23/2016)

Reupload I defined the eye depth and I tried to shape the shading but I don't know exactly what you mean. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard!

Thin out the tail shading a little, it looks like the entire tail is in shadow Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 18:53 Thu Mar 24

Reupload VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 22:18, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Alderpaw (MCA) - For Approval

Alderpaw.mca This image is frustrating me so I'm just going to post it. I'll fix it up more later. —Ivy 17:45, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading please? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:44 Sun Mar 20

Re-uploaded. —Ivy 22:57, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

Needlepaw (K) ~ For Approval

File:Needlepaw.kit.png this reminds me of undyne. complicated and never able to beat.❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 02:05, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

comments? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 05:58, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the head just a tiny bit? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:17 Thu Mar 24

Mistfeather (W) - For Approval

Mistfeather.warrior I'll try and tweak this later, I think. Jayce(18:46, 3/21/2016)

Define the shading, its not really visible because it smooths in with the pelt coat so much. Appledash the light of honor 19:09, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried. Jayce(21:02, 3/21/2016)

Blur the shading some more ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 00:30, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have ragged fur? ✺Misty~ R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~ 04:30, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

No...that's when he was a loner, not a SkyClan warrior. ^^ Jaysnow (talk) 04:38, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

The ragged fur was specifically mentioned to be from after he left SkyClan. His fur was well-grommed and glossy when he was a warrior. I'll reupload after I've eaten some food. Jayce(08:23, 3/22/2016)

Re-uploaded. It doesn't even look like I did anything... but blurring this is complicated, since if I blur it too much, then I'll get told to define it again... Jayce(09:41, 3/22/2016)

Try blurring it on the legs b ecause it's very sharp and no one will ask you to define that part again. Appledash the light of honor 23:55, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(00:17, 3/23/2016)

Could you smooth out the neck shading just a tad? —Ivy 14:08, March 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(21:19, 3/25/2016)

Could you blur the earpink some? Splook sweet  creature 02:11 Sat Mar 26

Micah (Ki) ~ For Approval

Micah.kit I did him no justice; my gcses are coming up and I'm out of charart practice Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:16, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

Bur the shading a lot more ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 23:22, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

The shading tint also seems to be a bit dark for his pelt, do you think you could tint it a warmer color? Iveh Yo! 02:11, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:35, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Bob (KP) - For Approval

Bob.kittypet

I haven't done one of these in a long time! I know the spine stripe should be blended out some and I do intend to do that on the next upload. I wanted to get this up before I lost my reservation. I'm quite proud of this one though! What're your thoughts guys? Iveh Yo! 02:10, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, that stripe needs to be blurred a tad as well as the stripes on the tail. Also, I love the little fish on the collar! Also, define shading, please. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 12:13, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Could you blur/smudge the tail stripes a smidge? Splook sweet  creature 02:10 Sat Mar 26

Marshcloud (Ki) ~ For Approval

Marshcloud.kit heterochromia 👍 david 🌈 12:45, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded facial shading tweak david 🌈 17:47, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Mistfeather (Kit) ~ For Evaluation

Mistfeather.kit2Finished Mistfeather's kit image :) Tried to do it as similar to the loner image and the current for approval warrior image. it's my first image that I've ever did for the warriors wiki so :3

Also now I noticed I made it too dark compared to the others so I'll lighten it up a bit. 

Cheetahfur (talk) 20:01, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Lovely but please don't aline or make you images thumbnail please. I have fixed it but you will need to make the image smaller. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 22:40, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Image is a bit large....and what's up with the eyes? They're kinda sliding to the left. Jaysnow (talk) 00:18, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Lessen the ear pink; it's supposed to have more room to fade out. Also personally I feel like it's too dull and should be brightened a bit, but it could just be me. I have a thing for bright colors. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 00:24, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the image size, sorry about that. I forgot to resize it down after I exported it. Fixed now. Other than that I just tried to lighten it up a bit. Will work on it a lot more tomorrow. :) Cheetahfur (talk) 00:40, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Please upload this file under Mistfeather.kit.png, and not Mistfeather.kit2.png. Just go to Special > Upload and upload your image from there. I'm going to rename this file to Mistfeather.kit.png. Appledash the light of honor 01:36, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Don't align your images, please. Anyway, he needs to be longhaired, and I believe the other images are paler. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:36 Thu Mar 24

Lulu (K) ~ For Approval

Lulu.kitKiscica Sziri the goat sails away ツ 15:09, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

There's no lines seperating the toes on the paws on the kit blanks, I don't think you're allowed to just add them since they're not in the original blanks? Correct me if I'm wrong Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 18:52 Thu Mar 24

Re-ups You're right Sziri the goat sails away ツ 19:05, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Blue Whisker (Ki) ~ For Approval

Blue Whisker.kit Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:09 Fri Mar 25

The shading seems to be a bit intense to me; would you mind lightening it/blurring it more? Warriorcat1195 (talk) 00:00, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

reups I dont blur shading, but I can definately lighten it Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:05 Sat Mar 26