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Deputy Blanks - For Approval

having trouble with the tails :// Splook ^{sweet  creature} 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? ✧Winter✧ 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk — ferk was here ✦^✦_✦ 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded. Songheart

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{17:51 Wed Jan 27}

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here. —Jayce(00:23, 1/29/2016)

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? Splook ^{sweet  creature} 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail? ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (07:15,1/31/2016)

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 00:21,2/3/2016

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean. —Jayce(19:06, 2/5/2016)

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... Sagestream ^{Visible only in the shadows} 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match? Songheart

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{16:01 Sat Feb 6}

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text Splook ^{sweet  creature} 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. Sagestream ^{Visible only in the shadows} 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I already said that Sage :P Anyway, hope this helps. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{10:53 Sun Feb 7}

I think the tail could be raised a few pixels up on the back of the cat, and the neck needs to be thickened a bit ( http://prntscr.com/a1872f ), and the raised paw should be backed up a few pixels and made smaller. The tum could be dropped a pixel or two, and the ears made a bit neater. The longhair should probably have long fur all the way up to the chin too, as well as the shoulder being fuzzy. — ferk was here ✦^✦_✦ 23:45, 02/9/2016

reuploaded. thanks so much, i think they look a lot better now. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 02:41 Tue Feb 16

Comments before approval? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 03:59, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Add white to the chararts so they look like the other blanks. Great job! ^_^ Songheart

Sorry for bothering you again but could you add a little bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest while you're at it? Just one or two lines will do. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{16:58 Tue Feb 16}

Can I ask why the blanks have to be white? Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 17:29 16/2/16

It's just below the lineart, Velvet. All of the other blanks have that, so I don't see why these shouldn't. That can be added afterwards, though. And I said the same thing on Skype that I'm gonna say now, the feet are a bit too... flat, for lack of a better word. Using what Berry also said to me, a cat usually walks on their toes, so the only way they'd be completely flat is if they're sitting. —Jayce(17:35, 2/16/2016)

As I said on Skype, the picture Splook based this off has the cat in the exact same pose with her legs on the ground. In fact, my cats' legs are on the ground when she's asking for food in the same position. :/ Appledash ^{the light of honor} 04:29, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

The back legs would be up in the air a little bit, as per Skye. Cats do in fact walk on their toesies. ✧Winter✧ 12:47, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Also sorry foe edit spam but the whiskers that are going <== this way off the blank sre bothering me, since the other whiskers are flat against the side of the face. Basically get rid of those whiskers ✧Winter✧ 12:49, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

I think the back legs are fine. I have seen my cat and if you google images of a cat you will find some in this position or with their feet in that position. Just because it's not common doesn't make it inaccurate. Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 21:03, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Exactly, Velvet. You bring up an amazing point. Anyways, here's a picture of the legs Splook used: [1] They're not on their toes. Splook's legs are fine. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 01:37, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

If someone would like to argue the opposite, may you please draw a redline and show me what it would look like if the legs were altered? Splook ^{sweet  creature} 02:05 Thu Feb 18

No, you don't need to change it becuase it's fine. I provided proof that cats legs cna look like it and in general, they can. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 02:06, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hey now, chill. She asked for a redline to see what they'd look like, and there's nothing wrong with that. If she chooses to not do so after the redline is given, then that's fine. But since she did ask for one to support the argument against her, then I think she should be given one. (I can't redline, sorry) —Jayce(02:10, 2/18/2016)

I'm not particularly bothered what happens with the back legs, but is this what you guys had in mind? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{15:18 Thu Feb 18}

I can do a redline later, but for now, I'd agree with what others are saying and say that something with the back legs needs to be changed. Yes, cats can lower themselves entirely on the "heel" of their leg (for lack of a better term). But the upper part of the leg would be more stretched out if that were the case, because if the rear is that high in the air, the leg needs to stretch out to compensate for the lower part of the leg being on the ground. You can see it in the picture Icy provided; yes, the lower leg is all on the ground, and you can see how the rear end doesn't appear to be low to the ground, but closer to even with the shoulders. But you can see how the "thigh" (I really don't know the proper words for cat anatomy) is stretch out, not rounded and curled up like drawn here, because it has to stretch out to account for the height lost from the lower leg being on the ground. I probably rambled too much and didn't explain myself very clearly, but I'll do a redline later that will hopefully make what I'm trying to say here clearer. ^^ That, or you could go the direction that Shinx is suggesting and take the lower leg off the ground entirely, so you can keep the bend to the upper leg. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 21:51, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Almost a week later. XD http://www.ezimba.com/work/160224C/ezimba11244534222500.png Here's a redline for the legs/back. But I'm not sure I did it totally right. Splook, could you post a link to the full picture you used for a reference, by chance? It might help me figure out how to redline it better, if I can see how low down the back was and such. Anyway, if not, hope this helps. ^^ Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 17:11, February 23, 2016 (UTC)

If I'm allowed to ask what's wrong with the old deputy blanks?— Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 17:12, February 23, 2016 (UTC)

Anatomy issues, mostly. There was a vote on whether or not to redo them and it passed. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{17:44 Tue Feb 23}

Uhh... I've been thinking about trying to do some of the deputy poses, even though I'm just a kit, so now I'm wondering: are these blanks actually done? I'm having trouble telling XD --Warriorcat1195 (talk) 21:17, February 24, 2016 (UTC)

Nope, they're still waiting for be approved. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{21:26 Wed Feb 24}

They aren't approved yet so /please/ don't rush her. She's also uploading it tonight anyways. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 15:11, February 25, 2016 (UTC)

I'm gonna be "that person", but these really do need to be uploaded soon. She's only uploaded twice in February, and while I understand that life can be hell, only uploading twice in a 30 day period isn't quite the best thing. It's not fair to anyone to just have these sit without any activity. Sorry if this is coming off as rude, but I do have a job to do as leader. —Jayce(23:01, 2/29/2016)

reuploaded. Used Jayie's technique with the leg, hope it's fine.

Alright, I deeply apologize for the lack of uploads, but I am really busy. I am swamped with bookwork and studying every single night, and frankly, the wiki is the last thing on my mind at the moment. I know how eager you guys are to do art, and I'm sorry that it's taking this long, but I'm trying my best. I'm not trying to preach at how busy I am or whatever, nor am I defending myself for not uploading, but I'm really trying to cope with all my schoolwork, home things, and this responsibility. I'm working to get these approved, and I'm not going to give up, so please bare with me.

Once again, very sorry, and I'm trying my hardest to go in some sort of direction with the back leg. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 01:53 Tue Mar 1

I'm sure I'll relate to you next year, and I'm scared. But aside from the hind leg being too flat (I wouldn't think that'd be a difficult) I think it looks perfectly fine. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 01:56, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

What do you mean by "too flat"? It's on the ground and she was using the examples the others gave her. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 02:00, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I haven't been paying attention to all of this conversation. I just read some of this, so, uh, nvm (shy chuckle)Warriorcat1195 (talk) 02:20, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

The angle of the lower leg is definitely better. :)Though the lower leg seems too thin now compared to the front legs. The hip is still too rounded - with how stretched out it is, it should be less filled out, and the line should be flatter. I can do another redline for the shorthair, but I show what I meant for that on the longhair redline. The belly line is too far up on both blanks; there isn't enough room to fit the cat's ribcage and belly. Lower it, and make it jut up less on the longhair, if that makes sense. Again, I show it in my redline, but I can redo it/do one for the shorthair/explain myself more clearly if you want. If it's possible, I would really like to see the image you used as a reference (the full image, not the partial image of the legs that Icy posted). It would really help if I could see what you were trying to reference to be able to explain my critiques. I hope that made sense... Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:29, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

The back legs are not anatomically correct at all tbh. I sent you a redline on skype splook. Also remove the whiskers on the front of the muzzle they shouldnt be showing if the others are going backwards ✧Winter✧ 23:01, March 1, 2016 (UTC)

I'm getting conflicting opinions on the back legs again. Which do I follow now? Splook ^{sweet  creature} 23:53 Tue Mar 1

The redline jayie provided here, I think. The haunch is much thinner and closer to the bum and less round... That's how it'd be in a cat standing like this. In addition to that, the longhair's tail should look more like that at the top, as it looks unnatural rn. — ferk was here ✦^✦_✦ 00:22, 03/2/2016

I'm sorry to repeat myself, but it would make it a lot easier to show what I meant if you gave the link for your reference... I saw the partial picture Icy provided, and I was having trouble telling the position of the back and the other hind leg were from that partial shot. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 03:50, March 2, 2016 (UTC)

I believe this is the image you used as reference from looking at the picture Icy posted I found what I believe is it. Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 18:24, March 2, 2016 (UTC)

can you move the tails more to the left slightly? they look much too long and stretched out at the base of the tail as they are right now, especially the longhaired one. and I'm probably just being picky with this one but maybe move them up a couple pixels too, they seem too...low? david ^🌈 16:05, March 5, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Velvetmoon. :) After looking at the reference image, I made this redline. Hope this helps: http://www.ezimba.com/work/160306C/ezimba11244574207200.png Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 18:37, March 5, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. thank you so much jayie! there's probably still issues with the longhair's tail since i had to redo it to put it closer to the body, as well as some other minor things, but it's getting there, lol. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 02:33 Sun Mar 6

No problem. :) The belly is still much too thin on both, and there's a few other little changes. I made a new redline for both the longhair and the shorthair: http://www.ezimba.com/work/160307C/ezimba11244514440400.png http://www.ezimba.com/work/160307C/ezimba11244520061500.png Hope they help. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 21:45, March 6, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the tip of the long hairs tail is drooping to much but know looking at jayie's redline I think that will fix it though. Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 18:54, March 9, 2016 (UTC)

No I haven't forgotten about these. Sorry if it sounds like I'm full of excuses but on monday I started drum major tryouts which takes about 3 hours after school of physical exercise. I'm coming home completely exhausted, extremely sore, doing my schoolwork, and then going to bed. Tryouts will be done next Thursday and I would really appreciate your patience with me. Just letting you know that I haven't forgotten about this. I promise I'll get to them. Thanks again. --Splook ^{sweet  creature} 23:07 Thu Mar 17

Splook, if it makes you feel better I think this looks amazing, and tbh I have no clue how anyone is spotting such minor flaws! Warriorcat1195 (talk) 16:48, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

The back looks a little short; maybe add some more "weight" in lack of a better term to the haunches ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 08:25, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry if this has already been pointed out, but I don't think the entire foot should be flat on the back legs. The heels should be raised off the ground a little. I can't describe it any better than that, I'm sorry. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 11:29 Sun Mar 20

reuploaded hope i did things okay? i wasn't too sure what to do about the back so i just made it more rounder and even, and as for the paws, the legs are at a kind of an angle anyways so i didn't know how to address that, but if anyone has any tips then i'd appreciate it. also i just realized i forgot to edit the bellies and i'll do that tomorrow. i appreciate everyone's patience with me, sorry again. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 00:43 Sat Mar 26

reuploaded fixed bellies Splook ^{sweet  creature} 20:17 Sun Mar 27

shouldn't the tails be in the same position? david ^🌈 20:28, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

Make the raised front paw a little bit smaller, they're pretty big compared to the others. — ferk was here ✦^✦_✦ 20:29, 03/27/2016

I think these are very well-made lines! Maybe, fix the longhair's tail a little bit. --Falcon 49 (talk) 13:50, April 6, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded, sorry about the wait, i was in arizona for a week. personally, i think the longhair's tails are fine. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 22:16 Wed Apr 6

Hopefully my last thing - the elbow/shoulder part feels too thick on both. I made that correction on my last set of redlines and moved the elbow-line over to the left to make it seem less thick, could you make that change on both? And also like on my last set of redlines, on the longhair, can you make the fluff more thick on the neck/throat and less thick on the chest? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 22:33, April 6, 2016 (UTC)

I think the front (<-- part) of closer-to-us (left) shoulder on the shorthair seems to be jutting out a bit too much. 🏵️ Maple 🏵️ 22:41 Wed Apr 6

http://prntscr.com/ap21i5 Some suggestions. Basically, round the chest on the shorthair more, round that heel more, make the haunch line shorter, over to the right some, and more rounded, and define that shoulder. — ferk was here ✦^✦_✦ 22:44, 04/6/2016

Actually, I think the bend of the haunch and the position of the front leg are fine, considering they're positioned like in the picture that was used as a reference for this: http://prntscr.com/ap21i5 But maybe that's just me... Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 00:14, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

I understand that's what it looks like in the picture, but it's unnatural looking when it's a blank; that's just the way blanks are tbh, you have to alter them to make them look naturally positioned, because simple 2D lines can't capture the depth and crap of the actual image. — ferk was here ✦^✦_✦ 00:29, 04/9/2016

I don't think it looks unnnatural. That's how it realistically looks, and it works. I get that 2D lines can't always show the complexities of texture and such, but the line is pretty clearly defined of were the bend of that hip is, and I don't think it makes sense to deviate from that claiming it looks unrealistic when it's there in the actual real-life photo. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 02:23, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Well, the longhair's tail is thinner in the middle than at the beginning --Falcon 49 (talk) 07:55, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

I think the tails look fine but I agree the legs look sharp too sharp to be natural. I think you should just smooth out the lines. Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 09:45, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

Mistfeather (Kit) ~ For Evaluation

Finished Mistfeather's kit image :) Tried to do it as similar to the loner image and the current for approval warrior image. it's my first image that I've ever did for the warriors wiki so :3

Also now I noticed I made it too dark compared to the others so I'll lighten it up a bit.

Cheetahfur (talk) 20:01, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Lovely but please don't aline or make you images thumbnail please. I have fixed it but you will need to make the image smaller. Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 22:40, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Image is a bit large....and what's up with the eyes? They're kinda sliding to the left. Jaysnow (talk) 00:18, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Lessen the ear pink; it's supposed to have more room to fade out. Also personally I feel like it's too dull and should be brightened a bit, but it could just be me. I have a thing for bright colors. Warriorcat1195 (talk) 00:24, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the image size, sorry about that. I forgot to resize it down after I exported it. Fixed now. Other than that I just tried to lighten it up a bit. Will work on it a lot more tomorrow. :) Cheetahfur (talk) 00:40, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Please upload this file under Mistfeather.kit.png, and not Mistfeather.kit2.png. Just go to Special > Upload and upload your image from there. I'm going to rename this file to Mistfeather.kit.png. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 01:36, March 24, 2016 (UTC)

Don't align your images, please. Anyway, he needs to be longhaired, and I believe the other images are paler. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{08:36 Thu Mar 24}

Reuploaded Made it longhaired and lightened up more

Define the light source and lighten it again. It's still a bit too dark compared to his other images. The file name is also incorrect. Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{16:50 Sat Mar 26}

Define the shading as well. —Ivy ☆ 18:07, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

Add the white part to his eyes ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 20:45, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a bit better? ^^ Jaysnow (talk) 06:34, March 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it even lighter, defined the shading, made the shading more blue, added more eye glare, and made the ear pink pinker --Cheetahfur (talk) 20:41, March 29, 2016 (UTC)

Might just be my screen but it still looks too dark Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{11:43 Wed Mar 30}

If I were you I'd try to match the warrior or loner image colors, and make the shading less blue. —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 12:41, 3/30/2016

Reuploaded Darkened shading and made it slightly lighter --Cheetahfur (talk) 19:29, March 30, 2016 (UTC)

Can you maybe add a white pixel in the black part of the eye? Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 20:20, March 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened it a lot and added more eye glare --Cheetahfur (talk) 12:52, March 31, 2016 (UTC)

Define the nose-pink? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 12:53, 3/31/2016

Reuploaded Made the nose pink --Cheetahfur (talk) 18:41, March 31, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading please. Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 19:47, April 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you make the shading more defined to match the other images? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:09, April 4, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Worked on the shading to match other images more --Cheetahfur (talk) 13:11, April 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it lighter to match other images more --Cheetahfur (talk) 20:10, April 6, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading again please? I can't see it. — ferk was here ✦^✦_✦ 00:31, 04/9/2016

Could you define the texture a little as well? I can't really see it, and it's more visible on his other images. —Ivy ☆ 00:42, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined shading and texture and made it lighter --Cheetahfur (talk) 16:17, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading on this side > this is looking lovely though! Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 09:43, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

smooth the shading to as well as blur it some more. — Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 17:32, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shading --Cheetahfur (talk) 20:27, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and sharpen the texture slightly. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 11:47,4/12/2016

I can't see the earpink. Define it? Keep up the good work! ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 18:45, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

maybe center the pupils of the eye to be looking straight instead of sideways? — Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 16:30, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

Mink,eye placement is the artists choice unless it looks cross eyed which this image doesn't. Velvetmoon^{Personne n'échappe à mon regard!} 18:11, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Cheetahfur (talk) 20:06, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

You obviously know what you're doing so I am going to promote you to an apprentice. Great job! Appledash ^{the light of honor} 20:08, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

Flower Foot (Ki) - For Approval

— ferk was here ✦^✦_✦ 20:38, 04/18/2016

I feel a bit wary commenting as I'm your apprentice, but do you mind defining the ear pink a bit? It looks a little bit blended in with the brown. Other than that, terrific! Jaysnow (talk) 20:42, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

Honestly I think it's fine as it is now. Ear pink doesn't have to be super defined, after all. I can tell the difference just fine anyway. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 21:05 Mon Apr 18

Would you mind lightening her just a tad? She looks a bit too brown, unless you want it like that, but I guess I'm just saying she looks darker than tan. However it could just be my eyes.Dewsplash (talk) 23:50, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

Fernpaw (TAQ) (A) ~ For Approval

File:Fernpaw (TAQ).apprentice.png Eh. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{23:43 Mon Apr 18}