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Stoneclaw (W) ~ For Approval

Stoneclaw.warrior Trying this with GIMP. --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 23:09, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink?TwistedSlice Of The Crow's Talon 23:10, 3/31/2017Broken_Foot 

Define the shading on the tail Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:11, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Base color doesn't seem to match other images spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:12, 3/31/2017

Smooth out the blotchy parts of the shading on the back and neck, and define the shading on the paws and the haunch. – Ivy 23:15, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Why are the legs farthest from us lighter than the rest of the body? dan 23:31, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I colorpicked from the StarClan image and checked again and it is the right base color. And in my reupload I couldn't seem to get rid of the waste so can somebody who knows GIMP tell me how? --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 23:38, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Not to state the obvious, but there's lots of waste around the whole thingTwistedSlice Of The Crow's Talon 23:41, 3/31/2017Broken_Foot

Well for GIMP, go to your lineart layer, fill the outside of the lineart in red, and then use the color select tool to select the red. Then, erase the red, then go to your shading layer and erase the waste there (make your brush super big, for it to get it all). It works on any layer, actually. Also, define the light. This really does look darker than the star, unless you picked from an area that was shaded on it. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:40, 3/31/2017

There's leaking shading along the back and a bit on the hind leg closest to us. Also, define the shading on the tail, and the light on the front legs. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:52, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little Snowdapple 00:23, 4/01/2017

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 00:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's a lot of gaps in the earpink--can you fix that? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<> 00:52 4/1/17 (UTC)

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 01:29, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur the lighting (if the lighter parts on the <-- side are lighting, I'm tired) and earpink and possibly match the eye color a bit better? Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 01:50, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink some more and define the shading and shading depth some more. ~Patchfeather~ 13:27, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 15:47, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading around the head and hind legs a little and smooth it out. ~Patchfeather~ 16:46, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 17:05, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back paws and near the flank and define the light on the front legs. ~Patchfeather~ 18:13, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

So this are the main colors I used for the StarClan image; the base color is 757575, then for the shading mainly 454545, for earpink A59090. Water 18:24, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks for the colors! c: --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 20:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

smooth the lighting more dan 22:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

The eye colour is still quite different. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 23:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 23:28, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Make the lineart black. Water 03:34, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 12:42, 4/02/2017

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 15:22, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I believe there's still color leaking onto the lineart dan 17:51, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I tried..but I don't know how to fix that. --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 18:24, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Try just replacing the lineart layer; some parts look dark gray. Overlapping the lineart layer should fix any problems like that. Also, smooth the paler parts, because this image shouldn't have any, and it kinda looks like it does. Besides that, define the light on both front legs and round out the shading on the rump. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:28, 4/02/2017

Reups I tried to replace the lineart but that one turned dark gray too. I know it's because of the shading but I don't know how to stop the shading from coloring the lineart. ._. --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 18:39, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

The layer with your lineart should be the topmost layer, or second topmost depending on how you do your eyes and stuff. Basically, the lineart should be above the base pelt, shading, highlights, ect. Jayce  ( 18:45, 4/02/2017 )

Reups I tried to erase some of the color on the lineart. --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 18:47, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 20:49, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 21:54, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smooth it out. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<21:56 4/2/17>

Reups Now I have a feeling it's too dark :c --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 01:58, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Fox, you need to really smooth out the shading everywhere.TwistedSlice Of The Crow's Talon 12:41, 4/03/2017Broken_Foot

Shading's also leaking away from the lineart a little bit on the foreleg closest to us and on his underbelly (unless the underbelly was intentional?). – Ivy 20:50, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading depth. dan 02:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

where's his pupil? Snowdapple 19:02, 4/06/2017

Still working? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:48, 4/07/2017

His pupil is on the left side of his eye. --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 23:06, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

No, there needs to be a pupil visible in the eye. Look at some other warrior images for reference. The eye is just the blank model for the warrior image. Snowdapple 15:22, 4/08/2017

Eye style is artist's choice. I can see it and I know it's there. It's fine, and you're being picky. I've even made warrior images with eyes like this in the past. Jayce  ( 23:58, 4/08/2017 )

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 20:04, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading overall, I really can hardly make it out. – Ivy 23:51, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 23:59, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs dan 00:01, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit imo spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:03, 4/10/2017

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 00:17, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's gray leaking all over the lineart, please make sure it's black. I also think you could define shading depth, and maybe lighten the shading on the legs, it looks like his legs are darker than the rest of his body SNOWFALL ( ) 00:36, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Make sure what's black; the shading? Shading tint is artist's choice. Also no to the lightening the shading on the legs, get rid of some of the shading on the legs, to define the light source. Define the shading everywhere else as well. Snowdapple 02:01, 4/10/2017
I am sure Snow meant making the lineart black since there is some gray leaking over it. Water 02:18, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, that was definitely a comment about the lineart, Winter. Also, I'm going to disagree with your comment about lightening the shading. Even if Foxey gets rid of some of the shading, it's still going to be a tad bit darker, so lightening the shading wouldn't hurt in the least. Jayce  ( 08:44, 4/10/2017 )

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 23:00, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 13:47, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 22:13, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

The shading along the back appears to be leaking away from the lineart. Jayie Just you wait~ 01:02, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's still a little gray leaking onto the lineart, particularly on the rump and base of the tail, and could you smooth out the tail shading a bit, there are some lighter hard edged pixels towards the top of it SNOWFALL ( ) 18:30, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 22:43, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth overall, an define the shading on the face some. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:26, 4/13/2017

Reups Redid a few things.. --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 14:19, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the flank and back legs maybe? dan 17:15, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reups The feel when you accidentally delete the xcf file...yeah I had to redo it :c --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 20:13, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth of the shading? This looks great! ShypawDo the trickor treat 20:17, April 15, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Reups Thanks. ^^ --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 21:07, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs, and also define the shading depth. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:42, 4/15/2017

Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 13:47, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more still, and define the shading on the tail some more. Define the shading depth as well, and there might be some leaking shading on the back leg farthest from us Snowdapple 20:21, 4/17/2017

There's still a pale part on the haunch ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 17:21, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Still working? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:21, 4/20/2017

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval

Jessamy.rogue Shading is annoying. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:39, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed out and define the dark splotch on her ear?TwistedSlice Of The Crow's Talon 17:41, 4/07/2017Broken_Foot 

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 17:52, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth shading some more and define it on the legs? SNOWFALL ( ) 19:36, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:41, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little more, define the light on the legs and tail. dan 20:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:42, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little. Also, I think the belly shading should extend further ---> way, towards where the haunch overlaps the underbelly. – Ivy 22:24, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:40, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you move the splotch more on the ear and define it? It kind of blends in with the shading on the side of the head SNOWFALL ( ) 01:10, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:54, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on both front legs and the back one farthest from us, and smooth out the shading a bit? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 17:41, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's a little piece on the belly near the hips where the shading is missing. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:47, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the belly and a little way above the base of the tail SNOWFALL ( ) 00:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit dark. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<05:52, 4/09/2017>

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:10, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the <-- front leg near the lineart. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The waste is still there :/ and I think shading could be lightened and smoothed some more SNOWFALL ( ) 15:06, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading darkness is fine, Snow. But I do agree on the smoothing of it Snowdapple 02:05, 4/10/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Not to be rude, but I cannot tell the difference between each of your uploads. I noticed only little to no change to your image. Excuse me if I come off rude, but I really can't tell the differenceTwistedSlice Of The Crow's Talon 21:29, 4/10/2017Broken_Foot

Smooth the shading. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:34, 4/10/2017

Just thought I'd point out that the waste is still there- right below the belly, and a little at the top of the image above the tail SNOWFALL ( ) 23:59, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's a reddish marking on the lower part of the belly that I don't think is supposed to be there. Jayie Just you wait~ 01:10, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:46, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste around the whole image SNOWFALL ( ) 22:34, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I'm pretty sure all the waste is gone now. ErmineGlow (talk) 12:35, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still waste around the muzzle and tailtip Snowdapple 13:36, 4/14/2017

I think there's still waste around the <-- paw closest to us too. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<15:08, 4/14/2017>

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:04, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail dan 21:21, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading while you're at it. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<17:26, 4/15/2017>

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:34, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the splotch on the ear? It's looking a little hard-edged. ShypawDo the trickor treat 19:45, April 15, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Define the light on the tail and expand it on the face. Also, maybe slightly expand the flank shading. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:41, 4/15/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 18:06, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more, I can't hardly make it out. As well as defining the shading depth, and add some more light on the front legs Snowdapple 20:23, 4/17/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:42, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more Snowdapple 01:20, 4/19/2017

Reups Egg salad ErmineGlow (talk) 02:44, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking almost everywhere and still needs to be smoothed out. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 02:46, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Parsleyseed (KP) - For Approval

Parsleyseed.kittypetI'm so unbelievably proud of how this turned out tbh. (also, was very anxious of someone reserving this before I could get to it) dan 17:21, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I know the feeling, snek. Define shading on face? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<17:24, 4/15/2017>

reups dan 17:31, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I believe on the other images there's some creamy parts above the eyes. Looking good! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:06, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups dan 19:26, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I'm fairly sure that there's some paler parts (only slightly paler, mind you) not he front legs, underbelly, back two paws, and underside of the tail. They appear on both images in the same spots, so I'm pretty sure it's that and not a highlight spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:35, 4/15/2017

his other images look a lot lighter than this. david 🌈 19:47, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups I already had paler parts and most of the ones you mention wouldn't be visible, spooky. Also, I colorpicked from the apprentice image, so it's the same colors. dan 19:48, April 15, 2017 (UTC) 

colourpick doesn't mean the colours are totally accurate. he's too dark, and I even have the file foe the apprentice, if you want it. david 🌈 19:50, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups I tried colorpicking from a lighter part of the image, is this okay? dan 20:02, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the muzzle should have more pale parts as well as the eyes. Snowdapple 20:44, 4/15/2017

reups The eyes match the other images just fine, but I defined the cream a bit anyways. The muzzle matched the warrior, but I changed it to better fit the apprentice image. dan 21:15, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the secondary pale parts on the haunch. On the warrior, you can see how it goes from a pale part, to another shade, then to the base color. It's on the apprentice too, just less visible because of that shading source. Also, define them on the belly ad well. The warrior shows them to stretch out quite a bit, so even though the belly doesn't show much on this blank, there would still be some. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:40, 4/15/2017

reups dan 23:50, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

The colors still seem a bit off.. why not just get the file with the actual colors instead of colorpicking? Jayie's shading method almost always has tinted shading, and she also uses highlights, which is bound to throw off the colors, even with the lighter areas. Jayce  ( 03:43, 4/16/2017 )

reups Everything is now the exact same hex code as the apprentice, plus I added some highlights to better match the apprentice. (I actually had to redo this, my computer shut down for an update before I could save :^)))) dan 22:57, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more Snowdapple 20:27, 4/17/2017

reups dan 22:28, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the facial color not match the rest of his image? Snowdapple 00:11, 4/18/2017

Its the exact same color, Winter dan 00:37, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

I hate to be that guy but it honestly is still too dark. I've provided you with a picture of what the differences are (excuse the poor mouse handwriting). The face color is a different color than the rest of the body, and it appears as if there's random pale parts on the back and shoulder. You need more stripes on the face. Define the ear fur a little more, and I believe your stripes are a bit too thick. The tail also should not have a pale part on it, as the apprentice image came first. The pale underbelly should not go that far up on his chest/belly area, and the stripes need to be smudged. Sorry in advance for wall of text Snowdapple 01:33, 4/19/2017

Scratch the stripe thickness part Snowdapple 01:35, 4/19/2017

Winter, while I'll fix most of the above things, I will literally send you the files of both the KP and the App. I colorpicked from the base color layer. I also colorpicked from the stripes layer. Also, the random pale parts are highlights, but I'll fix those up no problem. Also, I was told earlier to show the pale belly, but I'll recede it I guess. dan 01:46, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

I can send the original file for the warrior and/or apprentice if you need them. Jayie Just you wait~ 01:51, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Another thing, Winter, I have the exact same amount of stripes here as the other images. They have the ones leading from the eyes, and the few head stripes, but there's no others. dan 01:57, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

reups I didn't remove the pale tail since Jayie said it was there.dan 03:52, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Beechfur (TC) (W) - For Approval

Beechfur (TC).warrior I'm really proud with this one! ShypawDo the trickor treat 18:46, April 15, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

I'll try to fix the cut of nose later. ShypawDo the trickor treat 18:47, April 15, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

The blank isn't quite the right size - it's smaller all around by a bit. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:48, 4/15/2017

The shading could be smoothed out. Shyaw, if you need any help with the Charart and their size, you have to go to the Charart page, click on the file of the blank, and at the top near the name, there is a button to press that should say 'see full size image' And then right click when its open, and save it!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 18:51, 4/15/2017

The lineart is blurred. ErmineGlow (talk) 19:07, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Broken, you are truly magical. Thank you so much! The weird pixels that I was having trouble with on Icewing are gone if I do that! Now I know what you guys meant by saving the file wrong! ShypawDo the trickor treat 19:13, April 15, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Thank you! And your welcome :D Smooth out the shading? If you need help with smoothing out the shading, click on the blur tool, go to the bottom of the tool options, and there should be a checkbox named 'hard edge' and click on the box. And then put the rate to 100. The rate box should be at the bottom and you could adjust to whatever you think if right for you!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:20, 4/15/2017

There's waste a little ways out by the --> side on the tail, near the tip. dan 19:23, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, and could you smudge the earpink a bit? dan 19:27, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't find the waste, but I tried removing it anyways. :) ShypawDo the trickor treat 19:43, April 15, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Round out the shoulder-ish area shading to the curve of the body, as it makes a pretty distinct angle as of now. Also, smooth out the shading just a bit more, for a gradient. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:56, 4/15/2017

Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 20:05, April 15, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Not sure if you need these but the colors I used were, for the base 1c1100, for shading 0d0700 and 080400 (this one for darker parts), and ear pink 844f4f mainly. Water 20:10, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks Water! I checked them and the base and shading are good, but I'm not sure the ear pink looks right. ShypawDo the trickor treat 20:20, April 15, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Could you define the eye sparkle (the white eye pixel)? Unless it's just me, I can't see it. Also, smooth out the shading again, as I'm not seeing much of a difference from last time. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:36, 4/15/2017

Reuploaded Hopefully this is good! ShypawDo the trickor treat 22:51, April 15, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Could you smooth the shading a bit? SNOWFALL (04:23, 4/16/2017 )

Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 16:16, April 16, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Sorry I sound like a broken record but, smooth out the shading again? It should fade to the base more, and it still isn't much of a gradient. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:29, 4/16/2017

Reuploaded :) ShypawDo the trickor treat 23:20, April 16, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Define the depth of the shading dan 01:31, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 03:30, April 17, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Could you define where the pupil is? It looks like the normal blank blank in regards to the eye Snowdapple 20:30, 4/17/2017

Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 22:58, April 17, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Mind defining the light on the hind legs? dan 23:18, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 23:59, April 17, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Could you define the light on both legs farthest from us and smooth out the earpink? Very nice! —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 00:52, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed some more SNOWFALL (00:57, 4/18/2017 )

Reuploaded Thanks! :) ShypawDo the trickor treat 01:17, April 18, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Did you smooth the shading? Not trying to be rude, but I don't see any difference SNOWFALL (01:30, 4/18/2017 )

Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:01, April 18, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Just noticed there's some green from the eye leaking onto the fur, and it looks like there's some shading on <-- side of the tail that should be removed SNOWFALL (02:31, 4/18/2017 )

Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:41, April 18, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Smooth out the shading a little more spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:14, 4/18/2017

Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 23:03, April 18, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Smooth out the shading a bit more, particularly in the neck and chest area. – Ivy 20:16, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 22:35, April 20, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Mumblefoot (D) ~ For Approval

Mumblefoot.deputy Yikes I don't know how to shade SNOWFALL (02:58, 4/16/2017 )

Smooth out shading, and define it on the tail. —Preceding unsigned comment added by StarlightGirlHSS (talkcontribs) 03:03, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs and define the shading on the front legs dan 03:04, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

And Starlight, don't forget your sig :P dan 03:04, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Sure you know how to shade; it looks good to me, although I do agree with Starlight. Also, just in case anyone tries to tell you otherwise, since the cite for mangy and graying is from when he was depicted as an elder, he won't need these on this charart. Jayce  ( 03:06, 4/16/2017 )

There's a stray white pixel on the <--- side of the chest. Nice! ShypawDo the trickor treat 03:08, April 16, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

I actually think the back <-- leg needs some more shading. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<03:28, 4/16/2017>

I see waste around the entire image. Jayce  ( 03:31, 4/16/2017 )

Reuploaded Oh geez I need to reupload again, btw can someone tell me how I can define light? SNOWFALL (03:34, 4/16/2017 )

You erase on the shading layer. Hope that helped. ^^ ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<03:35, 4/16/2017>

Reuploaded Hmm I think I addressed every comment SNOWFALL (03:40, 4/16/2017 )

That's not the only way to define light, Snowfall; you can also add another layer that has lighter areas, often just a white or a lighter color of the base. Jayce  ( 03:41, 4/16/2017 )

The eye seems more brown than orange. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 03:48, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

I agree but I have to match the first image and these colors were colorpicked from the elder, and thanks for explaining how to define light  SNOWFALL (03:54, 4/16/2017 )

I have the file for the warrior if you ever need it Snow :3 Snowdapple 04:13, 4/16/2017

Given that the colors (for the eyes) for the elder are limited, you are welcome to pick from the StarClan image if you need or want more variety. As long as they match closely enough, that's all that matters. Jayce  ( 04:16, 4/16/2017 )

This actually looks a little too light in color Snowdapple 04:23, 4/16/2017

Reuploaded I colorpicked from a darker spot on the elder (and fixed eye color) SNOWFALL (04:42, 4/16/2017 )

Who could have guessed he would have once been deputy? Here's the hex code for the brown, which I colorpicked from the warrior 5c4135—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 06:49, 4/16/2017

Smooth the shading a bit more and possibly expand it a little? Snowdapple 20:31, 4/17/2017

Define eye depth? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<20:37, 4/17/2017>

Reuploaded I can't define the eye depth anymore than it is, but I did move the darker colors to the top and the lighter colors to the bottom (Does anyone know why the eye color was orange before I uploaded it but after it was uploaded it looks brown?) SNOWFALL (22:09, 4/17/2017 )

Amber is a shade of brown. It's brownish-ginger. Also define the light on the legs Snowdapple 00:12, 4/18/2017

Reuploaded That didn't answer my question, I know what amber is. But nevermind, the eye color looks normal on my phone, just not on my computer SNOWFALL (00:47, 4/18/2017 )

I do believe, that this source would shed at least a tiny bit of light on the <-- side of the back leg furthest away from us. Also, define the shading depth on the --> front leg and the <-- back leg. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:15, 4/18/2017

Reuploaded I fooled around a little bit with the opacity and depth and I'm not sure if changes are showing so let me know if I need to define depth more SNOWFALL (22:28, 4/18/2017 )

Reuploaded Got rid of waste and defined depth on front legs SNOWFALL (22:33, 4/18/2017 )

Maybe there could be shading on the head? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<19:29, 4/19/2017>

Reuploaded There already was but I defined it SNOWFALL (20:18, 4/19/2017 )

Define it a fair bit more; I can't even see it's there. Jayce  ( 05:09, 4/20/2017 )

Reuploaded It's such a tiny spot on the head I don't think it's supposed to be that noticeable SNOWFALL (18:52, 4/20/2017 )

Can you define the shading depth on the back of the head, nearer to the middle? With this source, it should be a bit more noticeable imo. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:37, 4/20/2017

Reuploaded Yup, looks better :D SNOWFALL (23:20, 4/20/2017 )

Rushtooth (DF) - CBA

Rushtooth.df Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣22:23 Sun Apr 16

Whoa, nice! Hmmm, *examines image*, define tail shading? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<22:26, 4/16/2017>

Reuploaded Thanks! Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣01:45 Mon Apr 17

Smoothen out the pale parts a bit? ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 05:10, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

minor, but can u crop this to the lineart david 🌈 06:24, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry for the double comment, but could you also define the eye depth? ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 20:35, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

I promise I am still working on this. I know this will not be the one week limit, but I will not be able to upload until probably Thursday my time. I had a family emergency come up (Jayce, if you want to know, email me, as I will definitely be getting the question of if I'm still working. I am restricted to mobile and I will happily explain, since this was really hard on me). I will not be at my apartment until then due to helping out my dad with stuff. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣19:30 Tue Apr 18

Family emergencies are the exception to the one-week ruling, as they are completely out of anyone's control. It's very obviously not your fault in this case, and as was the case when I got flooded, you will not be penalized for this. Jayce  ( 00:46, 4/19/2017 )

Reuploaded Well I was at least able to keep my word about this. I'm going to try to be as active as possible for the next couple days while I'm at my place. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣19:46 Thu Apr 20

CBA? Jayce  ( 19:51, 4/20/2017 )

Stonestream (Alt Warrior) ~ CBA

Stonestream.warrior.alt Eye color from StarClan, rest from elder. I hope I did the leg good. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<22:25, 4/16/2017>

Looks very nice! Smooth out the shading?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 22:27, 4/16/2017

there's waste inbetween the legs. david 🌈 22:28, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Bone color is also from star. Credits to Sun for that. (she did the starclan image) ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<22:32, 4/16/2017>

can you define the shading pretty much everywherte? david 🌈 19:37, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

I think the bone is at the wrong angle? Maybe angle it more downward, since that's where the warrior's leg actually goes on the normal blank. Snowdapple 20:32, 4/17/2017

Better? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<20:44, 4/17/2017>

There's some shading leaking onto the belly portion. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:58, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

re-up ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<15:38, 4/18/2017>

Shading is leaking slightly away from the lineart on the rump spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:12, 4/18/2017

re-up ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<00:09, 4/19/2017>

The leaking shading is still there on the rump Snowdapple 01:47, 4/19/2017

Circle the leakage? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<01:58, 4/19/2017>

http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2dmikjk&s=9 - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:05,4/19/2017

re-up me so embarrassed ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<15:02, 4/19/2017>

I think it's still leaking in that same spot spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:39, 4/19/2017

ok i am running on to paint.net right now. upload later. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<19:28, 4/19/2017>

re-up Well then. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<22:35, 4/19/2017>

It is still leaking in the same area, and a tiny bit on the back leg closest to us. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 23:17, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Please tell me i removed all of it. Waste really is annoying. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<15:22, 4/20/2017>

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:22, 4/20/2017

Sparrow Fur (D) ~ CBA

Sparrow Fur.deputy tries to match the awesomeness of jayce's idea but fails completely Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~14:23,4/17/2017

Re-ups Apparently she has white paws & belly. Also made her a tiny bit more orange to match Turtle x3 Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~14:45,4/17/2017

Aaaahh omgg ;-; this is so cute Silver!! Could you define the shading depth a little? Snowdapple 20:33, 4/17/2017

Smoothen out the circle of shading on the muzzle :] ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 20:37, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks! <33 Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~12:21,4/19/2017

This is beautiful, maybe define the white belly? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:07, April 19, 2017 (UTC)Chat

It's there, it's just hidden underneath shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:24,4/19/2017

Could you lighten the shading a bit, on the white, then? :) ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 22:31, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Believe me, I can't. I'm sorry... it happens a lot, like the shading being where the white is. If I lighten the shading on the white the entire thing will just look weird. Besides, she /is/ white based, which means the white on her belly/paws aren't supposed to stand out. I'll see what others say about this though. Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~02:26,4/20/2017

I think it's fine, tbh. CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:24, 4/20/2017

Maggottail (DF) ~ CBA

Maggottail.df Eeewwww Snowdapple 22:02, 4/17/2017

Lighten the base a bit, I can't make anything out. Also, does his tongue have colour? :) ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 22:05, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yes it does, it's just underneath shading Snowdapple 22:08, 4/17/2017

Smooth the shading a bit dan 22:24, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Re-added texture, since Broken didn't want to do his warrior image anymore ;; . I'll get to the smoothing of the shading soon, probably tomorrow. *sets reminder* Snowdapple 22:41, 4/17/2017

Can you lighten the base a teensy bit more? The only way I can see it on my laptop is moving my head up. ;-; ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<22:42, 4/17/2017>

Reuploaded Any lighter and this will be dark gray, and I'd like to avoid that. Also I'm trying to go for a sharp shading look, so... Snowdapple 00:08, 4/18/2017

Reuploaded Last time I'm lightening it Snowdapple 01:18, 4/19/2017

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:24, 4/20/2017

Flower Foot (ES) - For Approval

File:Flower Foot.es.pngPatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:11, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define ear pink? ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 02:15, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:35,4/18/2017

Re-uploaded.PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 12:57, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

I know you can't tell from how tiny the kit blanks are, but the stripes are meant to be very very slightly smudged/blurred/softened. I can't remember which method I did with the kit... Jayce  ( 00:54, 4/19/2017 )

Re-uploaded. How's that? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:46, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Add a lil' more shading at the bottom of the chest, as I think there'd be a little there. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:41, 4/19/2017

Re-uploaded.PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:51, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry if it's just me, but the stripes seem a little different in color on this? These fade more into the base, but the ones on the kit seem to differentiate in that way a little more, perhaps in darkness or something. spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:26, 4/20/2017

Sorrelcharm (Q) ~ CBA

Sorrelcharm.queen i'll give a cookie to anyone who says it - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:09,4/18/2017

There supposed to be shading on the face? Also maybe define the light on the back --> leg? (Says what?) ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<15:39, 4/18/2017>

Is it your "fat cat" saying? Or your large number of queen images? :P Define the light on both ---> side legs, not just the back one. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 17:18, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Nope, image comments. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:44,4/19/2017

Smooth out the shading on the rump a lil dan 04:24, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:39,4/19/2017

On the belly, there seems to be a gray patch where it voelaps the shading, instead of the other way around. Right above where it meets the back leg. Also, some gray is leaking past the chin onto the back. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 03:35, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:01,4/20/2017

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:26, 4/20/2017

Scourge (L) ~ CBA

Scourge.leader the edgelord himself david 🌈 20:56, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

*sighs* I'm still mad about the computer and this. Anyways, smoothen out the shading on the white paw. :) ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 21:04, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded understandable man david 🌈 23:33, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

The edgiest edgelord of em all. There's this eensy streak of sharp shading at the base of the tail, smooth it a lil dan 04:26, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded david 🌈 20:05, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:27, 4/20/2017

Houndleap (DF) ~ CBA

Houndleap.df spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:57, 4/18/2017

Reuploaded cropping real quick spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:59, 4/18/2017

What are the dark spots on him? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<00:46, 4/19/2017>

I believe it's texture dan 00:52, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Yup, it's texture ^^ spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:21, 4/19/2017

CBA? Jayce  ( 19:52, 4/20/2017 )

Grassheart (W) - CBA

Grassheart.warrior – Ivy 22:02, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a tad? dan 00:52, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. – Ivy 01:10, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Taper the stripes leading to the chest - the other images have them coming to more of a point before stopping spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:28, 4/20/2017

Re-uploaded. – Ivy 20:12, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:35, 4/20/2017

Whiskers(KP) ~ CBA

Whiskers.kittypetNote:This was inspried off Mosspaw, and the collar was chosen by my mom, so I'm not changing it.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:24, 4/19/2017

Beautiful! I love the collar. :) Define the shading on the ---> ear if there is any? ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:37, April 19, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Lighten the shading, most especially on the white spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:39, 4/19/2017

Re-uploaded! Only got to Shy's comment—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:44, 4/19/2017

Mind defining eye depth a bit? (This looks awesome!) ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<00:45, 4/19/2017>

Re-uploaded! Ahh thank you!^^ And thanks also Shypaw :DD(Will define eye depth soon)—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:49, 4/19/2017

Re-uploaded!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:52, 4/19/2017

Smooth the shading some more and lighten it. I can't see the pattern underneath Snowdapple 01:19, 4/19/2017

Re-uploaded! Wasn't sure why you couldn't see the pattern, but removed my depth layer and darkened the shading just a little bit—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 01:39, 4/19/2017

But the shading is still the same darkness... Re-define the shading depth, I didn't ask for you to get rid of it o.O? I said to lighten the shading. Snowdapple 01:59, 4/19/2017

Re-uploaded! The shading depth is there, and that's as much as I'm willing to lighten it before I am told to define it—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 03:02, 4/19/2017

I think there should be some earpink on the one ear, but ignore me if it's okay. I guess with the position it could possibly hide the earpink. dan 03:51, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

This is how I've always done my kittypets, example Loki, and others have done it too. It's fine—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:15, 4/19/2017

Ah, okay. Maybe define the shading depth on the back area? dan 04:22, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Changes may or may not show but I also changed the eye color—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:40, 4/19/2017

Smooth out the shading on -> ear. Also, ear pink on -> ear is optional, and a preference thing. Jayce  ( 12:13, 4/19/2017 )

Re-uploaded! Am home now—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:02, 4/19/2017

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:28, 4/20/2017

Reedwhisker (Rogue) ~ For Approval

Reedwhisker.rogue //flops in with wet cat clan deputy "WET CATS BEST CATS" //flops out --

Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 01:09, 4/19/2017

Smooth out the shading? Welcome back!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 01:12, 4/19/2017

Re-uploaded I don't know if it helped that much but yay, wet rogue cat has a new version

Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 01:24, 4/19/2017

Smooth out the shading more, and define it as well. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<01:59, 4/19/2017>

I feel like it should be expanded a bit—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:17, 4/19/2017

Eye should be blue. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 05:06, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded wonder why his other pixels had gray eyes, also tried to turn his black shading a bit bluish --

Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 09:49, 4/20/2017

Smooth out the shading? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:29, 4/20/2017

I've blurred it at rate 100 for a bit, how am I supposed to blur it further? Also, where exactly should I smooth it out? --

Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 01:45, 4/21/2017

I think it can be smoothed everywhere, you could try using the blur tool at hard edge, plus having it at rate 100. Water 01:58, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Pigeonwing (Star) ~ For Approval

File:Pigeonwing.star.png Sziri the goat sails away ツ 11:58, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth a little? ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<15:03, 4/19/2017>

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 18:49, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Dang, had my eye on him, never got around to it. I think there'd be some visible white on the farthest cheek? dan 22:16, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be the texture, but the shading looks a little hard-edged on this --> paw ScarletwindGo Beyond Plus Ultra!! 23:13, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

It also looks hard edged on the other paw too. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<23:14, 4/19/2017>

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 18:29, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Mistpelt (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation

Mistpelt.warriorGameboy22 (talk)gameboy22

(For Gameboy22) Remove the white background, define ear pink, shading and texture, and the eye needs to be green. Also, please put the correct heading Mistpelt (W) ~ For Evaluation. You also need to reserve this on the chart. ShypawDo the trickor treat 17:44, April 19, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

Did you colorpick? It looks darker than the actual image. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<19:27, 4/19/2017>

Define the eye depth, and add shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 20:58, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

That was already said, so don't repeat comments. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<22:12, 4/19/2017>

You can check out the tutorials for some advice on shading. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:31,4/20/2017

Amberclaw (Star) ~ For Evaluation 

Amberclaw.star -cringes- rip shading and eye color — Crow mah name is jeff  00:07, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading and eye depth. Also, can you make the stripes on the forehead a bit thicker to match the other images? And is the nose filled in? ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:11, April 20, 2017 (UTC)ShypawDo the trickor treat

I think they're thick enough, but it is an approval page. Define the earpink, and the shading on the tail? Also, the nose is filled in—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:15, 4/20/2017

reupsCrow mah name is jeff  00:40, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading pretty much everywhere besides the tail, quite a bite. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 00:42, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste near the ear and front paws Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:55, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

reups shading seems a lil dark but I dunno and I think I got rid of the waste — Crow mah name is jeff  00:58, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth more ErmineGlow (talk) 01:17, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could be expanded on the belly. ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<02:02, 4/20/2017>

I think there would be a little shading behind the <-- arm (I rlly hope you know where I'm talking about) also define shading depth a little SNOWFALL (03:52, 4/20/2017 )

This is beautiful! I would smudge/blur the shading on the ear a little. — paper · finches 16:32, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pupil slightly - I can see it, but it's a little hard to make out spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:30, 4/20/2017

i dunno if I can still make comments since I'm technically no longer in PCA anymore but could you smooth out -> earpink a bit? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:23, 4/20/2017

reups the belly shading. yikes. — Crow mah name is jeff  21:17, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Lightning Stripe (Ki) - For Approval

Lightning Stripe.kit Jayce  ( 04:42, 4/20/2017 )

Define shading depth a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 12:00, April 20, 2017 (UTC)chat

Smoothen out the white a bit? ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 20:56, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

The white is supposed to be jagged, like a lightning bolt, so I don't feel like it should be—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:24, 4/20/2017

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