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Pipsqueak (GC) - For Approval

Pipsqueak the pirate. ouo —Jayce(14:23, 11/30/2017)

I think the shading is leaking on the <--- forearm where the white meets the black belly fluff? I love this pattern! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:38, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I got it? —Jayce(07:03, 12/01/2017)

Maybe define the shading on the tail a bit more. Did you get the pipsqueak the pirate from mop? Lol. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 01:11, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You mean MLP? Dang right I did. Pipsqueak is one of my favorite side characters, so when I saw they used the name in Warriors, I couldn't resist seeing if I could get his image. —Jayce(03:12, 12/02/2017)

Dotty (GC) ~ For Approval

I'm not sure if the larger ginger patches would need stripes.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 16:56, 11/30/2017

Re-uploaded. Changed the pattern.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 17:47, 11/30/2017

In regards to your question: we used to say that adding stripes to ginger-and-white patched cats (people being picky+art style changes haven't shown this recently) was a choice, depending on patch size and all of that nonsense. I'd say we'll still abide by that. Plus, you can only add so many stripes on an image. —Jayce(18:17, 11/30/2017)

Ah thank you! Okay. I just wasn't so sure it'd be allowed or not. I did a google search for ginger and white cats, and most had tabby stripes on the ginger. So I just added it.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 18:25, 11/30/2017

Well, just because google says something, doesn't mean we abide by it. While stripes are mandatory on solid ginger cats, when they have something else, it's a bit different. It's the same as a tortie that has ginger; stripes are not mandatory on torties who have specified ginger parts as well. It's an optional thing as far as I'm aware. —Jayce(07:04, 12/01/2017)

Maybe add some shading by --> side of the muzzle and add some shading to the start of the tail(by the legs)? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 05:27, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Wait, are there stripes on this at all? Because the dots aren't stripes... we've redone images for having those dots on images before. If your patches were a lot smaller, then you could get away with it, but these are really big patches and do need the stripes. —Jayce(06:31, 12/05/2017)

Those are stripes. It's just a style I do. If it's too confusing I'll change it. And Cosmo, what do you mean? There is shading at the start of the tail.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 08:19, 12/05/2017

How exactly are those stripes? I don't get it. You'll have to change it, I think. —Jayce(08:24, 12/05/2017)

I can kind of see how they are stripes because of the arrangement of the dots, but they can easily be mistaken as dots. I'd say change it. Branchwing^★ 20:13, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Feather (GC) - For Approval

File:Feather.gc.png White GC it is then Branchwing^★ 21:02, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a touch? everyone is using the long-haired blanks xD—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 21:10, 11/30/2017

Perhaps lighten and smooth the shading a bit, define it on the back hind paw closest to us. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:42, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the head. This is good :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 22:49, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! i know :^) Branchwing^★ 01:46, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think there is some shading leaking onto the ----> forearm from the...haunch shading? Don't know how else to describe it. Not from the belly, but the other side of the forearm. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:34, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got it. Fixing that leaking shading was a pain x.x Branchwing^★ 16:24, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot to make the (very faint) texture layer visible again Branchwing^★ 16:28, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Peanut (GC) - CBA

these blanks turned out lovely. appearance is based off of my cat. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:41, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

There is an image to match Patch.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 21:44, 11/30/2017

oh! lol i didn't even notice! i'll reupload in a bit. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:49, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. all right, there we go. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 22:03, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the <-- front leg? This is really pretty!! madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Re-uploaded. thank you! —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 01:43, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(11:31, 12/03/2017)

Shouldn't this have herbs, like Spiresight? She is a healer, after all. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:28, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 03:02, December 4, 2017 (UTC)

Re-CBA? —Jayce(13:32, 12/04/2017)

Boots (GC) - CBA

Comments? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:03, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

He seems a tad too..red? Maybe lighten the shading a touch.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 22:14, 11/30/2017

Reuploaded. How's this? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:19, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

He still looks red to me. Maybe make it more brown? Branchwing^★ 01:47, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink looks orange. make it just a few shades redder? madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Reuploaded. Colorpicked from Husker, cause why not? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 02:59, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

What is that dark red line on his eye? Is it a scar?—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 03:29, 12/01/2017

Yes, it is. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 03:34, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Is that scar allowed to be there? He isn't specified with any scars, and he could've lost the eye due to an infection. I'm not sure about the missing fur around the eye either.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 03:38, 12/01/2017

The scars are fine and I think it's artist's choice in this case as to whether or not to add them. I've seen this on other images. Boots doesn't have an eye; it's not just gonna be a blank socket as far as I'm aware. There's bound to be at least some scarring around it, regardless of how he lost it. It doesn't say he's blind in that eye, it says he doesn't have the other eye. I'd be more surprised if there wasn't scarring. —Jayce(07:07, 12/01/2017)

can u add some more depth to the shading and maybe the eye socket itself david ^🌈 19:28, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 19:41, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? Loving that eye socket tbh. —Jayce(13:33, 12/04/2017)

Dovewing (GC) - For Approval

while doing the shading i realized halfway through i was using the wrong brush sorry if it looks weird lmao. also, don't these need to be added to the shading tutorial thing? madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

will reups for green eyes in a min pls don't comment on that madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

reups madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Smooth out the shading a bit more Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 00:27, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups just took the blur tool over the entire thing. rip madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

There's a speck of waste outside --> haunch.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 01:05, 12/01/2017

Try defining the eye depth and/or expanding the pupil--that may help with the eyes. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:40, 12/01/2017>

reups the pupil is supposed to be small. if someone else agrees, i'll widen them a bit, but slit eyes are my favorite :^( madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Perhaps desaturate the shading just a tad. And I will be adding these once I get the pen for my tablet. Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{01:48 Fri Dec 1}

Could you define the eye depth again? --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:50, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups okay I KNOW I'm really annoying for this... but can I get a second opinion for the eye depth? honestly I can see it just fine and I think it's really clear as a transition from light to dark. it is my image so I'm probably just biased lmao madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

I think the eye depth's fine imo. Anyways, I don't think the smoky parts have texture on the other images? I'm probably wrong though. Could you define the ear pink as well? Branchwing^★ 01:56, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Eye depth is fine. —Jay^{I hope they remember you....ϟ} 01:57, 12/01/2017

reups the choice of ear pink color was not a good one for this pelt color madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

I actually think the eye depth could be defined a bit, and might the transition to lighter/darker colors in the eyes be softened a bit? It seems a little too abrupt and sharp, and could probably be blurred or smudged or something. —Jayce(07:09, 12/01/2017)

seems to be a little shading leaking from the foreleg closest to us (near the top of it) and the base of the tail. david ^🌈 19:29, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups I have not once blurred or smudged my eyes, but ok. (i'm sorry if i'm salty it's been quite a day. merry christmas) madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Can you define the shading in both ears? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:33, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

I put the ear pink over the shading because it was really hard to see. I'm like 86% sure I can do that?? idk if I can't I'll go ahead and put it back madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Whoops. Sorry about that - didn't mean to make it difficult. I'm just having a hard time seeing it that's all. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:45, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Shading ear pink isn't even a requirement of the project. It's a personal preference. Danny, the ear pink is difficult to see if you place it under the shading, so I think in this case, we'll let it as-is, no? —Jayce(11:33, 12/03/2017)

sounds good to me 👌 madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Okay sorry about this but can you smooth out the shading on the legs just a little bit? Then I'll CBA this. —Jayce(13:33, 12/04/2017)

reups i really need that wacom drawing tablet thing for christmas so i can have GOOD art. yall aren't even gonna be ready for the glow up. madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Maybe expand the tail shading a wee bit? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 05:26, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Fierce (GC) ~ For Approval

Easy-to-match pattern? Never heard of it. Also I apologize for the gross shading here, will fix it later. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<00:13, 12/02/2017>

She doesn't look like a tortoiseshell. She looks more like a brown cat with orange flecks. Also, it didn't say Fierce was missing a leg, only that one was shorter.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 00:30, 12/02/2017

I think if you add some black in there, it should be ok. also if you just make the paw lineart more visible on the shorter leg, that should solve the problem. ^^ david ^🌈 01:04, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Between the start of the tail and then under her missing foreleg, connect the hind leg to make it appear and not have the tail be directly next to it without showing the hind leg where it sits. (If this doesn't make sense I can do a redline) C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 01:07, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Yeah, Cosmo can you give me a redline? ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<16:32, 12/02/2017>

Could you add another toe to the shorter foreleg? On the normal blank that leg has four toes, not three. Branchwing^★ 16:44, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. Maybe define the shading a little bit? —Ivy ☆ 22:50, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shorter leg's paw should droop a little more, since it's just hanging there ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (01:28, 12/04/2017 )

re-up May fix that paw later. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:33, 12/05/2017>

there's a pixel of tail lineart leaking onto the altered leg, plus can u thicken the altered lineart like just a tiny bit? i love this madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Sorry for the late comment, but like I redlined where what I said earlier. https://ibb.co/cwpkzb C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 05:23, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define shading on the tail? --ErmineGlow (talk) 22:16, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Rascal (GC) - CBA

Some more short-hair love Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:26, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Is the nose filled in? madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Yep. Just doubled-checked. It's a very pale pink, but I can make it darker if it needs to. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:36, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

In my opinon, maybe make it darker. It clashes quite a bit and looks too light for a darker cat, but I may be wrong! :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 00:48, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some shading to --> behind the muzzle a bit? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 01:08, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 04:13, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? The eyes. They beckon me. They're so shiny. —Jayce(13:34, 12/04/2017)

Spiresight (GC) - CBA

He has herbs because he was a healer right? My little bby Spire </3. I'm so happy how well done my blanks are.. thanks everyone for the critiques! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 03:00, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(13:34, 12/04/2017)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (GC) ~ For Approval

Let me know if I did anything wrong! First image; stripes are not my forte ;n; But overall, I think I did pretty good. Thoughts? SpookiEevee (talk) 03:56, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

This is really pretty! Good job on your first image! Define and smooth out the shading? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 03:59, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Really nice! Define the ear pink in the <- ear? Branchwing^★ 16:26, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Actually, could you define the ear pink in general? I can't see it at all. Also, can you define the leg shading? Although if the shading comment is already covered under what Cosmo said, I apologize. —Jayce(13:36, 12/04/2017)

Adding onto mine and Jayie's comment, expand the shading everywhere and define it on the paws and tail a bit more and the muzzle area too.  C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 05:24, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Marigold (GC) ~ For Approval

it's been forever. i might've named this wrong idk —.neha ^{it's that gloom boy season.} 04:40, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth and the eye depth madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Expand the shading a lot, and add some shading to the ears. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 07:17, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded —.neha ^{it's that gloom boy season.} 21:31, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (01:21, 12/04/2017 )

Expand the chest shading. Branchwing^★ 01:59, December 4, 2017 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the face and muzzle. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#team litten} 05:25, December 5, 2017 (UTC)