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Sorrelstripe (Queen) - For Approval

File:Sorrelstripe.Queen.png Time to slink back into cat art hell now I've fixed my programs :) ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 15:58, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you lessen the belly shading some? Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 14:25, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

I don't really like to just say it's fine much when possible but I feel like the belly shading is ok, my minor character queen has roughly the same amount. I'll do it no problem though if someone else agrees with you, Mink. ;; ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 17:07, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

meh it looks fine to me, sorry mink. Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 18:18, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

The base appears lighter than the apprentice, which I believe is first in the set? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 18:28, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you center the pupil on the -> eye Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 07:13, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

You still have some time left, but are you still working? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 17:27, May 31, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I'm gonna try and re-up either tonight or tomorrow probably ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 19:10, May 31, 2019 (UTC)

reups i tried this was a very weird process ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 23:19, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Onestar (Warrior Alt) - For Evaluation

File:Onestar.warrioraltt.png Im not very sure if this can be made but I saw it under the characters that need art. I tried to make it as similar as possible.

Sorry if I did make a mistake of making this, im very new to the project so here it is... Kezii (talk) 01:43, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

By the way I also used FireAlpaca if there needs to be changes. Kezii (talk) 01:45, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Welcome to the project! You are able to make this i believe, but since this is your first Chaart, this is for Evaluation I'm pretty sure, Don't thumb your images or align them (|thumb) (|left or |right), Put the image before any flavor text you wanna put along with it! This should be named File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png aswell. The < eye is looking a bit gray, and shading could be defined. ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 02:03, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I have the leader file from when I was doing this, I can email if you want? Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 02:56, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 13:37, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I tried all the suggestions, fixed gray eyes, and added ear fur (to make it more similar to the alt leader) Kezii (talk) 23:14, May 29, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into source mode and remove the |thumb. Also avoid thumbing by going to the file and click "Upload a new version of this file". You need to upload this as File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png, or the image won't work with the wiki's templates. The lineart also appears to be missing in some places, namely the ears and paws. Brighten up the white on both paws, and define the shading everywhere on the white. Can you also smooth out the chest shading? Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 00:29, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

The texture, I believe, looks a little rough. Could you smooth it out?

(⊙•⊙) ^wila?

The hind paws should be white too, and I think the hind paw furthest from us is hidden? It should be visible. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:14, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Oh, and I use firealpaca too so if you have any specific questions, let me know :) Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:21, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could also afford some smoothing on the hind leg closest to us. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 20:55, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

idk if it’s just my phone screen, but there appears to be red around the lineart? some of it seems to be on the lineart ~ ☾Moonyy ( 00:28, May 31, 2019 (UTC) )

yeah, the colors seem to be leaking out of the lineart, and the lineart itself is red/blurred in some places. luke ^{my last (マイラスト)} 13:33 Sat Jun 1

idk if this has been said already so sorry if it has, but some of the lineart appears to be missing. ✧Winter✧ 12:58, 6/02/2019

You still have plenty of time left, but are you still working? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:54, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ashheart (Ki) ~ CBA

All colors from original image. Comments? Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 00:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little?

(⊙•⊙) ^wila? 01:23, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 03:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth that bit of shading at the base of the tail Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:11, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 20:55, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:52, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ashheart (W) ~ For Approval

All colors from original image. Comments? Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 00:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch and < front leg shading, and I feel a small touch of light on the chest would help add some depth —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 14:01, 6/01/2019

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 03:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a little shading depth on the section of the tail furthest away from us (the top half) —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 00:40, 6/03/2019

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 02:07, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Beech Tail (k) ~ For Approval

i like... tried to match the old kit, but i don't think i did the stripes justice ~ ☾Moonyy ( 01:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC) )

Could you add some shading behind the ear (on that ear fluff), and maybe define the shading depth all throughout? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups ~ ☾Moonyy ( 04:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC) )

The shading is leaking slightly away from the lineart at the base of the cheek, essentially where it meets the neck. I also believe some shading could be added to the front leg that shows along where it meets the tail, and have it recede from the back in both places it meets by a bit —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 02:26, 6/02/2019

reups hope i understood what you meant correctly! ~ ☾Moonyy ( 03:19, June 2, 2019 (UTC) )

Yup, that's what I meant. Extend the shading a little more to get closer to those tufts of fur that represent the back of the head and lessen the shading on the < side of the haunch, and I think you'll be close to done by then —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 00:39, 6/03/2019

reups ~ ☾Moonyy ( 04:30, June 3, 2019 (UTC) )

Clawface (W) - CBA

will fix the scars Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior}

Could you define the depth in the eyes? —Jayce(01:50, 6/01/2019)

reup Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 02:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little? App was first approved in set (before tweaks and all), and it seems a slightly different color there —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 14:05, 6/01/2019

reup Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior}

i can't see the image, could you possibly reup again? ~ ☾Moonyy ( 05:25, June 2, 2019 (UTC) )

I can see it, there should be some light on the legs with you light source Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:13, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I intended for the light to be coming from above. I can try to make that more obvious Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 15:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

reup Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 15:26, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:52, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Doestar (W) - For Approval

Oml I thought I almost missed my chance to snag this lol. I love this pattern and I tried to follow the shading style that was going on in her set. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to^EVERYTHING!} 03:04, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the back leg closest to us. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 03:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I left that section of shading sticking out to sorta do an illusion of the bent leg, similar to this. (I admit i didnt use a ref beforehand) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jose1106 (talk • contribs)

Can you define/expand the tail shading Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added shading to the right ear as well. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to^EVERYTHING!} 23:41, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the bottom of the < front paw? —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 00:41, 6/03/2019

Reuploaded - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to^EVERYTHING!} 15:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Brightheart (W) - CBA

totally haven't had this done for over a month and a half eheheh nooppee ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading in general? I really have to squint to see it. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 03:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 18:12, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

The hind paw furthest from us is unfilled. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i is a dumb ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:58, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the white Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 13:51, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 20:07, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (W) - CBA

mlady tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 03:44, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Defien the shading on the black, and the depth on the silver. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 03:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Thin the dorsal stripe on the tail a touch^^ Looks nice :) —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 14:06, 6/01/2019

reuploaded thank you!!! tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 14:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the shading depth? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:30, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 22:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Can you add light to the legs Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:15, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 14:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? Very nicely done^^ —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 20:08, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Cloversplash (W) - For Approval

Comments? I love that clover leaf. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

She's dark brown, I'm v sure the splash should be clover shaped. It should probably match what the old one shows. Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i think the shading needs to be smoothed out around the chest/legs and there is a bit of waste by the tail tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

It says shaped like a clover leaf, not a clover itself. I'll fix the base and shading tomorrow *decides to steal Loudbellys coloring*. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 04:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

a clover leaf is a clover lmfao, either way it should resemble the shape of a clover. Shouldn't the coloring match the old one??? Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 04:34, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with mink :/

Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 04:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't the clover technically the whole plant, and then a clover leaf is an individual leaf? I'm not sure, but Potato might have a point. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to^EVERYTHING!} 04:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

no, lmao. the shape on the muzzle doesn't even resemble clover leaf, I said that this should match the colors and design of the old one Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 04:59, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I know what you were saying, I was only arguing about the "clover leaf isn't a full clover" thing. Anywho, Potato I think there's waste on the actual lineart of the tail, as well as near it like Ty pointed out. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to^EVERYTHING!} 05:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

didnt we aree that all iamges should match the old one or whatever Burntclaw 12:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

If that's true, I'm fixing it right now. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 13:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded So I googled a clover leaf and what I got was a full clover, so I matched it to best of my ability. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 13:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to be the unpopular one here, but I think Potato and Jose were actually correct. It should be one of the leaves, not the entire plant. It explicitly says "a clover leaf", and if you look it up... you get things like a three or four leaf clover, meaning that a "clover leaf" is singular. You were correct in your statements, Potato and Jose. Please go and change the marking back to how you had it, but perhaps shrink it just a little bit. —Jayce(16:18, 6/01/2019)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 16:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

It says that the white flash is on her nose, and this looks like it's on her forehead. Could you move it down so it touches the top of the nose? Also, can you curve the haunch shading to match its shape? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the shape wider and kind of heart shaped. These are clover leaves for reference. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to^EVERYTHING!} 16:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded me tries Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 16:36, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

You could do something like this maybe. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to^EVERYTHING!} 17:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 18:48, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch shading Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 19:22, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded arghhh Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 19:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you also define the ear pink? i cant really see it espeically on the < ear Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 20:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 21:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There should be light on the legs with this source Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:16, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The source is fine- this was used on two other images. See below. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 13:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

While this source has been used, those other images have a lot more depth on the front legs so they're not all flat; if you could do that some, that'd be great.—spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 19:51, 6/02/2019

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 23:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (w) ~ CBA

i can't do torn ears... or texture rip. my gimp crashed so i had to use another program, and i'm rly unfamiliar with it so that's why this charart looks a lil blotchy ~ ☾Moonyy ( 04:41, June 1, 2019 (UTC) )

Lighten the shading half a tick? I also believe the ear should be slightly altered as well; to add back a bit more at the top, but add more gashes, just to match the other images —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 14:07, 6/01/2019

blur the shading at the bottom of the haunch and the top of the shoulder closest to us? luke ^{my last (マイラスト)} 20:44 Sat Jun 1

There are three pixels of waste right above the visible hind paw that should be removed. Right between the hind paw and the <--- front paw. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups i srsly tried with that ear but wow it looks so unnatural ~ ☾Moonyy ( 00:32, June 2, 2019 (UTC) )

Recede the chest shading a little bit —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 19:50, 6/02/2019

reups ~ ☾Moonyy ( 21:43, June 2, 2019 (UTC) )

CBA? —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 02:49, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blackstar (W) ~ For Approval

I'm still experimenting on the tint, the shading is sposed to look like it does btw Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 05:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups here we go Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 06:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:07,6/1/2019

Also, looking at the leader, there should be at least a scar on this side. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 10:36,6/1/2019

Looking at the old warrior, he didn't get his scars til he was a deputy? I asked about that before I started and I was told he didn't have them during this time Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 10:38, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I also went to check his page for the cites of the scars but he doesn't have them?? Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 10:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm unless a cite pops, it's fine as is. But, the haunch shading does need to be receded here, the source doesn't call for this much.—spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 14:08, 6/01/2019

Re-Ups Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:00, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarstar (W) ~ For Approval

here he is, apparently my laptop cut off the lineart a bit Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 06:26, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a block of waste by the tail - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:06,6/1/2019

Same comment for haunch as is on Blackstar —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 19:51, 6/02/2019

Re-Ups Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:09, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Bluebellkit (K) - For Approval

I think I did very well with my first white cat. Comments? Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 13:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

blur the shading along the tail near the point? luke ^{my last (マイラスト)} 14:48 Sat Jun 1

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 15:53, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Same thing as Blackstar. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

is it possible to curve the shoulder shading some more? it looks odd with it just being a straight line. david ^🌈 22:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, its really rough Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:19, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 14:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Remove waste and define the light on the tail —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 19:52, 6/02/2019

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 00:03, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blackstar (K) - For Approval

I don't think the back paw farthest from us would be showing, so I didn't add it. Anywho, comments? Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 13:52, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the black paws a bit more? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waster, and it looks almost like there's a gap in the haunch shading. ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 16:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded the gap in the haunch shading is intentional, Baykit's source has the same gap. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 16:43, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little overall. —Ivy ☆ 18:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 18:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

The black on the hindleg needs to be higher. As his others show it about just about a bit of his ankle wise so both would almost cover his back paws completely.Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 19:18, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 19:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a patch of shading leaking onto <---- side of the haunch. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Its leaking on the stomach too Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:44, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 12:24, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 15:03, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:48, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomfall (W) - CBA

ladie tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 15:08, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Beautiful! Define the shading depth a tad, especially on the forlegs. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to^EVERYTHING!} 15:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the front paws. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 15:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you soften her petals just the slightest' bit? ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 16:36, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you j!! tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 16:49, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I don't think the white is supposed to go along the tail like that. I think it's just near the top. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:22, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 22:42, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

How does it look if you whiten the white? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 00:58,6/2/2019

reuploaded i've lightened it as much as i can, its the shading that makes it look dark tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 14:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:55, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomheart (W) - CBA

Idk. It's been a while. —Ivy ☆ 18:08, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are more oddly shaped on the tail? According to the apprentice. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, I know what you mean. The stripe pattern for this set is just weird in general... I redid the stripes there, so hopefully they match a little better now. —Ivy ☆ 20:45, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looks better to me! CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:05, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Brightheart (K) - CBA

sweet brightkit, you will accomplish great things sweetie ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 18:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Awww she's precious. I think the ear closest to us is supposed to be ginger? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:56, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 20:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval

"me? i loved him." ♥ S t a r _{red _and} _black _♥<19:37, 6/01/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?will i ever be more than i've always been?">_{waving through} 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass?">_{a window} <19:37, 6/01/2019>

Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Berryheart (W) ~ CBA

Local New Zealander Forgets How To make Cats Without Texture; More at 8 david ^🌈 21:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

smudge the white a bit? —Jayce(21:56, 6/01/2019)

reuploaded if it looks a bit sharp in places its cuz the lineart is in the way david ^🌈 00:50, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 00:43, 6/03/2019

Crowfeather (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval

♥ S t a r _{red _and} _black _♥<21:33, 6/01/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?will i ever be more than i've always been?">_{waving through} 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass?">_{a window} <21:33, 6/01/2019>

Smooth out the haunch shading a bit? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

honestly it could be smoothed out everywhere - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:18,6/2/2019

Could you curve the shoulder shading up onto the shoulder. Right now it seems like it stops abruptly there and kinda throws it off a bit. Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 01:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Briarlight (Kit) ~ For Approval

it is she ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 21:53, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and paw? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:20, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 16:01, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink seems different from the other images. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:56, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Bee (ki) ~ Withdrawn

File:Bee.kit.png click here for a 100% very true bee fact david ^🌈 22:49, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to be long-furred. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 23:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded not sure how that happened david ^🌈 00:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:06, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

withdrawing this one for something else. will get back to it soon david ^🌈 19:10, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarheart (Kit) ~ CBA

—Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 01:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Yay, Thundybundy posted art. .o. Might you darken the shading a little bit and smooth out the edges of said shading? —Jayce(01:10, 6/02/2019)

could u extend the shading on the haunch

Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 05:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

—Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 05:40, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading and lighten shading

Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 05:56, June 2, 2019 (UTC) i think its fine

—Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 06:07, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I have to agree it looks fine and super cute Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:21, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:10, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Deadfoot (W)- CBA

Burntclaw 02:11, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 10:44, 6/03/2019

Beetail (W) ~ For Approval

Let's try this again. Tinystream (talk) 02:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This should match the star and the deputy. The stripes on these seems thinner, rougher, and more bunched up together. Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 02:40, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This actually matches quite well, Mink? Could you possibly define the shading depth on the chest (near the arms)? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (04:05, 02/6/2019)

The stripes don't seem to cross like this on the others unless my computer screen is showin it too dark. They're also more smudged and rougher looking Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:23, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Mink. The stripes appear rougher and closer together on the other images. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 18:54, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

https://www.ezimba.com/work/190603C/ezimba15349395102400.png here's the unshaded version to help with stripe placement. The colors look good - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 15:12,6/3/2019

Dangling Leaf (K) ~ CBA

Tinystream (talk) 02:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:14, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Amberclaw (W) ~ CBA

Colors are from his previous warrior and I attempted to keep the pattern^^ —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 02:27, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 10:44, 6/03/2019

Bluestar (Alt. W) ~ CBA

~ ☾Moonyy ( 03:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC) )

With your source could you extend the shoulder shading up a tad more and maybe smooth it overall? Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 09:25, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

reups ~ ☾Moonyy ( 11:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC) )

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:16, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Brightflower (K) - For Approval

— ☆ paper · finches ★ 09:54, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This is so cute, Finch. Can you define the paw shading? Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 11:31, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you! I've extended the shading and added depth. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 15:07, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Beetlenose (W) ~ CBA

will be fixing shading in the earpink later, and adding shading to > ear

Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 09:59, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 01:54, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:22, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval

i know the shading is weird looking but im still testing this type out Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 10:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? -Shadow hOnK :o) 16:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also smooth the shading out? Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 17:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ambermoon (Ki) ~ For Approval

i love

Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 12:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little bit of shading to the front arm that's visible, kinda just in that spot where the tail and haunch meet to a T —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 19:56, 6/02/2019

Can you smooth it on the tail a bit Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 20:51, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reups yes Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 01:55, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Strikestone (Ki) - CBA

Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{13:22 Sun Jun 2}

CBA? —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:25, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shanty (Ki) - For Approval

Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{13:24 Sun Jun 2}

maybe soften the face shading just a wee bit? looks a bit hard compared to the rest. david ^🌈 20:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{13:18 Mon Jun 3}

Cloverfoot (K) ~ For Approval

i'm not sure if i should put the heading as for evaluation since i already uploaded something but it got declined rip. i really want to play sa2 luke ^{my last (マイラスト)} 13:44 Sun Jun 2

You're fine- Spooky moved you to apprentice rank cause a few years ago you were an apprentice. Smooth out the shading? Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 15:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the stripes could stand to be slightly thickened on the body, and given a slightly rougher more paintbrushy feel, like the loner and rogue —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 19:57, 6/02/2019

re-ups tried a new brush and repainted the stripes since smudging them didn't really look good. started coming down with a really bad cough yesterday and it turns out im still bad at sa2 so theres that luke ^{my last (マイラスト)} 13:37 Mon Jun 3

Applefur (TF) (W) - For Approval

TBH I don't remember how I did the defunct Star, which was based on the OG warrior lmao Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{18:36 Sun Jun 2}

Could you define the shading on the ears? Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 22:11, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I purposely have the earpink above the shading. We've never been required to have shading on it. If I move it I will constantly get told to define the earpink. Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{22:31 Sun Jun 2}

Don't hate me but I'm having a hard time seeing the ear pink, so matbe define that but the shading itself there seems fine to me Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 23:34, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I brightened it a bit, that should fix it. Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{13:16 Mon Jun 3}

Birdy (K) ~ For Approval

Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 18:43, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Since its described as a dark tuft, shouldn't it be similiar to like some darker haur sticking up? Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 23:36, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Don't think so, since I've always been following the manga. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 23:52, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Then in that case just ignore me loll Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:46, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Crouchfoot (W) - For Approval

pro tip: look at the character's design before you reserve it 0.0 Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 20:27, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Buster (K) ~ For Approval

—spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 00:18, 6/03/2019

Conefoot (K) ~ For Approval

—spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 00:18, 6/03/2019

Can you define that paw shading? Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:45, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Clovertail (K) ~ For Approval

—spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 00:37, 6/03/2019

If I'm not mistaken she needs to be Shorthair ^^ unless we've gotten a cite for her being long hair Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{01:08 Mon Jun 3}

Reuploaded yeah rip you're right, that was just a tired me moment —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 01:21, 6/03/2019

Dragonfly (Ki) ~ For Approval

imaliveiswear

– Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 00:49, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

There should be a dorsal stripe and I think the stripes are more jagged. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded – Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 19:34, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Star Flower (K) ~ For Approval

- Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:19,6/3/2019

Apple Blossom (W) ~ For Approval

okay thats enough cat doodles for tonight

– Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 01:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

The colors dont quite seem to match her others. The stripes should be sharper and the design should probably match the style thats going on there, she seems to have side stripes more so on her other side which should probably match this side too in style Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 01:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i think you should darken the shading a little :O tyb 🌌 ^owo??? 18:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Berryheart (Ki) - For Approval

❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 01:46, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfoot (W) - For Approval

Plan to mess with the shading but I wanted to get this up before I go to bed since I have work tomorrow. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 01:46, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the shading a bit towards the edge to smooth it out. This is really good 👌 Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:43, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) ~ For Approval

My favorite. All colors from alt. leader. Comments? Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 01:55, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the facial shading some Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 03:43, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 03:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Gooseberry (W) ~ For Approval

I think I did a better job matching the queen this time around. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:57, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (Kit) - For Approval

hi. my naem squidwardo. i draw katz. i believe this is freegame so its time to get revenge on this pattern bc if u didnt know my first charart was one of alders set that got declined. ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 02:50, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add variation to the flecks, and define the gray flecks. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 02:51, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the gray flecks tho

Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 04:13, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I do agree, they need defined Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 04:16, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Would you care for one of the files? I have the hunter, and I think I still have Jayce's old warrior. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 14:56, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval

black cats are my allies Silv^{こころ震わせた思い出} 04:20, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a bit if depth to the shading Ellie ^{life is an illusion} 04:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Tornear (K) ~ For Approval

my first image :0 - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 13:49,6/3/2019

Beetlewhisker (W) ~ For Approval

his death actually made me feel sad.. but he's not actually dead is he? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 14:38,6/3/2019

Harrybrook (W) ~ For Approval

Ahhh by first every charart. <3 Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 14:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I want to do my first, Brackenfoot, but he's not on the art list so I'm not sure if I'm allowed. Lol anyways, can you smooth out the shading on the stomach/where the haunch meets the stomach just a tad? This is great. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to^EVERYTHING!} 15:30, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

reups Thanks! Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Leafshade (W) ~ For Approval

—Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:34, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Sandynose (W) ~ For Approval