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Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow hOnK :o) 00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow hOnK :o) 00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:00, 6/09/2019
I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard. — max it is the real thing, (07:31, 09/6/2019)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)
Hmm, I think some more depth on the < front leg and haunch wouldn't be remiss. I also believe the source would allow for more light on the top of the < front leg —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:03, 6/11/2019
as a head's up, go ahead and start matching the pale blue-gray shade you see in the old one's prior revisions, we're swapping her and Mistystar to be pale due to a LS cite, per PC —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:31, 6/11/2019
Reuploaded! Is this the right one? -Shadow hOnK :o) 23:44, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Could you add just a little more light to the muzzle, specifically on << side of the face, as its in more light? — max it is the real thing, (05:31, 12/6/2019)
With your source, I think the top part of your >tail wohld be in light as it has shading on too to bottom and that doesn't make since with the source so if you could fix that Ellie life is an illusion 08:45, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Add a little light to the top of the paws ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
There are also three pixels of waste between the hind paw and the front <--- paw. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Add a bit more shading depth to the haunch, it still comes off as flat-ish imo compared to the rest of the image —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:12, 6/14/2019
Still working?
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:32, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Yes sorry i just finished finals!! I'll upload asap -Shadow hOnK :o) 04:21, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 17:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
There's three pixels of waste underneath the tail, and could you maybe define the earpink? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:47, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the haunch; there's a couple places where it's still pretty saturated ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:35, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:20,6/22/2019
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 05:01, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
This needs a nicked ear. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Dawnflower (W) - For Approval
Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more. — max it is the real thing, (02:08, 12/6/2019)
can you define the eye depth? Splook sweet creature 02:15 Wed Jun 12
Dsfine the light source in the < ear Ellie life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more Ellie life is an illusion 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded lightened the shading depth Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Shading on the haunch and < front arm is sharp, and there's waste outside the > front leg —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:15, 6/13/2019
Reuploaded tfw you realize you haven't been using a hard-edged smudge tool and using a soft tool that makes the shading look bad Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Could you curve the shading along the arm and face so that it doesn’t look flat? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:06,6/15/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:03, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Same as I said on Dawnflower's kit, though more especially here.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:14, 6/15/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a bit.
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:38, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:48, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Can you add some light to the chest and legs, add some depth so it doesn't seem flat like it is on the legs and chest area Ellie life is an illusion 15:41, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
I'll add light to the chest and shading depth, but Mink, this is the exact same way the legs are on the source I mentioned above, with the exception of the bounce light. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Did the things I mentoned. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:06, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Still looks flat, and should also be made to curve on the face instead of go in a line straight down. Also, same comment for the earpink color as on the kit —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:32, 6/16/2019
I get there shouldn't be light down there since I've used this source before, but it shouldn't look so flat as it is does. There should be depth. Adding some shading light should help add depth to the lighter parts of the shading there as well as some darker bits, like Blackstar has. The haunch is also leaking Ellie life is an illusion 17:51, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded changed the light source to Bouncefire's. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:42, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
The shading on the haunch could be swooped downward to encompass the curve (basically putting the shading on the lower haunch and connecting it), and removing some from the tail tip because there wouldn't be as much. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:25, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
With this source, it should be on the bottom of the tail, iirc. Ellie life is an illusion 02:01, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Bouncefire's source has the shading on top of the tail, not the bottom. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:06, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Bouncefire is a tabby, its not seen as prominent as this. As some others have probably said. One shading on another character might not work for another. The source contradicts the shading on the tail, it should be on the bottom as its inconsistent with it on the top. It doesn't make sense when the light is coming from > and the shading is where there should be light. Ellie life is an illusion 14:55, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
The shading can also be smoothed, too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:11, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploadeddddd again fixing a few things. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
that bit thats still on the top should be curveddown as well Ellie life is an illusion 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded herpaderpderp Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:46, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
That's not what I meant, I'll give a redline inna minute. Ellie life is an illusion 23:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
here, this is basically what im getting from you shading source so i did a redline. As well as fixing that, lighten and smooth your shading. It could use quite a bit of smoothing Ellie life is an illusion 23:25, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded changed the tint to blue. I like this one better. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:27, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Curve up the haunch shading so it shows off the shape of the thigh. Ellie life is an illusion 00:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded rip I tried Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:07, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Remove the line of shading going across the thigh. I think what Mink was referring to was curving the shading downward to encompass the bottom of the thigh. And smooth the shading, too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:10, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
I think the best way for the shading to go is to have a look at the updated shading chart, as it shows the two most common sources that users have been using for the warrior blanks + kits. — max it is the real thing, (01:57, 18/6/2019)
Reuploaded double rip, matched to tutorials. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the over all shading a bit, then on the back line art the shading is very faint, define that? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
That spot of shading still looks fairly light compared with the rest of the shading, making it look inconsistent. Could you make it match in depth more? I think the depth could be defined on both front legs and the face - perhaps expand it to go under the chin? Smooth it by the bend in the tail, it looks blotchy, and the haunch and shoulder shading could be smoothed some more as well. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:45, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded I'll fix the shading more tomorrow. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:28, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Extend the haunch shading Ellie life is an illusion 15:41, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:10, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Even out the shading on the back and blur the transition more ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:12, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:19, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
There's waste by the back paws and >> ear; and I also think the shading should be smoothed.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:51, 6/21/2019
Reuploaded tried using a pressured opacity smudge brush Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
The shading is a little bit blotchy at the top of the flank WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 09:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:37, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
The shading is still very blotchy on the flank, shoulder, haunch and tail. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded what even is that shoulder shading anymore. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:14, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Shading still appears to be blotchy in the areas Vec mentioned. Could you expand the shading more on the haunch and define it in the ears? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:09, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
SkyClan's Destiny gray she-cat (W) ~ For Approval
My first canon charart. WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 07:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
can you smooth the shading please? also there was a thumb on your image so i removed it :)
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 10:32, June 15, 2019 (UTC) whoops sorry for the double comment. the eyelashes should be removed as they are not in use to define gender anymore
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 10:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Soften up the texture a bit to match her kittypet. Good work! Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:26, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 13:46, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Dethumb the image by going into source mode and removing the |left. Make the pupils less of a square, add eyeshine, and define the shading on the hind feet. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:11, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Changed the heading from approval to evaluation since you're still a kit^^ Smooth the shading on the legs and flank, and there appears to be shading leaking from the chest and leg farthest from us, then add some to the ears. Nice job on this! —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:31, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
The eyes look like there's still lashes, that part shouldn't be there iirc Ellie life is an illusion 18:10, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 08:27, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Even out the shading on the < front leg to remove the blotchiness, and you've got some waste outside the back —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:45, 6/16/2019
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 19:16, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
With this source, the back paw farthest from us would have some shading, though not completely in shadow. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:57, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
The eye color also seems different than the kittypet. Nice job doing the texture btw! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:39, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 14:41, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Define the depth in the shading and darken everywhere ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:34, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
There would be a little shading under the jaw with this source, and define the shading on the hind paw farthest from us. This may just be my screen, but there might be waste under the paws. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 18:47, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
There is a lot of waste everywhere around her, so please remove that. Can you expand the face shading a bit to touch the eye and jaw, and a touch on the front leg closest to us? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:05, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 09:25, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the front leg furthest to us :3 Crystie Can't help loving me 12:33, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
The shading appears to be leaking a tiny bit on the back. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:21, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the face and shoulder a bit. Could you possibly expand the shading to go under the chin some? It looks rather flat around there and I think adding some shade will help. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:06, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 08:21, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Bumped you up to apprentice, keep up the good work! Mind defining the shading on the < front leg? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:39, 6/23/2019
reuploaded. Thank you, spookywilloww! WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 20:04, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading on --> foreleg, and maybe add a little bit more to the shoulder just to round it out? Looks a little mishapen.Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:44, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 14:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Alder (Ki) - For Approval
I think it's fine if I pick this back up? if its not lmk. I kind of stopped working bc i got sick and its hard for me to draw when I'm sick.. I still kind of am, but i'm feeling far better and so I created this demon. This time I got the original file for the kit. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 23:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
There's a bit of waste above the back Ellie life is an illusion 13:38, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
reups wasteus deletus Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 22:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
The image is not showing up. Perhaps reupload again? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:07, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
It's now showing up. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:31, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Maybe add some more brown spots near the shoulder, just looking at the Hunter's side for reference. — max it is the real thing, (23:10, 19/6/2019)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:24, 6/22/2019
mhm im reupping when I get to the computer tonight Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 17:09, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
reups Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 22:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
The image is not showing up again. Try reuploading once more? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:01, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Squirrelflight (Alt W) - Declined
File:Squirrelflight.warrior.alt.png oa claim, used vecs deputy file for everything Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 02:32, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
This looks good! There should be white on the belly and the stripes should be a bit more jagged and not a linear. What I did is use a small brush and brush tightly up and down across the blank. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:08, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:55, 6/22/2019
mhm, trying to make it look good still. seeing how ive used sai for years youd have though id know how to do this decently, ill just reup whatever i land up with tomorrow and work more Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 03:04, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Declined due to lack of work.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:26, 6/26/2019
Cloudstar (Ki) ~ CBA
tried to copy the deputy and old warrior's pattern but uhhh.. idrk what i did lmao
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 15:36, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
I think the patches on the other images seem more sharply smudged than these; these appear a bit softer on the edges —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:39, 6/20/2019
Reuploaded
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 13:53, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading a touch more ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:09, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:28, 6/24/2019
Reuploaded Yeah, I was on vacation.
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:27, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:54, 6/25/2019
Poppydawn (Ki) - For Approval
Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•16:34 Wed Jun 19
Can you define the shading overall, and smooth out the tail shading? - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 04:45, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
In addition to Jose's comments, might you also expand the shading as well? I understand if that's just part of your source, though. —Jayce(05:46, 6/20/2019)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:33, 6/23/2019
Yes. I've been working overtime and have a final this week. oof. The shading is also purposely like this but I will try and smooth it. It's the same source I used on Shanty and Strikestone. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•18:17 Tue Jun 25
Duskpaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
oa claim from spooky
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 12:02, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
The colors look very different from the apprentice, and the stripes look more sharply jagged. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:13, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 18:00, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
I think, to match the app, the haunch stripes could be a little thinner and more broken up as they go to the >> side of the cat —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:48, 6/21/2019
Would you like the file for the apprentice? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:14, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:28, 6/24/2019
That would be great, blue! just send it to aritariusworks@gmail.com
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:27, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
It's sent. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:56, June 26, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded – Cinna dear evan hansen, 01:30, June 26, 2019 (UTC)
Frostclaw (W) - For Approval
Fluffy girl Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:10, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
Might you smooth out the overall shading, and define it on the ears and upper head? —Jayce(22:16, 6/20/2019)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:30, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:57, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:55, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
Could you expand the shading a little above the rectangle shading piece on the forleg so it connects to the shoulder/upper forearm shading some more? Seems very abrupt atm Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:18, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:48, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Very nice! I feel that the shading by the bend of the tail could be removed, so then you'd just have the patch of shading on the bottom, then one by the base. Not sure, it just looks off to me? Smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us, on the bottom of the tail, chest, and a bit on the haunch. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:12, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:26, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
can you lighten the shading/smooth it out please Burntclaw 05:44, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:46, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
looking good, its nice to see how much you've improved in a short amount of time :) could you smooth the shading out a bit more on the chest, it looks prety hard edged there Burntclaw 02:39, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thanks Burnt! Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:27, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Furzepelt (W) - CBA
furzestar 2020 Splook sweet creature 23:32 Thu Jun 20
CBA? — max it is the real thing, (23:27, 21/6/2019)
Sorry to break, but I can't really see the light source on this one. It seems like the shading just traces the whole image. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:22,6/22/2019
reuploaded changed the shading style, the paintbrush style wasnt working with this image Splook sweet creature 21:01 Sun Jun 23
The gray looks just slightly darker than it did on the old warrior/current app —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:08, 6/24/2019
reuploaded yeah when i originally colorpicked it, you could barely tell it apart from the pelt so i darkened it a little. so maybe this is better? Splook sweet creature 18:56 Mon Jun 24
Re-CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:44, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Fernshade (W) - CBA
I don't know which was harder: Berrynose, Dapplenose, or this. Tried to colorpick from the StarClan image. And before anyone says something, the "white" isn't white, it's a light creamy-gray. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 23:34, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
this is really good!! can you smudge out the two brown spots on the tail so they're not so hard edged? and perhaps darkening the body shading a little wouldn't hurt either Splook sweet creature 23:35 Thu Jun 20
Reuploaded x2 because SAI hates me again. Hope I got the spots you meant! ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 23:42, June 20, 2019 (UTC)
Maybe add just a little bit of black to the top of the back leg? The queen looks as though it has some there - this is absolutely gorgeous by the way, good job matching! — max it is the real thing, (23:28, 21/6/2019)
Reuploaded. Thank you ;w; ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 18:00, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
It might just be my eyes, but I think the colors appear duller on the other images? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:09, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Darkened just a touch. Also messed with shading. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 20:10, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
For lack of better words, I feel the patches of colors are sharper on the other images, whereas they seem smoothed out here —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:53, 6/22/2019
Reuploaded. I tried. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 18:30, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
The paler parts look a bit more creamier on the other images? Ignore if that's the color you got from them, but I wanna make sure. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:53, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
I colorpicked from the Star, but I’ll go compare it to the other images as well. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 16:26, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Went and colorpicked from the original warrior for the near-white. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 16:40, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:23, 6/26/2019
Plumwillow (Alt. W4) ~ For Evaluation
Haven't been here for a while! :P Crystie Can't help loving me 13:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:04, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 14:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink. (The correct file is Plumwillow.warrior.alt4.png)Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:38, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
Got it for you. Was just missing the File part in the code. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:17, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading more, and the lineart is graying in some places. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:31, June 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded :3 Crystie Can't help loving me 01:08, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Alright, few things. What tool are you using to make the shading? Is it the burn tool or are you using a pencil/brush to draw/paint it on? The shading still could be defined a few ticks more. The lineart is still graying, it's being covered by something. Try erasing on your layers to return it back to its original color. Kill the waste outside the back. Smudge the earpink a bit as well. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Maybe have a look at the updated shading chart, for where to place some shading. Right now, add some onto the face and under her chin and down her legs on our left. — max it is the real thing, (01:12, 22/6/2019)
Reuploaded~ :P Crystie Can't help loving me 03:13, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Remove the waste under the paws. Can you define the light source on < this front leg, fix the eyeshine so she doesn't look cross-eyed, and add shading to the ears? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 03:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 03:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Remove the random white lines above the back. Define the eye depth and the shading depth (remember, adding a layer of thinner, darker shading) and add shading to >>> this side of the tail as well, there would be some shading there with your source. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 03:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded OMSC the white lines thing is so frightening :P Crystie Can't help loving me 03:57, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Looking better! Add shading to the back paw farthest from us and the front leg farthest from us. Define the shading on the ears and chest. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 04:34, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Ahhhh thank you so much Potato!! <3 Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 05:22, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading more on the ears (the insides of the ears would have some shading), expand the shading more on the front leg farthest from us, and add shading to the back paw closest to us. Nice job with the textured shading so far! Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:41, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded <3 Crystie Can't help loving me 02:29, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Blend the texture in the shading more. Flip the shading on < this ear to the other side, to comply with your light source. Can you also smooth out the shading as well? To soften it up and make it more of a gradient. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:38, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 04:15, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading more. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:37, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
This might be a repeat of the comment above, but maybe define the shading placement? Especially on the flank, upper shoulder and chest area. Right now it looks like it's all over the place atm. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 12:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading on the face, tail, and front legs. The shading on the back also appears to be leaking, and the shading, over all, could be smoothed. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 00:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Much better! Swap the shading on the bend of the tail to the top to comply with your source. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded like this? :P Crystie Can't help loving me 02:17, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Not quite, Crystal. Not only would the shading be on top of that bend, that whole bend of the tail area would be in shadow. Can you also define the eye depth more? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:00, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Now? :3 Crystie Can't help loving me 00:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)
Fuzzypelt (W) - For Approval
Love this guy. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 18:36, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:05, 6/23/2019
Sorry to break the CBA, but, could you add some shading underneath some of the fluffy bits of fur so they don't appear so flat? (Similar to Brokenstar's leader and other fluffy cats) — max it is the real thing, (08:37, 24/6/2019)
Reuploaded - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 22:52, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Ferretclaw (W) - For Approval
- JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 18:36, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:19, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
Perhaps desaturate the tint a touch as well? It's making parts of his gray look dark blue, to the point where it's distracting. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 18:21, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Replaced it, still not too satisfied. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 22:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
It's still a bit sharp on the top part (our view) and bend of the tail - could you smooth it there? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:58, 6/23/2019
Reuploaded - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 22:52, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Appledusk (W) - CBA
-points- hate this guy tyb 🌌 owo??? 01:36, June 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Could you use the color from File:Appledusk.Icon.png, please? That’s what we agreed on. —Jayce(01:56, 6/23/2019)
i did. it's color picked from that image tyb 🌌 owo??? 03:24, June 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Huh, weird. My phone must be having issues. Could you smooth out the shading a bit? —Jayce(05:22, 6/23/2019)
I think it’s the shading tint - the former images were altered to icon cause they were pretty green and the tint here appears so too. While technically not a requirement, would you mind dulling that slightly? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:17, 6/23/2019
reuploaded changed the shading to black tyb 🌌 owo??? 16:35, June 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Smooth the shading a bit on the belly, haunch, and tail? ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded tyb 🌌 owo??? 16:55, June 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:43, 6/25/2019
Brindleface (W) ~ CBA
- Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:29,6/23/2019
There's some waste floating around the chin, back, tail, and paws. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 03:33, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:22,6/23/2019
I think there should be a few more flecks throughout the pelt and the darker Y stripe on the flank and another in the middle of the haunch should be a bit smoother. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:50, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Didn't add too many flecks bc the star's side doesn't have many - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:34,6/24/2019
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:33, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Birdflight (W) - CBA
Burntclaw 05:41, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
I'm comparing the colors with this, the old warrior, and the StarClan image... and I'm not sure if it's because of the lighting differences, but this one seems slightly different than what her other images are. It's mainly the face, really...but this could also be my laptop- I did just try and tweak the color calibrations yesterday. —Jayce(06:15, 6/23/2019)
reup i tried changing the base but it didnt do anything, so i made the shading black and darkened the stripes Burntclaw 09:52, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? You did a great job matching the stripes! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:33, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Eaglestorm (W) - For Approval
ugh, I tried my best. Thank you so much Eggheart for helping me with the texture. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Could you maybe add some shading and/or texture to the ----> front paw? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:07, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Can you add more shading to >>> this side of the tail, and some depth to the back paws? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:08, June 23, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - The shading looks really dark here? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 18:04, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Idk but this seems a shade darker than the old image - a combo of shading, base etc. might be doing it, I'm not sure —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:44, 6/25/2019
Finchflight (W) ~ CBA
is only image in set, Skye said I could redo patterning, since had been theirs.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:09, 6/23/2019
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Firefern (K) - CBA
Splook sweet creature 21:33 Sun Jun 23
Could you recede how high the shading goes on the back, if that makes sense? Just for source —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:52, 6/24/2019
reuploaded Splook sweet creature 18:56 Mon Jun 24
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Flaxpaw (K) - For Approval
File:Flaxpaw.kit.png colorpicked from the apprentice
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 00:59, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Add a couple more stripes to the back leg in the space, to match a little more with the apprentice? — max it is the real thing, (08:33, 24/6/2019)
Reuploaded
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 23:49, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Grasspelt (W) - For Approval
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 00:59, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Add just a teeny bit of shading under her chin, and connect the back and shoulder shading (if that makes no sense let me know) — max it is the real thing, (03:56, 24/6/2019)
smooth the main body shading a smidge? Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 04:34, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Perhaps expand the shoulder shading so it meets with the rest on the back/neck? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Really minor but his eyes look black to me. Would it be possible to lighten the main eye color a bit? ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 14:48, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Some leaking shading on the bottom of the tail. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:50, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Fernsong (W) ~ CBA
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:25, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Thin out the facial stripes on the cheeks just a tiny bit, and maybe connect the back leg stripe into a complete "u" shape (can redline if that makes no sense :D) — max it is the real thing, (08:32, 24/6/2019)
Reups Like this? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:45, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Could you recede the pale on the haunch just slightly, or blend it more in? Just seems to pop a bit more here than the earlier images in the set —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:33, 6/25/2019
Reups Hope that made a difference, though that stripe is kinda in the way. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Yup. CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:45, 6/25/2019
Twigbranch (Ki) ~ CBA
Colors from other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:24, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:36, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Tree (Ki) ~ CBA
Colors from other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:24, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:36, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Blossomfall (Alt. K) - For Approval
All colors from the original kit. Man, that stripe was fun. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:37, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Blur the stripe, add more depth to the shading, and extend the earpink ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:53, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Expand the haunch shading a bit as well? ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 14:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:41, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth out the earpink a bit more, and the shoulder and haunch shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:37, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:52, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Cherryfall (K) ~ CBA
a cutie - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:58,6/24/2019
Maybe make the stripes just a tad thicker? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 16:23,6/24/2019
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:43, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Brightspirit (K) - For Approval
this is so bad lol Burntclaw 03:07, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
please dont comment on the waste. Burntclaw 03:10, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Could you extend the tail dorsal stripe all the way through to the tip of the tail? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Fernpelt (W) - CBA
tweaked her original pattern tbh kinda want to make her a classic. will tweak the rest eventually ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:51, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? — max it is the real thing, (06:27, 25/6/2019)
Blue Whisker (Kit) ~ CBA
a note: I have no OA claims left - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:39,6/24/2019
Could you possibly give her some whiskers? — max it is the real thing, (08:30, 24/6/2019)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:14,6/24/2019
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:48, 6/25/2019
Foxleap (W) - CBA
— max it is the real thing, (07:02, 24/6/2019)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:56, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Graystripe (W) - CBA
— max it is the real thing, (07:02, 24/6/2019)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:56, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Brook (W) - CBA
— max it is the real thing, (07:02, 24/6/2019)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Barley (W) ~ CBA
david 🌈 07:14, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:59, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Skywatcher (W) - For Approval
A true warrior. Comments? Hawkfire Happy Days ( 14:15, 6/24/2019 ) 14:15, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Could you add some shading underneath the ragged fur so it doesn't seem as flat? — max it is the real thing, (06:19, 25/6/2019)
I didn't add shading there because none of his other images have it. ^^ That would cause it to look different from the rest of the set. May I ask for a second opinion? Hawkfire Happy Days ( 21:51, 6/25/2019 ) 21:51, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Featherwing (W) ~ CBA
—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:25, 6/24/2019
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Cypresspaw (K) ~ CBA
OA claim from patch —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:25, 6/24/2019
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Featherpelt (W) - For Approval
not a huge fan of this one but im done with tweaking it lol tyb 🌌 owo??? 16:52, June 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
reuploaded tweaked face shading because it was bothering me tyb 🌌 owo??? 03:01, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
I think the chest, including going upwards in the neck area, should be free of stripes? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:04, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded tyb 🌌 owo??? 04:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Silver Stripe (W) ~ CBA
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:20, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Finleap (Ki) ~ CBA
Colors from other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:01, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
I feel like the ginger on the front leg should extend up to the elbow? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:50, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:37, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:59, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Hoppaw (Ki) ~ CBA
File:Hoppaw.kit.png david 🌈 21:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:59, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ Declined
stinky boy ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 02:55, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
What is this for? He has images for all his mistakes. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:59, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
He was in characters needing art? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 13:36, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
I'm gonna agree with Bluestar here. He already has this alts on his page, and I don't see one for a non-tabby on there. Sorry, but I'm going to decline this. Must've been a mistake. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:02, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Flashnose (W) - For Approval
tyb 🌌 owo??? 02:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
There are lighter stripes in tandem to the darker ones, and the stripes seem to be lighter overall on her old warrior. Would you like the file of the original warrior? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:42,6/25/2019
yeah sure if you dont mind LOL, i was going off her starclan sprite rather than the warrior tyb 🌌 owo??? 04:53, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
reuploaded still had a bit of trouble matching but i tried matching the warrior more closely tyb 🌌 owo??? 22:36, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Define the eye depth or make them slightly darker? Malina457 (talk) 22:42, June 25, 2019 (UTC)malina
reuploaded tyb 🌌 owo??? 00:22, June 26, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Stemleaf (K) ~ For Approval
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Foxheart (W) ~ For Approval
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Snail Shell (W) - For Approval
Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•18:21 Tue Jun 25
Morningflower (W) - For Approval
Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•18:21 Tue Jun 25
Barkface (Ki) - For Approval
This image made me respect the people who are able to make blanks about a thousand times more than I already did (which was a lot btw). All colors from the MC. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 22:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Can you perhaps fill in that little spot between the tail and back leg with lineart? It looks a bit out-of-place. Also a personal preference, but can you round the elbow a bit more to make it less pointy? Av Out of sight and out of mind ()23:03, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Like this? ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 23:23, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Yep, that's good! Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:59, June 25, 2019 (UTC)
Fringewhisker (Alt. Ki) - For Approval
Colors from alt. apprentice. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 22:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)