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Dawnflower (W) - CBA

Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (02:08, 12/6/2019)

can you define the eye depth? Splook ^{sweet  creature} 02:15 Wed Jun 12

Dsfine the light source in the < ear Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened the shading depth Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shading on the haunch and < front arm is sharp, and there's waste outside the > front leg —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 23:15, 6/13/2019

Reuploaded tfw you realize you haven't been using a hard-edged smudge tool and using a soft tool that makes the shading look bad Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the shading along the arm and face so that it doesn’t look flat? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:06,6/15/2019

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:03, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Same as I said on Dawnflower's kit, though more especially here.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 23:14, 6/15/2019

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit.

– Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 14:38, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:48, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some light to the chest and legs, add some depth so it doesn't seem flat like it is on the legs and chest area Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 15:41, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll add light to the chest and shading depth, but Mink, this is the exact same way the legs are on the source I mentioned above, with the exception of the bounce light. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did the things I mentoned. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:06, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still looks flat, and should also be made to curve on the face instead of go in a line straight down. Also, same comment for the earpink color as on the kit —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 17:32, 6/16/2019

I get there shouldn't be light down there since I've used this source before, but it shouldn't look so flat as it is does. There should be depth. Adding some shading light should help add depth to the lighter parts of the shading there as well as some darker bits, like Blackstar has. The haunch is also leaking Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 17:51, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the light source to Bouncefire's. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:42, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch could be swooped downward to encompass the curve (basically putting the shading on the lower haunch and connecting it), and removing some from the tail tip because there wouldn't be as much. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:25, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, it should be on the bottom of the tail, iirc. Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 02:01, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire's source has the shading on top of the tail, not the bottom. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:06, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire is a tabby, its not seen as prominent as this. As some others have probably said. One shading on another character might not work for another. The source contradicts the shading on the tail, it should be on the bottom as its inconsistent with it on the top. It doesn't make sense when the light is coming from > and the shading is where there should be light. Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 14:55, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

The shading can also be smoothed, too. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:11, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploadeddddd again fixing a few things. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

that bit thats still on the top should be curveddown as well Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded herpaderpderp Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:46, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

That's not what I meant, I'll give a redline inna minute. Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 23:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

here, this is basically what im getting from you shading source so i did a redline. As well as fixing that, lighten and smooth your shading. It could use quite a bit of smoothing Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 23:25, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the tint to blue. I like this one better. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:27, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Curve up the haunch shading so it shows off the shape of the thigh. Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 00:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded rip I tried Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:07, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the line of shading going across the thigh. I think what Mink was referring to was curving the shading downward to encompass the bottom of the thigh. And smooth the shading, too. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:10, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think the best way for the shading to go is to have a look at the updated shading chart, as it shows the two most common sources that users have been using for the warrior blanks + kits. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (01:57, 18/6/2019)

Reuploaded double rip, matched to tutorials. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the over all shading a bit, then on the back line art the shading is very faint, define that? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

That spot of shading still looks fairly light compared with the rest of the shading, making it look inconsistent. Could you make it match in depth more? I think the depth could be defined on both front legs and the face - perhaps expand it to go under the chin? Smooth it by the bend in the tail, it looks blotchy, and the haunch and shoulder shading could be smoothed some more as well. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:45, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix the shading more tomorrow. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:28, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the haunch shading Ellie  ^{life is an illusion} 15:41, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:10, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the back and blur the transition more ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:12, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:19, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste by the back paws and >> ear; and I also think the shading should be smoothed.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 17:51, 6/21/2019

Reuploaded tried using a pressured opacity smudge brush Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is a little bit blotchy at the top of the flank Windsong^{Run with the wind... ❀} 09:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:37, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is still very blotchy on the flank, shoulder, haunch and tail. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded what even is that shoulder shading anymore. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:14, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still appears to be blotchy in the areas Vec mentioned. Could you expand the shading more on the haunch and define it in the ears? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 02:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:09, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch, shoulder, and flank some more as it is still very blotchy. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:02, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, this is the last time I'm changing the source and the shading on this one. This source is A+. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed. Expand it on the back foot and the face. It also looks like it cuts off on the front leg closest to us, can you fix that? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:51, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, I figured I'd note - please do try to make this the last time. This is the fifth time source's been overhauled via upload history, and each time it is, it negates all the comments before, extends the process, and is largely a waste of time for all the people who left comments beforehand. It's never really said, but it's never changed so much as to be an issue; I'm not alone in that we're all happy when it improves, and gets pretty close to done, and then poof.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 16:55, 6/26/2019

Reuploaded Okay. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:49, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the belly and tail shading. Splook ^{sweet  creature} 22:57 Wed Jun 26

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:27, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add shading to the lower section of the foot? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:59,6/27/2019

There would not be any shading there with my source. This was used on other images. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:01, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the bottom portion of the <--- front limb? Underneath the blocked shading. It seems very cut off. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:25, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

That's actually intentional. It's part of my source. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:10, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think some should be added there, in some form. It's been mentioned by three leads now, four including me, to which we concur it looks cut off.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 17:08, 6/30/2019

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 17:15, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again tried adding depth to the front legs Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 17:22, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

If you're using the source I think you are, which multiple other images have, there would be more shading on the visible back foot. —Jayce(18:27, 6/30/2019)

Same comment as Frostclaw. The shading overall can be smoothed a lot, and possibly darken the shading on the hindpaw furthest from us? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:26, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

All the shading still needs to be smoothed more. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:20, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:09, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

looks good on the tail, but the shading on the haunch and the shoulder still need smoothing out. Burntclaw 03:46, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded and with the magic power of the smudge tool, I can do that Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:23, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

sorry but i think the shoulder still needs some smoothing out ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 13:22, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:43, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the top of the shoulder shading upward so it's not so cut off? Kinda like on Frostclaw. And smooth the haunch and tail shading some more. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:14, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:29, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

So, I'm still not seeing very much shading on that back foot. Please define it and darken it. —Jayce(06:58, 7/04/2019)

Reuploaded realized the entire back foot had to be in shadow per source Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:12, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The shading still looks really blotchy i am so sorry for all of my annoying shading comments —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:08, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Played with the shading opacity, it looks better. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:13, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

looks good on the haunch, but shoulder shading needs to be smoothed out still. Burntclaw 07:37, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:19, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? The lightened opacity was a big improvement. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:44, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Frostclaw (W) - For Approval

Fluffy girl Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:10, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Might you smooth out the overall shading, and define it on the ears and upper head? —Jayce(22:16, 6/20/2019)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:30, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:57, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:55, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading a little above the rectangle shading piece on the forleg so it connects to the shoulder/upper forearm shading some more? Seems very abrupt atm Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:18, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:48, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Very nice! I feel that the shading by the bend of the tail could be removed, so then you'd just have the patch of shading on the bottom, then one by the base. Not sure, it just looks off to me? Smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us, on the bottom of the tail, chest, and a bit on the haunch. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 02:12, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:26, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading/smooth it out please Burntclaw 05:44, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:46, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

looking good, its nice to see how much you've improved in a short amount of time :) could you smooth the shading out a bit more on the chest, it looks prety hard edged there Burntclaw 02:39, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:27, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Same comment as dawnflower about the block of shading on the <--- foreleg. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:29, June 27, 2019 (UTC) Read Dawnflower. It's intentional. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded per Spooky on Dawnflower Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 17:16, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again depth to front legs Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 17:23, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

The overall shading could be smoothed, quite a lot. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 17:31, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:26, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

shading still needs to be smoothed out. Burntclaw 13:51, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:09, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not really seeing much difference with the shading. Smooth it out a lot more. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:07, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded You should definitely be seeing a difference now. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:43, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looks better! Can you smooth it some more on the top of the haunch, on the chest, and front leg closest. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:02, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:30, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Same as Dawnflower. Darken and define the shading on that visible back foot, because it looks extremely out-of-place, given your source. —Jayce(06:59, 7/04/2019)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:12, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Shading appears blotchy on the shoulder. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:52, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:55, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

It actually looks a little more blotchy after you reuploaded. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded *internally screams at shoulder shading* Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:06, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the chest and shoulder a bit. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:44, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 18:53, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt. W4) ~ For Approval

Haven't been here for a while! :P Crystie Can't help loving me 13:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:04, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 14:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink. (The correct file is Plumwillow.warrior.alt4.png)Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:38, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Got it for you. Was just missing the File part in the code. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 15:17, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more, and the lineart is graying in some places. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:31, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Crystie Can't help loving me 01:08, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, few things. What tool are you using to make the shading? Is it the burn tool or are you using a pencil/brush to draw/paint it on? The shading still could be defined a few ticks more. The lineart is still graying, it's being covered by something. Try erasing on your layers to return it back to its original color. Kill the waste outside the back. Smudge the earpink a bit as well. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe have a look at the updated shading chart, for where to place some shading. Right now, add some onto the face and under her chin and down her legs on our left. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (01:12, 22/6/2019)

Reuploaded~ :P Crystie Can't help loving me 03:13, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste under the paws. Can you define the light source on < this front leg, fix the eyeshine so she doesn't look cross-eyed, and add shading to the ears?  Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 03:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the random white lines above the back. Define the eye depth and the shading depth (remember, adding a layer of thinner, darker shading) and add shading to >>> this side of the tail as well, there would be some shading there with your source. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMSC the white lines thing is so frightening :P Crystie Can't help loving me 03:57, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looking better! Add shading to the back paw farthest from us and the front leg farthest from us. Define the shading on the ears and chest. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:34, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh thank you so much Potato!! <3 Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 05:22, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more on the ears (the insides of the ears would have some shading), expand the shading more on the front leg farthest from us, and add shading to the back paw closest to us. Nice job with the textured shading so far! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:41, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <3 Crystie Can't help loving me 02:29, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Blend the texture in the shading more. Flip the shading on < this ear to the other side, to comply with your light source. Can you also smooth out the shading as well? To soften it up and make it more of a gradient. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:38, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 04:15, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:37, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

This might be a repeat of the comment above, but maybe define the shading placement? Especially on the flank, upper shoulder and chest area. Right now it looks like it's all over the place atm. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 12:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, tail, and front legs. The shading on the back also appears to be leaking, and the shading, over all, could be smoothed. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 00:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Much better! Swap the shading on the bend of the tail to the top to comply with your source. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded like this? :P Crystie Can't help loving me 02:17, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Not quite, Crystal. Not only would the shading be on top of that bend, that whole bend of the tail area would be in shadow. Can you also define the eye depth more? Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:00, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now? :3 Crystie Can't help loving me 00:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste along the back, underneath the tail, and underneath the paws. Could you define the light (remove some of the shading) on the tail? Seems to be covered in just shading. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 15:31, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 00:40, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Here is a redline of what you shading should look like on the tail. Red is where it all has to be in shadow, and orange is where the light needs to be definned. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:51, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 02:52, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

The light on the tail could still be defined a bit more in the area potato mentioned. It should be the same color as the lighted parts on the main body. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:32, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 02:30, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth out the tail shading some? this is cute! Splook ^{sweet  creature} 16:53 Fri Jun 28

try and remove the waste floating around the image^^ —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 17:58, 6/28/2019

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 03:23, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light again on >>> this side of the tail, and it's leaking a bit there too. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 10:45, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think there's shading leakage along the back? ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 00:50, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

I see waste under the tail, and the light should be define on the tail again. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:10, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 01:37, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste around the image and define the light on the tail some more, try erasing the shading there on all your layers or add a highlight to help define it. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 06:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

there is waste all around the back of the body and lots of waste around the feet. The shading on the back is slightly leaking too ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 13:24, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 04:11, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shade in by the tail fold please--willowstep 14:14, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more facial shading to <--- side of the face? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:15, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 00:59, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, there would be light on the stomach. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 01:53, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome work, you've improved a ton, Crystal! I've moved you up to an apprentice on the table^^ it might just be me, but there appears to be some shading leaking on the back. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:00, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I also see leaking shading on the back (could also be bounce light). Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

(Also gonna bump this up to "for approval" since you're getting the hang of things. You can use this heading for all future submissions from now on ^^ Also, you're almost there!) Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh TYSM guys!! I'll reupload it soon Crystie Can't help loving me 01:27, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 01:58, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the bottom of the chest, near the legs? Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:34, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

smotth out the shading on the shoulder and back area connecting to the shoulder. Also i think theres is shading leaking where the back and the tail meet ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 10:51, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 09:36, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Morningflower (W) - For Approval

Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{18:21 Tue Jun 25}

do you want the file? can you smooth out the black patches a little/cover them more with the lighter texture? Burntclaw 03:09, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Just to be safe, probably should. Just use one of the emails on my userpage ^^ Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{23:21 Thu Jun 27}

Reuploaded I'm prob going to mess with it more, just uploading so I don't forget Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{14:03 Sun Jun 30}

can you make the lighter texture less uniform? (will probably need to fix that on the elder eek .-.) Burntclaw 14:29, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:21, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Dew (K) - For Approval

  — ☆ paper · finches ★ 09:05, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

The old one had the torn ears - so I think this would need them too? Unless that cite for sure comes after being adulted —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 16:43, 7/01/2019

Still working? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 23:31, 7/03/2019

Sorry, I am still working I'll upload soon. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 08:39, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Duskfur (W) ~ For Approval

Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

You need to wait until your withdrawn ones are archived, since technically they're still yours. This time I'll archive it for you. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:31,7/1/2019

The ear pink looks brighter on the old warrior. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 04:15, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:08, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looking at the queen, her stripes appear less uniform and a bit thinner than what you have here. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:59, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Er, I tried Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 16:23, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Brighten the pale to match the queen^^ —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 03:09, 7/06/2019

Reuploaded easy fix at least Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:27, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Eaglekit (WC) (K) ~ For Approval

Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and maybe reduce some of the shading on the shoulder? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 04:14, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like the shading could be lightened slightly as well Splook ^{sweet  creature} 21:00 Mon Jul 1 

With this source, there would be shading on the jaw that connects to the neck shading. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:24, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I get the sense I'll be battling shading a lot with this image... Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:08, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the haunch and should be smoothed out more. Burntclaw 03:46, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail and arm. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:48, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:23, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking in the shoulder area, and define the shading on the ears. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:02, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I may or may not have gotten the leaking shading Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 16:23, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:45, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  .

Frostfur (K) ~ For Approval

Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think she has blue eyeswillowstep 00:09, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I color-picked off the original kit... silly me Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:08, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

the light source seems to be confusing me. you have light coming from the bottom of the tail and paws but light hitting the back aswell? could you define the light source more sorry ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 13:32, July 2, 2019 (UTC

The light source appears to be Sleek Fur's. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:39, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed with Bramble - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 14:38,7/2/2019

wanted to say that just because an image has been approved in the past doesnt mean that every trait of it is the holy thing that doesnt have any flaws and cant stand to be fixed. Burntclaw 14:50, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Eh. I mean it is a usable source, but this doesn’t quite match Sleek Fur’s anyways in a few spots, so I can see as well why it doesn’t work. But, it’s close. Just take some off the bottom (our view) of the face, reduce it a smidge on the haunch; add some at the top of the shoulder etc. —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 16:11, 7/02/2019

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:23, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch a little bit. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:25, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 16:23, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the front paw furthest from us and the hind paw that's hidden by the tail (the easiest thing to do would be covering both of those completely with shading since they're so small). Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:47, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded...? Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:27, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (RC) (K) - For Approval

Burntclaw 05:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes seems smoother and lighter on the warrior, and could you define/add more mottles? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 15:47, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

The nose should be dark brown, I think. That's what the warrior has. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:14, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 03:05, 7/06/2019

reup redone bc file was lost oops. the nose should actually be pink bc the old kit was first, but i changed it to brown anyway. Burntclaw 03:47, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (Warrior Alt 2) - For Evaluation

File:Warriors.pngWarriorsCats2009 (talk) 01:29, July 3, 2019 (UTC)WarriorsCats2009

The image doesn't entirely appear to be filled in. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:31, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

I changed the file name to Boulder.warrior.alt2.png because this is the proper name for the image. Also, Have you color-picked the colors of Boulder's previous set images? It would help a lot. I really enjoy the effort you've put into making this! You seem to have waste around the paws and a blank white spot in the middle of your charart where another foot is supposed to be. May I ask what program you are using? ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 01:42, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

It also appears that you have a smaller version of blank. Perhaps it was saved incorrectly. Try saving it from here. And I have the files for the rogue and elder if you need them. I'll provide the color codes for them in a few minutes. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:05, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Alrighty, so the base color is rgb(106, 118, 113)/#6a7671, the stripes are rgb(43, 50, 52)/#2b3234, the paler parts are rgb(202, 205, 218)/#cacdda, the earpink is rgb(172, 150, 136)/#ac9688, and the nose is rgb(161, 139, 126)/#a18b7e. Hope this helps! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:24, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

It's my first charart. It's not supposed to look THAT good. Besides, I'll learn. WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 02:38, July 3, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

That was a bit uncalled for, I'm afraid. The whole point of the approval process is to gain helpful critiques for one's artwork to be put on the articles, and for the artist to practice their skills and improve. No one above criticized your artwork unfairly. Like you said, it's your first; everyone in this project experienced their first artwork and improved. And it will happen to you, too. ^^ Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:52, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

There needs a few more stripes, to match the elder's side view. And remember, patience! You'll get the hang of art eventually. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:58, July 3, 2019 (UT

Okay I will add that as soon as I can.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 03:33, July 3, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Reuploaded 

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 21:05, July 3, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Image is still the wrong size and not everything is filled in. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:09, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Please reupload over File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:15, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match File:Boulder.elder.alt.png... It's missing the white, the stripes should be thicker and cover more of the body, and they also appear a bit smudged, and should be less uniform than what you've got here. There's white around the line art that shouldn't be there, I'd suggest using layers, if you aren't already. That makes it a million times easier. Add shading and depth to the eyes as well. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:28, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'm trying. I colored it whole on Pixlr, but when I uploaded it, it was white in some places. 

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 01:55, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Reuploaded

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 02:15, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

This needs to be uploaded under Boulder.warrior.alt2.png. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:18, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I did upload it under that.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 05:38, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

I'm not exactly sure how to use Pixlr and I've never used it, but I've heard it isn't the best program to work with, so I may suggest trying a different one. GIMP and FireAlpaca are both free, I'm pretty sure. Could try one of those? It might make it easier. There appears to be no change since you reuploaded. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 05:51, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I uploaded it but soon it went back to that image that I last used.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 05:57, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

It is supposed to be this: 

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 05:59, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!File:Warrior.png

Upload that image under "File:Boulderfur.warrior.alt2.png" then, as others have previously said. There's still no change in that image, either. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 06:03, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I picked my colors from the elder version. I tried my best.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 06:14, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

It doesn't match the image though, is the problem. I know it's hard, this is your first image, but you should listen to the comments you are given. This is an approval page for a reason and you cannot make excuses to not change the image. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 06:16, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Hi there! Please use the bigger version of the lineart Vec linked, and upload it under the "File:Boulderful.warrior.alt2.png]] (Rename it I believe). There's a lot other things to do, but... maybe you can change a program and start to draw with layers? :3 Crystie Can't help loving me 06:33, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'm NOT making an excuse to not change my image. And I am using layers.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 15:44, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Fill in the back paw farthest from us. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:46, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Okay got it.

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 22:31, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

Reuploaded. This if it doesn't show:File:Warriors.png

WarriorsCats2009 (talk) 22:36, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Warriors Cats Rule!

The image is still the wrong size, and should not be thumbed or aligned. It should be uploaded over File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png, and you don't need to post the image every time you reupload. This needs to match the alt elder in terms of stripes, and needs a white belly and muzzle as is depicted on the alt elder. You also need shading, and to get rid of the white inside the lineart. This may seem like a lot, and I apologize if it does, but this will help the image get approved. Please feel free to ask me questions should you have any. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:20, 7/04/2019>

Elderkit (K) - For Approval

 Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:16, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the little chest area? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:13, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:16, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and head/neck shading. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:34, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:12, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

The neck shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart. Do you mind filling that back in while still retaining the smoothness? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:42, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded welp I tried Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 18:54, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

This could just be me, but I think the shading overall should be smoothed out just a little Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:30, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:59, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval

Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (Ki) ~ CBA

Honestly fluffy tails are the best

– Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 22:12, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

darken / define the shading a tad ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 03:20, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

– Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 15:12, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:48, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Dusk Nose (Alt. Ki) - CBA

 ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 22:24, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you match her eye color to the rest of the set? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:18, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 15:49, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:41, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (Alt W) ~ For Approval

original shading was a nightmare but i quite like this new look. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:29, 7/04/2019>

There's a block of waste at <-- end of the tail. And maybe add some shading on the rest of the back near the shoulder? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:47, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading tint a bit? And add just a little more where the haunch meets the tail? ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 23:49, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

re-up ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<00:35, 7/06/2019>

Frostfur (W) ~ For Approval

Wow, look at me, being so productive... ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:40, 7/04/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?will i ever be more than i've always been?">_{waving through} 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass?">_{a window} <23:40, 7/04/2019>​

Same thing with Bubbling Stream about the shading. This looks very nice! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:48, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Jagged Peak (K) - CBA

Splook ^{sweet  creature} 00:21 Fri Jul 5

define shading, especially on tail ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 03:16, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Splook ^{sweet  creature} 19:13 Fri Jul 5

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:51, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Featherpelt (K) ~ For Approval

Tinystream (talk) 04:25, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

She should have more stripes on her haunch and shoulder (here on her apprentice File:Featherpelt.apprentice.png, see what I mean?) The stripes also appear softer on her other images. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:28, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hawkheart (W) ~ CBA

morally gray kitties are my favorites - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:49,7/5/2019

u want my file *log bm sticker Burntclaw 05:59, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

nah it's good *mini pekka emote - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:55,7/5/2019

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:51, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (W) - CBA

~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 06:50, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:51, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (K) - CBA

~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 06:50, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:52, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (K) ~ For Approval

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 12:59,7/5/2019

I think this needs texture since the other images have it? Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:30, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I did not see that - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:14,7/6/2019

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:52, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you define the shading some, and I think the texture should be a tad softer. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:50, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:12,7/7/2019

Lulu (K) ~ For Approval

gorgeous ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 13:12, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:15,7/6/2019

can you add the fur highlights? scribble in between the stripes with a 30% opacity white brush in places where there would be light. also, the stripes have shading as well– just outline the left edge of the stripe with a darker ginger Burntclaw 03:25, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Jessy (K) ~ For Approval

round ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 15:28, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the light a bit on the tail? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:53, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 17:17, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think the light on the tail could be defined a bit more. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:51, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Dappletail (E) - CBA

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 17:36, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:52, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Birchfall (K) ~ CBA

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:49, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 12:41, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Dustpelt (K) ~ CBA

*screams* Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:49, July 5, 2019 (UTC)\

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 12:41, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Grassheart (W) ~ CBA

—Hrafnsmál ^{The raven's call} 18:52, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:22, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Night (ES) (Ki) ~ CBA

File:Night (ES).kit.png david ^🌈 21:37, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:23, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Tiny Branch (K Alt 2) ~ CBA

Last OA claim. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:20, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

That's not the kit, that's the second alt unless I'm missing something here? Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:27, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah it's supposed to be the second alt; it's been a long day Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:30, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

It's fine, everyone makes mistakes! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:46, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 12:42, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reedclaw (Ki) ~ CBA

david ^🌈 23:24, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:23, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Featherstorm (W) ~ For Approval

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:15,7/6/2019

The bottoms of the paws should be cream, unless it's covered by the shading. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:51, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:54,7/7/2019

Hollyflower (W) - For Approval

Burntclaw 04:32, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth/smudge where the white ends on the tail (the white tip part); it seems a little hard-edge and abrupt on the top portion here. There's waste underneath the tail, and looking at the other images, I think the white on the front legs could be extended some downward. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:55, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reup Burntclaw 04:00, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Halftail (Alt. W) - CBA

i know his old warrior had patchy fur, but was he ever cited to have it as a warrior with his tail injury? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (06:27, 06/7/2019)

According to his page, the cite is from when he was an elder. It doesn't say anything about him having it prior to his retirement, only that he has it. This and the regular warrior don't need it. —Jayce(16:47, 7/06/2019)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 12:43, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Harestar (W) - For Approval

tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 23:46, July 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The brown patches could be smudged a bit more. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:56, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Heavystep (W) - For Approval

tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 23:46, July 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Jayclaw (W) - For Approval

tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 23:46, July 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Fish Leap (Ki) - For Approval

This was not complicated at all. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 00:27, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Jake (Ki) - For Approval

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 00:27, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Creekfeather (K) - For Approval

Burntclaw 03:37, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be a tad darker, and the texture a bit sharper. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:58, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reup Burntclaw 04:04, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Slatefur (W) - For Approval

—Hrafnsmál ^{The raven's call} 04:18, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the < front leg and the back don't seem to merge into one another. Windsong^{Run with the wind... ❀} 15:18, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hawkfur (W) - For Approval

—Hrafnsmál ^{The raven's call} 04:18, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Jumpfoot (W) - For Approval

— max ^{it is the real thing,} (08:39, 07/7/2019)

Graypool (K) - For Approval

— max ^{it is the real thing,} (08:39, 07/7/2019)

Alderheart (Ki) - For Approval

—Ivy ☆ 15:20, July 7, 2019 (UTC)