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sorry, but is there any way you could make the shading less scribbly? the shading style clashes pretty strongly with the non-textured pattern of the image. its particularly noticeable on the haunch. {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 02:24, August 5, 2019 (UTC)
 
sorry, but is there any way you could make the shading less scribbly? the shading style clashes pretty strongly with the non-textured pattern of the image. its particularly noticeable on the haunch. {{User:Jiang15/Signature}} 02:24, August 5, 2019 (UTC)
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'''Reuploaded''' i mean, it's textured shading.. it's going to look a little like scribbles.. because its legit just lines at different types of opacities. i made another blurred shading layer to help it, but i don't know what else i can do without it being textured shading. {{User:~ Aritarius ~/Sig}} 03:39, August 6, 2019 (UTC)
   
 
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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval

Jose1106.blank Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. Greenflower Neon Lights 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! tyb 🌌  owo??? 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? ScarletwindGo Beyond Plus Ultra!! 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye Burntclaw 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:20, 7/09/2019

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop max ディオ (00:00, 11/7/2019)

Reuploaded - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? — paper · finches 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head Snowdapple 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though? max ディオ (21:55, 19/7/2019)

Reuploaded - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer. max ディオ (07:11, 24/7/2019)

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:56, 7/24/2019

I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. --Greenflower Neon Lights 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oof sorry been super busy lately. Im not sure I have to fix the crop now? If this is approved can i do it then? - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 19:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

These are lovely and I can't see anything to comment on, so CBA? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 23:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but i feel like the blank looks slightly too crowded in general. notably the face (might help if you remove some of the lines on the ears ig?), and how does the blank look with those three lines removed on the cat's back leg? also, i feel like the tail still looks too straight–feel like a cats tail would naturally be more bent in such a position. Burntclaw 04:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

also, i feel like the linearart thickness is pretty uneven on the shorthaired blank– it's extremely thick on the cat's back and on the leg in which the paw pads are exposed but thin in other places. Burntclaw 04:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded The tail is based of something like this https://www.omlet.co.uk/images/cache/1024/604/Cat-Chartreux-a_plush_coated_chartreux_cat_lying_down.jpg]] with the tail being straight and just the tip being curled. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 18:39, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

That, to me, still shows it curving a bit more than what you've currently got here. I'd also maybe suggest shortening the leg with the visible toe beans? Not sure if you'd see that much leg from this angle, especially when you look at the blank without a tail. max ディオ (05:08, 05/8/2019)

I honestly think the tail looks fine. A cats tail is always flat to the ground Snowdapple 23:44, 8/05/2019

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation

Meadowslip.warrior it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it.  —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! Greenflower Neon Lights 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. Greenflower Neon Lights 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. Greenflower Neon Lights 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? Greenflower Neon Lights 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. is this better? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? Greenflower Neon Lights 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. top left corner. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. Greenflower Neon Lights 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

mhm. okay. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. is this better? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). Greenflower Neon Lights 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good! max ディオ (07:00, 24/7/2019)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ) 

Add some shading to the other ear, define the shading depth, add more shading along the haunch, and remove the waste that's floating around her (ears, paws, tail is where the waste is). Define the light on >>> this side of the tail too. Greenflower Neon Lights 22:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a head's up, you should be matching the original warrior, which the coloring should be from this version, as that was posted first. I only tweaked some eyelash issues. For some reason, the queen looks a little darker... Jayce  ( 07:48, 7/25/2019 )​​

Ferk tweaked the queen and since I think she darkened the base​ because she was the OA. Greenflower Neon Lights 12:16, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, this should match the original warrior, since that was first, not the queen. If anything, the queen should be tweaked to match the warrior. Jayce  ( 17:06, 7/25/2019 )​​

reuploaded. is this better, Jayce? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  17:38, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the tail seems to end abruptly, and there is a tiny bit of waste between the front and back paws. WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 18:00, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, too, overall. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail. Greenflower Neon Lights 20:24, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. question - if my image doesn't get approved within a month, will it get declined? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  01:02, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

After a month of it being on the approval page, the image will be declined, yes. Can you define the light on the tail, and just a tad bit on the front leg closest to us? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 23:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the shading could still be lightened overall Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 02:45, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the chest and legs. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<16:29, 7/27/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been">waving through 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass">a window <16:29, 7/27/2019>

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  23:08, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

The image still appears to be overblurred, try checking your layers for waste and removing it to reduce the blurryness. --Greenflower Neon Lights 23:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. meadowslip, have mercy on me.—Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ) 

Lighten/smooth the shading. --Greenflower Neon Lights 01:36, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  03:00, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out more. Here's a little tip: If you're constantly being told to smooth out the shading, smooth it out a lot more than you usually do. I learned this and it really helps, trust me. --Greenflower Neon Lights 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:47, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:59, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

The image has that overblurred look to it again. Try checking for waste to remove or see if the background is acting up. --Greenflower Neon Lights 20:02, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded—Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  21:56, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and add more shading depth in general to the image. --Greenflower Neon Lights 22:06, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  03:22, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Erase some of the shading on the tail to define the lightsource, and add some more facial shading? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  16:19, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I'm still not seeing much light on the tail. --Greenflower Neon Lights 16:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:26, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the other half of the tail. --Greenflower Neon Lights 19:28, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reupreuploaded.

You're not defining the light on the correct tail section. Define it on >>> this side, away from the bend. --Greenflower Neon Lights 20:25, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you redline it, please? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  20:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

When I can get the computer, I'll gladly make one for you. --Greenflower Neon Lights 21:46, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  21:45, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

[1] you go! Red is where there needs to be light, green is waste, and orange is where the shading needs to be defined. --Greenflower Neon Lights 21:53, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. thanks, potato. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  05:18, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Might you smooth out the tail shading and the shading on the visible back foot? Jayce  ( 18:46, 8/02/2019 )

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  18:59, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the back foot and tail, make sure you smooth it out when erasing. --Greenflower Neon Lights 16:51, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading on the -> ear? the earpink is a little hard to see Splook sweet  creature 06:15 Mon Aug 5

Leafpool (K) ~ For Approval

Leafpool.kit Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body should be thinner (you may have to add more after that), and the tips of the ears should be dark brown, too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:42, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't really be texture, just smudge lines from the stripes. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:49,7/24/2019

Reuploaded I might've did a thing Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 20:43, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are less curvy on her other images - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:05,7/27/2019

The stripes also appear to be less soft and slightly sharper on the other images. --Greenflower Neon Lights 18:59, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Yes? No? Maybe? Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 02:27, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes more. --Greenflower Neon Lights 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Attempts were made Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 15:02, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes appear not as dark on the other images and they have this sketchiness to them...try running a small pencil tool on low opacity with the base color over the stripes and see how that works. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:15, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes also look slightly overblurred - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:06,7/31/2019

Reuploaded y'know I was so confident when I uploaded this the first time... Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

For a lack of better phrasing, the stripes on the other images seem less broken up. The dorsal stripe also seems to be thinner. Also, the stripes still seem overblurred - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:24,7/31/2019

Reuploaded y'all are killing me Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 16:51, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Hey nice job on this, you're doing great^^ it might be my eyes, but the stripes seem a bit dark compared to her other images? And a little less blurred and more tapered at the ends. —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 23:22, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

On her other images, the stripes seem to connect with the dorsal stripe more often. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:21,8/1/2019

Reuploaded ok I fixed some of it but Patch I couldn't tell if you meant mine was too blurred or the others were blurred more.... I figured I'd end up having to upload this again anyway so Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 03:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

These ones looked a bit too blurred, more so on the face and tail (unless it's just my eyes?) I think the problem will be solved if you smudge them a bit, like how it looks on the MCA. The stripes on here still need to be lightened, and looking at the MCA which is on the same side, it looks like the stripe placement doesn't quite match up to what you've got on here. —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 14:33, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

I originally matched the mca and then vec said the stripes were too thick even though that's what the mca had :/ Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 23:44, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the stripes. Tried a different technique with them than I usually do. Not entirely sure how it came out Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 02:33, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Gorsetail (TNP) (W) ~ For Approval

Gorsetail (TNP).warrior I think the shading needs to be smoothed some :/ also not sure how the tint came out Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 03:22, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Yes the shading is very blotchy. Could you expand it some on the haunch? That should help. And maybe de-saturate the tint a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading from the haunch is leaking onto the leg, and the shading is leaking on the back paw farthest from us. --Greenflower Neon Lights 15:15, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading entirely Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Don't forget your sig! Smooth out the shading overall. --Greenflower Neon Lights 17:05, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded idk what you're talking about I totally put my sig in last time Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the shading on the top haunch curve downward more? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 23:18, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ?? Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 03:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah that looks good. Can you smooth the shading on the back of the shoulder? smooth it on the top of the haunch too. —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 14:36, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried and it was way harder than it should've been and there's not much of a difference zoomed out is there Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!  .  . 02:33, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Dark-colored ThunderClan kit (K) ~ For Evaluation

BP.kit-4Hopefully you guys like it? Im really not good at shading because there are no tutorials for Pixlr char art --Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:11, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Since this is from a manga, this needs to be in grayscale and needs a lighter muzzle. --Greenflower Neon Lights 23:13, July 30, 2019 (UTC) It is? What is grayscale? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:31, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Grayscale is the default manga color, so this must be defaulted to a darker gray. Could you also define the shading? --Greenflower Neon Lights 23:32, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

So a dark grey? With grey eyes? or can they stay green. And I can try shading but I dont know how to chade on Pixlr X which is what I need to use now... Thanks! Also Is there any other single colour blanks to do? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:37, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I would probably use a different program than Pixlr, such as GIMP or FireAlpaca, which are both free. Only the pelt would have to be in grayscale, the eyes and ear/nose pink can be any color you wish. You shade by getting a color, using the pencil tool to draw it on the pelt, lighten it, then blur/smudge it. --Greenflower Neon Lights 23:41, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I have a chromebook and am only allowed to use pixlr X... Im confused also by what you mean RIP... and ok! SO a dark grey pelt Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:43, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, so you have a color wheel, right. Well, click on any color you want, then get your paintbrush/pencil tool and paint it following a clear light source like this, and then blur/smudge it with the respective tools to get a nice, smooth gradient. --Greenflower Neon Lights 23:46, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I cant use the blur tool won't work? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:53, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Try setting the blur tool at 100% strength and check the hard-edged box and see if it works then. --Greenflower Neon Lights 23:55, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

It seemingly appears pixely and won't smooth out? Sorry if this is getting long... Should I delete MY messages? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, all messages must stay on the approval page until the image is archived. I'd say post for now, and wait for further instruction. please excuse my lack of knowledge --Greenflower Neon Lights 00:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Its cool, Thank you! I will try to do it as best as possible. Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

NOOOO I just finished but then my wifi went out before I had saved it 0.o Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:39, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better? I have a version with the pencil lines but it doesn't look very good. If you dont like it could you fix the blur as pixlr just wont? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:31, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Please do not thumb your images. I've also renamed this to File:BP.kit-4.png so please continue to reupload over there. I'd also like to reiterate what Potato said that it is probably best if you do not use Pixlr, as it does not have a good history with images in this project. There are other free art programs, such as GIMP and Firealpaca, that can make this process easier; plus there are several members of the project who are familiar with those programs.

The shading should be darkened a little more, and maybe smoothed out. Your light source looks very good. ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! I found a tool but it is a bit hard to use... would this next reupload be more along the right lines? Also whats Thumbing? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Thumbing is when the file name has a |left/right/thumb thing in the file name. To remove it, simply go into source editor and remove it from the name. --Greenflower Neon Lights 01:59, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded uhh ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Upload under the name Vec gave you. Smooth out the shading everywhere, and Remove the waste that's outside the lineart. --Greenflower Neon Lights 02:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think that might be the best I can do shading wise :( I did upload under BP.kit but i called it BP.kit-5? Hopefully, that was right... And can do! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:04, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, you need to upload over File:BP.kit-4.png. Simply click on the link, scroll down and click "Upload new version of file". Also, remove some of the shading on the tail and front limb; a similar light source that's easy to see is File:Dawnpelt.kit.alt.png. See how smooth the shading is and it's not covering all of the limbs? Try to match that. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the base quite a bit, since the description is dark-colored kit. --Greenflower Neon Lights 02:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! I'm back and ready for action! (I rage quitted yesterday because I had the PERFECT art but didn't save it and the Wifi went out Rip) Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 22:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Is this more along those lines? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:10, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

It's looking better, though I would recede the shading some, darken the earpink, and smooth out the shading on the tail. --Greenflower Neon Lights 01:13, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Please re-upload over File:BP.kit-4.png like you were told to do. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:24, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry I tried but it didn't work? I was gonna tell you but I forgot :( and ok Greenflower! Btw what do you mean recede the shading some? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:27, August 1, 2019 (UTC) Fixed! --Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:30, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

By recede, I mean remove. --Greenflower Neon Lights 01:40, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Un-thumbed, Moved to Bp.kit-4, and Re-upped! This a bit better? You guys are really picky about your charart rip me and my lil Pixlr editor Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:16, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Remember not to thumb your images. Darken the earpink a little bit. --Greenflower Neon Lights 03:41, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste by the haunch. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  05:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)


try #5b3c3c for a good earpink color! Splook sweet  creature 06:19 Mon Aug 5


Nettle (DotC) (W) - For Approval

Nettle (DotC).warrior I really love how the texture came out on this. --Greenflower Neon Lights 02:53, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

i like it too! she looks pretty cross eyed. Burntclaw 03:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! --Greenflower Neon Lights 03:12, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Right now it almost looks like there's none. —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 03:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Neon Lights 03:37, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the main body and maybe smooth out the shading there? It looks... off right now for lack of a better word. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 12:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Neon Lights 22:32, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the haunch shading, especially adding some near the bottom to add the curve, and expand/define the facial shading? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:13, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Neon Lights 00:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The texture seems more defined on the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:27, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Neon Lights 20:29, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The texture could still be sharper, almost like Lizardtail's warrior but a bit softer. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:50, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like dis? --Greenflower Neon Lights 02:06, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the back leg and shoulder shading more with the shape of the space? A bit like this sort of shape max ディオ (06:19, 03/8/2019)

Try using longer strokes with a small brush for the texture. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:31, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded the texture was a pain but it was worth it --Greenflower Neon Lights 18:49, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more texture maybe? WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 17:47, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now I'm liking this better. --Greenflower Neon Lights 17:53, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

I made some redlines yay! This is what I mean when I say "longer strokes"; drawing a line through most of the limb/body and only picking up to go back to the start. Sometimes I sway my brush a little bit to go over previous lines so the texture isn't that linear, and flowing with the shape of the body; rarely scribbling around randomly, if at all. This is what that looks like with 100% opacity; I kinda guessed at the color but it looks like the texture is lighter than the base imo. That's generally how I do texture.

For this style, the textured lines are very linear, almost sharp, so I tried again and got this. It doesn't curve as much, but it's good enough imo. Forgive how rough it is. And this is with full opacity. Again, colors I guessed. I hope this helps? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:27, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried... --Greenflower Neon Lights 21:48, August 4, 2019 (UTC)


this looks really good! could you recede the bottom tail shading slightly? Splook sweet  creature 06:20 Mon Aug 5

Reuploaded Thanks Splook! --Greenflower Neon Lights 22:14, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Mintkit (YS) (K) -CBA

File:Mintkit (YS).kit.png One of the most depressing kit deaths in the series. --Greenflower Neon Lights 22:08, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly re-arrange the eye here? I'm having a lot of issues seeing the coloring and it just looks like it's white-and-black. Jayce  ( 01:02, 8/02/2019 )​​​

Reuploaded --Greenflower Neon Lights 01:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the foreleg and head shading just a bit more? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:46, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Neon Lights 02:07, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading just a tad on the haunch? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 15:25, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Neon Lights 16:24, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 14:24, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt W) - CBA

Squirrelflight.warrior.alt and so, the stars have aligned, allowing me to revive. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 23:35, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's quite a bit of waste floating around her (mostly around the back and tail). --Greenflower Neon Lights 23:51, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any stripes over the white chest. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:58, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

no prob thas easy reups Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 00:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Same with Cricket, and she looks a little cross-eyed? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:50, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

reups have no clue if this is actually better or not Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 22:51, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:41, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Cricket (AFD) (Ki) - CBA

Cricket (AFD).kit im not sure i got the haunch stripes right (im gonna toy with them for a little bit still probably) but other than that i feel good about this Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 23:38, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little shading to the ear farthest from us? --Greenflower Neon Lights 23:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 00:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:49, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

reups mm Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 22:50, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:40, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Mousefang (K) - CBA

Mousefang.kit ok this. thats it. thats the response. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 04:07, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Do you want the file for her other images? I'm more than willing to send it your way. Jayce  ( 04:58, 8/02/2019 )​​​​

that would be so incredibly useful! email is meilinggesslerv2@gmail.com thakn you so much skye. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 05:12, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

She's on her way! You'll find that the shading and highlights aren't quite what they seem to be with this set. =P Jayce  ( 05:20, 8/02/2019 )​​​

re-up Thanks skye!!!❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 05:47, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes look darker here than her other images max ディオ (06:16, 03/8/2019)

re-up ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 15:40, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes still look too dark compared to the rest. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:06, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

re-up ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 23:55, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:39, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ CBA

Larkwing (BS).warrior ^

Cinna dear evan hansen, 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

i believe the shading could be smoothed out overall Burntclaw 04:35, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

same as the kit ^ max ディオ (06:17, 03/8/2019)

Reuploaded

Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the haunch? This is really good! WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 06:32, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded thank you! <3 – Cinna dear evan hansen, 22:55, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 14:21, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Mintfur (SkC) (W) ~ For Approval

Mintfur (SkC).warrior tabbies are 100x harder when its 2 in the morning – Cinna dear evan hansen, 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading Burntclaw 04:59, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedCinna dear evan hansen, 14:10, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Idk if it's just my eyes, but I think the other images have more stripes and they're more compact with each other. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:41, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedCinna dear evan hansen, 00:08, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:03, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but is there any way you could make the shading less scribbly? the shading style clashes pretty strongly with the non-textured pattern of the image. its particularly noticeable on the haunch. Burntclaw 02:24, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded i mean, it's textured shading.. it's going to look a little like scribbles.. because its legit just lines at different types of opacities. i made another blurred shading layer to help it, but i don't know what else i can do without it being textured shading. – Cinna dear evan hansen, 03:39, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Swiftflight (W) - CBA

Swiftflight.warrior Burntclaw 07:24, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste where the tail curls, and what's the light source? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  15:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

This looks more white, or even cream, than anything... if possible, could you darken the color just a smidge? Jayce  ( 17:52, 8/02/2019 )

reup <== Burntclaw 03:50, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

So it's really obvious on a black background, but there's waste. Also, I really hate to say this, but it's still looking really cream-ish. Jayce  ( 05:28, 8/03/2019 )

reup Burntclaw 06:32, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? I'm having a hard time seeing any. —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 21:52, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

reup Burntclaw 02:18, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 14:25, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Featherpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation

Featherpelt.kit —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  18:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred and need to be thinner. Define the eye depth and light on the foreleg. --Greenflower Neon Lights 18:57, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

She needs short fur. —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 18:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

oh shoot, sorry patch. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  20:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match to the apprentice's side in terms of the stripes. --Greenflower Neon Lights 20:55, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

There is also some waste in front of the head, by the back legs and around the butt. (Am I allowed to say that?) WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 16:18, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

you can call the bottom area the haunch. sorry for being inative. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  17:48, August 5, 2019 (UTC)  

Newtspeck (K) ~ CBA

Newtspeck.kit - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:36,8/3/2019

I think the ginger parts appear a tiny bit lighter in some areas on her other images? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 15:22, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded been waiting for someone to comment that - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:43,8/5/2019

CBA? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 14:26, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Minty (KP) (K) - CBA

Minty (KP).kit babie Splook sweet  creature 06:24 Sat Aug 3

smooth out the shading where the tail and the haunch meets, along withthe shading on al the paws❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 16:20, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded its hard to see the shading on the black so i hope i smoothed it out enough Splook sweet  creature 00:13 Sun Aug 4

Can you make the belly part that's sticking out underneath the tail black? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:04, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Splook sweet  creature 05:06 Mon Aug 5

CBA? —PatchfeatherFeral roots are calling me back home 14:27, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sparrow (cat) (W) ~ For Approval

Sparrow.warrior almost died twice this boi WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 16:45, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the face and chest, and perhaps curve it along with the chest a bit more as well? how is still alive --Greenflower Neon Lights 16:47, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 17:01, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the very top of the shoulder, and more depth to the stomach triangle and front leg closest to us? --Greenflower Neon Lights 17:04, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 17:45, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Remove some of the shading along <--- side of the leg, and add some to the top of the shoulder (the top curve of the leg; lineart near the neck). Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:59, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I also lightened the shading a tiny bit. I thought it was too dark. WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 12:19, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Littlecloud (K) ~ For Approval

Littlecloud.kit Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:59, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Mouse Ear (W) ~ For Approval

Mouse Ear.warrior Last time I struggled with making the ears small enough. I hope I did it right this time lol. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:59, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Needs a torn ear. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:13, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reups who tore his little ear? that's sad Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:40, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Antpelt (W) - For Approval

Antpelt.warrior I tried matching the scar placement to the DF as best as I could. --Greenflower Neon Lights 20:31, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the black on the ---> ear, as he's said to only have on black ear. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:04, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded lol whoops --Greenflower Neon Lights 21:48, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tiny bit. WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 12:20, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Neon Lights 22:14, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you taper the scars just a bit. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:38, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Greenflower Neon Lights 01:51, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) (Ki) - For Approval

Mist (Lo).kit Squidward tries to do something right™ Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 04:19, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. --Greenflower Neon Lights 04:40, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Mistlekit (TPB) (Ki) - For Approval

Mistlekit (TPB).kit There was... an attempt. Tried to colorpick from the old kit. Couldn't tell if there was texture or not, so if I need to remove it I'll do so. Pale chest is barely visible due to the angle and shading, but it's there. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 19:42, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think the eye are a more chocolate color, judging by the old kit. --Greenflower Neon Lights 19:47, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

If you're referring to the eye color, I colorpicked from the image and got the amber and orange colors. I just added some extra hues. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 19:48, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Littlestep (W) - For Approval

Littlestep.warrior I'll smooth the patches more in a bit, I just want to get this up. Been a while since I used SAI so I forgot how my smudge tool works. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 21:28, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 22:47, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think the patches should be smoothed and smudged a bit more. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:20, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 23:36, August 5, 2019 (UTC)


the starclan shows a little more white on this side, mainly around the stomach area Splook sweet  creature 03:22 Tue Aug 6

Morning Fire (Ki) - For Approval

Morning Fire.kit Babey. I think I saw faint texture so there's some of that, but I can remove it if it's not supposed to be there. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 21:28, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomheart (Ki) - For Approval

Blossomheart.kit – Ivy 23:10, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Mudclaw (WC) (K) - For Approval

Mudclaw (WC).kit Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 23:49, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Mallownose (K) - For Approval

Mallownose.kit Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 23:49, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Leafshade (K) - For Approval

Leafshade.kit Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 23:49, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Nightstar (W) ~ For Approval

Nightstar.warrior ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:57, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's a block of waste by the tail bend. --Greenflower Neon Lights 02:03, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

rise and grind gamers ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 02:07, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Leaftail (W) ~ For Approval

Leaftail.warrior ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:57, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Doesn't this have to match the patterning of the old warrior? --Greenflower Neon Lights 02:02, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

ive seen some chararts patterns completely changeby different OA users but if is has to, i dont mind changing it at all, just thought the old one look out of place ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 02:04, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

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