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'''reuploaded. ye. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 03:53, October 4, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | [[File:Jayclaw.kit.png]] Comments? [[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Moo]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 07:03, September 19, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Define the texture a bit. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 12:53, September 19, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | I also think the earpink should be duller to match. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 18:32, September 19, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Expand the shading on the haunch. --[[User:WarriorCatGirl37|<span style="font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-family:"Comic Sans MS";font-size:15px;"><span style="color:#D60270;">W</span><span style="color:#C71579;">i</span><span style="color:#B82883;">n</span><span style="color:#A93B8C;">d</span><span style="color:#9B4F96;">s</span><span style="color:#74499A;">o</span><span style="color:#4D439F;">n</span><span style="color:#263DA3;">g</span></span>]] [[User_talk:WarriorCatGirl37|<span style="font-weight:bold;font-family:"Comic Sans MS";font-size:10px;"><span style="color:#6337B0;">(talk)</span></span>]] 20:14, September 21, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | ''''''Bold text'''reuploaded --[[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Moo]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 02:21, September 22, 2019 (UTC)''' |
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| − | texture could still be defined, on my screen it looks nearly absent {{User:ThunderStar321/Sig}} 03:44, September 22, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Not sure if it’s just my current screen, but his eyes should be more of grey-blue, they’re looking a little purple at the moment {{Diablo./Sig2|11:31, 22/9/2019}} |
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| − | Reuploaded --[[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Moo]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 07:26, September 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | The texture could still be darker, and the earpink and eyes are still a bit too neon I believe. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 14:32, September 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | To me the earpink and eyes look very similar to the warrior? But texture can be fixed --[[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Moo]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 23:12, September 23, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | '''Reuploaded''' --[[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Moo]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 03:39, September 24, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | The eye color on the warrior looks more like a bluish gray than the blue on here. I think the base on the warrior also appears to be a few shades lighter. {{User:Patchfeather14/Sig2}} 14:29, September 24, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Who owns the file? Do you know? I think some hex codes would be fab --[[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Moo]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 00:28, September 27, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | Recede the facial shading to curve the shape of the face; reaches too far outwards. Also, Tybaxel should have the warrior's file still {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|16:21, 9/27/2019}} |
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| − | I'm still working I'm just waiting for a file :) --[[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Moo]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 01:37, September 30, 2019 (UTC) |
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| − | <s>I think [[User:Tybaxel|Tybaxel]] has the file? You should ask her. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 02:36, October 2, 2019 (UTC)</s> |
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| − | I did some picking; maybe try #646f7b for the eyes, #666667 for the fur, and maybe use a blue-black for shading, like #222223? Might help match until you get ahold of the files, {{Diablo./Sig2|01:08, 03/10/2019}} |
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| − | Alright, as per the rules, this needs to be declined. While I know you were waiting for a file, you were still able to work on this image and colorpick in the meantime. Max also gave you colors, but you still haven't uploaded it. The rules do state "one week without uploads", and you've had that ''plus'' a couple extra days. I'm extremely sorry, but I do need to enforce the guidelines set by PCA. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|02:57, 10/05/2019}} |
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| − | Dangit I was just coming to Reupload now. Oh well, The Rules must be Reinforced. --[[User:Milliemoo92 Sso|Moo]] ([[User talk:Milliemoo92 Sso|talk]]) 03:11, October 5, 2019 (UTC) |
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==[[Stormcloud]] (Ki) - For Approval== |
==[[Stormcloud]] (Ki) - For Approval== |
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Leaf (SqH) (Ki) - For Approval
File:Leaf (SqH).kit.png ~Ripple ☆ 00:44, September 19, 2019 (UTC)
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another Himalayan, I see Lighten the shading, smooth it out as well, and blur/smudge the pale parts. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:46, September 19, 2019 (UTC)
^ adding to potato's comment; smudging them would probably work better to work with the flow of fur on the blank — max it is the real thing, (06:34, 19/9/2019)
sorry potato. reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 15:22, September 19, 2019 (UTC)
I haven't seen Himalayans with lighter parts before... if you're going to make the image match their parent's, wouldn't it make sense for the darker parts to be the points, and the lighter parts the base? —Jayce(15:32, 9/19/2019)
Oh. Alright. I made the parts lighter because I didn't want it to seem as if I copied Potato's design. ~Ripple ☆ 15:35, September 19, 2019 (UTC)
Just like to let you know you can do something similar to my design for Squirrel, just maybe do a darker gray and make the hue different than what I have. =D --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 00:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
Smudge the pale parts and lighten them some, since I can't see the shading at all in those places. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:29, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
Damn. Has this been approved? I wanted to put up a Leaf image. I spent ages... -Wavetail (talk) 07:55, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
it hasn't been approved yet, but this is only for critiques of the image. that said, can you lighten up the points some, they look black right now. david 🌈 07:57, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
Am I allowed to do that? How...? Also, I put up my own. Should I remove it? Wavetail (talk) 08:10, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
When I tried to smudge, the darker parts got white... the smudge tool hates me. Sorry for being such an unstable person. reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 09:05, September 21, 2019 (UTC)
Lighten the shading and expand it on the face. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 12:09, September 21, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 17:50, September 21, 2019 (UTC)
Remove some shading on the foreleg (should only encompass half of the limb like the tail) and same thing with the ear closest to us. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 15:37, September 22, 2019 (UTC)
Add some more depth to the ear shading? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 15:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)
likewise red is waste, and blue is where you should remove shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:45, September 26, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 17:06, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the earpink a bit more —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:45, 9/30/2019
shading is also leaking away from the lineart above the tail — max it is the real thing, (23:36, 02/10/2019)
Still working? —Jayce(17:46, 10/03/2019)
reuploaded. ye. ~Ripple ☆ 03:53, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Stormcloud (Ki) - For Approval
First art... Any tips? --Wavetail (talk) 00:57, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
You have to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png —Jayce(00:59, 9/27/2019)
The stripes on the tail are too overblurred, and there needs to be at least one more to match his images. Also define the shading. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:02, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
How to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png? Also, ok. Will work on it --Wavetail (talk) 01:04, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
Rename the image in your program and upload over the link Jayce gave you. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:07, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
My art program doesn’t let me name drawings --Wavetail (talk) 01:08, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
What art program are you using? Most people here use gimp I believe
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 01:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
An iPad program as I do not have a computer and are not allowed paid apps --Wavetail (talk) 01:12, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
You can reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png by going to the page, going to "file history" and clicking "upload a new version of this file". Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
Maybe it’s just me, but all Stormcloud images I see have only three stripes. --Wavetail (talk) 23:52, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Wavetail (talk) 00:38, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Don't thumb your images! Just a small reminder. That means keep the |left out of your image code. Smooth the shading ✧Winter✧ 00:42, 9/28/2019
Reuploaded Smoothed the shading and put a little more on the eye. Hopefully it doesn’t look like the shading is absent --Wavetail (talk) 00:53, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Could you darken the shading over all? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Tell me if it’s too dark, I will change it --Wavetail (talk) 04:12, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Make it a little bit more dark, and smooth the shading on the haunch. Windsong (talk) 09:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Darken the earpink color and darken the stripes a tad. ~Ripple ☆ 17:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Welp I tried --Wavetail (talk) 00:40, September 29, 2019 (UTC)
Smudge the stripes on the body (not the tail). His images show they are just as smudged as the tail stripes. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:42, September 29, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded This is gonna take a while --Wavetail (talk) 00:58, September 29, 2019 (UTC)
Someone pls give me something to improve on I’m DYING without anything to work on --Wavetail (talk) 00:11, September 30, 2019 (UTC)
From what I've seen, you can ask for comments after 3-5 days have passed. As for the image, I think the stripe color is still too light and the tail stripes should be slightly thicker to cover more of the tail. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:13, September 30, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Hope this is better Potato --Wavetail (talk) 01:27, September 30, 2019 (UTC)
Hiiii Wavetail!! I love the stripes! Can you smudge the earpink? Crystie Can't help loving me 14:24, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded I think I over smudged it :P --Wavetail (talk) 23:37, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
Actually, I think the earpink could be smudged more. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:40, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
If it isn't already, add the earpink layer under the shading possible? At the moment it looks very flat compared to the area around it which is covered in shading — max it is the real thing, (23:45, 02/10/2019)
Could you darken the shading tint? it kinda blends a bit with the stripes at the moment. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:13, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
Define the eye depth a tad? - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 01:36, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Smudge the earpink as in shading or earpink and fur? --Wavetail (talk) 01:39, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
Smokepaw (TNP) (K) - CBA
--Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:34, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
belly should probably have shading, and the hind foot would probably be covered by the tail/haunch too. david 🌈 19:16, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:25, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Can you smooth the haunch shading a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:03, September 30, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:16, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
add a little bit of shading to << side of the shoulder in this area — max it is the real thing, (23:44, 02/10/2019)
Reuploaded --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:56, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:10, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Smokehaze (W) - CBA
oh look i'm alive ♥ Star red and black ♥<18:32, 9/30/2019>
theres a little corner of waste by the tail on << that side - and maybe also add a little more shading to the stomach area? — max it is the real thing, (21:20, 30/9/2019)
Waste is also snagged between the back paws. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:35, September 30, 2019 (UTC)
darken the overall shading a little bit —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:51, 10/02/2019
still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:33, 10/04/2019
re-up purr-haps ♥ Star red and black ♥<18:46, 10/04/2019>
CBA? —Jayce(02:54, 10/05/2019)
Brackenfur (Alt. W 2) - For Approval
Here is your proof Potato can do tabbies that are not pointed. Very proud of this one. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:59, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
Could you possibly match him more to his manga appearance? — max it is the real thing, (06:20, 01/10/2019)
Reuploaded I think this matches- added a white tail-tip, more white to the back paw, more stripes on the forehead, and thinned the stripes to match the tabby style. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:57, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
I think there should be less stripes to match. I'd also, if you're amendable, recommend the eye color be made to match the main set (at least for the most part) —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:09, 10/02/2019
Reuploaded This better? --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:42, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
Getting so. If one lets go of the past warrior, simply look at what you'd do if making it for the manga rn, and adjust the stripes. Notably, the base on the manga is lighter, the stripes thicker, the haunch one goes to a point and not all the way across, they are more sketchy and not simply drawn, and there are stripes directly next to where the white is on each leg and the tail. Is what I'm noticing so far, do attempt to notice whatever else —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:51, 10/02/2019
Reuploaded will add face stripes momentarily --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:49, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Wow this actually matches in terms of sketch and thin --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:52, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
Extend the haunch one a little further - make it longer, that is, and smooth the haunch shading. Definitely got what i meant otherwise, thanks —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:05, 10/03/2019
Reuploaded Thanks Spooky! --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:11, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Smallstar (K) ~ CBA
matched placement to star, old leader, and kit —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:32, 10/02/2019
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:04, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Boulder (Alt W) - For Approval
In my defense, this side was not ever done, so artist's choice there. I matched everything else to the corresponding side ✧Winter✧ 23:44, 10/02/2019
Actually, this side was done and approved years ago, so there is at least a reference. Regardless, the stripes should be a bit less pointed and more rounded off, imo. A different side doesn't mean we can completely disregard the other image. And maybe make the stripes a tiny bit softer, not too much though. —Jayce(01:44, 10/03/2019)
oof didnt see that bit, sigh.. alright ill have to redo it then ✧Winter✧ 01:51, 10/03/2019
Dustpelt (Alt.W) - CBA
might as well get this lad up before i forget — max it is the real thing, (23:46, 02/10/2019)
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:05, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Sunnypelt (K) ~ CBA
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:35, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:05, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Sedgecreek (K) ~ CBA
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:35, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:05, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Spider Paw (K) - CBA
--Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:08, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:08, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Rainswept Flower (K) ~ CBA
color picked from the rogue - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:47,10/3/2019
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:08, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Turtlecrawl (Ki) - For Approval
all colors directly from the actual layered file, Jayie sent it to me. No, the app doesn't really have texture that I can see, it's more a shading layer. I'm gonna go fiddle with the black layer to try and get it to match better. —Jayce(15:43, 10/03/2019)
Re-uploaded. Hm, slightly better. —Jayce(15:58, 10/03/2019)
Think the front paw closest to us and the hind paw closest to us should have the lighter ginger patches? The latter may be hidden by the shading idk. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:28, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
I'm confused... the front paw does have ginger. Please explain further? —Jayce(02:55, 10/05/2019)
Mintfur (SkC) (K) - CBA
I'm probably going to mess with the shading later. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:55, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 22:27, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:46, 10/04/2019
Red (SD) (K) - For Approval
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:00, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
Stick (W) ~ For Approval
Tinystream (talk) 18:57, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
There's two pixels of waste between the hind leg and the foreleg closest to us, and one stray pixel along the back (on the second back tuft from the top). Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:27, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Reup Tinystream (talk) 20:18, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Rainfur (TC) (W) ~ For Approval
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:25, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Sparrow (Sister) (K) ~ For Approval
—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:44, 10/04/2019