Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

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Wasptail (W) ~ For Evaluation

The stripes aren't the most matching and best I know, but I like it. I'll tweak them better after advice. Sandy ^{My Talk} 10:36, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Waste Sandy ^{My Talk} 10:39, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you add some shading depth! They're very pretty!! — ☆ paper · finches ★ 19:23, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Given your light source, flip the shading on the top of the tail to the bottom of the tail. And perhaps recede the shading on the chin and muzzle? The stripes should also be more jagged to match the apprentice. Whoops didnt see you already commented on that Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 20:07, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

The stripes should be thinner and sharper, more jagged like Egg said. Overall, I think what Thunder had originally matches better in terms of stripe style if you want to reference that ^^ Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:27, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Sandy ^{My Talk} 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you give the stripes a bit of a more "fuzzy" look to match the set? I think using a rough/fuzzy brush and continually smudging back and forth will help to achieve that. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:44, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

I don't seem to have the brush in my paint program. Maybe I could just smudge the stripes? (I use Medibang paint pro) Sandy ^{My Talk} 01:56, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

If you don't have a fuzzy brush, try smudging with a 1px brush back and forth. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:59, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up I hope they're fuzzier Sandy ^{My Talk} 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the face? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 21:26, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. It's looking good! Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 21:39, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Thanks! Sandy ^{My Talk} 23:32, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

https://vvcap.com/BU9i3RstJ here's a redline for shading that's leaking, to fix it, just use your paintbrush/pencil tool (whatever one you use) and fill it in so all the pixels are filled up to the line art. https://vvcap.com/DDz3migeT here's another reline where shading needs to be added/defined, i didn't redline the face, but could you define the shading depth there too? with the placement you're using, there shouldn't be shading on the back of the tail like you have it right now. you're doing a great job on this! —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 17:03, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Sandy ^{My Talk} 09:43, January 12, 2020 (UTC)

Add shading to the tail, because in the last update, it disappeared and add a little shading to the back leg closest to us. This looks very good. C: ~Ripple ☆ 03:54, January 13, 2020 (UTC)

I would darken the shading tint some - I am aware it is artist choice, usually, but when it is plopped next to the apprentice, it's a stark difference and throws off the set coherency imo. Just making it darker, with perhaps a touch more brown, should do.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 19:34, 1/13/2020

Maybe smooth the shading, too? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:45, January 13, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up I didn't really 'add a touch of' brown, because the shading was purple. Perhaps I should make it black/brown? Sandy ^{My Talk} 03:16, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

With your source, the shading on the top of the tail needs to be on the bottom. Smooth out the shading, and yes tint it black/brown. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:25, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Made the tint black. Sandy ^{My Talk} 09:53, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more, add light to the front paws and shading to the back paws, and there's some leaking shading on the haunch. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:52, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Sandy ^{My Talk} 00:07, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paws, I think you may have removed too much. Smooth out the shading, especially on the shoulder and haunch, and expand/define it on the face. Curve the back leg shading to the way it is positioned (example here) and do the same for <<< that ear. Also lighten the earpink, it is too dark and doesn't match the apprentice. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:12, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me, but could you add some depth to the face. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 20:56, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Sandy ^{My Talk} 01:38, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

The shading on the legs seems a tad overblurred, which still makes the shading hard to see in that area. Also, add more shading along the face (expand it) and to help, add some shading surrounding the muzzle. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:45, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

Define shading in the ear and the shading depth on --> side. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:52, 1/17/2020>_{way down hadestown} 01:52, 1/17/2020​_{way down hadestown} 01:52, 1/17/2020​

Re-up Sandy ^{My Talk} 23:20, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference. Add more shading to the legs and trace the muzzle with shading. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:34, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Sandy ^{My Talk} 04:40, January 18, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe add some more shading on ---> front paw and more on ---> side of the face and neck area? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:51, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Sandy ^{My Talk} 03:36, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Willowpelt (K) - For Approval

this is gross Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:17, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

Whereabouts is your light source coming from? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (07:35, 19/1/2020)

It is the source I've used on Rainwhisker, Hatchkit, Stormfur, and a few others. Should I change anything? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:32, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

I understand it’s a source you’ve used before, but, I can’t tell where it’s coming from. I can do up a redline to help if you could let me know where the lights coming from - I’m about to head to work so I’m not much use right now. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (21:42, 19/1/2020)

I think it's ^^^ (because the light is shining on the bottom)? Gah, I can't explain my own sources for the life of me. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:50, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

If it's going up, the back top tail, where it's being cut off by shading, should also be covered in shadow as well, or it looks like the lights are pointing from east to west. That could be a different light source, if you removed the shading on the back legs farthest from us. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 14:33, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:27, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

The shading on <--- ear looks a little blotchy. And I think with this lightsource, there'd be less shading on the face/cheek (where the head meets the neck; there'd still be shading on the neck area but here it seems to extend beyond that) and more shading on <--- side of the haunch. See this and this for what I mean if this helps ^^ Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:50, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, and also smooth out the shading on the shoulder. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:44, 1/22/2020>_{way down hadestown} 01:44, 1/22/2020​

Reuploaded As per usual, the shading still hates me. Well, most of it. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:56, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

White rogue (R) - For Approval

Lineart tweaks galore - twisted whiskers and messy fur. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:13, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

I have no idea if this is based off the image in Rise of Scourge or not, but the fur looks like drawn on stripes over actual messy fur. Could you perhaps change that around, and maybe tweak the lineart? I'm thinking like this, but it's subject to however you please.

—Hrafnsmál ^{The raven's call} 21:11, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:21, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

Would you perhaps like a redline? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 00:10, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Yes please! --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:21, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

https://vvcap.com/bITXuZlYZ Here's one over the image you're making, and one over just the blank so it's hopefully easier to make out https://vvcap.com/nNnESuIsJ The fur on your image now doesn't "pop" much with it only being on the inside of the image and looks a bit unnatural. The fur that you do have looks a little too uniform (particularly on the legs) and triangular in shape, in some spots? I can't think of another word to describe it. blagh I can't explain things correctly right now, very sorry. If you need me to elaborate on anything, feel free to shoot me a DM on discord^^ Hope the redline helps. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 17:38, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:44, 1/22/2020>_{way down hadestown} 01:44, 1/22/2020​_{way down hadestown} 01:44, 1/22/2020​_{way down hadestown} 01:44, 1/22/2020​_{way down hadestown} 01:44, 1/22/2020​

Reuploaded Ahh that helped a bit, thanks! I tried to define the shading depth on the tail, but it's a small space so it may be hard to tell. or should I say medium-sized space due to the fur? idk --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:57, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

There is a couple blanks pixels by the rump chest and tail-Glacier () 19:25, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Where? I don’t see them. The base is pure white (also the color of white pixels) so I’m finding it very hard to locate what you’re talking about. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:31, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Oh, I see them now. I’ll reup when I get home. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:46, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got them! --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:14, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

Light-colored rogue (Ro) - For Approval

~Ripple ☆ 19:02, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Expand the shading and define the lightsource on the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:38, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Specifically, add some shading on --> ear and maybe a few lines to define the shoulder and haunch curves, kinda like how Patch has it on the rogue above ^^ Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:52, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

reup. ~Ripple ☆ 01:15, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (K) For Evaluation

I color picked from the kit but used the warrior as a reference. I also probably have to fix the shading and everything because I did this at 1am when my brain doesn’t work---Glacier () 22:08, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Sharpen the texture a lot more. I'd recommend asking Finch for the warrior's file, I feel tht will help a bit. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:29, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Actually, the texture could almost stay as is considering the original kit was first in the set, followed by the apprentice (which also has a softer texture than the redone warrior). Maybe smudge the earpink a little more for now? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (22:46, 21/1/2020)

Reuploaded I already redid the texture, I softened the ear pink too---Glacier () 22:51, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture, I do believe you oversmudged it. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:52, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded texture---Glacier () 23:06, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looked a little to light so I darkened it---Glacier () 23:17, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:44, 1/22/2020>_{way down hadestown} 01:44, 1/22/2020​_{way down hadestown} 01:44, 1/22/2020​_{way down hadestown} 01:44, 1/22/2020​

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Reup---Glacier () 02:03, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

add shading to the chin. ~Ripple ☆ 03:26, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

I’m not sure how to do that---Glacier () 04:01, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Grab your paintbrush/pencil tool and trace over that area; then smudge/blur and you should have some lovely shading over there. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:04, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Reup is this what you meant?---Glacier () 04:52, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, but I can barely see it. Darken it? ~Ripple ☆ 15:38, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Reup--Glacier () 21:58, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:58, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture a little bit? Looking at the original kit, I feel like the texture lines should be a bit thicker than you have them as well. —Ivy ☆ 03:15, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Reup---Glacier () 15:20, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Alt A) - Withdrawn

File:Willowbreeze.apprentice.alt.png i think this counts? she's described as dark ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:43, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Was she called dark as an apprentice? There's only one cite for her being called dark that's on her page, and that's from when she was a kit (I just checked in Crookedstar's Promise) -- and I think there's already an image that goes along with the cite that just hasn't been redone yet. Don't we usually only make alternates for the rank the cat in was when the mistake happened (unless there's a pervasive inconsistency in the cat's description, as with Millie or Mapleshade)? I'm just a little confused. —Ivy ☆ 03:08, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

tbh I don't actually know what rank she was bc I don't have the book with me. I just extrapolated from the page numbers on her page for her rank citations, which pointed to apprentice. Anyone who actually have the book with them wanna check this? ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:08, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

The cite is when she was rescued from WindClan - Ivy is right, this needs the kit blank. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:20, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

mmkay withdrawn ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:22, January 23, 2020 (UTC)