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Re-Up! hope this is better?? {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 19:54, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
Re-Up! hope this is better?? {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 19:54, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
What I'm essentially trying to convey is [ this]; all of the red is where light would be hitting if a sun was sitting right above the cat - thus, anything within the red shouldn't be shaded. Green's where shading could be added, because it's hidden beneath the tail, and thus not getting light. Blue's a small bit of discolored lineart I noticed. I would also lighten the base the barest pinch; just to still be black but so the shading/lineart is more visible.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|20:02, 4/08/2020}}
==[[Bumblestripe]] (Lo) - For Approval==
==[[Bumblestripe]] (Lo) - For Approval==

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Ghost Blanks - For Approval

File:Ghost.tweak.png Didn't feel right putting "Tweaked" as the heading on this page. I did change a couple things that were bothering me before I uploaded them (such as the far front leg, the cheek fluff on the longhaired, and the back leg placement so that it actually lined up with the other paws). Comments? max 烈火國 (01:10, 02/4/2020)

reuploaded don't mind me max 烈火國 (01:12, 02/4/2020)

The backs look pretty stiff. Could you curven the spines a bit? Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 02:05, April 2, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded also fixed some other issues per feedback max 烈火國 (02:26, 02/4/2020)

Maybe make the front legs a little thinner on the shorthair? WhiteStorm is back! 22:05, April 2, 2020 (UTC)

I hate saying it's fine; but this is pretty close to my original reference and I think the legs are fine as is - accounting for a generic cat build and not a "semi-foreign" one shown in the linked reference. max 烈火國 (22:11, 02/4/2020)

reuploaded having a fiddle don't mind me again max 烈火國 (22:40, 04/4/2020)

The front left paw looks like it’s facing us more than the right front paw. I’m not sure if this is intentional or not.--Glacier () 14:27, April 6, 2020 (UTC)

Matching with Max's original reference image, it would be intentional, imo. The link to that is above.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:35, 4/06/2020

^ It was intentional due to the perspective. The only thing that is facing forward is the cat's face and the chest slightly, but, to match the original ghost blanks, the front paws and such are facing away from us - also per the linked reference above as well. max 烈火國 (03:06, 07/4/2020)

Refugee blanks - For Approval

Patchfeather14.personal I'm going to fix some of the fur on the long hair once I'm on my computer, just posting them here now. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:08, April 6, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe give the paw pads more shape. Right now they just kind of look like circles with lines going through them, try to make them look more like individual shapes if that makes sense.---Glacier () 14:30, April 6, 2020 (UTC)

Gonna leave a wall instead of peppering comments here and there, sorry in advance. Would you mind making the short-haired's tail thinner? I also think the ears could stand to be made slightly smaller - some breeds have it that large, but in the interest of being a more generic cat design. Also, very broad stroke, I know, but I think the fur lines on the long-furred could stand to reach a little deeper, while they should be less deep* for lack of better word, on the short-furred. To create a bigger difference between them. Also gonna leave a few pixel removal (red)/addition (blue) suggestions here. Just the typical type stuff, smoothing and the like - take or leave, I just had time to make it.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:05, 4/06/2020

Olive (KP) - For Approval

Olive.kittypet hello. Jayce  ( 00:15, 4/07/2020 )

Could you define the facial/chin/neck shading and smooth the shading on the white part of the tailtip?spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:04, 4/07/2020

just a small thing that bugs me, i don't think the hind paw under the body would have any light, or at least a lot less. (oreo cat tho) david 🌈 13:14, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

Twigbranch (Lo) - For Approval

Twigbranch.loner 20 pieces of prey? Ouch. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 00:46, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Can you define overall shading depth, and perhaps smudge the earpink a little bit, so that its not a hard-edged line. max 烈火國 (01:26, 07/4/2020)

Reuploaded Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 01:28, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

So, I can see that you did define the depth, but, I think the overall shading could be smoothed out, especially the area above the back leg - which also wouldn't reach that high with your current source. Try this redline for shading; the lighter red is what I'd recommend as your first layer of shading, and the darker red is where the depth is mainly required. Once that is properly smoothed out, so that it doesn't look hard-edged, which I think is what's throwing me at the moment, the depth might actually be fine at the moment. I'm also not really seeing a difference with the earpink either? max 烈火國 (01:35, 07/4/2020)

Reuploaded Is that better, Max? --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 01:53, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading? I'm having issues seeing it.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:55, 4/07/2020

Reuploaded Also tweaked up her torn ear a bit. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 23:49, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

I would say do even more so, for darkening - if you put it next to the other images, it looks quite flat in comparison with the set.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:23, 4/08/2020

Reuploaded Ooofffff this shading. Is that good? --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 01:37, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

When I said darker, I do mean darker. And still, darker. I'm looking at it this way; if you overshoot, that's fine, but bumping it up little by little really isn't helping in terms of my repeating comments reflecting it. The bum and the neck probably about 5% opacity more, while the rest of it's gonna be in the 10-13% ballpark.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:42, 4/08/2020

Reuploaded Do you want it darker or is this good? --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 02:33, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

That should be fine. Can you add shading depth for these two spots on the belly, and add some shading for the neck triangle?spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 03:54, 4/08/2020

Reuploaded Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 04:10, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

Shading is leaking from the belly onto the back leg <—- max 烈火國 (06:34, 08/4/2020)

Needleclaw (W) - For Approval

Needleclaw.warrior tyb 🌌  owo??? 01:21, April 7, 2020 (UTC)Tybaxel

Her eye colour seems a little warmer and more yellow on the apprentice and kit than what you've currently got here. max 烈火國 (01:27, 07/4/2020)

reuploaded i was having a little trouble with the eye color bc it was dulled in the other sprites by the wiki tyb 🌌  owo??? 01:33, April 7, 2020 (UTC)Tybaxel

That's very fair; the hexcode I used for the kit is #C6902E and for the depth, I just added that on multiply, if that helps? max 烈火國 (01:37, 07/4/2020)

reuploaded thanks!! fixed tyb 🌌  owo??? 02:15, April 7, 2020 (UTC)Tybaxel

No worries! One last thing from me I promise; on the apprentice, there seems to be a little gap of white underneath the chin and the black chest. max 烈火國 (02:18, 07/4/2020)

Hmm, could you curve the haunch shading to contour with the body shape a little more? Just to make the haunch appear rounder, if you get what I mean. The shading also seems to be leaking away from the linear slightly at the elbow of the << front leg.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:41, 4/08/2020

Lionblaze (Lo) - CBA

Lionblaze.lonerPatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 01:50, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

bruh i love this boof, do u think u could connect the fluff to the back of the head a bit more? david 🌈 02:20, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 15:59, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:23, 4/08/2020

Stream (Ki) ~ CBA

Stream.kit for my stinkbreath of a cat; she should've been like 10 this year. david 🌈 13:05, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:23, 4/08/2020

Bug (Lo) ~ For Approval

Bug.loner I love bug so much ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 15:47, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Hmm, could you smooth the shading out? Seems a bit blotchy to me. Might be the light source. Given, if the light is also coming from the top as it looks like, there'd be less light on the legs, and the shading elsewhere on the body would contour more with the blank's body shape.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:26, 4/08/2020

Re-Up! I think it was the light source- hope this is better. ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 12:27, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

Hmm. Better for the legs. However, I do think that generally; there is too much shading on the body; it goes higher on the flank than it would need to with a from-above source, now, as with any part of the body (top of the tail, back of the neck, ears, curving into facial shape) that is at the top of the image, needing more light.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:44, 4/08/2020

Re-Up! hope this is better?? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 19:54, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

What I'm essentially trying to convey is this; all of the red is where light would be hitting if a sun was sitting right above the cat - thus, anything within the red shouldn't be shaded. Green's where shading could be added, because it's hidden beneath the tail, and thus not getting light. Blue's a small bit of discolored lineart I noticed. I would also lighten the base the barest pinch; just to still be black but so the shading/lineart is more visible.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:02, 4/08/2020

Bumblestripe (Lo) - For Approval

Bumblestripe.loner I still have a little to do but want to put it up before I go offline for several hours---Glacier (17:23, April 7, 2020 (UTC))

Renamed to File:Bumblestripe.loner.png with a lowercase L per naming conventions, please continue uploading under that.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:03, 4/07/2020

Sorry, I didn’t know it mattered.---Glacier ()​ 19:17, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

There’s a little bit of waste near the top right ear (our right). Could you also smooth out the shading on the two front legs? And there’s a fewwww pixels on the back (close to where the tail connects) where the stripe runs through that aren't as dark. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not. This is really good! 😀 ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 02:10, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

stripes could be smudged just a wee bit more. david 🌈 13:15, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

Alderheart (Lo) ~ For Approval

Alderheart.loner my bby boi ❄Star❄ show yourself, i'm ready to learn<17:46, 4/07/2020>

Smooth out the stripes a tiny bit. --Greenflower Heyvi Kabisa! 18:12, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Sorry, I know it's hard to do earpink on a ginger cat, but could you define it just a tiny bit? 😀 I'm struggling to see it on my screen. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 19:44, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

i think the stripes are a bit lighter on his others images. its 1am though so i could be wrong lol david 🌈 13:16, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

Lionblaze (D) ~ CBA

Lionblaze.deputy pain —Danny GVivaLaVida 21:32, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

the shading seems 2 be coming away from the lineart on the legs in a few places, just a few pixels. david 🌈 02:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded :angry: —Danny GVivaLaVida 02:37, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:45, 4/08/2020

Haze (Sister) - For Approval

Haze.sister It's nice to be back! Quarantine has me bored so I thought I'd try another image. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 22:02, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

I think the base should be lightened a little. With the darker texture on top - she doesn't look pale gray perse, overall and from color pick, more just a shade of medium gray on the lighter side.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:16, 4/07/2020

Reuploaded. ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 02:04, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

define the light on the legs a bit? david 🌈 13:12, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

Root (Lo) - For Approval

Root.loner I really like this guy. Took aspects from Tree and Sunrise Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 23:42, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Pretty. Would you mind darkening the shading the barest smidge, to help with the depth? spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:46, 4/08/2020

reup Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 19:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

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