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Queen Blanks ~ For Approval

File:ShortHairQueen2.png Righty-o. Here we go with the queen blanks. Comment away my friends. ^w^ ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 09:42 Tue May 28

I'm no expert on this but maybe square up the shape of this --> forepaw and define where the du-claw'd be. I can't really explain how, the but maybe slope the haunch a bit more, it looks kinda flat compared to the shoulders. Gorgeous work, Berry! ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:15, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps ---> this leg could be curved a tad? Raven ^{Chicks = Nikki} 22:50 Tue May 28

Maybe you could make both sides of the longhair's tail fluffy? The straight line looks a bit odd. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 01:18, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think you could define the top of the nearest shoulder a bit? Also you might disconnect the line on the same shoulder from the head. As is it looks a bit awkward. You also might define the joints a bit more on the other leg and even out the sizes of the ears. Though I doubt you'd need it, if you need a redline feel free to ask. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}2:06 Thu May 30 2013

Maybe the tail can be curved a tad more --- no cat's tail is that straight when they walk.☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 23:22, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, Breezy I wouldn't say no to a redline. xD ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 06:18 Fri May 31

Re-uploaded meh I did some stuff on the shorthair - decided I'll work on the longhairs later. [1] ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 12:45 Fri May 31

Maybe slant the toe line on her left front paw the other way, or make it straight up and down? And maybe make a small line over the base of her tail where it joins with her haunch on our left; just to show a little more depth. These are really stunning... ➤Knight ^{Chasing after} _{gold mines} 00:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Enlarge the hind paw a bit more and maybe define the "ankle" of the leg that's just behind the lifted forepaw ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 01:24, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

How about these? Ignore the face, though. Yours is fine. Except for maybe the sizes of your ears, which should be more even. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}15:48 Mon Jun 3 2013

Re-uploaded officially naming these blanks Hannibal because they look like they want to eat you. ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 08:17 Fri Jun 7

Umm... what happened to these? They look ~~odd.~~different.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 10:26, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps thin and even out the tail lineart a little. Raven ^{Chicks = Nikki} 10:33 Sat Jun 8

Re-uploaded. Sorrrel, I was given a redline by Breezy to fix up some anatomy issues. .-. Please do not call my blanks odd, and don't comment unless you're offering critique. ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 10:45 Sat Jun 8

I'm sorry, Berry. I was just surprised by how different they looked.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 12:02, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Don't know if this'll make any sense, but can you make the curve around our front right paw more noticeable? -Duck sauce 13:20, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

The hind thigh looks lumpy. Maybe smooth it out a bit more? The tail seems bigger than the body. Also, define the front right paw (the one that is not on the ground). ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 15:03, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

I'm very confused; when you go to the file for this is shows that it looks more like the original version; here it looks like the redline Breezey gave you. Is the wiki playing up? Just asking.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 01:39, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe shorten the whiskers by a few pixels, make the tail a bit thinner and maybe shrink her front paws and her right (her right) back paw a just a little. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:28, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

The bottom of the tail on <--- this side looks like it has an extra line on it, the front part of the belly (or chest?) doesn't look like it connects to the belly smoothly, and the shape of the paws look...off? to me. I don't really know how to explain it, but something about the digits on the paws seem to be throwing me off. Iveh Yo ! 00:49, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

Still working, Berry? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 18:28, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yes- sorry for the lack of re-uploads, I've not had access to a computer. The line on the tail, Ivy, is a bit of fur and I'll keep it unless someone else says otherwise. and the Hannibal eyes stay eheheheh ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 07:35 Fri Jun 14

Possibly smoothen the lineart on the back? (there's like a little place where it rises :P) Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 12:21, June 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 04:08 Sat Jun 15

Smooth out the hind food and make the actual part that touches the ground smaller and less bulbous. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}4:14 Sat Jun 15 2013

Re-uploaded ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 04:17 Sat Jun 15

Thin the tail more. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 10:22, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I'd like to keep the tail as it is unless someone else agrees. ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 14:33 Sat Jun 15

Can you make the legs and paws a bit thinner too? ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 15:40, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 16:18, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Can you taper the end of the tail a bit more at the tip and the lifted paw looks a little too splayed ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 00:28, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel. If you think about a real cat, the tail gets thinner at the tip. It does not look that way now - and these are the short-hair blanks after all. I do not want to sound rude. Please don't shoot me! ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 02:26, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Shorten whiskers by a few pixels? ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 18:44, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the hind paw just a tad and thin out the tail like Hawk and Sorrel said? Other than that, these are honestly fine. Thistleflight (talk) 22:51, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

Could you please remove the dots above the head? It's a style thing and doesn't go with the style of any of the blanks we have. And yes, I agree the tail need to be thinned out a ton. It's almost thicker than the legs right now. Make the dew claw stick out less on the front paw, and make the back paw a more defined shape rather than a really smooth kinda soft line that makes it look too round and blobby. Shrink the paws quite a bit too, they're much too big for a cat in comparison to the leg size. Clean up the whisker lineart so it's a bit smoother, and maybe vary the lengths of the whiskers. Lastly, the chest is in front of the legs, so at this angle, the line for the chest should go over the far front leg, rather than the line that shows the leg connecting with the body being in front. Honestly, I thought it was mostly fine before and only needed a few minor tweaks, but... :/ Paleh Send help 23:22,6/18/2013

Re-uploaded I tried a thing with the front paw but I can change it back if needed. I had issues with the hind paw...a lot of issues. e.e ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 10:39 Wed Jun 19

Her front paw that's on the ground is bigger then the others. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:29, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Her back right paw looks as if it is pointing outward, could you possibly make it so it looks like we're looking at it straight on? Those paws look great already, but if you need a little reference, I found this [2]. Also, on the base of her tail, there's just a little stray line there. And last, could you make that line on the back of her foreleg on her shoulder (one that is lifting up the paw off the ground) straight instead of curving in? ➤Knight ^{Chasing after} _{gold mines} 19:30 Thu Jun 20

The front left leg could be curved a tad more. Also, the lifted front paw should be curved more as well. Also, I find that the queen looks a little scrawny. I hate to sound rude, but honestly, I liked it better the way you had it before, but... x-x ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 00:35, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

There's some pixels on the part where the (our left) part of her tail meets her body, and they look a bit odd. Like Hawk and Paleh, I preferred the version before, but this is good all the same. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 01:45, June 23, 2013 (UTC)

Er, yeah, like Sorrel and Hawk, I liked the ones you made before (your first ones better, I don't want to sound rude). Maybe upload it back and just curve the front paw justa scinch.Thistleflight (talk) 21:57, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Okay guys I can see you're all hinting at it, but do you want me to just go ahead and bring back the ones I had before and change what's been told? sighs because I much prefer these but I guess majority rules ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 06:44 Tue Jun 25 06:44, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Uh, yes, you really should put the original blanks back. Maybe with a few minor adjustments, though. Thistleflight (talk) 22:34, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Well I think it'd be easier on your side with what changes will need to be made to fit style and anatomy with the old blanks. Of course they'd still need a couple tweaks, but I think it'd be easier overall for you. These are still good though, and it's ultimately up to you I believe. Paleh Send help 22:43,6/25/2013

Reverting back to the "original" blanks may be a bit more drastic than need be, especially since you'd basically loose all that progress of getting some aspects of the anatomy, as it is currently, looking well done. Maybe overlay the original and the current version and figure out any extremities that might need fixing with reference from Raelic's redline like the forepaws and the tilt to the back paws. Good job, Berry. Atelda _{_{insert vague subtext here}} 22:55, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

I think you should change back. I'm sure other users would be *Dives behind brick wall* okay with the decision. It matches the other linearts much better and, like Paleh said, would only need a few more tweaks. Great job on everything Berry! ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 23:18, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

I do believe Berry gets the point of multiple users preferring her original blanks. I ask that if you're going to comment on the blanks, please comment on what she has uploaded, as the message of a majority of users wanting the other blanks back has very easily been proven. Seriously guys, enough already; she gets the point. —Jayce(23:28, 6/25/2013)

Agreeing with what Cloudy said above; these are the blanks that she has uploaded. Berry prefers these blanks and these are hers to work with and manage. We've already put a lot of effort on these blanks to make them the way they are now, and it seems almost like a waste of that effort to go right back. Both blank styles are beautiful, but like Cloudy said, these are the ones uploaded, and the ones we should be sticking with. I like these ones we have now, but right now isn't the place for opinions, I believe. ➤Knight ^{Chasing after} _{gold mines} 03:06 Mon Jul 1

I'm actually having a lot of trouble with the anatomy on these blanks, combining the older with the newer ones and stuff. If anyone could offer up a redline, it would be hugely appreciated. ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 11:06 Wed Jul 3

Here. I tried, seriously. It may not be that amazing but I tried. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 16:58, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reena (Ro) ~ CBA

File:Reena.rogue.pngMy kitty <333 Comments? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:35, 02, 07, 2013

This is lovely! Maybe blur where the white meets the orange (not sure what to call that color) on the front leg closest to us? Sha dew ing! 15:39, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded Thank you 8DDD ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 16:35, 02, 07, 2013

Blur the stomach shading a wee bit? She's prettyyyyy david ^🌈 23:36, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Trolly 8D ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:50, 03, 07, 2013

CB? 8D Rain legs 04:10, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Woollytail (Star) ~ CBA

Hello friends david ^🌈 00:48, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading juuuuust a tad? Maybe darken it too, if you want? —Jayce(02:26, 7/2/2013)

Re-uploaded. I also added highlights things we'll see how this goes david ^🌈 02:54, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again cause I didn't like the texture how it was david ^🌈 09:08, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

His naaaaame. ouo CBA? —Jayce(00:26, 7/3/2013)

Sandgorse (Star) ~ CBA

;___; Comments?—Jayce(00:49, 7/2/2013)

Sexy Cloudy 8DDD Define the chest shading a bit? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:34, 02, 07, 2013

Re-uploaded. Thank you ouo —Jayce(02:40, 7/2/2013)

I think he needs patches. david ^🌈 09:10, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. ;_; —Jayce(15:26, 7/2/2013)

CBA? david ^🌈 23:34, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Appledawn (W) ~ CBA

8DD this is one of my favorite prefixes ever. All colors come from Petalfall (which I thank Mounty heavily for sharing with me). Anyway, comments? ouo Bb unlegs 00:58, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Removed some waste from highlights. Bb unlegs 01:00, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the neck shading. —Jayce(02:25, 7/2/2013)

Re-up. How's this? Bb unlegs 02:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps define the stripes a tad? Especially on the tail and legs, they appear to get lost. —Jayce(15:27, 7/2/2013)

Re-up. Bb unlegs 16:16, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail just a tad and I think this'll be ready. david ^🌈 23:35, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb unlegs 23:45, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? Rain legs 04:11, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Stagleap (W) ~ For Approval

File:Stagleap.warrior.png sexy name is sexy ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 01:10 Tue Jul 2

Maybe define the ear pink just a wee bit, I sorta have to squint to see it. david ^🌈 09:01, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back/haunch area a bit. This is really good. Sha dew ing! 15:34, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 06:52 Wed Jul 3

Doespring (W) ~ For Approval

8D Shoond erp ^{Like nobody’s around~} 01:12, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Defien the shading a teeny bit? david ^🌈 08:59, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Shoond erp ^{Like nobody’s around~} 13:41, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading and texture a bit on her haunch. -Duck sauce 00:31, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shoond erp ^{Like nobody’s around~} 00:51, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

There's a wee bit of waste by the back foot. c: Thistle 16:47, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shoond erp ^{Like nobody’s around~} 16:52, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Mistmouse (W) ~ For Approval

Yes this I like 8D Shim mer♫ 01:33, 07/2/2013

Define the shading on the tail and legs? Nicely done~ —Jayce(02:27, 7/2/2013)

Re-uploaded Done. Thanks, Cloudy~ Shim mer♫ 02:46, 07/2/2013

Blur teh neck and haunch shading a little? Lookin good m8 david ^🌈 09:00, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Flailfoot (E) ~ CBA

Love black cats<333 Also, epic name is epic. And kitty hazel eyes<333 — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 02:31, 07/2/2013

Hm...perhaps lighten the base just a tad. david ^🌈 08:59, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I disagree. I think it looks fine, as-is, and since he /is/ black, a base this dark is pretty good. —Jayce(14:21, 7/2/2013)

Define the shading; I can barely see it. Rain legs 23:51, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reups — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 01:29, 07/3/2013

Comments before approval? —Jayce(17:35, 7/3/2013)

Sorrelpaw (WC) (A) ~ For Approval

File:Sorrelpaw.apprentice.png What a coincidence!! Comments? :p ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 06:40, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

There's some waster underneath her paws and back leg. Raven ^{Chicks = Nikki} 09:43 Tue Jul 2

Reuploaded ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:32, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on legs a tad? If not, that's okay. Bb unlegs 14:45, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Personally, I think its fine, but if another person agrees, I'll do it. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:48, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Just a little bit, Sorrel. Not much. —Jayce(15:27, 7/2/2013)

Reuploaded How's this? ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 17:21, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? I can't see it. david ^🌈 12:14, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:49, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Brackenwing (W) - For Approval

Well, trying out Photoshop elements. I like this~ Comments? Raven ^{Chicks = Nikki} 06:50 Tue Jul 2

Re-uploaded, I liked this one better. Plus defined the shading. Raven ^{Chicks = Nikki} 09:36 Tue Jul 2

Blur/smooth out the shading. Very nice. Sha dew ing! 15:32, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the earpink a bit? ^{^S}ⁱ l _v _{_e}_{_{_r}}^hmm 17:53, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Re-did the stripes, as they were annoying me. I kind of like my shading somewhat hard edged, so I blurred only a little. Raven ^{Chicks = Nikki} 06:14 Wed Jul 3

Could you add a little more depth to the shading? It seems just a bit flat. Like, darken the farthest edges or areas that would receive even less lighting than the rest of the shaded body. Rain legs 14:20, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Larksplash (A) ~ For Approval

Here Larkpaw/Maia (my Aunt Kathy's cat). I don't really like how she came out. I'll add depth to the eyes soon. Any other comments? Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 15:53, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added depth to the eyes. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 15:57, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

They're waste around the right on the tail, around her head, and near her paws? Remove it? This is pretty cute! Bb unlegs 16:04, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't believe I missed that. Thanks, Beebs. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 16:12, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I think the orange is a bit... too bright/neon. Very pretty, Blue! ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 18:09, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel on that note, but it's not really all that bad. Also, parts of the white are looking very gray. —Jayce(18:19, 7/2/2013)

Reuploaded. Thanks. I dulled the orange and lightened the shading. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:53, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little too purple. This is incredible! ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 23:04, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuloaded. Thank you everyone! I don't think changes are showing. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 23:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

This appears to be a calico style cat... are calicos and torties the same thing? o.o I always thought they were more like this....also, the colors still seem a little off, especially that orange? Are you color picking from an image of your aunt's cat or something? —Jayce(23:55, 7/2/2013)

Yeah, tortie-and-whites are usually a tortoiseshell with white only at the muzzle, belly, paws, tail-tip, etc. Calicos are white cats with the big tortie patches...or at least, that's what I've always gone by. Rain legs 14:16, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Calicos and torties are pretty much the same thing, except calicos have white on them as well. In the UK and other parts of Europe, the word for calicos is tortoiseshell-and-white. Since 4/5 of the Erin Hunters live in the UK/Scottland, I thint the style of the pattern is fine, As for color-picking off of Maia, I would if I had a picture of her on my computer (though I think I have some on the other laptop, but my father took that to work with him, and he be back till 10pm RMT). Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 15:49, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, after talking with someone else, they also explained that calicos and torties are pretty much the same thing. Since it falls within the range, I'd say it's okay. Also, as a word of advice, perhaps make the orange a little more yellow colored? Perhaps like on Sorreltail's images? 'cause my guess is that's what your aunt's cat's coloring is like? —Jayce(15:54, 7/3/2013)

Reuploaded. Don't know if changes are showing. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 16:13, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Just gonna say this once- tortoiseshells and white cats aren't the same as calicos. Calicos, like what we have here, are white-based cats, with large patches of black and ginger scattered on the body. No real pattern to them.

Tortoiseshells-and-white cats, on the other hand, are black based, with more mottled ginger markings, and white usually in the typical places for lighter underparts- white muzzles, chests, bellies, paws, etc. Now, the white on tortoiseshell-and-white cats can vary with how much there is, but it'd never have it over the back. The most standard tortie-and-white cat just has paws, belly, chin, nose, chest, etc.

If what was stated above is confusing, there is also visual references. Calicos are white-based. Tortoiseshell-and-whites are black-based. So, as you can see, there is a difference. Rain legs 17:13, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

I understand, but I'm also thinking about where the authors came from. In the UK and surounding European countries, torti-and-whites and calicos are the exact same thing, and all of the authors but Tui come from that area. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 17:22, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

But there's a genetic difference, no matter where you're from. Besides, I know several people from Europe, as well, and have never heard of a blur of terminology. Rain legs 17:23, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Uh, I think in this case... Leggo's proof kinda overrides anything else. So, unless you have something in a form of a reference, not counting where the authors live, I do believe she might be right. o.o I honestly didn't know that when I said what I did above, and after doing some research, I've found the same thing that Leggo said.. —Jayce(17:26, 7/3/2013)

Reuploaded. Totally redid the pattern. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 17:55, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foot that's entirely white. It'd be the one on the furthest right side (our right), as in the one that's the farthest from the body. Also, the shading on the white appears to be somewhat flat as well. —Jayce(18:04, 7/3/2013)

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:11, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Wait, could you have it match the one I made below? I reserved her before you in hopes I could design her... Rain legs 18:21, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

I wish I could; I really do. I love your image, but I don't know how to do texture. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:37, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps you two could come to a medium on the matter? Maybe use the colors and basic pattern, but you could both talk about what to do? Since Leggo did reserve her first, I believe she's entitled to something, but that's just the old PCA in me talking. xD —Jayce(18:39, 7/3/2013)

Texture's actually really simple. If you have some time, pop into the chat and I can show you over a join.me. :3 (and send you the .xcf) Rain legs 18:41, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

I'll try, but I'm uncomfortable in chats, especially on a wiki as big as this. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:44, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Shrewclaw (A) ~ For Approval

First charart in awhile ^^. Hope he's not too dark o3o. ^{^S}ⁱ l _v _{_e}_{_{_r}}^hmm 16:26, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail a bit? I can't see it that well, but if you don't want to, cool with me. Nice work, Silver! Bb unlegs 16:29, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I erased a bit of it to make it show up. Does it look like there's a change for you? ^{^S}ⁱ l _v _{_e}_{_{_r}}^hmm 16:32, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Mudthorn (W) ~ For Approval

Here he is~ I dunno, is his shading too dark or is it fine? Anyway, comments? Ca na di a~ ^{Sirius is hiding...} 18:01, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the highlights (or the shading if those aren't highlights). Sha dew ing! 18:47, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink a bit? Shoond erp ^{Like nobody’s around~} 23:40, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The ear in the black looks dark brown, not black. Also, I think that the earpink is fine~ x3 -Duck sauce 00:29, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Whoops forgot the second ear. Reuploaded Ca na di a~ ^{Sirius is hiding...} 01:44, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

The highlights sort of throw the picture off. Maybe darken them? ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 03:07, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

There are no highlights, amico, only shading. Ca na di a~ ^{Sirius is hiding...} 16:37, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Lighten the shading and blur it more. Also, can you define/add shading on the neck please? ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 17:05, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Shading darkness is artist's choice, Hawk. However, it does need to be blurred. —Jayce(17:09, 7/3/2013)

I left the shading because I liked it how it was, however it has been blurred. Changes may or may not be showing Reuploaded. Ca na di a~ ^{Sirius is hiding...} 17:14, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? He's really neat, dear. ouo I love your work. —Jayce(17:27, 7/3/2013)

Possibly make the ears darker? They just look dark brown and not black. Get a second opinion though, it might be my computer o3o. ^{^S}ⁱ l _v _{_e}_{_{_r}}^hmm 18:00, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Flamepelt (E) ~ For Approval

Haven't done a charart in ages. That earpink is awful, I know. Comments? Sha dew ing! 18:18, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

He's ginger, so he needs stripes. ouo This is really nice, though. <takes and runs with it> —Jayce(18:18, 7/2/2013)

Oh. Oops. I'll get on that. Might take a little while. Sha dew ing! 18:46, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading a bit too while you're at it? david ^🌈 23:39, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes aren't showing. Sha dew ing! 11:42, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the overall shading. He looks wonderful, dear<3 —Jayce(17:10, 7/3/2013)

Marshcloud (W) ~ For Approval

Any suggestions for improvement? Splashmist3271 (talk) 20:55, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

If I'm not mistaken, all RiverClan cats are longhairs, unless they are stated to be shorthaired ^^;. Nice work of the stripes! Bb unlegs 20:59, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Add/define the shading a lot. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:00, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Ok, will do! It might be a bit though. Splashmist3271 (talk) 21:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Also, the earpink looks rather solid. Can you blur it just a smidge? ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:40, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes go onto the lineart. Remove, please (I love your tabby style)? Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:47, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I fixed it- is this better? Splashmist3271 (talk) 22:34, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be defined a ton. And the tail looks rather odd-shaped. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 22:36, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I fixed it again. The tail is supposed to look kind of odd because he is described as having a short tail. Splashmist3271 (talk) 23:16, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste along his spine. Thin the tail, and blur the shading a lot. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 23:25, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I'll fix the waste, but I'm not sure how to blur the shading without blurring the tabby marks... Anyways, I have to go now, so the edited version probably won't be up until tomorrow. Splashmist3271 (talk) 23:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

What program do you use, Splashmist? Atelda _{_{insert vague subtext here}} 23:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I use Adobe Photoshop Elements 10 --Splashmist3271 (talk) 12:50, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I fixed the tail & shading (I tried some lighting too), and I added goldenish stripes just cuz. Splashmist3271 (talk) 14:45, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste by his front legs and chest. I really like this! Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 17:12, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, and by his far ear, in between his legs, and tail (I didn't see that at first). And I think the lineart at the tail-tip is blurred. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 17:16, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Oh okay, that's at least an easy fix! Glad you like it :) Splashmist3271 (talk) 17:21, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, I deleted the waste. Splashmist3271 (talk) 17:45, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. ^{^S}ⁱ l _v _{_e}_{_{_r}}^hmm 17:51, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (E) ~ For Approval

My first charart as a warrior! That leg was a pain. The tail may not look normal but trust me, it is. Comments? ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 23:00, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could just be my screen, but she looks greenish. x3 Love the texture! -Duck sauce 00:28, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit? And maybe the shading along the back and neck area? Very nice! Sha dew ing! 02:52, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. Thank you, all of you. =3 ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 03:03, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Finchkit (Ki) - For Approval

File:Finchkit.kit.png eh, idk about this one. Comments? She was mentioned by Palebird as being ginger like Sandgorse, so I got the colors from Cloudy and tweaked them. x3 -Duck sauce 00:27, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

This is really good! Maybe just blur the stripes on the legs a little? Sha dew ing! 02:54, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Thanks! Re-uploaded -Duck sauce 02:57, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Plumclaw (W) - For Approval

Yes, I am very well aware there is waste or other stuff that should be fixed. This is one of my better chararts actually (i'm really bad D:) I need all the help I can get, so, comments? My signature is being derpy, I'm fixing it right now. ~Jadeblaze~ (talk) 00:40, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

By the way, I wasn't sure what pelt length she had or what her eye color was, so I made her SH and with green eyes. ~Jadeblaze~ (talk) 00:41, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Don't worry about the eye color and such. She looks a bit pixelated in places and there are white dots all over her. Also, define the shading and the earpink just a tad. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 03:05, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean by pixelated or what I'm supposed to do, and how to I "define" stuff? (I'm sorry, I haven't been doing this very long. xD) Oh, and Reuploaded, I got the white spots (I think?) User:~Jadeblaze~/Sig 13:10, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Shrewclaw (W) - For Approval

Shrewclaw~ This is my first project, so go easy on me. Any problems? I can redo them to your standards. Comment away! Darkfrost14 (talk) 01:53, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading, define the eye depth, and remove the stripes, to match the apprentice. Bb unlegs 01:20, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

There, I blurred the shading, got rid of the stripes, and fixed the eye. I put the apprentice and the warrior side by side and they looked alike. What do you all think? Darkfrost14 (talk) 01:53, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

In the morning/when I can I'll give you the color codes for everything to make sure they match, since I'm not on the computer right now. ^{^S}ⁱ l _v _{_e}_{_{_r}}^hmm 02:03, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

I made sure the colors were correct with gimp, by taking the apprentices colors and putting them on the warrior. But you can double check in the morning if you wish. o3o Darkfrost14 (talk) 02:08, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Sha dew ing! 02:53, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define/Add the shading. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot} 03:06, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

I still see faint stripes. Also, whatever shading you have doesn't have a light source. —Jayce(03:37, 7/3/2013)

Blurred the ear pink, double checked on no stripes, added some more shading...if the shading needs to fixed I can do it. Any more problems or recommended suggestions? Darkfrost14 (talk) 10:38, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Wrenflight (W) - For Approval

File:Wrenflight.warrior.png Long time since I've actually done this. Comments? =) Atelda _{_{insert vague subtext here}} 05:23, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs just a wee bit? This is gr8 david ^🌈 12:16, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks c:Atelda _{_{insert vague subtext here}} 17:02, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Awesome! I think I saw waste by the front legs. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 17:30, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

There's also small specks of waste around the tail-area as well. —Jayce(17:32, 7/3/2013)

Palebird (W) ~ For Approval

Danielle gave me the colours, since she plans to do the StarClan version. Thank you again, Dani 8D So, yeah. x3 Comments? --User:Atomic Angel/Sig14:02, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Does the rump area have no shading? It looks that way to me...even with this light source, that area would still have shading, I believe. —Jayce(14:10, 7/3/2013)

Add some shading to the bottom of her feet, too. Rain legs 14:15, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added foot shading. Cloudy, I do not think the rump needs shading, since the light source is coming from the top right. --User:Atomic Angel/Sig 14:51, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added rump shading. Changes are not showing, I believe. --User:Atomic Angel/Sig 15:09, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Add some shading to the bottom of her front feet, too. Rain legs 15:10, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added front paws shading. Sorry. I forgot about that. xP --User:Atomic Angel/Sig 15:15, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur the edge of the black patches and the earpink a little? Unless you think it's fine. Sha dew ing! 19:56, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

I personally think both are fine. --User:Atomic Angel/Sig 20:05, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Larksplash (W) ~ For Approval

Blue and I are discussing her pattern...so this is what I made for her. Comments? Rain legs 14:14, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Maybe blur where the white meets the colors a little bit? Sha dew ing! 19:52, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Hareflight (TR) (W) - For Approval

File:Hareflight (TC).warrior.png Comments? -Feather 16:38, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Nice work! However, I believe all WC cats are to be short hairs c: Bb unlegs 16:39, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Huh? There are tons of long-haired WC cats. I'm confused. -Feather 17:12, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

oh wait nevermind I keep thinking WC is WinterClan, which automatically links to ThunderClan. Nevermind, I'll change it. x3 -Feather 17:13, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing for me. -Feather 17:57, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Nightsky (W) - For Approval

hello this isn't swaggy Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 20:00, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit, define the tail shading, and smudge/blur the ginger a bit? Nice work, Icy c: Bb unlegs 20:04, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

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 Very nice.  Blur the edge of the black patches and the earpink a little? Unless you think it's fine.  [[User:Shadewing|<span style="color:Lime;">Sha</span>]][[Warriors Wiki:Characters|<span style="color:Aqua;">dew</span>]][[User talk:Shadewing|<span style="color:Lime;">ing!</span>]] 19:56, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing
+I personally think both are fine. --{{User:Atomic Angel/Sig}} 20:05, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
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