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Hawkfrost (Alt. DF) ~ For Approval

I'm seeing these blanks everywhere now Jayie I love them so much! ~S no w~ 01:09, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, please. —Jayce(01:45, 6/13/2015)

Re-ups ~S no w~ 08:59, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading still looks dark - lighten it a few more ticks, please. —Ivy ☆ 22:46, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~S no w~ 22:59, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture and add shading depth on the back - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:18, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~S no w~ 10:17, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading some more. It still looks a bit too hard-edged.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:45, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture more on the tail. —Ivy ☆ 23:58, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~S no w~ 09:53, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is still a little hard edged. Btw I don't think two highlight points (well, explaining) are needed on the shoulder...? Might be wrong :P I love his belly Silvermistie _{Dream it}^{Back to Future✼} 01:01, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

It looks like your shading is coming from the right, so remove all the shading along the top of the back and add it onto the belly, behind the legs, and directly behind where the shoulder ends. Cover all of the tail in shading, as well, except for the very top, which is lined up with the slope of the back. Nice job! Rain legs 02:09, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups – I completely redid the shading, but I didn't exactly understand what you meant by the tail shading. I also got rid of the texture as it seemed to make the shading look more hard-edged than it is ~S no w~ 06:06, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

The whole tail besides the top should be shaded (the right side too). The shading still looks a little hard edged though. Can you blur it a little more? —Ivy ☆ 13:44, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more please. ~Sunstream ☽☾ Was it ME? 15:41, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

(Pardon me if this sounds similar to what the others were saying) Smooth out the shading? ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 18:16, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? —Jayce(11:42, 6/26/2015)

Sorry, gonna have to withdraw — my art programs crashed >><< ~S no w~ 10:52, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over. —Ivy ☆ 17:55, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped My turn. —Ivy ☆ 18:49, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Oh wow this is beautiful. Can you define the shading on the main body a bit? <3 ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 19:17, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you, Sun! —Ivy ☆ 19:44, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere except for the tail. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:49, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy ☆ 12:29, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Snowtuft (DF) ~ For Approval

So many Dark Forest submissions, they're going like hotcakes! I've always had a soft spot for Snowtuft. The Stylish Ravenpelt ^{I'm too hot! (Hot damn!)} 01:22, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 06:35, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading depth ~S no w~ 00:26, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us and the light on the one farthest from us please Storm ^♫ 12:33, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly expand the shading a tad everywhere?~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:44, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded, not sure if I made the shading too dark or not. The Stylish Ravenpelt ^{I'm too hot! (Hot damn!)} 18:57, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

It is a little on the dark side, tbh. Maybe lighten it just a slight bit? Smooth out the shading a little more as well. Nice :) —Ivy ☆ 00:40, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source, it looks a bit like there's shading all around the outline ~Ice^{The Spirit and the Soul} 06:48, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the legs? Also, the chest, back leg and tail end shading looks a little grey. Might I suggest tinting the shading to a colour other than grey, such as blue? It'll make it look less grey. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:12, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? It's kinda flat at this moment I know, I swear I screw up way worse than you do when I shade white cats Silvermistie _{Dream it}^{Back to Future✼} 01:08, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Wouldn't the scar show? If I remember right it said that he was sliced all the way to his belly Iveh Yo ! 04:09, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

That's on his left side, I think User: Dewdrops56/talk 04:17, June, 16, 2015

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt ^{I'm too hot! (Hot damn!)} 16:13, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading a lot more? And can you define the light/shading on his legs please? Storm ^♫ 17:06, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. —Ivy ☆ 18:09, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

If the shading is coming from directly above, more of the tail would be in shadow and there would be less shadow defining the top of the shoulder. Also remove the shading separating the tail from the rump, if that's the case. If it's coming from the right, add even more shading to the entire tail-most of the body would be blocking all of it out! Fantastic job on dealing with the white cat, though, because I still can't do them. Rain legs 02:08, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Something came up so I won't be able to access my computer and reup the pic till Wednesday. Is that alright? I'm so sorry I can't get it up till then. The Stylish Ravenpelt ^{I'm too hot! (Hot damn!)} 01:49, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt ^{I'm too hot! (Hot damn!)} 16:14, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the back leg furthest from us? Also, define the shading on the paws. —Ivy ☆ 16:27, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure if there's a set style for these blanks, but I can hardly see the pupil.. mind moving it toward the center or where it's easier to see? --Nachtide ^{The Wikian Squad} 05:46, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps define shading overall especially the tail? ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (06:01,6/25/2015)

Pretty much the entire lower half of the tail should be in shadow if your light's still coming from right above! Rain legs 02:31, June 28, 2015 (UTC) Do you mind lightening the tail tip some? I know its shading, but it looks very dark.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 22:50, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded, starting to regret picking a white cat. The Stylish Ravenpelt ^{I'm too hot! (Hot damn!)} 15:09, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I know white cats aren't the easiest, but this looks good :) However, can you define the main body shading? —Ivy ☆ 19:36, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Could you try to smooth out the shading? Queen Beebs 12:42, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Beepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval

File:Beepaw.kit.png ~Ice^{The Spirit and the Soul} 10:15, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and perhaps lighten it a little. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:54, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw. Looks wonderful for your first charart! Storm ^♫ 12:27, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, please.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:43, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture a little bit. Cute (: Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣• 23:06, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tad. I like this! —Ivy ☆ 23:59, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks ^^ ~Ice^{The Spirit and the Soul} 09:48, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a little bit more, dull down the texture some more as well, and add some shading between her front legs on her underbelly? Storm ^♫ 14:27, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Why would she need more shading on her front paws and underbelly? She has enough there. I think you should lighten the shading a little more. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 17:45, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

No, between the front legs on her underbelly. There'd be just shadow there, and there's not really enough. Storm ^♫ 20:48, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but I agree that it is fine. There is shading there, and there's no less than there is on a bunch of other images. —Ivy ☆ 21:11, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Storm. The underbelly is approximately 3 pixels wide, and 5 pixels long. It does not need that much shading. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 00:05, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups — hope I got it, I'm crap at shading, and Wikia won't let me upload the image to the correct file name… did I miss anything? ~Ice^{The Spirit and the Soul} 11:37, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a little more. —Ivy ☆ 12:32, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? —Jayce(11:42, 6/26/2015)

Withdrawn — wifi's being turned off ~Ice^{The Spirit and the Soul} 10:59, June 27, 2015

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Can I Take over? ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 13:30, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

you dont gotta ask lol Storm ^♫ 13:31, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups huh❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 14:37, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Cool. Could you blur/smudge the shading more and define the texture a bit? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 14:44, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the texture to match the apprentice? Storm ^♫ 14:50, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

yo ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 19:57, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and the texture just a tad more. —Ivy ☆ 13:47, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading on the main body some more Storm ^♫ 14:43, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to them soon ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 14:45, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure if texture needs to match, but the texture on her apprentice image is more dense :P ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (08:57,6/29/2015)

Oh, is it just me, or are her eyes torquoize (green)? ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (12:47,6/30/2015)

They do look sort of turquoise, but I compared them to the apprentice's eyes and they seem to be the same color. So I think it's ok —Ivy ☆ 15:03, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

May i ask why theres light on ==> side of the right forleg? It should just be shading User:StormSongz/Sig 01:17, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (DF) - For Approval

I tried ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 15:58, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Also, I am aware that it looks a bit flat - I'll sling in a few highlights on my next upload. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:29, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reups that's better ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:35, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:46, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:32, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:35, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but he really doesn't look dark gray at all. This seems like more of a neutral shade. Also, he's supposed to have black stripes, and these don't look black at all...his images only appear darker on his warrior imho because of the shading... —Jayce(12:09, 6/30/2015)

Reups I colour picked from the warrior - come to think of it, that looks a little light compared to the others; I've now colour picked the base/stripes from the kit. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:04, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Flamenose (Star) ~ CBA

My hand o.o Cranked out as a break from my calculus homework, but I think he turned out well for being done relatively quickly dear god it was 12 layers... Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣• 03:41, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading some more? I love flamenose's description!! although it'll most likely change when GC comes out ~~don't mind me~~ Storm ^♫ 04:00, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the main ginger should be paler so the dark parts stand out more, and more of the face and tail should be dark, not just the stripes. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:03, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Oh my gosh Sun your chararts :o <3 Maybe add some shading to the bottom of is chest? It should be there as there is shading on the bottom of his...side thingy :P He looks so awesome!!! ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (05:56,6/25/2015)

reupped Lightened the base, put darker color on 100%, smoothed the shading (or at least tried to), added chest shading, darkened shading (since it looked practically nonexistant on the darker areas). And thank you! :D Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣• 13:51, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Looks much more amazing sun! Can you smooth out the haunch shading a bit more? Storm ^♫ 14:15, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

reupped ^.^ Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣• 18:25, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

The darker parts seem to be a bit neon to me. Perhaps try a more orange color? User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:41, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Eh..I am most likely going to be told to darken the darker parts again. I am not going to go any more orange than this, as it will look more on the brownish side than red, unless there are more people who request it. I am not trying to start the "its fine thing", only that I have messed with several different shades and this is the closest to orange I can get without throwing off the color completely. Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣• 23:19, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks good ^^ Could you possibly smudge the darker parts into the pale fur a bit more on his legs? Storm ^♫ 23:28, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Thanks Storm^^ I also added some lighter texture to make some of the details a little easier to see Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣• 00:00, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth? User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:33, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

'reupped 'Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣• 00:39, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

His eyes sparkle lol. CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:24, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Oakstar (Star) ~ CBA

Don't even ask. I forgot how to do charart DX ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (03:53,6/25/2015)

I can send you the files, if you like. Also, could you add shading to the shoulder? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:00, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you change the earpink to a more pink color? It appears as the same brown as his underbelly and paws.... Storm ^♫ 04:01, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sure Jayie I would love that. Storm, I will change the earpink soon (more like right now) but I just thought did I need to match the original earpink color so yea, I would do that now. ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (04:12,6/25/2015)

re-ups I wasn't too sure about the shoulder shading so I added stuff, correct me if I got it wrong :P ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (04:12,6/25/2015)

Could you leave an email on my talk page to send the files to? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:13, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Already did so^^ ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (04:17,6/25/2015)

Also is it just me or did you forget to color in the nose? Storm ^♫ 04:33, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

I don't really see any color on the nose on his leader image? ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (05:52,6/25/2015)

It's slightly darker than the brown on his muzzle and around his eyes. You can just grab it from the files I sent. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 15:39, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups did I get it? ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (07:41,6/26/2015)

There's also darker fur on her face, and around his muscle and eyes. Did you look at the files I sent? It should have all the colors and markings there. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 18:22, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups oh boy, I thought it was shading ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (14:03,6/27/2015)

http://www.ezimba.com/work/150628C/ezimba11244524799000.png This is what Oakstar's leader looks like without any shading, just the colors. The pale coloring on the legs should come up to the elbow of that front leg, The dark brown shouldn't take up the whole of the face or tail, either. The dark brown takes up most of the tail, but the base should still be the main brown, and so should the top of the head and the cheeks, since the dark brown is just a large circle-ish shape on the middle of the face, not the whole head. And then the even darker brown is on the muzzle, around the ends, and the nose bridge. Ugh, sorry to be so nit-picky. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 02:37, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Nah, we need nit-picky people here to have perfect images :) I hope I got it, but if I didn't, feel free to pick on it >:3 ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (03:36,6/29/2015)

re-ups oops ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (03:42,6/29/2015)

~~Comments? ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (04:41,7/1/2015)~~mistakenly thought it was three days sorry ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (05:21,7/1/2015)

Regardless, I love this. CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:22, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Boulderfur (Star) ~ For Approval

Okay... first image in a while. pardon if it looks bad, i'm posting this at almost 3 in the morning and am as scared as hell of the thunderstorm. Anyway... I chose green eyes instead of the blue on the other images because I realize I suck at blue eyes and since the eye colour isn't canon. (if i misnamed or aligned my bad) ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 07:40, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Your eyes have to match the other images, sorry. If they are blue on the other images, then so does this one. Also, blur the shading more and it's leaking on the main body (omg im almost crying it's the end of the school year, so I apologize if I sounded blunt there ;.;) - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:22, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the front legs. And could you possibly add some shading depth to the side of his face? And maybe some earpink shading as well, I know there should be earpink shading. Not much, just a little bit towards where the ear canal is and on ==> this side of the ear a little bit to show your light is coming from where it is Storm ^♫ 14:18, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

The nose should be gray like it is on the apprentice. —Ivy ☆ 14:44, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Kinda redone Sorry if I forgot something. I'm just having a hard day. Couldn't sleep 'til 4am (Stupid storm ~~making me cry~~) no worries, Foxy ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 18:06, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail. The shading is still leaking a little on the main body. —Ivy ☆ 19:14, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry if this sounds like a stupid question, but could you tell me specifically where? ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 18:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, it doesn't sound stupid at all - I know, "main body" is real vague. It is mainly leaking where the main body meets this <--- side of <--- foreleg. It is also leaking a little bit along the bottom of the main body - just zoom in on that area because there are a few places it's leaking just a little. Hopefully that was helpful - sorry, I'm really bad at explaining. —Ivy ☆ 19:25, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not a problem, but I think I blurred the shading too much because I did define the shading but it's not showing up. I can't tell if the shading is still leaking by the bottom. Anyway, does anyone think I should darken the shading? ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 23:04, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Defie the light on the tail and both legs.User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:42, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shading is leaking next to <----- forepaw ~S no w~ 07:32, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shading is probably still leaking. I think that's my weakness. I'll probably blur the shading a bit more on the main body and chest then define light on tail. p.s, someone call the shading plumber ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 20:48, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and front legs/paws. And yeah, shading is still leaking by the shoulder where the line meets <== leg, as well as under the chin. Storm ^♫ 20:58, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded someone call the shading plumber ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 18:09, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is receeding a little along the belly line and outside of the elbow. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:19, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I really think at this. ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 02:47, July 1, 2015 (UTC)D

don't put yourself down! That ain' tcool. Also, some of the shading is leaking from the lines, so try to define/fix that?? Queen Beebs 12:44, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the chest. I'm pretty sure there should be some there. —Ivy ☆ 23:37, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (DF Alt2) - For Approval

Okay, so for those who don't know, the stripes on a black tabby are actually supposed to be lighter than the base (which means I need to redo Crowtail one of these days), so if you're seeing light stripes, this is intentional and I didn't mess up. The eyes, ears, and mouth are the exact same thing as his silver tabby alt, which was just approved. —Jayce(00:58, 6/26/2015)

Beautiful. Can you define the shading a bit? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 02:29, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you be a bit more specific and tell me where you'd like the shading defined, if you don't mind? —Jayce(02:33, 6/26/2015)

Like, the main body? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 02:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Alrighty. —Jayce(07:12, 6/26/2015)

Could you possibly define the earpink just a tad? I know its there, but I literally cant see it. Maybe shift the color to a brighter shade of the one you used, or raise its opacity?~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 08:18, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My ear pink is always on full opacity- it was just a darker color. —Jayce(11:58, 6/30/2015)

Mumblefoot (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation

Oh.My.Gosh.I've failed terribly at the ragged fur xD. PoppyShine (talk) 04:57, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

There are 2 flecks of waste near the chest fur. Please remove it. Also, should he have patchy fur, or not, as that's what's depicted in the other images? And there's a fleck of waste underneath the tail.~User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:30 June 26 2015

I don't think he gets ragged fur as that may be only for his elder rank. Correct me if I'm wrong. Also define the shading on the main body. Hey poppy, I was wondering if you want to, would you be willing to be my apprentice? If so let me know on my talk page, and then file out a request on the mentor program page. Storm ^♫ 05:35, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Of course ^-^. PoppyShine (talk) 05:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Also on the front front, facing us, there looks like there is some waste under there. Please remove it. ~ User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:49 June 26 2015

Yeah I think he doesn't get the ragged fur, since he was a young warrior. Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 06:59, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined everywhere, not just on the main body. Also, blur the earpink. —Ivy ☆ 12:04, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

The second fur tuft thing on the chest isn't coloured in. This is amazing for your first(?) charart! ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 22:56, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded it.I removed the waste,blurred the earpink, and defined shading.PoppyShine (talk) 00:10, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

The ragged fur still needs to be removed...? —Ivy ☆ 00:22, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Not trying to argue but, isnt ragged fur part of a cat's trait that they recieve when they are kits, take Raggedstar and Reedfeather for example. PoppyShine (talk) 00:27, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Honestly, I'm not sure we'll know for certain until GC comes out, so for now the ragged fur needs to be removed. If I'm correct in assuming the ragged fur cite was only for his elder rank. Storm ^♫ 00:42, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Ok.PoppyShine (talk) 00:54, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Define the shading everywhere some more and smooth it out a bit? ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 02:58, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

There is a faint patch of waste between the front leg and back leg( facing us). Please remove it. ~ User: Dewdrops56// talk~ 03:39 June 28 2015

Reuploaded it. I removed the ragged fur and defined the shading,and erased the waste. PoppyShine (talk) 00:41, June 29, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Define the shading on the two legs furthest from us. —Ivy ☆ 19:45, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source and expand the shading. Look at some of mine for reference. if you need further help, I can send you a tutorial. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:28, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hope this is better.PoppyShine (talk) 02:20, July 1, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

I still can't see your light source. Did you look at Fox's examples? If you didn't, I recommend that you do. —Ivy ☆ 23:45, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

You also still appear to only be shading along the edges of the lineart. Follow the apprentice tutorials as specified User:StormSongz/Sig 01:24, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Redwillow (Alt DF) ~ For Approval

Something to start off the summer. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:31, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

This is so beautiful. Would you mind smoothing out the shading on the legs closer to us just a little? —Ivy ☆ 12:11, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks~ :) - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 13:28, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. Can you define the light on the curved leg over there? ==> ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 13:46, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yes - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:03, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading, if there is any.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 22:48, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed other stuff too - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 10:27, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

I love it Foxy :) Define light on the tail maybe? I know the light is sorta coming from the top, but there's light on the limbs so... yea XD ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (11:38,6/30/2015)

Re-uploaded With this source, there wouldn't be much light on the tail. I added as much as I could without contradicting the light source. Did this make any difference? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 11:51, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

I can already tell you that given your source, the entire tail needs to be in shadow. If the light is coming from the front of the cat, then you'll need to basically shade the entire tail and have darker shading to show depth. —Jayce(12:04, 6/30/2015)

Re-uploaded - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 12:54, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Troutstream (Star) - CBA

Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 08:12, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Simply beautiful. define the shading on her head? Storm ^♫ 14:45, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks:) Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 15:27, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:36, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe a last minute of smoothing out the chest shading? ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (06:24,6/30/2015)

Re-ups Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 13:36, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? —Jayce(00:31, 7/2/2015)

Thistleclaw (DF. Alt) - CBA

Those are mottled marks. User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:22, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

What exactly is this for? Could you explain, because I'm not seeing what this is for on his trivia, unless I'm missing it. —Jayce(09:25, 6/27/2015)

I think it's the gray white alt - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:29, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

if it is he shouldnt have stripes, nothing warrnts them. david ^🌈 09:35, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Those were mottled marksUser:Burntclaw/Sig 10:34, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the tail more; your light source wouldn't leave any light on the tail due to the body being in front of it. Be sure to leave some even darker shading around the edges though, to still portray depth. Rain legs 15:50, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re upped User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:34, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Queen Beebs 12:45, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hootwhisker (W) ~ For Approval

Idk. ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 15:07, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the texture; it was stated multiple times before, there is none on my apprentice. It's the shading technique. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 15:27, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink I cannot see it well Storm ^♫ 15:31, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading in general and define the light on the tail. —Ivy ☆ 18:55, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 20:48, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Theres a random dark line on his haunch where his knee is. and also can you make the earpink a little more...triangular shaped? Storm ^♫ 21:36, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading. —Ivy ☆ 22:54, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I didn't blur it yet, because that is not how it looks in the apprentice. Sorrel did you smudge or blur the shading? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness*

I'm fairly certain it was smudged on the apprentice, so if you want to smudge your shading, would you mind smudging it more? —Ivy ☆ 15:57, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I used smudging - a 1px brush, with quite large, circular smudging, so that some of the shading smears spread onto the non-shaded areas, if you get what I mean - that's what gives it's it's 'texture' look. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:18, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hindleg furthest from us.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 22:46, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also define it on the foreleg furthest from us —Ivy ☆ 19:43, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I like this shading style... ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 22:00, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a bit. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:20, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a little? I don't think it's the same as smoothing it. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 00:30, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt.DF) ~ For Approval

Credit to Burntclaw for the lineart, although I had to make some changes. This is the black alt, as he is called black in Fading Echoes. I used the colour off the elder alt and tried to copy the scars best I could off the Dark Forest image.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 22:45, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

shouldnt he have torn ears? Storm ^♫ 14:54, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

It looks torn to me... —Ivy ☆ 15:06, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I see no tear. Storm ^♫ 15:08, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

If you look closely, you can see that the upper part of the ear (on our screen) is jagged rather than straight, which I assume is the tear. I think the dark base just makes it hard to see. —Ivy ☆ 15:14, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 22:46, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

darken him. i thought this was yellowfang at first. david ^🌈 08:26, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I added another tear on his ear, to make it a tad more obvious. I promise there is three tears, and the other ear tip is not there. I've darkened his main colour, but they'll mean the elder alt will need to be darkened.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 10:10, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think that if he's black, he should be darkened more. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:26, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

I second that. ^ Don't be afraid to go dark when you make black cats, honestly. And given that this source has a lot of lighter areas, going darker is a better idea. —Jayce(12:02, 6/30/2015)

Define the shading some more? Queen Beebs 12:45, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 22:05, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Larksong (W) ~ For Approval

File:Larksong.warrior.png You know...? Nah... Queen Beebs 21:04, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs a tad. This. Is. gorgeous. ~Skiddley Riddley ^{♫ ♪} 02:11, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine there imo, but possibly add some shading depth to the main body and head? User:StormSongz/Sig 02:27, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 02:42, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

There's also a black patch of fur that is between the eyes on all the chararts. I think you may have missed that User:StormSongz/Sig 02:49, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a bit? It's making her look darker than she should be. —Jayce(02:50, 7/1/2015)

RE-UP Queen Beebs 02:58, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Waste over the nose User:StormSongz/Sig 03:16, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

@@ Line 369: / Line 369: @@
 I still can't see your light source. Did you look at Fox's examples? If you didn't, I recommend that you do. {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 23:45, July 1, 2015 (UTC)
+You also still appear to only be shading along the edges of the lineart. Follow the apprentice tutorials as specified {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 01:24, July 2, 2015 (UTC)
 ==[[Redwillow]] (Alt DF) ~ For Approval==

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