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That's...actually quite a bit too high to be her cheekbone... {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 13:12, September 9, 2015 (UTC)
That's...actually quite a bit too high to be her cheekbone... {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 13:12, September 9, 2015 (UTC)
Yeah i think winter is right. Feel your face. Is your cheekbone on your forehead? No its right to the side and below the eye. And yes i know its a cat and humans bonrs are different but do you really think a cats cheek is that high? [[User:StormSongz|<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;color:#29297A;text-shadow:#80B2FF 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em"><big>Storm</big></span>]][[User talk:StormSongz|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;color:#339966;text-shadow:#80B2FF 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em"><sup>&#9835; </sup></span>]] 20:33, September 9, 2015 (UTC)
==[[Raven Pelt]] (Ro) ~ For Approval==
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Cats of the Park Blanks ~ For Approval They're so icky omgggg please rename them for me if I named them wrong? I'm no good at lineart Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~05:47,8/21/2015

I'll fill them in and fix the longhair's leg in the next upload. ;-; Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~05:47,8/21/2015

I suggest looking at the other blanks, you might pick up some good points. Maybe try drawing lines that helps show the muzzle, sorta like the cave-guard or leader. Just keep trying until it seems right.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:13, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Round the tips of the ears and maybe make the eyes a little bit smaller. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:18 Fri Aug 21

IDK but the (our) left leg on the short haired blank looks a bit too thin on it's staring point? (My vocabulary omg ;;) I think you get what I mean? User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:44, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The muzzle looks a bit small. Try enlarging it? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:06, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I tried... The eyes looked like aliens >.> still very icky ._. Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~09:48,8/21/2015

Maybe make the edge of the eyes a /little/ sharper? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 11:26, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the lines thinner? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:19, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the muzzle? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The lines don't need to be thinner, Burnt. They match the thickness on some of the blanks we have, and it's honestly fine. Jayce  ( 15:44, 8/21/2015 )

Largen the eyes? ~ Silver Cloud ~ 16:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know, I think the lines should be thinner. Anyways can you space out the eyes a little? They look too close together. But you did an awesome job! Appledash the light of honor 18:07, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's a couple of white pixels on the long-haired's left ear. Songheart (talk) 18:15, August 21, 2015 (UTC)Songheart

The eyes should have thicker lineart, and the eyes should be further apart and follow the curve of the face more. The chin should be more noticable as well. Nubface (talk) 18:33, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The face is bent downwards at an angle. Right now, the eyes are facing forward with the same perception. If the muzzle where to be there, the eye on our left would have to be angled a bit differently, to make way for the shape of the muzzle. if that didn't make sense i'll try to explain it better Splook sweet  creature 20:15 Fri Aug 21

Will this get declined if I'm gone for a week...? Because I'm going to my friend's house for a couple days. Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~

No. A week without uploads on blanks is not fair. Blanks are a much different process than a normal image- I don't remember the timeframe we decided on, but if you don't upload for a week, you won't lose your blanks. I think we ended up picking two weeks...or something like that. Regardless, working on blanks is a very long process and there's no need to hold you to the same requirements as a normal image. It just wouldn't be fair, flat out. Jayce  ( 16:17, 8/22/2015 )

Forgot to mention earlier, but the tail should be moved down a bit, especially on the shorthair. The tails rests on the ground and tends to curl around their front paws. Nubface (talk) 20:46, August 22, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't a little bit of the hindpaw be visible somewhat through the tail? ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 13:40, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Do you think this lineart is a little... Too big? Not gonna be rude. --ShellaxySpaniel (talk) 05:10, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

The size is fine tbh. There are other blanks the same size/bigger. Also, if you were talking about the lineart itself, the thickness of the lines is fine as there are other blanks with the same thickness of lines. – Ivy 21:01, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think the lineart could be just a touch smaller and the lineart just a touch thinner, but that's just me. Also, the angle of the face looks a little off - it looks like, from the position of the cat, the head is titled a bit downward, but the face seems tilted too much upward. Also, the tail is a little too high up on the shorthair, it should be even with the front paws, at least at the base, since that's where it would connect to the back. May I offer a redline to help with anatomy and such? If not, that's cool, just offering. ^^ Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:51, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Here's a friendly nudge to not forget to upload! Jayce  ( 00:18, 8/28/2015 )

I honestly think the blanks should be scaled down slightly to match the sizes of our other blanks, because as it stands right now, they are the largest. The anatomy seems to be that of a kitten? I think that the rounded paws and round face shape give this appearance, if you go with slightly more defined shapes, it should help give more of an adult cat appearance. The long furred's fur seems to be a bit spiky, do you think you could lay it flatter to the body and have it follow the direction of the body as best as you can? And it might just be me, but the perspective at which the front of the cat is versus where the butt sits seems kind of off to me and looks kind of painful for the cat's spine. Do you think you could scooch the cat's hindquaters closer to the body? I'm not an anatomy expert, and some of my advice could be wrong, and in that instance, I may be disproven and I'm fine with that, but that's personally how I would draw the blanks if I were doing them myself. I hope I helped at all. Iveh Yo! 04:04, August 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Now here's a thing, I was told to enlarge them (my original ones were way smaller) and the entire cat went crooked because I tried to redraw it. Pixelizing/scaling is a little too hard for me, or I could've been doing it wrong, and in that case can someone tell me how to do it? @Ivy, I tried my best for the fur... I kinda screwed it up. When I first drew the blank I copied exactly from an actual cat photo, so I'd like to get a second opinion on the hind legs. I lowered the short-haired tail, and I moved the eyes of both blanks down and a little more separated from each other. I hope I covered everyone I could, but if I missed something please tell me! Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~08:49,8/29/2015

Could you still sharpen the eyes a little? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 09:37, August 29, 2015 (UTC)

Did you make the fur a little less spikey? --{{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Russettail13/Sig}}. (talk) 13:27, August 29, 2015 (UTC)Russet

The fur seems fine to me - its long-furred anyways, if you're talking about the long haired blank. I hate to be pushy again, but could you maybe thin out the lines again? They just seem really thick, and I know I'm being picky for a blank with only 2 characters but... yeah. Appledash the light of honor 15:09, August 29, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add whiskers? Also, try making the muzzle a little rounder. Look at the other charart images for help. I think adding little lines in between the eyes and nose helps too.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:23, August 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think that their eyes and nose need to be moved so it looks like they're looking down. Like these: The muzzle is pointing downwards (well it looks that way to me) so the eyes should point downwards too. — FIRREL ★  ❝ ❤ ❞ 16:12, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

You didn't largen the eyes.

~ Silver Cloud ~ 01:37, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

She didn't upload yet. Give her a bit. Appledash the light of honor 01:40, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

I'm so sorry, but I think I'd have to withdraw these... I don't have time of them because of school, and my laptop is taken by my parents. I might have time to work on regular projects with the school computers, but blanks are a lot harder. Anyone can take these over if they want, I'll even allow them to use them directly (although I'm not even a fan of them myself). I can come back to them later, but it's probably going to be ages. Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~12:46,9/7/2015

I'll take over, unless someone else wants to. bcprincess a giant woman 12:52, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

You currently have a blank as a voting choice for the Early Settlers, Princess. Could we leave this for someone who does not have one there and hasn't had a chance to make a blank? Storm, Winter, Burnt, Fox? Or anyone else that does not have a blank on the Early Settler vote? (we don't know who will win and tbh having two at once would not be right) Would you guys like to give it a try? Jayce  ( 13:07, 9/7/2015 )

Yeah, that makes sense. Someone else should do it. bcprincess a giant woman 13:09, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can I try? :D User:Winterflurry/Sig 13:21, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Gladly, if you keep the stance that Bramblesnow provided. That's what we voted on, so that's what'll stay. Jayce  ( 13:25, 9/7/2015 )

Can I do two things at once? I have willow tail up right now...or does this not count as a reservation? User:Winterflurry/Sig 13:35, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

You can keep both at once- doing blanks are not the same thing as doing images. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:37, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Did I do it right? User:Winterflurry/Sig 14:05, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful <3 Maybe make the ears bigger? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:09, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, cats ears are not that big, so I don't think so ... User:Winterflurry/Sig 14:11, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, but the paws are bugging me. maybe make them a bit more, on the ground, instead on the tip parts of the paws? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:16, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups User:Winterflurry/Sig 14:25, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Separate the eyes a bit more. Appledash the light of honor 18:35, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

can you make the tail a little bit fluffier? theyre supposed to be longhaird but theyre honestly barely thicker than the shorthairs. also the haunch looks oddly small, and the eyes maybe should be tilted just a tad so theyre not so totally front facing. the paws should be more on the ground too- the cats are putting their weight on them. HotTeacher69 (talk) 18:39, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Honestly, the tail can be edited if the cat's tail is said to be predominantly more fluffy, like Feathertail. And I'm looking at my cat right now, comparing pictures to a shorthair cat and they're honestly not that much bigger. And the eyes aren't front facing, they're facing down already. User:Winterflurry/Sig 18:51, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the the tail on the shorthair thicker? Also, extend the mouth some more. Curve the <<<< front paw some more near the chest and curve the chest on that side more as well. Extend the haunch just a tad outwards, right now it seems to be in an awkward position in relations to the front of the body. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:29 Tue Sep 8

I actually think the tails could be fluffier on the long-haired, but in general, just a tad bit longer. Remember, what your cat looks like is just one of many many cute and adorable kitties in existence. I also think the lineart could be a tad bit thicker to match the styles of the other blanks. Jayce  ( 01:39, 9/8/2015 )

All of the blanks on this site have lines that are two pixils thick. In some places it appears to have that, but in others it looks like it has either three or one, and you want to make sure not to leave entire black areas, such as the ears. Make one white pixil in the black to break it up. Just a little tidbit of advice from someone who made a blank from scratch and occasionally does pixil work on the side. This is shaping up very nicely and you're doing great! Iveh Yo! 02:20, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the muzzle shape. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:16, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reups QnQ blanks are hard User:Winterflurry/Sig 21:25, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

if the longhairs have ear fur in them, the short ones should too. HotTeacher69 (talk) 11:39, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Waste on the ear on the short hair - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:30, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

reups User:Winterflurry/Sig 13:02, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Echosnout (MC) ~ For Approval omg yas. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 00:04, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

As a RiverClan cat, she needs long fur. Also, blur and lighten the shading a bit. Over all, very nice. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:21, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is fine imo. Shading doesn't have to be super light/super blurred if the artist doesn't want it to be like that. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 00:34 Tue Sep 1

reups changed to long haired blank (Ill get the waste off the tail)❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 03:27, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Bluestar. The shading could definitely be blurred a tad. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:06, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

To be honest, I can't even see the shading. Or it just might be my screen. Appledash the light of honor 04:12, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and shoulder region. Great job, Bramble! She's very pretty lol Template:~xXSpottedgorseXx~/Sig

A lil bit of waste on the tail tip~ 17:22, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

1st. I would say i would of gotten rid of the waste when i uploaded, and second, i think it may be your screen you cant see the shading.. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 20:28, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I didnt see spottehs comment, ill get to that. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 20:50, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

+ shading wont seem to blur, suggestions? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 20:51, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the back paws a little? – Ivy 01:30, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? bcprincess a giant woman 21:04, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

withdrawing Wiki seems to be blocking me from the real world, so ill be gone for a month or two away from wiki.... ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 21:46, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

taking over and therefore re-up Queen Beebs 13:24, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white a bit more? IDK, but maybe the herb color should be smoother? Nice job by the way. bcprincess a giant woman 21:07, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'm struggling to see the shading on the black. Maybe lighten the black a tiiinny bit (just a tiny) and define the shading? This is really beautiful!Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:20, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 01:56, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs- I don't think the entire leg should be pretty much all in shadow. shadows are taking over ooooooh spoopy Jayce  ( 12:50, 9/7/2015 )

re-up Queen Beebs 13:25, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

define shading on the herbs? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:19, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 23:43, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The shading still looks kinda non-existent on the herbs. Jayce  ( 07:23, 9/9/2015 )

note that the last herb is dark green, therefore i can't do much about it or else the second herb color will get washed out, too :C Queen Beebs 18:58, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Harepounce (W) ~ For Approval

Harepounce.warrior When I first made it I rushed so it looks like poo. I'm sorry. ;-; ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:31, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch and neck :) Splook sweet  creature 01:24 Tue Sep 1

Lighten the shading all together. Appledash the light of honor 04:14, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Redone-ish by the former Skiddleybopblitz! Ech. I forgot to lighten. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:13:55 1 Sep 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? User:Winterflurry/Sig 00:48, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry to sound stupid, but all of them or just X amount of them? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:31, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Would you mind defining it on all the legs? – Ivy 20:25, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

And perhaps lighten the front legs? The legs themselves are a significantly darker brown than the other. I understand it's shading, but when you incorporate the comments above, it should look better. Splook sweet  creature 21:04 Wed Sep 2

Reuploaded Posting this before bed so I may have 1,000% more errors than usual. If I forgot my signature then aw crap. --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:13, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and legs. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:16, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's getting kinda difficult for me to lighten the shading without it looking too bad, at least in my eyes. Anyway, is this gonna get declined because I was in Fort Wayne yesterday and this morning/afternoon? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:48, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

i can't see your light source - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:32, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Don't know what to do right at this moment but here is my image of her without the shading blurred. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:23, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should remove the shading on the chest. Your shading seems to be over blurred, actually. Maybe that's causing the problem. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Rainfur (TC) (W) ~ CBA

Rainfur (TC).warrior Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 01:54, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

omg love this, but mabey lighten the shading on the tail Belllastar (talk) 02:39, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 02:57, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the neck and haunch? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:23, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

reups Shading was being stupid so I redid it. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:33, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

lighten shading Belllastar (talk) 00:43, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine imo. Maybe blur the shading a bit more overall? User:Winterflurry/Sig 00:51, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

reups I smudge my shading, not blur it, so I did that instead. That's the most I can do without it looking strange, though Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 01:19, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Belllastar, you should lighten the shading a tad. Also, I see a shadow on the front leg closest to us that seems out of place to me. bcprincess a giant woman 01:28, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading darkness is ok, maybe smudge it on the main body just a tad more? – Ivy 01:37, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I went ahead and lightened it some. But again, I can't smudge it more without it looking strange, sorry V_V I tried, but it's being stubborn. I'll try some more later, maybe. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:39, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a tiiinny bit more? Appledash the light of honor 03:17, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure if I'm getting a sense that she is actually speckled... She looks like she's just got random white streaks and a tabby design tbh. Also, are you still working? User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:45, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the line of shading on the ear closest to us. ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 10:16, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

reups yeah, still working. for the speckles, I'll mess with that in the morning. That's just how they turned out when I smudged them, I'll try redoing them and lowering the rate on my smudge tool or somethin. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:52, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded fixed the speckles and ear shading. Missed Breezeheart's comment last upload, oops. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:33, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful. CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:30, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (TC) (K) ~ For Approval

Rabbitleap (TC).kitThis is acualy the first submission, this is my baby! Belllastar (talk) 02:49, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink a little pinker? BCPrincess73 (talk) 03:05, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

I changed the title of this, for it's supposed to be "under evaluation" as you are still a kit. Can you define the shading on <---- side of her body? Appledash the light of honor 03:13, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Add/define neck shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:11, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:02, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define and/or lighten the eye colour. She looks like she has black eyes. And Belllastar? You did awesome, alot better than me. ~Spottehwobble

Add shading down the right (our right) edge of both front legs, and the tail shading should be on the other side of the tail, if the light is coming from the left. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:51, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Belllastar (talk) 00:04, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:52, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and define the light on the little back paw. There should be at least a bit of light there. Also define the shading under the chin on the neck. User:Winterflurry/Sig 00:53, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

I still don't see any shading on the right side of the right front leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:16, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

and maybe darken the underbelly (area between the two front legs) a tad. Splook sweet  creature 21:02 Wed Sep 2

You'll need to ask someone to rename this to File:Rabbitleap (TC).kit.png. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:27 Thu Sep 3

I renamed this for you. From now on, you'll need to upload over the filename Berry gave you. Jayce  ( 22:50, 9/3/2015 )

You know what you are doing, i'll promote you into an apprentice. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, though? User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:41, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

YES I just need CBA Belllastar (talk) 12:23, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

If you reuploaded, you'll need to comment and say you did so. I think there should be neck shading with this source... I don't seem to see any? Jayce  ( 12:53, 9/7/2015 )

Lighten the shading too, please ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:18, September 7, 2015 (UTC) re ups how do you lighten shading

Houndstar (L) ~ For Approval

Houndstar.leader first leader! And the name stumps me.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:31, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the texture like... more thicker? idk if that's the word. rn it looks kinda like a few lines running down his pelt. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:10, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Err... I don't really understand what you mean. Second opinion?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:41, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

The texture (as seen on the white) seems like drawn straight lines rather than actual fur-representing lines. Maybe draw more of the "lines" and smudge/blur them? User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:04, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think the texture kinda fades out on the lighter parts?? But yeah, I do agree with Burnt on this. Also, texture on the leaders isn't always the easiest thing on the planet. Jayce  ( 11:59, 9/1/2015 )

Blur the brown against the white a little more, and add shading to the left haunch. ~Spottehwobble

I can't really tell what your light source is for this. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:53, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Is that better or do I need to redo the texture?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 08:29, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Are you making your texture kinda "spot-like"?? Or like...small lines? Because that's not texture and just looks like tiny lines. I'm not sure who ever told you that was okay, because it's not... Jayce  ( 08:40, 9/2/2015 )

Blur the earpink some more User:Winterflurry/Sig 12:57, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

tbh the texture is very light, and it would be almost the same image without it. i'm not telling you to remove it, i'm just saying that if you choose to do so, the image would still look fine. Smooth out the shading on the underbelly. Splook sweet  creature 21:00 Wed Sep 2

Tone down the highlights a bit. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:47, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I'll tone down the highlights in the next upload.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:33, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink more? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:16, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:46, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:57, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I don't think the texture follows the flow of the fur, but mainly on the haunch. It appears to be going <-- to -->, when it should probably be going up and down.. it doesn't match the rest of the texture on the image. Jayce  ( 02:10, 9/5/2015 )

I also zoomed in on the image, and that is not texture. The lines are thick and shouldn't be like that. I'm sorry, but they should be thinner lines, and examples are scattered throughout the wiki on the various images. If you're not sure how to make texture how others have done it, then ask. As your texture is now, it's much too thick and doesn't flow with the fur very well at all. I'm sorry if this is rude, but as I've had comments like this told to me before, I figure that this is what the approval page is for- improvement. Jayce  ( 02:14, 9/5/2015 )

Reupload the texture is becoming too stressful for me so I'm dropping it for now.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldnt there be shading on the left haunch?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 10:14, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Don't think so. The light is coming from the left side, and if the haunch was completely visible that part still wouldn't have any shading.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 21:36, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

It does look a bit odd totally unshaded though. Could you add just a tiny line of shading by the leg just so it doesn't look flat? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 11:12 Tue Sep 8

I don't think it should be totally in light. o.o I believe it's kinda like the warrior images- unless your cat is sitting awkwardly or something like that, there should be some shadow. Not much, though. Jayce  ( 11:32, 9/8/2015 )

Reupload I stared at it for a while and it does seem odd. Much better now.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 21:45, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Gorgeous. Could you maybe blur the leg shading some more? he looks like a basset hound maybe that's where he got his name Appledash the light of honor 11:32, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudberry (TC) (Medicine) ~ For Approval

File:Cloudberry.png I tried. Estimate, please, I want to be useful. I made "fur" light and shade. I took a flattened muzzle at Yellowfang. ✨ShineStar✨ 09:52, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but you need to reserve this on the reservation table on the main page first. Everything that gets posted here should be reserved first. Until then, I'll need to decline this image. Feel free to repost (after this has been archived and you've properly reserved the image). If you don't know how to do so, please ask, and one of us will be able to help you. =D Jayce  ( 10:06, 9/4/2015 )

How to make it? ✨ShineStar✨ 10:54, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I make it! ✨ShineStar✨ 11:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading? Nice <3 - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:55, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Yes :) It is pleasant to you? It is possible to add? ✨ShineStar✨ 08:13, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I made shadows shorter. ✨ShineStar✨ 08:17, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the legs a little bit? I'm glad to see you found out how to reserve the image. =) Jayce  ( 08:28, 9/5/2015 )

Can you smooth out the shading a tad? Also, this file needs to be re-named Cloudberry (TC).mc.png – Ivy 14:25, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I completely changed a treatment of light and shade and I changed the name. ✨ShineStar✨ 11:43, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights some. Canadia~ Sirius is hiding... 16:00, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean and how to make it? ✨ShineStar✨ 08:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

New version! I made (sorry, my english is bad =) ) texture of long fur. ✨ShineStar✨ 16:32, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading more please ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 16:34, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Since you had asked for like, an explanation: do you see how on the other images on here, the shading is super smooth (for lack a better word) and you can't really see the transition from base color to shading? It's just shading? Blur the shading so it's like that. Also: your English is perfectly fine, don't worry. Canadia~ Sirius is hiding... 21:07, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

I washed away as much as possible. I tried in the Gimp. Also, i ise Translate. ✨ShineStar✨ 09:17, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading? It seems like it was just paint-brushed onto her in big grey blobs. If you want some help with this, you are always welcome to ask a member =) User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:03, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The transition from pelt colour to shading's a bit abrupt, you should blur it some. Gaussian Blur helps a lot :3 Also, the shading on the legs should be a little more, uh, defined. :3 ~Autumn THROUGH FORTUNE AND FLAME WE FALL 13:26, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Heronwing (TC) (W) ~ For Approval

Heronwing (TC).warriorMeh. Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 15:35, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the stripes - I can barely see them Queen Beebs 15:41, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading as well Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 17:59, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

stripes dont have to be super defined, as long as you can tell theyre there its fine. but define the earpink just a tad? Nubface (talk) 18:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'm actually having trouble making the stripes out, so a little definition wouldn't hurt. Jayce  ( 05:33, 9/5/2015 )

Re-uploaded ~ Defined all stuff. c: Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 08:44, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you darken the tail shading a tiny bit? This is adorable, btw. ^.^ Jayce  ( 09:32, 9/5/2015 )

Re-uploaded ~ :3 Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 13:39, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly lighten/raise the opacity of the earpink just a tad please? If you believe it's fine, then feel free to disregard me. I don't feel like going into a full blown argument over the shade if others disagree.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 10:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

i think the earpink is fine tbh ^^ — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:43, 09/8/2015

I can barely make out the earpink from the fur. Could you either make it more saturated and pink, or make it lighter? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:33, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Flashnose (Q) ~ For Approval

Flashnose.queen <shrieks> WHAT HAVE I DONEEEEEEEEE???????????? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:24, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! Define the light source on the head? bcprincess a giant woman 00:30, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Nice job matching the pattern! This is really pretty. Do you want the file for colors/stripes? The stripe along the spine is broken into three (only two are visible on the warrior) and there's several different colors in the stripes, but it might be easiest for you to see for yourself. Rainlegs 00:36, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a few ticks? I'm having trouble seeing the patterns under the shading. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:08, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks~ and the file helped me match the warrior better. ^^ - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:17, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the belly shading just a tad, please.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 10:10, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:39, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the tail shading just a bit. Splook sweet  creature 15:32 Mon Sep 7

Re-uploaded GIMP's been frigging' irritating me on my mac so excuse any weird differences - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:08, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

GIMP is irritating all together to be quite honest. Anyways can you lighten the shading on the head and tailtip? This is awesome! Appledash the light of honor 11:31, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Rooktail (W) ~ For Approval

Rooktail.warrior idk —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:02, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a little? Nice job. bcprincess a giant woman 22:13, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten fur a little bit I can't see the linart

Reuploaded I was told that the color is fine, so I'd rather not. I did define the shading, though. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 23:44, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. I'm sorry, but now I'm seeing the blocky shading that should rot. If you're getting this, then maybe you should lighten the base.. or the shading. Your choice. Jayce  ( 02:37, 9/8/2015 )

Beech (Ro) - For Approval

Beech.rogue Pretty happy with this. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:11, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

If you could, define the tail shading? User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:09, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you soften the shading on the shoulder and thigh, please? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:57 Sun Sep 6

can you define the shading everywhere? i cant really see it. HotTeacher69 (talk) 21:14, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think the shading's a little too dark now, but I wasn't sure how it was going to show up on my laptop screen. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:56, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the head. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:17, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Red Claw (Ro) - For Approval

Red Claw.rogue aka s'more User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:46, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

I think he should be a tad bit redder- auburn is reddish-brown, so maybe use a color around Pinestar's? Jayce  ( 06:20, 9/6/2015 )

Re-uploaded User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:08, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

I think it should be much, much redder, and more saturated, not so gray. Auburn is a deep, rich red-brown color. Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:18, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:33, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

That's still way too gray. This is the kind of auburn color I'm talking about: A very deep red-brown. Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:22, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Actually, auburn is simply reddish brown, or in other words, russet. it can be pale, dark or whatever shade. I made it redder. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:32, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, I'm gonna butt in here and say that auburn is usually a medium color to darker coloring of reddish-brown. Source: my sister who is a licensed cosmetologist and actually works with colors. Can you darken the pale parts or tweak them? Every time I see this, it keeps looking like you're not tweaking the base because all I can focus on is the pale parts and they kinda stand out a bit... Jayce  ( 21:21, 9/7/2015 )

Re-uploaded. I tried, but honestly this is starting to look a little neon on my macbook... User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:01, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

I still say it's not saturated enough, it still looks too gray-ish, but I'll shut up if no one else agrees. I just think auburn is supposed to be a really rich, deep color. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:30, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

No, Jayie, you're right. Also, is he supposed to be a tabby? I can't see the stripes at all over what appears to be a texture. Jayce  ( 01:34, 9/9/2015 )

Re--uploaded The base is literally neon red right now :/ Also, according to the oxford dictionary, auburn is simply red-brown, not dark red or anything like that. I tweaked this and hopefully it looks better. User:Burntclaw/Sig 01:38, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see stripes either tbh. Appledash the light of honor 01:41, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's something wrong with your screen, because this doesn't look neon red at all. And according to other websites: Auburn hair ranges in shades from medium to dark. Just because it's for a hair color doesn't make it different. Jayce  ( 01:42, 9/9/2015 )

I think the problem is that you're making the base more saturated, but not the stripes, pale parts, and texture. We can barely see the base colors under the markings, so if the markings aren't more saturated, almost none of the cat looks more saturated. Saturate the other layers? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re--uploaded I used the Oxford dictionary for this one- It just simply states reddish brown. I now saturated everything and hopefully this looks better. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:31, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

As I said before: I still can't see the stripes. What are the stripes, and what is the texture? It's not because of the colors or anything- I just can't make out the difference. Are they supposed to be faint stripes...? Jayce  ( 05:33, 9/9/2015 )

Okay, I'm sorry, I really don't mean to be rude or anything, but I can barely tell the difference between this update and before you started trying to saturate it. It still looks far too gray. Here's what I'm thinking of in terms of saturation, redness, and color: It doesn't have to be exact, of course, but it should be that kind of deep, rich red-brown. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:16, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Now the base is literally neon red. And isn't the shade artists choice? I don't have to make it that dark if I don't want to- a shade wasn't even specified and I went by with an official dictionary's definition, which simply states red-brown, not dark or deep or rich or anything like that. And BTW I did tweak it after every comment. :/ And the "stripes"- they are somewhat part of the texture and somewhat not stripes? If that made sense. =P They aren't really there to make him look striped, they are there to help with the texture. I defined them as well. User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:09, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Deep doesn't mean dark. It means rich in color. Deep isn't quite a shade as it is a color. Honestly, the shade itself is artist's choice, but if it doesn't work, then it doesn't work. And I'm still not seeing a difference with the texture and the stripes... or stripped parts, or whatever they may be. Jayce  ( 07:12, 9/9/2015 )

Although if he's red-brown... he shouldn't have stripes. Unless we're making all red-brown cats tabbies now???? There should be a cite for him being called a tabby on his page before stripes can be added. Auburn is red-brown, not orange/ginger. Jayce  ( 07:14, 9/9/2015 )

You said so yourself that adding stripes to russets is optional? But I can remove it anytime though.... User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:53, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

That's because idiot me was thinking it was ginger, until I did research. Both russet and auburn are red-brown, not ginger. Jayce  ( 09:19, 9/9/2015 )

Also, please point out where I said that, because I don't know??? Me asking if he had stripes on here doesn't mean it's optional...if you're taking something I said a long time ago from an ancient archive, please don't do that. Jayce  ( 09:29, 9/9/2015 )

Re-uploaded It's not ancient =P It was when I was a SW... And yeah I just remember, I wasn't trying to dig out stuff, here User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:35, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I said fox-red was, not russet or auburn. (mind you, I said I thought it was, not that I was 100% certain) Fox-red is a shade of ginger, (foxes look orange and I have never ever ever seen a literal red fox and all searches for "red fox" bring me to an orange-ish coloring) or at least that's what I was told, which is why Pinestar's one alt has stripes. Jayce  ( 09:40, 9/9/2015 )

Much better. :) But I think it could still be more saturated, at the risk of sounding like a broken record. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:52, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re--uploaded Holy shit this looks insanely ugly right now compared to how it was before >.> User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:15, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Willow Tail (R) ~ For Approval

Willow Tail.rogue Yo User:Winterflurry/Sig 01:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit, and did you smudge these ones? They don't appear to be smudged on the kit. Jayce  ( 01:18, 9/7/2015 )

i think theyre smudged minimally on the kit or something similar, but i think these stripes could be a bit darker to match better. HotTeacher69 (talk) 08:26, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups User:Winterflurry/Sig 14:07, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Appledash the light of honor 17:50, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups User:Winterflurry/Sig 18:59, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you give the shading some shape? I can hardly see it on the paws or face, and it seems to randomly appear in the middle of her body and on her hind legs. Appledash the light of honor 11:30, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the shape just fine but maybe define the shading on the head and front legs Storm 20:29, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Stagleap (GC) (W) ~ For Approval

Stagleap (GC).warrior am I allowed to post this now (I believe there's no two week penalty or whatever for this right?) Redid it because my computer got taken away by my parents... This is a result of school computer's Photoshop (love the blur tool) and there's no way for me to match the old complicated pattern with the school's mouse and a program I'm not that familiar with. shrug Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~07:46,9/7/2015

Nah, you're good. I just wanted you to see the importance of remembering the date. The only time the two week rule comes into play is for new images when they're declined for being up for a month. Jayce  ( 07:49, 9/7/2015 )

where es tu old version >:o maybe blur/smudge the ear pink a bit, or dull it down? it looks a tad neon. User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:58, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Made it more red :) (and lowered the opacity) Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~07:32,9/9/2015

Define the shading por favore. This is shaping up beautifully - you really outdid yourself with this! Appledash the light of honor 11:29, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Swallow (Ro) - For Approval

Swallow.rogue – Ivy 13:54, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

yoo this is hot. lighten the shading on the tail + ear closest to us a few ticks. Splook sweet  creature 18:28 Mon Sep 7

Re-uploaded – Ivy 21:38, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty. :) Darken the shading on the belly, shoulder, and hip? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:59, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Actually the hip is fine, ignore me, just the shoulder and belly. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:00, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! – Ivy 20:04, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Daisytoe (W) ~ For Approval

Daisytoe.warrior Sorry Appledash, I totally butchered your amazing pattern, lol. --bcprincess a giant woman 14:03, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the main body shading and define the shading on the legs. – Ivy 14:07, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups I'll remove the waste next upload. bcprincess a giant woman 14:21, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the highlights/light parts on the chest and haunch. Cute! Splook sweet  creature 15:29 Mon Sep 7

Re-ups Better? bcprincess a giant woman 16:49, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

No, this is awesome! Define the shading - and do you want the file? Appledash the light of honor 17:26, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups No, thanks, I don't need the file. I completely re-did the shading, so it may need to be lightened/defined/blurred/whatever. Also, I'll get that waste next time. bcprincess a giant woman 00:18, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on the white? She looks really gray. And please blur it some more. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:32 Tue Sep 8

Re-ups bcprincess a giant woman 02:28, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is still making the white look too gray. If you hold your finger up to the highlights on the chest and haunch, you can see that the shaded part is almost the same color as the tail. Splook sweet  creature 22:30 Tue Sep 8

Re-ups Lightened shading, added highlights. bcprincess a giant woman 00:36, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten it just about ten more ticks? And possibly smooth it out more Storm 20:30, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Mistpelt (E) - For Approval

Mistpelt.elder yay granny cat Splook sweet  creature 16:37 Mon Sep 7

Omg that's so pretty! (my texture icks) :o Mind defining the tail shading? Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~02:15,9/8/2015

This is amazing! Can you define the shading all together please? Appledash the light of honor 10:00, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. thanks <3 Splook sweet  creature 22:29 Tue Sep 8

There seems to ah...Be a red triangle in that corner there :p User:Winterflurry/Sig 23:13, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded, ah sorry. waste. Splook sweet  creature 23:24 Tue Sep 8

Spotted Fur (Ro) - For Approval

Spotted Fur.rogueI dun like this :p Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:18, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Nice job. Maybe make him a bit more golden, as, to me, he looks more light brown. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:37, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think he gets a rogue image?? Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~02:13,9/8/2015

He has a site on his page. bcprincess a giant woman 02:29, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Spotted Fur was a former rogue, just like the cats from Slash's group, Wind Runner, Gorse Fur, ect. He will also get an Early Settler image. Jayce  ( 02:35, 9/8/2015 )

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:28, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on his paws? Appledash the light of honor 11:28, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 15:34, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Silver Stripe (Ki) - CBA

Silver Stripe.kit What a cute little mew ^^ I thought she was adorable in PoS and just had to do her image <3 Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 03:36, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

She is amazingly cute here :33 Maybe define earpink a little? XD And lighter shading would be great too~ But don't take my opinions too seriously, I'm shtill a kit :3 Autumnbright (talk) 09:31, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Autumn, everyone's options are equal in PCA- just because you are a kit doesn't mean your comments are regarded as useless. Your comments will (should) be taken as seriously as everyone else's. =) User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:56, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, Burntclaw! :D Good to know. Alshoo, to clarify, I think shading should be a little lighter on her face and right shoulder. :3 Autumnbright (talk) 10:51, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you please add the blue eyes as Kate confirmed it on her blog? --Dewsplash (talk) 13:40, September 8, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash 13:40, September, 8, 2015

reup Thanks Autumn ^^ I changed the eye color and lightened the shading a few ticks. I apologize ahead of time if I get stubborn about lightening it again if requested... I am barely able to see it on my screen as of this last edit lol. And I just realized that you also requested I define the earpink. I'll get that on the next upload >.<; It's still a little early here and I've been studying for a good few hours  Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 13:48, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

reup Brightened her earpink. When I turned off the shading layers I actually realized the color itself made it hard to see. Hopefully this helped ^^ Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 18:18, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce  ( 12:33, 9/9/2015 )

Fallowsong (W) ~ For Approval

Fallowsong.warriorUh, so here is Fallowsong. I'm a kit for PCA rn and wanted to contribute something so here :D

Kind-of mottled light brown; please tell me if I should remove the mottles. 

Autumnbright (talk) 06:10, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This needs to match the queen image. Also, this should say for evaluation. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:43, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I matched the queen image. Thanks for rectifying errors ^.^ By the way, I uploaded another image because the old one didn't have the right name. Autumnbright (talk) 07:04, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This is really nice! Maybe blur the shading a bit? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:08 Tue Sep 8

Re-upload: Blurred shading a tad; should I decrease opacity? Autumnbright (talk) 09:09, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I think so. Appledash the light of honor 09:38, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Please darken and blur it more, add some depth, too. This is nice :) User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:57, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I added highlights and darkened shading. Tell me if it needs more blurrin', I had to redo shading so idk XD Thank you for all the encouragement so far, it means so much to me! Autumnbright (talk) 10:14, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and possibly add more shading at the haunch? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:32, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I'm not very happy with the shading/highlights balance. T T Autumnbright (talk) 10:49, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome! Can you lighten the shading a tinyy bit on the midriff? Appledash the light of honor 10:54, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink seems to be over blurred. Define it? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:27, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I couldn't really do anything about the midriff shading, so any tips? I corrected earpink, its layer was deleted for some reason XD Autumnbright (talk) 11:41, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Another Re-upload: Actually, I think I figured out the lightenation (I coined a word hehe) thing for the midriff shading. Is that better? Autumnbright (talk) 11:53, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please? And since you know what you're doing here, I'll promote you into an apprentice. Now the heading can say "for approval". =) User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:15, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Defined tail shading and edited overall highlights/shadey. I feel as if the tail looks dual-coloured now tho XD And thank youuu, Burntclaw :D Autumnbright (talk) 12:25, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-reupload: Blended tail shading a bit because it was bothering me XD Autumnbright (talk) 12:35, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the highlight on the haunch and the shading next to it? bcprincess a giant woman 14:00, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload: I'm sorry if the blur isn't apparent - I'm afraid it might be too undefined if I blur it too much. ~Autumn THROUGH FORTUNE AND FLAME WE FALL 14:39, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Much better! Maybe lighten the shading a little on the neck and tail? bcprincess a giant woman 16:51, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the light at the base of the tail. – Ivy 20:55, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Defined/lightened shading, redid shading/highlights on the tail :3 --~Autumn THROUGH FORTUNE AND FLAME WE FALL 10:49, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch seems a little blotchy. Try adding some more and smoothing it out. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:04, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Is it okay if you elaborate? I really can't see the blotches you're talking about. Also, when I tried to add shading, it just made everything look, uh, uneven. Any tips? ~Autumn THROUGH FORTUNE AND FLAME WE FALL 13:43, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Hailstar (D) - For Approval

Hailstar.deputy alright...GIMP makes him look a lot more blurred than he actualy is, I'm going to fix that right now as we speak. Appledash the light of honor 20:17, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere (Unless that's part of the blur thing you mentioned) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:19, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 20:25, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

define shading even more; i can barely tell it's got any shading — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:39, 09/8/2015

Re-uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 20:41, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the earpink. – Ivy 20:54, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 21:14, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want the file? Also, the shading is leaking everywhere, and he seems too dark... User:Burntclaw/Sig 23:24, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Burntclaw, I'd love the file. Sorry you guys, this definitely isn't my best at all, I've just been a little under the weather. Appledash the light of honor 00:02, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Kill me. Appledash the light of honor 02:14, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? nice. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:03, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Half Moon (Star) - For Approval

Half my beautiful child — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:22, 09/8/2015

...why does she get one of these? shes not in starclan. HotTeacher69 (talk) 20:27, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

jayce told me she got one (and reserved her for me, since i was on mobile / unable to access a comp, bless his soul) so ask him bc i honestly do not know?? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:35, 09/8/2015

She's seen in StarClan at the end of PoS, therefore she gets one User:Winterflurry/Sig 22:07, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading above her right cheek. Appledash the light of honor 01:40, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

i told icy this in chat but: theats her cheekbone, it's in the light; so it's like not supposed to be blurred; its actually a bit overblurred for my tastes. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 01:54, 09/9/2015

That's...actually quite a bit too high to be her cheekbone... User:Winterflurry/Sig 13:12, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah i think winter is right. Feel your face. Is your cheekbone on your forehead? No its right to the side and below the eye. And yes i know its a cat and humans bonrs are different but do you really think a cats cheek is that high? Storm 20:33, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Raven Pelt (Ro) ~ For Approval

Raven Pelt.rogue I have been waiting my whole life to use this image. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:26 Tue Sep 8

If you can't see it, click here. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:28 Tue Sep 8

Shouldn't the file be named File:Raven Pelt.rogue.png? As for the image, could you define the shading on the head and tail please? User:Winterflurry/Sig 21:30, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yes... it should. My computer must have corrected it to Ravenpelt. Idek how to rename it so please help. And yes I will define the shading. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:05 Wed Sep 9

Renamed. You can't rename it, but I can. 8D Jayce  ( 01:09, 9/9/2015 )

Slate (Q) ~ For Approval

Slate.queenknew she would be Gray Wing's mate!  All colors from the rogue. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:19, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

the earpink seems to extend a bit far out, and can you maybe dull the scar in the places its in shadow? HotTeacher69 (talk) 23:08, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:14, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Idk, but can you maybe pick a better color fora black cat's earpink color? Colorpick from a picture of a black cat, but if not then that's fine. Appledash the light of honor 01:35, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The texture on her other images appear to be denser. This looks.. a bit sparse compared to her other images. Jayce  ( 01:37, 9/9/2015 )

Reuploaded. The earpink is the same as on the rogue image. Also, she's dark gray, not black. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 04:04, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

idk the eyes seem to be multicolored. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:27, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I presume the eye colors are from the other images, but I think they could be shifted around so they don't look as Fox said. Jayce  ( 08:11, 9/9/2015 )

Okay I know you color picked from her other images, but her ear pink and scar honestly look too bright for a dark coloured cat. They could be toned down a bit. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:28, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:24, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Black Ear (Ki) ~ For Approval

Black Ear.kit i wanna rock n roll all night (and party every day) HotTeacher69 (talk) 23:01, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Needs to be thick furred as that's what Kate mentioned on her blog.--Dewsplash (talk) 23:04, September 8, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash 23:04, September, 24, 2015

Thick-furred is not long-furred. Jayce  ( 23:06, 9/8/2015 )

Smooth the shading, especially on the belly and neck? bcprincess a giant woman 00:24, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

This isn't required of course, but I would think it would make sense for a cat named Black Ear to have a black ear. Just a suggestion. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:28, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks a little red. Do you mind fixing that? Appledash the light of honor 01:34, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

It doesn't need fixing, Icy. It's probably a tint, which is allowed here. Jayce  ( 01:35, 9/9/2015 )

reuploaded yeah i used dark red to shade. and i gave him a half black ear. HotTeacher69 (talk) 10:29, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading just a tiny bit? Jayce  ( 10:32, 9/9/2015 )

re-uploaded HotTeacher69 (talk) 12:39, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

One-eye (kit) - For Evaluation

File:One-eye (kit).png

This is my first one so.. yeah. And sorry if I messed anything up.

~xXPatchFeatherXx~ 01:50, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the white background? bcprincess a giant woman 01:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but how do I do that?

~xXPatchFeatherXx~ 01:50, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Do you use Photoshop? I don't know anything else. bcprincess a giant woman 02:09, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

No I don't use it.

~xXPatchFeatherXx~ 04:17, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

This appears to be uploaded as a .jpg file. As a result, there will be a white background. Try converting it to a png. Also, what program do you use? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:20, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I tried to change it from jpg to png, but it wouldn't work. I use GIMP

~xXPatchFeatherXx~ 04:39, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

File ==> Export ==> PNG. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:26, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading seems a little pixelated, is that intended for mottling or something? Also, if the white background isn't budging after PNG-fication, select the white background with the Wand tool and, um, delete the selection. Make sure the tolerance is set so that the charart isn't selected~ Blur the earpink a bit too. This is nice, but there's always room for improvement :D ~Autumn THROUGH FORTUNE AND FLAME WE FALL 10:53, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded I fixed the shading, now how do I delete the white? there's no delete button that I can see.

~xXPatchFeatherXx~ 14:48, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Select the white background with the wand tool and tap 'delete' - should do the trick Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:46, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Where's the wand tool?

~xXPatchFeatherXx~ 16:35, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

In GIMP (what you use, right?) it's one of the tools in the toolbox, towards the top of it - it looks like a magic wand and is called "Fuzzy Select Tool". As for the image can you define the shading a tad? Very pretty! – Ivy 20:25, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Rockfall (W) - For Approval

Rockfall.warrior His name, though. Somehow, Doestar knew what the fate of a future RiverClan deputy would be. I also think the shading is leaking on the haunch, so don't comment on that, nor the lack of shading on --> ear with the ear pink. I'm going to tweak those once I've gotten a bit of sleep. Jayce  ( 08:10, 9/9/2015 )

Could u add shading depth? Idk it looks a tad flat - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:56, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce  ( 11:57, 9/9/2015 )

Define the shading on the front legs and tail a tad? User:Winterflurry/Sig 13:15, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Tiny Branch (Ki) ~ For Approval

Tiny Branch.kit tiny kit is cute Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

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