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Stagleap (GC) (Star) ~ For Approval

File:Stagleap (GC).star.png I tried to match it. I really did. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 14:37 Sat Dec 19

Define the shading and make the earpink larger. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 14:55, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thicker on the warrior. —Ivy ☆ 14:59, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Where the light is coming from? Also stripes... they shouldn't be horizontal. They should be perpendicular to his back, directed towards belly. Silvertwig 15:02, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

The source is over -->, and a bit downwards. To me the shading seems very dark... Could I have a second opinion on that? (I'll fix the stripes and earpink soon) bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 20:51 Sat Dec 19

Maybe not necessarily darkened but I think it could be thickened. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 21:36 Sat Dec 19

Smooth out the shading by whatever means you pick; I don't care if you smudge or blur it, tbh. —Jayce(04:39, 12/20/2015)

The stripes on the warrior are going in one direction; towards the stomach. Could you tweak it so the stripes run towards the belly? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ · ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ ★ 12:46, December 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thickened and reorientated stripes, defined and smudged shading, and enlarged earpink. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 22:27 Mon Dec 21

The earpink should be enlarged more. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 04:45 Tue Dec 22

That's the earpink style I'm using, it's supposed to be small. It's very similarly sized on the warrior image. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 19:02 Tue Dec 22

earpink size and shape doesnt have to match. I think it should be enlarged too. ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 16:03, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *holds up hands in defeat* I've been outvoted. More realistic this way anyway. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 4:04 Thu Dec 24

The way your shading is it seems like there's blurred lineart and the light source isn't exactly realistic. Could you switch the shading down near the paws and expand it some more? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 15:08, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

this is so osm!

The stripes don't seem to match the warrior very well. On the warrior, the stripes are kind of broken up and are arranged in a more orderly pattern. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:22,12/26/2015

The stripes are more long and horizontal (to the body) and there aren't many Ys. They are also denser I think. Do you need the file? ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (11:06,12/26/2015)

Re-uploaded Yes, please, I would like the file. My email is butterflycupcakeprincess@gmail.com. I'm not really seeing what you mean about the shading looking like blurred lineart, Appledash, and I can't switch the shading on the paws. The light is from the --> of the paws. Could you explain what you mean? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 2:26 Mon Dec 28

I actually realized I don't have the file on this computer... I got it done at school which means I can't get it until someday in January. But I can tell you that I did the stripes with a 2px or 3px brush (depends on the detailed-ness) and smudged along the direction of the stripes with a 2px brush. I hope that helps. The stripes are also more like "()" shapes rather than just thick lines. ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (04:15,12/28/2015)

Re-uploaded Redid stripes and shading. It still doesn't look right. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 16:27 Mon Dec 28

Add some more stripes on the tail to match the warrior. You're doing great! — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ · ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ ★ 16:37, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! There are the same number of stripes on the warrior's tail, the blank is simply smaller. I can make them bigger, if you think that's a good idea. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 17:16 Mon Dec 28

Sounds good to me. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 17:25, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thickened stripes. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 18:24 Mon Dec 28

Define the earpink. —Ivy ☆ 19:16, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 2:32 Tue Dec 29

I really love this shading you have now! So I managed to actually did the file out in google drive (might have chucked it after getting it done ages ago) so the file should be sent to your email now^^ ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (03:40,12/29/2015)

Re-uploaded Thanks! Matched the colors from the file. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 15:04 Tue Dec 29

Spider Paw (Ki) ~ For Approval

❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:10, December 22, 2015 (UTC

Is there a way you can represent his extra toe? --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 18:59, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I tried, but with the size of the paw it's near impossible, sorry. It just looked silly. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:23, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine don't worry --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 23:20, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Instead of a lineart change, maybe try shaping the toes with shading? That way, it would be easier to define that extra toe feature. I'm sure you could ask jayie for tips, considering she does that on a majority of her chararts.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:48, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

I've tried doing what Jayie does with the toes before, but that ended in disaster. Is it really necessary? Besides, the early settler's extra toe is on the left side of the (our) left paw - on this blank, with the paw angle, it's going to look too awkward. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 00:00, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

whiskers and such weren't edited on featherwhisker and such because there was no lineart for it, I think the same applies here. (to the toes obviously) david ^🌈 00:01, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

If there's no lineart, then it's not necessary unless you're feeling up to it. If you've already tried and couldn't get anywhere, then it's fine as it is. We didn't add anything to Featherwhisker's kit, so we can use the same logic here. —Jayce(02:01, 12/24/2015)

Okay I've been sitting at my computer for the last hour trying to do something with that toe, but nothing's working out, so I don't think I can do anything with it. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:38, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, please. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:15,12/26/2015

This is awesome! Maybe you could sharpen the ear-pink? White Storm is back! 02:43, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 15:59, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

Mouse (MFV) (Rogue) - For Evaluation

File:Mouse (MFV).rouge.pngThis is my first character art! I know it probably needs work.

--Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 15:16, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I renamed the file for you. Make sure to upload it under Mouse (MFV).rogue.png whenever you do changes. Also, define the shading and make the graying muzzle more visible. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 15:39, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload fixed shading and added grading muzzle

Define shading depth and remove the waste(on his back) Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 16:05, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload cleaned up lineart and attempted to define shading depth.

Define the shading on the legs,and i think you could darken it a bit Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 17:30, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Don't forget to sign your signature. Blur the transition from highlight to pelt, and add some more depth to the shading as well. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 17:37 Tue Dec 22

'Reupload ' I cleaned it up a bit --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 18:31, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out here http://www.ezimba.com/work/151223C/ezimba11233719670500.png and define tail shading Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 18:43, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I fixed what was said. --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 18:55, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define light on the legs? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 19:04 Tue Dec 22

Reupload I defined the light on the legs but if I did it any lighter it would not be brown. --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 23:49, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the light could be defined more on the legs. Also, blur the main body shading. —Ivy ☆ 22:59, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload added more light to legs and blurred body --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 23:49, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images, please. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:55,12/23/2015

Sorry I never knew --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 05:17, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some light to the back leg furthest away from us? ❄ Blossomstream^{White Christmas} 05:21, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't meant to be any? --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 05:31, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

This looks really nice! Could you define the shading on the tail a little? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 05:23 Wed Dec 23

Reupload defined shading, changed to full size and added some light to backleg --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 05:37, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Nice! Add light to the leg furthest away from us. User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:11, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload fixed light issue with back leg--Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 06:44, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

the shading looks over blurred. Also, define the shading on the legs closest to us a blur it slightly more on the ones farthest from us. the tail shading could be smoothed out as well. ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 15:58, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I defined shading but I don't see how it is over blurred. --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 17:16, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a lot more. Shine like the Sun ^{Stars in the Sky}

Reupload tried to smooth it but if I smooth it out to much I lose the shading. --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 11:13, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

Please reupload under File:Mouse (MFV).rogue.png. This is the only file that can be used once it gets approved, and you were already asked once about using the proper file name. —Jayce(21:30, 12/25/2015)

Reupload I apologise but I made a mistake no need to get angry, I'm new. --Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 21:48, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not angry. I'm just telling you that you were already asked before about the proper file name. Define the shading too. —Jayce(22:27, 12/25/2015)

Reupload defined shading Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 13:13, December 26, 2015 (UTC)

Velvet, please don't re-upload your image under any name except File:Mouse (MFV).rogue.png. Define the shading a bit more. —Ivy ☆ 14:07, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload fixed naming issue ( sorry my bad I didn't even think) and I redid the whole image in gimp on my computer instead of the app I was using on my ipad. Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 20:40, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

Needlepaw (A) ~ For Approval

File:Needlepaw.apprentice.png i'll probably alter that shading later david ^🌈 22:39, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded tweaked it david ^🌈 22:53, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the chest shading? User:Burntclaw/Sig 01:56, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded david ^🌈 17:19, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 02:36, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

withdrawing david ^🌈 23:01, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I took over so uh I don't know if I need to archive it or not. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 23:55, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. —Ivy ☆ 00:14, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Um I don't know if it's just my computer but it looks dark grey not silver Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 00:29, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

OMG!!!!!! I WISH I COULD DO HIS!!!!

I think I'll wait for another opinion on the color. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 04:00, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I know there's leaking shading and I'll fix that in the next upload. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 04:07, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 04:46 Mon Dec 28

Re-uploaded: I'll probably redo the shading ... I don't know what color to use to shade this godforsaken cat. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 05:58, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Velvetmoon, she looks too dark and too blue to be silver. Not only that, if that is texture, it's making her look mottled, when she isn't meant to be. Please lighten her and give her a more grey tint. User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:54, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

It looks silvery underneath the texture. Maybe lighten the opacity on the texture a little bit, or redo it to where it blends in with the fur color? Silver with dark gray texture can be kinda hard to work with. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 08:01 Mon Dec 28

Re-uploaded: Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 08:01, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking along the underbelly and chin. —Ivy ☆ 15:02, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

I can't tell there's a white chest. Also, the texture looks like mottled. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:32,12/29/2015

Add more light to the tail. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:44, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

Red Claw (ES) - CBA

All colors from the loner and rogue. —Jayce(03:13, 12/24/2015)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:20, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Again, I'm not in PCA so you might not want to take my word for it, but the shadow for the neck seems a bit too dark... Also, I don't know if it's just me, but there seems to be some odd bit of extra lineart to the very left of where the chin and body meet. 🏵️ Maple 🏵️ 17:13, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Remember to change the title when you interrupt a CBA. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:38, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It wasn't lineart, it was harder-edged shading. —Jayce(23:01, 12/27/2015)

Re-CBA? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:31,12/29/2015

Robinwing (Star) - CBA

Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 15:04, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a bit? —Jayce(17:05, 12/25/2015)

with the eye style you're going for, I think the white that surrounds a cat eye would probably be visible. your choice though. david ^🌈 17:17, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 18:49, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

the eyes look strange can u fix that

no, they don't. and leave a signature when you comment. david ^🌈 06:02, December 26, 2015 (UTC)

how do u do that???---coffeelover

To sign, place 4 "~"s after you comment. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:17,12/26/2015

Could you smooth out the transition from shading to pelt a little more? This looks lovely. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 08:18 Sat Dec 26

Could you add some depth to the face? You've made her look so beautiful. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ · ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ ★ 14:50, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks c: Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 15:33, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 04:23 Tue Dec 29

Rooktail (Star) - For Approval

'Sup. Still not dropping the fact he looks like a piece of coal. If there are comments, I'd appreciate it. .incandescentflame (talk) 09:24, December 26, 2015 (UTC)

Since this is your first image, the title should be "For Evaluation" (I've changed it for you) for the image, you should try to define the earpink by using a dull pink color. Nice^^ ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (10:13,12/26/2015)

so pretty omg i wanna hang this!!!!!!!

The eyes are gorgeous! Could you blur the chest shading a bit? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 21:52 Sat Dec 26

Could you define the shading? It blends in with his coat colour. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ · ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ ★ 23:48, December 26, 2015 (UTC)

You didn't reserve this. I'll reserve it for you this time, and this is nice for your first image. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:05, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you to all the compliments, I really appreciate it. Anyway, I realized I forgot the earpink layer haha. I did everything people asked me to, so here we go. .incandescentflame (talk) 02:12, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Nice job, incandescent, I'll promote you into an apprentice. You seem to know what you are doing well. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:42, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Should this not be named for evaluation? Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 12:27, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Burnt promoted Incandescent to apprentice, so no, it shouldn't be 'for evaluation' anymore. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:37, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

Isn't that against rules I thought to become an apprentice you needed to have one piece of art approved? Sorry if that seemed rude just trying to understand. Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 15:43, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

kits become apprentices when it's deemed they have a good enough understanding of a charart. it doesn't have to be aporoved for that. david ^🌈 16:40, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

wow but the tail looks like a popsicle!

I'm confused.... How does it look like a popsicle? It looks perfectly like a cat's tail, I'll be honest. And I don't think I can tweak the linear art, but if other agree that it looks like a popsicle, then I'll gladly tweak it. .incandescentflame (talk) 04:14, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

It doesn't look like a popsicle. Don't tweak it - it's the lineart. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 04:15, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink in the shading a little more? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 07:57 Mon Dec 28

Re-uploaded. Of course I can, Splook. .incandescentflame (talk) 11:06, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tiny Branch (Ki) ~ CBA

Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:43, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 22:40 Tue Dec 29

Tanglefur (E) ~ For Approval

david ^🌈 23:58, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

oh god so beautiful but the head looks too big!!!

It doesn't look too big. He's supposed to use the proper linear art.User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:58, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also make sure to sign when you leave a comment. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 03:58, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

it says thick, knotted fur, so that's what I did. david ^🌈 07:52, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Mothflight (Q) - For Approval

File:Mothflight.queen.png Relying on a senior's speed to write a 2000 word essay for vacation potential isn't fun... But anyway, let's try this again. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:38, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little on the back leg closest to us and on the tail. —Ivy ☆ 14:23, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

Rockfall (Star) - For Approval

me: complains about shading a gray cat. me: does another gray cat. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 21:39 Tue Dec 29

She looks a tad darker than the rest of her images. Maybe define the shape of the shading and see if that helps. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:41, December 30, 2015 (UTC)

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