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Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
--Foxey Whispers and enchantments 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Define eye depth too, a tad bit. ShypawDo the trickor treat 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Darken the shading a bit madie the wicked witch of the west 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
I can't tell the difference.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:53, 5/06/2017
Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. madie the wicked witch of the west 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:14, 5/06/2017 )
For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:09,5/7/2017
@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink ✧Winter✧ 01:23, 5/07/2017
Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray ✧Winter✧ 16:04, 5/07/2017
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw) ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (02:42, 5/08/2017 )
Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 12:11, 5/08/2017
There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)
Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. madie the wicked witch of the west 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 03:43, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading. Appledash the light of honor 12:13, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
Theres waste by the butt ✧Winter✧ 13:45, 5/09/2017
Is there a specific way to define shading. I've tried smudging but that doesn't seem to work..--Foxey Whispers and enchantments 22:04, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
You can increase the opacity, or if you've already done that all the way duplicate the layer and adjust the opacity on that one
Dont forget your signature ya rando :P Also to define shading, you can also add more shading overall ✧Winter✧ 23:50, 5/09/2017
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 20:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
Define the pattern overall and make it sharper like the other images. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:01, 5/11/2017
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Define the ear pink in the <--- ear madie the wicked witch of the west 02:35, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading more. I can tell it's there, but it's kind of all over the place ✧Winter✧ 02:43, 5/11/2017
Is there chest shading? If not, add some. madie the wicked witch of the west 02:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 03:17, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Define flank shading? Nice. :3 ShypawDo the trickor treat 03:22, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 04:02, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
The placement of the gray doesn't match completely. Especially check the warrior image, as you can see the difference between the shades better there, and also how there's a more defined patch of gray on the face. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:07, 5/11/2017
Define the shading more ✧Winter✧ 01:29, 5/12/2017
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 02:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Ok I think the gray should match the elder's image since it was lightened/tweaked before the others and if that's the case then this is too dark, also the gray looks softer than the other images, and it's still kinda hard to tell what's gray and what's shading on the chest and front legs ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:29, 5/13/2017 )
Well, I was just asked to match the warrior image so I'm not sure what to do when critiques contradict each other :/ --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 16:05, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
The critiques, at least the recent one where I said to match the warrior image, don't contradict. I was talking about the gray placement, such as on the muzzle (which from what I can see, still hasn't been done). Snow is talking about the coloring, which is a separate issue, and also the coloring in other spots not previously mentioned. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:10, 5/14/2017
There's a stray white pixel on the <--- paw. ShypawDo the trickor treat 21:08, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading more ✧Winter✧ 21:31, 5/15/2017
The shading on --> side of the head looks a little dark, maybe lighten and smooth it a little? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:15, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
I feel like defining isn't the right word for this, but expanding is. I've noticed that the artist repeatedly "defined" the shading on the same spots when they should've expand it instead. That's why the shading looks pretty dark and not visible in some areas. It should be expanded on the tail and stomach. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:52,5/17/2017
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 21:04, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading madie the wicked witch of the west 21:06, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
There's a few pixels of grey in the area behind the <- front leg. I think you could smooth that out a little or get rid of it. I can put a red circle on it if you'd like. Branchwing (talk) 01:05, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Define shading on the legs, chest, and belly area and lighten the shading everywhere else ✧Winter✧ 04:16, 5/18/2017
I think it looks too dark compared to the other images, but forgive me if it's just my screen or something. ♥ Star red and black ♥<22:31, 5/18/2017>
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 20:34, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
There's some hard-edged shading on the arm, see here http://vvcap.com/5NI5dU5r7SI—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:07, 5/19/2017
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 14:44, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
The shading still appears to be leaking by the <--- arm.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 15:48, 5/20/2017
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 00:09, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Lighten tail shading on the patch of shading the --> side near above the chest. Also, the --> left paw looks as though it has dapples on it, is it supposed to be like that? Sorry if the last part was rude. :P ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:35, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
No one ever corrected me so I think I'm right that the gray should match the elder image, which is significantly lighter than this ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (16:43, 5/21/2017 )
On the ---> ear, near the tip, it looks like there's a lighter spot on it, try to fix that so it matches the rest of the earpink. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:33, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
elder was tweaked for pale grey first, so yeah match that one david 🌈 15:28, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Reups --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 22:46, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
The grey on the tail looks dark compared to the rest of the images. It might be just the shading, but it still looks dark. So, could you possibly lighten the color there or just lighten the shading in that area? Branchwing (talk) 00:21, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading out on the back, and perhaps smudge/or add some closer to the lineart? I looks like there's hardly any there and maybe smooth the shading, just a little on <--- shoulder. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:33, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
Black Hole / Green Sun – 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
I can't see the image. Try reuploading? —Jayce(11:31, 5/09/2017)
Reupload Black Hole / Green Sun – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat
Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. Appledash the light of honor 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
define some of the speckles? david 🌈 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
Reupload Black Hole / Green Sun – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading ✧Winter✧ 13:32, 5/10/2017
Reupload Black Hole / Green Sun – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more ✧Winter✧ 18:15, 5/10/2017
Define shading depth a bit ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (02:42, 5/11/2017 )
Reupload Black Hole / Green Sun – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Define the patterning that's under the shading —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:08, 5/11/2017
Define the shading depth more please ✧Winter✧ 01:32, 5/12/2017
Reupload Black Hole / Green Sun – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? —Ivy ☆ 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:46, 5/13/2017 )
Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? Black Hole / Green Sun – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
I think a little on the legs will do tbh - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:50,5/13/2017
What is mean "do tbh"? Black Hole / Green Sun – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:58,5/15/2017
Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs ✧Winter✧ 21:32, 5/15/2017
Reupload Excuse me forcing you to endure me Black Hole / Green Sun – 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading more ✧Winter✧ 00:56, 5/17/2017
Define the speckles just a tad in the shading? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
What means tad? Black Hole / Green Sun – 10:02, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
tad means a little bit. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:13,5/17/2017
Do I have to do something with legs? Black Hole / Green Sun – 07:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
All you have to do is smooth the shading more over the whole image, and define the speckles a little bit in the shading ✧Winter✧ 13:55, 5/18/2017
Reupload Black Hole / Green Sun – 08:56, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Can you thin out the shading on her stomach a little? After that I think it'll be good to go. If I wasn't very specific, you can just say that. Basically what I meant is like the shading up from the haunch. Appledash the light of honor 20:20, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Can you darken the speckles even more? Also if you're American you might be forgiven for not knowing tad, it's chiefly british --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 23:49, 5/20/2017
I am russian ::::\ Black Hole / Green Sun – 13:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
I noticed no one ever answered your question about shading depth and I still think it could be defined so here's an image of one of the apprentice tutorials, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:BCPrincess73.tutorial.png, which mentions shading depth so I hope that helps you ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (17:05, 5/21/2017 )
Reupload Would you like some vanilla ice cream with chocolate chips? Black Hole / Green Sun – 10:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
It looks white, and less creamy white—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:39, 5/22/2017
Smooth out the body shading —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:42, 5/22/2017
Reupload Black Hole / Green Sun – 08:21, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
The shading could be smoothed more. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:30, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
i dunno XXXX| Black Hole / Green Sun – 15:45, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Moonflower (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
All colors came from Bluestar's queen image, which I still have the files for. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:53, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
Define shading on both the back paws? ShypawDo the trickor treat 22:55, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading a little on the neck/upper back area? —Ivy ☆ 22:58, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:04, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
Think shading's leaking on both front paws. ♥ Star red and black ♥<23:33, 5/15/2017>
It's also leaking away from lineart on the back > of --> paw, near the rump area —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:34, 5/15/2017
Define the shading a little bit. Branchwing (talk) 00:36, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading depth also.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:39, 5/17/2017
Still working?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 10:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Sorry for the wait; I was on vacation in Florida, had very little time to work on this, and just got back home yesterday. Uploads should be more frequent now. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:36, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
There's what appears to be highlights leaking on the belly. http://i.imgur.com/5nZCt6f.png Branchwing (talk) 21:26, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:34, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the highlights, especially on the haunch and legs madie the wicked witch of the west 21:35, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I just got rid of the highlights. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:57, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Define the light on the back legs. Branchwing (talk) 01:31, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 05:42, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Pinenose (Ro) ~ For Approval
First time doing this, so hopefully I got everything right :D Pinenose is one of my favorities warriors!! The shading is supposed to be lessed blurred and more sharper kind of? Comments? Cosmokitten (talk) 20:40, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Don't align your images, it messes up the structure of the page. I removed them, but next time you can remove them by going into source mode and removing the word 'left' or 'right' in the image name. madie the wicked witch of the west 20:46, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Define the ear pink. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:47, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Not sure if you have added highlights or not, but she looks gray, not black. {{SUBST:Nosubst|User:ErmineGlow/Sig}} (talk) 21:05, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Is this how I upload? Did you guys notice changes in ear pink and stuff? Also, Ermineglow I did use highlights, so I lowered them down. :) Cosmokitten (talk) 21:11, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
if you're uploading with the same file name and overwriting the previous one? yes, that's hwo you upload. david 🌈 21:14, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Is it showing now? Idk if it did before, but I see what you mean David, thank you! Cosmokitten (talk) 21:17, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
The file name needs to be Pinenose.rogue.png madie the wicked witch of the west 21:24, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. It should be Pinenose.rogue.png now. c: Cosmokitten (talk) 21:28, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
It actually says 'rouge' :P madie the wicked witch of the west 21:29, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
If I may ask, where do you see just the 'rogue' part? Cosmokitten (talk) 21:35, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
? You misspelled rogue in the file name as 'rouge'. I'm not quite sure what you mean madie the wicked witch of the west 21:37, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
OH omg, thank you. French for red, must have missed that! Thanks sm, great eyes! Lol. Cosmokitten (talk) 21:38, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Either your upload isn't showing up for me, but isn't this Skt's image? It shows his version of the image and not yours for me :P I probably sound really dumb—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:45, 5/18/2017
^^ I believe this is caused because you didn't select to replace the existing image. When reuploading, you need to replace the image with your own madie the wicked witch of the west 21:46, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Hm.. it won't let me go to the visual page because it says it has complex coding? But I understand where you're coming from! I didn't mean too. --Cosmokitten (talk) 21:50, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:57, 5/18/2017
Re-uploaded. Does it show changes? I had to do it in the source editing, not visual because of complex coding. --Cosmokitten (talk) 22:07, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Just a tip, you can also reupload at File:Pinenose.rogue.png by clicking replace. I believe this is the way you're actually supposed to do it, and it makes it so you don't have to remove and readd the image 500 times madie the wicked witch of the west 22:28, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Very nice! Smooth out the shading a little bit? Branchwing (talk) 23:16, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded! I did do the replace thing this time Danny, and thanks! I hope it changed? I smoothed out the shading a bit, I just want it a little sharp for my preference, but if you want me smooth it out more, no problem. I messed with the face shading too. Is it too dark? And thanks Branchwing! --Cosmokitten (talk) 00:21, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Re-ups Messed with muzzle/face shading again. --Cosmokitten (talk) 00:24, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
This is looking nice, maybe define the light source on the legs? madie the wicked witch of the west 00:48, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Should I define some more? Cosmokitten (talk) 00:58, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
This is amazing for your first image! Define shading depth on the legs a tad? ShypawDo the trickor treat 16:46, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thank you Shypaw! Cosmokitten (talk) 00:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Redid the shading because it kind of bothered me. I like this one a lot better. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾#beaubeau 02:26, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the back legs? madie the wicked witch of the west 14:47, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾#beaubeau 23:49, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
This can be marked at 'For Approval' since you know what you're doing :) —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:54, 5/23/2017
Thank you Spooky :) C o s m o s n e s s 🐾#beaubeau 17:09, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Skunkpaw (A) ~ For Approval
File:Skunkpaw.apprentice.png Fail. ♥ Star red and black ♥<00:41, 5/19/2017>
Very pretty! Maybe define the shading a bit, and there is a little white speck on ---> shoulder blade from the white on the chest. And maybe smudge the ear pink a little more? Keep up the good work! Cosmokitten (talk) 00:44, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Brighten the white ✧Winter✧ 00:44, 5/19/2017
If I'm correct, the white on the <-- paw should cover all of it. madie the wicked witch of the west 00:46, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Shouldn't there be white on the stomach as per the StarClan image?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 01:24, 5/19/2017
re-up Thanks Cosmo! ♥ Star red and black ♥<04:17, 5/19/2017>
Oh dang I forgot about the earpink. I'll get to it later ♥ Star red and black ♥<04:17, 5/19/2017>
Maybe blur the white or smooth it out on the stomach and chest. Looks too sharp compared to the StarClan—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:19, 5/19/2017
re-up ♥ Star red and black ♥<15:04, 5/20/2017>
Could you smooth it out ever more? Not the white you smudged apart, but the white on the chest just looks like a strip of color.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 17:12, 5/20/2017
I'll just ask Sziri how they did it, otherwise I'll just fail that. ♥ Star red and black ♥<18:39, 5/20/2017>
re-up Hopefully it looks better now. ♥ Star red and black ♥<14:56, 5/21/2017>
Perhaps define the shading depth a little? madie the wicked witch of the west 15:00, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
re-up Also I realized that the nose wasn't filled in. ♥ Star red and black ♥<16:29, 5/21/2017>
Can you define shading a little more and smooth it on the back leg closest to us? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (17:14, 5/21/2017 )
Brighten the chest white; looks grayish —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:04, 5/22/2017
re-up may or may not have reupped before. ♥ Star red and black ♥<00:38, 5/22/2017>
I think the white on the chest could be brightened a little more. —Ivy ☆ 20:32, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
re-up So many layers . . . ♥ Star red and black ♥<23:45, 5/22/2017>
Daisytoe (A) ~ For Approval
Disneytoe's my last image before I become a warrior! Go go go! --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 09:37, 5/19/2017
Good job Neon! Maybe define the eye depth, unless there is some already. Cosmokitten (talk) 10:18, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Re-ups Decided that even though there was depth that it needed some definition. Fixed. --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 11:31, 5/19/2017
Define the shading a bit? I like this, good job! Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:55, May 19, 2017 (UTC)chat
Smooth/smudge the shading on the top of the hindleg closest to us and the base of the tail. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading depth quite a bit, it looks flat. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 19:35, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
I feel like all the shading could be smoothed out tbh—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:48, 5/19/2017
I believe the mickey mouse head on the chest is facing the wrong way. On the warrior and kit image, the head is facing sideways. This has it facing right side up. The patch on the back should be further up the back near the shoulders and the ears on the mickey head on the haunch need to be smaller. There should also be a tiny patch of gray on the furthest back paw. And I feel like all of the gray could be a tiny bit softer. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:07, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Re-ups --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 23:51, 5/19/2017
Define shading depth more. ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:12, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
How's this? It turned out I errored when re-uploading, so my first re-upload was the same image as the first. --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 00:15, 5/20/2017
Maybe desaturate the purple? I had the same problem, don't worry, but it seems too light/colorful. Maybe darken in a few ticks? And smooth it out?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 15:47, 5/20/2017
Re-ups --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 05:29, 5/21/2017
The shading could be smoothed out on the belly, and > half of the cat overall —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:23, 5/21/2017
Define the shading, the shading depth, define the eye depth, smooth the ear pink. madie the wicked witch of the west 14:46, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
There's waste by the tail.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:37, 5/22/2017
Mintfur (SC) (Lo) ~ For Approval
File:Mintfur (SC).loner.png Colorpicked from apprentice image and based the stripes off of that image, plenty of things wrong with this probably (i actually might redo the stripes tbh) Branchwing (talk) 02:33, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
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The stripes are supposed to be thinner, and go over the entire body, like the queen and warrior. (Hope that makes sense)—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 02:52, 5/20/2017
Reuploaded Smudged the stripes instead of blurring them, now. Also made the main color and stripes slightly darker. Branchwing (talk) 01:14, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
This Is really good Branch, maybe dull down the earpink a smidge? It looks a bit to neon Rainbowmistake (talk) 12:42, May 21, 2017 (UTC)chat
Reuploaded That was probably a bit more than I needed to, but I think the earpink looks more natural now, so it works. Branchwing (talk) 13:38, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Got rid of one pixel of waste. Branchwing (talk) 17:24, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Minor, the tail tip shouldn't be covered by a stripe. madie the wicked witch of the west 17:26, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 20:07, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
The stripes appear a tad bit thicker on her other images I think madie the wicked witch of the west 00:19, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded I just made some of them a bit thicker, mainly the one-pixel thick ones. Branchwing (talk) 01:32, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
The stripes on her other images look a little darker. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:29, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 19:22, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Leafstar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Did I have too much fun with the tinted shading again? Yes, yes I did. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:54, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Dull the tint a little bit? The purple tint stands out quite a bit against brown on my screen. Branchwing (talk) 22:01, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Reups I've used a purple-ish tint before on a cat with brown before, but I did dull the tint down a bit. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:11, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Can you vary the stripe pattern some? No one shoot me - I've been told to alter stripes on images of mine before because of them being too uniform/straight across, and there are instances of us redoing images with this type of stripe pattern before, so to avoid that happening...maybe add a dorsal stripe/ mess with it some. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:40, 5/22/2017
Reups Thanks Spooky! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:36, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
I know it is white, but the shading makes the shaded white parts look gray. Maybe lighten those.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 08:20, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:43, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
I waited 4 days, so I pretty sure I can repost this now. ErmineGlow (talk) 15:22, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
If you still have the gray a reddish tint, you need to match it to solid gray to the other images, the shading looks blotchy so smooth it out, define the shading depth, and define the light. madie the wicked witch of the west 15:42, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Reups I might have to re-do the shading ErmineGlow (talk) 21:41, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
The image is still tinted red, could you please fix that? Smooth out tail shading as well. Branchwing (talk) 21:57, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Should I alter the tint again? ErmineGlow (talk) 23:49, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Define the light abd define the shading depth. madie the wicked witch of the west 23:52, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Reups Le better? ErmineGlow (talk) 02:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Define light more, mainly on the legs. ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:12, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:14, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading on the legs and on the back. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:26, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:52, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
There's lighter parts on the legs? If those are highlights, smooth them out a lot. madie the wicked witch of the west 01:09, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Reups look better now? ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Minnowkit (CotC) (Kit) ~ For approval
half smudged shading, half blurred Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 00:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Cute! Define the nose color? ♥ Star red and black ♥<00:42, 5/22/2017>
I don't really mean to be rude or ignore your comment, but why/how exactly would I have to define it? He's a dark cat so I gave him a dark pink colour and I can't exactly make it bigger or expand it...do you want me to lighten it? I personally think that'd look awkward then, and I purposefully gave him a darker colour, but if others disagree, I can lighten it. :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 00:56, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
I actually meant that i couldn't see any nose color so whoops. ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:04, 5/22/2017>
Oh, so I wouldn't have to change anything then? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 01:13, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading depth a tad —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:35, 5/22/2017
Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 22:00, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:51, 5/23/2017
sorry but the shading looks too purple to m? I thought he was half purple for a second. david 🌈 00:56, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Define the leg shading and tail shading madie the wicked witch of the west 06:29, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
I thought shading tint was artists choice? Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 13:52, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
only if it isn't throwing anything else off. that was, david 🌈 15:03, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Shyheart (Ki) - For Approval
First image as a warrior, right? ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:16, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading and define shading depth, smooth the ear pink. madie the wicked witch of the west 00:17, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Add stripes. She was described as a tabby—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:22, 5/22/2017
I don't know if the fur needs to be wavy at all, if not just ignore this. Maybe make it a little browner? It looks kind of yellowish to me. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 00:26, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Lighten it, because it seems too dark to be light brown. Also where did it say she was described as a tabby, Broken? ♥ Star red and black ♥<00:39, 5/22/2017>
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:46, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Uhh....I don't think the changes are showing? ♥ Star red and black ♥<00:50, 5/22/2017>
Reuploaded I could see the changes fine, but I reuploaded just in case. Also, one reason it may not be showing is because I reuploaded just before I got your first comment, then reuploaded again, but idk. :P ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:53, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading a little on the face on on the top of the <-- front leg. Looks cute! —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:16, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thank you! ShypawDo the trickor treat 01:23, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Define/expand the shading on the ---> front leg. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:01, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Erm, idk if you added stripes, but she was never called a tabby. Slightly wavy fur does not mean tabby. Not sure where Broken got the tabby thing from, though. —Jayce(02:16, 5/22/2017)
Reuploaded It was just really hard-edged texture, but it should be fixed now. ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Could you smooth out the shading on head/face, tail, and back paw? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (02:59, 5/22/2017 )
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 03:07, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
My eyes might've tricked me into seeing "tabby" I don't know, my eyes do that a lot xD The brown still looks tinted orange to me—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 10:32, 5/22/2017
There looks like there are a couple of bold spots of shading near the tail on <--- front leg and one on the hindleg, right next to ---> front leg. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:23, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 20:58, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
It kinda looks like there's a random tuft of lighter fur in the > ear that shouldn't be there, but maybe that's my screen —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:36, 5/22/2017
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 21:43, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded again Fixed a few things. ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:24, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading on ---> leg, and maybe smooth out the shading a little overall? Nice image. —Ivy ☆ 20:37, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thank you! ShypawDo the trickor treat 03:32, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Deadfoot (E) - For Approval
Something easy. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•00:37 Mon May 22
Smooth the shading a little bit. I don't know if it's just my screen, but I feel like it could be lightened a little bit as well. Also, would his twisted paw be visible on this blank? Branchwing (talk) 01:06, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
I think it would. Also, I agree with lightening the shading, but only by a few ticks—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 20:19, 5/22/2017
I personally disagree with lightening the shading. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 20:20, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
idk about the shading, but maybe soften the earpink just a tad? if not ain't really worried about it. david 🌈 23:08, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•16:07 Wed May 24
Honey Pelt (W) ~ For Approval
gd this looks awful —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:48, 5/22/2017
Maybe define the texture a little bit, I can't really see it. At least, I think there's supposed to be texture on this based on the ES image. —Ivy ☆ 20:53, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
- Adding onto that, just wondering, how come the kit image doesn't have texture? Was it purposeful? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 20:54, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded The kit does have texture - I still have the layers for it, actually. It's just not super super visible. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:05, 5/22/2017
Make the stripes on the haunch go around the entire body, and give them slight variation. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:05,5/23/2017
Reuploaded —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:42, 5/23/2017
Shaded Moss(L) ~ For Approval
Mind if someone adds the cite of him being called a leader in TST? I asked if he would get a leader via Shaded Moss's history, and Snowed answered me on my talk page. Also, this shading was a pain in the ass. Black shading didn't work, red shading looked strange, so I went with blue, but I'm still very unhappy ;(—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:44, 5/22/2017
This is nice! There's some waste below the paws. ShypawDo the trickor treat 21:45, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:57, 5/22/2017
Lighten the shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:04,5/22/2017
Theres a unfilled white pixel in the center of the tail, near to the bottom lineart. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:05, 5/22/2017
Rr-uploaded! I tried to remove it, but there is no unfilled pixel?? I made sure, and I didn't see any white pixel—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 23:29, 5/22/2017
It's not unfilled, but extremely distracting. Can you fill that in with black? —Jayce(00:13, 5/23/2017)
Re-uploaded!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:59, 5/23/2017
Milkfur (MV) (Star) - For Approval
All colors from her other images. I haven't made a StarClan cat in forever. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:37, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Maybe smooth out the back and tail shading a bit? Patch how do? Rainbowmistake (talk) 18:07, May 23, 2017 (UTC)chat
This is amazing! Good job Patch <3 Define the eye depth just a smidge?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 20:30, 5/23/2017
Re-uploaded. I'll fix that leaking shading on the arm in my next upload. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 21:30, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
define the chest shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:02,5/24/2017
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:27, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Brackenpelt (R) ~ For Approval
and off to sleep i go... - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:23,5/23/2017
also ik about the waste. i'll get rid of that later - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:25,5/23/2017
ear should b ripped david 🌈 15:52, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:06,5/23/2017
Brownpaw (Ki) - For Approval
I've just had this sitting around for a bit and I didn't have any other pre-made chararts so.. Here it is madie the wicked witch of the west 22:03, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
I think the ginger on the < front leg would be on the < side instead of where it is now, because on the star, we can see that its on the < elbow. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:29, 5/24/2017
You need the file danny? The orange needs to be smudged, not blurred ✧Winter✧ 18:37, 5/24/2017
Hazel Burrow (App) - For Approval
Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:07, May 24, 2017 (UTC)