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Guardian Cat Blanks ~ For Approval

Is this right? I don't know what to name the file, or the heading. I can change it later if needed. But thanks everyone who voted for me!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 01:41, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure how approving a blank works, but I would wait until someone who has been here longer than me says how to name it. Anyways, could you make the ears a little longer on both blanks? Many cats have longer ears than what is shown on the blank. I think that's how comments on blanks works. I would wait until someone who has seen a blank approved to comment before you do this though. (Just to make sure I'm commenting on this right). Branchwing^★ 12:08, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

The front legs should be longer and the front paws flatter CØØKIE (talk) 12:22, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I believe the heading needs to be Guardian Cat Blanks - For Approval. Can you make the inner lineart a bit thicker? (If that makes sense) Most of it appears to be 1px madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

the eyes should be somewhat smaller, and maybe make the longhaired tail more fluffy. it is long fur, after all. david ^🌈 16:12, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe the nose shouldn't be connected to the eyes, or spaced out a bit more? :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ^{^✣}^ICouldn't_Say_{_It} _{_To} _{_Myself}_{_✣} 17:56, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Don't know a lot about anatomy, but I think it only looks connected because of how the face is situated/the direction the cat's head is facing? —Jayce(18:19, 10/21/2017)

I think it's ok, when the eyes get made a bit smaller there'll be more distance to represent the bridge of the nose. maybe make the nose slightly smaller too david ^🌈 18:25, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Make the tail a bit longer. ♥ S t a r _{red _and} _black _♥<18:51, 10/21/2017>

The left front leg looks a bit smaller and squished than the others. C o m e t ☄^{Blazing Star} 16:57, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

I'll upload later tonight, sorry for such a wait for the past couple days. I'll rename them gc.long.png and gc.short.png when I get the chance tonught and thanks for all the critiques. I appreciate it. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 22:30, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

Actually, Cosmo, can you rename them guardian cat.long.png and guardian cat.short.png? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 00:07, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

Yes I will. Also, I'll need to upload them under two different files as I realized it as these are only under one file. I'll get around to that sometime tonight or tomorrow! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 00:08, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

It's good, Cosomo. Blanks are not held to the same time restrains as regular images are; that would be impossible, due to the fact that anatomy is difficult and forcing someone to produce a new blank in a short amount of time by restricting them is just asking for rushed and sloppy work. Doesn't mean you can take two weeks to upload though, it just means that the one-month limit does not apply here. —Jayce(04:59, 10/23/2017)

Re-uploaded. Thanks for all the nice comments and sorry for taking so long to upload. I may edit the eyes again. They still bother me, lol. But I think it's looking better! Also, uploaded with two different files and renamed them with the proper naming, and thanks to Appledash and Jaycie for being so kind about this! It means a lot. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 23:21, October 24, 2017 (UTC)

You're doing a great job, Cosmo! Anyways, could you make the tail on the short-haired blank end a little thinner? If I know one thing about cat anatomy, it's that a cat's tail becomes thinner as it nears the end of it. Branchwing^★ 01:17, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

Make the eyes a little wider and more oval, and space them out a bit. Also I feel like the hip should be wider on both. Jayie ^{Just you wait~} 12:54, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think the ears should still be a little bit smaller and more pointed, the lineart around the paws is still a little thin, plus the front paws seem....small for lack of a better word? like when you look up a cat sitting down, you know what I mean? david ^🌈 04:34, October 30, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry for taking so long to upload. I got caught up with homework, and then I got really sick. Hopefully, I'll upload tomorrow!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 02:42, October 31, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I still think the face is way off. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 02:55, November 2, 2017 (UTC)

to match the style of the other blanks, i think you should make the fur tips less round, if you get what i mean. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:50,11/2/2017

Could you widen the -> eye on both blanks by like one pixel? It looks a little off to me compared to the other eye. Branchwing^★ 10:20, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you thicken the paw lineart just a bit? Particularly the two front paws. And this is beautiful! :D Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 13:37, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the eye lineart? ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

I think the thickness of the eye lineart is fine. On all of the other blanks, the eye lineart is one pixel thick, so why make it thicker here? Branchwing^★ 22:55, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps make the nose(s) a bit smaller? madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

When will be introduced schemes of shadow on this chararts if chararts be introduced in wiki? I can not wait to start making Fierce! ::::D Black Hole / Green Sun – 14:14, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Please don't comment unless it's a critique. I know it's taking a while for me to upload each time, but please be patient. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 14:31, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. These are turning out much better. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 01:28, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

they are, dude. I think you should thicken the linear art on the tail a little bit. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 14:18,11/9/2017

Re-uploaded. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 00:58, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Thicken lineart on paws and ears ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:19, 11/10/2017 )

I think the ear lineart is fine, but agreed on the paws ^^ These look awesome so far! madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

I think the cheeks are a bit too wide, maybe make the face a bit more narrow? Jayie ^{Just you wait~} 16:46, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

The right hind leg seems to be sticking out to far. Maybe narrow it. Gosh Cosmo this is a great blank! C o m e t ☄^{Blazing Star} 13:30, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 01:30, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Violetshine (W) - For Approval

fun fact, I've had this done (along with the rest of her set) since The Apprentice's Quest. —Jayce(01:59, 11/07/2017)

Now that is some dedication right there. Could you make her eyes amber? Branchwing^★ 02:07, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

I may have forgotten about that. Her eyes are still blue in all of my .psd files... mainly because I keep forgetting to change them. Re-uploaded. —Jayce(02:11, 11/07/2017)

Beautiful! Define the shading on the tail and the legs possibly? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 21:23, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

I can't define it on the tail due to how the white and black are placed. And where on the legs? Because it's pretty defined on the front legs and I'd rather not define that anymore. —Jayce(00:57, 11/08/2017)

Sorry, I saw it on the wrong screen, but I can see it. I'm sorry. Maybe smooth out the shading? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 01:45, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

But so many images that were just approved recently have a lot rougher shading than mine does...? I'm so confused. The shading on this one isn't meant to be smooth. —Jayce(01:49, 11/08/2017)

Ignore them! Sorry! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 01:54, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe connect the white on the lower back so it looks more like the patch on the apprentice image? C o m e t ☄^{Blazing Star} 13:32, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ahaha, I knew I was forgetting something with that white. Also connected it on the feet, since it was supposed to do that as well. —Jayce(14:02, 11/12/2017)

Gravelpaw (App) - CBA

File:Gravelpaw.apprentice.pngquick and kind of easy. pretty sure this is my first apprentice? madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Oooh, nice shade choice. I like it. Could you smooth out the rump shading just a tiny bit? —Jayce(13:35, 11/07/2017)

reups 👌 madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Define the shading on the legs and face? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 21:24, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly smooth the tail shading. I'm here to never let you forget your first charart: Spiderleg's StarClan image >:D—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 08:39, 11/08/2017

reups jokes on you broken, I think about it EVERY DAY already >:^) madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Add/define shading depth on tail a little ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:17, 11/10/2017 )

Darken/define the belly shading. Jayie ^{Just you wait~} 16:47, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

reups madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

CBA? —Jayce(09:31, 11/12/2017)

Palepaw (A) - CBA

File:Palepaw.apprentice.png ileuarycneinn math test tomorrow. should be working now... - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 14:10,11/7/2017

I don't know if it is just me, but I think her eyes appear more yellow than amber Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 14:16, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Also tweaked the shading a bit - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 14:33,11/7/2017

Define the eye depth just a little.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 18:59, 11/07/2017

Could you define the shading on the tail? Branchwing^★ 21:21, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face a smidge and define the earpink slightly. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 21:26, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried, but it's difficult without making her look gray - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:14,11/8/2017

Darken/define the tail shading. Jayie ^{Just you wait~} 16:48, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:37,11/12/2017

CBA? —Jayce(09:31, 11/12/2017)

Larksong (SS) (Alt. W) - For Approval

File:Larksong (SS).warrior.alt.png Just sitting here making alts, man. Branchwing^★ 21:20, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Smooth out the shading and define it on the tail. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 21:25, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! Branchwing^★ 02:26, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white just a bit more. Nice pattern choice; I like it. 8D —Jayce(14:57, 11/09/2017)

Reuploaded Is this any better? And thank you! ^^ Branchwing^★ 01:20, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the chest a bit. Jayie ^{Just you wait~} 16:49, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Branchwing^★ 17:47, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light source a bit on the farthest front leg. C o m e t ☄^{Blazing Star} 13:34, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Branchwing^★ 18:34, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Onestar (Star) ~ For Approval

Grey muzzle kitties~ C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 02:00, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

I actually think you should remove the gray muzzle. It says in Darkest Night that he was young and strong again, and the gray muzzle was from him being old. —Jayce(03:36, 11/09/2017)

you mind lightening the shading? `- Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 14:16,11/9/2017

Re-uploaded. No more grey muzzle kitties. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 00:54, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. Jayie ^{Just you wait~} 16:51, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾^{#cat lady} 00:59, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Nectarpaw (A) ~ For Approval

File:Nectarpaw.apprentice.png Sweet name. ♥ S t a r _{red _and} _black _♥<02:08, 11/10/2017>

Can you define the shading on the back paw furthest away from us? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 14:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading on the left side of the face should be moved to the right, since that looks like where the shadow is coming from on the rest of the body, also define the shading on the front paw furthest from us. —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:15, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on two paws furthest from us ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:12, 11/10/2017 )

re-up Light source is from above, slightly to the right, if that makes sense. ♥ S t a r _{red _and} _black _♥<00:18, 11/11/2017>

Cloudmist (Alt. Lo) ~ For Approval

Yup Black Hole / Green Sun – 15:43, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth those dark patches of shading a little on the belly and hindleg furthest from us, the white on the back paws and belly look a bit gray. —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Black Hole / Green Sun – 09:18, November 13, 2017 (UTC)

Echosong (Star) ~ For Approval

Eh. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:31, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the base of the tail and flank a bit? She's so pretty! —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:09, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thank you! Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 20:05, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

She should have a notch in -> ear, shouldn't she? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:00, 11/10/2017 )

Reups Dunno why I like the word 'notch' Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:52, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the legs and tail? madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:03, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Fringepaw (A) ~ For Approval

File:Fringepaw.apprentice.png Shorthaired bc genetically impossible to be longhaired ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (22:51, 11/10/2017 )

Define the shading depth. —Patchfeather ^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 00:34, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Played around with tint a bit. Hope this is better ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:33, 11/11/2017 )

Dragonfly (Lo) ~ For Approval

Eh.. C o m e t ☄^{Blazing Star} 17:12, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on every leg? madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Can you define the stripes a bit? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 00:27, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded C o m e t ☄^{Blazing Star} 13:28, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Sandynose (W) ~ For Approval

This really sucks :^/—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 09:36, 11/12/2017

Define the shading on the sll the legs except for the front one closest to us. --ErmineGlow (talk) 15:50, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define/add stripes on the legs? madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Re-uploaded.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 23:30, 11/12/2017

Re-uploaded. Color change.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 23:37, 11/12/2017

Jasper (KP) - For Approval

The paw change is the amputated toe btw. Its intentional. Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{21:31 Sun Nov 12}

Fringepaw (Lo) - For Approval

File:Fringepaw.loner.png Wow, sorry for deserting the wiki! I'll try to be more active. Shy paw^{Do the trick}^{^{or treat}} 01:59, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

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